History FanFic / Deserving

22nd Mar '17 10:59:14 AM DustSnitch
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''[[http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600022825 Deserving]]'' by moonofthesea picks up the {{Potterverse}} in the year 1998. The Second Wizarding War is over, and Literature/HarryPotter and friends must decide what to do with the surviving Death Eaters. This being fanfic-world, a marriage law is instituted whereby each "Marked One" must come under the supervision of a "Guide of the Light". Harry sacrifices everything he has to be Guide of the Light to Severus Snape (who in the fic survived ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows Deathly Hallows]]''), and ''Deserving'' tells their story.

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''[[http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600022825 Deserving]]'' by moonofthesea picks up the {{Potterverse}} ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' in the year 1998. The Second Wizarding War is over, and Literature/HarryPotter and friends must decide what to do with the surviving Death Eaters. This being fanfic-world, a marriage law is instituted whereby each "Marked One" must come under the supervision of a "Guide of the Light". Harry sacrifices everything he has to be Guide of the Light to Severus Snape (who in the fic survived ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows Deathly Hallows]]''), and ''Deserving'' tells their story.
3rd Mar '17 1:15:53 PM SeptimusHeap
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''[[http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600022825 Deserving]]'' by moonofthesea picks up the {{Potterverse}} in the year 1998. The Second Wizarding War is over, and Literature/HarryPotter and friends must decide what to do with the surviving Death Eaters. This being fanfic-world, a marriage law is instituted whereby each "Marked One" must come under the supervision of a "Guide of the Light" and bear his child. [[MisterSeahorse (Yes, even if male.)]] Harry sacrifices everything he has to be Guide of the Light to Severus Snape (who in the fic survived ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows Deathly Hallows]]''), and ''Deserving'' tells their story.

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''[[http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600022825 Deserving]]'' by moonofthesea picks up the {{Potterverse}} in the year 1998. The Second Wizarding War is over, and Literature/HarryPotter and friends must decide what to do with the surviving Death Eaters. This being fanfic-world, a marriage law is instituted whereby each "Marked One" must come under the supervision of a "Guide of the Light" and bear his child. [[MisterSeahorse (Yes, even if male.)]] Light". Harry sacrifices everything he has to be Guide of the Light to Severus Snape (who in the fic survived ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows Deathly Hallows]]''), and ''Deserving'' tells their story.
25th Dec '16 7:12:52 AM Theatre_Maven_3695
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''[[http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600022825 Deserving]]'' by moonofthesea picks up the {{Potterverse}} in the year 1998. The Second Wizarding War is over, and Literature/HarryPotter and friends must decide what to do with the surviving Death Eaters. This being fanfic-world, a marriage law is instituted whereby each "Marked One" must come under the supervision of a "Guide of the Light" and bear his child. [[MisterSeahorse (Yes, even if male.)]] Harry sacrifices everything he has to be Guide of the Light to Severus Snape (who in the fic survived ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows Deathly Hallows]]''), and ''Deserving'' tells their story.

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''[[http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600022825 Deserving]]'' by moonofthesea picks up the {{Potterverse}} in the year 1998. The Second Wizarding War is over, and Literature/HarryPotter and friends must decide what to do with the surviving Death Eaters. This being fanfic-world, a marriage law is instituted whereby each "Marked One" must come under the supervision of a "Guide of the Light" and bear his child. [[MisterSeahorse (Yes, even if male.)]] Harry sacrifices everything he has to be Guide of the Light to Severus Snape (who in the fic survived ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows Deathly Hallows]]''), and ''Deserving'' tells their story.
5th Dec '16 6:27:08 PM Xtifr
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* ReactionaryFantasy: Despite being a world in which same-sex and multiple marriage are commonplace (in 1998!) and it's not unremarkable for a child to [[HasTwoMommies have two daddies]], women are still expected to [[StayInTheKitchen defer to their husbands]] and [[MyGirlIsNotASlut purity and chastity are prized above all else]] for young women and {{Bishonen}}. The juxtaposition gets [[http://szaleniec1000.livejournal.com/tag/the%20pansexual%20%2750s quite jarring]].
31st Aug '16 6:05:02 PM nombretomado
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* PurpleProse: To the extent that it's been likened to ''TheEyeOfArgon''. It's practically ultraviolet.

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* PurpleProse: To the extent that it's been likened to ''TheEyeOfArgon''.''Literature/TheEyeOfArgon''. It's practically ultraviolet.
9th Jun '16 1:41:25 PM MagBas
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** [[MarySue Serena]] takes this UpToEleven when she's talking and using controlled wandless magic before her '''first''' birthday.

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** [[MarySue Serena]] Serena takes this UpToEleven when she's talking and using controlled wandless magic before her '''first''' birthday.
9th Jun '16 1:41:00 PM MagBas
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* GodwinsLaw: Chapter 6 has Marked Ones ''explicitly likened to Holocaust victims''; given that "Marked Ones" are ex-Death Eaters, UnfortunateImplications abound.

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* GodwinsLaw: Chapter 6 has Marked Ones ''explicitly likened to Holocaust victims''; given that "Marked Ones" are ex-Death Eaters, UnfortunateImplications abound.victims''.
26th Jul '14 11:09:29 AM MacronNotes
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: [[spoiler:Sin]], which [[FelonyMisdemeanor we're supposed to believe]] is actually a FailOSuckyname.

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* AwesomeMcCoolname: [[spoiler:Sin]], which [[FelonyMisdemeanor we're supposed to believe]] is actually a FailOSuckyname.an AtrociousAlias.
23rd May '14 10:31:56 PM SallyB
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* FanonDiscontinuity: What the author does with Snape's death and the epilogue.
22nd May '14 3:22:13 PM Angeldeb82
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* {{Bishounen}}: Dennis.

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* {{Bishounen}}: {{Bishonen}}: Dennis.



* BlackAndGreyMorality: It's hard to see who the good guys are in a fic where the [[LightIsNotGood "Guides of Light"]] are enslaving, raping and forcibly impregnating people.

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* BlackAndGreyMorality: BlackAndGrayMorality: It's hard to see who the good guys are in a fic where the [[LightIsNotGood "Guides of Light"]] are enslaving, raping and forcibly impregnating people.



* DreamingOfThingsToCome: [[spoiler:Millicent]] gets a dream of [[spoiler:[[MisterSeahorse Snape birthing more kids]]]].



* FanonDisContinuity: What the author does with Snape's death and the epilogue.

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* FanonDisContinuity: FanonDiscontinuity: What the author does with Snape's death and the epilogue.



* HeelRealisation: "When did we become DARK WIZARDS and WITCHES?"

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* HeelRealisation: HeelRealization: "When did we become DARK WIZARDS and WITCHES?"



* InTheBlood: The canonical trend for Hogwarts houses to run in families (a rule with [[http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Sirius_Black notable exceptions]]) is {{flanderise}}d into Harry and Snape's [[MisterSeahorse ass-baby]] having literally a 50/50 chance of being in Slytherin or Gryffindor.

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* InTheBlood: The canonical trend for Hogwarts houses to run in families (a rule with [[http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Sirius_Black notable exceptions]]) is {{flanderise}}d {{flanderi|zation}}sed into Harry and Snape's [[MisterSeahorse ass-baby]] having literally a 50/50 chance of being in Slytherin or Gryffindor.



* PropheticDreams: [[spoiler:Millicent]] gets one of [[spoiler:[[MisterSeahorse Snape birthing more kids]]]].



* ReactionaryFantasy: Despite being a world in which same-sex and multiple marriage are commonplace (in 1998!) and it's not unremarkable for a child to [[HasTwoDaddies have two daddies]], women are still expected to [[StayInTheKitchen defer to their husbands]] and [[MyGirlIsNotASlut purity and chastity are prized above all else]] for young women and {{bishounen}}. The juxtaposition gets [[http://szaleniec1000.livejournal.com/tag/the%20pansexual%20%2750s quite jarring]].

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* ReactionaryFantasy: Despite being a world in which same-sex and multiple marriage are commonplace (in 1998!) and it's not unremarkable for a child to [[HasTwoDaddies [[HasTwoMommies have two daddies]], women are still expected to [[StayInTheKitchen defer to their husbands]] and [[MyGirlIsNotASlut purity and chastity are prized above all else]] for young women and {{bishounen}}.{{Bishonen}}. The juxtaposition gets [[http://szaleniec1000.livejournal.com/tag/the%20pansexual%20%2750s quite jarring]].



* SecondHandStorytelling: Over the course of the story, Harry and Snape [[ComedyOfRemarriage get married twice]], and both times are off-screen despite the [[{{Shipping}} ship]] being ''the entire point of the fic''.

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* SecondHandStorytelling: Over the course of the story, Harry and Snape [[ComedyOfRemarriage get married twice]], and both times are off-screen despite the [[{{Shipping}} ship]] {{ship|ping}} being ''the entire point of the fic''.



* WiseBeyondTheirYears: It comes with the GaryStu territory for Richard, who is fully fluent in LittleProfessorDialogue and offers accurate opinions on relationships and office politics (!) ''before he's three years old''.

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* WiseBeyondTheirYears: It comes with the GaryStu MartyStu territory for Richard, who is fully fluent in LittleProfessorDialogue and offers accurate opinions on relationships and office politics (!) ''before he's three years old''.
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