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Has four complete dramatic readings, by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=69Upzlw8azE The Holy Cabbage]] (lots of MSTing), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SFfEKEeeefI&list=PLYNcOqVhTmvb4blZ5PSEQ4ZrJNeWpREaM Lord Starfish]] (no MSTing except in annotations and the occasional snarky remark at the end of a chapter), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2XW0jzbttU Mutant Museum]] (formerly manwithoutabody), and a Spanish-translated version by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ltNJbhJXljE RanguGamer,]] as well as several unfinished ones, including [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VOkboc6QdvE ReteikiAndYuma]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=At-6ewXwZGY hanfern]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rnKgcpJ9mUE&feature=related OperationGoChan]] (acted out with action figures), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tyvW0EPNEfs Temascos]] (with snarky slideshows), and [[http://pamachu-productions.blogspot.com/2011/06/episode-4-light-and-dark-adventures-of.html Pamachu Productions.]] It's also inspired three fan-written sequels – [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9793696/1/Light-and-Dark-Returning-of-D-ark Returning of D'ark,]] [[Fanfic/LightAndDarkDEUXTheNewAdventuresOfDarkSoichiro Light and Dark DEUX,]] and [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1606355 SAD GOODBYES]] – a RoundRobin [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1638099 post game,]] and a [[WebOriginal/ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum]] [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/19IxBxWurMG1m0Z_dzkeronH-kMej81s4Qvq32dSz38M/edit?usp=sharing mission.]]
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Has four complete dramatic readings, by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=69Upzlw8azE The Holy Cabbage]] (lots of MSTing), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SFfEKEeeefI&list=PLYNcOqVhTmvb4blZ5PSEQ4ZrJNeWpREaM Lord Starfish]] (no MSTing except in annotations and the occasional snarky remark at the end of a chapter), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2XW0jzbttU Mutant Museum]] (formerly manwithoutabody), and a Spanish-translated version by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ltNJbhJXljE RanguGamer,]] as well as several unfinished ones, including [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VOkboc6QdvE ReteikiAndYuma]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=At-6ewXwZGY hanfern]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rnKgcpJ9mUE&feature=related OperationGoChan]] (acted out with action figures), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tyvW0EPNEfs Temascos]] (with snarky slideshows), and [[http://pamachu-productions.blogspot.com/2011/06/episode-4-light-and-dark-adventures-of.html Pamachu Productions.]] It's also inspired three fan-written sequels – [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9793696/1/Light-and-Dark-Returning-of-D-ark Returning of D'ark,]] [[Fanfic/LightAndDarkDEUXTheNewAdventuresOfDarkSoichiro Light and Dark DEUX,]] and [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1606355 SAD GOODBYES]] – a RoundRobin [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1638099 post game,]] and a [[WebOriginal/ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum]] [[PPC WebOriginal/ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum]] [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/19IxBxWurMG1m0Z_dzkeronH-kMej81s4Qvq32dSz38M/edit?usp=sharing mission.]]
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Has four complete dramatic readings, by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=69Upzlw8azE The Holy Cabbage]] (lots of MSTing), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SFfEKEeeefI&list=PLYNcOqVhTmvb4blZ5PSEQ4ZrJNeWpREaM Lord Starfish]] (no MSTing except in annotations and the occasional snarky remark at the end of a chapter), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2XW0jzbttU Mutant Museum]] (formerly manwithoutabody), and a Spanish-translated version by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ltNJbhJXljE RanguGamer,]] as well as several unfinished ones, including [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VOkboc6QdvE ReteikiAndYuma]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=At-6ewXwZGY hanfern]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rnKgcpJ9mUE&feature=related OperationGoChan]] (acted out with action figures), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tyvW0EPNEfs Temascos]] (with snarky slideshows), and [[http://pamachu-productions.blogspot.com/2011/06/episode-4-light-and-dark-adventures-of.html Pamachu Productions.]] It's also inspired three fan-written sequels – [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9793696/1/Light-and-Dark-Returning-of-D-ark Returning of D'ark,]] [[Fanfic/LightAndDarkDEUXTheNewAdventuresOfDarkSoichiro Light and Dark DEUX,]] and [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1606355 SAD GOODBYES]] – a RoundRobin [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1638099 post game,]] and a [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/19IxBxWurMG1m0Z_dzkeronH-kMej81s4Qvq32dSz38M/edit?usp=sharing PPC mission.]]
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Has four complete dramatic readings, by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=69Upzlw8azE The Holy Cabbage]] (lots of MSTing), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SFfEKEeeefI&list=PLYNcOqVhTmvb4blZ5PSEQ4ZrJNeWpREaM Lord Starfish]] (no MSTing except in annotations and the occasional snarky remark at the end of a chapter), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2XW0jzbttU Mutant Museum]] (formerly manwithoutabody), and a Spanish-translated version by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ltNJbhJXljE RanguGamer,]] as well as several unfinished ones, including [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VOkboc6QdvE ReteikiAndYuma]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=At-6ewXwZGY hanfern]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rnKgcpJ9mUE&feature=related OperationGoChan]] (acted out with action figures), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tyvW0EPNEfs Temascos]] (with snarky slideshows), and [[http://pamachu-productions.blogspot.com/2011/06/episode-4-light-and-dark-adventures-of.html Pamachu Productions.]] It's also inspired three fan-written sequels – [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9793696/1/Light-and-Dark-Returning-of-D-ark Returning of D'ark,]] [[Fanfic/LightAndDarkDEUXTheNewAdventuresOfDarkSoichiro Light and Dark DEUX,]] and [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1606355 SAD GOODBYES]] – a RoundRobin [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1638099 post game,]] and a [[WebOriginal/ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum]] [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/19IxBxWurMG1m0Z_dzkeronH-kMej81s4Qvq32dSz38M/edit?usp=sharing PPC mission.]]
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It focuses on Dark Yagami, Light's twin brother who trained at Whammy House but is secretly Kira...at first. The story meanders to such an extent that any possible summary would be almost irrelevant by the third chapter, by which point Light's sister Sayu is "sexing" with Misa to steal her Death Note for her dad, who has taken Watari's job because Dark told him to but is secretly working for L. Later he goes to prison and then comes back and becomes King of the Shinigami before time travelling to France to kill Near to stop a [[TemporalParadox time paradox]]. So... yeah.
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It focuses on Dark Yagami, Light's twin brother who trained at Whammy House but is secretly Kira... at first. The story meanders to such an extent that any possible summary would be almost irrelevant by the third chapter, by which point Light's sister Sayu is "sexing" with Misa to steal her Death Note for her dad, who has taken Watari's job because Dark told him to but is secretly working for L. Later he goes to prison and then comes back and becomes King of the Shinigami before time travelling to France to kill Near to stop a [[TemporalParadox time paradox]]. So... yeah.
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--->"So it could be anyone? We are doomed! Doooomed! Dooooooomed!" wailed Light like a baby who licked saying "doooooomed".
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* BottomlessMagazines: Dark has a gun that holds 100,000 bullets. On one hand, it's not breaking any established limits, but on the other hans, it's far too many for a real gun to have.
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* BottomlessMagazines: Dark has a gun that holds 100,000 bullets. On one hand, it's not breaking any established limits, but on the other hans, hand, it's far too many for a real gun to have.
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* AnAesop: ''Dark Yagami's Lesbean Quest'' has a moral in favor of lesbian rights and that it’s okay that they aren’t attracted to men.
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%%* CPRCleanPrettyReliable: And it heals ''bullet wounds''.
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* CatchPhrase: "(Event will happen) or my name isn't (Name)!". L in particular is fond of this phrase, and it even gets written on Death Notes a few times.
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* ContinuitySnarl:
** An impressive feat, considering that this story is only 36 pages long and written by a single person. Nobody (including the author himself) has an idea of what's going on by the end of it - and the story just keeps on getting funnier because of this.
** The ending just makes this infinitely worse.
** An impressive feat, considering that this story is only 36 pages long and written by a single person. Nobody (including the author himself) has an idea of what's going on by the end of it - and the story just keeps on getting funnier because of this.
** The ending just makes this infinitely worse.
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* CPRCleanPrettyReliable: And it heals ''bullet wounds''.
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* ADayInTheLimeLight: Chapter 21, for Soichiro.
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