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* FlashStep: Keido uses an Accelgor that can move so [[SuperSpeed fast]], it becomes practically invisible. In double battles, by having Accelgor's partner use Shadow Sneak on its shadow, they too can share in the invisibility fun.
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* {{Invisibility}}: Keido uses an Accelgor that can move so [[SuperSpeed fast]], it becomes practically invisible. In double battles, by having Accelgor's partner use Shadow Sneak on its shadow, they too can share in the invisibility fun.
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* [[spoiler:DrivenToSuicide: The culmination of the non-stop, relentless hardships thrust upon Jasmine in Part 4 results in Jasmine deciding to take her life.]]
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* [[spoiler: FromBadToWorse: Part 4 in all of its BreakTheCutie glory.]]
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* [[spoiler: FromBadToWorse: Part [[spoiler:Part 4 in all of its BreakTheCutie glory.]]
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* [[spoiler: InterruptedSuicide: Jasmine heads to Crescent Bay Bridge, fully committed to jumping off and ending her life. She arrives to find Ethan doing the same.]]
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* [[spoiler: InterruptedSuicide: Jasmine [[spoiler:Jasmine heads to Crescent Bay Bridge, fully committed to jumping off and ending her life. She arrives to find Ethan doing the same.]]
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* MagneticWeapons: Jasmine has Steelix and Magnezone team up to perform a railgun attack. Steelix coughs up a metal spike to use as a projectile, and Magnezone fires it using its magnetism. The technique proves to be [[AwesomeButImpractical Awesome but Impractical]] and ends up causing significant property damage.
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* MagneticWeapons: Jasmine has Steelix and Magnezone team up to perform a railgun attack. Steelix coughs up a metal spike to use as a projectile, and Magnezone fires it using its magnetism. The technique proves to be [[AwesomeButImpractical Awesome but Impractical]] AwesomeButImpractical and ends up causing significant property damage.
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* ParentsWalkInAtTheWorstTime: Not her actual parent, but close enough; Erika walks in upon Jasmine [[UnusualEuphemism having trouble with her tampons]]. TheTalk shortly follows. [[spoiler: Jasmine gets to taste this trope herself when she [[Main.HilarityEnsues walks in on Amphy and Spectra]] [[InterruptedIntimacy bonding]]. Amphy [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments promptly calls Jasmine "cock-block" in his native language]].]]
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* ParentsWalkInAtTheWorstTime: Not her actual parent, but close enough; Erika walks in upon Jasmine [[UnusualEuphemism having trouble with her tampons]]. TheTalk shortly follows. [[spoiler: Jasmine gets to taste this trope herself when she [[Main.HilarityEnsues [[HilarityEnsues walks in on Amphy and Spectra]] [[InterruptedIntimacy bonding]]. Amphy [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments promptly calls Jasmine "cock-block" in his native language]].]]
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* SexEqualsLove: Jasmine thinks sex and love ought to be unequivocally interlinked. [[spoiler: [[{{NotGoodWithRejection}} A crush gone wrong]]]] leads to sex becoming a collateral casualty of her hatred towards romance.
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* SexEqualsLove: Jasmine thinks sex and love ought to be unequivocally interlinked. [[spoiler: [[{{NotGoodWithRejection}} [[NotGoodWithRejection A crush gone wrong]]]] leads to sex becoming a collateral casualty of her hatred towards romance.
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* ShoutOut: Numerous, including ''Franchise/StarWars'', ''Anime/MobileFighterGGundam'', ''Franchise/SailorMoon'', ''Series/{{Lost}}'', and especially ''{{Portal}}''.
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* ShoutOut: Numerous, including ''Franchise/StarWars'', ''Anime/MobileFighterGGundam'', ''Franchise/SailorMoon'', ''Series/{{Lost}}'', and especially ''{{Portal}}''.''VideoGame/{{Portal}}''.
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-->[[spoiler:Jasmine goes to Crescent Bay Bridge to end her life.]]
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-->[[spoiler: And there finds Ethan about to jump himself. The fateful meeting averts both of their deaths.]]
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[[spoiler: And there finds Ethan about to jump himself. The fateful meeting averts both of their deaths.]]
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-->[[spoiler:You can't take what's not mine to give... You weren't my [[FirstKiss first kiss]]]].
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-->[[spoiler:You can't take what's not mine to give... You weren't my [[FirstKiss first kiss]]]].FirstKiss]].
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-->[[spoiler:She [Phoebe] is my muse, my solace, my hope. The girl of my dreams, and the woman I love, and intend to marry.]].
-->[[spoiler:... I never said I loved you.]]
-->[[spoiler:... I never said I loved you.]]
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[[spoiler:... I never said I loved you.]]
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-->[[spoiler:Ashley K. “Red” Satoshi]]
-->[[spoiler:Jasmine:....my first, and only, crush.]]
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-->[[spoiler:Jasmine:....
[[spoiler:Jasmine:....my first, and only, crush.]]
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* ZettaiRyouiki: Jasmine, in her Magical Girl Aki Kinyobi-san costume. She [[GenreSavvy references the term by name]] and mentions showing off "a perfect three inches" of it.
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* AnticlimacticParent: Subverted. Through Parts 1 and 2 Jasmine alludes to how horrible a mother she has. After not seeing each other for months, Jasmine returns home in Part 3. Her mother's very first words are ordering Jasmine to help her with chores- without even acknowledging Jasmine by name, or saying "Hello", or even looking at her daughter. The conversation goes downhill from there and it starts to feel like Jasmine was understating this woman's horridness.
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* YourCheatingHeart: [[UnreliableNarrator Jasmine]] fully believes in Morty's inability to stay with one girl for five minutes. His actions prior to CharacterDevelopment do little to help his cause. [[spoiler: Jasmine eventually starts to get over her biased opinions after CharacterDevelopment, but Morty immediately commits a major offense following Jasmine's HeelRealization.]]
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** [[TheComicallySerious Jasmine]]: our {{Narrator}}/{{Protagonist}}.
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** [[TheComicallySerious Jasmine]]: our {{Narrator}}/{{Protagonist}}.CharacterNarrator.
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* StrawNihilist: Silver starts out as one, believing mainly in BlackAndBlackMorality. He gets better as Lyra's personality starts to wear off on him.
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* StrawNihilist: Silver starts out as one, believing mainly in BlackAndBlackMorality.EvilVersusEvil. He gets better as Lyra's personality starts to wear off on him.
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** Subverted during the confrontation with Edward. [[Jasmine is about to be raped by Edward, and looks up to find her mother watching the assault. At first she's hopeful her mother will intervene, but when she doesn't, Jasmine thinks it's another hallucination, or else her mother is allowing it to happen to teach her a lesson]].
*** [[Then her mother DOES intervene at the last second and kicks the crap out of Edward. She held back in order to collect video evidence of his crime]].
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** Subverted during the confrontation with Edward. [[Jasmine [[spoiler: Jasmine is about to be raped by Edward, and looks up to find her mother watching the assault. At first she's hopeful her mother will intervene, but when she doesn't, Jasmine thinks it's another hallucination, or else her mother is allowing it to happen to teach her a lesson]].
***[[Then [[spoiler: Then her mother DOES intervene at the last second and kicks the crap out of Edward. She held back in order to collect video evidence of his crime]].
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* ExplainingYourPowerToTheEnemy: Whether from one opponent to another, Jasmine's internal monologue, or by way of onlookers, most advanced tactics atre explained in detail to the reader. The two notable examples: Volkner outright lying to Morty about Electavire's ability, and Jasmine explaining her successful tactics to Silver as a way to calm him down and help him make sense of his mid-battle failures (he goes on to win the battle, but not due to the intel gained from Jasmine).
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* ExplainingYourPowerToTheEnemy: Whether from one opponent to another, Jasmine's internal monologue, or by way of onlookers, most advanced tactics atre are explained in detail to the reader. The two notable examples: Volkner outright lying to Morty about Electavire's ability, and Jasmine explaining her successful tactics to Silver as a way to calm him down and help him make sense of his mid-battle failures (he goes on to win the battle, but not due to the intel gained from Jasmine).
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** Subverted during the confrontation with Edward. [[Jasmine is about to be raped by Edward, and looks up to find her mother watching the assault. At first she's hopeful her mother will intervene, but when she doesn't, Jasmine thinks it's another hallucination, or else her mother is allowing it to happen to teach her a lesson]].
*** [[Then her mother DOES intervene at the last second and kicks the crap out of Edward. She held back in order to collect video evidence of his crime]].
*** [[Then her mother DOES intervene at the last second and kicks the crap out of Edward. She held back in order to collect video evidence of his crime]].
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* DarkerAndEdgier: [[CaptainObvious Needless to say]], villain teams are a lot more like actual criminals and terrorists, politics are much shadier and pragmatic, and Pokemon are [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking not restricted to four moves only]].
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* DarkerAndEdgier: [[CaptainObvious Needless to say]], say, villain teams are a lot more like actual criminals and terrorists, politics are much shadier and pragmatic, and Pokemon are [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking not restricted to four moves only]].
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** Jasmine and Ethan's mock fight is full of these. A full list: Boku no Hero Academia, Naruto, Serenity, Hulk, Psy, Hunter x Hunter, Teggen Toppa Gurren Lagan, One Punch Man, Bleach, Coldsteel the Hedgehog meme, Dragonball Z, and Star Trek.
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* ParentsWalkInAtTheWorstTime: Not her actual parent, but close enough; Erika walks in upon Jasmine [[UnusualEuphemism having trouble with her tampons]]. TheTalk shortly follows. [[spoiler: Jasmine gets to taste this trope herself when she [[Main.HilarityEnsues walks in on Amphy and Spectra]] [[InterruptedIntimacy bonding]]. Amphy [[CrowningMomentOfFunny promptly calls Jasmine "cock-block" in his native language]].]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Jasmine''': "You're supposed to be guiding ships into Olivine's port! [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Not guiding your wing-wang into Spectra's port!]]"]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Jasmine''': "You're supposed to be guiding ships into Olivine's port! [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Not guiding your wing-wang into Spectra's port!]]"]]
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* ParentsWalkInAtTheWorstTime: Not her actual parent, but close enough; Erika walks in upon Jasmine [[UnusualEuphemism having trouble with her tampons]]. TheTalk shortly follows. [[spoiler: Jasmine gets to taste this trope herself when she [[Main.HilarityEnsues walks in on Amphy and Spectra]] [[InterruptedIntimacy bonding]]. Amphy [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments promptly calls Jasmine "cock-block" in his native language]].]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Jasmine''': "You're supposed to be guiding ships into Olivine's port![[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Not guiding your wing-wang into Spectra's port!]]"]]
--> [[spoiler: '''Jasmine''': "You're supposed to be guiding ships into Olivine's port!
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* BaitAndSwitch: [[spoiler: The climax of part four sends a suicidal Jasmine to the Crescent Bay Bridge for what appears to be a tragic ending.]][[spoiler: Only to find Ethan preparing to jump. The fateful meeting spares them both.]]
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* WorthLivingFor: [[spoiler: Jasmine waves off her own suicidal determination in order to try to save Ethan from his suicidal determination.]]
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* WorthLivingFor: [[spoiler: Jasmine waves off her own suicidal determination thoughts in order to try to save Ethan from his suicidal determination.thoughts.]]
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** After so much pain, hardship, and emotional turmoil, it all culminates at the end of Part 4 with the greatest shock of all:
-->[[spoiler:Jasmine goes to Crescent Bay Bridge to end her life.]]
-->[[spoiler: And there finds Ethan about to jump himself. The fateful meeting averts both of their deaths.]]
-->[[spoiler:Jasmine goes to Crescent Bay Bridge to end her life.]]
-->[[spoiler: And there finds Ethan about to jump himself. The fateful meeting averts both of their deaths.]]
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** After so much pain, hardship, and emotional turmoil, it all culminates at the end of Part 4 with the greatest shock of all:
-->[[spoiler:Jasmine goes to Crescent Bay Bridge to end her life.]]
-->[[spoiler: And there finds Ethan about to jump himself. The fateful meeting averts both of their deaths.]]
-->[[spoiler:Jasmine goes to Crescent Bay Bridge to end her life.]]
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** After so much pain, hardship, and emotional turmoil, it all culminates at the end of Part 4 with the greatest shock of all:
-->[[spoiler:Jasmine goes to Crescent Bay Bridge to end her life.]]
-->[[spoiler: And there finds Ethan about to jump himself. The fateful meeting averts both of their deaths.]]
-->[[spoiler:Jasmine goes to Crescent Bay Bridge to end her life.]]
-->[[spoiler: And there finds Ethan about to jump himself. The fateful meeting averts both of their deaths.]]
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* WorthLivingFor: [[spoiler: Jasmine waves off her own suicidal determination in order to try to save Ethan from his suicidal determination.]]
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* PuttingTheBndBackTogether: Part 5 is framed around Jasmine reclaiming her Pokemon team.
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* PuttingTheBndBackTogether: PuttingTheBandBackTogether: Part 5 is framed around Jasmine reclaiming her Pokemon team.
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* PuttingTheBndBackTogether: Part 5 is framed around Jasmine reclaiming her Pokemon team.
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** [[spoiler: Subverted in Chapter 76 when Jasmine tells Ethan that she once shared her darkest secret with a therapist who dismissed it like it was nothing.]]
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* Soaperizing: Essentially. Pokemon and Pokemon battles are a subplot compared to the human-focused romance and drama that make up the main plot.
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* Soaperizing: {{Soaperizing}}: Essentially. Pokemon and Pokemon battles are a subplot compared to the human-focused romance and drama that make up the main plot.
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* SexEqualsLove: Jasmine thinks sex and love ought to be unequivocally interlinked. [[spoiler: A [[NotGoodWithRejection crush]] gone wrong]] leads to sex becoming a collateral casualty of her hatred towards romance.
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* SexEqualsLove: Jasmine thinks sex and love ought to be unequivocally interlinked. [[spoiler: [[{{NotGoodWithRejection}} A [[NotGoodWithRejection crush]] crush gone wrong]] wrong]]]] leads to sex becoming a collateral casualty of her hatred towards romance.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop:[[spoiler: Part 4 reveals that not only were Morty and Erika conspiring to bring Jasmine out of her shell by having Morty fake a relationship with her, but pretty much everyone in Jasmine's social circle was aware of what was going on. [[Understatement Jasmine does not take this well.]]]]
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop:[[spoiler: LockedOutOfTheLoop: [[spoiler: Part 4 reveals that not only were Morty and Erika conspiring to bring Jasmine out of her shell by having Morty fake a relationship with her, but pretty much everyone in Jasmine's social circle was aware of what was going on. [[Understatement [[{{Understatement}} Jasmine does not take this well.]]]]well]].]]
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** In Jasmine's own words, "I'm the most dishonest person I know."
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* [[spoiler: LoveMakesYouDumb: Not explicitly stated yet, but it's clear that one of the reasons Erika's plan failed was because both she and Morty had feelings for Jasmine that clouded their better judgement.]]
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* FourGirlEnsemble
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* [[spoiler: InterruptedSuicide: Jasmine heads to Crescent Bay Bridge, fully committed to jumping off and ending her life. She arrives to find Ethan doing the same.]]
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* ShoutOut: Numerous, including ''Franchise/StarWars'', ''Anime/MobileFighterGGundam'', ''Series/SailorMoon'', ''Series/{{Lost}}'', and especially ''{{Portal}}''.
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* ShoutOut: Numerous, including ''Franchise/StarWars'', ''Anime/MobileFighterGGundam'', ''Series/SailorMoon'', ''Franchise/SailorMoon'', ''Series/{{Lost}}'', and especially ''{{Portal}}''.
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* DespairEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Jasmine reaches this when her mother casts her out. Unable to turn on her mother, Jasmine redirects her anger into a fantasy about raping and killing Morty. Realizing the horror of her own desires, she resolves to take her own life.]]
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* FantasyGunControl: Averted in Transmutation, the Rockets use guns, bombs, and rockets in addition to weaponized Pokemon.
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* FantasyGunControl: Averted ''hard'' in Transmutation, the Rockets use guns, bombs, and rockets in addition to weaponized Pokemon.
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Word Cruft - Bogus intensifiers: Instances of "and even", "an entire", "literally" and "totally" can usually be like totally even literally zapped entirely, for real. For the same reason, things like "brutally subverted" or "averted hard" should be brutally averted.
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* FantasyGunControl: Averted ''hard'' in Transmutation, the Rockets use guns, bombs, and rockets in addition to weaponized Pokemon.
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* FantasyGunControl: Averted ''hard'' in Transmutation, the Rockets use guns, bombs, and rockets in addition to weaponized Pokemon.