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* ActionGirl: Both Tina and Jenna fill this role.
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* BigBad: The Outsider
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* {{Determinator}}: Balto, Tina and Jenna too.
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The tone ranges from comical in places to horrifying in others. The plot is a crossover between the ''WesternAnimation/{{Balto}}'' films and the film adaptations of the DeanKoontz novel ''Watchers''. The placement of the fanfic is between the first and second films, the central point being two visitors from modern day.
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The tone ranges from comical in places to horrifying in others. The plot is a crossover between the ''WesternAnimation/{{Balto}}'' films and the film adaptations of the DeanKoontz Creator/DeanKoontz novel ''Watchers''. The placement of the fanfic is between the first and second films, the central point being two visitors from modern day.
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** She refrences PlanetOfTheApes at the end as well.
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** She refrences PlanetOfTheApes references ''Franchise/PlanetOfTheApes'' at the end as well.
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* TimeyWimeyBall: [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by Tina, when deciding whether or not her time in the past, or telling Balto and Jenna she's from the future, would destroy the universe, do nothing, or completely alter the future. In fact, when she finally returns, she comments she has to go make sure the world isn't [[PlanetOfTheApes ruled by apes or the like]].
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* TimeyWimeyBall: [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by Tina, when deciding whether or not her time in the past, or telling Balto and Jenna she's from the future, would destroy the universe, do nothing, or completely alter the future. In fact, when she finally returns, she comments she has to go make sure the world isn't [[PlanetOfTheApes [[Franchise/PlanetOfTheApes ruled by apes or the like]].
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praise goes in reviews.
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The result retains comical undertones as well as the scares and blood of a horror film. It outdid it's writer's expectations, becoming one of his most popular fanfics. A sequel is still in consideration.
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* BigBadAssWolf: Balto.
* InSpiteOfANail: Despite the Outsider's rampage, Tina's time seems to have no real changes. The only ones are that Balto carried a scar from [[spoiler: when the Outsider stabbed him]] and Steele would carry a limp [[spoiler: from having his leg snapped by the Outsider]]. Both would've been addressed in the sequel.
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* OneManArmy: The Outsider's original intent was to be one of these.
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* OneManArmy: The Outsider's original intent was to be one of these.these so it could replace mundane soldiers in the war on terror.
* NobleWolf: Balto is a heroic half wolf as always.
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* ShoutOut: When explaining she's from the future to Balto and Jenna, Tina refrences Series/DoctorWho.
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**When explaining she's from the future to Balto and Jenna, Tina refrences Series/DoctorWho.
**When explaining she's from the future to Balto and Jenna, Tina refrences Series/DoctorWho.
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* StableTimeLoop: Despite the Outsider's rampage, Tina's time seems to have no real changes. The only real changes are that Balto carried a scar from [[spoiler: when the Outsider stabbed him]] and Steele would carry a limp [[spoiler: from having his leg snapped by the Outsider]]. Both would've been addressed in the sequel.
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* BioAugmentation: [[spoiler: Tina was normaly, until a secret military group altered her to be have more brains than most humans.]]
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* BioAugmentation: [[spoiler: Tina was normaly, a normal dog, until a secret military group altered her to be have more brains than most humans.]]
* BottledHeroicResolve: Tina uses a feature built into the Outsider that allows its HealingFactor to be transmitted to others through its shed skin [[spoiler:to heal Balto after he's beaten nearly to death by the Outsider in their first fight.]] However, the amount of pain it causes almost kills [[spoiler:him]] before the healing completes and thus its not as useful as it could've been. [[spoiler:According to WordOfGod, lingering effects of it combined with HeroicResolve were what let Balto survive being impaled by the Outsider.]]
* BottledHeroicResolve: Tina uses a feature built into the Outsider that allows its HealingFactor to be transmitted to others through its shed skin [[spoiler:to heal Balto after he's beaten nearly to death by the Outsider in their first fight.]] However, the amount of pain it causes almost kills [[spoiler:him]] before the healing completes and thus its not as useful as it could've been. [[spoiler:According to WordOfGod, lingering effects of it combined with HeroicResolve were what let Balto survive being impaled by the Outsider.]]
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* HealingFactor: The Outsider has the ability to regenerate from most damage. Its shed skin can endow others with the ability to regenerate rapidly, but it comes with a massive amount of pain.
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* HealingFactor: The Outsider has the ability to regenerate from most damage. Its shed skin can endow others with the temporary ability to regenerate rapidly, but it comes with a massive amount of pain.
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Nightmare Fuel cleanup; see thread for details
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The tone ranges from comical in places to NightmareFuel in others. The plot is a crossover between the ''WesternAnimation/{{Balto}}'' films and the film adaptations of the DeanKoontz novel ''Watchers''. The placement of the fanfic is between the first and second films, the central point being two visitors from modern day.
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The tone ranges from comical in places to NightmareFuel horrifying in others. The plot is a crossover between the ''WesternAnimation/{{Balto}}'' films and the film adaptations of the DeanKoontz novel ''Watchers''. The placement of the fanfic is between the first and second films, the central point being two visitors from modern day.
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This is a ''{{Balto}}''/''Watchers'' Crossover fanfiction written by Godzillawolf. It can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3937457/1/Balto_Future_Shock here]].
The tone ranges from comical in places to NightmareFuel in others. The plot is a crossover between the ''{{Balto}}'' films and the film adaptations of the DeanKoontz novel ''Watchers''. The placement of the fanfic is between the first and second films, the central point being two visitors from modern day.
The tone ranges from comical in places to NightmareFuel in others. The plot is a crossover between the ''{{Balto}}'' films and the film adaptations of the DeanKoontz novel ''Watchers''. The placement of the fanfic is between the first and second films, the central point being two visitors from modern day.
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This is a ''{{Balto}}''/''Watchers'' ''WesternAnimation/{{Balto}}''/''Watchers'' Crossover fanfiction written by Godzillawolf. It can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3937457/1/Balto_Future_Shock here]].
The tone ranges from comical in places to NightmareFuel in others. The plot is a crossover between the''{{Balto}}'' ''WesternAnimation/{{Balto}}'' films and the film adaptations of the DeanKoontz novel ''Watchers''. The placement of the fanfic is between the first and second films, the central point being two visitors from modern day.
The tone ranges from comical in places to NightmareFuel in others. The plot is a crossover between the
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* EvolutionaryLevels: The Outsider's strongest ability is its ability to adapt to its surroundings by evolving itself. This goes to an extreme when [[spoiler: it evolves into a canine-like creature after its first battle with Balto]].
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* EvolutionaryLevels: EvolutionPowerup: The Outsider's strongest ability is its ability to adapt to its surroundings by evolving itself. This goes to an extreme when [[spoiler: it evolves into a canine-like creature after its first battle with Balto]].
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* NoGender: The Outsider is always refered to as an it, having no gender.
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* KnightOfCerebus: The story is actually pretty normal and lighthearted for most of its openning section... Then the Outsider arrives.
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* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: After the final battle, Tina makes the past characters promise to keep the events a secret. Steele doesn't agree until [[spoiler: he realizes that he was hitting on Balto's ancestor]].
* NighInvulnerability: The Outsider was created to be insanely hard to kill. Not only can it regenerate, but it's skeleton is made of extremely strong metal.
* NighInvulnerability: The Outsider was created to be insanely hard to kill. Not only can it regenerate, but it's skeleton is made of extremely strong metal.
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* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: After the final battle, Tina makes the past characters promise to keep the events a secret. Steele doesn't agree until [[spoiler: he realizes that he was hitting on Balto's ancestor]].
descendant]].
* NighInvulnerability: The Outsider was created to be insanely hard to kill. Not only can it regenerate, butit's its skeleton is made of extremely strong metal.
* NighInvulnerability: The Outsider was created to be insanely hard to kill. Not only can it regenerate, but
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* ShoutOut: When explaining she's from the future to Balto and Jenna, Tina refrences DoctorWho.
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* ShoutOut: When explaining she's from the future to Balto and Jenna, Tina refrences DoctorWho.Series/DoctorWho.
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* HealingFactor: The Outsider has the ability to regenerate from most damage.
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* GoneHorriblyRight: The intent of the Outsider was to be an [[NighInvulnerability unstoppable]] SuperSoldier. They succeeded. Too bad it realized it too.
* HealingFactor: The Outsider has the ability to regenerate from most damage. Its shed skin can endow others with the ability to regenerate rapidly, but it comes with a massive amount of pain.
* HealingFactor: The Outsider has the ability to regenerate from most damage. Its shed skin can endow others with the ability to regenerate rapidly, but it comes with a massive amount of pain.
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* NightmareFuel: The Outsider is a CompleteMonster with retractible claws, a built in thirst for blood, is near impossible to kill, and can enter Tina's dreams and twist them into realistic nightmares.
* OneManArmy: The Outsider's original intent was to be one of these.
* OneWingedAngel: [[spoiler: The Outsider evolves into a faster canine-like form in time for the final battle]].
* OneWingedAngel: [[spoiler: The Outsider evolves into a faster canine-like form in time for the final battle]].
** She refrences PlanetOfTheApes at the end as well.
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* WeWillMeetAgain: The Outsider tells the heroes that its not over after [[spoiler: realizing their's a lit stick of dynamite lodged in its skull and that it's about to die.]]
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* WeWillMeetAgain: The Outsider tells the heroes that its not over after [[spoiler: realizing their's there's a lit stick of dynamite lodged in its skull and that it's about to die.]]