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* YuriFanboy: Possibly the author.
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* YuriFanboy: Possibly [[strike:Possible]] the author.
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-->''"It was a hot day and Light came home from school. As he got to his house he saw a strange car outside and he knew immediately it was not American because the wheel was on the wrong side."''
-->--The opening paragraph. [[ItGotWorse And it's all downhill from there.]]
-->''Some guy told me that im on Tv Tropes now which is like a wikipedia but for tv or something! THIS A FAMOUS STORY BUT I WONT LET IT GOT TO MY HEAD EVEN IF IM AWSEOM! Im not on tv but i guess death note is and thats why they licked it?''
-->--The author when he found out about us.
-->--The opening paragraph. [[ItGotWorse And it's all downhill from there.]]
-->''Some guy told me that im on Tv Tropes now which is like a wikipedia but for tv or something! THIS A FAMOUS STORY BUT I WONT LET IT GOT TO MY HEAD EVEN IF IM AWSEOM! Im not on tv but i guess death note is and thats why they licked it?''
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* EnemyMine: ''Everyone'' In this fic will abruptly work with former enemies to defeat new ones. Probably the best example is Dark and Night working to kill L for a few chapters, only for Dark to ally with L's ghost to kill Night, only for L's ghost to work with Night instead to kill Dark!
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*** Near actually makes a habit of flip-flopping between dead and alive, it's all quite puzzling. Two more examples are L and Light, whom Dark "tricked" into kill each other, but they both appear alive and well a few chapters later. Bizarrely, the ''opposite'' happens to Mello, who is described as a ghost during the same scene, even though he seems to have escaped the chapter he had last appeared in perfectly alive.
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* MagicalCountdown: The countdown for the nuclear missile launch takes ''ages'' to move from 10 to 9, then jumps to 1 in a single line of dialogue.
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* MagicalCountdown: MagicCountdown: The countdown for the nuclear missile launch takes ''ages'' to move from 10 to 9, then jumps to 1 in a single line of dialogue.
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* RunningGag: The "Near" puns, as well as "...or my name isn't...!"
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* RunningGag: The "Near" puns, as well as [[OrMyNameIsnt "...or my name isn't...!"!"]]
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Has a drinking game, which can be found at DrinkingGame/LightAndDarkTheAdventuresOfDarkYagami. [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Characters/LightAndDarkTheAdventuresOfDarkYagami And a character sheet.]]
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Has a drinking game, which can be found at DrinkingGame/LightAndDarkTheAdventuresOfDarkYagami. [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Characters/LightAndDarkTheAdventuresOfDarkYagami [[Characters/LightAndDarkTheAdventuresOfDarkYagami And a character sheet.]]sheet]].
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* TheTapeKnewYouWouldSayThat - Dark's speech when controlling [[spoiler:the Queen]], considering that it was completely prewritten in his Death Note.
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* AllThereInTheManual: The author's twitter will occasionally update us on the state or whereabouts of characters, such as Ryuk dying in a car accident/poisoning, before being resurrected by Blud.
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* AllThereInTheManual: [[http://twitter.com/#!/RealDarkYagami The author's twitter twitter]] will occasionally update us on the state or whereabouts of characters, such as Ryuk dying in a car accident/poisoning, before being resurrected by Blud.
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* AnyoneCanDie: Apparently the point of the most recent chapter. D'ark even gives us this handy death tally:
-->DAWN killed by CYBERKATAKDA!
-->TWILIGHT killed by HAL!
-->SOICHIROS GOLDFISH killed by COOL DUDE PEEING IN THE TANK!
-->CYBERTAKADA sexed to death by SAYU!
-->SOICHIRO and WATARI killed by THEM
-->SAMANTHER outsceinced by NIGHT!
-->RAY killed by RUBBLE!
-->NEAR killed by DAY!
-->COOL DUDE killed by BLUD KING OF THE SHINIGAMI!
-->Also Day got punched by L while he was tying his shoes!
-->DAWN killed by CYBERKATAKDA!
-->TWILIGHT killed by HAL!
-->SOICHIROS GOLDFISH killed by COOL DUDE PEEING IN THE TANK!
-->CYBERTAKADA sexed to death by SAYU!
-->SOICHIRO and WATARI killed by THEM
-->SAMANTHER outsceinced by NIGHT!
-->RAY killed by RUBBLE!
-->NEAR killed by DAY!
-->COOL DUDE killed by BLUD KING OF THE SHINIGAMI!
-->Also Day got punched by L while he was tying his shoes!
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** The [[ResetButton Reset Note]] DoesExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin.
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** The [[ResetButton Reset Note]] DoesExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin.Does ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin.
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny - “NOOOOO! I MUST FARSTER!
** “I will have to use stealth instead” said L and [[WithCatlikeTread jumped in the broken window screaming]].
*** There was a minute quiet for Light. Then he got life noted back. “Few! I thought I was a boner there!” “We all fought that.” Said Misa and stopped hugging him because he wasn’t one.
**** "Light’s dad dressed as Watari shoot out a window just to show him he meant business and was not just some crazy guy in a helicopter."
***** "“PEOPLE! I MEN YOU NO ARM!” he echoed and blew up a tower so people wood listen and not rjust run and scream a lot which they were. The stopped and turned and lookd at him and everyone wa amased by how hansom he was specally the women."
** “I will have to use stealth instead” said L and [[WithCatlikeTread jumped in the broken window screaming]].
*** There was a minute quiet for Light. Then he got life noted back. “Few! I thought I was a boner there!” “We all fought that.” Said Misa and stopped hugging him because he wasn’t one.
**** "Light’s dad dressed as Watari shoot out a window just to show him he meant business and was not just some crazy guy in a helicopter."
***** "“PEOPLE! I MEN YOU NO ARM!” he echoed and blew up a tower so people wood listen and not rjust run and scream a lot which they were. The stopped and turned and lookd at him and everyone wa amased by how hansom he was specally the women."
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome - “ENOUGH OF YOUR RUDDY FLASHBACKERY YOU SODDING ARSES!”
** "I’M L AND I’M F-CKED UP WITH BEIN DEAD! MAKE ME HELFY AGEN OR I WILL SHOT YOU IN THE NOSE” he shouted at god who got all scared.'' Seriously, God is scared of L. How more awesome can you get?
*** Also known as: the CMOA to end all [=CMOAs=].
** ''Suddenly the queen got up and punched the dude IN THE FACE!'' Yeah. [[BritishRoyalFamily That Queen]].
** "then i will make a swap" said the creepy dude and he grabed Matt and tied him to a stick and got in his icecream truck and drove slow to the volcano. The icecream truck played the darth vader song as he went.
** "I’M L AND I’M F-CKED UP WITH BEIN DEAD! MAKE ME HELFY AGEN OR I WILL SHOT YOU IN THE NOSE” he shouted at god who got all scared.'' Seriously, God is scared of L. How more awesome can you get?
*** Also known as: the CMOA to end all [=CMOAs=].
** ''Suddenly the queen got up and punched the dude IN THE FACE!'' Yeah. [[BritishRoyalFamily That Queen]].
** "then i will make a swap" said the creepy dude and he grabed Matt and tied him to a stick and got in his icecream truck and drove slow to the volcano. The icecream truck played the darth vader song as he went.
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** The author seems to be a KanyeWest fan; both Watari and Day use the "[[Memes/KanyeWest I'mma let you finish]]" construction, Day has Kanye's spiral haircut and when he gets "burnt and twisted", he becomes a "[[FlatWhat BEAUTIFUL DARK TWISTED FANTASY]]" (in a chapter appropriately called "A Dark (YAGAMI) Twisted Fantasy").
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* VoodooShark - This fic is convoluted, it actually manages to VoodooShark a VoodooShark. Night magically reappears after [[DeadForReal Dying For Real]]. How did she come back to life? She was accidentally life-noted back by [[strike:Higuchi]] Yotsuba when trying to revive his dog Might Yagami. Why does he have a dog called Might Yagami? Because Light Yagami accidentally got cloned and came back as a dog called "Might" in the future. Right...
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* TheImmodestOrgasmTheImmodestOrgasm L gets a special mention.
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* BiggusDickus - when he becomes a Shinigami the size of a bus, he gets a "man thingy" twice the size of a bus. Doesn't seem to affect his sex life, though.
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* BiggusDickus - when he becomes a Shinigami the size of a bus, he gets a "man thingy" twice the size of as big as a bus.bus and '''twice as wide'''. Doesn't seem to affect his sex life, though.
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--> "At first they only sexed a bit but then they sexed more becos Dark needed to brake in and L had to make a bunch of noise so she wood not hear the smashy bits."
--> "They sexed very hard and made so much [[RougeAnglesOfSatin nosse]] that a bunch of pigeons flew away all over the city and some dudes thought it was an earthquake but it wasn't because it was just some noisy sexing and Ls trailer was rocking real hard then it stopped cos they were done."
--> "At first they only sexed a bit but then they sexed more becos Dark needed to brake in and L had to make a bunch of noise so she wood not hear the smashy bits."
--> "They sexed very hard and made so much [[RougeAnglesOfSatin nosse]] that a bunch of pigeons flew away all over the city and some dudes thought it was an earthquake but it wasn't because it was just some noisy sexing and Ls trailer was rocking real hard then it stopped cos they were done."
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* GratuitousFrench: Some of the French people, although it's hard to recognize (“TU WILL PAYEZ FOR THIS!”)
** “[[GratuitousSpanish GRACIAS]]!” she thanked. “I fortez je was mort” (An: France for dead) “Jem apple Naomi”.
** “[[GratuitousSpanish GRACIAS]]!” she thanked. “I fortez je was mort” (An: France for dead) “Jem apple Naomi”.
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* PoirotSpeak: Some of the French people speak in a bizarre mixture of French and English (“TU WILL PAYEZ FOR THIS!”)
** “[[GratuitousSpanish GRACIAS]]!” she thanked. “I fortez je was mort” (An: France for dead) “Jem apple Naomi”.
** “[[GratuitousSpanish GRACIAS]]!” she thanked. “I fortez je was mort” (An: France for dead) “Jem apple Naomi”.
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** In what must be the one of the oddest Asspulls ever, Creepy Dude gets a Secret Death Note... from a volcano God.
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** In what must be the one of the oddest Asspulls ever, Creepy Dude gets a Secret Death Note... Note, which can't be detected by "Death Note radars"... from a volcano God.God.
** The Blind Note apparently exists solely as a reason for Light to hate Near (see KickTheSonOfABitch).
** The [[ResetButton Reset Note]] DoesExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin.
** The Debu Note - a "fat note" [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_ihEQlIJOIA from a Japanese sketch show]] - gets a ShoutOut.
** There are "Sex Notes". What they do is unclear, but they seem to give TIOSEFAJ blonde hair and [[GagBoobs a killer rack]].
** The Blind Note apparently exists solely as a reason for Light to hate Near (see KickTheSonOfABitch).
** The [[ResetButton Reset Note]] DoesExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin.
** The Debu Note - a "fat note" [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_ihEQlIJOIA from a Japanese sketch show]] - gets a ShoutOut.
** There are "Sex Notes". What they do is unclear, but they seem to give TIOSEFAJ blonde hair and [[GagBoobs a killer rack]].
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** ''He grew like a mushroom in a mushroom farm''
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** ''Blud watched the action unfold from his sky bass in the sky''
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* OfCorsetsSexy - TIOSEFAJ. Maybe. She wears "''[[BuffySpeak one of those sexy waistcoat things ladies wear in Shakespeare times with the chests and the wastes]]''" anyway.
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-->''everyone cheered except this isn't a movie THIS IS REAL LIFE except its not cos it's a fanfic''
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-->''everyone cheered except this isn't a movie THIS IS REAL LIFE except its not cos it's a fanfic''fanfic and [[ForegoneConclusion everyone new they were gonna win]]! But they cheered anyway''
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--> ''"BLud said he will make me king of the shinigami if we win this fight so now we have to DOUBLE FIGHT" He shouted at every one because he was the leader and this is the part of the movie where [[DarkestHour everyon's all like "WE'RE GONNA LOSE"]] and dark is like "[DoNotGoGentle NO WAY M-THERF-CKERS]]" and [[MisfitMobilizationMoment everyone cheered]]''
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--> ''"BLud ''"[=BLud=] said he will make me king of the shinigami if we win this fight so now we have to DOUBLE FIGHT" He shouted at every one because he was the leader and this is the part of the movie where [[DarkestHour everyon's all like "WE'RE GONNA LOSE"]] and dark is like "[DoNotGoGentle "[[DoNotGoGentle NO WAY M-THERF-CKERS]]" and [[MisfitMobilizationMoment everyone cheered]]''
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* EmphasizeEverything: Most of the time, but especially when things are getting "epic" or "awsome".
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* MagicalCountdown: The countdown for the nuclear missile launch takes ''ages'' to move from 10 to 9, then jumps to 1 in a single line of dialogue.
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--> ''"BLud said he will make me king of the shinigami if we win this fight so now we have to DOUBLE FIGHT" He shouted at every one because he was the leader and this is the part of the movie where [[DarkestHour everyon's all like "WE'RE GONNA LOSE"]] and dark is like "[DoNotGoGentle NO WAY M-THERF-CKERS]]" and [[MisfitMobilizationMoment everyone cheered]]''
--> ''"BLud said he will make me king of the shinigami if we win this fight so now we have to DOUBLE FIGHT" He shouted at every one because he was the leader and this is the part of the movie where [[DarkestHour everyon's all like "WE'RE GONNA LOSE"]] and dark is like "[DoNotGoGentle NO WAY M-THERF-CKERS]]" and [[MisfitMobilizationMoment everyone cheered]]''
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* ThisIsReality - [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]] or [[AvertedTrope Averted]] or [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] or [[DoubleSubversion Double Subverted]] or [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] or... something:
-->''everyone cheered except this isn't a movie THIS IS REAL LIFE except its not cos it's a fanfic''
-->''everyone cheered except this isn't a movie THIS IS REAL LIFE except its not cos it's a fanfic''
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4615680/1/Light_and_Dark_The_Adventures_of_Dark_Yagami Light And Dark The Adventures Of Dark Yagami]]'' (apparently written completely unpunctuated) is a ''DeathNote'' fanfic [[SoBadItsGood in the same way]] ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' is a ''HarryPotter'' fanfic. It's written by D'arkYagam'i, author of ''Pain Note The Ressurekshun Of Ray Pember!'' and ''The God Of Time With No Name Lights Real Name!''.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4615680/1/Light_and_Dark_The_Adventures_of_Dark_Yagami Light And Dark The Adventures Of Dark Yagami]]'' (apparently written completely unpunctuated) is a ''DeathNote'' fanfic [[SoBadItsGood in the same way]] ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' is a ''HarryPotter'' fanfic. It's written by D'arkYagam'i, author of ''Pain Note The Ressurekshun Of Ray Pember!'' and ''The God Of Time With No Name Lights Real Name!''.
Name!'', and is still being updated every few months with another bizarre rambling chapter.
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He had a machine in his hands that looked like a bomb which scared people but it was actually just a father detector. He stuck the wires to the creepy dudes neck and eyes and butt and the machine went "bip bip bip bip biiiiip bip bip biiiiiiiiiip bip bip" and exploded and then a paper came out.
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* WeirdScience: The father detector.
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He had a machine in his hands that looked like a bomb which scared people but it was actually just a father detector. He stuck the wires to the creepy dudes neck and eyes and butt and the machine went "bip bip bip bip biiiiip bip bip biiiiiiiiiip bip bip" and exploded and then a paper came out.
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** ''"then i will make a swap" said the creepy dude and he grabed Matt and tied him to a stick and got in his icecream truck and drove slow to the volcano. The icecream truck played the darth vader song as he went.
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** ''"then "then i will make a swap" said the creepy dude and he grabed Matt and tied him to a stick and got in his icecream truck and drove slow to the volcano. The icecream truck played the darth vader song as he went.
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** ''“I’M L AND I’M F-CKED UP WITH BEIN DEAD! MAKE ME HELFY AGEN OR I WILL SHOT YOU IN THE NOSE” he shouted at god who got all scared.'' Seriously, God is scared of L. How more awesome can you get?
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** ''“I’M "I’M L AND I’M F-CKED UP WITH BEIN DEAD! MAKE ME HELFY AGEN OR I WILL SHOT YOU IN THE NOSE” he shouted at god who got all scared.'' Seriously, God is scared of L. How more awesome can you get?
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* Improbably Cool Car: The watarimobile.
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* Improbably Cool Car: ImprobablyCoolCar: The watarimobile.
