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* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale/ {{Yandere}}: Hannah Abbot (Neville's future wife) tries to set him on fire and then throws several potted plants at him (one of which suffocates him to unconsciousness, while she does nothing to stop it). All this because of a bad case of PoorCommunicationKills leading her to believe he was making out with Ginny--even though Hannah and Neville aren't even ''dating''. Either [[ValuesDissonance this is supposed to be justified by the "fact" that]] [[UnfortunateImplications girls are just crazy like that]] or [[EarlyInstallmentWeirdness a bit of comic SlapStick horribly clashing with the deadly seriousness that violence is portrayed in the rest of the fic]]. It is possible that this is a {{continuity nod}} of sorts to the scene where Hermione sets a flock of conjured birds on Ron, albeit a ridiculously over the top one.
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* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale/ {{Yandere}}: Hannah Abbot (Neville's future wife) tries to set him on fire and then throws several potted plants at him (one of which suffocates him to unconsciousness, while she does nothing to stop it). All this because of a bad case of PoorCommunicationKills leading her to believe he was making out with Ginny--even though Hannah and Neville aren't even ''dating''. Either [[ValuesDissonance this is supposed to be justified by the "fact" that]] [[UnfortunateImplications girls are just crazy like that]] that or [[EarlyInstallmentWeirdness a bit of comic SlapStick horribly clashing with the deadly seriousness that violence is portrayed in the rest of the fic]]. It is possible that this is a {{continuity nod}} of sorts to the scene where Hermione sets a flock of conjured birds on Ron, albeit a ridiculously over the top one.
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* GotOverRapeInstantly: Immediately after the reveal that [[spoiler:Lavender Brown is being regularly raped by Crabbe and Goyle hard enough to leave bruises, Neville sees her and Seamus sleeping together, which all characters and the narrative treat as a fix for her trauma.]]
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* TookALevelInJerkAss: Neville becomes more and more of a JerkAssStu as the fic goes on. Mostly this is due to the fact that he starts to see himself as a military leader and begins to expect military discipline from his underlings, while the said underlings still see him as their fellow classmate.
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* TookALevelInJerkAss: Neville becomes more and more of a JerkAssStu {{Jerkass}} as the fic goes on. Mostly this is due to the fact that he starts to see himself as a military leader and begins to expect military discipline from his underlings, while the said underlings still see him as their fellow classmate.
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* SickinglySweet: When Hannah tells Neville that her Aunt has some sickeningly cute collectible china witch figurines. Apparently, "It's like trying to eat half of Honeydukes in one sitting. You can feel your teeth start to rot the second you cross the front door."
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* TastesLikeDiabetes: {{Invoked|Trope}}, when Hannah tells Neville that her Aunt has some sickeningly cute collectible china witch figurines. Apparently, "It's like trying to eat half of Honeydukes in one sitting. You can feel your teeth start to rot the second you cross the front door."
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** Seamus Finnegan gets turned into this, JK Rowling has said that naming the character "Seamus Finnegan" was pushing it a bit, but Thanfiction takes the Irish stereotype UpToEleven. Example:
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%% * {{Understatement}}: "Nah, [the Carrows] make Umbridge look tame." Specifically, it's a line from the original Literature/HarryPotter books which, since this fic is a BloodierAndGorier version turned UpToEleven...
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%% * {{Understatement}}: "Nah, [the Carrows] make Umbridge look tame." Specifically, it's a line from the original Literature/HarryPotter books which, since this fic is a BloodierAndGorier version turned UpToEleven...up to eleven...
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* FunnySpoon: Luna Lovegood can do magic with a spoon replacing her wand. Which she uses to make a picture made from food permanent, instead of [[WhatAnIdiot using it to escape and break her friends out]].
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* FunnySpoon: Luna Lovegood can do magic with a spoon replacing her wand. Which she uses to make a picture made from food permanent, instead of [[WhatAnIdiot [[SkewedPriorities using it to escape and break her friends out]].
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** The stereotyping covers the spectrum: starting with Cho, a Chinese girl who is indistinguishable from her English neighbour; to Parvati and Padma, who are attracted to some superficial trappings of their Indian heritage (e.g. the cooking and Yoga); to Ernie, who swings from "generic British" to "escapee from Theater/{{Brigadoon}}" depending on the chapter; to Seamus, who looks like he wandered in from an Irish epic and the author spends '''every other chapter''' making sure you get that.
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** The stereotyping covers the spectrum: starting with Cho, a Chinese girl who is indistinguishable from her English neighbour; to Parvati and Padma, who are attracted to some superficial trappings of their Indian heritage (e.g. the cooking and Yoga); to Ernie, who swings from "generic British" to "escapee from Theater/{{Brigadoon}}" Theatre/{{Brigadoon}}" depending on the chapter; to Seamus, who looks like he wandered in from an Irish epic and the author spends '''every other chapter''' making sure you get that.
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* AdaptationalWimp: Done to a ''plot element'' instead of a character. In the DAYD universe, healing magic is significantly weaker than in canon. It barely does anything to Neville and Ernie's whipping wounds, when it's used to regrow Colin's hand it results in something barely a step up from a Muggle prosthetic, and in general injuries are treated as a much, ''much'' bigger deal than they would be in canon.
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** The stereotyping covers the spectrum: starting with Cho, a Chinese girl who is indistinguishable from her English neighbour; to Parvati and Padma, who are attracted to some superficial trappings of their Indian heritage (e.g. the cooking and Yoga); to Ernie, a fully-rounded character who is just happens to be quite Scottish; to Seamus, who looks like he wandered in from an Irish epic and the author spends '''every other chapter''' making sure you get that.
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** The stereotyping covers the spectrum: starting with Cho, a Chinese girl who is indistinguishable from her English neighbour; to Parvati and Padma, who are attracted to some superficial trappings of their Indian heritage (e.g. the cooking and Yoga); to Ernie, a fully-rounded character who is just happens swings from "generic British" to be quite Scottish; "escapee from Theater/{{Brigadoon}}" depending on the chapter; to Seamus, who looks like he wandered in from an Irish epic and the author spends '''every other chapter''' making sure you get that.
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* ArtisticLicenseHistory: A meta-example - in one of his posts on the story, while decrying the idea of shipping Terry Boot and Michael Corner, Thanfiction referred to them as having a "bond between men that forms in wartime" and compared it to the Sacred Band of Thebes. The Sacred Band of Thebes was legendarily formed up entirely of ''men in homosexual relationships'', on the grounds that a man would fight all the harder to protect his lover.
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** Recent rape victims are usually ''not'' receptive to male-initiated sexual acts as the [[HurtComfortFic post-Sluagh one-shot]] ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5475729/1/More_Realer More Realer]]'' and the end of the [[spoiler:Lavender]] scene in DAYD describe.
** If Thanfiction knew enough about Demiguises to include them in DAYD, he should have known enough about them to not portray them as invisible ''goats'' when they're invisible ''apes''.
** Recent rape victims are usually ''not'' receptive to male-initiated sexual acts as the [[HurtComfortFic post-Sluagh one-shot]] ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5475729/1/More_Realer More Realer]]'' and the end of the [[spoiler:Lavender]] scene in DAYD describe.
** If Thanfiction knew enough about Demiguises to include them in DAYD, he should have known enough about them to not portray them as invisible ''goats'' when they're invisible ''apes''.
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This is true, but descriptions aren't meant to note critical reception or YMMV like this.
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* DeadFic: Has not been updated since 9th of October 2012, and the author has moved on through at least two or three more fandoms.
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* DeadFic: Has not been updated since 9th of October 2012, and with the author has moved moving on through at least two or three more fandoms.fandoms and their account deactivated in December of 2017, it doesn't seem likely to.
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* TheCaper: Neville and company pull one of these to retrieve the Sword of Gryffindor from Snape's office, complete with seemingly impossible odds on getting inside. [[AllForNothing They failed and not only that, the sword was fake]]
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* TheCaper: Neville and company pull one of these to retrieve the Sword of Gryffindor from Snape's office, complete with seemingly impossible odds on getting inside. [[AllForNothing [[EpicFail They failed and not only that, the sword was fake]]
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* TheCaper: Neville and company pull one of these to retrieve the Sword of Gryffindor from Snape's office, complete with seemingly impossible odds on getting inside. [[AllForNothing They failed]]
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* TheCaper: Neville and company pull one of these to retrieve the Sword of Gryffindor from Snape's office, complete with seemingly impossible odds on getting inside. [[AllForNothing They failed]]failed and not only that, the sword was fake]]
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* TheCaper: Neville and company pull one of these to retrieve the Sword of Gryffindor from Snape's office, complete with seemingly impossible odds on getting inside. [[SubvertedTrope They failed]]
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* TheCaper: Neville and company pull one of these to retrieve the Sword of Gryffindor from Snape's office, complete with seemingly impossible odds on getting inside. [[SubvertedTrope [[AllForNothing They failed]]
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* TheCaper: Neville and company pull one of these to retrieve the Sword of Gryffindor from Snape's office, complete with seemingly impossible odds on getting inside.
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* TheCaper: Neville and company pull one of these to retrieve the Sword of Gryffindor from Snape's office, complete with seemingly impossible odds on getting inside. [[SubvertedTrope They failed]]
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* FakeUltimateHero:
** Again [[TheHero Harry]] the story seems to always portray his own struggles as lesser than the ones of the D.A. But then again since the fic IS cannon compliant he is the one shouldering the war over Voldemort, the hunt of his Horcruxes and overall the one that actually defeats Voldemort.
** [[DesignatedHero Neville]] and the DA fits this more, while their actions are portrayed as more important. Overall they have no contribution to the final victory. At least until it is time for the final battle and when Neville gets to kill Nagini. He and his group fail to retrieve the Sword of Gryffindor and basically they sit in Hogwarts getting in troubles and trying to get out of them, in overly complicated and rather pointless ways.
%% ** TheLancer: Seamus/Ginny
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%% ** TheBigGuy: Ernie
%% ** TheChick: Susan
* FakeUltimateHero:
** Again [[TheHero Harry]] the story seems to always portray his own struggles as lesser than the ones of the D.A. But then again since the fic IS cannon compliant he is the one shouldering the war over Voldemort, the hunt of his Horcruxes and overall the one that actually defeats Voldemort.
** [[DesignatedHero Neville]] and the DA fits this more, while their actions are portrayed as more important. Overall they have no contribution to the final victory. At least until it is time for the final battle and when Neville gets to kill Nagini. He and his group fail to retrieve the Sword of Gryffindor and basically they sit in Hogwarts getting in troubles and trying to get out of them, in overly complicated and rather pointless ways.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Renny, son of a Death Eater who joined the D.A. after Voldemort tortured his father for a minor failure. See "NobleBigot".
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* HeelFaceTurn: Renny, son of a Death Eater who joined the D.A. after Voldemort tortured his father for a minor failure. See "NobleBigot".
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*** It is of course lost to them, that Dumbledore, genuinely speaking did not have a plan. What he did, was preparing Harry for the actual mission (During sixth year specifically and even before that he counted on harry's nature to guide him). And that he counted on Harry pulling it off, which in the end happened.
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*** It is of course lost to them, that Dumbledore, genuinely speaking did not have a plan. What he did, was preparing Harry for the actual mission (During sixth year specifically and even before that he counted on harry's nature to guide him).mission. And that he counted on Harry pulling it off, which in the end happened.
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*** It is of course lost to them, that Dumbledore, genuinely speaking did not have a plan. What he did, was preparing Harry for the actual mission (During sixth year specifically and even before that he counted on harry's nature to guide him). And that he counted on Harry pulling it off, which in the end happened.
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* FakeUltimateHero:
** Again [[TheHero Harry]] the story seems to always portray his own struggles as lesser than the ones of the D.A. But then again since the fic IS cannon compliant he is the one shouldering the war over Voldemort, the hunt of his Horcruxes and overall the one that actually defeats Voldemort.
** [[DesignatedHero Neville]] and the DA fits this more, while their actions are portrayed as more important. Overall they have no contribution to the final victory. At least until it is time for the final battle and when Neville gets to kill Nagini. He and his group fail to retrieve the Sword of Gryffindor and basically they sit in Hogwarts getting in troubles and trying to get out of them, in overly complicated and rather pointless ways.
** Again [[TheHero Harry]] the story seems to always portray his own struggles as lesser than the ones of the D.A. But then again since the fic IS cannon compliant he is the one shouldering the war over Voldemort, the hunt of his Horcruxes and overall the one that actually defeats Voldemort.
** [[DesignatedHero Neville]] and the DA fits this more, while their actions are portrayed as more important. Overall they have no contribution to the final victory. At least until it is time for the final battle and when Neville gets to kill Nagini. He and his group fail to retrieve the Sword of Gryffindor and basically they sit in Hogwarts getting in troubles and trying to get out of them, in overly complicated and rather pointless ways.
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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Colin and the younger students]] have one of these, [[RealityEnsues though it]] [[KilledOffForReal doesn't end well]].
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%% Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Colin and the younger students]] have one of these, [[RealityEnsues though it]] it [[KilledOffForReal doesn't end well]].
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** What would the events of ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows'' look like if you think about them [[RealityEnsues in the context of our world?]] (torture in school, child soldiers, etc.)
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** What would the events of ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows'' look like if you think about them [[RealityEnsues in the context of our world?]] world? (torture in school, child soldiers, etc.)
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* RealityEnsues: Let's face it--those kids never really stood a chance of doing anything but keeping the Death Eaters busy while Harry dealt with Voldemort. Teenagers against adults who have spent the better parts of their lives learning to use magic ''designed'' to inflict pain, suffering, and death? The D.A. is lucky they lasted as long as they did.
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* RealityEnsues: From 1997 through 1998, Wizarding Britain was taken over by a far right terrorist group focused on cleansing the magical society of Muggle Borns and impure bloodlines. Even a decade after they were stopped, is it really a surprise that Muggle Borns have left the Wizarding world or are refusing to send their children to Hogwarts for fear the insanity will start all over again?
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* DeadGuyJunior: Thanfiction is especially prone to this. IIRC, there are only three kids who ''aren't'' named after dead people, and two were adopted from another country. Of course, there are a [[KillEmAll lot of names to choose from]]...
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* DeadGuyJunior: Thanfiction is especially prone to this. IIRC, there There are only three kids who ''aren't'' named after dead people, and two were adopted from another country. Of course, there are a [[KillEmAll lot of names to choose from]]...
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The tale continues in ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4384697/1/Sluagh Sluagh]]''.[[note]]Destructive, restless spirits of the dead in Irish mythology.[[/note]] It is now five years later, all the survivors have moved on to civilian life, each nursing his and her own trauma scars. Neville is senior Auror and Simon-Wiesenthal-in-residence (so to speak) for the rebuilt Ministry of Magic, tasked with rounding up the remnants of Voldemort's henchmen. For his final assignment, he is dispatched to track down a mysterious serial/vigilante killer in Ireland and ends up fighting an even more sinister and brutal dark lord than Voldemort.
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The tale continues in ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4384697/1/Sluagh ''[[https://www.reddit.com/r/HPfanfiction/comments/7kfxke/does_anyone_have_a_copy_of_dumbledores_army_and/dviiy0g?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3 Sluagh]]''.[[note]]Destructive, restless spirits of the dead in Irish mythology.[[/note]] It is now five years later, all the survivors have moved on to civilian life, each nursing his and her own trauma scars. Neville is senior Auror and Simon-Wiesenthal-in-residence (so to speak) for the rebuilt Ministry of Magic, tasked with rounding up the remnants of Voldemort's henchmen. For his final assignment, he is dispatched to track down a mysterious serial/vigilante killer in Ireland and ends up fighting an even more sinister and brutal dark lord than Voldemort.
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* ElsewhereFic: DAYD takes place during Neville's final year in Hogwarts, which was never depicted in canon because the protagonists left the school to focus on finding the Hallows.
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* OutOfCharacter: Due to the DarkFic nature of the story, quite a few characters are this.
** Crabbe and Goyle are murderous rapists rather than dimwitted henchmen.
** Death Eaters as a whole are a lot more sadistic, favoring violent torture curses over simple killing curses.
** Neville Longbottom suddenly has the personality and authority of a military commander despite being a generally affable, pleasant student in canon.
** Every female character gets this to a degree; they all seem to communicate over some telepathic wavelength only women can access, and seem like much closer friends than they were in the Harry Potter books.
** Crabbe and Goyle are murderous rapists rather than dimwitted henchmen.
** Death Eaters as a whole are a lot more sadistic, favoring violent torture curses over simple killing curses.
** Neville Longbottom suddenly has the personality and authority of a military commander despite being a generally affable, pleasant student in canon.
** Every female character gets this to a degree; they all seem to communicate over some telepathic wavelength only women can access, and seem like much closer friends than they were in the Harry Potter books.
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* BloodierAndGorier: This fic series has a LOT of very explicitly described violence, rape, gore, and torture. It's based on ''Literature/HarryPotter'', a ''Children's/Young Adult series''.
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* BloodierAndGorier: This fic series has a LOT of very explicitly described violence, rape, gore, and torture. It's based on ''Literature/HarryPotter'', a ''Children's/Young Adult series''. It's also worth noting that, in nearly all Harry Potter material, the Death Eaters kill with instantaneous Killing Curses, while in DAYD, they generally opt for much more painful, prolonged, and bloody methods.
* BloodyHorror: Many of the deaths that happen in the Battle of Hogwarts are like this. [[spoiler:: Special mention goes to Romilda Vane, who is slashed apart into a pile of gore.]]
* BodyHorror: The curse that turns people inside out.
* BloodyHorror: Many of the deaths that happen in the Battle of Hogwarts are like this. [[spoiler:: Special mention goes to Romilda Vane, who is slashed apart into a pile of gore.]]
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* {{Sadist}}: The Death Eaters in general come across as this. They love to torture innocent children, dish out incredibly over-the-top punishments for every little infraction, and kill people in complicated and violent ways that seem deliberately designed to prolong their suffering as much as humanly possible (all this despite the fact that quick, bloodless killing curses exist.)
* SceneryGorn: Hogwarts at the end. The whole castle is covered in blood and corpses, and Neville makes special mention of the wood post Romilda Vane was murdered on.
* SceneryGorn: Hogwarts at the end. The whole castle is covered in blood and corpses, and Neville makes special mention of the wood post Romilda Vane was murdered on.
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* TorturePorn: Many of the death scenes come across as this. Instead of using painless and instant killing curses like they did in the original Harry Potter series, the Death Eaters in DAYD tend to use violent curses that prolong their victims' suffering as much as possible.