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* LikeFatherUnlikeSon: Lucius Malfoy is a pureblood supremacist whose lust for Hermione grows until he begins experiencing love for despite being at least 2 decades her senior. Draco Malfoy refuses to believe his father would ever do such a thing and refuses to see Hermione as anything but beneath him despite that them being the same age would make an attraction more likely. [[spoiler:In addition, Hermione's son is a half-blood who was raised to be as far away from the Malfoy bloodline as possible]].

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* LikeFatherUnlikeSon: Lucius Malfoy is a pureblood supremacist whose lust for Hermione grows until he begins experiencing love for despite being at least 2 decades her senior. Draco Malfoy refuses to believe his father would ever do such a thing and refuses to see Hermione as anything but beneath him despite that them being the same age would make an attraction more likely. [[spoiler:In addition, Hermione's son is a half-blood who was raised to be as far away from the Malfoy bloodline as possible]].possible. Assuming Hermione's divination was accurate, he would grow up to be a nicer and well adjusted young man.]]
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* HeroicBastard: [[spoiler: Hermione has vowed to make sure that, as much as she loved Lucius, she will ensure the son he sired with her will never become an elitist or bigot like the rest of the Malfoy clan he refuses to believe he's descended from. It helps that he wants to believe Ron is his father despite how little he resembles Hermione and how he has no resemblance to Ron at all]].


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* LikeFatherUnlikeSon: Lucius Malfoy is a pureblood supremacist whose lust for Hermione grows until he begins experiencing love for despite being at least 2 decades her senior. Draco Malfoy refuses to believe his father would ever do such a thing and refuses to see Hermione as anything but beneath him despite that them being the same age would make an attraction more likely. [[spoiler:In addition, Hermione's son is a half-blood who was raised to be as far away from the Malfoy bloodline as possible]].


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* SelectiveObliviousness: [[spoiler:Even though it's obvious he has no resemblance the Ron, who he calls his father, Hermione's son refuses to believe his father is Lucius Malfoy, the man who raped his mother. Even assuming he'd never even seen his father's picture, the fact that he has blonde hair should be something of a giveaway his mother was impregnated by another man. Though he likely doesn't question it or confront his mother out of fear it's true.]]
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* InnocenceLost: [[spoiler:The final nail in the coffin that darkens Hermione and causes her to cease being who she was in canon is when Lucius tears her clothes off and rapes her while begging him not to do it.]]
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* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: Draco quickly realizes that his father is having an affair with Hermione. However, he wrongly thinks she's seduced him (something Lucius himself did think was happening) and that the attraction happened back when they were still students at Hogwarts. He also doesn't even consider the idea his father is rather abusive towards her or that it's not how it started, assuming he knows of [[spoiler:her parents' deaths or even considers the idea he raped her]].
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In canon, Lucius and Hermione only had one notable interaction and it was during the beginning of ''Chamber of Secrets'', where it was clear they had an equal amount of contempt for each other. Here, the two's constant interactions with each other develops to personal enmity, lust and even genuine romantic interest.
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* DespairEventHorizon: Hermione learns [[spoiler: that her parents are dead, then [[spoiler:Lucius rapes her, then she falls in love with him and he dies]]. This all ends up haunting her for the rest of her life.

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* DespairEventHorizon: Hermione learns [[spoiler: that her parents are dead, then [[spoiler:Lucius Lucius rapes her, then she falls in love with him and he dies]]. This all ends up haunting her for the rest of her life.

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* BiggerBad: Voldemort is not directly involved in the main events, only appearing at certain points. However, since this is based on the world of ''Harry Potter'', he's still the Death Eaters' master.


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* GreaterScopeVillain: Voldemort is not directly involved in the main events, only appearing at certain points. However, since this is based on the world of ''Harry Potter'', he's still the Death Eaters' master.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** [[spoiler:Untold nights of unprotected sex would in fact raise chances of pregnancy.]]
** [[spoiler:Even though he admits to loving Hermione, Lucius doesn't do a complete 180, still retaining some of his haughty nature and some bigotry.]]
** [[spoiler:Since Lucius never taught Hermione the spell to replenish lost blood, she has no means to learn it in time before he bleeds to death.]]

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* DestructiveRomance: The premise of the story.

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* DestructiveRomance: The premise of the story. A growing attraction between a teenage girl and a grown man old enough to be her father on opposite sides of a war is, in fact, not a beautiful thing. [[spoiler:His self-loathing at being attracted to her and his hostility to her causes Lucius to be physically abusive and eventually rape Hermione. Their becoming intimate only creates a fear of being exposed and those who find out are quick to express disgust on the age difference alone. Her getting pregnant with his child doesn't end result in them seeing a union of a love no one saw coming, but regret that they went too far.]]



* RealityEnsues: A growing attraction between a teenage girl and a grown man old enough to be her father on opposite sides of a war is, in fact, not a beautiful thing. [[spoiler:His self-loathing at being attracted to her and his hostility to her causes Lucius to be physically abusive and eventually rape Hermione. Their becoming intimate only creates a fear of being exposed and those who find out are quick to express disgust on the age difference alone. Her getting pregnant with his child doesn't end result in them seeing a union of a love no one saw coming, but regret that they went too far.]]
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%% * KilledMidSentence: Lucius.

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%% * KilledMidSentence: Lucius.[[spoiler:Lucius doesn't get to finish his sentence before he's stabbed by Bellatrix.]]
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* InconvenientAttraction: Lucius Malfoy in no way wants to be attracted to Hermione Granger, much less fall for her, because she's a muggleborn, much less the same age as his son. He unfortunately can't help himself.
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Cissy survives in the end and takes draco with her


* PregnantBadass: [[spoiler:Hermione kills Narcissa as triumphantly as she can while being a few weeks pregnant]].

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* PregnantBadass: [[spoiler:Hermione kills Narcissa Bellatrix as triumphantly as she can while being a few weeks pregnant]].

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* AgeGapRomance: As Ron and Draco point out, Lucius is old enough to be Hermione's father. The squickiness of the situation is not overlooked. Lucius is the father of her school bully and started out with a VillainousCrush he denied. [[spoiler:He's the first to have sex with her, although the first time it was rape, got her pregnant, but ranges from caring to being abusive. They don't marry, though she still loves him even after his death]]. So it's abuse, not romance or a consensual relationship.

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* AgeGapRomance: As Ron and Draco point out, Lucius is old enough to be Hermione's father. The squickiness of the situation is not overlooked. Lucius is the father of her school bully and started out with a VillainousCrush he denied. [[spoiler:He's the first to have sex with her, although the first time it was rape, got her pregnant, but ranges from caring to being abusive. They don't marry, though she still loves him even after his death]]. So it's abuse, not romance or a consensual relationship.


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* BigotWithACrush: Both Lucius Malfoy and Antonin Doholov develop an unhealthy attraction to Hermione Granger, despite, or because, she's a teenage muggleborn. For Lucius, he takes it to far more destructive levels.
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* BigotryException: Downplayed, but as abusive as he is, Lucius gets along with Hermione far more than he reasonably should, for her blood status alone. He notably stops using the "mudblood" slur to describe her and admits he wishes she were pureblood to make his attraction less wrong.
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* UnequalPairing: Even ignoring the war, age, blood and marital status, Lucius Malfoy is a rich man from a high-class family in the wizarding world while Hermione Granger is the teenage daughter of muggle dentists.
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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * AssholeVictim: Dolohov.

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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * AssholeVictim: Dolohov.Dolohov is given no sympathetic qualities and he's killed off after an attempt to rape Hermione by Lucius.



%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * EmotionallyTongueTied: Lucius.

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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * EmotionallyTongueTied: Lucius.Lucius has a hard time genuinely admitting how he real feels around Hermione. It's either due to the her being muggleborn or the fact that he's experiencing feelings he's never felt before.



%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * Lucius has this when he realizes [[spoiler:he's gotten Hermione pregnant]].

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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * ** Lucius has becomes horrified with how he's let his attraction get the better of him this when he realizes [[spoiler:he's gotten Hermione pregnant]].
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* {{Ephebophile}}: Lucius and Doholov, grown adults, both have an attraction to 17 year old Hermione.

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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Lucius and Hermione sort of see each other as this at first.
* AdaptationalJerkass: Canon!Lucius might have committed a few crimes, but personally tormenting [[spoiler: and raping]] a teenage girl probably isn't among them.

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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * AbhorrentAdmirer: Lucius and Hermione sort of see each other as this at first.
* AdaptationalJerkass: Canon!Lucius might have committed a few AdaptationalVillainy: Downplayed. In canon, Lucius commits crimes, but personally tormenting [[spoiler: and raping]] a teenage girl probably isn't among them.



* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: [[spoiler:Hermione, Lucius, and Ron]] all get one.
* ArmourPiercingQuestion: 'Why am I so abhorrent to you? What is wrong with me? What did I ''do''?'
* AssholeVictim: Dolohov.

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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: [[spoiler:Hermione, Lucius, and Ron]] all get one.
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * ArmourPiercingQuestion: 'Why am I so abhorrent to you? What is wrong with me? What did I ''do''?'
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * AssholeVictim: Dolohov.



* BecameTheirOwnAntithesis: Our lead couple.

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* BecameTheirOwnAntithesis: Our The lead couple.



* [[spoiler:BigDamnKiss]]: Chapters 29 and 44.

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* [[spoiler:BigDamnKiss]]: BigDamnKiss: Chapters 29 and 44.



* [[spoiler:BloodFromTheMouth: Lucius's death.]]
* BreakTheCutie: Hermione, oh so much.

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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * [[spoiler:BloodFromTheMouth: BloodFromTheMouth: Lucius's death.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: Hermione, oh so much.



** Happens again later, see IronicEcho.
* BrotherSisterIncest: Toyed with when Ginny turns up in one chapter. See also MoralEventHorizon.

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** Happens again later, see IronicEcho.
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * BrotherSisterIncest: Toyed with when Ginny turns up in one chapter. See also MoralEventHorizon.chapter.



* [[spoiler:ChildByRape: Averted, many believe that Hermione's son is this. He was most likely conceived during Lucius and Hermione's secret relationship, long after his father raped his mother.]]
* ColdBloodedTorture: And lots of it, very explicitly.

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* [[spoiler:ChildByRape: Averted, many ChildByRape: [[spoiler:Averted. Many believe that Hermione's son is this. He was most likely conceived during Lucius and Hermione's secret relationship, long after his father raped his mother.]]
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * ColdBloodedTorture: And lots of it, very explicitly.



* DeadpanSnarker: Lucius at first. Avery later takes it UpToEleven

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* DeadpanSnarker: Lucius at first. Avery later takes it UpToElevenAvery:



* [[spoiler: DeathBySex: Lucius, because he had sex with Hermione.]]

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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample ** Lucius.
* [[spoiler: DeathBySex: Lucius, because he had [[spoiler: Lucius has sex with Hermione.Hermione and dies in the end.]]



* DespairEventHorizon: Hermione crosses it at least three times: when she learns [[spoiler: that her parents are dead.]] Then when [[spoiler:Lucius rapes her.]] Finally, [[spoiler:Lucius dies]]. The last one was so strong it ends up haunting her for the rest of her life.

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* DespairEventHorizon: Hermione crosses it at least three times: when she learns [[spoiler: that her parents are dead.]] Then when dead, then [[spoiler:Lucius rapes her.]] Finally, [[spoiler:Lucius her, then she falls in love with him and he dies]]. The last one was so strong it This all ends up haunting her for the rest of her life.



* DistressedDude: Ron, who often owes his survival to Hermione's hold over Lucius.
* DoggedNiceGuy: Poor Ron…

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* DistressedDude: Ron, who Ron often owes his survival to Hermione's hold over Lucius.
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* EmotionallyTongueTied: Lucius.

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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * EmotionallyTongueTied: Lucius.



* {{Forgiveness}}: [[spoiler:Lucius thinks Hermione has forgiven him too easily and doesn't want her to forgive him for what he's done. Though to be frank, while she says that she's forgiven him for murdering her parents, the abuse and rape, it clearly wasn't easy.]]

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* {{Forgiveness}}: [[spoiler:Lucius thinks Hermione has forgiven him too easily and doesn't want her to forgive him for what he's done. Though to be frank, while she says that she's forgiven him for murdering her parents, the abuse and rape, it clearly wasn't easy.]]



* GuiltComplex: Hermione. Over ''everything.''

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* HerHeartWillGoOn: [[spoiler: Averted, Hermione ends up marrying Ron and has two more children with him, but deep down she is still damaged from losing Lucius.]]
* [[spoiler:HowDareYouDieOnMe]]

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* HerHeartWillGoOn: [[spoiler: Averted, [[spoiler:Averted. Hermione ends up marrying Ron and has two more children with him, but deep down she is still damaged from losing Lucius.]]
* [[spoiler:HowDareYouDieOnMe]]HowDareYouDieOnMe:



* IHaveYouNowMyPretty: Doholov and Lucius to Hermione.
* IncestSubtext: Implied between Bellatrix and Draco.
** Bellatrix also seems to enjoy calling Lucius 'brother', even though they aren't really related.

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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * IHaveYouNowMyPretty: Doholov and Lucius to Hermione.
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * IncestSubtext: Implied between Bellatrix and Draco.
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample ** Bellatrix also seems to enjoy calling Lucius 'brother', even though they aren't really related.



* LoveHurts: Yep.
* LoveIsAWeakness: Lucius believes it to be one, a case of irony.

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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * LoveHurts: Yep.
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * LoveIsAWeakness: Lucius believes it to be one, a case of irony.



* TheMasochismTango: Hermione and Lucius never stop hating each other.



* MurderTheHypotenuse: Bellatrix attempts this.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Lucius has this when he realizes [[spoiler:he's gotten Hermione pregnant]].
** "Fall of Man", a story by the same author, tells chapter 26 through Lucius's perspective. It shows him [[spoiler:suffering this trope during his assault on Hermione, but keeps trying to ignore it. By the end, he goes through this when he realizes he has just raped an unwilling, defenseless, emotionally torn teenage girl who has lost her virginity.]]

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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * MurderTheHypotenuse: Bellatrix attempts this.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Lucius has this when he realizes [[spoiler:he's gotten Hermione pregnant]].
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"Fall of Man", a story by the same author, tells chapter 26 through Lucius's perspective. It shows him [[spoiler:suffering this trope during his assault on Hermione, but keeps trying to ignore it. By the end, he goes through this when he realizes he has just raped an unwilling, defenseless, emotionally torn teenage girl who has lost her virginity.]]]]
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * Lucius has this when he realizes [[spoiler:he's gotten Hermione pregnant]].



* NightmareSequence: Hermione has several. She believes that the reason Lucius sleeps so peacefully is that he has no conscience.
* [[spoiler: NoNameGiven: The illegitimate son of Lucius Malfoy and Hermione Granger is never referred to by any name.]]
* NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: Lucius towards Hermione.
* NoSympathy: Avery.

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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * NightmareSequence: Hermione has several. She believes that the reason Lucius sleeps so peacefully is that he has no conscience.
* [[spoiler: NoNameGiven: The [[spoiler:The illegitimate son of Lucius Malfoy and Hermione Granger is never referred to by any name.]]
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: Lucius towards Hermione.
%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * NoSympathy: Avery.



* OnlySaneMan: Ron. At times, even ''he'' thinks that Hermione's lost her mind. Hermione doesn't entirely disagree with him.

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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * OnlySaneMan: Ron. At times, even ''he'' thinks that Hermione's lost her mind. Hermione doesn't entirely disagree with him.



* PleaseWakeUp: [[spoiler:Hermione desperately tries to get Lucius to wake up after it becomes clear he has bled to death]].

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* PleaseWakeUp: [[spoiler:Hermione desperately tries to get begs Lucius to wake up after it becomes clear he has bled to death]].



* [[spoiler:PregnantBadass: Hermione kills Narcissa as triumphantly as she can while being a few weeks pregnant]].

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* [[spoiler:PregnantBadass: Hermione PregnantBadass: [[spoiler:Hermione kills Narcissa as triumphantly as she can while being a few weeks pregnant]].



* [[spoiler:RedemptionEqualsDeath: Lucius dies trying to get Hermione out.]]

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* [[spoiler:RedemptionEqualsDeath: Lucius RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler:Lucius dies trying to get Hermione out.]]



* ShutUpHannibal: Hermione pulls several of these on Lucius. Most notably when he attempts to victim-blame her:
--> '''Hermione:''' You won't blame me. How could you blame me? I was seventeen years old – I was a child. But ''you'' – you're a grown man, with a wife, a son my age, for god's sake. You should have known better.

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Hermione pulls several of these on Lucius. Most notably when he attempts to victim-blame her:
--> ---> '''Hermione:''' You won't blame me. How could you blame me? I was seventeen years old – I was a child. But ''you'' – you're a grown man, with a wife, a son my age, for god's sake. You should have known better.



--> '''Ron:''' I'll tell you what - why don't you cut the melodramatic crap for a change? No one really wants to listen to a drama queen throwing a strop.

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--> ---> '''Ron:''' I'll tell you what - why don't you cut the melodramatic crap for a change? No one really wants to listen to a drama queen throwing a strop.



* SlapSlapKiss: Taken to a horrifying extreme.
* TheSociopath: Avery.
* [[spoiler:SomeoneToRememberHimBy: Hermione gives birth to Lucius' son after his death.]]

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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * TheSociopath: Avery.
* [[spoiler:SomeoneToRememberHimBy: Hermione SomeoneToRememberHimBy: [[spoiler:Hermione gives birth to Lucius' son after his death.]]



* StalkingIsLove: Lucius towards Hermione.

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* StepfordSmiler: The epilogue shows Hermione has become this [[spoiler:due to her time with Lucius, loss of her parents, Lucius's death and their son not knowing his real father.]]

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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * StepfordSmiler: The epilogue shows Hermione has become this [[spoiler:due to her time with Lucius, loss of her parents, Lucius's death and their son not knowing his real father.]]



* [[spoiler:TellMeAboutMyFather: Averted. The epilogue states that, although Hermione's son has his own suspicions about his parentage, he never questions his mother about it, due to his love for her and fear of the truth.]]

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* [[spoiler:TellMeAboutMyFather: Averted.TellMeAboutMyFather: [[spoiler:Averted. The epilogue states that, although Hermione's son has his own suspicions about his parentage, he never questions his mother about it, due to his love for her and fear of the truth.]]



* [[spoiler:TogetherInDeath: Hermione hopes for this after Lucius dies]]

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* [[spoiler:TogetherInDeath: Hermione TogetherInDeath: [[spoiler:Hermione hopes for this after Lucius dies]]



* UnreliableNarrator: Hermione's narrative, especially concerning her feelings, can often be misleading, due to her suffering from stockholm syndrome and the extreme emotional and mental pressure she's under.

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Hermione's narrative, especially concerning her feelings, can often be misleading, due to her suffering from stockholm syndrome StockholmSyndrome and the extreme emotional and mental pressure she's under.



* VillainousBSOD: Lucius has one when Hermione [[spoiler:tells him she's pregnant.]]

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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * VillainousBSOD: Lucius has one when Hermione [[spoiler:tells him she's pregnant.]]



* WallBangHer: Implied in chapter 31.

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* {{Deconstruction}} / RealityEnsues: For the crack pairing of Hermione and Lucius. Even if the two do grow to love each other, it gives them many problems: age difference, Lucius's marital status, differing viewpoints on the wizarding world, past conflicts, Lucius's prejudice towards Hermione's blood status and how it affects them and the people in their lives. [[spoiler:Her pregnancy doesn't help either.]]

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* {{Deconstruction}} / RealityEnsues: {{Deconstruction}}: For the crack pairing of Hermione and Lucius. Even if the two do grow to love each other, it gives them many problems: age difference, Lucius's marital status, differing viewpoints on the wizarding world, past conflicts, Lucius's prejudice towards Hermione's blood status and how it affects them and the people in their lives. [[spoiler:Her pregnancy doesn't help either.]]



* FreudianExcuse: Averted. Hermione asks what happened to Lucius to make him the man he is. He laughs and says nothing happened, he was just raised to be like this.

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* FreudianExcuse: Averted. FreudianExcuseDenial: Hermione asks what happened to Lucius to make him the man he is. He laughs and says nothing happened, he was just raised to be like this.


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* RealityEnsues: A growing attraction between a teenage girl and a grown man old enough to be her father on opposite sides of a war is, in fact, not a beautiful thing. [[spoiler:His self-loathing at being attracted to her and his hostility to her causes Lucius to be physically abusive and eventually rape Hermione. Their becoming intimate only creates a fear of being exposed and those who find out are quick to express disgust on the age difference alone. Her getting pregnant with his child doesn't end result in them seeing a union of a love no one saw coming, but regret that they went too far.]]
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Canon!Lucius might have committed a few crimes, but personally tormenting [[spoiler: and raping]] a teenage girl probably isn't amond them.

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* {{Forgiveness}}: [spoiler:Lucius thinks Hermione has forgiven him too easily and doesn't want her to forgive him for what he's done. Though to be frank, while she says that she's forgiven him for murdering her parents, the abuse and rape, it clearly wasn't easy.]]

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* LustObject: Hermione Granger is this to Lucius Malfoy. She's become an obsession for him before he goes too far.



* [[spoiler: NotIfTheyEnjoyedItRationalization: Lucius skirts very, ''very'' close to this when he attacks Hermione. 'Fall of Man' shows that he's aware, afterwards, of what he's done. Hermione herself is confused and disgusted by the whole thing, but never doubts that what Lucius did was straight-up rape.]]

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* [[spoiler: NotIfTheyEnjoyedItRationalization: Lucius [[spoiler:Lucius skirts very, ''very'' close to this when he attacks Hermione. 'Fall of Man' shows that he's aware, afterwards, of what he's done. Hermione herself is confused and disgusted by the whole thing, but never doubts that what Lucius did was straight-up rape.]]



* WhatTheHellHero: Ron gives a big one to Hermione when he learns how she's [[spoiler:sleeping with Lucius, the Death eater father of their high school nemesis, pureblood supremist and murderer of her parents.]]

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* WhatTheHellHero: Ron gives a big one to Hermione when he learns how she's [[spoiler:sleeping with Lucius, the Death eater father of their high school nemesis, pureblood supremist supremacist and murderer of her parents.]]

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* AdultFear: The beloved daughter gets [[spoiler: kidnapped, tortured, raped, going through StockholmSyndrome for the same man responsible for all of that, and giving birth to his baby.]]
* AgeGapRomance: As Ron and Draco point out, Lucius is old enough to be Hermione's father. The squickiness of the situation is not overlooked. Lucius is the father of her school bully and started out with a VillainousCrush he denied. [[spoiler:He's the first to have sex with her, although the first time it was rape, got her pregnant, but ranges from caring to being abusive. They don't marry, though she still loves him even after his death]]. So it's abuse, not romance or consensual relationship.

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* AdultFear: The Grangers' beloved daughter gets [[spoiler: kidnapped, tortured, raped, going through StockholmSyndrome for the same man responsible for all of that, their deaths, and giving birth to his baby.baby before she's married and has to pretend he's not the child of their killer.]]
* AgeGapRomance: As Ron and Draco point out, Lucius is old enough to be Hermione's father. The squickiness of the situation is not overlooked. Lucius is the father of her school bully and started out with a VillainousCrush he denied. [[spoiler:He's the first to have sex with her, although the first time it was rape, got her pregnant, but ranges from caring to being abusive. They don't marry, though she still loves him even after his death]]. So it's abuse, not romance or a consensual relationship.



* [[spoiler: DiedInYourArmsTonight]]: Lucius.

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* [[spoiler: DiedInYourArmsTonight]]: Lucius.DiedInYourArmsTonight: [[spoiler:Lucius dies in Hermione's arms]].



* EasilyForgiven: [[spoiler:Lucius thinks Hermione has forgiven him too easily and doesn't want her to forgive him for what he's done. Though to be frank, while she says that, it clearly wasn't easy.]]


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* {{Forgiveness}}: [spoiler:Lucius thinks Hermione has forgiven him too easily and doesn't want her to forgive him for what he's done. Though to be frank, while she says that she's forgiven him for murdering her parents, the abuse and rape, it clearly wasn't easy.]]
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* AdultFear: The beloved daughter gets [spoiler: kidnapped, tortured, raped, going through StockholmSyndrome for the same man responsible for all of that, and giving birth to his baby.]]

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* AdultFear: The beloved daughter gets [spoiler: [[spoiler: kidnapped, tortured, raped, going through StockholmSyndrome for the same man responsible for all of that, and giving birth to his baby.]]

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* AdultFear: The daughter you love so much [[spoiler:being kidnapped, tortured, raped, going through StockholmSyndrome for the same man responsible for all of that, and giving birth to his baby, and you yourself have been killed by that same man.]]

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* AdultFear: The beloved daughter you love so much [[spoiler:being gets [spoiler: kidnapped, tortured, raped, going through StockholmSyndrome for the same man responsible for all of that, and giving birth to his baby, baby.]]
* AgeGapRomance: As Ron
and you yourself Draco point out, Lucius is old enough to be Hermione's father. The squickiness of the situation is not overlooked. Lucius is the father of her school bully and started out with a VillainousCrush he denied. [[spoiler:He's the first to have been killed by that same man.]]sex with her, although the first time it was rape, got her pregnant, but ranges from caring to being abusive. They don't marry, though she still loves him even after his death]]. So it's abuse, not romance or consensual relationship.



* [[spoiler:BabiesMakeEverythingBetter: Subverted. Hermione believes she can use her pregnancy to get Lucius to set her free and win her life back. But in the end, the fact that she's pregnant causes the death of Lucius which, due to the severity of her emotional dependence on him, leaves Hermione broken beyond repair and wishing more than anything she'd got rid of her baby when she had the chance.]]

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* [[spoiler:BabiesMakeEverythingBetter: BabiesMakeEverythingBetter:[[spoiler: Subverted. Hermione believes she can use her pregnancy to get Lucius to set her free and win her life back. But in the end, the fact that she's pregnant causes the death of Lucius which, due to the severity of her emotional dependence on him, leaves Hermione broken beyond repair and wishing more than anything she'd got rid of her baby when she had the chance.]]



* FiveManBand: The regular villains fit quite well.
** TheBigBad: Voldemort
** TheDragon: Lucius
** TheEvilGenius: Avery
** TheBrute: Dolohov
** TheDarkChick: Bellatrix
** TokenGoodTeammate: [[spoiler:Narcissa]]
** TagAlongKid: Draco



* [[spoiler:KilledOffForReal: Lucius, Bellatrix, Dolohov, and Avery. And Hermione's parents.]]
* [[spoiler:KilledMidSentence: Lucius.]]
* [[spoiler:KillEmAll: Out of the regular characters, only Hermione, Ron and Draco survive.]]

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%% * [[spoiler:KilledOffForReal: Lucius, Bellatrix, Dolohov, and Avery. And Hermione's parents.]]
* [[spoiler:KilledMidSentence:
KilledMidSentence: Lucius.]]
* [[spoiler:KillEmAll: Out of the regular characters, only Hermione, Ron and Draco survive.]]



* MayDecemberRomance: As Ron and Draco point out, Lucius is old enough to be Hermione's father. The squickiness of the situation is not overlooked.

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* IHaveNoSon: [[spoiler: Lucius refuses to accept the half-blood child that Hermione is carrying. Eventually, when he begins to admit his love for her, he stops calling his new son "it" and admits it to be ''their'' child.]]



* ItIsDehumanizing: [[spoiler:Even after learning the child Hermione carries is a boy, Lucius refers to the child as an "it".]]



* [[spoiler:ThatThingIsNotMyChild: Lucius refuses to accept the half-blood child that Hermione is carrying. Eventually, when he begins to admit his love for her, he stops calling his new son "it" and admits it to be ''their'' child.]]
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* AdultFear: The daughter you love so much [[spoiler:being kidnapped, tortured, raped, going through StockholmSyndrome for the same man responsible for all of that, and giving birth to his baby, and you yourself have been killed by that same man.]]
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* FiveBadBand: The regular villains fit quite well.

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* FiveBadBand: FiveManBand: The regular villains fit quite well.

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* [[spoiler:HerHeartWillGoOn: Averted, Hermione ends up marrying Ron and has two more children with him, but deep down she is still damaged from losing Lucius.]]

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* [[spoiler:HerHeartWillGoOn: HappinessInSlavery: Averted, despite growing to love Lucius, Hermione clearly doesn't want to spend the rest of her life as his servant. Lucius, however, is fine with it as it is the only way he can be with her.
* HerHeartWillGoOn: [[spoiler:
Averted, Hermione ends up marrying Ron and has two more children with him, but deep down she is still damaged from losing Lucius.]]

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