History DethroningMoment / FanFic

11th Jan '17 11:38:00 PM Midna
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* @/{{Korodzik}}: The ''My Little Pony'' fanfic ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/27033/of-challenges-and-kisses Of Challenges and Kisses]]'' begins as an adorable, humorous and very promising story about Featherweight's awkward school crush. Then, however, the author apparently decided this wasn't interesting enough and proceeded to insert raunchy jokes about sex toys and genitals... culminating in the Dethroning Moment where, out of the blue, Twilight Sparkle and Cherilee have almost on-screen lesbian sex while Featherweight is watching. How in the world could anyone think it a good idea to turn a perfectly good, cute story into a crass sex comedy without warning?

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* @/{{Korodzik}}: The ''My Little Pony'' fanfic ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/27033/of-challenges-and-kisses Of Challenges and Kisses]]'' begins as an adorable, humorous and very promising story about Featherweight's awkward school crush. Then, however, the author apparently decided this wasn't interesting enough and proceeded to insert raunchy jokes about sex toys and genitals... culminating in the Dethroning Moment where, out of the blue, Twilight Sparkle and Cherilee Cheerilee have almost on-screen lesbian sex while Featherweight is watching. How in the world could anyone think it a good idea to turn a perfectly good, cute story into a crass sex comedy without warning?



* ''Fanfic/CatTales'': "Pussywhipped". It was mildly amusing when Chris Dee took a shot at Frank Miller earlier in the fic. Okay, you don't like the idea of Catwoman as a prostitute, neither does DC. Less so when she devotes an entire story just to humiliating and destroying the reputation of both the in-universe version of Miller - cleverly disguised by calling him "F. Miller"-and a few other writers, as well as people who like said writers. It comes off as rather petty and self indulgent (especially when one of the complaints is basically the writer going "I don't like that ship, even if it is canonical"), and culminates in Batman personally delivering an AuthorTract to Miller, after the aforementioned public humiliation, and telling him to get out of town. Not a single person, in the Rogues, the Bat-Family, or the wider superhero community, so much as says "this might be going a bit far", and we learn about Miller almost entirely from Selina's perspective, including a monologue about how the portrayals of Cleopatra as a promiscuous woman were the result of historians afraid of her sexuality, [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything wink, wink]]. -Rebu
** PS; one of the things mentioned is that F. Miller's "Unauthorized Biography" of Catwoman has Batman wielding a gun and killing people. Which Batman, originally, did do. Normally, it'd be an amusing MythologyGag, but here it comes off as blaming Miller for something that wasn't his fault. [[note]]Batman does use a gun briefly in TDKR...to save the life of someone being held hostage. It's not clear whether he actually kills the hostage-taker. The only other time he uses a gun in that story is in order to fire a tightrope line. Eventually, he says the Sons of Batman will not use guns, period.[[/note]]

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* ''Fanfic/CatTales'': Rebu: ''Fanfic/CatTales'', "Pussywhipped". It was mildly amusing when Chris Dee took a shot at Frank Miller earlier in the fic. Okay, you don't like the idea of Catwoman as a prostitute, neither does DC. Less so when she devotes an entire story just to humiliating and destroying the reputation of both the in-universe version of Miller - cleverly disguised by calling him "F. Miller"-and a few other writers, as well as people who like said writers. It comes off as rather petty and self indulgent (especially when one of the complaints is basically the writer going "I don't like that ship, even if it is canonical"), and culminates in Batman personally delivering an AuthorTract to Miller, after the aforementioned public humiliation, and telling him to get out of town. Not a single person, in the Rogues, the Bat-Family, or the wider superhero community, so much as says "this might be going a bit far", and we learn about Miller almost entirely from Selina's perspective, including a monologue about how the portrayals of Cleopatra as a promiscuous woman were the result of historians afraid of her sexuality, [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything wink, wink]]. -Rebu
** PS; one of the things mentioned is that F. Miller's "Unauthorized Biography" of Catwoman has Batman wielding a gun and killing people. Which Batman, originally, did do. Normally, it'd be an amusing MythologyGag, but here it comes off as blaming Miller for something that wasn't his fault. [[note]]Batman does use a gun briefly in TDKR...to save the life of someone being held hostage. It's not clear whether he actually kills the hostage-taker. The only other time he uses a gun in that story is in order to fire a tightrope line. Eventually, he says the Sons of Batman will not use guns, period.[[/note]]
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* [=InTheGallbladder=]: I loved ''Overmyth.'' Watching [=ReadingForever=]'s OC Patta grow over the course of the story was not just riveting, but it taught me a few things about myself as well. Plus, I just plain like True Pacifist-end {{Fix Fic}}s. Which is why it's all the more vexing that the story ends on the limpest excuse for a SequelHook ever: Early in the last chapter, [[spoiler:another OC, with no foreshadowing, comes quite literally out of nowhere (which is where Patta happens to be at the time). She describes herself as being "from a higher plane of existence" than all prior established characters, canon and otherwise, and proudly takes credit for setting the game's canon in motion by invoking the DespairEventHorizon towards Frisk. She's outright contemptuous of Patta, and this shows in everything she does, down to whipping out a piece of never-before-mentioned {{Magitek}}; it bluntly declares that the one thing he is still physically capable of doing is, and never wasn't, a totally doomed effort. A passage of blatant exposition describes this as an instance of OOCIsSeriousBusiness.]] This is somehow supposed to make me want to look at [=ReadingForever=]'s forthcoming ''Undertale''[=/=]''Persona'' crossover, or anything they may ever write afterwards, for that matter.
* "[[https://www.reddit.com/r/shortscarystories/comments/39s9fk/mothers_lament_disney_challenge/ Mother's Lament]]", a short ''Disney/OneHundredAndOneDalmatians'' DarkFic on Reddit. To make a long story short, it's a DeconstructionFic meant to show how horrific it would be if a dog gave birth to 101 puppies in real life. The problem? [[NightmareRetardant The entire premise fails]] when you realize that anyone who's [[CowboyBebopAtHisComputer actually watched the movie]] knows that Perdita [[CriticalResearchFailure only gives birth to fifteen puppies]], [[CommonKnowledge and the others were rescued from Cruella]]. Indeed, the author [[CreatorsApathy admits in the comments]] that it's been awhile since they watched the movie. Even so, couldn't you have at least checked Wikipedia, IMDb, or this very site? A simple check of one of those sources would have clarified it.

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* [=InTheGallbladder=]: I loved ''Overmyth.'' Watching [=ReadingForever=]'s OC Patta grow over the course of the story was not just riveting, but it taught me a few things about myself as well. Plus, I just plain like True Pacifist-end {{Fix Fic}}s. Which is why it's all the more vexing that the story ends on the limpest excuse for a SequelHook ever: Early in the last chapter, [[spoiler:another OC, with no foreshadowing, comes quite literally out of nowhere (which is where Patta happens to be at the time). She describes herself as being "from a higher plane of existence" than all prior established characters, canon and otherwise, and proudly takes credit for setting the game's canon in motion by invoking the DespairEventHorizon towards Frisk. She's outright contemptuous of Patta, and this shows in everything she does, down to whipping out a piece of never-before-mentioned {{Magitek}}; it bluntly declares that the one thing he is still physically capable of doing is, and never wasn't, a totally doomed effort. A passage of blatant exposition describes this as an instance of OOCIsSeriousBusiness.]] This is somehow supposed to make me want to look at [=ReadingForever=]'s forthcoming ''Undertale''[=/=]''Persona'' crossover, or anything they may ever write afterwards, for that matter.
* "[[https://www.reddit.com/r/shortscarystories/comments/39s9fk/mothers_lament_disney_challenge/ Mother's Lament]]", a short ''Disney/OneHundredAndOneDalmatians'' DarkFic on Reddit. To make a long story short, it's a DeconstructionFic meant to show how horrific it would be if a dog gave birth to 101 puppies in real life. The problem? [[NightmareRetardant The entire premise fails]] when you realize that anyone who's [[CowboyBebopAtHisComputer actually watched the movie]] knows that Perdita [[CriticalResearchFailure only gives birth to fifteen puppies]], [[CommonKnowledge and the others were rescued from Cruella]]. Indeed, the author [[CreatorsApathy admits in the comments]] that it's been awhile since they watched the movie. Even so, couldn't you have at least checked Wikipedia, IMDb, or this very site? A simple check of one of those sources would have clarified it.
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8th Jan '17 9:54:31 AM nombretomado
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* Troper/{{kablammin45}}: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6272222/10/Kingdom_Hearts_An_Ed_Edd_n_Eddy_Story This]] otherwise cool fanfic about ''WesternAnimation/EdEddNEddy'' in KingdomHearts has the chapter in the link, which midway through, the world of JohnnyTest blown up. Call it a CrowningMomentOfAwesome, but I'm pretty much neutral to that series, and with the lack of angst from the good guys, as well as some mean spirited mockery at some poor dude who wanted Johnny in it, for me it kinda crossed the line btween CMOA to DudeNotFunny.

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* Troper/{{kablammin45}}: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6272222/10/Kingdom_Hearts_An_Ed_Edd_n_Eddy_Story This]] otherwise cool fanfic about ''WesternAnimation/EdEddNEddy'' in KingdomHearts has the chapter in the link, which midway through, the world of JohnnyTest WesternAnimation/JohnnyTest blown up. Call it a CrowningMomentOfAwesome, but I'm pretty much neutral to that series, and with the lack of angst from the good guys, as well as some mean spirited mockery at some poor dude who wanted Johnny in it, for me it kinda crossed the line btween CMOA to DudeNotFunny.
3rd Jan '17 10:12:56 PM SenorCornholio
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* SenorCornholio: Since [[Fanfic/MyLittleUnicorn My Little Unicorn]] already has its own page, let's talk about DakariKingMykan's other crowning achievement, [[Fanfic/TheEndOfEnds The End of Ends]]. It's exactly as much of a wangst-ridden [[AuthorTract Author Tract]] as you would expect, and there are plenty of moments to choose from. I could have put [[BigBad Count Logan's]] ([[TheUnreveal actually Beast Boy's]]) reasons for blowing up Tamaran being that he was upset that Starfire and Robin got together while he didn't get back with Terra, but I think there's a moment that's far worse. A fair warning: this one's slightly going into meta territory. At the end, Logan performs a [[HeelFaceTurn heel-face turn]] and helps defeat [[TheStarscream Dr. Beljar]]...[[DroppedABridgeOnHim and then Logan dies]]. After that fact, some fans (yes, this fic actually has fans) were sad and upset because of his death, to which Mykan responded with his reasoning: [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer because Terra had left him in "Things Change", he is doomed to die even if he is redeemed and Terra gets back with him!]] Let's ignore the fact that Logan was an outright terrible VillainProtagonist to begin with and that plenty of his actions in the story, even as Beast Boy, fall under DesignatedHero more so than his [[WesternAnimation/TeenTitansGo TTG Counterpart]]; Mykan believes he should die because Terra dumped him, and not even her becoming a Titan again and actually coming back to Logan can change that And for the record, this was a fan of Logan that Mykan was talking to in the first place, that he was being so matter-of-fact towards; this was someone who was probably around 12 or so, being told by this person that "people die when fate is cruel to them". Even as someone who finds this fic to be pretty pathetic and Logan to be a badly written character, I can honestly say that this guy's reasoning is...just no, Mykan...

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* SenorCornholio: Since [[Fanfic/MyLittleUnicorn My Little Unicorn]] already has its own page, let's talk about DakariKingMykan's other crowning achievement, [[Fanfic/TheEndOfEnds The End of Ends]]. It's exactly as much of a wangst-ridden [[AuthorTract Author Tract]] as you would expect, and there are plenty of moments to choose from. I could have put [[BigBad Count Logan's]] ([[TheUnreveal actually Beast Boy's]]) reasons for blowing up Tamaran being that he was upset that Starfire and Robin got together while he didn't get back with Terra, but I think there's a moment that's far worse. A fair warning: this one's slightly going into meta territory. At the end, Logan performs a [[HeelFaceTurn heel-face turn]] and helps defeat [[TheStarscream Dr. Beljar]]...[[DroppedABridgeOnHim and then Logan dies]]. After that fact, some fans (yes, this fic actually has fans) were sad and upset because of his death, to which Mykan responded with his reasoning: [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer because Terra had left him in "Things Change", he is doomed to die even if he is redeemed and Terra gets back with him!]] Let's ignore the fact that Logan was an outright terrible VillainProtagonist to begin with and that plenty of his actions in the story, even as Beast Boy, fall under DesignatedHero more so than his [[WesternAnimation/TeenTitansGo TTG Counterpart]]; Mykan believes he should die because Terra dumped him, and not even her becoming a Titan again and actually coming back to Logan can change that that. And for the record, this was a fan of Logan that Mykan was talking to in the first place, that he was being so matter-of-fact towards; this was someone who was probably around 12 or so, being told by this person that "people die when fate is cruel to them". Even as someone who finds this fic to be pretty pathetic and Logan to be a badly written character, I can honestly say that this guy's reasoning is...just no, Mykan...
18th Dec '16 12:51:17 AM SenorCornholio
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* SenorCornholio: Since [[Fanfic/MyLittleUnicorn My Little Unicorn]] already has its own page, let's talk about DakariKingMykan's other crowning achievement, [[Fanfic/TheEndOfEnds The End of Ends]]. It's exactly as much of a wangst-ridden [[AuthorTract Author Tract]] as you would expect, and there are plenty of moments to choose from. I could have put [[BigBad Count Logan's]] ([[TheUnreveal actually Beast Boy's]]) reasons for blowing up Tamaran being that he was upset that Starfire and Robin got together while he didn't get back with Terra, but I think there's a moment that's far worse. A fair warning: this one's slightly going into meta territory. At the end, Logan performs a [[HeelFaceTurn heel-face turn]] and helps defeat [[TheStarscream Dr. Beljar]]...[[DroppedABridgeOnHim and then Logan dies]]. After that fact, some fans (yes, this fic actually has fans) were sad and upset because of his death, to which Mykan responded with his reasoning: [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer because Terra had left him in "Things Change", he is doomed to die even if he is redeemed and Terra gets back with him!]] Let's ignore the fact that Logan was an outright terrible VillainProtagonist to begin with and that plenty of his actions in the story, even as Beast Boy, fall under DesignatedHero more so than his [[WesternAnimation/TeenTitansGo TTG Counterpart]]; Mykan believes he should die because Terra dumped him, and not even her becoming a Titan again and actually coming back to Logan can change that And for the record, this was a ''fan'' of Logan that Mykan was talking to in the first place, that he was being so matter-of-fact towards; this was someone who was probably around 12 or so, being told by this person that "people die when fate is cruel to them". Even as someone who finds this fic to be pretty pathetic and Logan to be a badly written character, I can honestly say that this guy's reasoning is...just no, Mykan...

to:

* SenorCornholio: Since [[Fanfic/MyLittleUnicorn My Little Unicorn]] already has its own page, let's talk about DakariKingMykan's other crowning achievement, [[Fanfic/TheEndOfEnds The End of Ends]]. It's exactly as much of a wangst-ridden [[AuthorTract Author Tract]] as you would expect, and there are plenty of moments to choose from. I could have put [[BigBad Count Logan's]] ([[TheUnreveal actually Beast Boy's]]) reasons for blowing up Tamaran being that he was upset that Starfire and Robin got together while he didn't get back with Terra, but I think there's a moment that's far worse. A fair warning: this one's slightly going into meta territory. At the end, Logan performs a [[HeelFaceTurn heel-face turn]] and helps defeat [[TheStarscream Dr. Beljar]]...[[DroppedABridgeOnHim and then Logan dies]]. After that fact, some fans (yes, this fic actually has fans) were sad and upset because of his death, to which Mykan responded with his reasoning: [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer because Terra had left him in "Things Change", he is doomed to die even if he is redeemed and Terra gets back with him!]] Let's ignore the fact that Logan was an outright terrible VillainProtagonist to begin with and that plenty of his actions in the story, even as Beast Boy, fall under DesignatedHero more so than his [[WesternAnimation/TeenTitansGo TTG Counterpart]]; Mykan believes he should die because Terra dumped him, and not even her becoming a Titan again and actually coming back to Logan can change that And for the record, this was a ''fan'' fan of Logan that Mykan was talking to in the first place, that he was being so matter-of-fact towards; this was someone who was probably around 12 or so, being told by this person that "people die when fate is cruel to them". Even as someone who finds this fic to be pretty pathetic and Logan to be a badly written character, I can honestly say that this guy's reasoning is...just no, Mykan...
18th Dec '16 12:50:26 AM SenorCornholio
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* SenorCornholio: Since [[Fanfic/MyLittleUnicorn My Little Unicorn]] already has its own page, let's talk about DakariKingMykan's other crowning achievement, [[Fanfic/TheEndOfEnds The End of Ends]]. It's exactly as much of a wangst-ridden [[AuthorTract Author Tract]] as you would expect, and there are plenty of moments to choose from. I could have put [[BigBad Count Logan's]] ([[TheUnreveal actually Beast Boy's]]) reasons for blowing up Tamaran being that he was upset that Starfire and Robin got together while he didn't get back with Terra, but I think there's a moment that's far worse. A fair warning: this one's slightly going into meta territory. At the end, Logan performs a [[HeelFaceTurn heel-face turn]] and helps defeat [[TheStarscream Dr. Beljar]]...[[DroppedABridgeOnHim and then Logan dies]]. After that fact, some fans (yes, this fic actually has fans) were sad and upset because of his death, to which Mykan responded with his reasoning: [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer because Terra had left him in "Things Change", he is doomed to die even if he is redeemed and Terra gets back with him!]] Let's ignore the fact that Logan was an outright terrible VillainProtagonist to begin with and that plenty of his actions in the story, even as Beast Boy, fall under DesignatedHero more so than his [[WesternAnimation/TeenTitansGo TTG Counterpart]]; Mykan believes he should die because Terra dumped him, and not even her becoming a Titan again and actually coming back to Logan can change that! Even as someone who finds this fic to be pretty pathetic and Logan to be a badly written character, I can honestly say that this guy's reasoning is...just no, Mykan...

to:

* SenorCornholio: Since [[Fanfic/MyLittleUnicorn My Little Unicorn]] already has its own page, let's talk about DakariKingMykan's other crowning achievement, [[Fanfic/TheEndOfEnds The End of Ends]]. It's exactly as much of a wangst-ridden [[AuthorTract Author Tract]] as you would expect, and there are plenty of moments to choose from. I could have put [[BigBad Count Logan's]] ([[TheUnreveal actually Beast Boy's]]) reasons for blowing up Tamaran being that he was upset that Starfire and Robin got together while he didn't get back with Terra, but I think there's a moment that's far worse. A fair warning: this one's slightly going into meta territory. At the end, Logan performs a [[HeelFaceTurn heel-face turn]] and helps defeat [[TheStarscream Dr. Beljar]]...[[DroppedABridgeOnHim and then Logan dies]]. After that fact, some fans (yes, this fic actually has fans) were sad and upset because of his death, to which Mykan responded with his reasoning: [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer because Terra had left him in "Things Change", he is doomed to die even if he is redeemed and Terra gets back with him!]] Let's ignore the fact that Logan was an outright terrible VillainProtagonist to begin with and that plenty of his actions in the story, even as Beast Boy, fall under DesignatedHero more so than his [[WesternAnimation/TeenTitansGo TTG Counterpart]]; Mykan believes he should die because Terra dumped him, and not even her becoming a Titan again and actually coming back to Logan can change that! that And for the record, this was a ''fan'' of Logan that Mykan was talking to in the first place, that he was being so matter-of-fact towards; this was someone who was probably around 12 or so, being told by this person that "people die when fate is cruel to them". Even as someone who finds this fic to be pretty pathetic and Logan to be a badly written character, I can honestly say that this guy's reasoning is...just no, Mykan...
2nd Dec '16 5:59:34 PM InTheGallbladder
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** Tropers/LadyJaneGrey: Last time I checked, yes, the author can indeed use whatever rulings he likes for a fanmade card in his own work. (Since when does WordOfDante trump WordOfGod?)



* [=InTheGallbladder=]: I loved ''Overmyth.'' Watching [=ReadingForever=]'s OC Patta grow over the course of the story was not just riveting, but it taught me a few things about myself as well. Plus, I just plain like True Pacifist-end {{Fix Fic}}s. Which is why it's all the more vexing that the story ends on the limpest excuse for a SequelHook ever: Early in the last chapter, [[spoiler:another OC, with no foreshadowing, comes quite literally out of nowhere (which is where Patta happens to be at the time). She describes herself as being "from a higher plane of existence" than all prior established characters, canon and otherwise, and prides herself in taking credit for making Frisk go into Mt. Ebbott by shoving them past the DespairEventHorizon. She's outright contemptuous of Patta, and this shows in everything she does, down to whipping out a piece of never-before-mentioned {{Magitek}}; it bluntly declares that the one thing he is still physically capable of doing is, and never wasn't, a totally doomed effort. A passage of blatant exposition describes this as an instance of OOCIsSeriousBusiness.]] This is somehow supposed to make me want to look at [=ReadingForever=]'s forthcoming ''Undertale''[=/=]''Persona'' crossover, or anything they may ever write afterwards, for that matter.

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* [=InTheGallbladder=]: I loved ''Overmyth.'' Watching [=ReadingForever=]'s OC Patta grow over the course of the story was not just riveting, but it taught me a few things about myself as well. Plus, I just plain like True Pacifist-end {{Fix Fic}}s. Which is why it's all the more vexing that the story ends on the limpest excuse for a SequelHook ever: Early in the last chapter, [[spoiler:another OC, with no foreshadowing, comes quite literally out of nowhere (which is where Patta happens to be at the time). She describes herself as being "from a higher plane of existence" than all prior established characters, canon and otherwise, and prides herself in taking proudly takes credit for making Frisk go into Mt. Ebbott by shoving them past setting the DespairEventHorizon.game's canon in motion by invoking the DespairEventHorizon towards Frisk. She's outright contemptuous of Patta, and this shows in everything she does, down to whipping out a piece of never-before-mentioned {{Magitek}}; it bluntly declares that the one thing he is still physically capable of doing is, and never wasn't, a totally doomed effort. A passage of blatant exposition describes this as an instance of OOCIsSeriousBusiness.]] This is somehow supposed to make me want to look at [=ReadingForever=]'s forthcoming ''Undertale''[=/=]''Persona'' crossover, or anything they may ever write afterwards, for that matter.
21st Nov '16 1:51:14 PM LadyJaneGrey
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** Tropers/LadyJaneGrey: Last time I checked, the author can indeed use whatever rules he likes for his own work. (Since when does WordOfDante trump WordOfGod?)

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** Tropers/LadyJaneGrey: Last time I checked, yes, the author can indeed use whatever rules rulings he likes for a fanmade card in his own work. (Since when does WordOfDante trump WordOfGod?)
21st Nov '16 9:11:01 AM LadyJaneGrey
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** Tropers/LadyJaneGrey: Last time I checked, the author can indeed use whatever rules he likes for his own work. (Since when does WordOfDante trump WordOfGod?)
26th Oct '16 12:35:29 PM MrMediaGuy2
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* [=InTheGallbladder=]: I loved ''Overmyth.'' Watching [=ReadingForever=]'s OC Patta grow over the course of the story was not just riveting, but it taught me a few things about myself as well. Plus, I just plain like True Pacifist-end {{Fix Fic}}s. Which is why it's all the more vexing that the story ends on the limpest excuse for a SequelHook ever: Early in the last chapter, [[spoiler:another OC, with no foreshadowing, comes quite literally out of nowhere (which is where Patta happens to be at the time). She describes herself as being "from a higher plane of existence" than all prior established characters, canon and otherwise, and prides herself in taking credit for making Frisk go into Mt. Ebbott by shoving them past the DespairEventHorizon. She's outright contemptuous of Patta, and this shows in everything she does, down to whipping out a piece of never-before-mentioned {{Magitek}}; it bluntly declares that the one thing he is still physically capable of doing is, and never wasn't, a totally doomed effort. A passage of blatant exposition describes this as an instance of OOCIsSeriousBusiness.]] This is somehow supposed to make me want to look at [=ReadingForever=]'s forthcoming ''Undertale''[=/=]''Persona'' crossover, or anything they may ever write afterwards, for that matter.

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* [=InTheGallbladder=]: I loved ''Overmyth.'' Watching [=ReadingForever=]'s OC Patta grow over the course of the story was not just riveting, but it taught me a few things about myself as well. Plus, I just plain like True Pacifist-end {{Fix Fic}}s. Which is why it's all the more vexing that the story ends on the limpest excuse for a SequelHook ever: Early in the last chapter, [[spoiler:another OC, with no foreshadowing, comes quite literally out of nowhere (which is where Patta happens to be at the time). She describes herself as being "from a higher plane of existence" than all prior established characters, canon and otherwise, and prides herself in taking credit for making Frisk go into Mt. Ebbott by shoving them past the DespairEventHorizon. She's outright contemptuous of Patta, and this shows in everything she does, down to whipping out a piece of never-before-mentioned {{Magitek}}; it bluntly declares that the one thing he is still physically capable of doing is, and never wasn't, a totally doomed effort. A passage of blatant exposition describes this as an instance of OOCIsSeriousBusiness.]] This is somehow supposed to make me want to look at [=ReadingForever=]'s forthcoming ''Undertale''[=/=]''Persona'' crossover, or anything they may ever write afterwards, for that matter.matter.
* "[[https://www.reddit.com/r/shortscarystories/comments/39s9fk/mothers_lament_disney_challenge/ Mother's Lament]]", a short ''Disney/OneHundredAndOneDalmatians'' DarkFic on Reddit. To make a long story short, it's a DeconstructionFic meant to show how horrific it would be if a dog gave birth to 101 puppies in real life. The problem? [[NightmareRetardant The entire premise fails]] when you realize that anyone who's [[CowboyBebopAtHisComputer actually watched the movie]] knows that Perdita [[CriticalResearchFailure only gives birth to fifteen puppies]], [[CommonKnowledge and the others were rescued from Cruella]]. Indeed, the author [[CreatorsApathy admits in the comments]] that it's been awhile since they watched the movie. Even so, couldn't you have at least checked Wikipedia, IMDb, or this very site? A simple check of one of those sources would have clarified it.
26th Oct '16 1:23:45 AM InTheGallbladder
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* [=InTheGallbladder=]: I loved ''Overmyth.'' Watching [=ReadingForever=]'s OC Patta grow over the course of the story was not just riveting, but it taught me a few things about myself as well. Plus, I just plain like True Pacifist-end {{Fix Fic}}s. Which is why it's all the more vexing that the story ends on the limpest excuse for a SequelHook ever: Early in the last chapter, [[spoiler:another OC, with no foreshadowing, comes quite literally out of nowhere (which is where Patta happens to be at the time). She describes herself as being "from a higher plane of existence" than all prior established characters, canon and otherwise, and prides herself in taking credit for making Frisk go into Mt. Ebbott by shoving them past the DespairEventHorizon. She's outright contemptuous of Patta, and this shows in everything she does, down to whipping out a piece of never-before-mentioned {{Magitek}}; it bluntly declares that the one thing he is still physically capable of doing is, and never wasn't, a totally doomed effort. A passage of blatant exposition describes this as an instance of OOCIsSeriousBusiness.]] This is somehow supposed to make me want to look at [=ReadingForever=]'s forthcoming ''Undertale''[=/=]''Persona'' crossover. If anything, it's put me off whatever they may endeavor to do next.

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* [=InTheGallbladder=]: I loved ''Overmyth.'' Watching [=ReadingForever=]'s OC Patta grow over the course of the story was not just riveting, but it taught me a few things about myself as well. Plus, I just plain like True Pacifist-end {{Fix Fic}}s. Which is why it's all the more vexing that the story ends on the limpest excuse for a SequelHook ever: Early in the last chapter, [[spoiler:another OC, with no foreshadowing, comes quite literally out of nowhere (which is where Patta happens to be at the time). She describes herself as being "from a higher plane of existence" than all prior established characters, canon and otherwise, and prides herself in taking credit for making Frisk go into Mt. Ebbott by shoving them past the DespairEventHorizon. She's outright contemptuous of Patta, and this shows in everything she does, down to whipping out a piece of never-before-mentioned {{Magitek}}; it bluntly declares that the one thing he is still physically capable of doing is, and never wasn't, a totally doomed effort. A passage of blatant exposition describes this as an instance of OOCIsSeriousBusiness.]] This is somehow supposed to make me want to look at [=ReadingForever=]'s forthcoming ''Undertale''[=/=]''Persona'' crossover. If anything, it's put me off whatever crossover, or anything they may endeavor to do next.ever write afterwards, for that matter.
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