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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5123221/1/Hanley Hanley]]'' is a One Piece fanfiction by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1960746/NibelungVelocity NibelungVelocity]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5123221/1/Hanley Hanley]]'' is a One Piece ''Manga/OnePiece'' fanfiction by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1960746/NibelungVelocity NibelungVelocity]]
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* TheNicknamer: Hanley gives out a few.
** Luffy: Hanuman
** Zoro: Mr. Zoro
** Nami: Tsunami
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** Zoro: Mr. Zoro
** Nami: Tsunami
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The story begin roughly ten years before the start of the series proper following Hanley's preparations for her journey in a dangerous world and subsequent journey. The story is an AlternateUniverseFic both by the author's deign and due to developments in the series since the story was started.
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The story begin roughly ten years before the start of the series proper following Hanley's preparations for her journey in a dangerous world and subsequent journey. The story is an AlternateUniverseFic both by the author's deign design and due to developments in the series since the story was started.
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* FourthDateMarriage: More like zero date marriage. Luffy proposes to Hanley the day he is leaving Fuschia and all the adults practically shove Hanley onto the boat with him.
* LongLostRelative: [[spoiler:It is all but directly stated that Hanley is Krut Thai’s biological granddaughter.]]
* LongLostRelative: [[spoiler:It is all but directly stated that Hanley is Krut Thai’s biological granddaughter.]]
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The story begin roughly ten years before the start of the series proper following Hanley's preparations for her journey in a dangerous world and subsequent journey. The story is an AlternateUniverseFic both by the author's deign and due to developments in the series since the story was started. Development of the main character is a major focus of the story proving in regard to [[OriginalCharacter OCs]] and insertions that [[SturgeonsLaw the remaining 10% is worth dying for]].
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The story begin roughly ten years before the start of the series proper following Hanley's preparations for her journey in a dangerous world and subsequent journey. The story is an AlternateUniverseFic both by the author's deign and due to developments in the series since the story was started. Development of the main character is a major focus of the story proving in regard to [[OriginalCharacter OCs]] and insertions that [[SturgeonsLaw the remaining 10% is worth dying for]].
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* BigWhat: The crew were very taken aback when they learned that [[spoiler:Hanley is the captain's wife]]. Justified that she and Luffy never got around into telling them.
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* BigWhat: The Strawhat crew were very taken aback when they learned that [[spoiler:Hanley is the captain's wife]]. Justified that she and Luffy never got around into telling them.
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* SnakePeople: Kadru Handerson and her granddaughter [[spoiler:Hanley]].
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* SnakePeople: There are snake people who are pretty much like the merfolks. They were almost driven to extinction by humans and thus making them extremely valuable among human slavers. The only known snake people are Kadru Handerson and her granddaughter [[spoiler:Hanley]].
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* DoubleEntendre: Hanley's wanted poster: [[GroinAttack Man-Eater]]. She is needlessly embarrassed when learning the double entendre.
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* DoubleEntendre: Hanley's wanted poster: [[GroinAttack Man-Eater]]. She is needlessly embarrassed when learning the double entendre. embarrassed.
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* ObliviousToLove: Luffy's misinterpretation of marriage, as he believed it is a special kind of friendship between husband and wife, [[spoiler:and proposed to Hanley to be his "wife". He later "propose" again to Nami after she left for Arlong Park in an attempt to convince her back to his crew]].
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* ObliviousToLove: Luffy's misinterpretation of marriage, as he believed it is a special kind of friendship between husband and wife, [[spoiler:and wife; [[spoiler:in which he proposed to Hanley to be his "wife". He later "propose" again to Nami after she left for Arlong Park in an attempt to convince her back to his crew]].
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* ShutUpHannibal: Arlong tells to Hanley that his deal with Nami was justifiable. Hanley respond by punching him in the jaw during mid-sentence and calling him an outright bastard. However, it is subverted as Hanley personally admitted that punching Arlong was the stupidest thing she ever did when she is completely alone, still weak from her fight with Krieg, physically outmatched by Arlong and surrounded by his crew.
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* ShutUpHannibal: Arlong tells to Hanley that about his deal with Nami was to be justifiable. Hanley respond by punching him in the jaw during mid-sentence and calling him an outright bastard. However, it is subverted as Hanley personally admitted that punching Arlong was the stupidest thing she ever did when she is completely alone, still weak from her fight with Krieg, physically outmatched by Arlong and surrounded by his crew.
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* TrainingFromHell: Hanley's tutelage with Krut Thai, which included being shot by HiredGuns.
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* TrainingFromHell: Hanley's tutelage with under Krut Thai, which included being shot by HiredGuns.
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* YourSoulIsMine: Apparently Type One, SnakePeople has this as their natural ability. It is also Kadru Handerson's hobby in collecting people's souls into magatama; among her collection is [[spoiler:Fisher Tiger's]].
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* YourSoulIsMine: Apparently Type One, One. SnakePeople has this as their natural ability. It is also Kadru Handerson's hobby in collecting people's souls into magatama; among her collection is [[spoiler:Fisher Tiger's]].
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->"I've had it. I've tried being nice, and I've tried being logical, but shit just keeps happening and I. Have. Had it. We're charging the base! Mr. Zoro, get your ass in gear!"
-->--'''Hanley'''
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5123221/1/Hanley Hanley]] is a One Piece fanfiction by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1960746/NibelungVelocity NibelungVelocity]]
-->--'''Hanley'''
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*** Also his [[TheDragon Dragon]] Cassius Clay is a living ShoutOut to UsefulNotes/MuhammadAli.
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*** Also his [[TheDragon Dragon]] Cassius Clay is a living ShoutOut to {{Expy}} of UsefulNotes/MuhammadAli.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Krut Thai give one to Hanley.
-->'''Krut:''' Have you ever, seriously, wanted to kill someone, little girl?
-->'''Hanley:''' I...no.
-->'''Krut:''' Have you ever been willing to die for what you believe in?
-->'''Krut:''' Have you ever, seriously, wanted to kill someone, little girl?
-->'''Hanley:''' I...no.
-->'''Krut:''' Have you ever been willing to die for what you believe in?
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* ShutUpHannibal: Arlong tells to Hanley that his deal with Nami was justifiable. Hanley respond by punching him in the jaw during mid-sentence and calling him an outright bastard. However, it is subverted as Hanley personally admitted that punching Arlong was the stupidest thing she ever did when she is completely alone, still weak from her fight with Krieg, physically outmatched by Arlong and surrounded by his crew.
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*** Also his [[TheDragon Dragon]] Cassius Clay is a living ShoutOut to [[MuhammadAli Muhammad Ali]].
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*** Also his [[TheDragon Dragon]] Cassius Clay is a living ShoutOut to [[MuhammadAli Muhammad Ali]].UsefulNotes/MuhammadAli.
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->"I've had it. I've tried being nice, and I've tried being logical, but shit just keeps happening and I. Have. Had it. We're charging the base! Mr. Zoro, get your ass in gear!"-->--'''Hanley'''
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->"I've had it. I've tried being nice, and I've tried being logical, but shit just keeps happening and I. Have. Had it. We're charging the base! Mr. Zoro, get your ass in gear!"-->--'''Hanley'''
gear!"
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* ObliviousToLove: Luffy's misinterpretation of marriage, as he believed it is a special kind of friendship between husband and wife, [[spoiler:and proposed to Hanley to be his "wife"]].
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* ObliviousToLove: Luffy's misinterpretation of marriage, as he believed it is a special kind of friendship between husband and wife, [[spoiler:and proposed to Hanley to be his "wife"]]."wife". He later "propose" again to Nami after she left for Arlong Park in an attempt to convince her back to his crew]].
* ShamelessFanserviceGirl: There is a reason that Kadru Handerson was known as "Handerson the Raging Nudist".
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* YourSoulIsMine: Apparently Type One, SnakePeople has this as their natural ability. It is also Kadru Handerson's hobby in collecting people's souls into magatama; among her collection is [[spoiler:Fisher Tiger's]].
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* BigWhat: The crew were very taken aback when they learned that [[spoiler:Hanley is the captain's wife. Justified that she and Luffy never got around into telling them]].
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* BigWhat: The crew were very taken aback when they learned that [[spoiler:Hanley is the captain's wife. wife]]. Justified that she and Luffy never got around into telling them]].them.
* EmbarrassingNickname: Krut Thai was nicknamed as "Krutty" by Garp.
* ObliviousToLove: Luffy's misinterpretation of marriage, as he believed it is a special kind of friendship between husband and wife, [[spoiler:and proposed to Hanley to be his "wife"]].
* ObliviousToLove: Luffy's misinterpretation of marriage, as he believed it is a special kind of friendship between husband and wife, [[spoiler:and proposed to Hanley to be his "wife"]].
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* ShoutOut: Clay Clay user [[spoiler: Natsuhiko]]'s alternate name Karlo Basil is the name (having the first and last name switch around) of the original [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Franchise/Batman?from=Main.Batman Batman]] villain Clayface.
** Also his [[TheDragon Dragon]] Cassius Clay is a living ShoutOut to [[MuhammadAli Muhammad Ali]].
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**Clay Clay user [[spoiler: Natsuhiko]]'s alternate name Karlo Basil is the name (having the first and last name switch around) of the original [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Franchise/Batman?from=Main.Batman Batman]] villain Clayface.
** *** Also his [[TheDragon Dragon]] Cassius Clay is a living ShoutOut to [[MuhammadAli Muhammad Ali]].
**Clay Clay user [[spoiler: Natsuhiko]]'s alternate name Karlo Basil is the name (having the first and last name switch around) of the original [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Franchise/Batman?from=Main.Batman Batman]] villain Clayface.
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The story begin roughly ten years before the start of the series proper following Hanley's preparations for her journey in a dangerous world and subsequent journey. The story is an AlternateUniverseFic both by the author's deign and due to developments in the series since the story was started. Development of the main character is a major focus of the story proving in regard to OCs [[OriginalCharacter OCs]] and insertions that [[SturgeonsLaw the remaining 10% is worth dying for]].
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* TeamMom : Refreshingly, Hanley has an actual role in the crew, and this would appear to be it. She's constantly worrying for the well being of the other crewmembers and puts a considerable amount of time and effort into ensuring that all crewmembers are emotionally and physically healthy ([[DysfunctionJunction futile an effort as that may be]]). [[spoiler: It's especially appropriate considering that she's the captain's wife]].
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* TeamMom BigWhat: The crew were very taken aback when they learned that [[spoiler:Hanley is the captain's wife. Justified that she and Luffy never got around into telling them]].
* DoubleEntendre: Hanley's wanted poster: [[GroinAttack Man-Eater]]. She is needlessly embarrassed when learning the double entendre.
* PunctuatedForEmphasis : [[spoiler:Luffy]]: "Best. Wife. Ever!"
* ShoutOut: Clay Clay user [[spoiler: Natsuhiko]]'s alternate name Karlo Basil is the name (having the first and last name switch around) of the original [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Franchise/Batman?from=Main.Batman Batman]] villain Clayface.
**Also his [[TheDragon Dragon]] Cassius Clay is a living ShoutOut to [[MuhammadAli Muhammad Ali]].
* SnakePeople: Kadru Handerson and her granddaughter [[spoiler:Hanley]].
* TeamMom: Refreshingly, Hanley has an actual role in the crew, and this would appear to be it. She's constantly worrying for the well being of the other crewmembers and puts a considerable amount of time and effort into ensuring that all crewmembers are emotionally and physically healthy ([[DysfunctionJunction futile an effort as that may be]]). [[spoiler: It's especially appropriate considering that she's the captain's wife]].
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* DoubleEntendre: Hanley's wanted poster: [[GroinAttack Man-Eater]]. She is needlessly embarrassed when learning the double entendre.
* PunctuatedForEmphasis : [[spoiler:Luffy]]: "Best. Wife. Ever!"
* ShoutOut: Clay Clay user [[spoiler: Natsuhiko]]'s alternate name Karlo Basil is the name (having the first and last name switch around) of the original [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Franchise/Batman?from=Main.Batman Batman]] villain Clayface.
**Also his [[TheDragon Dragon]] Cassius Clay is a living ShoutOut to [[MuhammadAli Muhammad Ali]].
* SnakePeople: Kadru Handerson and her granddaughter [[spoiler:Hanley]].
* TeamMom: Refreshingly, Hanley has an actual role in the crew, and this would appear to be it. She's constantly worrying for the well being of the other crewmembers and puts a considerable amount of time and effort into ensuring that all crewmembers are emotionally and physically healthy ([[DysfunctionJunction futile an effort as that may be]]). [[spoiler: It's especially appropriate considering that she's the captain's wife]].
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* TeamMom : Refreshingly, Hanley has an actual role in the crew, and this would appear to be it. She's constantly worrying for the well being of the other crewmembers and puts a considerable amount of time and effort into ensuring that all crewmembers are emotionally and physically healthy ([[DysfunctionJunction futile an effort as that may be]]). [[spoiler: It's especially appropriate considering that she's the captain's wife]].
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->"I've had it. I've tried being nice, and I've tried being logical, but shit just keeps happening and I. Have. Had it. We're charging the base! Mr. Zoro, get your ass in gear!"-->--'''Hanley'''
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5123221/1/Hanley Hanley]] is a One Piece fanfiction by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1960746/NibelungVelocity NibelungVelocity]]
This story in essence is an insertion, but not a self insertion, of an OC into the One Piece world. Surprisingly near every cliche associated with these ideas is either averted or lampshaded.
Her unwilling journey down the rabbit hole, via a mysterious storm at sea sets her on the path of Dorothy, to find her way home. But with no form of yellow brick road to follow and the attentions of a certain straw hat wearing boy, getting home is easier said than done.
The story begin roughly ten years before the start of the series proper following Hanley's preparations for her journey in a dangerous world and subsequent journey. The story is an AlternateUniverseFic both by the author's deign and due to developments in the series since the story was started. Development of the main character is a major focus of the story proving in regard to OCs and insertions that [[SturgeonsLaw the remaining 10% is worth dying for]].
The story is infrequently updated to say the least, but fans tend to forgive that in light of the arc spanning chapters which are considered to be high quality by reviewers.
!!!"Tropes appearing in this work include:"
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5123221/1/Hanley Hanley]] is a One Piece fanfiction by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1960746/NibelungVelocity NibelungVelocity]]
This story in essence is an insertion, but not a self insertion, of an OC into the One Piece world. Surprisingly near every cliche associated with these ideas is either averted or lampshaded.
Her unwilling journey down the rabbit hole, via a mysterious storm at sea sets her on the path of Dorothy, to find her way home. But with no form of yellow brick road to follow and the attentions of a certain straw hat wearing boy, getting home is easier said than done.
The story begin roughly ten years before the start of the series proper following Hanley's preparations for her journey in a dangerous world and subsequent journey. The story is an AlternateUniverseFic both by the author's deign and due to developments in the series since the story was started. Development of the main character is a major focus of the story proving in regard to OCs and insertions that [[SturgeonsLaw the remaining 10% is worth dying for]].
The story is infrequently updated to say the least, but fans tend to forgive that in light of the arc spanning chapters which are considered to be high quality by reviewers.
!!!"Tropes appearing in this work include:"
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