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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7324877/1/ Homestuck high]] (note capitalisation) is an infamous fanfic, probably a TrollFic, in the {{Homestuck}} fandom ([[InNameOnly allegedly]]). It begins as a fairly bizarre but innocuous HighSchoolAU, in which John and Gamzee compete to take Rose to the Spring Fling. Then it gets [[{{Understatement}} weird]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7324877/1/ Homestuck high]] (note capitalisation) is an infamous fanfic, probably a TrollFic, in the {{Homestuck}} fandom ([[InNameOnly allegedly]]). It begins as a fairly bizarre but innocuous HighSchoolAU, in which John and Gamzee compete to take Rose to the Spring Fling. Then it gets [[{{Understatement}} weird]].
weird]]. Of course, this fanfic has gained infamy with even the biggest fans of the original webcomic.
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* AlphaBitch: Rose.
--> "Hi rose" [John] said blankly
-->"What do you want loser" [Rose] replied coldly
-->"I wanted to know if you wanted to go to the dance with me?" John said
-->"Ok" Rose said "But if someone hotter than you asks me then im gonna go with them"
-->"Thats ok" John said
--> "Hi rose" [John] said blankly
-->"What do you want loser" [Rose] replied coldly
-->"I wanted to know if you wanted to go to the dance with me?" John said
-->"Ok" Rose said "But if someone hotter than you asks me then im gonna go with them"
-->"Thats ok" John said
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* '''''CharacterDerailment''''': [[TheHero John]] is submissive and wimpy, [[DeadpanSnarker Rose]] is a SpoiledBrat, [[TheStoic Dave]] is an overemotional crybaby, [[PluckyGirl Jade]] is devoid of a personality entirely and [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Karkat's]] characterization is all over the place. And that's just ''Homestuck's'' main characters! Yeah, it just gets worse from there!
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* OfficialCouple: John/Rose and Dave/Jade. Both couples have [[StrangledByTheRedString the red string tied so tightly around their necks, that it's a miracle that they're still breathing.]]
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* PerkyGoth: Gamzee for...some reason.
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* DreamWalker: Aradia being this is probably the only thing the fanfiction gets right. Too bad she only appears once.
* ExtremeOmnivore: Vriska eats napkins and continues to do so after she finds out that Jade ''[[{{Squick}} peed on them]]''.
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* InsaneTrollLogicInformedFlaw: Sollux is supposed to be the [[CompleteMonster single most evil being on the planet]], yet his "evil deeds" are only ever talked about.
* InsaneTrollLogic: For the simplest example, we have John falling for Rose after she bit his arm, broke his glasses and made him cry. True love right there!
* InsaneTrollLogic: For the simplest example, we have John falling for Rose after she bit his arm, broke his glasses and made him cry. True love right there!
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* ReallyGetsAround: Dave and Vriska, apparently.
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* CostumePorn: In the first couple of chapters, as part of the usual bad HighSchoolAU schtick; Rose wears a leather bikini.
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* DullSurprise: The characters respond to most of the crazy happenings with nothing more than "oh okay".
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* OneWingedAngel: Eridan is now John's demonic battle form, into which he transforms by putting on a pair of plastic horns. Eridan claims that while he inhabits the body John's soul is trapped in Hell; nobody seems overly concerned, when John returns to normal he is unhurt, and this is never mentioned again.
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* {{Narm}}: Lots, particularly the constant use of the word "baba" in place of "baby" when describing demon children and aborted foetuses, and the use of apparently random polysyllabic words.
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* InsaneTrollLogic
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-->They turned their sweaty heads to see Jade struggling in the grasp of a man who looked more evil than ANY other man they had seen.
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* RonTheDeathEater: Sollux is a demon and is attempting to forcibly impregnate Rose and Jade.
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* ArtifactTitleArtifactTitle / InNameOnly / NonindicativeName: Both words of the title. It has nothing to do with Homestuck except for characters' names, and only the first chapter has anything to do with high school.
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* InNameOnly / NonindicativeName: Both words of the title. It has nothing to do with Homestuck except for characters' names, and only the first chapter has anything to do with high school.
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin
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* WhatDoesHeSeeInHer: John has liked Rose ever since she [[SlapSlapKiss bit him and broke his glasses in second grade]], and when he tells her he loves her she declares herself to be in lust with him.
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* InNameOnly: Both words of the title. It has nothing to do with Homestuck except for characters' names, and only the first chapter has anything to do with high school.
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* InNameOnly: InNameOnly / NonindicativeName: Both words of the title. It has nothing to do with Homestuck except for characters' names, and only the first chapter has anything to do with high school.
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* BattleOfTheBands: Eridan defeats demon!Sollux in a musician's duel.
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* RockMeAsmodeus: Eridan defeats the demon Sollux in a musician's duel.
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* RockMeAsmodeus: Eridan defeats the demon Sollux in a musician's The duel.
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* PurpleProse:
-->"I lust johnatan NOT YOU!" she eviscerated softly wilst she cries the velvit tears odf the mennopauses that climacate from the ruens of the reched pedimeants of life.
-->"I lust johnatan NOT YOU!" she eviscerated softly wilst she cries the velvit tears odf the mennopauses that climacate from the ruens of the reched pedimeants of life.
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* UnexplainedRecovery: Gamzee says that Karkat has killed himself; he turns out to actually be alive, albeit injured. The presumed suicide attempt never comes up again.
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* MundaneMadeAwesome: John develops magical powers because of a blast of dark magic which comes out of a ''McDonald's burger.''
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* MundaneMadeAwesome: John develops magical powers because of a blast of dark magic which comes out of a ''McDonald's ''[=McDonald's=] burger.''
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* MundaneMadeAwesome: John develops magical powers because of a blast of dark magic which comes out of a ''McDonald's burger.''
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* FatBastard: Demon!Sollux "probably had fifteen girths", whatever that means.
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* MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext: i.e. none.
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* RockMeAsmodeus: Eridan defeats the demon Sollux in a musician's duel.
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{{Hammerspace}}: Eridan is able to put his guitar in his pocket.
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HighSchoolAU: It starts out as one, anyway.
*RandomEventsPlotInNameOnly: Both words of the title. It has nothing to do with Homestuck except for characters' names, and only the first chapter has anything to do with high school.
* ObviouslyEvil: Sollux.
* RandomEventsPlot: Not a single thing in the entire fic makes any sense at all.
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* ObviouslyEvil: Sollux.
* RandomEventsPlot: Not a single thing in the entire fic makes any sense at all.
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* YouKeepUsingThatWordXMeetsY: {{Homestuck}} meets FanFic/ThirtyHs.
* YouKeepUsingThatWord: By the final chapter, just about ''every'' word, to the extent that [[UpToEleven "eviscerated" is used in place of "said"]].
* YouKeepUsingThatWord: By the final chapter, just about ''every'' word, to the extent that [[UpToEleven "eviscerated" is used in place of "said"]].
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[[ Homestuck high]] (note capitalisation) is an infamous fanfic, probably a TrollFic, in the {{Homestuck}} fandom ([[InNameOnly allegedly]]). It begins as a fairly bizarre but innocuous HighSchoolAU, in which John and Gamzee compete to take Rose to the Spring Fling. Then it gets [[{{Understatement}} weird]].
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[[ Homestuck high]] (note capitalisation) is an infamous fanfic, probably a TrollFic, in the {{Homestuck}} fandom ([[InNameOnly allegedly]]). It begins as a fairly bizarre but innocuous HighSchoolAU, in which John and Gamzee compete to take Rose to the Spring Fling. Then it gets [[{{Understatement}} weird]].
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* HighSchoolAU
* InNameOnly
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!!Provides examples of:
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* InNameOnly
* RandomEventsPlot
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