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* BirdsOfFeather: Olivia grows to like Fievel more and more as it dawns on her how similar they are with their vulnerabilities and adventurousness.
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* BirdsOfFeather: BirdsOfAFeather: Olivia grows to like Fievel more and more as it dawns on her how similar they are with their vulnerabilities and adventurousness.
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* BirdsOfFeather: Olivia grows to like Fievel more and more as it dawns on her how similar they are with their vulnerabilities and adventurousness.
* TheBrute: One-Eye, the big [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin one-eyed]] cat from Waul's gang serves as this for Waul and Ratigan.
* TheBrute: One-Eye, the big [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin one-eyed]] cat from Waul's gang serves as this for Waul and Ratigan.
* Foreshadowing: When Fievel and Olivia first escape from [[spoiler:Jeremiah's gold mine]], One-Eye shouts after them that now "they are up the creek without a a paddle".
* GuysSmashGirlsShoot: Inverted when Olivia and Fievel are armed by helpful Mousehicans with a tomahawk and a bow when they go to [[spoiler:Jeremiah's gold mine]] in order to rescue Hiram. Fievel figures that due to his experience with a slingshot, he would make better use of the bow, leaving for Olivia the tomahawk.
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* PetTheDog: As noted in canon, Waul absolutely ''adores'' [[TheChanteuse Tanya's voice.]] [[spoiler:[[VillainousRescue Enough to stop Ratigan from killing her in the climax.]]]]
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* PetTheDog: As noted in canon, Waul absolutely ''adores'' [[TheChanteuse Tanya's voice.]] voice]]. [[spoiler:[[VillainousRescue Enough to stop Ratigan from killing her in the climax.]]]]
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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: [[spoiler: Ratigan decides this time he's going to stay and watch Basil fall into his trap until the roof starts caving in, rather than make the mistake he made in ''The Great Mouse Detective''.]]
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* GenreSavvy: [[spoiler: Ratigan decides this time he's going to stay and watch Basil fall into his trap until the roof starts caving in, rather than make the mistake he made in ''The Great Mouse Detective''.]]
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* SignificantSketchbook: Vartan's sketchbook.
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The novel-length, 30-chapter undertaking can be read on Website/DeviantArt [[http://surenity.deviantart.com/gallery/37317746 here]], or on Website/FanFictionDotNet [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8772062/1/Olivia-Goes-West here ]].
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The novel-length, 30-chapter undertaking can be read on Website/DeviantArt [[http://surenity.deviantart.com/gallery/37317746 here]], or on Website/FanFictionDotNet [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8772062/1/Olivia-Goes-West here ]].
]]. The third part of the trilogy, ''The Great Mouse Reporter'', is currently being written, and also available on both sites.
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* BatmanGambit: [[spoiler: Basil ingeniously uses Cat R. Waul's obsession with Tanya's voice to shatter his and Ratigan's alliance and buy enough time to save everyone in Ratigan's trap, knowing that when Ratigan actually gets serious about executing Tanya as a hostage Waul will stop him.]]
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* BatmanGambit: [[spoiler: Basil ingeniously uses Cat R. Waul's obsession with Tanya's voice to shatter his and Ratigan's alliance and buy enough time to save everyone in Ratigan's trap, knowing that when Ratigan actually gets serious about executing Tanya as a hostage hostage, [[VillainousRescue Waul will stop him.]] ]]]]
*BattleCouple: Olivia and Fievel trying to rescue Hiram Flaversham. [[spoiler:Basil and Nellie fighting Ratigan in the mine shaft.]]
*BattleCouple: Olivia and Fievel trying to rescue Hiram Flaversham. [[spoiler:Basil and Nellie fighting Ratigan in the mine shaft.]]
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* TheOneWhoWearsShoes: Olivia, who briefly wonders how Fievel can be a BarefootCartoonAnimal outside without hurting himself.
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* TheOneWhoWearsShoes: Olivia, who briefly wonders how Fievel can be a BarefootCartoonAnimal outside [[BarefootCartoonAnimal run around barefoot outside]] without hurting himself.
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* ButNowIMustGo: [[spoiler: Basil gets on a train to return to London at the end, and Nellie, after waiting for four years, joins him.]]
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* ButNowIMustGo: [[spoiler: Basil gets on a train to return to London UsefulNotes/{{London}} at the end, and Nellie, after waiting for four years, joins him.]]
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* AmbiguousDisorder: Fievel has Aquaphobia, judging by how he panicked and hyperventilated when he and Olivia were struggling through the Green River rapids, likely developed from his falling off the immigration vessel in ''An American Tail''.
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* VillainTeamUpVillainTeamUp: Happens in the prologue.
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* UnhandThemVillain: [[spoiler: Basil tells Ratigan to let his captives go, which given the design of Ratigan's trap would be a very bad idea.]]
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* AlternateUniverseFic: Admittedly, in order to get Fievel and Olivia to be the same age, the events in ''Disney/TheGreatMouseDetective'' had to be moved to 1889 rather than 1897, while the story itself takes place in 1890. Plus it happens four years after everything that transpired in ''FanFic/BasilsAmericanTail''. Otherwise all of the movies happened as normal, besides Nellie rejecting Reed Daley's proposal at the end of ''Mystery of the Night Monster'' because of Basil, and some semblance of the events in "The Lost Mother Lode" episode of ''Fievel's American Tails'' having also taken place.
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* AlternateUniverseFic: Admittedly, in order to get Fievel and Olivia to be the same age, the events in ''Disney/TheGreatMouseDetective'' had to be moved to 1889 rather than 1897, while the story itself takes place in 1890. Plus it happens four years after everything that transpired in ''FanFic/BasilsAmericanTail''. Otherwise all of the movies happened as normal, besides Nellie rejecting Reed Daley's proposal at the end of ''Mystery of the Night Monster'' because of Basil, and [[BroadStrokes some semblance of the events events]] in "The Lost Mother Lode" episode of ''Fievel's American Tails'' having also taken place.
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* GenreSavvy: [[spoiler: Ratigan decides this time he's going to stay and watch Basil fall into his trap until the roof starts caving in, rather than make the mistake he made in ''The Great Mouse Detective''.]]
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* PrematureEulogy: [[spoiler: Ratigan gives one at Olivia and Fievel's funeral. Of course, they're still alive.]]
* PuppyLove: Fievel and Olivia, eventually.
* PuppyLove: Fievel and Olivia, eventually.
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* PuppyLove: Fievel and Olivia, eventually.
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* ShipSinking: Nellie and Reed Daley, [[spoiler: Tanya and Waul]].
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* TheOnlyOneAllowedToKillYou: [[spoiler: This is Ratigan's view on Basil, and why Fidget warned Chula when he wondered WhyDontYaJustShootHim]]
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* TheOnlyOneAllowedToKillYou: TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: [[spoiler: This is Ratigan's view on Basil, and why Fidget warned Chula when he wondered WhyDontYaJustShootHim]]
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* BigBadDuumvirate: [[spoiler: Ratigan and Cat R. Waul.]]
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* TheOneWhoWearsShoes: Olivia, who briefly wonders how Fievel can be barefoot outside without hurting himself.
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* ThoseTwoBadGuys: Fidget and Chula
* VillainWithGoodPublicity: [[spoiler: Cat R. Waul and Ratigan]]
* ThoseTwoBadGuys: Fidget and Chula
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* SnoopingLittleKid: Both Fievel and Olivia
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* ThoseTwoBadGuys: Fidget andChula
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: [[spoiler: Cat R. Waul andRatigan]]Ratigan]]
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The novel-length, 30-chapter undertaking can be read on DeviantArt [[http://surenity.deviantart.com/gallery/37317746 here]], or on FanFictionNet [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8772062/1/Olivia-Goes-West here ]].
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The novel-length, 30-chapter undertaking can be read on DeviantArt Website/DeviantArt [[http://surenity.deviantart.com/gallery/37317746 here]], or on FanFictionNet Website/FanFictionDotNet [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8772062/1/Olivia-Goes-West here ]].
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* CrossoverShip: Invoked of course, with Olivia and Fievel, and returning from the prequel Basil and Nellie.
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* TheChanteuse: Tanya becomes this [[spoiler: when Waul hires her at the saloon.]]
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* FurryConfusion: Olivia experiences some FridgeLogic when noting that Wylie Burp is bipedal, wears clothes and can talk, while back in London Toby the dog could do none of these things.
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* AllGirlsWantBadBoys: [[spoiler: Tony comes to this conclusion about Tanya when talking to Vartan, sensing her crush on Ratigan. Although once Tanya discovers just how bad Ratigan is she quickly renounces him and joins Nellie and Basil as an undercover spy.]]
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* LandslideVictory: [[spoiler: Ratigan is run against Fidget for mayor, with Fidget purposely making himself look bad.]]
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