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--> '''Narration:''' All she needed to know, as Jakob put it, was that there ''would'' be an army of 300 men at arms, 100 archers, 50 [[[YouMakeMeSic cavalry]]], [cavalry], 10 flyers, and even 2 mages all prepped and ready to march at the break of dawn.
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'''Azura:''' They died because you ''were'' strong enough, and unwilling to ''act'' with that strength. You wanted to save them, and you failed. Not because you weren't strong enough, but because you were too scared to act. When you got a first glimpse of [[[YouMakeMeSic the]]] inhumanity of the world you went to Yukimura and placed the burden on his shoulders, when the correct course of action would have been to resolve the problem yourself. There were many things you ''could'' have done if you'd cared enough, but the fact of the matter is that you just weren't willing to make a decision on your own. You weren't willing to be unreasonable in your desire to save them.\\
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'''Azura:''' They died because you ''were'' strong enough, and unwilling to ''act'' with that strength. You wanted to save them, and you failed. Not because you weren't strong enough, but because you were too scared to act. When you got a first glimpse of [[[YouMakeMeSic the]]] [the] inhumanity of the world you went to Yukimura and placed the burden on his shoulders, when the correct course of action would have been to resolve the problem yourself. There were many things you ''could'' have done if you'd cared enough, but the fact of the matter is that you just weren't willing to make a decision on your own. You weren't willing to be unreasonable in your desire to save them.\\
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* BadassBeard: Silas starts to grow one out after the Cheve arc.
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* NotSoDifferent: After the battle in Cheve, Corrin starts coming around to Garon's mindset.
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* SurvivalMantra: During a bout of introspection by Hans, he notes that the phrase "one more day" is akin to a prayer for him.
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* RealityEnsues: The author is particularly fond of this brand of drama/comedy (mostly drama).
** Everyone in Silas' original squad thought he was pretty silly for wearing heavy plate armor all the time. Except for when they were ambushed by archers. That armor became pretty useful right then, and the rest of them probably spent their last moments wishing they had the same foresight.
** On the other hand, while armor is great, it won't protect you when you turn your back to a guy with a tome that shoots out fire. As Corrin found out the hard way.
** Subaki, Hana, you get an A for effort. But it doesn't really matter how skilled you are, you are not skilled enough to take on 20+ bandits and expect to get out of that okay.
** Tearing through the local bureaucracy and racial prejudices of the lords is a great way to curry favor with the audience as a ReasonableAuthorityFigure, but as Yukimura later points out, Ryoma's strategy wasn't exactly good for long term war, as proven when [[spoiler:those lords that he dismissed or outright threatened proved that he needed them far more than they needed him]].
** In the April Fool's Day chapter, Corrin dies of alcohol poisoning or an STD before the story can begin due to her... ''[[HardDrinkingPartyGirl vicarious]]'' lifestyle.
** In the same chapter, when Xander murders Garon, Iago appears and points out that nobody will accept a man who just committed regicide as their king, and since the other "claimants" to the throne are all {{Heroic Bastard}}s and [[HappilyAdopted Corrin]], a succession crisis is almost certain.
** [[spoiler:Hinoka]] is killed anti-climatically and completely off screen, showing that anyone can end up dying with little fanfare.
** [[spoiler:Hans]] gets hit with this ''twice'' in the same incident.
*** He finds out the hard way that while UnstoppableRage can give you a power boost, it also causes you to make sloppy tactical decisions that can cost you the fight.
*** He also learns that being a traitor to his country who deserted one of its princesses to be captured by forces of their sworn enemy and overall scumbag won't endear you to its royalty, [[spoiler: as shown when after Leo gets Sakura in his clutches he burns the criminal to death. [[ILied And this is after telling Sakura he'd spare her companions if she surrendered to him]].]]
** Scarlet's force is largely formed from the likes of fishermen with no real experience in battle, and only a small portion of remotely professional Hoshidan troops. Furthermore, the same land was just hit by the plague courtesy of Corrin's army. Naturally, the Nohrian regular army delivers a brutal CurbStompBattle.
** {{Chainmail Bikini}}s are not appropriate attire for military settings. Silas takes one look at Charlotte and orders her to PleasePutSomeClothesOn.
** Shapechangers such as Keaton destroy their clothes when they transform. After a sparring session with Benny, Keaton returns to human form completely naked.
** Getting a TapOnTheHead is ''far'' from harmless. Azura not only vomits and has trouble standing after being knocked out, but also suffers episodes of delirium and disorientation afterwards.
** Everyone in Silas' original squad thought he was pretty silly for wearing heavy plate armor all the time. Except for when they were ambushed by archers. That armor became pretty useful right then, and the rest of them probably spent their last moments wishing they had the same foresight.
** On the other hand, while armor is great, it won't protect you when you turn your back to a guy with a tome that shoots out fire. As Corrin found out the hard way.
** Subaki, Hana, you get an A for effort. But it doesn't really matter how skilled you are, you are not skilled enough to take on 20+ bandits and expect to get out of that okay.
** Tearing through the local bureaucracy and racial prejudices of the lords is a great way to curry favor with the audience as a ReasonableAuthorityFigure, but as Yukimura later points out, Ryoma's strategy wasn't exactly good for long term war, as proven when [[spoiler:those lords that he dismissed or outright threatened proved that he needed them far more than they needed him]].
** In the April Fool's Day chapter, Corrin dies of alcohol poisoning or an STD before the story can begin due to her... ''[[HardDrinkingPartyGirl vicarious]]'' lifestyle.
** In the same chapter, when Xander murders Garon, Iago appears and points out that nobody will accept a man who just committed regicide as their king, and since the other "claimants" to the throne are all {{Heroic Bastard}}s and [[HappilyAdopted Corrin]], a succession crisis is almost certain.
** [[spoiler:Hinoka]] is killed anti-climatically and completely off screen, showing that anyone can end up dying with little fanfare.
** [[spoiler:Hans]] gets hit with this ''twice'' in the same incident.
*** He finds out the hard way that while UnstoppableRage can give you a power boost, it also causes you to make sloppy tactical decisions that can cost you the fight.
*** He also learns that being a traitor to his country who deserted one of its princesses to be captured by forces of their sworn enemy and overall scumbag won't endear you to its royalty, [[spoiler: as shown when after Leo gets Sakura in his clutches he burns the criminal to death. [[ILied And this is after telling Sakura he'd spare her companions if she surrendered to him]].]]
** Scarlet's force is largely formed from the likes of fishermen with no real experience in battle, and only a small portion of remotely professional Hoshidan troops. Furthermore, the same land was just hit by the plague courtesy of Corrin's army. Naturally, the Nohrian regular army delivers a brutal CurbStompBattle.
** {{Chainmail Bikini}}s are not appropriate attire for military settings. Silas takes one look at Charlotte and orders her to PleasePutSomeClothesOn.
** Shapechangers such as Keaton destroy their clothes when they transform. After a sparring session with Benny, Keaton returns to human form completely naked.
** Getting a TapOnTheHead is ''far'' from harmless. Azura not only vomits and has trouble standing after being knocked out, but also suffers episodes of delirium and disorientation afterwards.
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** Everyone in Silas' original squad thought he was pretty silly for wearing heavy plate armor all the time. Except for when they were ambushed by archers. That armor became pretty useful right then, and the rest of them probably spent their last moments wishing they had the same foresight.
** On the other hand, while armor is great, it won't protect you when you turn your back to a guy with a tome that shoots out fire. As Corrin found out the hard way.
** Subaki, Hana, you get an A for effort. But it doesn't really matter how skilled you are, you are not skilled enough to take on 20+ bandits and expect to get out of that okay.
** Tearing through the local bureaucracy and racial prejudices of the lords is a great way to curry favor with the audience as a ReasonableAuthorityFigure, but as Yukimura later points out, Ryoma's strategy wasn't exactly good for long term war, as proven when [[spoiler:those lords that he dismissed or outright threatened proved that he needed them far more than they needed him]].
** In the April Fool's Day chapter, Corrin dies of alcohol poisoning or an STD before the story can begin due to her... ''[[HardDrinkingPartyGirl vicarious]]'' lifestyle.
** In the same chapter, when Xander murders Garon, Iago appears and points out that nobody will accept a man who just committed regicide as their king, and since the other "claimants" to the throne are all {{Heroic Bastard}}s and [[HappilyAdopted Corrin]], a succession crisis is almost certain.
** [[spoiler:Hinoka]] is killed anti-climatically and completely off screen, showing that anyone can end up dying with little fanfare.
** [[spoiler:Hans]] gets hit with this ''twice'' in the same incident.
*** He finds out the hard way that while UnstoppableRage can give you a power boost, it also causes you to make sloppy tactical decisions that can cost you the fight.
*** He also learns that being a traitor to his country who deserted one of its princesses to be captured by forces of their sworn enemy and overall scumbag won't endear you to its royalty, [[spoiler: as shown when after Leo gets Sakura in his clutches he burns the criminal to death. [[ILied And this is after telling Sakura he'd spare her companions if she surrendered to him]].]]
** Scarlet's force is largely formed from the likes of fishermen with no real experience in battle, and only a small portion of remotely professional Hoshidan troops. Furthermore, the same land was just hit by the plague courtesy of Corrin's army. Naturally, the Nohrian regular army delivers a brutal CurbStompBattle.
** {{Chainmail Bikini}}s are not appropriate attire for military settings. Silas takes one look at Charlotte and orders her to PleasePutSomeClothesOn.
** Shapechangers such as Keaton destroy their clothes when they transform. After a sparring session with Benny, Keaton returns to human form completely naked.
** Getting a TapOnTheHead is ''far'' from harmless. Azura not only vomits and has trouble standing after being knocked out, but also suffers episodes of delirium and disorientation afterwards.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: The author is particularly fond of this brand of drama/comedy (mostly drama).
** Everyone in Silas' original squad thought he was pretty silly for wearing heavy plate armor all the time. Except for when they were ambushed by archers. That armor became pretty useful right then, and the rest of them probably spent their last moments wishing they had the same foresight.
** On the other hand, while armor is great, it won't protect you when you turn your back to a guy with a tome that shoots out fire. As Corrin found out the hard way.
** Subaki, Hana, you get an A for effort. But it doesn't really matter how skilled you are, you are not skilled enough to take on 20+ bandits and expect to get out of that okay.
** Tearing through the local bureaucracy and racial prejudices of the lords is a great way to curry favor with the audience as a ReasonableAuthorityFigure, but as Yukimura later points out, Ryoma's strategy wasn't exactly good for long term war, as proven when [[spoiler:those lords that he dismissed or outright threatened proved that he needed them far more than they needed him]].
** In the April Fool's Day chapter, Corrin dies of alcohol poisoning or an STD before the story can begin due to her... ''[[HardDrinkingPartyGirl vicarious]]'' lifestyle.
** In the same chapter, when Xander murders Garon, Iago appears and points out that nobody will accept a man who just committed regicide as their king, and since the other "claimants" to the throne are all {{Heroic Bastard}}s and [[HappilyAdopted Corrin]], a succession crisis is almost certain.
** [[spoiler:Hinoka]] is killed anti-climatically and completely off screen, showing that anyone can end up dying with little fanfare.
** [[spoiler:Hans]] gets hit with this ''twice'' in the same incident.
*** He finds out the hard way that while UnstoppableRage can give you a power boost, it also causes you to make sloppy tactical decisions that can cost you the fight.
*** He also learns that being a traitor to his country who deserted one of its princesses to be captured by forces of their sworn enemy and overall scumbag won't endear you to its royalty, [[spoiler: as shown when after Leo gets Sakura in his clutches he burns the criminal to death. [[ILied And this is after telling Sakura he'd spare her companions if she surrendered to him]].]]
** Scarlet's force is largely formed from the likes of fishermen with no real experience in battle, and only a small portion of remotely professional Hoshidan troops. Furthermore, the same land was just hit by the plague courtesy of Corrin's army. Naturally, the Nohrian regular army delivers a brutal CurbStompBattle.
** {{Chainmail Bikini}}s are not appropriate attire for military settings. Silas takes one look at Charlotte and orders her to PleasePutSomeClothesOn.
** Shapechangers such as Keaton destroy their clothes when they transform. After a sparring session with Benny, Keaton returns to human form completely naked.
** Getting a TapOnTheHead is ''far'' from harmless. Azura not only vomits and has trouble standing after being knocked out, but also suffers episodes of delirium and disorientation afterwards.
** Everyone in Silas' original squad thought he was pretty silly for wearing heavy plate armor all the time. Except for when they were ambushed by archers. That armor became pretty useful right then, and the rest of them probably spent their last moments wishing they had the same foresight.
** On the other hand, while armor is great, it won't protect you when you turn your back to a guy with a tome that shoots out fire. As Corrin found out the hard way.
** Subaki, Hana, you get an A for effort. But it doesn't really matter how skilled you are, you are not skilled enough to take on 20+ bandits and expect to get out of that okay.
** Tearing through the local bureaucracy and racial prejudices of the lords is a great way to curry favor with the audience as a ReasonableAuthorityFigure, but as Yukimura later points out, Ryoma's strategy wasn't exactly good for long term war, as proven when [[spoiler:those lords that he dismissed or outright threatened proved that he needed them far more than they needed him]].
** In the April Fool's Day chapter, Corrin dies of alcohol poisoning or an STD before the story can begin due to her... ''[[HardDrinkingPartyGirl vicarious]]'' lifestyle.
** In the same chapter, when Xander murders Garon, Iago appears and points out that nobody will accept a man who just committed regicide as their king, and since the other "claimants" to the throne are all {{Heroic Bastard}}s and [[HappilyAdopted Corrin]], a succession crisis is almost certain.
** [[spoiler:Hinoka]] is killed anti-climatically and completely off screen, showing that anyone can end up dying with little fanfare.
** [[spoiler:Hans]] gets hit with this ''twice'' in the same incident.
*** He finds out the hard way that while UnstoppableRage can give you a power boost, it also causes you to make sloppy tactical decisions that can cost you the fight.
*** He also learns that being a traitor to his country who deserted one of its princesses to be captured by forces of their sworn enemy and overall scumbag won't endear you to its royalty, [[spoiler: as shown when after Leo gets Sakura in his clutches he burns the criminal to death. [[ILied And this is after telling Sakura he'd spare her companions if she surrendered to him]].]]
** Scarlet's force is largely formed from the likes of fishermen with no real experience in battle, and only a small portion of remotely professional Hoshidan troops. Furthermore, the same land was just hit by the plague courtesy of Corrin's army. Naturally, the Nohrian regular army delivers a brutal CurbStompBattle.
** {{Chainmail Bikini}}s are not appropriate attire for military settings. Silas takes one look at Charlotte and orders her to PleasePutSomeClothesOn.
** Shapechangers such as Keaton destroy their clothes when they transform. After a sparring session with Benny, Keaton returns to human form completely naked.
** Getting a TapOnTheHead is ''far'' from harmless. Azura not only vomits and has trouble standing after being knocked out, but also suffers episodes of delirium and disorientation afterwards.
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* MyGreatestFailure: The chapter 45 notes reveal that [[spoiler:Garon saw his kidnapping of Corrin as this. Having been close to making peace with Hoshido, only to throw it away in a vain attempt to win the war by kidnapping her.]]
* MysticalPlague: Odin sends one of these to Cheve, wiping out most of their population [[spoiler:and Oboro]].
* MysticalPlague: Odin sends one of these to Cheve, wiping out most of their population [[spoiler:and Oboro]].
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* MyGreatestFailure: The chapter 45 notes reveal that [[spoiler:Garon saw his kidnapping of Corrin as this. Having been close to He was mere days away from making peace with Hoshido, only to throw but threw it all away in a vain attempt to win the war by kidnapping her.]]
* MysticalPlague: Odin sends one of these to Cheve, wiping out most of their population [[spoiler:and Oboro]]. [[spoiler: It is later revealed that the plague was only mean to subdue its victims, and that it was a miscalculation on Odin's part that led to it becoming lethal.]]
* MysticalPlague: Odin sends one of these to Cheve, wiping out most of their population [[spoiler:and Oboro]]. [[spoiler: It is later revealed that the plague was only mean to subdue its victims, and that it was a miscalculation on Odin's part that led to it becoming lethal.]]
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* BrokenPedestal: Silas admired Corrin ever since she was nice to him when they were kids, and was even willing to look past all of her more unsavory qualities she'd gained since then. This all ends after the battle at Chevois.
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* BrokenPedestal: Silas admired Corrin ever since she was nice to him when they were kids, and was even willing to look past all of her the more unsavory qualities she'd gained since then. This all ends after the battle at Chevois.
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* CareerEndingInjury: The Chapter 45 notes state that Kagero would have suffered injuries that she never fully recovered from, and retire from field work to teach the next generation of Shinobi.
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** [[spoiler: Xander and Sakura would've gotten married and became King and Queen of Nohr and its conquered Hoshidan provinces. Xander would have to deal with the corruption within Nohr and the lingering hatred towards the monarchy following his father's draconian rule, while Sakura worked to ease the tensions between the Hoshidans and Nohrians with Mozu becoming her bodyguard.]]
** [[spoiler: As for the other royal siblings: Camilla and Leo would've helped Xander administer his rule while Elise moved to Hoshido and gained a OneHundredPercentAdorationRating among Norhians and Hoshidans alike. Hinoka and Takumi would've been permanently scared after being mind controlled by Gunter and be left as [[EmptyShell Empty Shells]]. Sakura would visit them regularly but the two would never fully recover.]]
** [[spoiler: Silas and Charlotte would've gotten married, bought a house in Hoshido and had a child, with Benny becoming the godfather.]]
** [[spoiler: Laslow and Soleil would have remained oblivious to their relationship and never discovered that they were father and daughter.]]
** [[spoiler: Niles would have remained by Leo's side and continued doing his dirty work while Odin left and began WanderingTheEarth.]]
** [[spoiler: Saizo would have returned home and became head of his clan while Kagero retired from field work and began instructing future Shinobi following her CareerEndingInjury.]]
** [[spoiler: As for the other royal siblings: Camilla and Leo would've helped Xander administer his rule while Elise moved to Hoshido and gained a OneHundredPercentAdorationRating among Norhians and Hoshidans alike. Hinoka and Takumi would've been permanently scared after being mind controlled by Gunter and be left as [[EmptyShell Empty Shells]]. Sakura would visit them regularly but the two would never fully recover.]]
** [[spoiler: Silas and Charlotte would've gotten married, bought a house in Hoshido and had a child, with Benny becoming the godfather.]]
** [[spoiler: Laslow and Soleil would have remained oblivious to their relationship and never discovered that they were father and daughter.]]
** [[spoiler: Niles would have remained by Leo's side and continued doing his dirty work while Odin left and began WanderingTheEarth.]]
** [[spoiler: Saizo would have returned home and became head of his clan while Kagero retired from field work and began instructing future Shinobi following her CareerEndingInjury.]]
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** Getting a TapOnTheHead is ''far'' from harmless. Azura not only vomits and has trouble standing after being knocked out, but also suffers episodes of delirium and disorientation afterwards.
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* AnyoneCanDie: Would it be ''Fire Emblem'' otherwise? So far, not counting people who died in the original game up to this point, [[spoiler: [[OffWithHisHead Rinkah, Kaze]], [[InTheBack Lilith]], [[{{Patricide}} Kilma]], [[DyingDeclarationOfHate Flora]], [[BolivianArmyEnding Hana, Subaki]], [[KilledOffscreen Hinoka]], [[SlashedThroat Selena]], [[KillItWithFire Hans]], and [[MysticalPlague Oboro]]]] are all dead, and the story has only reached the original Chapter ''13''.
** The Chapter 45 notes state that [[spoiler:Garon, Ryoma, Gunter, Nyx, and even Corrin]] would've died during the story.
** The Chapter 45 notes state that [[spoiler:Garon, Ryoma, Gunter, Nyx, and even Corrin]] would've died during the story.
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* AnyoneCanDie: Would it be ''Fire Emblem'' otherwise? So far, By the time the story was declared dead, not counting people who died in the original game up to this point, [[spoiler: [[OffWithHisHead Rinkah, Kaze]], [[InTheBack Lilith]], [[{{Patricide}} Kilma]], [[DyingDeclarationOfHate Flora]], [[BolivianArmyEnding Hana, Subaki]], [[KilledOffscreen Hinoka]], Hinoka]] (although it was intended for her to turn out to be NotQuiteDead), [[SlashedThroat Selena]], [[KillItWithFire Hans]], and [[MysticalPlague Oboro]]]] are all dead, and kicked the story has only reached the original Chapter ''13''.
**bucket. The Chapter 45 notes state that [[spoiler:Garon, Ryoma, Gunter, Nyx, and even Corrin]] would've died during the story.
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* CareerEndingInjury: The Chapter 45 notes state that Kagero would have suffered injuries that she never fully recovered from, and retire from field work to teach the next generation of Shinobi.
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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: The Chapter 45 notes end with a summary and explanation of what would have become of all the characters after the story's intended ending.
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* MyGreatestFailure: The chapter 45 notes reveal that [[spoiler:Garon saw his kidnapping of Corrin as this. Having been close to making peace with Hoshido, only to throw it away in a vain attempt to win the war by kidnapping her.]]
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* TheGreatestStoryNeverTold: [[spoiler: By the end of the story, the only one who knows the true cause of the Dark Sky, the origin of the war, and what brought it to an end is Odin.]]
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* AdaptationalVillainy: According to the Chapter 45 notes, [[spoiler:Gunter was meant to be revealed as the BigBad, who was orchestrating the conflict as part of a 10,000 year revenge plot]].
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Rinkah, Kaze, Kilma, Hana, Subaki, and Hinoka]] all play this straight. [[spoiler:Lilith, Flora, Hans, and Oboro]] downplay it by way of dying earlier than they did in canon, while [[spoiler:Flora, Oboro, and Selena]] downplay it by explicitly dying here when their deaths were optional in canon.
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* DeathByAdaptation: DeathByAdaptation:
** [[spoiler:Rinkah, Kaze, Kilma, Hana, Subaki, and Hinoka]] all play this straight. [[spoiler:Lilith, Flora, Hans, and Oboro]] downplay it by way of dying earlier than they did in canon, while [[spoiler:Flora, Oboro, and Selena]] downplay it by explicitly dying here when their deaths were optional incanon.canon.
** According to the Chapter 45 notes, [[spoiler:Beruka, Corrin, Gunter, and Nyx]] were all planned to die as the story progressed.
* DecompositeCharacter: According to the Chapter 45 notes, [[spoiler:Anankos actually ''does'' exist in the story; his name is given to Nyx while his manipulation of the war and BigBad status are given to Gunter]].
** [[spoiler:Rinkah, Kaze, Kilma, Hana, Subaki, and Hinoka]] all play this straight. [[spoiler:Lilith, Flora, Hans, and Oboro]] downplay it by way of dying earlier than they did in canon, while [[spoiler:Flora, Oboro, and Selena]] downplay it by explicitly dying here when their deaths were optional in
** According to the Chapter 45 notes, [[spoiler:Beruka, Corrin, Gunter, and Nyx]] were all planned to die as the story progressed.
* DecompositeCharacter: According to the Chapter 45 notes, [[spoiler:Anankos actually ''does'' exist in the story; his name is given to Nyx while his manipulation of the war and BigBad status are given to Gunter]].
* DecoyProtagonist: According to the Chapter 45 notes, [[spoiler:Corrin would have died in Mokushu and Nyx, Xander, and Sakura would have driven the story forward from then on]].
* OfficialCouple: According to the Chapter 45 notes, [[spoiler:Xander would have married Sakura]] and [[spoiler:Silas would have married Charlotte]].
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Played with by Reina. In the original game, her fate after the battle in Cheve is left ambiguous, as she never reappears after Chapter 13. Here, she does not take part in the battle and is clearly alive afterward.
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** Played with by Reina. In the original game, her fate after the battle in Cheve is left ambiguous, as she never reappears after Chapter 13. Here, she does not take part in the battle and is clearly aliveafterward.afterward.
** According to the Chapter 45 notes, [[spoiler:Takumi, Saizo, Kagero, and Kaden]] would have all survived the story.
** Played with by Reina. In the original game, her fate after the battle in Cheve is left ambiguous, as she never reappears after Chapter 13. Here, she does not take part in the battle and is clearly alive
** According to the Chapter 45 notes, [[spoiler:Takumi, Saizo, Kagero, and Kaden]] would have all survived the story.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11962940/1/A-Brighter-Dark A Brighter Dark]]'' is a ''VideoGame/FireEmblemFates'' story by a fanfiction writer going by the username [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3371139/DeathDealer-Inc DeathDealer Inc]] that acts as a retelling of the ''Conquest'' storyline of the original game, with several noticeable differences.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11962940/1/A-Brighter-Dark A Brighter Dark]]'' is a {{dead|Fic}} ''VideoGame/FireEmblemFates'' story by a fanfiction writer going by the username [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3371139/DeathDealer-Inc DeathDealer Inc]] that acts as a retelling of the ''Conquest'' storyline of the original game, with several noticeable differences.
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* DeadFic: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11962940/45/A-Brighter-Dark The story was formally cancelled on 3/13/2021]], with the author's notes detailing what was planned for the future.
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* AdaptationInducedPlotHole: With Anankos completely AdaptedOut, there's not really an explanation for why Nohr's skies are constantly covered in clouds. It takes until Chapter 40 to give an Anankos-free explanation for Nohr's weather: Nyx speculates that long ago, someone experimented with dark magic which backfired on not just the user but Nohr itself.
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** Odin misjuges the amount of ingredients needed for his spell at Cheve. As a result, the magic doesn't put the rebels and Hoshidans to sleep like he intended, but unleashes a MysticalPlague on them instead.
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** Odin misjuges [[spoiler:misjudges the amount of ingredients needed for his spell at Cheve. As a result, the magic doesn't put the rebels and Hoshidans to sleep like he intended, but unleashes a MysticalPlague on them instead.]]
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* RestoredMyFaithInHumanity: Kaden is generally very distrustful of humans, but Ryoma having the humility to visit his land and basically beg for his help in good faith convinces him to throw his lot in with Hoshido.
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* CryingLittleKid: Mozu is this when Sakura first finds her. Being the sole survivor of RapePillageAndBurn will do that to you.
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* KidAmidTheChaos: Mozu is this when Sakura first finds her. Being the sole survivor of RapePillageAndBurn will do that to you.
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* BrokenPedestal: Silas admired Corrin ever since she was nice to him when they were kids, and was even willing to look past all of her more unsavory qualities she'd gained since then. This all ends after the battle at Chevois.
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** Nyx warns Corrin that anyone performing dark magic runs a very serious risk this. While there are no limits to what dark magic can achieve, there is always a price that must be paid. Failure to pay this price will result in the magic backfiring on the user.
** In the first battle of the war, Leo and other dark mages perform a ritual to devastate the Hoshidans. However, Saizo and Kagero discover what they're planning and set fire to their camp to ruin it.
** Odin misjuges the amount of ingredients needed for his spell at Cheve. As a result, the magic doesn't put the rebels and Hoshidans to sleep like he intended, but unleashes a MysticalPlague on them instead.
** Nyx warns Corrin that anyone performing dark magic runs a very serious risk this. While there are no limits to what dark magic can achieve, there is always a price that must be paid. Failure to pay this price will result in the magic backfiring on the user.
** In the first battle of the war, Leo and other dark mages perform a ritual to devastate the Hoshidans. However, Saizo and Kagero discover what they're planning and set fire to their camp to ruin it.
** Odin misjuges the amount of ingredients needed for his spell at Cheve. As a result, the magic doesn't put the rebels and Hoshidans to sleep like he intended, but unleashes a MysticalPlague on them instead.
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** Kagero describes assassinations as such. Since any plan can be ruined by the slightest change in the target's behavior, she prefers at least a month's time to gather information and prepare before attempting one, and even then it's still risky.
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** Kagero describes assassinations as such. Since any plan It can take weeks for an assassin to gather all the information they need to come up with a plan. And it can all be ruined by the slightest change in the target's behavior, she behavior. Kagero prefers to have at least a month's time one month to gather information and prepare before attempting one, prepare, and even then it's still quite risky.
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* MoeGreeneSpecial: This happens to [[spoiler:Corrin]] during the battle at Fort Dragonfall.
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** Leo believes this[[spoiler: is what's happening to him after he sets fire to the Divine Dragon Forest as everything seems to stop them from escaping until Mozu finally kills him.]]
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** Leo believes this[[spoiler: this [[spoiler: is what's happening to him after he sets fire to the Divine Dragon Forest as everything seems to stop them from escaping until Mozu finally kills shanks him.]]
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** Chapter 43. [[spoiler:Leo's attempt to kill Mozu in the Divine Dragon Forest results in the forest catching aflame and gives her a chance to stab him and rescue Sakura, which she promptly takes. Likewise, Garon is attacked by members of the Ice Tribe and decides to go through with wiping them out, which solidifies Azura's resolve to kill him.]] This was also real life wham episode, as well. The chapter was posted in May of 2020, while the chapter before it was posted in February of 2019. Most people, author included, believed the story to be dead, making many surprised to see this appear.
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** Chapter 43. [[spoiler:Leo's attempt to kill Mozu in the Divine Dragon Forest results in the forest catching aflame and gives her a chance to stab him and rescue Sakura, which she promptly takes. Likewise, Garon is attacked by members of the Ice Tribe and decides to go through with wiping them out, which solidifies Azura's resolve to kill him.]] This was also real life wham episode, as well. The chapter was posted in May of 2020, while the chapter before it was posted in February of 2019. Most people, author included, believed the story to be dead, making many surprised to see this appear. ]]
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** Kagero describes assassinations as such. Since any plan can be ruined by the slightest change in the target's behavior. She prefers at least a month's time to gather information and prepare before attempting one, and even then it's still risky.
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** Kagero describes assassinations as such. Since any plan can be ruined by the slightest change in the target's behavior. She behavior, she prefers at least a month's time to gather information and prepare before attempting one, and even then it's still risky.
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** Kagero describes assassinations as such since any plan can be ruined by the slightest change in the target's behavior. She prefers at least a month's time to prepare and even then it's risky.
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** Kagero describes assassinations as such since such. Since any plan can be ruined by the slightest change in the target's behavior. She prefers at least a month's time to gather information and prepare before attempting one, and even then it's still risky.
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** When Corrin asks Beruka why she didn't bring her Wyvern after the battle with the Ice Tribe, she explains that wouldn't have actually done much good in that situation.
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** When Corrin asks Beruka why she didn't bring her Wyvern after the battle with the Ice Tribe, she explains that it wouldn't have actually done much good in that situation.
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* MuggedForDisguise: Once she has him at knife point, Corrin forces the Hoshidan prison guard who is watching her to strip so she can use his disguise to escape.
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* MuggedForDisguise: Once Corrin does this to the prison guard who was watching her once she has him at knife point, Corrin forces the Hoshidan prison guard who is watching her to strip so she can use his disguise to escape.point.
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* CurbStompBattle: The "battle" at Cheve lasts twelve minutes due to the enemy being weakened by Odin's MysticalPlague.
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* CurbStompBattle: CurbStompBattle:
** In the opening chapter, Corrin challenges Hans and another prisoner to try and kill her so she can practice against genuine opponents. She cuts the first man down with such ease that Hans gives up without even trying.
** The "battle" at Cheve lasts twelve minutes due to the enemy being weakened by Odin's MysticalPlague.
** In the opening chapter, Corrin challenges Hans and another prisoner to try and kill her so she can practice against genuine opponents. She cuts the first man down with such ease that Hans gives up without even trying.
** The "battle" at Cheve lasts twelve minutes due to the enemy being weakened by Odin's MysticalPlague.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Beruka inflicts one on Kagero for [[spoiler:murdering Selena]].
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** Saizo gives one to Corrin after [[spoiler:she tells him that she killed his brother Kaze.]]
** Beruka inflicts one on Kagero for [[spoiler:murdering Selena]].
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** Beruka inflicts one on Kagero for [[spoiler:murdering Selena]].
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* RewardedAsATraitorDeserves: Garon orders Corrin to conquer [[spoiler:one of the provinces which seceded from Hoshido]] to send a message before he goes to negotiate with the ones offering an alliance.
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* ScrewTheRulesImBeautiful: Charlotte was always able to get her way around the men and officers thanks to her looks. However, this isn't the case with Silas, and she is forced to ditch her {{Stripperific}} outfit and follow the dress code, much to her chagrin.
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** Chapter 43. [[spoiler:Leo's attempt to kill Mozu in the Divine Dragon Forest results in the forest catching aflame and gives her a chance to stab him and rescue Sakura, which she promptly takes. Likewise, Garon is attacked by members of the Ice Tribe and decides to go through with wiping them out, which solidifies Azura's resolve to kill him.]]
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** Chapter 43. [[spoiler:Leo's attempt to kill Mozu in the Divine Dragon Forest results in the forest catching aflame and gives her a chance to stab him and rescue Sakura, which she promptly takes. Likewise, Garon is attacked by members of the Ice Tribe and decides to go through with wiping them out, which solidifies Azura's resolve to kill him.]]
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** Leo believes this[[spoiler: is what's happening to him after he sets fire to the Divine Dragon Forest as everything seems to stop them from escaping until Mozu finally kills him.]]
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** Mozu goes on one after [[spoiler:Leo kills Hans, eventually culminating in her stabbing him in the back.]]
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Beginning on May 24th, the story is still ongoing and is typically updated at least once a month.
