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* CastFullOfGay: This is partly attributed to SituationalSexuality (stated in Tucker's case and implied with Church) but there's a high density of gay among the main cast.



* EveryoneIsGay: This is partly attributed to SituationalSexuality (stated in Tucker's case and implied with Church) but there's a high density of gay among the main cast.

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* [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech "The Reason You Suck" Speech]]: Locus delivers one to O'Malley after being asked to help with a revenge scheme concerning Doc.

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* [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech "The Reason You Suck" Speech]]: Speech]]:
** O'Malley delivers a brutal one to Doc on his incompetence and doping him up on unnecessary medication, permanently damaging his hands. The latter point is hypocritical p, since Doc only did it to stop O'Malley's rape and torment of him.
--> '''O'Malley:''' Lies don't suit you, Doc. And lying to me? I'm hurt. You wouldn't want to hurt me, would you? Although I suppose it wouldn't be the first time you've damaged me.\\
'''Doc:''' It was an accident.\\
'''O'Malley''' Oh, most of the terrible things you do are accidents, Doc. But you can't say it was a complete accident. [[ArmorPiercingQuestion Was it really an accident that you played around with my medication so much?]]\\
'''Doc:''' Uh… well…\\
'''O'Malley:''' Besides. If apologizing made things any better, there wouldn't be any prisons. And you, my pet, would be out of a job.
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* NotSoHarmlessVillain: As Lopez realizes slightly too late, for as goofy and moronic as the main characters are, they're still convicted murders, and they won't hesitate to kill or mutilate him should they be given ample reason to.
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** Sigma says his van doesn't run well because [[VideoGame/GrandTheftAutoSanAndreas 'the engine block's held together with a macramé hammock, and it's running on fifteen year old cooking oil.']] This reference was removed in the rewrite.

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** Sigma says his van doesn't run well because [[VideoGame/GrandTheftAutoSanAndreas 'the engine block's held together with a macramé hammock, and it's running on fifteen year old cooking oil.']] This reference was removed in the rewrite.
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** Sigma says his van doesn't run well because [[VideoGame/GrandTheftAutoSanAndreas 'the engine block's held together with a macramé hammock, and it's running on fifteen year old cooking oil.']] This reference was removed in the rewrite.

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** Sigma says his van doesn't run well because [[VideoGame/GrandTheftAutoSanAndreas 'the engine block's held together with a macramé hammock, and it's running on fifteen year old cooking oil.']] This reference was removed in the rewrite.
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* BadDreams: These affect Donut after the death of his roommate [[spoiler: and get much worse after O'Malley chops off his ear and he witnesses Walter's disembowelment.]]
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* AnarchronicOrder: Not the main fic, but the flashbacks are a variant. Although an individual character will have theirs occur chronologically for them, many characters have largely varying timelines, causing events to be revisited or to happen in odd orders. For example, Caboose gets into a car accident in Flashback Two. [[spoiler:This same accident occurs in Grif's Flashback Seven, all the way in the next volume.]]

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* AnarchronicOrder: AnachronicOrder: Not the main fic, but the flashbacks are a variant. Although an individual character will have theirs occur chronologically for them, many characters have largely varying timelines, causing events to be revisited or to happen in odd orders. For example, Caboose gets into a car accident in Flashback Two. [[spoiler:This same accident occurs in Grif's Flashback Seven, all the way in the next volume.]]

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* NoMedicationForMe: O'Malley tries to ditch his medication (although he rarely succeeds) because he simply can't think clearly when on them. Strangely, the medication seems to make him crazier, possibly because Doc isn't a very good doctor.

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* NoMedicationForMe: O'Malley tries to ditch his medication (although he rarely succeeds) because he simply can't think clearly when on them. Strangely, the medication seems to make him crazier, possibly because Doc isn't a very good doctor. Subverted once Sheila is brought in and alters his medication, after which he seems to function better and doesn't try to dodge it again.
** Wash, during his flashback, abandons his medication due to not being able to afford it. He suffers from massive stomach pains, nausea and enters a phase of crippling depression that nearly results in him walking into traffic during it.
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* AnarchronicOrder: Not the main fic, but the flashbacks are a variant. Although an individual character will have theirs occur chronologically for them, many characters have largely varying timelines, causing events to be revisited or to happen in odd orders. For example, Caboose gets into a car accident in Flashback Two. [[spoiler:This same accident occurs in Grif's Flashback Seven, all the way in the next volume.]]


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* MistakenForMurderer: [[spoiler:What Donut's 'self-defence' boils down to. Maine attempted to knock Donut out, and this got out of control and viewed as a murder attempt by Donut. Donut stabbed him several times in return and ended up killing him.]]
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* RescueSex: Attempted in Volume 3. Felix offers sex to Donut to pay him back for [[spoiler:stopping Sharkface interrogating him]] a few days earlier. Donut ends up politely refusing (implicitly because of his distaste for 'creeping.')

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** Felix threatens Gabriel Lozano into helping him by threatening to out the fact that Lozano ran 'single-digit whores' out the back of his nightclub to the rest of the prison.



* TapOnTheHead: Deconstructed. [[spoiler:O'Malley and Felix do this to Wash multiple times during a torture session to mess with his sense of how much time has passed. It may have given him brain damage.]]

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* TapOnTheHead: Deconstructed. [[spoiler:O'Malley and Felix do this to Wash multiple times during a torture session to mess with his sense of how much time has passed. It may have given him When he returns to work, he clearly has brain damage.damage from them doing so.]]
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** After O'Malley [[spoiler:tortured Wash]] in Volume 3, North neglected feeding him afterwards, pretending to have 'forgot.'
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* AwkwardKiss: [[spoiler:Church and Tucker's first kiss is noted by both of them to be weird and awkward, although they conclude that 'it could have been worse' and it doesn't stop their relationship from going ahead.]]

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* AwkwardKiss: [[spoiler:Church and Tucker's first mutual kiss is noted by both of them to be weird and awkward, although they conclude that 'it could have been worse' and it doesn't stop their relationship from going ahead.]]
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* AwkwardKiss: [[spoiler:Church and Tucker's first kiss is noted by both of them to be weird and awkward, although they conclude that 'it could have been worse' and it doesn't stop their relationship from going ahead.]]
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* [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/11939559/chapters/26990139 Volume 3, 'Pound of Flesh,']] has just begun and is slated to be the final volume. It takes place ten years after Vol.2.

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* [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/11939559/chapters/26990139 Volume 3, 'Pound of Flesh,']] has just begun and is slated to be the final volume. It takes place ten years after Vol.2.
2 and concerns both the main row of inmates aging and facing potential parole, and new inmates from their pasts arriving in prison. As opposed to the other volumes, this volume's flashbacks focus on characters who are either new to the prison or completely outside it: specifically Locus, C.T/Pillman and [[spoiler:Carolina.]]
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* PunishmentBox: SHU is a lighter version of this, as the isolation generally doesn't do any favours for anyone. Although Grif and Simmons have occasionally bribed guards to throw them into the same cell there for some alone time.


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* WardensAreEvil: Subverted with Sarge, who is less evil and more just harmfully oblivious to the problems in his prison. [[spoiler:It eventually gets him fired and his replacement, Niner, is a complete aversion.]]
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* TortureChamberEpisode: Chapter 151/Volume 3, Chapter Seven. [[spoiler:In which Wash is kept in the electrical room and mercilessly tortured, both physically, mentally and emotionally, by O'Malley and Locus.]]

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* TortureChamberEpisode: Chapter 151/Volume 3, Chapter Seven. [[spoiler:In which Wash is kept in the electrical room and mercilessly tortured, both physically, mentally and emotionally, by O'Malley and Locus.Felix.]]

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* InTheBack: Pillman takes advantage of Surge's distraction in his first flashback to stab him in the back.
--> '''Surge''': In the back?! Coward!
--> '''Pillman''': *stabs Surge again in the front*
--> '''Surge''': ...Touche.



** Samuel closing his eyes and opening them as Locus is a ComicBook/Watchmen reference.

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** Samuel closing his eyes and opening them as Locus is a ComicBook/Watchmen ComicBook/{{Watchmen}} reference.



* YouWouldn'tShootMe: Surge pulls this on a teenaged Connie in the flashbacks, correctly guessing that she's never murdered before, and gets as far as putting his hand on her gun. However, Pillman had no problems with stabbing him.

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* YouWouldn'tShootMe: YouWouldntShootMe: Surge pulls this on a teenaged Connie in the flashbacks, correctly guessing that she's never murdered before, and gets as far as putting his hand on her gun. However, Pillman had no problems with stabbing him.

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* BlindBlackGuy: [[spoiler: Tucker after Part 109.]]

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* BlindBlackGuy: [[spoiler: Tucker after Part 109.the Volume 2 riot.]]



* CreepySouvenir: In Pillman's first flashback, [[spoiler:Flowers]] is shown collecting the fingers of dead men and putting them in a sandwich bag.



** Done in Part 151. [[spoiler:Since O'Malley only has a few hours at most to torture Wash, he regularly knocks him out and then wakes him up a couple of minutes later and tells him hours or days have passed. As such, he manages to trick Wash into thinking it's been five days instead of a few hours.]]

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** Done in Part 151.during Volume 3. [[spoiler:Since O'Malley only has a few hours at most to torture Wash, he regularly knocks him out and then wakes him up a couple of minutes later and tells him hours or days have passed. As such, he manages to trick Wash into thinking it's been five days instead of a few hours.]]



* HandsOffParenting: Tucker's mother was continually drunk, and so didn't have much of a capacity to care for Tucker. Tucker grew up quite self-sufficient as a result.

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* HandsOffParenting: Tucker's mother was continually drunk, and so didn't have much of a capacity to care for Tucker. Tucker grew up quite self-sufficient as a result. Locus also had a similar situation, but unlike with Tucker this was actually noticed and he kept being placed in foster care as a result.



** Sharkface isn't Pillman's blood-related son, but they're clearly fond of each other.



* IHaveYourWife: [[spoiler:In the backstory, Junior was kidnapped as an incentive for Tucker to pay back the money he stole.]]

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* IHaveYourWife: [[spoiler:In the backstory, Junior was kidnapped as an incentive for Tucker to pay back the money he stole. In the rewrite, Tucker retaliated by kidnapping the foster son of the kidnapper.]]



* MexicanStandoff: In the last flashback chapter, [[spoiler:with CT and Joannes pointing guns at Tucker, and Tucker pointing a gun at CT. It ends with Tucker shot and Joannes dead.]]

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* MexicanStandoff: In the earlier versions of Tucker's last flashback chapter, [[spoiler:with CT and Joannes pointing guns at Tucker, and Tucker pointing a gun at CT. It ends with Tucker shot and Joannes dead.]]]] Averted in the ao3 rewrite.



* MoodWhiplash: Occurs often. The backstories are notable for this, as they'll start with Church's part, which is often depressing and/or bloody, and end with Donut's, which is usually fluffy and cheerful. There's also part 109, where Grif and Simmons are being fairly jokey and there's humorous callbacks to early RvB episodes [[spoiler:seconds before Simmons gets gutted and murdered by the Red Zealot.]]
* TheMourningAfter: After a ten year timeskip, [[spoiler:Grif]] is still not over [[spoiler:Simmons']] death. This is attributed not to the depth of love, however, but to prison being such an unchanging place that it always feels like the same day.

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* MoodWhiplash: Occurs often. The backstories are notable for this, as they'll start with Church's part, which is often depressing and/or bloody, and end with Donut's, which is usually fluffy and cheerful. There's also part 109, Part 109/The Volume 2 Riot, where Grif and Simmons are being fairly jokey and there's humorous callbacks to early RvB episodes [[spoiler:seconds before Simmons gets gutted and murdered by the Red Zealot.]]
* TheMourningAfter: After a ten year timeskip, [[spoiler:Grif]] is still not over [[spoiler:Simmons']] death. This is not attributed not purely to the depth of love, however, but to prison being such an unchanging place that it always feels like the same day.



* MushroomSamba: Grif, after he takes some LSD in an effort to pass the time. Amongst his hallucinations are a suddenly gelatinous floor and [[spoiler:Simmons, who'd died a decade ago.]]

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* MushroomSamba: Grif, after he takes some LSD in an effort to pass the time. Amongst Among his hallucinations are a suddenly gelatinous floor and [[spoiler:Simmons, who'd died a decade ago.]]



* NeckSnap: Off-screen, this is how Locus kills Cunningham.

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* NeckSnap: Off-screen, this is how Locus kills Cunningham.Cunningham in the ffnet version. Has not occured in the later rewrite.



* PaedoHunt: Played with during a con in Tucker's backstory. In the con, they used the fact that Tucker looked much younger than he really was to set up a situation that made their target look like a pedophile, so they could blackmail him with the pictures.

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* PaedoHunt: Played with during a con in Tucker's backstory. In the con, they used the fact that Tucker looked much younger than he really was to set up a situation that made their target look like a pedophile, so they could blackmail him with the pictures. Averted in the rewrite, where the situation instead played towards Tucker being black and his target a) secretly having a fetish and b) being a white-bread married man who needed to keep a clean reputation.



* ParentalNeglect: Church's father at his most benevolent. Tucker's mother, although she did love her son. She was just perpetually drunk.

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* ParentalNeglect: Church's father at his most benevolent. Tucker's mother, although she did love her son. She was just perpetually drunk. Locus' mother was neglectful due to implied mental illness.



* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Established early on, as despite trying to intimidate Donut by mentioning that rape is a strong possibility, Church makes it clear that he personally finds it reprehensible. Despite the fact that most of the characters are bad in some way, the only one who ever engages in rape is O'Malley.

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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Established early on, as despite trying to intimidate Donut by mentioning that rape is a strong possibility, Church makes it clear that he personally finds it reprehensible. Despite the fact that most of the characters are bad in some way, the only one who ever engages in rape is O'Malley.O'Malley (although Felix suggests it once).



* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: York is probably the most reasonable guard, particularly in comparison to Wash, who is nightstick-happy to say the least. As of the rewrite, North also qualifies.
* RecursiveCrossdressing: [[spoiler:C.T in the backstory. She normally dresses as and pretends to be male to help her reach seem bigger by emulating her boyfriend, the 'other' C.T. Then during one con, she has to dress as a woman, alongside Tucker who still thinks she's a man at that stage.]]
* RightForTheWrongReasons: Sarge routinely accuses Flowers of being 'some form of traitor' due to his love of the colour blue and their tendancy to pit inmates against each other in colour-coded sporting games. [[spoiler:Given that Flowers is an agent for the Director and working at the prison for those reasons, Sarge is correct.]]

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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: York is probably the most and North are considered reasonable guard, to most of the inmates, particularly in comparison to Wash, who Wash. Subverted later, as York is nightstick-happy to say the least. As of the rewrite, not above covering up Wash's more questionable acts, and North is also qualifies.
open to starving an occasional inmate as punishment.
* RecursiveCrossdressing: [[spoiler:C.C.T in the backstory. She normally FFnet flashbacks, where she generally dresses as and pretends to be male to help her reach seem bigger by emulating her boyfriend, the 'other' C.T. Then during one con, she has to dress a man but dresses as a woman, alongside Tucker who still thinks woman for a con. This is removed in the rewrite, where she's openly a man at that stage.]]
woman from the start.
* RightForTheWrongReasons: Sarge routinely accuses Flowers of being 'some form of traitor' due to his love of the colour blue and their tendancy to pit inmates against each other in colour-coded sporting games. [[spoiler:Given that Flowers is an agent for the Director and likely working at the prison for those reasons, Sarge is correct.]]



** [[spoiler: Also, Caboose. Maybe. Either he shoved his mother down the stairs or she really just slipped.]]

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** [[spoiler: Also, Caboose. Maybe. Either he shoved his mother down the stairs or she really just slipped.]]



** Donut also seems to ship Church and Tucker. Although this is more about wanting more love in the prison in general, and he stops after Church [[spoiler:reveals how he gaslighted Caboose into thinking he'd never killed.]]

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** Donut also seems to ship Church and Tucker. Although this is more about wanting more love in the prison in general, and he stops after Church [[spoiler:reveals how he gaslighted Caboose into thinking he'd never killed.]]forces a kiss on Tucker.



** The title of part 153, 'Shout Out To Shadles,' is a ShoutOut to Creator/AchievementHunter's "Trouble in Terrorist Town" LP. In said LP, a random player named 'Shadles' ended up in the AH crew's game and annihilated them, including hanging Ray after murdering him. [[spoiler:This is also what Locus does to Brutus, the sleeveless insurrectionist, in the same chapter.]]

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** The title of part 153, 153 in the ffnet version, 'Shout Out To Shadles,' is a ShoutOut to Creator/AchievementHunter's "Trouble in Terrorist Town" LP. In said LP, a random player named 'Shadles' ended up in the AH crew's game and annihilated them, including hanging Ray after murdering him. [[spoiler:This is also what Locus does to Brutus, the sleeveless insurrectionist, Sleeveless Insurrectionist, in the same chapter.]]]]
** Samuel closing his eyes and opening them as Locus is a ComicBook/Watchmen reference.



* TapOnTheHead: Deconstructed. [[spoiler:O'Malley and Locus do this to Wash multiple times during a torture session to mess with his sense of how much time has passed. It may have given him brain damage.]]

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* TapOnTheHead: Deconstructed. [[spoiler:O'Malley and Locus Felix do this to Wash multiple times during a torture session to mess with his sense of how much time has passed. It may have given him brain damage.]]



* TortureChamberEpisode: Chapter 151. [[spoiler:In which Wash is kept in the electrical room and mercilessly tortured, both physically, mentally and emotionally, by O'Malley and Locus.]]

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* TortureChamberEpisode: Chapter 151.151/Volume 3, Chapter Seven. [[spoiler:In which Wash is kept in the electrical room and mercilessly tortured, both physically, mentally and emotionally, by O'Malley and Locus.]]



* WhamEpisode: Part 109. [[spoiler:By the end of the riot, Tucker is completely blind and Red Zealot, Miller, Wyoming and ''Simmons'' are all dead.]]

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* WhamEpisode: Part 109.109/The Volume 2 Riot. [[spoiler:By the end of the riot, Tucker is completely blind and Red Zealot, Miller, Wyoming and ''Simmons'' are all dead.]]



* YouRemindMeOfX: Wash reminds Wyoming of himself when he was younger.

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* YouRemindMeOfX: Wash reminds Wyoming of himself when he was younger.younger.
* YouWouldn'tShootMe: Surge pulls this on a teenaged Connie in the flashbacks, correctly guessing that she's never murdered before, and gets as far as putting his hand on her gun. However, Pillman had no problems with stabbing him.

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* AxCrazy: O'Malley and the Red Zealot. Caboose is also a borderline example, though it recedes after [[HeelRealization he realises it through Church]]. The Insurrectionist Leader is a literal example, as he has attacked people with tomahawks twice.

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* AxCrazy: O'Malley and the Red Zealot. Caboose is also a borderline example, though it recedes after [[HeelRealization he realises it through Church]]. The Insurrectionist Leader Pillman is a literal example, as he has attacked attacking people with tomahawks twice.a tomahawk on his list of crimes.



* BuriedAlive: [[spoiler:The man Grif and Simmons killed wasn't quite dead when they buried him...]]

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* BuriedAlive: [[spoiler:The man [[spoiler:In the earlier versions of the fic, Grif and Simmons killed buried their murder victim and then discovered he wasn't quite dead when they buried him...did so. Averted in the rewrite.]]



* CatchPhrase: As well as the ones from the original series, North has a habit of going "Jesus Christ on a unicycle!" Or substituting unicycle for another mode of transport.

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* CatchPhrase: As well as the ones from the original series, in the earliest version of the fic North has a habit of going "Jesus Christ on a unicycle!" Or substituting unicycle for another mode of transport.



* ChessMotifs: Simmons attempts to explain the situation with Church during episode 100 with a chess metaphor. However, he doesn't have any chess pieces on hand and ends up using playing cards instead to represent the 'pieces.'

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* ChessMotifs: Simmons attempts to explain the a situation with Church during episode 100 in Volume 2 with a chess metaphor. However, he doesn't have any chess pieces on hand and ends up using playing cards instead to represent the 'pieces.'



* {{Conman}}: Tucker and Jones in the main fic. The backstory also adds C.T, Joannes and Gary.

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* {{Conman}}: Tucker and Jones in the main fic. The backstory also adds both C.T, Ts, Joannes and Gary.



* DeathByFallingOver: Caboose will often claim this is how his victims really died, rather than admitting to murder.

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* DeathByFallingOver: Caboose will often claim this is how his victims really died, rather than admitting to murder. [[spoiler:It may be true in the case of his mother, as Caboose can't remember how it truly went down any more.]]



* DespairEventHorizon: [[spoiler:Wash hit this in his flashback chapter, following his three-month torture session, eight months in hospitals and mental institutions, followed by over a year of homelessness, becoming sick through hunger and side effects of his medication, and then going off his medication and becoming even sicker from that. He lost hope entirely because he couldn't see a way out. He was seconds away from walking in front of traffic when York found him.]]

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* DespairEventHorizon: [[spoiler:Wash hit this in his flashback chapter, 'Debt,' following his three-month torture session, eight months in hospitals and mental institutions, followed by over a year of homelessness, becoming sick through hunger and side effects of his medication, and then going off his medication and becoming even sicker from that. He lost hope entirely because he couldn't see a way out. He was seconds away from walking in front of traffic when York found him.]]



* DisappearedDad: Neither Grif nor Tucker knew their fathers. And Donut can't remember his biological one, instead being adopted by two mothers.
* DisguisedInDrag: Tucker has disguised himself as a girl more than once in the past, for conning purposes.
* DisproportionateRetribution: O'Malley is prone to over-the-top revenge for the tiniest of slights. Particularly for reasons relating to Doc, such as Church calling Doc a 'pussyfest' and Donut (with permission) using his mouthwash.

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* DisappearedDad: Neither Grif nor Tucker ever knew their fathers. And Donut can't remember his biological one, instead being adopted by two mothers.
fathers, and Locus' father walked out on the family.
* DisguisedInDrag: Tucker has disguised himself as a girl more than at least once in the past, for conning purposes.
* DisproportionateRetribution: O'Malley is prone to over-the-top revenge for the tiniest of slights. Particularly for reasons relating to Doc, such as Church calling Doc a 'pussyfest' and 'pussyfest,' Donut (with permission) using his mouthwash.mouthwash, and Doc and Wash daring to communicate with light shoulder touches.
* TheDogBitesBack: [[spoiler:O'Malley spends fifteen years mistreating Doc in every way possible. Doc finally has enough, drugs O'Malley and leaves him to die in the way that O'Malley would hate the most.]]



* DrowningMySorrows: Grif attempts to drink himself into a coma after [[spoiler:Simmons' death.]]
* DumbBlonde: Caboose. Delta is an inversion, being both blond and possibly the smartest character in the fic.

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* DrowningMySorrows: Grif attempts to drink himself into a coma after [[spoiler:Simmons' death.]]
* DumbBlonde: Caboose. Delta
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* EvilRedhead: O'Malley. This is even a plot point, when at one point he convinces the Red Zealot that he's a prophet of the flag by pointing out that the flag wouldn't bestow its holy colour on someone unworthy.

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* EvilRedhead: O'Malley. This is even a plot point, when at one point he convinces the Red Zealot that he's a prophet of the flag by pointing out that the flag wouldn't bestow its holy colour on someone unworthy. Averted by Volume 3, as he's gone grey by then.



** [[spoiler: Locus cuts some of the tendons on Delta's hands.]]

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** [[spoiler: In the ffnet version, Locus cuts some of the tendons on Delta's hands.hands. This doesn't occur in the rewrite.]]



* GroinAttack: A very vicious, non-comedic example. [[spoiler:Grif and Simmons killed the guy who beat up Sister by cutting off his junk.]]

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* GroinAttack: A very vicious, non-comedic example. [[spoiler:Grif and Simmons killed the guy who beat up Sister by cutting off his junk.]]]] Written out in the rewrite.

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* AbusiveParents: There are many sets of parents who could be considered abusive. Church's father is the most clear-cut example, neglecting both his sons, often throwing beer bottles around them and being very emotionally abusive to Epsilon in particular, blaming him for the mother's death.

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* AbusiveParents: There are many sets of parents who could be considered abusive.
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Church's father is the most clear-cut example, neglecting both his sons, often throwing beer bottles around them and being very emotionally abusive to Epsilon in particular, blaming him for the his mother's death.death. [[spoiler:It is why Church ends up killing him.]]
** On the emotional side, Simmons' parents ignored anything he had to say that was outside of their script and eventually disowned him for kissing a guy.
** The details are unspecified so far in the Volume 3 flashbacks, but Connie is clearly afraid of her parents and prefers living in a junkyard to going home, and as a child Felix freezes up when people pick him up and winces at loud noises.



* AttractiveBentGender: Tucker, when he crossdressed for certain cons in the flashback chapter. He was attractive enough to attract a couple of marks, at least.

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* AttractiveBentGender: Tucker, when he crossdressed for certain cons in the flashback chapter. He was attractive enough his flashback. It's partially attributed to attract a couple of marks, at least.C.T's skill with contouring.



* AxCrazy: O'Malley and the Red Zealot. Caboose is also a borderline example, though it recedes after [[HeelRealization Chapter 95]]. The Insurrectionist Leader is a literal example, as he has attacked people with tomahawks twice.

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* AxCrazy: O'Malley and the Red Zealot. Caboose is also a borderline example, though it recedes after [[HeelRealization Chapter 95]].he realises it through Church]]. The Insurrectionist Leader is a literal example, as he has attacked people with tomahawks twice.

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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8353565/1/Murderers-Row Murderer's Row]] is a Machinima/RedVsBlue [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] SlashFic, written by Violent-Medic.

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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8353565/1/Murderers-Row [[http://archiveofourown.org/series/290408 Murderer's Row]] is a Machinima/RedVsBlue [[AlternateUniverseFic Prison AU]] SlashFic, written by Violent-Medic.



This fic is set to span the twenty years between Donut's incarceration up until he achieves parole, and is mostly based around the fighting between the inmates. In particular, the fighting against O'Malley, an insane psychopath with a habit of picking 'favourites' to focus on.

There are also 'flashback' chapters interspersed with the main fic, detailing how the main six inmates wound up in prison, as well as occasionally the backstory of other important characters.

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As of its most recent iteration on ao3, it has been divided into Volumes, with some oneshots dividing them up:

* [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/4377563/chapters/9936281 Volume 1, 'Welcome To The Row,']] starts from Donut's incarceration. It covers him adjusting to prison, as well as getting to know the other members of the Row (Church, Tucker, Caboose, Grif and Simmons) and getting involved in the struggles between inmates, many of which are caused by the acts of O'Malley, a particularly sadistic inmate. This volume also covers the first half of the main six inmate's 'flashbacks,' detailing how they ended up in prison.
* Between Vol.1 and Vol.2 is [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/4829522 'Two Sides Of One Coin,']] a flashback oneshot concerning the childhoods of Doc and O'Malley.
* [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/5166431/chapters/11900495 Volume 2, 'The Cost Of Obsession,']] takes place five years after Vol.1 and starts with Lopez joining the Row. It details what happens when Doc leaves the prison to escape O'Malley, and O'Malley takes this as a personal insult and starts causing damage with intent to bring Doc back or, should that fail, escape and pursue him. It also involves other antagonists, including Wash antagonizing Donut over a perceived issue. This volume covers the second half of the main six inmate's 'flashbacks.'
* Between Vol.2 and Vol.3 is [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/10098935 'Debt,']] a flashback concerning Wash after [[spoiler:his three-month captivity in a basement during Church's flashbacks.]] Also between these two volumes is 'Dry Spell,' not directly linked to due to its nature as smut.
* [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/11939559/chapters/26990139 Volume 3, 'Pound of Flesh,']] has just begun and is slated to be the final volume. It takes place ten years after Vol.2.

This fic is set to span the twenty years between Donut's incarceration up until he achieves parole, and is mostly based around has gone through two heavy revisions. This page links to the fighting between the inmates. In particular, the fighting against O'Malley, an insane psychopath with a habit of picking 'favourites' to focus on.

There are also 'flashback' chapters interspersed with the main fic, detailing how the main six inmates wound up in prison, as well as occasionally the backstory of other important characters.
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** A couple of lines during the scene when [[spoiler:the Red Zealot disembowels Walter]] are quotes from Olimar in ThereWillBeBrawl.

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** A couple of lines during the scene when [[spoiler:the Red Zealot disembowels Walter]] are quotes from Olimar in ThereWillBeBrawl.WebVideo/ThereWillBeBrawl.
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** Caboose mentions having a cousin who 'kept saying his name was not what his name was.' This is a reference to Wade (aka Durnt) from TheStrangerhood, a different RoosterTeeth machinima, who shares a voice actor with Caboose.

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** Caboose mentions having a cousin who 'kept saying his name was not what his name was.' This is a reference to Wade (aka Durnt) from TheStrangerhood, a different RoosterTeeth Creator/RoosterTeeth machinima, who shares a voice actor with Caboose.

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* [[spoiler: BlindBlackGuy: Tucker after Part 109.]]

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* [[spoiler: BlindBlackGuy: [[spoiler: Tucker after Part 109.]]



* BreakingSpeech: O'Malley manages to do this a lot. Wyoming also got a turn at it.



* HannibalLecture: O'Malley manages to do this a lot. Wyoming also got a turn at it.
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** The title of part 153, 'Shout Out To Shadles,' is a ShoutOut to [[AchievementHunter Achievement Hunter's]] 'Trouble in Terrorist Town' LP. In said LP, a random player named 'Shadles' ended up in the AH crew's game and annihilated them, including hanging Ray after murdering him. [[spoiler:This is also what Locus does to Brutus, the sleeveless insurrectionist, in the same chapter.]]

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** The title of part 153, 'Shout Out To Shadles,' is a ShoutOut to [[AchievementHunter Achievement Hunter's]] 'Trouble Creator/AchievementHunter's "Trouble in Terrorist Town' Town" LP. In said LP, a random player named 'Shadles' ended up in the AH crew's game and annihilated them, including hanging Ray after murdering him. [[spoiler:This is also what Locus does to Brutus, the sleeveless insurrectionist, in the same chapter.]]

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* AlcoholicParent: Tucker's mother.

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* AlcoholicParent: Tucker's mother.mother, of the benign but neglectful variety, and Church's father, of the violent variety.



* BetterManhandleTheMurderWeapon: In Church's backstory, [[spoiler: after Wash stabs Epsilon during his escape, Gary is the one to find him. He picks up the knife and is found immediately by Delta, who shoots him on the spot. However, this was also because he'd just returned from finding proof that Gary had betrayed them. (Though this also turned out to be wrong.)]]

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* BetterManhandleTheMurderWeapon: In Church's backstory, [[spoiler: after Wash stabs Epsilon during his escape, Gary is the one to find him. He picks up the knife and is found immediately by Delta, who shoots him on the spot. However, this was also because he'd just returned from finding proof that Gary had betrayed them. (Though this also turned out to be wrong.planted.)]]



** Happened once between Church and Tucker, once the truth about Church's crush came out. Church did it because he figured Tucker would hate him for the crush anyway.

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** Happened once between Church and Tucker, once the truth about Church's crush came out. Church did it because he figured Tucker would hate him for The response was violent, though on a lesser scale than the crush anyway.previous example.



** Done in Part 151. [[spoiler:Since O'Malley only has a few hours at most to torture Wash, he regularly knocks him out and then wakes him up a couple of minutes later and tells him hours or days have passed. As such, he manages to trick Wash into thinking it's been five days instead of a few hours.]]



* HeterosexualLifePartners: Minus the heterosexual part on Donut's end, he and Caboose have a definite bromance going on.

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* HeterosexualLifePartners: Minus the heterosexual part on Donut's end, he and Caboose have a definite bromance going on.on, to the point of sleeping together in a blanket fort in their cell by the time of the second timeskip.



* RecursiveCrossdressing: [[spoiler:C.T, who at one point ends up dressed in a very girly fashion, while still keeping Tucker convinced that she's really a guy.]]

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* RecursiveCrossdressing: [[spoiler:C.T, who at T in the backstory. She normally dresses as and pretends to be male to help her reach seem bigger by emulating her boyfriend, the 'other' C.T. Then during one point ends up dressed in con, she has to dress as a very girly fashion, while still keeping woman, alongside Tucker convinced that who still thinks she's really a guy.man at that stage.]]



** Donut also seems to ship Church and Tucker. Although this is more about wanting more love in the prison in general, and he stops after Church makes him really mad.

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** Donut also seems to ship Church and Tucker. Although this is more about wanting more love in the prison in general, and he stops after Church makes him really mad.[[spoiler:reveals how he gaslighted Caboose into thinking he'd never killed.]]
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* RightForTheWrongReasons: Sarge routinely accuses Flowers of being 'some form of traitor' due to his love of the colour blue and their tendancy to pit inmates against each other in colour-coded sporting games. [[spoiler:Given that Flowers is an agent for the Director and working at the prison for those reasons, Sarge is correct.]]
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* TortureChamberEpisode: Chapter 151. [[spoiler:In which Wash is kept in the electrical room and mercilessly tortured, both physically, mentally and emotionally, by O'Malley and Locus.]]

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