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* AwesomeArt: Some of the art is just ''beautiful'', such as [[http://hivefled.tumblr.com/post/54495168104/occasionally-i-paint-for-my-moirail-other-times this piece.]] For meta points, it's art of an artist making art.
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* {{Room101}}: [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast The Trap.]]
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* {{Transsexual}}: Gamzee is confirmed by WordOfGod as genderfluid, which isn't really a known thing in troll society. Since he also has an unfortunate unrelated biological quirk which made him react more strongly to penetration than most male trolls, he's convinced it makes him a disgusting mutant. [[spoiler:Sennir, born "Sennah", tells him off for thinking so.]] It also means he can't devote himself to his preferred spirit; only female trolls are allowed to follow her, and standard practice for those in his situation is to commit suicide and beg the gods to reincarnate them in more appropriate forms. Meanwhile, FTM Dave has his own problems.
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* {{Transsexual}}: {{Transgender}}: Gamzee is confirmed by WordOfGod as genderfluid, which isn't really a known thing in troll society. Since he also has an unfortunate unrelated biological quirk which made him react more strongly to penetration than most male trolls, he's convinced it makes him a disgusting mutant. [[spoiler:Sennir, born "Sennah", tells him off for thinking so.]] It also means he can't devote himself to his preferred spirit; only female trolls are allowed to follow her, and standard practice for those in his situation is to commit suicide and beg the gods to reincarnate them in more appropriate forms. Meanwhile, FTM Dave has his own problems.
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[[http://hivefled.tumblr.com/ Hivefled]] is an in-progress {{Webcomic/Homestuck}} fanfic by Fovos and Chel, originally spawned from a KinkMeme entry. ''Hivefled'' contains some NotSafeForWork content, but all adult content is marked and the main storyline is not pornographic. Be warned that the Tumblr account overall is still excessively violent, though. It is strongly recommended that you check out the [[http://hivefled.tumblr.com/warnings warnings page]] first. The fic can also be found at [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/582582/chapters/1046167 AO3]].
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* {{Shotacon}}: Gamzee is actually a legal adult, but Condesce likes to pretend he isn't, and [[http://hivefled.tumblr.com/post/44853854822/hi-names-pyeran-kousta-least-i-think-that-was not all the Kin were]], though author {{Squick}} means no graphic details will be given about the younger ones, and a q&a demonstrates that there was at least severe creepiness going on between GH and Condesce when he was five sweeps old (the equivalent of about twelve).
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* XMeetsY: ''Homestuck'' meets ''Literature/The120DaysOfSodom''. Then the victims escape and hang out with ''Series/TheBradyBunch'', and the contrast is [[{{NeoclassicalPunkZydecoRockabilly}} probably not going to end well.]]
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** The [[SomethingPositive Alternian Floorportal Logmonster]].
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** Gartel'z voize iz zimilar to [[{{Redwall}} the Monitorz]], knife collector Tsukey Morney's Trollian handle is burrowingFarrago (also a reference to ''Webcomic/{{Jack|DavidHopkins}}''), and Jade makes reference to ''Taggerung'' while offering to teach Tavros to sing to cure his stammer.
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** Gartel'z voize iz zimilar to [[{{Redwall}} [[{{Literature/Redwall}} the Monitorz]], knife collector Tsukey Morney's Trollian handle is burrowingFarrago (also a reference to ''Webcomic/{{Jack|DavidHopkins}}''), and Jade makes reference to ''Taggerung'' while offering to teach Tavros to sing to cure his stammer.
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** The story where [[spoiler: The Condesce cuts the Psiioniic's superfluous organs out and makes him eat them]] is called "What Perfection, What Precision", lines from "Legal Assassin", from RepoTheGeneticOpera.
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** The story where [[spoiler: The Condesce cuts the Psiioniic's superfluous organs out and makes him eat them]] is called "What Perfection, What Precision", lines from "Legal Assassin", from RepoTheGeneticOpera.Film/RepoTheGeneticOpera.
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* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil / RapeLeadsToInsanity: Sort of. Being a highblooded troll, Gamzee would naturally have been a bit off-kilter to begin with if he hadn't been perpetually stoned. The combination of horrible tortures and developing immunity to sopor slime made him snap, though not quite as severely as in canon (in which he was instrumental in the destruction of his entire planet and is being influenced by an EldritchAbomination, so the type of mental duress is different). [[spoiler:Karkat still manages to stop him rampaging.]]
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* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil / RapeLeadsToInsanity: BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil: Sort of. Being a highblooded troll, Gamzee would naturally have been a bit off-kilter to begin with if he hadn't been perpetually stoned. The combination of horrible tortures and developing immunity to sopor slime made him snap, though not quite as severely as in canon (in which he was instrumental in the destruction of his entire planet and is being influenced by an EldritchAbomination, so the type of mental duress is different). [[spoiler:Karkat still manages to stop him rampaging.]]
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* BizarreAlienBiology / BizarreSexualDimorphism: Trolls appear at first glance to be {{Hermaphrodite}}s, but WordOfGod is that chromosomally they're actually all male except for the Mother Grub. "Female" trolls were the primary carriers of genetic material in the days before buckets, and have bigger internal pouches for carrying fluids and [[NonMammalMammaries venom sacs]] for self-defence during their pilgrimages. Female bulges are used to aim at the bucket or to direct genetic fluid into their own nook for storage. Male nooks are more or less vestigial and it's considered taboo to stick stuff in them; most male trolls aren't keen to do so anyway because they tend to be over- or under-sensitive.
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* BizarreAlienBiology / BizarreSexualDimorphism: BizarreAlienSexes: Trolls appear at first glance to be {{Hermaphrodite}}s, but WordOfGod is that chromosomally they're actually all male except for the Mother Grub. "Female" trolls were the primary carriers of genetic material in the days before buckets, and have bigger internal pouches for carrying fluids and [[NonMammalMammaries venom sacs]] for self-defence during their pilgrimages. Female bulges are used to aim at the bucket or to direct genetic fluid into their own nook for storage. Male nooks are more or less vestigial and it's considered taboo to stick stuff in them; most male trolls aren't keen to do so anyway because they tend to be over- or under-sensitive.
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** ''Reprise'' was named as such after EmilieAutumn's song "Gaslight (Reprise)". Tsukey is shown wearing [[spoiler:and later garrotted with one of her]] striped stockings in a reference to ''The Asylum for Wayward Victorian Girls'', and she [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IpJkCti8IL0 speaks in third person]].
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** ''Reprise'' was named as such after EmilieAutumn's Music/EmilieAutumn's song "Gaslight (Reprise)". Tsukey is shown wearing [[spoiler:and later garrotted with one of her]] striped stockings in a reference to ''The Asylum for Wayward Victorian Girls'', and she [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IpJkCti8IL0 speaks in third person]].
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* XMeetsY: ''Homestuck'' meets ''Literature/The120DaysOfSodom''. Then the victims escape and hang out with ''TheBradyBunch'', and the contrast is [[{{NeoclassicalPunkZydecoRockabilly}} probably not going to end well.]]
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* XMeetsY: ''Homestuck'' meets ''Literature/The120DaysOfSodom''. Then the victims escape and hang out with ''TheBradyBunch'', ''Series/TheBradyBunch'', and the contrast is [[{{NeoclassicalPunkZydecoRockabilly}} probably not going to end well.]]
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** The story where [[spoiler: Dawn becomes Dave]] is called "Spend Ages Taking Hairpins From My Hair", a line from TheWho's song "I'm A Boy".
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** The story where Mindfang gets the Grand Highblood to persuade Dualscar into giving her the Dolorosa is called "Slip Her A Smile", a line from 'Girl With One Eye', by FlorenceAndTheMachine.
** The story where Darkleer meets the Disciple is called "My Black Eye Casts No Shadow", a line from 'Kiss With A Fist' by FlorenceAndTheMachine.
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** The story where Mindfang gets the Grand Highblood to persuade Dualscar into giving her the Dolorosa is called "Slip Her A Smile", a line from 'Girl With One Eye', by FlorenceAndTheMachine.
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** The story where [[spoiler: the Grand Highblood kills the Handmaid after the Condesce manipulates him]] is called 'Road To Ruin Paved With Pins', a direct lyric from {{Angelspit}}'s song "Paint Hell Red". Doubles as FridgeBrilliance, because with all the deaths the Handmaid caused in the new Alternia, she was certainly painting hell (with blood), and after [[spoiler: she dies]], the Grand Highblood [[spoiler: paints with her blood, which is red(ish).]] In addition, the first line of the chorus is 'beat at the head 'til you run red, girl'. [[spoiler: And the Grand Highblood does exactly that... well, after breaking her neck, but still.]]
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** The story where [[spoiler: the Grand Highblood kills the Handmaid after the Condesce manipulates him]] is called 'Road To Ruin Paved With Pins', a direct lyric from {{Angelspit}}'s Music/{{Angelspit}}'s song "Paint Hell Red". Doubles as FridgeBrilliance, because with all the deaths the Handmaid caused in the new Alternia, she was certainly painting hell (with blood), and after [[spoiler: she dies]], the Grand Highblood [[spoiler: paints with her blood, which is red(ish).]] In addition, the first line of the chorus is 'beat at the head 'til you run red, girl'. [[spoiler: And the Grand Highblood does exactly that... well, after breaking her neck, but still.]]
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** "[[SCPFoundation Do bees know they are bees?]]"
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** When the humans are shown a picture of the Grand Highblood, the hair and codpiece cue a {{Labyrinth}} shoutout.
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[[http://hivefled.tumblr.com/ Hivefled]] is an in-progress {{Homestuck}} fanfic by Fovos and Chel, originally spawned from a KinkMeme entry. ''Hivefled'' contains some NotSafeForWork content, but all adult content is marked and the main storyline is not pornographic. Be warned that the Tumblr account overall is still excessively violent, though. It is strongly recommended that you check out the [[http://hivefled.tumblr.com/warnings warnings page]] first. The fic can also be found at [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/582582/chapters/1046167 AO3]].
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[[http://hivefled.tumblr.com/ Hivefled]] is an in-progress {{Homestuck}} {{Webcomic/Homestuck}} fanfic by Fovos and Chel, originally spawned from a KinkMeme entry. ''Hivefled'' contains some NotSafeForWork content, but all adult content is marked and the main storyline is not pornographic. Be warned that the Tumblr account overall is still excessively violent, though. It is strongly recommended that you check out the [[http://hivefled.tumblr.com/warnings warnings page]] first. The fic can also be found at [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/582582/chapters/1046167 AO3]].
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*** Inadvertent version on this side of the fourth wall; the chapter in which [[spoiler:Eridan lost an eye]] was published just before the authors saw the {{Homestuck}} update in which [[spoiler:Terezi regained hers]]. Also, in canon, Kurloz (the Grand Highblood's alternate-timeline self) sewed his own mouth shut; in Hivefled, GH [[GlasgowGrin tears Gamzee's open]].
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*** Inadvertent version on this side of the fourth wall; the chapter in which [[spoiler:Eridan lost an eye]] was published just before the authors saw the {{Homestuck}} {{Webcomic/Homestuck}} update in which [[spoiler:Terezi regained hers]]. Also, in canon, Kurloz (the Grand Highblood's alternate-timeline self) sewed his own mouth shut; in Hivefled, GH [[GlasgowGrin tears Gamzee's open]].
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** The story where Nepeta, Sollux and Vriska rescue Equius is called 'Please Don't Bet That You'll Ever Escape Me', a line from Gladys Knight's song [[Film/LicenseToKill "License To Kill"]].
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** The story where Nepeta, Sollux and Vriska rescue Equius is called 'Please Don't Bet That You'll Ever Escape Me', a line from Gladys Knight's song [[Film/LicenseToKill [[Film/LicenceToKill "License To Kill"]].
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** The story where Nepeta, Sollux and Vriska rescue Equius is called "Please Don't Bet That You'll Ever Escape Me", a line from Gladys Knight's song [[Film/LicenseToKill "License To Kill"]].
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** The story where Nepeta, Sollux and Vriska rescue Equius is called "Please 'Please Don't Bet That You'll Ever Escape Me", Me', a line from Gladys Knight's song [[Film/LicenseToKill "License To Kill"]].
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* AffectionateNickname: Condesce refers to Gamzee as "Gammy", and it's later revealed that GH always called the Handmaid "Pooka" (as in a vicious shapeshifting spirit). Meanwhile, Mom Lalonde becomes the "luscestor" and Bec the "not-lusus".
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* AffectionateNickname: Condesce refers to Gamzee as "Gammy", 'Gammy', and it's later revealed that GH always called the Handmaid "Pooka" (as in a vicious shapeshifting spirit). Meanwhile, Mom Lalonde becomes the "luscestor" and Bec the "not-lusus".
* MundaneUtility: Readers of the blog can ask the characters any question they'd like (though answers aren't guaranteed). This has been used to, among other things, ask for hair-care tips, dating advice and questions about getting past creative block.
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* MindRape: Before Gamzee was outright imprisoned, the Grand Highblood spent a month or so pretending to keep him as an apprentice and treating him "normally", while drugging him and randomly hurting him just enough to keep him confused. Gamzee has a natural resistance to his [[MindProbe chucklevoodoos]], but that didn't help much.
* MixedMetaphor: Nepeta's "don’t be such sticks in the mud after the rain on the parade."
* MixedMetaphor: Nepeta's "don’t be such sticks in the mud after the rain on the parade."
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* MindRape: Before Gamzee was outright imprisoned, the Grand Highblood spent a month or so pretending to keep him as an apprentice and treating him "normally", 'normally', while drugging him and randomly hurting him just enough to keep him confused. Gamzee has a natural resistance to his [[MindProbe chucklevoodoos]], but that didn't help much.
* MixedMetaphor: Nepeta's "don’t be such sticks in the mud after the rain on the parade."
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-->"Equ, if you're gettin' off on this, you're fuckin' dead."\\
"Trust me, Ampora, none of my personal fantasies will ever involve you in any capacity."\\
"... Yeah wwell you suck."
-->"Equ, if you're gettin' off on this, you're fuckin' dead."\\
"Trust me, Ampora, none of my personal fantasies will ever involve you in any capacity."\\
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-->"Equ,LameComeback: "Equ, if you're gettin' off on this, you're fuckin' dead."\\
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* RightBehindMe: Gamzee tries to message his friends. Nobody replies, then:
-->Ťeʁė?l?ƷȻa?sʛaȤs [??] began trolling terminallyCapricious [TC]
-->??: [[SmugSnake Did you know, you’re horrible at faking sleep.]]
-->Ťeʁė?l?ƷȻa?sʛaȤs [??] began trolling terminallyCapricious [TC]
-->??: [[SmugSnake Did you know, you’re horrible at faking sleep.]]
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* RightBehindMe: Gamzee tries to message his friends. Nobody replies, then:
-->Ťeʁė?l?ƷȻa?sʛaȤs [??] began trolling terminallyCapricious [TC]
-->??:[[SmugSnake Did "Did you know, you’re horrible at faking sleep.]]"]]
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* ToThePain:
-->"You want to know what it was like? How about I tear your MOTHERFUCKING HORN out of your MOTHERFUCKING SKULL and SHOVE IT up your MOTHERFUCKING SEEDFLAP so you can FIND OUT?"
-->"You want to know what it was like? How about I tear your MOTHERFUCKING HORN out of your MOTHERFUCKING SKULL and SHOVE IT up your MOTHERFUCKING SEEDFLAP so you can FIND OUT?"
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* WhamEpisode: [[{{SoulPower}}Chapter {{RageBreakingPoint}}49]] [[SoulPower Chapter]] [[RageBreakingPoint 49]], as the unfortunate result of [[{{OutOfContextEavesdropping}} Out Of Conext Eavesdropping]]Eavesdropping]].
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** The story where Mindfang gets the Grand Highblood to persuade Dualscar into giving her Mindfang is called "Slip Her A Smile", a line from 'Girl With One Eye', by FlorenceAndTheMachine.
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* XMeetsY: ''Homestuck'' meets ''Literature/The120DaysOfSodom''. Then the victims escape and hang out with ''TheBradyBunch'', and the contrast is [[{{NeoclassicalPunkZydecoRockabilly}} probably not going to end well.]]