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* CryCute: [[SugarAndIcePersonality Rei]], in Chapter 13.
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'''Important Notice!''' The author has taken down the original link and has chosen to look over and revise the story. It was recently moved from the 'Evangelion' section to the crossovers one. The defunct former link has been taken down and replaced by the new one. The author intends to gradually upload each chapter one by one until reaching the current point in the story, before continuing further - as of January 2014, Chapters 1-22 have been re-uploaded. Tropes listed below are still relevant however, though RougeAnglesOfSatin will be dealt with according to WordOfGod. The author has also stated that he retained all original text before taking it down so, whilst the fic seems to be mostly rewritten, it retains the spirit of the original.
Do be warned: the story updates ''extremely'' infrequently, with breaks between chapters of over a year in length commonplace. Since it, in fact, hasn't updated since October of 2014, it may in fact be a DeadFic.
Do be warned: the story updates ''extremely'' infrequently, with breaks between chapters of over a year in length commonplace. Since it, in fact, hasn't updated since October of 2014, it may in fact be a DeadFic.
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Do be warned: the story updates ''extremely'' infrequently, with breaks between chapters of over a year in length commonplace. Since it, in fact,
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* BackFromTheDead Back: [[spoiler:Yui Ikari, first as a hitchhiker in Shinji’s body, and then getting her own body back later]].
** Courtesy of Leliel's space-time manipulation abilities, the remake has added [[spoiler:[[MagnificentBastard Ce]][[HumanoidAbomination ll]] and [[TheJuggernaut Bro]][[TheBerserker ly]]]].
* BigDamnHeroes: Goku and Vegeta showing up just in time to prevent [[spoiler: Brolly]] from killing Asuka.
* BreakingSpeech: Vegeta gives a little one to Misato in Ch. 14 (“At least ''I'' have managed to reset my destiny and choose a course I am now true to, regaining what was once lost… ''You'' dwell on that past, however; you allow it to ''own'' your destiny, not moving on, dishonoring the sacrifices made for you… A weakness”). It [[HeroicBSOD works]].
* CatharsisFactor: When Vegeta [[spoiler: beats the ever-loving crap out of Gendo as punishment for kidnapping Trunks.]]
** Courtesy of Leliel's space-time manipulation abilities, the remake has added [[spoiler:[[MagnificentBastard Ce]][[HumanoidAbomination ll]] and [[TheJuggernaut Bro]][[TheBerserker ly]]]].
* BigDamnHeroes: Goku and Vegeta showing up just in time to prevent [[spoiler: Brolly]] from killing Asuka.
* BreakingSpeech: Vegeta gives a little one to Misato in Ch. 14 (“At least ''I'' have managed to reset my destiny and choose a course I am now true to, regaining what was once lost… ''You'' dwell on that past, however; you allow it to ''own'' your destiny, not moving on, dishonoring the sacrifices made for you… A weakness”). It [[HeroicBSOD works]].
* CatharsisFactor: When Vegeta [[spoiler: beats the ever-loving crap out of Gendo as punishment for kidnapping Trunks.]]
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* BackFromTheDead Back: BackFromTheDead:
** [[spoiler:Yui Ikari, first as a hitchhiker inShinji’s Shinji's body, and then getting her own body back later]].
** Courtesy of Leliel's space-time manipulation abilities, the remake has added[[spoiler:[[MagnificentBastard Ce]][[HumanoidAbomination ll]] [[spoiler:Cell and [[TheJuggernaut Bro]][[TheBerserker ly]]]].
Broly]].
* BigDamnHeroes: Goku and Vegeta showing up just in time to prevent [[spoiler:Brolly]] Broly]] from killing Asuka.
* BreakingSpeech: Vegeta gives a little one to Misato in Ch.14 (“At 14:
-->"At least ''I'' have managed to reset my destiny and choose a course I am now true to, regaining what was once lost… ''You'' dwell on that past, however; you allow it to ''own'' your destiny, not moving on, dishonoring the sacrifices made for you… Aweakness”). It [[HeroicBSOD works]].
* CatharsisFactor: When Vegeta [[spoiler: beats the ever-loving crap out of Gendo as punishment for kidnapping Trunks.]]weakness".
** [[spoiler:Yui Ikari, first as a hitchhiker in
** Courtesy of Leliel's space-time manipulation abilities, the remake has added
* BigDamnHeroes: Goku and Vegeta showing up just in time to prevent [[spoiler:
* BreakingSpeech: Vegeta gives a little one to Misato in Ch.
-->"At least ''I'' have managed to reset my destiny and choose a course I am now true to, regaining what was once lost… ''You'' dwell on that past, however; you allow it to ''own'' your destiny, not moving on, dishonoring the sacrifices made for you… A
* CatharsisFactor: When Vegeta [[spoiler: beats the ever-loving crap out of Gendo as punishment for kidnapping Trunks.]]
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* ConvenientlyAnOrphan: Combined with DeceasedParentsAreTheBest, Gohan's cover story as 'Moriyama Gohannesburg' has no parents, the idea being that they died during Second Impact. This is easier for him to remember, and prevents loose ends.
* CloudCuckooLander: [[spoiler: Yui has shades of this when she returns. Or maybe it's just because she seems overly nice and friendly compared to the original atmosphere of Evangelion.]]
* CryCute: [[SugarAndIcePersonality Rei]], in Chapter 13. Don't worry, though; they're tears of happiness.
* CurbStompBattle: Vegeta curb-stomps Shamshel; Goku tries to let NERV handle Ramiel by themselves, but when Shinji & Rei get into what he sees as too much danger, he promptly skewers the Angel with a Kamehameha; Super Saiyan 3 Gotenks vs. Gaghiel… ‘nuff said; Trunks uses his sword (from Tapion from the 13th movie) to take Matarael down with little effort; [[spoiler:Bardiel manages to incorporate Saiyan genes into itself after Goten briefly touches the infected Unit-03, and promptly curb-stomps the Evas, Goku & Vegeta, and even Gotenks, especially once it uses a Dummy Plug body to form its own, Goten-sized body independent of Eva-03, and gets a massive power boost in the process… and then Goku & Vegeta [[FusionDance fuse]], and Bardiel is utterly, mercilessly curb-stomped by Gogeta.]]
* CutenessProximity: A group of middle-school girls' reaction to [[{{Moe}} Goten]].
* DeadpanSnarker: Vegeta (of course), Shinji, [[spoiler:Yui]]
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Piccolo is referred to as a 'green Namekian' in the first chapter.
** Well, there ''were'' once [[WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged Albino Namekians...]]
* CloudCuckooLander: [[spoiler: Yui has shades of this when she returns. Or maybe it's just because she seems overly nice and friendly compared to the original atmosphere of Evangelion.]]
* CryCute: [[SugarAndIcePersonality Rei]], in Chapter 13. Don't worry, though; they're tears of happiness.
* CurbStompBattle: Vegeta curb-stomps Shamshel; Goku tries to let NERV handle Ramiel by themselves, but when Shinji & Rei get into what he sees as too much danger, he promptly skewers the Angel with a Kamehameha; Super Saiyan 3 Gotenks vs. Gaghiel… ‘nuff said; Trunks uses his sword (from Tapion from the 13th movie) to take Matarael down with little effort; [[spoiler:Bardiel manages to incorporate Saiyan genes into itself after Goten briefly touches the infected Unit-03, and promptly curb-stomps the Evas, Goku & Vegeta, and even Gotenks, especially once it uses a Dummy Plug body to form its own, Goten-sized body independent of Eva-03, and gets a massive power boost in the process… and then Goku & Vegeta [[FusionDance fuse]], and Bardiel is utterly, mercilessly curb-stomped by Gogeta.]]
* CutenessProximity: A group of middle-school girls' reaction to [[{{Moe}} Goten]].
* DeadpanSnarker: Vegeta (of course), Shinji, [[spoiler:Yui]]
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Piccolo is referred to as a 'green Namekian' in the first chapter.
** Well, there ''were'' once [[WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged Albino Namekians...]]
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* ConspicuousTrenchcoat: Shinji laughs at Section 2's pitiful attempts to blend in with the scenery whenever they’re shadowing him.
* ConvenientlyAnOrphan:Combined with DeceasedParentsAreTheBest, Gohan's cover story as 'Moriyama Gohannesburg' has no parents, the idea being that they died during Second Impact. This is easier for him to remember, and prevents loose ends.
* CloudCuckooLander: [[spoiler: Yui has shades of this when she returns. Or maybe it's just because she seems overly nice and friendly compared to the original atmosphere of Evangelion.]]
* CryCute: [[SugarAndIcePersonality Rei]], in Chapter 13. Don't worry, though; they're tears of happiness.
13.
* CurbStompBattle: Vegeta curb-stomps Shamshel; Goku tries to let NERV handle Ramiel by themselves, but when Shinji & Rei get into what he sees as too much danger, he promptly skewers the Angel with a Kamehameha; Super Saiyan 3 Gotenks vs.Gaghiel… ‘nuff said; Gaghiel; Trunks uses his sword (from Tapion from the 13th movie) to take Matarael down with little effort; [[spoiler:Bardiel manages to incorporate Saiyan genes into itself after Goten briefly touches the infected Unit-03, and promptly curb-stomps the Evas, Goku & Vegeta, and even Gotenks, especially once it uses a Dummy Plug body to form its own, Goten-sized body independent of Eva-03, and gets a massive power boost in the process… and then Goku & Vegeta [[FusionDance fuse]], and Bardiel is utterly, mercilessly curb-stomped by Gogeta.]]
* CutenessProximity: A group of middle-school girls' reaction to[[{{Moe}} Goten]].
Goten.
* DeadpanSnarker:Vegeta (of course), Vegeta, Shinji, [[spoiler:Yui]]
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Piccolo is referred to as a 'green Namekian' in the first chapter. \n** Well, there ''were'' once [[WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged Albino Namekians...]]
* ConvenientlyAnOrphan:
* CurbStompBattle: Vegeta curb-stomps Shamshel; Goku tries to let NERV handle Ramiel by themselves, but when Shinji & Rei get into what he sees as too much danger, he promptly skewers the Angel with a Kamehameha; Super Saiyan 3 Gotenks vs.
* CutenessProximity: A group of middle-school girls' reaction to
* DeadpanSnarker:
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Piccolo is referred to as a 'green Namekian' in the first chapter.
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* EyeScream: Goten attempts this against [[spoiler: Brolly]] by shooting an energy blast into his eye. It doesn't work but does make him flinch, allowing Goten to escape from his grip.
* FlatWhat: This fic's Shinji's reaction to the synchronization training idea in preparation for the rematch with Israfel.
* GeniusDitz: While still goofy and fun-loving, and by no means book-smart, this fic shows Goku as being very wise and insightful, dispensing sage advice to the NGE crew (especially Shinji, who Goku sorta takes under his wing and becomes the dad-figure the kid desperately needs), consistently assessing situations calmly & thoroughly and coming up with effective solutions, and even managing to toss a few wrenches in Gendō’s and SEELE’s plots.
* GroinAttack: Asuka [[spoiler: attempts this against Brolly. Unfortunately he has BallsOfSteel.]]
* HeroicBSOD: Shinji suffers quite the big one when, courtesy of Bulma’s hacking tech, Goku & Vegeta show him ''everything'' regarding NERV & SEELE, their agendas and purposes, and such. He then decides to [[LetsGetDangerous get dangerous]] and side with Goku & Vegeta against Gendō & SEELE. Misato has one when Vegeta’s BreakingSpeech hits home.
* HighlyVisibleNinja / ConspicuousTrenchcoat: Shinji laughs at Section 2’s pitiful attempts to blend in with the scenery whenever they’re shadowing him.
* KickTheDog: [[spoiler: Literally for Cell, when he's sure no one is looking he kicks a puppy so hard it clears the stratosphere.]]
* LethalChef: Misato [[BeyondTheImpossible does what is thought to be impossible]]: Give [[BigEater Goku]] indigestion.
* LighterAndSofter: Than NGE- it helps that the Saiyans are on a greater level of power than most Angels. [[spoiler:Downplayed later on, but the outcome's still looking better than canon - ''loads'' better.]]
* MamaBear: Upon [[spoiler:gaining access to all of Shinji’s memories, the first thing Yui-in-Shinji’s-body does is head to the Commander’s Office and one-punch-KO Gendō hard enough to break Shinji’s hand. It's also strongly implied Yui would've killed Misato had she actually thrown a punch at her whilst occupying Shinji's body.]]. On a lesser note early on in the story, Bulma manages to scare Vegeta into submission when he objects to fusing with Goku to follow the boys.
* FlatWhat: This fic's Shinji's reaction to the synchronization training idea in preparation for the rematch with Israfel.
* GeniusDitz: While still goofy and fun-loving, and by no means book-smart, this fic shows Goku as being very wise and insightful, dispensing sage advice to the NGE crew (especially Shinji, who Goku sorta takes under his wing and becomes the dad-figure the kid desperately needs), consistently assessing situations calmly & thoroughly and coming up with effective solutions, and even managing to toss a few wrenches in Gendō’s and SEELE’s plots.
* GroinAttack: Asuka [[spoiler: attempts this against Brolly. Unfortunately he has BallsOfSteel.]]
* HeroicBSOD: Shinji suffers quite the big one when, courtesy of Bulma’s hacking tech, Goku & Vegeta show him ''everything'' regarding NERV & SEELE, their agendas and purposes, and such. He then decides to [[LetsGetDangerous get dangerous]] and side with Goku & Vegeta against Gendō & SEELE. Misato has one when Vegeta’s BreakingSpeech hits home.
* HighlyVisibleNinja / ConspicuousTrenchcoat: Shinji laughs at Section 2’s pitiful attempts to blend in with the scenery whenever they’re shadowing him.
* KickTheDog: [[spoiler: Literally for Cell, when he's sure no one is looking he kicks a puppy so hard it clears the stratosphere.]]
* LethalChef: Misato [[BeyondTheImpossible does what is thought to be impossible]]: Give [[BigEater Goku]] indigestion.
* LighterAndSofter: Than NGE- it helps that the Saiyans are on a greater level of power than most Angels. [[spoiler:Downplayed later on, but the outcome's still looking better than canon - ''loads'' better.]]
* MamaBear: Upon [[spoiler:gaining access to all of Shinji’s memories, the first thing Yui-in-Shinji’s-body does is head to the Commander’s Office and one-punch-KO Gendō hard enough to break Shinji’s hand. It's also strongly implied Yui would've killed Misato had she actually thrown a punch at her whilst occupying Shinji's body.]]. On a lesser note early on in the story, Bulma manages to scare Vegeta into submission when he objects to fusing with Goku to follow the boys.
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* EyeScream: Goten attempts this against [[spoiler: Brolly]] Broly]] by shooting an energy blast into his eye. It doesn't work but does make him flinch, allowing Goten to escape from his grip.
* FlatWhat:This fic's Shinji's reaction to the synchronization training idea in preparation for the rematch with Israfel.
* GeniusDitz: While still goofy and fun-loving, and by no means book-smart, this fic shows Goku as being very wise and insightful, dispensing sage advice to the NGE crew (especially Shinji, who Goku sorta takes under hiswing and becomes the dad-figure the kid desperately needs), wing), consistently assessing situations calmly & thoroughly and coming up with effective solutions, and even managing to toss a few wrenches in Gendō’s Gendō and SEELE’s SEELE's plots.
* GroinAttack: Asuka[[spoiler: attempts [[spoiler:attempts this against Brolly.Broly. Unfortunately he has BallsOfSteel.]]
*HeroicBSOD: HeroicBSOD:
** Shinji suffers quite the big one when, courtesy ofBulma’s Bulma's hacking tech, Goku & Vegeta show him ''everything'' regarding NERV & SEELE, their agendas and purposes, and such. He then decides to [[LetsGetDangerous get dangerous]] and side with Goku & Vegeta against Gendō & SEELE. SEELE.
** Misato has one whenVegeta’s Vegeta's BreakingSpeech hits home.
*HighlyVisibleNinja / ConspicuousTrenchcoat: Shinji laughs at Section 2’s pitiful attempts to blend in with the scenery whenever they’re shadowing him.
*KickTheDog: [[spoiler: Literally for Cell, when When he's sure no one is looking he looking, Cell kicks a puppy so hard it clears the stratosphere.]]
stratosphere.
* LethalChef: Misato[[BeyondTheImpossible does what is thought manages to be impossible]]: Give [[BigEater Goku]] give ''Goku'' indigestion.
* LighterAndSofter: ThanNGE- it canon. It helps that the Saiyans are on a greater level of power than most Angels. [[spoiler:Downplayed later on, but the outcome's still looking better than canon - ''loads'' better.]]
Angels.
* MamaBear: Upon [[spoiler:gaining access to all ofShinji’s Shinji's memories, the first thing Yui-in-Shinji’s-body Yui-in-Shinji's-body does is head to the Commander’s Commander's Office and one-punch-KO Gendō hard enough to break Shinji’s hand. It's also strongly implied Yui would've killed Misato had she actually thrown a punch at her whilst occupying Shinji's body.]]. On a lesser note early on in the story, Bulma manages to scare Vegeta into submission when he objects to fusing with Goku to follow the boys.hand.]]
* FlatWhat:
* GeniusDitz: While still goofy and fun-loving, and by no means book-smart, this fic shows Goku as being very wise and insightful, dispensing sage advice to the NGE crew (especially Shinji, who Goku sorta takes under his
* GroinAttack: Asuka
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** Shinji suffers quite the big one when, courtesy of
** Misato has one when
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* LethalChef: Misato
* LighterAndSofter: Than
* MamaBear: Upon [[spoiler:gaining access to all of
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** One in the remake, when after the Leilei battle...[[spoiler:BROLY emerges.]]
* PapaWolf: Vegeta does ''not'' take [[spoiler:NERV capturing Trunks well, as Gendō painfully learns]]. Goku’s also starting to show shades of surrogate-Papa Wolf towards Shinji. Shinji also becomes this whenever Rei's involved.
* RelationshipUpgrade: [[spoiler:Shinji & Rei consummate their relationship... with Shinji forgetting that Yui’s still inside his head and thus getting a front-row seat for the action]].
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: The fic's biggest and most notable flaw is the widespread presence of spelling and grammar issues.
** Possibly subverted, since the author took the fic down and began rewriting it, many of these issues seem to have been addressed.
* PapaWolf: Vegeta does ''not'' take [[spoiler:NERV capturing Trunks well, as Gendō painfully learns]]. Goku’s also starting to show shades of surrogate-Papa Wolf towards Shinji. Shinji also becomes this whenever Rei's involved.
* RelationshipUpgrade: [[spoiler:Shinji & Rei consummate their relationship... with Shinji forgetting that Yui’s still inside his head and thus getting a front-row seat for the action]].
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: The fic's biggest and most notable flaw is the widespread presence of spelling and grammar issues.
** Possibly subverted, since the author took the fic down and began rewriting it, many of these issues seem to have been addressed.
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* RelationshipUpgrade: [[spoiler:Shinji & Rei consummate their relationship... with Shinji forgetting that
* RougeAnglesOfSatin:
** Possibly subverted, since the author took the fic down and began rewriting it, many of these issues seem to have been addressed.
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* SugarAndIcePersonality: Rei, full stop. Still mostly cool-tempered with most people, but her sugary-sweet side - reserved for Shinji and Goten - is absolutely adorable.
* TeamDad: Goku, especially to Shinji. [[spoiler:Yui explicitly states that she trusts Goku with Shinji's life far more than she ever could trust Gendo]].
* TeamDad: Goku, especially to Shinji. [[spoiler:Yui explicitly states that she trusts Goku with Shinji's life far more than she ever could trust Gendo]].
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* SugarAndIcePersonality: Rei, full stop. Rei. Still mostly cool-tempered with most people, but her sugary-sweet side - reserved for Shinji and Goten - is absolutely adorable.
* TeamDad: Goku, especially to Shinji. [[spoiler:Yui explicitly states that she trusts Goku with Shinji's life far more than she ever could trust Gendo]].adorable.
* TeamDad: Goku, especially to Shinji. [[spoiler:Yui explicitly states that she trusts Goku with Shinji's life far more than she ever could trust Gendo]].
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* ThisIsWrongOnSoManyLevels: [[spoiler:After Yui has trouble in walking with Shinji’s body]]:
--> '''[[spoiler:Yui]]''': Gimme a ''break'', here; [[spoiler:he's got such ''short'' legs and he ''certainly'' didn't get these hips from ''me'' I tell you" (pats him/herself on the hips, rubbing them up and down slightly) "...Hmm must've gotten these from his ''father'' (squeezes them once or twice) ''ohh'' yeah that's Gendō alright...]]"
--> '''Misato''': "'''Oooohkay'''.. That was turning just ''wrong'' on SO many levels..."
--> '''[[spoiler:Yui]]''': Gimme a ''break'', here; [[spoiler:he's got such ''short'' legs and he ''certainly'' didn't get these hips from ''me'' I tell you" (pats him/herself on the hips, rubbing them up and down slightly) "...Hmm must've gotten these from his ''father'' (squeezes them once or twice) ''ohh'' yeah that's Gendō alright...]]"
--> '''Misato''': "'''Oooohkay'''.. That was turning just ''wrong'' on SO many levels..."
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* ThisIsWrongOnSoManyLevels: [[spoiler:After Yui has trouble in walking with Shinji’s Shinji's body]]:
--> '''[[spoiler:Yui]]''': -->'''[[spoiler:Yui]]''': Gimme a ''break'', here; [[spoiler:he's got such ''short'' legs and he ''certainly'' didn't get these hips from ''me'' I tell you" (pats him/herself on the hips, rubbing them up and down slightly) "...Hmm must've gotten these from his ''father'' (squeezes them once or twice) ''ohh'' yeah that's Gendō alright...]]"
-->]]"\\
'''Misato''': "'''Oooohkay'''.. That was turning just ''wrong'' on SO many levels..."
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'''Misato''': "'''Oooohkay'''.. That was turning just ''wrong'' on SO many levels..."
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* XanatosSpeedChess: A lovely three-way match of SEELE vs. Gendō vs. the Saiyans & Shinji.
* [[spoiler: VillainousRescue: Broly is prevented from self-destructing and destroying the heroes by Cell, who severs one of his arms using one of Frieza's Kienzan discs.]]
* [[spoiler: VillainousRescue: Broly is prevented from self-destructing and destroying the heroes by Cell, who severs one of his arms using one of Frieza's Kienzan discs.]]
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* XanatosSpeedChess: A lovely three-way match of SEELE vs. Gendō vs. the Saiyans & Shinji.
*[[spoiler: VillainousRescue: Broly [[spoiler:Broly is prevented from self-destructing and destroying the heroes by Cell, Cell]], who severs one of his arms using one of Frieza's Kienzan discs.]](slicing energy disc).
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* CurbStompBattle: Vegeta curb-stomps Shamshel; Goku tries to let NERV handle Ramiel by themselves, but when Shinji & Rei get into what he sees as too much danger, he promptly skewers the Angel with a Kamehameha; Super Saiyan 3 Gotenks vs. Gaghiel… ‘nuff said; Trunks uses his sword (from Tapion from the 13th movie) to take Matarael down with little effort; [[spoiler:Bardiel manages to incorporate Saiyan genes into itself after Goten briefly touches the infected Unit-03, and promptly curb-stomps the Evas, Goku & Vegeta, and even Gotenks, especially once it uses a Dummy Plug body to form its own, Goten-sized body independent of Eva-03, and gets a massive power boost in the process… and then Goku & Vegeta [[FusionDance fuse]], and Bardiel is utterly, mercilessly curb-stomped by Gogeta.
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* CurbStompBattle: Vegeta curb-stomps Shamshel; Goku tries to let NERV handle Ramiel by themselves, but when Shinji & Rei get into what he sees as too much danger, he promptly skewers the Angel with a Kamehameha; Super Saiyan 3 Gotenks vs. Gaghiel… ‘nuff said; Trunks uses his sword (from Tapion from the 13th movie) to take Matarael down with little effort; [[spoiler:Bardiel manages to incorporate Saiyan genes into itself after Goten briefly touches the infected Unit-03, and promptly curb-stomps the Evas, Goku & Vegeta, and even Gotenks, especially once it uses a Dummy Plug body to form its own, Goten-sized body independent of Eva-03, and gets a massive power boost in the process… and then Goku & Vegeta [[FusionDance fuse]], and Bardiel is utterly, mercilessly curb-stomped by Gogeta.]]
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Big Damn Villains is a disambiguation page, this former trope is covered by Villainous Rescue or Bad Guys Do The Dirty Work
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* [[spoiler: BigDamnVillains: Not that anyone realized it but Cell cut off one of Broly's arms, allowing Goku and company to overwhelm him.]]
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Since the story is obviously dead, I'm removing anything from the now-deleted original version that takes place after the point where the redo died. Also, fixing a few spelling gaffs.
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* [[spoiler: BigDamnVillains: Not that anyone realised it but Cell cut off one of Broly's arms, allowing Goku and company to overwhelm him.]]
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* [[spoiler: BigDamnVillains: Not that anyone realised realized it but Cell cut off one of Broly's arms, allowing Goku and company to overwhelm him.]]
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* ConvenientlyAnOrphan: Combind with DeceasedParentsAreTheBest, Gohan's cover story as 'Moriyama Gohannesburg' has no parents, the idea being that they died during Second Impact. This is easier for him to remember, and prevents loose ends.
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* ConvenientlyAnOrphan: Combind Combined with DeceasedParentsAreTheBest, Gohan's cover story as 'Moriyama Gohannesburg' has no parents, the idea being that they died during Second Impact. This is easier for him to remember, and prevents loose ends.
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* CurbStompBattle: Vegeta curb-stomps Shamshel; Goku tries to let NERV handle Ramiel by themselves, but when Shinji & Rei get into what he sees as too much danger, he promptly skewers the Angel with a Kamehameha; Super Saiyan 3 Gotenks vs. Gaghiel… ‘nuff said; Trunks uses his sword (from Tapion from the 13th movie) to take Matarael down with little effort; [[spoiler:Bardiel manages to incorporate Saiyan genes into itself after Goten briefly touches the infected Unit-03, and promptly curb-stomps the Evas, Goku & Vegeta, and even Gotenks, especially once it uses a Dummy Plug body to form its own, Goten-sized body independent of Eva-03, and gets a massive power boost in the process… and then Goku & Vegeta [[FusionDance fuse]], and Bardiel is utterly, mercilessly curb-stomped by Gogeta; berserk Unit-01 vs. Zeruel, even more of a curb-stomp than in canon, since the berserk state was triggered not by Shinji’s desperation, but by his UnstoppableRage at Zeruel nearly killing Rei]].
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* CurbStompBattle: Vegeta curb-stomps Shamshel; Goku tries to let NERV handle Ramiel by themselves, but when Shinji & Rei get into what he sees as too much danger, he promptly skewers the Angel with a Kamehameha; Super Saiyan 3 Gotenks vs. Gaghiel… ‘nuff said; Trunks uses his sword (from Tapion from the 13th movie) to take Matarael down with little effort; [[spoiler:Bardiel manages to incorporate Saiyan genes into itself after Goten briefly touches the infected Unit-03, and promptly curb-stomps the Evas, Goku & Vegeta, and even Gotenks, especially once it uses a Dummy Plug body to form its own, Goten-sized body independent of Eva-03, and gets a massive power boost in the process… and then Goku & Vegeta [[FusionDance fuse]], and Bardiel is utterly, mercilessly curb-stomped by Gogeta; berserk Unit-01 vs. Zeruel, even more of a curb-stomp than in canon, since the berserk state was triggered not by Shinji’s desperation, but by his UnstoppableRage at Zeruel nearly killing Rei]].Gogeta.
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* DotingParent: [[spoiler:Yui explicitly describes herself as one after fussing over Shinji once she gets her body back.]]
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* HeadbuttThermometer: [[spoiler:Yui does this to Shinji while fussing over his health once they both get out of Eva-01.]]
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Gendo, after Yui's return.]]
* HenpeckedHusband: [[spoiler:Gendō, once Yui gets her body back.]]
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Gendo, after Yui's return.]]
* HenpeckedHusband: [[spoiler:Gendō, once Yui gets her body back.]]
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* [[spoiler:[[ImportantHaircut Important Beard Trim]]: Gendō, at Yui’s insistence after she gets her body back]]
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* MindHug: [[spoiler:How Kyōko Sōryū’s soul nullifies Arael’s [[MindRape psychic attack]] on Asuka; Trunks helped]].
* OfficialCouple: Shinji/Rei; [[spoiler:Yui/Gendo.]]
* OfficialCouple: Shinji/Rei; [[spoiler:Yui/Gendo.]]
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* XanatosSpeedChess: A lovely three-way match of SEELE vs. Gendō vs. the Saiyans & Shinji. [[spoiler:Later turns into NERV, Gendō, Yui, Shinji, & the Saiyans vs. SEELE]].
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* XanatosSpeedChess: A lovely three-way match of SEELE vs. Gendō vs. the Saiyans & Shinji. [[spoiler:Later turns into NERV, Gendō, Yui, Shinji, & the Saiyans vs. SEELE]].
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* [[BackFromTheDead Back From The]] NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler:Yui Ikari, first as a hitchhiker in Shinji’s body, and then getting her own body back later]].
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Do be warned: the story updates ''extremely'' infrequently, with breaks between chapters of over a year in length commonplace.
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Do be warned: the story updates ''extremely'' infrequently, with breaks between chapters of over a year in length commonplace.
commonplace. Since it, in fact, hasn't updated since October of 2014, it may in fact be a DeadFic.
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