History FanFic / Deserving

26th Jul '14 11:09:29 AM MacronNotes
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: [[spoiler:Sin]], which [[FelonyMisdemeanor we're supposed to believe]] is actually a FailOSuckyname.

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* AwesomeMcCoolname: [[spoiler:Sin]], which [[FelonyMisdemeanor we're supposed to believe]] is actually a FailOSuckyname.an AtrociousAlias.
23rd May '14 10:31:56 PM SallyB
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* FanonDiscontinuity: What the author does with Snape's death and the epilogue.
22nd May '14 3:22:13 PM Angeldeb82
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* {{Bishounen}}: Dennis.

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* {{Bishounen}}: {{Bishonen}}: Dennis.



* BlackAndGreyMorality: It's hard to see who the good guys are in a fic where the [[LightIsNotGood "Guides of Light"]] are enslaving, raping and forcibly impregnating people.

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* BlackAndGreyMorality: BlackAndGrayMorality: It's hard to see who the good guys are in a fic where the [[LightIsNotGood "Guides of Light"]] are enslaving, raping and forcibly impregnating people.



* DreamingOfThingsToCome: [[spoiler:Millicent]] gets a dream of [[spoiler:[[MisterSeahorse Snape birthing more kids]]]].



* FanonDisContinuity: What the author does with Snape's death and the epilogue.

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* FanonDisContinuity: FanonDiscontinuity: What the author does with Snape's death and the epilogue.



* HeelRealisation: "When did we become DARK WIZARDS and WITCHES?"

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* HeelRealisation: HeelRealization: "When did we become DARK WIZARDS and WITCHES?"



* InTheBlood: The canonical trend for Hogwarts houses to run in families (a rule with [[http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Sirius_Black notable exceptions]]) is {{flanderise}}d into Harry and Snape's [[MisterSeahorse ass-baby]] having literally a 50/50 chance of being in Slytherin or Gryffindor.

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* InTheBlood: The canonical trend for Hogwarts houses to run in families (a rule with [[http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Sirius_Black notable exceptions]]) is {{flanderise}}d {{flanderi|zation}}sed into Harry and Snape's [[MisterSeahorse ass-baby]] having literally a 50/50 chance of being in Slytherin or Gryffindor.



* PropheticDreams: [[spoiler:Millicent]] gets one of [[spoiler:[[MisterSeahorse Snape birthing more kids]]]].



* ReactionaryFantasy: Despite being a world in which same-sex and multiple marriage are commonplace (in 1998!) and it's not unremarkable for a child to [[HasTwoDaddies have two daddies]], women are still expected to [[StayInTheKitchen defer to their husbands]] and [[MyGirlIsNotASlut purity and chastity are prized above all else]] for young women and {{bishounen}}. The juxtaposition gets [[http://szaleniec1000.livejournal.com/tag/the%20pansexual%20%2750s quite jarring]].

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* ReactionaryFantasy: Despite being a world in which same-sex and multiple marriage are commonplace (in 1998!) and it's not unremarkable for a child to [[HasTwoDaddies [[HasTwoMommies have two daddies]], women are still expected to [[StayInTheKitchen defer to their husbands]] and [[MyGirlIsNotASlut purity and chastity are prized above all else]] for young women and {{bishounen}}.{{Bishonen}}. The juxtaposition gets [[http://szaleniec1000.livejournal.com/tag/the%20pansexual%20%2750s quite jarring]].



* SecondHandStorytelling: Over the course of the story, Harry and Snape [[ComedyOfRemarriage get married twice]], and both times are off-screen despite the [[{{Shipping}} ship]] being ''the entire point of the fic''.

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* SecondHandStorytelling: Over the course of the story, Harry and Snape [[ComedyOfRemarriage get married twice]], and both times are off-screen despite the [[{{Shipping}} ship]] {{ship|ping}} being ''the entire point of the fic''.



* WiseBeyondTheirYears: It comes with the GaryStu territory for Richard, who is fully fluent in LittleProfessorDialogue and offers accurate opinions on relationships and office politics (!) ''before he's three years old''.

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* WiseBeyondTheirYears: It comes with the GaryStu MartyStu territory for Richard, who is fully fluent in LittleProfessorDialogue and offers accurate opinions on relationships and office politics (!) ''before he's three years old''.
23rd Nov '13 3:51:36 AM szaleniec1000
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* OffscreenInertia: Severus takes up knitting, but is never shown actually completing anything even though the story spans several years. This led one reviewer to suggest that he was making the [[Series/DoctorWho Fourth Doctor's scarf]].
21st Sep '13 4:02:15 AM Viira
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* XMeetsY: Franchise/HarryPotter and the [[MisterSeahorse Seahorses]] of Literature/{{Gor}}.
** Alternatively, [[Literature/FiftyShadesOfGrey Fifty Shades of]] {{Mpreg}}.
6th Jul '13 12:25:02 AM nombretomado
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''[[http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600022825 Deserving]]'' by moonofthesea picks up the {{Potterverse}} in the year 1998. The Second Wizarding War is over, and Literature/HarryPotter and friends must decide what to do with the surviving Death Eaters. This being fanfic-world, a marriage law is instituted whereby each "Marked One" must come under the supervision of a "Guide of the Light" and bear his child. [[MisterSeahorse (Yes, even if male.)]] Harry sacrifices everything he has to be Guide of the Light to Severus Snape (who in the fic survived ''DeathlyHallows''), and ''Deserving'' tells their story.

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''[[http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600022825 Deserving]]'' by moonofthesea picks up the {{Potterverse}} in the year 1998. The Second Wizarding War is over, and Literature/HarryPotter and friends must decide what to do with the surviving Death Eaters. This being fanfic-world, a marriage law is instituted whereby each "Marked One" must come under the supervision of a "Guide of the Light" and bear his child. [[MisterSeahorse (Yes, even if male.)]] Harry sacrifices everything he has to be Guide of the Light to Severus Snape (who in the fic survived ''DeathlyHallows''), ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows Deathly Hallows]]''), and ''Deserving'' tells their story.



* EverybodyLives: Implied to be the outcome of the Second Wizarding War. Snape and [[spoiler:Vincent Crabbe]] have survived the events of ''DeathlyHallows'', and nobody can see Thestrals, though the latter may just be a minor PlotHole.

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* EverybodyLives: Implied to be the outcome of the Second Wizarding War. Snape and [[spoiler:Vincent Crabbe]] have survived the events of ''DeathlyHallows'', ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows Deathly Hallows]]'', and nobody can see Thestrals, though the latter may just be a minor PlotHole.
5th Jul '13 11:47:38 PM nombretomado
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* NoIndoorVoice: Everyone in the fic spends half their time shouting. They make Harry as of ''OrderOfThePhoenix'' seem calm.

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* NoIndoorVoice: Everyone in the fic spends half their time shouting. They make Harry as of ''OrderOfThePhoenix'' ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheOrderOfThePhoenix Order of the Phoenix]]'' seem calm.
19th Feb '13 6:14:41 AM szaleniec1000
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* DependingOnTheWriter: The beta's disagreements with [=MotS=] herself, both in ideas and writing style, are speculated to be the cause of a lot of the fic's inconsistencies.
8th Feb '13 11:05:30 AM ManCalledTrue
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** FridgeLogic: There's also a blue light when they're born. One wonders how the parents of Muggle-born wizards have never noticed this.
21st Dec '12 11:55:17 AM nombretomado
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''[[http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600022825 Deserving]]'' by moonofthesea picks up the {{Potterverse}} in the year 1998. The Second Wizarding War is over, and HarryPotter and friends must decide what to do with the surviving Death Eaters. This being fanfic-world, a marriage law is instituted whereby each "Marked One" must come under the supervision of a "Guide of the Light" and bear his child. [[MisterSeahorse (Yes, even if male.)]] Harry sacrifices everything he has to be Guide of the Light to Severus Snape (who in the fic survived ''DeathlyHallows''), and ''Deserving'' tells their story.

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''[[http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600022825 Deserving]]'' by moonofthesea picks up the {{Potterverse}} in the year 1998. The Second Wizarding War is over, and HarryPotter Literature/HarryPotter and friends must decide what to do with the surviving Death Eaters. This being fanfic-world, a marriage law is instituted whereby each "Marked One" must come under the supervision of a "Guide of the Light" and bear his child. [[MisterSeahorse (Yes, even if male.)]] Harry sacrifices everything he has to be Guide of the Light to Severus Snape (who in the fic survived ''DeathlyHallows''), and ''Deserving'' tells their story.



* XMeetsY: HarryPotter and the [[MisterSeahorse Seahorses]] of Literature/{{Gor}}.

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* XMeetsY: HarryPotter Franchise/HarryPotter and the [[MisterSeahorse Seahorses]] of Literature/{{Gor}}.
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