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* Improbably Cool Car: The watarimobile.
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* PreviouslyOn - Watari has a computer that synopsises the story so far. Except it manages to get the plot completely wrong. That's right - even the author doesn't know what's going on.
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* PreviouslyOn - Watari has a computer that synopsises the story so far. Except it manages to get the plot completely wrong. That's right - even the author doesn't know what's going on. Which, granted, is [[MindScrew entirely understandable]].
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Icecream truck!
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** ''"then i will make a swap" said the creepy dude and he grabed Matt and tied him to a stick and got in his icecream truck and drove slow to the volcano. The icecream truck played the darth vader song as he went.
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** Guy Forks was [[YouFailHistoryForever shot there]].
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** [[strike:[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Guy_Fawkes Guy Fawkes]]]]Guy Forks was [[YouFailHistoryForever shot there]].
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* ContinuitySnarl: An impressive feat considering that this story is only 34 pages long and written by a single person. Nobody has an idea of what's going on any more - and it just keeps on getting funnier.
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* ContinuitySnarl: An impressive feat considering that this story is only 34 36 pages long and written by a single person. Nobody (including the author himself) has an idea of what's going on any more - and it just keeps on getting funnier.
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny - “NOOOOO! I MUST FASTER!
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny - “NOOOOO! I MUST FASTER!FARSTER!
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* EverybodyLaughsEnding: Right before an incestous sevensome.
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* EverybodyLaughsEnding: Right before an incestous sevensome.sevensome ([[WritersCannotDoMath with only six peoeple in it...]]).
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* GenderFlip: Hal Lidner is a male, while in the anime and manga, "he" is a she.
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* GenderFlip: [[strike:Halle Lidner]] Hal Lidner is a male, while in the anime and manga, "he" is a she.
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* HighPressureBlood: What happens when Near throws a knife back at a knife throwing guy, dousing Dark's car with blood.
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* HighPressureBlood: What happens when Near [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment throws a knife back at a knife throwing guy, guy]], dousing Dark's car with blood.
*** [[FridgeLogic Wait... if he could kill 10 times ag many people by punching as by shooting, why did he even bother with guns?]]
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* IncestIsRelative - somewhere down the line, the author seems to have forgotten that Sayu is Dark's sister. And a sixsome with your sister, your brother, his girlfriend, his other girlfriend and your mum? NO NO NO NO NO NO NO.
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* IncestIsRelative - somewhere down the line, the author seems to have forgotten that Sayu is Dark's sister. And a sixsome [[strike:sixsome]] [[WritersCannotDoMath sevensome]] with your sister, your brother, his girlfriend, his other girlfriend and your mum? NO NO NO NO NO NO NO.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Attempted with Dark attacking Near... except [[InformedAbility despite what we're told]], Near never does anything deserving of his kicking.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Attempted with Dark attacking Near... except [[InformedAbility [[InformedAttribute despite what we're told]], Near never does anything deserving of his kicking.
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* MindScrew: Dark can jump out of the basement window and fall 20 feet onto a lit barbecue... and live.
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* MindScrew: Dark can jump out of the basement window and fall 20 feet onto a lit barbecue... and live. Because he has an erection...
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* MoreDakka: Blud's seventeen crossbows stuck together with blood and "duck tape".
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* MoreDakka: Blud's seventeen crossbows stuck together with blood and "duck tape"."[[RougeAnglesOfSatin duck tape]]".
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* OneOfUs - The author is aware of this wiki and makes references to it, but then a lot of these references are [[TakeThat derisive]].
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* OneOfUs - The author is aware of this wiki and makes references to it, but then a lot of these references are [[TakeThat derisive]]. When they are at all coherent, anyway.
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* PaperThinDisguise: Night's attempt at crossdressing: a tattoo that says "I'm a guy". ''While naked''.
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* PaperThinDisguise: Night's attempt at crossdressing: a tattoo that says "I'm "Im ([[YouMakeMeSic sic]]) a guy". ''While naked''.
** Soichiro is posing as Watari in Chapter 1. That's fine. But he's with L at "[[ReverseShazam Watari House]]" [[TemporalParadox at the exact same time he's in]] ''[[EaglelandOsmosis America]]'' with the Yagami family.
** He's also so manly that when he yells into a cellphone, [[CrazyAwesome the satellite explodes, raining flaming debris on Seattle and Moscow, and STILL make the call go through]].
** The Reeset Note from the start of Chapter 35 also qualifies.
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* TemporalParadox - Invoked but improperly used. Blud tells Dark that he's going to write Matt's name in the Death Note so that he dies in a car crash in the past and prevent him from stealing the Death Note from Yotsuba. Blud uses this trope to explain why he is saying this now and not when he uses the Death Note in the near future.
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* TemporalParadox [[TemporalParadox Time]] [[RougeAnglesOfSatin Parradoks]] - Invoked but improperly used. Blud tells Dark that he's going to write Matt's name in the Death Note so that he dies in a car crash in the past and prevent him from stealing the Death Note from Yotsuba. Blud uses this trope to explain why he is saying this now and not when he uses the Death Note in the near future.future.
** The worst part; these actionbs are to prevent a Time Paradox. But later, when Dark loses his King Status, he [[{{Fanfic/MyImmortal}} goes back in tim]] to kill Near in the past. [[SarcasmMode No, that's never create a "Parradoks"]].
** The worst part; these actionbs are to prevent a Time Paradox. But later, when Dark loses his King Status, he [[{{Fanfic/MyImmortal}} goes back in tim]] to kill Near in the past. [[SarcasmMode No, that's never create a "Parradoks"]].
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** [[IAmNotShazam "Yotsuba"]] apparently revived Night Yagami by mistake, trying to revive his pet Might Yagami. It's not dumb that he screwed up the name (though that is bad); it's that he gave his own pet somebody else's last name.
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* WillingSuspensionOfDisbelief: Trampled to death.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4615680/1/Light_and_Dark_The_Adventures_of_Dark_Yagami Light And Dark The Adventures Of Dark Yagami]]'' (apparently written completely unpunctuated) is a ''DeathNote'' fanfic [[SoBadItsGood in the same way]] ''MyImmortal'' is a ''HarryPotter'' fanfic. It's written by D'arkYagam'i, author of ''Pain Note The Ressurekshun Of Ray Pember!'' and ''The God Of Time With No Name Lights Real Name!''.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4615680/1/Light_and_Dark_The_Adventures_of_Dark_Yagami Light And Dark The Adventures Of Dark Yagami]]'' (apparently written completely unpunctuated) is a ''DeathNote'' fanfic [[SoBadItsGood in the same way]] ''MyImmortal'' ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' is a ''HarryPotter'' fanfic. It's written by D'arkYagam'i, author of ''Pain Note The Ressurekshun Of Ray Pember!'' and ''The God Of Time With No Name Lights Real Name!''.
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** At one point, alarms go off [[NeonGenesisEvangelion "...like NERVE everytime an angel comes."]]
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* ShowWithinAShow: DeathNote. [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer I Am Not Making This Up]].
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* ShowWithinAShow: DeathNote. [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer I Am Not Making This Up]].Recursive version: '''''DeathNote'''''.
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* TimePolice
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* TimePoliceTimePolice - Apparently nowhere to be found.
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* VillainDecay - Light starts out acting as Kira, but quickly takes a backseat to Dark.
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* VillainDecay - Light starts out acting as Kira, but quickly takes a backseat to Dark.Dark, who also later inexplicably stops being villainous.
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** [[WilliamShakespeare Shakespeare]], too.
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** [[WilliamShakespeare Shakespeare]], Shakespeer]], too.
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** [[EpicFail Sure it is.]]
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*** Ah, but they're ''[[FridgeBrilliance not]]'' '''Death''' Notes.
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* MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext: Oh boy...
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-->“YOU HAVE LEANED WELL FROM ME!” he whispered like moldy bread. “[[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment LEARNED WELL LIKE A FOX WHO WENT TO SCHOL AND DID WELL AND THEN WENT TO COLLEGE]]”
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-->“YOU HAVE LEANED WELL FROM ME!” he whispered like moldy bread. “[[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment LEARNED “LEARNED WELL LIKE A FOX WHO WENT TO SCHOL AND DID WELL AND THEN WENT TO COLLEGE]]”COLLEGE”
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-->“YOU HAVE LEANED WELL FROM ME!” he whispered like moldy bread. “LEARNED WELL LIKE A FOX WHO WENT TO SCHOL AND DID WELL AND THEN WENT TO COLLEGE”
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-->“YOU HAVE LEANED WELL FROM ME!” he whispered like moldy bread. “LEARNED “[[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment LEARNED WELL LIKE A FOX WHO WENT TO SCHOL AND DID WELL AND THEN WENT TO COLLEGE”COLLEGE]]”
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* NoIndoorVoice: Watari.Watari, Blud, Sorchiro
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* RougeAnglesOfSatinRougeAnglesOfSatin: Most of the story, but several lines stand out.
*** Or when Dark grabbed the [[AmbiguouslyGay cock]].
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* ShowWithinAShow: DeathNote. [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer I Am Not Making This Up.Up]].
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** In Chapter 13, Dark performs a [[DragonBall Kamehameha]]. However, it's misspelled as the"Kamy Hamy Ha".
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** In Chapter 13, Dark performs a [[DragonBall Kamehameha]]. However, it's misspelled as the"Kamy the "Kamy Hamy Ha".
* ThatCameOutWrong: Many lines but this one really sticks out:
--> "It was the early morning and Light and Dark were in bed together [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial but only because there parents were to poor to get separate rooms its not like their gay or anything]]! Light came all over the bed from the window of the room. Dark reached round and grabbed the cock from the table. [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking It was seven oclock]]."
--> "It was the early morning and Light and Dark were in bed together [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial but only because there parents were to poor to get separate rooms its not like their gay or anything]]! Light came all over the bed from the window of the room. Dark reached round and grabbed the cock from the table. [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking It was seven oclock]]."
-->"THIS DUDE CKIRA IS ACTUALY A KIRA! HE HAS A DEATH NOTE AND SOMEONE TOLD ME A CAR EXPLODED AND HE WAS THERE DANCING WITH A DEATH NOTE"
-->"[[CharacterDerailment It could be a coinsidense]]." L said back munching on pixy sticks. "[[IdiotBall these things happen all the time]]."
-->"[[CharacterDerailment It could be a coinsidense]]." L said back munching on pixy sticks. "[[IdiotBall these things happen all the time]]."
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* WhatAnIdiot: L, see below.
-->"THIS DUDE CKIRA IS ACTUALY A KIRA! HE HAS A DEATH NOTE AND SOMEONE TOLD ME A CAR EXPLODED AND HE WAS THERE DANCING WITH A DEATH NOTE"
-->"[[CharacterDerailment It could be a coinsidense]]." L said back munching on pixy sticks. "[[IdiotBall these things happen all the time]]."
-->"THIS DUDE CKIRA IS ACTUALY A KIRA! HE HAS A DEATH NOTE AND SOMEONE TOLD ME A CAR EXPLODED AND HE WAS THERE DANCING WITH A DEATH NOTE"
-->"[[CharacterDerailment It could be a coinsidense]]." L said back munching on pixy sticks. "[[IdiotBall these things happen all the time]]."
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* ComplainingAboutShowsYouDontWatch: CodeGeass.
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* ComplainingAboutShowsYouDontWatch: CodeGeass.''CodeGeass''.
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-->''“Do ghosts exits?”''
-->''“THEY DO NOT MY GOOD YOUNG FREND BECOS THAT SORT OF THING IS IMPOSABLE?”''
-->''“But ur a shinigami aren’t you imposable too?”''
-->''“NO COS THIS IS THE DEATH NOT WORLD WHERE SHINIGAMI ARE POSABLE”''
-->''“THEY DO NOT MY GOOD YOUNG FREND BECOS THAT SORT OF THING IS IMPOSABLE?”''
-->''“But ur a shinigami aren’t you imposable too?”''
-->''“NO COS THIS IS THE DEATH NOT WORLD WHERE SHINIGAMI ARE POSABLE”''
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-->''“Do ghosts exits?”''
exits?”''
-->''“THEY DO NOT MY GOOD YOUNG FREND BECOS THAT SORT OF THING ISIMPOSABLE?”''
IMPOSABLE?”''
-->''“But ur a shinigami aren’t you imposabletoo?”''
too?”''
-->''“NO COS THIS IS THE DEATH NOT WORLD WHERE SHINIGAMI AREPOSABLE”''POSABLE”''
-->''“THEY DO NOT MY GOOD YOUNG FREND BECOS THAT SORT OF THING IS
-->''“But ur a shinigami aren’t you imposable
-->''“NO COS THIS IS THE DEATH NOT WORLD WHERE SHINIGAMI ARE
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When Dark goes back in time by 4 days to kill Near again, he takes him to his "[[RougeAnglesOfSatin wherehouse]]/[[UnfortunateImplications Whorehouse]]" and reveals that he had it built when [[YouFailHistoryForever Watari was Queen]] (which hasn't happened yet) 6 MILLION YEARS AGO. [[SomewhereAPaleontoligstIsCrying Before we can evern confirm humans even existed, let alone could build stuff]].
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* YouFailHistoryForever: When Dark goes back in time by 4 days to kill Near again, he takes him to his "[[RougeAnglesOfSatin wherehouse]]/[[UnfortunateImplications Whorehouse]]" and reveals that he had it built when [[YouFailHistoryForever Watari was Queen]] (which hasn't happened yet) 6 MILLION YEARS AGO. [[SomewhereAPaleontoligstIsCrying [[SomewhereAPaleontologistIsCrying Before we can evern confirm humans even existed, let alone could build stuff]].
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* AnachronismStew: See YouFailHistoryForever
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** And of course, there is Dark's "Few! I thought I was a boner there!"
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* GenderFlip: Hal Lidner is a male, while in the anime and manga, "he" is a she.
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* MindScrew: Dark can jump out of the basement window and fall 20 feet onto a lit barbecue... and live.
** Really, most if not all of the story qualifies for this trope.
** Really, most if not all of the story qualifies for this trope.
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*** This is irrelevant, but might I mention that he was in the basement when he jumped out the window?
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*** This is irrelevant, but might I mention that he was in the basement when he jumped out the window?
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* ContinuitySnarl: An impressive feat considering that this story is only 34 pages long and written by a single person. Nobody has an idea of what's going on any more - and it just keeps on getting funnier.
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* KickThemWhileTheyAreDown: The author does this to constant ButtMonkey Near. After being killed countless times and suffering the hatred of every character in the story, Near also doesn't get any presents for Christmas! ;_;
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* KickThemWhileTheyAreDown: The author does this to constant ButtMonkey Near. After being killed countless times and suffering the hatred of every character in the story, Near also Dark steals Near's Legos so the poor boy doesn't get any presents for Christmas! ;_;
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* KickThemWhileTheyAreDown: The author does this to constant ButtMonkey Near. After being killed countless times and suffering the hatred of every character in the story, Near also doesn't get any presents for Christmas! ;_;
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** And French Fries.
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** And French Fries.french fries.
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* ChewBubblegum: ''Imhere to sex up L and bake cup cakes and im all out of cupcakes [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment which is why I need to bake them]]!''
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* ChewBubblegum: ''Imhere to sex up L and bake cup cakes and im all out of cupcakes [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment [[CompletelyMissingThePoint which is why I need to bake them]]!''
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*** Shakespeare is the king of England. And since this is before the Declaration of Independence, that means he's king of the whole world.
