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A crossover story between {{Disgaea}} and MahouSenseiNegima, crafted by [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Tropers/Cygnus Cygnus]].
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A crossover story between {{Disgaea}} ''Franchise/{{Disgaea}}'' and MahouSenseiNegima, ''Manga/MahouSenseiNegima'', crafted by [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Tropers/Cygnus Cygnus]].
@/{{Cygnus}}.
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* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: Mao and Negi's trip to Konoka's heart, which plays out a lot more like KingdomHearts instead of {{Disgaea3}}
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* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: Mao and Negi's trip to Konoka's heart, which plays out a lot more like KingdomHearts ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' instead of {{Disgaea3}}''VideoGame/{{Disgaea 3|AbsenceOfJustice}}''.
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This story provides examples of:
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** Imamiah's ship, the ''Sagen'', takes a nod to [[{{Bomberman}} Rainbow Palace]].
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** Imamiah's ship, the ''Sagen'', takes a nod to [[{{Bomberman}} [[VideoGame/{{Bomberman}} Rainbow Palace]].
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* CrackPairing: Seems to be heading in the direction of [[spoiler: [=Konoka/Satsuki=]m and therefore [[IncrediblyLamePun KonoSatsu]].]]
* CrossoverShip: [[spoiler:Hakase X Mao if you can believe it. [[FunnyMoments Hakase point blank says she wants Mao's kids.]]]]
* CrossoverShip: [[spoiler:Hakase X Mao if you can believe it. [[FunnyMoments Hakase point blank says she wants Mao's kids.]]]]
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* LesYay
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** [[{{Homestuck}} "I warned you about the stairs, dood."]]
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** [[{{Homestuck}} [[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} "I warned you about the stairs, dood."]]
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** [[{{Homestuck}} "I warned you about the stairs, dood."]]
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* BellyOfTheWhale: [[spoiler:When Konoka first meets and does battle with Imamiah.]]
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* CrackPairing: Seems to be heading in the direction of [[spoiler: [=Konoka/Satsuki=].]]
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* CrackPairing: Seems to be heading in the direction of [[spoiler: [=Konoka/Satsuki=].[=Konoka/Satsuki=]m and therefore [[IncrediblyLamePun KonoSatsu]].]]
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* ShoutOut: So Iza, having fun imitating [[{{Castlevania}} Death]] yet?
** Imamiah's ship, the ''Sagen'', takes a nod to [[{{Bomberman}} Rainbow Palace]].
** Imamiah's ship, the ''Sagen'', takes a nod to [[{{Bomberman}} Rainbow Palace]].
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* CrackPairing: Seems to be heading in the direction of [[spoiler: [=Konoka/Satsuki=].]]
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* TheLegionsOfHell: FallenAngels invading a demon Netherworld?! Unheard of! ...no wait, this is Makai Senki Disgaea after all.
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* TheLegionsOfHell: FallenAngels invading a demon Netherworld?! Unheard of! ...no wait, this is Makai Senki [[strike:Negima]] Disgaea after all.
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* TheLegionsOfHell: FallenAngels invading a demon Netherworld?! Unheard of! ...no wait, this is Makai Senki [[strike:Negima]] Disgaea after all.
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* TheLegionsOfHell: FallenAngels invading a demon Netherworld?! Unheard of! ...no wait, this is Makai Senki [[strike:Negima]] Disgaea after all.
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** WordofGod says that the Asagi Asagiri in the story is the SAME Asagi Asagiri who shows up in ShadowCrystalMage's story ''Overlords and Overkill''. Apparently, this is where she goes when the other fic is not being tended to...
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* HeroicSecondWind: [[spoiler:Konoka gets a second boost right as Mao, Negi, Satsuki and Setsuna plead with the True Heart.]]
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* AMindIsATerribleThingToRead: Nodoka thought she had it bad during canon events. Attempting to read Cygnus's mind during his opening attack exposed her to [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HNTxr2NJHa0 this]].
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* NobleDemon: Oh dear god, this entire story is full of them!
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* NobleDemon: Oh dear god, this entire story is full of them!Noble Demons. Noble Demons Everywhere.
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* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil: Played straight with Konoka's rampage three years ago. [[spoiler:then subverted, and trying hard to keep it that way when she takes Setsuna's life.]]
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* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil: Played straight with Konoka's rampage three years ago. [[spoiler:then [[spoiler:Then subverted, and trying hard to keep it that way when she takes Setsuna's life.]]
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* CrossoverShip: [[spoiler:Hakase X Mao if you can believe it. [[FunnyMoments Hakase point blank says she wants Maos kids.]]]]
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* CrossoverShip: [[spoiler:Hakase X Mao if you can believe it. [[FunnyMoments Hakase point blank says she wants Maos Mao's kids.]]]]
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* DynamicEntry: [[spoiler:[[IncrediblyLamePun '''''DYNAMIS ENTRY!''''']]]]
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* IntercontinuityCrossover: [[spoiler:You will find a laundry list of things that hook both canons together, oddly enough most of them involve Raspberyl.]]
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* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil (Played straight with Konoka's rampage three years ago. [[spoiler:then subverted, and trying hard to keep it that way when she takes Setsuna's life.]])
* CrossoverShip [[spoiler:Hakase X Mao if you can believe it. [[FunnyMoments Hakase point blank says she wants Maos kids.]]]]
* CursedWithAwesome (Averted: Konoka worries about her demonhood for all of a day before getting used to it. It does not stop her from wondering what friends and family might say when/if she encounters them again)
* DynamicEntry ([[spoiler:'''''DYNAMIS ENTRY!''''']])
* EnforcedColdWar (After beating Konoka, Priere declares she'll stay. Satsuki, Flonne, and Raspberyl are the only things standing in the way between Konoka and Priere at any given time...)
* FirstEpisodeSpoiler (Konoka isn't established as the main character until midway through the prologue, and summaries never spoiled this until chapter 9.)
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind (Mao and Negi's trip to Konoka's heart, which plays out a lot more like KingdomHearts instead of {{Disgaea3}})
* LaserGuidedAmnesia (Konoka has difficulty remembering her immediate past before the sleep [[spoiler:which may be from outside interference]])
* TheLegionsOfHell (FallenAngels invading a demon Netherworld?! Unheard of! ...no wait, this is Makai Senki [[strike:Negima]] Disgaea after all.)
* NobleDemon (Oh dear god, this entire story is full of them!)
* NoSneakAttacks (Most of the Gehenna residents couldn't even detect the Erinyes until they talk, and yet they shout before attacking. Subverted with Konoka versus Iza and Nami, who give no such warning, but she is able to detect them anyway. Also subverted with Flonne's meeting with Tayuya.)
* ObstructiveBureaucrat (The entirety of Ars Goetia, but with good reason)
* OnlySaneMan (Satsuki Yotsuba)
* OutsideContextVillain (The Erinyes)
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds (As of recently, [[spoiler:Konoka may have this fate thanks to her power accelerating, the loss of Setsuna and a prophecy that states such... unless she embraces evil]])
* CrossoverShip [[spoiler:Hakase X Mao if you can believe it. [[FunnyMoments Hakase point blank says she wants Maos kids.]]]]
* CursedWithAwesome (Averted: Konoka worries about her demonhood for all of a day before getting used to it. It does not stop her from wondering what friends and family might say when/if she encounters them again)
* DynamicEntry ([[spoiler:'''''DYNAMIS ENTRY!''''']])
* EnforcedColdWar (After beating Konoka, Priere declares she'll stay. Satsuki, Flonne, and Raspberyl are the only things standing in the way between Konoka and Priere at any given time...)
* FirstEpisodeSpoiler (Konoka isn't established as the main character until midway through the prologue, and summaries never spoiled this until chapter 9.)
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind (Mao and Negi's trip to Konoka's heart, which plays out a lot more like KingdomHearts instead of {{Disgaea3}})
* LaserGuidedAmnesia (Konoka has difficulty remembering her immediate past before the sleep [[spoiler:which may be from outside interference]])
* TheLegionsOfHell (FallenAngels invading a demon Netherworld?! Unheard of! ...no wait, this is Makai Senki [[strike:Negima]] Disgaea after all.)
* NobleDemon (Oh dear god, this entire story is full of them!)
* NoSneakAttacks (Most of the Gehenna residents couldn't even detect the Erinyes until they talk, and yet they shout before attacking. Subverted with Konoka versus Iza and Nami, who give no such warning, but she is able to detect them anyway. Also subverted with Flonne's meeting with Tayuya.)
* ObstructiveBureaucrat (The entirety of Ars Goetia, but with good reason)
* OnlySaneMan (Satsuki Yotsuba)
* OutsideContextVillain (The Erinyes)
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds (As of recently, [[spoiler:Konoka may have this fate thanks to her power accelerating, the loss of Setsuna and a prophecy that states such... unless she embraces evil]])
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* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil (Played BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil: Played straight with Konoka's rampage three years ago. [[spoiler:then subverted, and trying hard to keep it that way when she takes Setsuna's life.]])
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*CrossoverShip CatchPhrase: Dood!
* CrossoverShip: [[spoiler:Hakase X Mao if you can believe it. [[FunnyMoments Hakase point blank says she wants Maos kids.]]]]
*CursedWithAwesome (Averted: CursedWithAwesome: Averted. Konoka worries about her demonhood for all of a day before getting used to it. It does not stop her from wondering what friends and family might say when/if she encounters them again)
again
*DynamicEntry ([[spoiler:'''''DYNAMIS ENTRY!''''']])
DefeatMeansFriendship: Not yet, but we're getting there.
*EnforcedColdWar (After DynamicEntry: [[spoiler:[[IncrediblyLamePun '''''DYNAMIS ENTRY!''''']]]]
* EnforcedColdWar: After beating Konoka, Priere declares she'll stay. Satsuki, Flonne, and Raspberyl are the only things standing in the way between Konoka and Priere at any giventime...)
time...
*FirstEpisodeSpoiler (Konoka FirstEpisodeSpoiler: Konoka isn't established as the main character until midway through the prologue, and summaries never spoiled this until chapter 9.)
9.
*JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind (Mao HeWhoFightsMonsters: [[spoiler:Nagi]]
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: Mao and Negi's trip to Konoka's heart, which plays out a lot more like KingdomHearts instead of{{Disgaea3}})
{{Disgaea3}}
*LaserGuidedAmnesia (Konoka LaserGuidedAmnesia: Konoka has difficulty remembering her immediate past before the sleep [[spoiler:which may be from outside interference]])
interference]]
*TheLegionsOfHell (FallenAngels TheLegionsOfHell: FallenAngels invading a demon Netherworld?! Unheard of! ...no wait, this is Makai Senki [[strike:Negima]] Disgaea after all.)
all.
*NobleDemon (Oh LesYay
* NobleDemon: Oh dear god, this entire story is full ofthem!)
them!
*NoSneakAttacks (Most NoSneakAttacks: Most of the Gehenna residents couldn't even detect the Erinyes until they talk, and yet they shout before attacking. Subverted with Konoka versus Iza and Nami, who give no such warning, but she is able to detect them anyway. Also subverted with Flonne's meeting with Tayuya.)
Tayuya.
*ObstructiveBureaucrat (The ObstructiveBureaucrat: The entirety of Ars Goetia, but with good reason)
reason
*OnlySaneMan (Satsuki Yotsuba)
TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: Priere all the way.
*OutsideContextVillain (The Erinyes)
OnlySaneMan: Satsuki Yotsuba
*WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds (As OutsideContextVillain: The Erinyes
* ScrewDestiny: [[spoiler:Konoka]] doesn't want to destroy the world. So far it looks like YouCantFightFate though.
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: As of recently, [[spoiler:Konoka may have this fate thanks to her power accelerating, the loss of Setsuna and a prophecy that states such... unless she embracesevil]])evil]]
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* CrossoverShip: [[spoiler:Hakase X Mao if you can believe it. [[FunnyMoments Hakase point blank says she wants Maos kids.]]]]
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* ScrewDestiny: [[spoiler:Konoka]] doesn't want to destroy the world. So far it looks like YouCantFightFate though.
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: As of recently, [[spoiler:Konoka may have this fate thanks to her power accelerating, the loss of Setsuna and a prophecy that states such... unless she embraces
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* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil (Played straight with Konoka's rampage three years ago. [[spoiler:then subverted, and trying hard to keep it that way when she takes Setsuna's life.]])
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* NoSneakAttacks (Most of the Gehenna residents can't even detect them until they talk, and yet they shout before attacking. Subverted with Konoka versus Iza and Nami, who give no such warning, but she is able to detect them anyway. Also subverted with Flonne's meeting with Tayuya.)
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* NoSneakAttacks (Most of the Gehenna residents can't couldn't even detect them the Erinyes until they talk, and yet they shout before attacking. Subverted with Konoka versus Iza and Nami, who give no such warning, but she is able to detect them anyway. Also subverted with Flonne's meeting with Tayuya.)
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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler (Konoka isn't established as the main character until midway through the prologue, and summaries never spoiled this until chapter 9.)
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And because the author confirms and understands that LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters is hard to keep up with, here is a useful [[Characters/DisgaeaGehennasHolyQueen character sheet]]. (Note: Under Construction)
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And because the author confirms and understands that LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters is hard to keep up with, here is a useful [[Characters/DisgaeaGehennasHolyQueen character sheet]]. (Note: Under Construction)Construction) Also note that I'm trying to keep character specific tropes to the character page, unless they are plot relevant.
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* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind (Mao and Negi's trip to Konoka's heart, which plays out a lot more like KingdomHearts instead of {{Disgaea3}})
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* TheLegionsOfHell (FallenAngels invading a demon Netherworld?! Unheard of! ...no wait, this is Makai Senki [[strike:Negima]] Disgaea after all.)
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* NoSneakAttacks (Most of the Gehenna residents can't even detect them until they talk, and yet they shout before attacking. Subverted with Konoka versus Iza and Nami, who give no such warning, but she is able to detect them anyway. Also subverted with Flonne's meeting with Tayuya.)
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* CrossoverShip [[spoiler:Hakase X Mao if you can believe it. Hakase point blank says she wants Maos kids.]]
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* CrossoverShip [[spoiler:Hakase X Mao if you can believe it. [[FunnyMoments Hakase point blank says she wants Maos kids.]] ]]]]
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A crossover story between {{Disgaea}} and MahouSenseiNegima, crafted by [[Tropers/Cygnus Cygnus]].
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A crossover story between {{Disgaea}} and MahouSenseiNegima, crafted by [[Tropers/Cygnus [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Tropers/Cygnus Cygnus]].
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A crossover story between {{Disgaea}} and MahouSenseiNegima, crafted by [[Tropers/Cygnus]].
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A crossover story between {{Disgaea}} and MahouSenseiNegima, crafted by [[Tropers/Cygnus]].
[[Tropers/Cygnus Cygnus]].
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A crossover story between {{Disgaea}} and MahouSenseiNegima, crafted by [[Troper/Cygnus]].
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A crossover story between {{Disgaea}} and MahouSenseiNegima, crafted by [[Troper/Cygnus]].
[[Tropers/Cygnus]].
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A crossover story between {{Disgaea}} and MahouSenseiNegima, crafted by {{Cygnus}}.
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A crossover story between {{Disgaea}} and MahouSenseiNegima, crafted by {{Cygnus}}.
[[Troper/Cygnus]].
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* AntiVillain (Mao)
* AxCrazy
* BloodKnight (Priere)
* ChaoticGood (Konoka and nearly all of her recruits/underlings)
* ChaoticNeutral (Cygnus, Mao)
* CrazyAwesome (Stay classy, Mao)
* AxCrazy
* BloodKnight (Priere)
* ChaoticGood (Konoka and nearly all of her recruits/underlings)
* ChaoticNeutral (Cygnus, Mao)
* CrazyAwesome (Stay classy, Mao)
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* DragonWithAnAgenda (Cygnus...)
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* LawfulEvil (The King of Dust, and most of Ars Goetia... but mostly King of Dust)
* LoveFreak (Flonne now shares with Konoka)
* NobleDemon (Like, nearly everybody dood, but mostly Laharl and Raspberyl)
* LoveFreak (Flonne now shares with Konoka)
* NobleDemon (Like, nearly everybody dood, but mostly Laharl and Raspberyl)
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* LoveFreak (Flonne now shares with Konoka)
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And because the author confirms and understands that LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters is hard to keep up with, here is a useful [[Characters/DisgaeaGehennasHolyQueen character sheet]]. (Note: Under Construction)
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds (As of recently, [[spoiler:Konoka may have this fate thanks to her power accelerating, the loss of Setsuna and a prophecy that states such... unless she embraces evil]])
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds (As of recently, [[spoiler:Konoka may have this fate thanks to her power accelerating, the loss of Setsuna and a prophecy that states such... unless she embraces evil]])
<<|TroperWorks|>>evil]])
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Of course, things like that can't go smoothly. Her awakening has attracted the attention of a few interested parties, including some the more famous {{Evil Overlord}}s.
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Of course, things like that can't go smoothly. Her awakening has attracted the attention of a few interested parties, including some the more famous {{Evil Overlord}}s. \n Things get even more complicated as her memories of what happened to her three years ago surface, [[spoiler:and it turns out that she was tortured to a state of madness, and killed Setsuna... under Setsuna's orders.]]
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* DragonWithAnAgenda (Cygnus...)
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*LoveFreakLawfulEvil (The King of Dust, and most of Ars Goetia... but mostly King of Dust)
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds (As of recently, [[spoiler:Konoka may have this fate thanks to her power accelerating, the loss of Setsuna and a prophecy that states such... unless she embraces evil]])