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* PunchClockVillain: Some argue that Issac Daniels and the [[Main/CorruptChurch Church of Holy Truth]]
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* PunchClockVillain: Some argue that Issac Daniels and the [[Main/CorruptChurch Church of Holy Truth]]Truth]] are this.
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* PunchClockVillain: Some argue that Issac Daniels and the [[Main/CorruptChurch Church of Holy Truth]]
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* TooDumbToLive: [[spoiler:Mia.]]
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* TakeThat: Part of what kicks off the plot is the mention of a series of books about a HalfHumanHybrid named "Sarah Hooter" fighting an evil organization. [[MaximumRide Why does that sound familiar?]]
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* TakeThat: Part of what kicks off the plot is the mention of a series of books about a HalfHumanHybrid named "Sarah Hooter" fighting an evil organization. [[MaximumRide [[Literature/MaximumRide Why does that sound familiar?]]
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* TheAlcoholic: Dave tends to drink a lot when he's stressed.
* HyperAwareness: Mia, on account of her Scyther genes. It takes a single glimpse of the leader of the Church of Holy Truth for her to figure out that the police arrested the wrong man.
* NeverLiveItDown: InUniverse. Dave gets noticeably nervous whenever Mia brings up that he [[spoiler:had sex with her mom]].
* OddFriendship: Dave and Mia, despite his abrasive temperament and her unfamiliarity with most social norms. They did get five extra chapters together, after all.
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* PetTheDog: Dave ''is'' genuinely a JerkAss, but he gets fonder of the Pokémorphs eventually (especially Jean and Mia), and in some of his interactions with Mia (mainly the Dave-and-Mia-discuss chapters), he's quite noticeably less of a JerkAss.
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* PetTheDog: Dave ''is'' genuinely a JerkAss, {{Jerkass}}, but he gets fonder of the Pokémorphs eventually (especially Jean and Mia), and in some of his interactions with Mia (mainly the Dave-and-Mia-discuss chapters), he's quite noticeably less of a JerkAss.jerkass.
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Mia likes hot dogs, though [[http://www.dragonflycave.com/tqftl/forum.aspx?c=showthread&threadid=45&page=43 she doesn't really get the point of the food]] and usually eats them plain. It's also mentioned that meat is one of the only gifts she'll find a use for, the other being things she can cut.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: The circumstances of Pokémorphs' birth; the scientists were drunk when they started making them and initially intended to simply dispose them, until pro-life activists interrupted them and demanded they rise the kids like normal kids. Dave then initially regrets the whole Pokémorphs project, but comes to love them all, slowly.
* FantasticRacism: It's basically ''Franchise/{{X-Men}}'' with genetically-engineered Pokémon gijinkas.
* FantasticRacism: It's basically ''Franchise/{{X-Men}}'' with genetically-engineered Pokémon gijinkas.
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* HalfHumanHybrid: The whole point of the story.
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The end result is a story that is is dark and with solid, believable characters. The Pokémorph children also have varied but realistic personalities, in many cases exploring what an average, normal person would do in the situations that the characters are thrown into.
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The end result is a story that is is dark and with solid, believable characters. The Pokémorph children also have varied but realistic personalities, in many cases exploring what an average, normal person would do in the situations that the characters are thrown into.
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** Almost everything from [[spoiler: Chapter 7]] onwards could be considered BreakTheCutie for [[spoiler: Gabriel. His dad dies, he gets kidnapped, two of his friends die when they come to save him, and then he nearly dies after figuring out how to use fire attacks]].
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** Will also gets a brief moment of this in Chapter 6.
-->"If only he were a fictional character everyone would probably love him."
-->"If only he were a fictional character everyone would probably love him."
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*** Wherever it takes place, Peter does mention having started training, and at the end is slightly upset that because of [[spoiler:the permanent house arrest]], he'll never get to be a Gym Leader. It's likely safe to assume that training is still important in this universe, it just gets less mention because the story focuses more on the kids dealing with their Pokémon DNA.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Most of the kids, especially Gabriel, who was fused with a ''[[http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Slugma_(Pokémon)#Behavior Slugma]]''. Also, Katherine needs to be in sunlight constantly or she gets tired and groggy.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Most of the kids, especially Gabriel, who was fused with a ''[[http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Slugma_(Pokémon)#Behavior Slugma]]''. Also, Katherine needs to be in sunlight constantly or she gets tired and groggy. Peter gets hit with this the least out of all the kids.
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Tropes cannot be averted/subverted/whatever \"hard.\"
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* ThouShallNotKill: [[spoiler:Subverted ''hard''. In chapter 13, when the kids opt to knock out or paralyze the religious extremists instead of killing them, they get up again just when the kids think they're safe. The result is not pretty. It only gets better when they start killing the fanatics.]]
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* ThouShallNotKill: [[spoiler:Subverted ''hard''. In in chapter 13, when the kids opt to knock out or paralyze the religious extremists instead of killing them, they get up again just when the kids think they're safe. The result is not pretty. It only gets better when they start killing the fanatics.]]
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The end result is a story that is is dark and well-written with solid, realistic characters. The Pokémorph children also have varied but realistic personalities, in many cases exploring what an average, normal person would do in the situations that the characters are thrown into.
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The end result is a story that is is dark and well-written with solid, realistic believable characters. The Pokémorph children also have varied but realistic personalities, in many cases exploring what an average, normal person would do in the situations that the characters are thrown into.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: Most of the morphs, though especially Mia and Katherine. Lucy is the only one OlderThanTheyLook.
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The Wiki Rule for English language Pokémon fans has an article on Pokémorphs.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3553005/1/Morphic Morphic]]'' is a {{Pokemon}} fanfic intended as a {{deconstruction}} of "Pokémorphs", a fandom term for a character with mixed human and Pokémon characteristics, generally at the level of PettingZooPeople. (Not to be confused with ordinary humans who can transform into Pokémon à la {{Animorphs}}, which are also often referred to as Pokémorphs but do not appear in the fic.)
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3553005/1/Morphic Morphic]]'' is a {{Pokemon}} fanfic intended as a {{deconstruction}} of "Pokémorphs", "[[http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Pokémorph Pokémorphs]]", a fandom term for a character with mixed human and Pokémon characteristics, generally at the level of PettingZooPeople. (Not to be confused with ordinary humans who can transform into Pokémon à la {{Animorphs}}, which are also often referred to as Pokémorphs but do not appear in the fic.)
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* ChekhovsGunman: [[spoiler:Monica Sellers is given a very brief mention in chapter 4. Later on, she tries to warn Dave about the Church of Holy Truth's real plans. Unfortunately this [[NiceJobBreakingItHero directly causes Gabriel to get kidnapped]].]]
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* ChekhovsGunman: [[spoiler:Monica Sellers is given a very brief mention in chapter 4. Later on, she tries to warn Dave about the Church of Holy Truth's real plans. Unfortunately this [[NiceJobBreakingItHero [[UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom directly causes leads to Gabriel to get getting kidnapped]].]]
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* CheckhovsGunman: [[spoiler:Monica Sellers is given a very brief mention in chapter 4. Later on, she tries to warn Dave about the Church of Holy Truth's real plans. Unfortunately this [[NiceJobBreakingItHero directly causes Gabriel to get kidnapped]].]]
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* CheckhovsGunman: ChekhovsGunman: [[spoiler:Monica Sellers is given a very brief mention in chapter 4. Later on, she tries to warn Dave about the Church of Holy Truth's real plans. Unfortunately this [[NiceJobBreakingItHero directly causes Gabriel to get kidnapped]].]]
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*** However, wherever it takes place, Peter does mention having started training, and at the end is slightly upset that because of [[spoiler:the permanent house arrest]], he'll never get to be a Gym Leader. It's likely safe to assume that training is still important in this universe, it just gets less mention because the story focuses more on the kids dealing with their Pokémon DNA.
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*** However, wherever Wherever it takes place, Peter does mention having started training, and at the end is slightly upset that because of [[spoiler:the permanent house arrest]], he'll never get to be a Gym Leader. It's likely safe to assume that training is still important in this universe, it just gets less mention because the story focuses more on the kids dealing with their Pokémon DNA.
* CheckhovsGunman: [[spoiler:Monica Sellers is given a very brief mention in chapter 4. Later on, she tries to warn Dave about the Church of Holy Truth's real plans. Unfortunately this [[NiceJobBreakingItHero directly causes Gabriel to get kidnapped]].]]
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* PetTheDog: Dave ''is'' genuinely a JerkAss (''maybe'' JerkWithAHeartOfGold at best), JerkAss, but he gets fonder of the Pokémorphs eventually (especially Jean and Mia), and in some of his interactions with Mia (mainly the Dave-and-Mia-discuss chapters), he's quite noticeably less of a JerkAss.
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** And before then, [[spoiler:Chapter 7]]. It goes from Jean bragging about the movie contract to [[spoiler:Brian getting killed]].
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* PetTheDog: Dave ''is'' genuinely a JerkAss (''maybe'' JerkWithAHeartOfGold at best), but he seems to be fairly fond gets fonder of the Pokémorphs eventually (especially Jean and Mia), and in some of his interactions with Mia (mainly the later chapters. He especially seems to care about Mia and Jean, even if he doesn't like to admit it.Dave-and-Mia-discuss chapters), he's quite noticeably less of a JerkAss.
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*** ''Sort of'' [[LampshadedHanging lampshaded]] by Dave in one of the "Dave and Mia discuss..." bonus chapters. He points out that while she looks and acts more like a teenager, she's still technically ten.
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*** ''Sort of'' [[LampshadedHanging [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by Dave in one of the "Dave and Mia discuss..." bonus chapters. He points out that while she looks and acts more like a teenager, she's still technically ten.
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*** ''Sort of'' [[LampshadedHanging lampshaded]] by Dave in one of the "Dave and Mia discuss..." bonus chapters. He points out that while she looks and acts more like a teenager, she's still technically ten.
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There are also multiple "Dave and Mia discuss..." shorts, which can be found on the author's [[http://www.dragonflycave.com/fanfiction.aspx#morphic fanfiction page]] on [[TheCaveOfDragonflies her website]]. They involve [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Dave and Mia discussing]] various subjects, including as of writing [[{{Asexuality}} sex]], [[DemocracyIsBad politics]], and [[HeroicSociopath horror]].
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There are also multiple "Dave and Mia discuss..." shorts, which can be found on the author's [[http://www.dragonflycave.com/fanfiction.aspx#morphic fanfiction page]] on [[TheCaveOfDragonflies her website]]. They involve [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Dave and Mia discussing]] various subjects, including as of writing [[{{Asexuality}} sex]], [[DemocracyIsBad politics]], and [[HeroicSociopath [[SociopathicHero horror]].
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* AlternateUniverse: Pokémon are not as powerful as they are in the games, and are also less important politically. (The world is not ruled by gym leaders and the Pokémon League, for example)
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* AlternateUniverse: Pokémon are not as powerful as they are in the games, and are also less important politically. (The world is not ruled by gym leaders and the Pokémon League, for example)example.)
*** However, wherever it takes place, Peter does mention having started training, and at the end is slightly upset that because of [[spoiler:the permanent house arrest]], he'll never get to be a Gym Leader. It's likely safe to assume that training is still important in this universe, it just gets less mention because the story focuses more on the kids dealing with their Pokémon DNA.
** And before then, [[spoiler:Chapter 7]].
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* {{Narm}}: (In the fake version) "Oh my goodness! That door is made of pine!"
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* PetTheDog: Dave ''is'' genuinely a JerkAss (''maybe'' JerkWithAHeartOfHold JerkWithAHeartOfGold at best), but the Morphs seem to grow on him in the later chapters. He especially seems to care about Mia and Jean, even if he doesn't like to admit it.
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* HeroicSociopath: Mia.
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* PetTheDog: Dave ''is'' genuinely a JerkAss, JerkAss (''maybe'' JerkWithAHeartOfHold at best), but the Morphs seem to genuinely grow on him in the later chapters.chapters. He especially seems to care about Mia and Jean, even if he doesn't like to admit it.
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* PetTheDog: Dave ''is'' a JerkAss, but the Morphs seem to genuinely grow on him in the later chapters.
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* Tear Jerker: [[spoiler: Your Mileage May Vary, but at Mia's funeral, the preacher actually couldn't think of anything good to say about her.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Gabriel internally calls Dave out on a truckload of things [[spoiler:at Brian's funeral]].
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* DesignerBabies: Well, duh.
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* GattacaBabies: Well, duh.
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* Tear Jerker: [[spoiler: Your Mileage May Vary, but at Mia's funeral, the preacher actually couldn't think of anything good to say about her.]]
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* ShoutOut: Gabriel and Brian's mystery novel has the same plot as an Icelandic murder mystery novel.
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* [=~Chekhov's Gun~=]: [[spoiler:Subverted with Felicia, who is killed the instant it looks like she's going to be useful.]]
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* [=~Chekhov's Gun~=]: ChekhovsGun: [[spoiler:Subverted with Felicia, who is killed the instant it looks like she's going to be useful.]]