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1st Jan '16 1:34:33 AM SenorCornholio
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So, what awaits her the next day? Him insists she stays stark naked, wears a collar and leash like a dog, eats/ sleeps on the floor just like an animal, and only refers to Him as "Master". Yeah...but it gets worse. Later on Him forces Bubbles to get in the tub for a bath with him, and she of course hesitates. This pisses off Him, who forces Bubbles to give him a hand job as a punishment. Bubbles is of course upset but Him angrily insists that he is not asking her to give him her virginity, so she should essentially shut up and do what he says. Uh- okay, if you force someone to give you sexual pleasure against their will, [[PunctuatedForEmphasis that. Is. Rape.]] Intercourse or not. Wanna see it get worse? Later we get the same situation with the bath again, but Bubbles goes through with it out of fear. Him insists on washing her and violating her personal space until she's (justifiably) certain this will lead to rape. Him once again insists he will not rape her. RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil, after all. [[SarcasmMode But--it's a-okay if he simply manhandles her a little for kicks as long as it's not the direct act of sex.]] Oh, and it doesn't end there. [[StockholmSyndrome Later Bubbles has started to fall for Him,]] and her time is almost up and she can go back home in a few days. Now, does Him reveal that the whole "Take Me Instead and use me like a Pet" is a big supernatural contract that was out of Him's control to change the rules of, and they both had to get through it on those terms whether either of them agreed to them or not? Nope. Him reveals that this was all just a clever little scheme he put together to trick innocent little Bubbles into falling for/ trusting him. So is Bubbles pissed out of her mind since all the humiliation and molestation she went through was just a trick and proceeds to kick his demonic ass? Oh no, she's just a little insulted. Look, Bubbles might be the most kindhearted and understanding of the Girls, but she is certainly is not this kind of a pushover! I won't use up the rest of this page typing out the ending or the stuff that comes after this. The thing that gets me is that these plot elements make the moral come off as: "If someone forces you to be a glorified SexSlave that = True Love!!" and "Rape is only if someone forces intercourse on you, not any other type of touching or sexual contact against your will." The fic is supposed to be darkly romantic, but this comes across as deeply disturbing.
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So, what awaits her the next day? Him insists she stays stark naked, wears a collar and leash like a dog, eats/ sleeps on the floor just like an animal, and only refers to Him as "Master". Yeah...but it gets worse. Later on Him forces Bubbles to get in the tub for a bath with him, and she of course hesitates. This pisses off Him, who forces Bubbles to give him a hand job as a punishment. Bubbles is of course upset but Him angrily insists that he is not asking her to give him her virginity, so she should essentially shut up and do what he says. Uh- okay, if you force someone to give you sexual pleasure against their will, [[PunctuatedForEmphasis that. Is. Rape.]] Intercourse or not. Wanna see it get worse? Later we get the same situation with the bath again, but Bubbles goes through with it out of fear. Him insists on washing her and violating her personal space until she's (justifiably) certain this will lead to rape. Him once again insists he will not rape her. RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil, after all. [[SarcasmMode But--it's a-okay if he simply manhandles her a little for kicks as long as it's not the direct act of sex.]] Oh, and it doesn't end there. [[StockholmSyndrome Later Bubbles has started to fall for Him,]] and her time is almost up and she can go back home in a few days. Now, does Him reveal that the whole "Take Me Instead and use me like a Pet" is a big supernatural contract that was out of Him's control to change the rules of, and they both had to get through it on those terms whether either of them agreed to them or not? Nope. Him reveals that this was all just a clever little scheme he put together to trick innocent little Bubbles into falling for/ trusting him. So is Bubbles pissed out of her mind since all the humiliation and molestation she went through was just a trick and proceeds to kick his demonic ass? Oh no, she's just a little insulted. Look, Bubbles might be the most kindhearted and understanding of the Girls, but she is certainly is not this kind of a pushover! I won't use up the rest of this page typing out the ending or the stuff that comes after this. The thing that gets me is that these plot elements make the moral come off as: "If someone forces you to be a glorified SexSlave that = True Love!!" and "Rape is only if someone forces intercourse on you, not any other type of touching or sexual contact against your will." The fic is supposed to be darkly romantic, but this comes across as deeply disturbing.disturbing. * SenorCornholio: Since [[Fanfic/MyLittleUnicorn My Little Unicorn]] already has its own page, let's talk about DakariKingMykan's other crowning achievement, [[Fanfic/TheEndOfEnds The End of Ends.]] It's exactly as much of a wangst-ridden [[AuthorTract Author Tract]] as you would expect, and there are plenty of moments to choose from. I could have put [[BigBad Count Logan's]] ([[TheUnreveal actually Beast Boy's]]) reasons for blowing up Tamaran being that he was upset that Starfire and Robin got together while he didn't get back with Terra, but I think there's a moment that's far worse. A fair warning: this one's slightly going into meta territory. At the end, [[spoiler: Logan performs a [[HeelFaceTurn heel-face turn]] and helps defeat [[TheStarscream Dr. Beljar]]...[[DroppedABridgeOnHim and then Logan dies.]]]] After that fact, some fans (yes, this fic actually has fans) were sad and upset that [[spoiler: Logan died]], to which Mykan responded with his reasoning: [[spoiler: because Terra had left him in "Things Change", he is doomed to die even if he is redeemed and Terra gets back with him!]] Okay Mykan, what the fuck! I could handle [[spoiler: a character dying]], but that kind of reasoning is just...just...NO!
27th Dec '15 3:05:51 PM Ferot_Dreadnaught
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* @/REV6Pilot on FanFic/TheSunSoul. In chapter 22, Ash fights [[PsychoForHire Jessie]] in a battle that ends up with her injured and trapped. Mind you, the Rocket trio is extremely dangerous in this fic, and Ash was almost killed by them on several occasions before then. [[DarthWiki.WallBanger And he takes her to be treated anyway!]] He even [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] how bad the idea is, and we see how dearly he pays for being right later on [[spoiler: when she kills Misty]]. When the author [[WhatTheHellPlayer is called out on it]], he says [[{{Jerkass}} he did it like that because bad things happen in the real world for no damn reason]]. Well, congratulations, Fifty, you managed to lose much more than one reader.
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* @/REV6Pilot on FanFic/TheSunSoul. In chapter 22, Ash fights [[PsychoForHire Jessie]] in a battle that ends up with her injured and trapped. Mind you, the Rocket trio is extremely dangerous in this fic, and Ash was almost killed by them on several occasions before then. [[DarthWiki.WallBanger And he takes her to be treated anyway!]] anyway! He even [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] how bad the idea is, and we see how dearly he pays for being right later on [[spoiler: when she kills Misty]]. When the author [[WhatTheHellPlayer is called out on it]], he says [[{{Jerkass}} he did it like that because bad things happen in the real world for no damn reason]]. Well, congratulations, Fifty, you managed to lose much more than one reader.
27th Dec '15 2:42:50 PM SeptimusHeap
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* @/KingClark: While I was reading throughout the [[FanficRecs/NeonGenesisEvangelion NGE Fanfic Recs,]] I came across one title that sounded interesting: ''FanFic/{{Arsenal}}''. It starts off as a PeggySue fic, but quickly turns into a rollercoaster of insanity. Throughout the story, Shinji goes around doing [[RefugeInAudacity ridiculously awesome]], yet [[AntiHero unquestionally corrupt]] things as a NecessarilyEvil SociopathicHero, all in the name of preventing the [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt Third Impact]]. Shinji starts the story off by doing things that are worse than what Gendo did for most of the series, but nothing too evil. There are signs that the story might be shaky in the way that Shinji causes his new underlings to change their ways quickly, but it isn't anything that isn't unforgivable. Unfortunately, the conclusion of the Black Bunnies arc takes Shinji beyond the MoralEventHorizon and completely ruins the viewer's ability to like the protagonist in one fell swoop. The three [[BigBadDuumvirate Black Bunnies]] are all established as extremely immoral and evil, and Shinji decides [[DisproportionateRetribution how he'll deal with them]]: he plans to use nanomachines to destroy their nervous systems entirely, in order to place them each into a FateWorseThanDeath that is borderline AndIMustScream material. No one has any objections against his decision beforehand (not even Misato, who even helps set up what Shinji has planned for them). As for the punishments themselves, they are as follows (spoilertagged for [[NauseaFuel high amounts]] of {{Squick}}): [[spoiler: Kaede, the first Bunny, is subject to 48 hours of ColdBloodedTorture, and is then [[BrainwashedAndCrazy forced to become]] a bodyguard who is coerced into pain if she so much as thinks about her past. This is easily the least harsh of the punishments. Satsuki, the second Bunny, has her brain permanently damaged and reduced to acting as what can best be described as a human dog. [[KickTheDog To add insult to injury]], Shinji decides to give her a collar, make her sleep in a basket and eat out of a bowl, while the only desires that run through her mind are to recieve affection from her "master". He decides then to keep her as a sex slave for no other reason that she would have done the same to him, but mainly because he can. It gets worse, [[SerialEscalation though]]: Aoi, the third Bunny, has her abilities to smell, taste and touch numbed forever, and is left tied up in shackles in a chamber. The population of Tokyo-3 then covers her with graffitti (this isn't even RefugeInAudacity anymore; it's just grotesque and utterly ridiculous). Finally, a man decides to use her as a toilet, all while she can only beg for death.]] Shinji then gloats about what he's done to his father, and tells him what he's done all [[NightmareFetishist while sounding extremely pleased]]. Afterward, Gendo is visibly disgusted with his son's treatment of the Black Bunnies [[DarthWiki.WallBanger in spite of the fact that he approved of the use of these nanomachines in the first place]]. So, does Shinji have a shred of guilt for what he's done? Absolutely not. The only thing that comes close to that is his remembrance of what Asuka said to him in the canon, but that hardly counts. Remember when I said that Shinji's actions were all in the name of stopping the Third Impact? [[JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope This has absolutely nothing to do with it]], so the author just turned an interesting character into a sick freak without a good reason. What's even worse is that the author has claimed that he considers these things to be proportionate punishments to them. No one, not even the worst of villains, should experience fates as disturbing as these. The protagonist has practically become a prime example of a DesignatedHero with this action, and has been warped beyond recognition from his canonical counterpart. I'm too disgusted with this story to read through it any further, and I'd rather not see whatever the author [[CharacterDerailment turns]] Asuka into ([[DeadFic assuming he's still churning out this filth]]). It's a shame that TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot, too; from the premise and some pieces of the plot, this story is a prime example of WhatCouldHaveBeen a good, interesting read. [[note]]Phew. That sure took a while, didn't it?[[/note]]
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* @/KingClark: While I was reading throughout the [[FanficRecs/NeonGenesisEvangelion NGE Fanfic Recs,]] I came across one title that sounded interesting: ''FanFic/{{Arsenal}}''. It starts off as a PeggySue fic, but quickly turns into a rollercoaster of insanity. Throughout the story, Shinji goes around doing [[RefugeInAudacity ridiculously awesome]], yet [[AntiHero unquestionally corrupt]] things as a NecessarilyEvil SociopathicHero, all in the name of preventing the [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt Third Impact]]. Shinji starts the story off by doing things that are worse than what Gendo did for most of the series, but nothing too evil. There are signs that the story might be shaky in the way that Shinji causes his new underlings to change their ways quickly, but it isn't anything that isn't unforgivable. Unfortunately, the conclusion of the Black Bunnies arc takes Shinji beyond the MoralEventHorizon and completely ruins the viewer's ability to like the protagonist in one fell swoop. The three [[BigBadDuumvirate Black Bunnies]] are all established as extremely immoral and evil, and Shinji decides [[DisproportionateRetribution how he'll deal with them]]: he plans to use nanomachines to destroy their nervous systems entirely, in order to place them each into a FateWorseThanDeath that is borderline AndIMustScream material. No one has any objections against his decision beforehand (not even Misato, who even helps set up what Shinji has planned for them). As for the punishments themselves, they are as follows (spoilertagged for [[NauseaFuel high amounts]] of {{Squick}}): [[spoiler: Kaede, the first Bunny, is subject to 48 hours of ColdBloodedTorture, and is then [[BrainwashedAndCrazy forced to become]] a bodyguard who is coerced into pain if she so much as thinks about her past. This is easily the least harsh of the punishments. Satsuki, the second Bunny, has her brain permanently damaged and reduced to acting as what can best be described as a human dog. [[KickTheDog To add insult to injury]], Shinji decides to give her a collar, make her sleep in a basket and eat out of a bowl, while the only desires that run through her mind are to recieve affection from her "master". He decides then to keep her as a sex slave for no other reason that she would have done the same to him, but mainly because he can. It gets worse, [[SerialEscalation though]]: Aoi, the third Bunny, has her abilities to smell, taste and touch numbed forever, and is left tied up in shackles in a chamber. The population of Tokyo-3 then covers her with graffitti (this isn't even RefugeInAudacity anymore; it's just grotesque and utterly ridiculous). Finally, a man decides to use her as a toilet, all while she can only beg for death.]] Shinji then gloats about what he's done to his father, and tells him what he's done all [[NightmareFetishist while sounding extremely pleased]]. Afterward, Gendo is visibly disgusted with his son's treatment of the Black Bunnies [[DarthWiki.WallBanger in spite of the fact that he approved of the use of these nanomachines in the first place]].place. So, does Shinji have a shred of guilt for what he's done? Absolutely not. The only thing that comes close to that is his remembrance of what Asuka said to him in the canon, but that hardly counts. Remember when I said that Shinji's actions were all in the name of stopping the Third Impact? [[JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope This has absolutely nothing to do with it]], so the author just turned an interesting character into a sick freak without a good reason. What's even worse is that the author has claimed that he considers these things to be proportionate punishments to them. No one, not even the worst of villains, should experience fates as disturbing as these. The protagonist has practically become a prime example of a DesignatedHero with this action, and has been warped beyond recognition from his canonical counterpart. I'm too disgusted with this story to read through it any further, and I'd rather not see whatever the author [[CharacterDerailment turns]] Asuka into ([[DeadFic assuming he's still churning out this filth]]). It's a shame that TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot, too; from the premise and some pieces of the plot, this story is a prime example of WhatCouldHaveBeen a good, interesting read. [[note]]Phew. That sure took a while, didn't it?[[/note]]
7th Dec '15 11:20:14 AM SeptimusHeap
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6th Dec '15 6:32:02 PM N.Harmonik
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The following series have their own pages: [[index]] * DethroningMoment/MyLittleUnicorn [[/index]] ----

So, what awaits her the next day? Him insists she stays stark naked, wears a collar and leash like a dog, eats/ sleeps on the floor just like an animal, and only refers to Him as "Master". Yeah...but it gets worse. Later on Him forces Bubbles to get in the tub for a bath with him, and she of course hesitates. This pisses off Him, who forces Bubbles to give him a hand job as a punishment. Bubbles is of course upset but Him angrily insists that he is not asking her to give him her virginity, so she should essentially shut up and do what he says. Uh- okay, if you force someone to give you sexual pleasure against their will, [[PunctuatedForEmphasis that. Is. Rape.]] Intercourse or not. Wanna see it get worse? Later we get the same situation with the bath again, but Bubbles goes through with it out of fear. Him insists on washing her and violating her personal space until she's (justifiably) certain this will lead to rape. Him once again insists he will not rape her. RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil, after all. [[SarcasmMode But--it's a-okay if he simply manhandles her a little for kicks as long as it's not the direct act of sex.]] Oh, and it doesn't end there. [[StockholmSyndrome Later Bubbles has started to fall for Him,]] and her time is almost up and she can go back home in a few days. Now, does Him reveal that the whole "Take Me Instead and use me like a Pet" is a big supernatural contract that was out of Him's control to change the rules of, and they both had to get through it on those terms whether either of them agreed to them or not? Nope. Him reveals that this was all just a clever little scheme he put together to trick innocent little Bubbles into falling for/ trusting him. So is Bubbles pissed out of her mind since all the humiliation and molestation she went through was just a trick and proceeds to kick his demonic ass? Oh no, she's just a little insulted. Look, Bubbles might be the most kindhearted and understanding of the Girls, but she is certainly is not this kind of a pushover! I won't use up the rest of this page typing out the ending or the stuff that comes after this. The thing that gets me is that these plot elements make the moral come off as: "If someone forces you to be a glorified SexSlave that = True Love!!" and "Rape is only if someone forces intercourse on you, not any other type of touching or sexual contact against your will." The fic is supposed to be darkly romantic, but this comes across as deeply disturbing. * NisjayCakecup: Fanfic/MyLittleUnicorn wasn't particularly good to begin with (Check the YMMV page to see why), but there is one example that's the zenith of Mykan's cruelty towards [[DesignatedMonkey Cadence]] in [[http://dakari-king-mykan.deviantart.com/art/Episode-17-Desperate-Efforts-570157772 Season 5 Chapter 17]]. To make the long story short, Cadence winds up having a miscarriage. To make things worse, his [[DearNegativeReader author's notes]] even said so before the chapter begins, just to rub the salt in the wounds on Cadence's fans. And none of [[DesignatedHero Starfleet]] even tries to help prevent such.
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So, what awaits her the next day? Him insists she stays stark naked, wears a collar and leash like a dog, eats/ sleeps on the floor just like an animal, and only refers to Him as "Master". Yeah...but it gets worse. Later on Him forces Bubbles to get in the tub for a bath with him, and she of course hesitates. This pisses off Him, who forces Bubbles to give him a hand job as a punishment. Bubbles is of course upset but Him angrily insists that he is not asking her to give him her virginity, so she should essentially shut up and do what he says. Uh- okay, if you force someone to give you sexual pleasure against their will, [[PunctuatedForEmphasis that. Is. Rape.]] Intercourse or not. Wanna see it get worse? Later we get the same situation with the bath again, but Bubbles goes through with it out of fear. Him insists on washing her and violating her personal space until she's (justifiably) certain this will lead to rape. Him once again insists he will not rape her. RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil, after all. [[SarcasmMode But--it's a-okay if he simply manhandles her a little for kicks as long as it's not the direct act of sex.]] Oh, and it doesn't end there. [[StockholmSyndrome Later Bubbles has started to fall for Him,]] and her time is almost up and she can go back home in a few days. Now, does Him reveal that the whole "Take Me Instead and use me like a Pet" is a big supernatural contract that was out of Him's control to change the rules of, and they both had to get through it on those terms whether either of them agreed to them or not? Nope. Him reveals that this was all just a clever little scheme he put together to trick innocent little Bubbles into falling for/ trusting him. So is Bubbles pissed out of her mind since all the humiliation and molestation she went through was just a trick and proceeds to kick his demonic ass? Oh no, she's just a little insulted. Look, Bubbles might be the most kindhearted and understanding of the Girls, but she is certainly is not this kind of a pushover! I won't use up the rest of this page typing out the ending or the stuff that comes after this. The thing that gets me is that these plot elements make the moral come off as: "If someone forces you to be a glorified SexSlave that = True Love!!" and "Rape is only if someone forces intercourse on you, not any other type of touching or sexual contact against your will." The fic is supposed to be darkly romantic, but this comes across as deeply disturbing. * NisjayCakecup: Fanfic/MyLittleUnicorn wasn't particularly good to begin with (Check the YMMV page to see why), but there is one example that's the zenith of Mykan's cruelty towards [[DesignatedMonkey Cadence]] in [[http://dakari-king-mykan.deviantart.com/art/Episode-17-Desperate-Efforts-570157772 Season 5 Chapter 17]]. To make the long story short, Cadence winds up having a miscarriage. To make things worse, his [[DearNegativeReader author's notes]] even said so before the chapter begins, just to rub the salt in the wounds on Cadence's fans. And none of [[DesignatedHero Starfleet]] even tries to help prevent such.disturbing.
5th Dec '15 1:05:51 PM NisjayCakecup
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* NisjayCakecup: Well, Fanfic/MyLittleUnicorn wasn't particularly good to begin with, being rife with snark bait, but there is one example that's the zenith of Mykan's cruelty towards [[DesignatedMonkey Cadence]] in [[http://dakari-king-mykan.deviantart.com/art/Episode-17-Desperate-Efforts-570157772 Season 5 Chapter 17]]. To make the long story short, Cadence winds up having a miscarriage. To make things worse, his [[DearNegativeReader author's notes]] even said so before the chapter begins, just to rub the salt in the wounds on Cadence's fans. And none of [[DesignatedHero Starfleet]] even tries to help prevent such.
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* NisjayCakecup: Well, Fanfic/MyLittleUnicorn wasn't particularly good to begin with, being rife with snark bait, (Check the YMMV page to see why), but there is one example that's the zenith of Mykan's cruelty towards [[DesignatedMonkey Cadence]] in [[http://dakari-king-mykan.deviantart.com/art/Episode-17-Desperate-Efforts-570157772 Season 5 Chapter 17]]. To make the long story short, Cadence winds up having a miscarriage. To make things worse, his [[DearNegativeReader author's notes]] even said so before the chapter begins, just to rub the salt in the wounds on Cadence's fans. And none of [[DesignatedHero Starfleet]] even tries to help prevent such.
5th Dec '15 12:57:17 PM NisjayCakecup
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So, what awaits her the next day? Him insists she stays stark naked, wears a collar and leash like a dog, eats/ sleeps on the floor just like an animal, and only refers to Him as "Master". Yeah...but it gets worse. Later on Him forces Bubbles to get in the tub for a bath with him, and she of course hesitates. This pisses off Him, who forces Bubbles to give him a hand job as a punishment. Bubbles is of course upset but Him angrily insists that he is not asking her to give him her virginity, so she should essentially shut up and do what he says. Uh- okay, if you force someone to give you sexual pleasure against their will, [[PunctuatedForEmphasis that. Is. Rape.]] Intercourse or not. Wanna see it get worse? Later we get the same situation with the bath again, but Bubbles goes through with it out of fear. Him insists on washing her and violating her personal space until she's (justifiably) certain this will lead to rape. Him once again insists he will not rape her. RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil, after all. [[SarcasmMode But--it's a-okay if he simply manhandles her a little for kicks as long as it's not the direct act of sex.]] Oh, and it doesn't end there. [[StockholmSyndrome Later Bubbles has started to fall for Him,]] and her time is almost up and she can go back home in a few days. Now, does Him reveal that the whole "Take Me Instead and use me like a Pet" is a big supernatural contract that was out of Him's control to change the rules of, and they both had to get through it on those terms whether either of them agreed to them or not? Nope. Him reveals that this was all just a clever little scheme he put together to trick innocent little Bubbles into falling for/ trusting him. So is Bubbles pissed out of her mind since all the humiliation and molestation she went through was just a trick and proceeds to kick his demonic ass? Oh no, she's just a little insulted. Look, Bubbles might be the most kindhearted and understanding of the Girls, but she is certainly is not this kind of a pushover! I won't use up the rest of this page typing out the ending or the stuff that comes after this. The thing that gets me is that these plot elements make the moral come off as: "If someone forces you to be a glorified SexSlave that = True Love!!" and "Rape is only if someone forces intercourse on you, not any other type of touching or sexual contact against your will." The fic is supposed to be darkly romantic, but this comes across as deeply disturbing.
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So, what awaits her the next day? Him insists she stays stark naked, wears a collar and leash like a dog, eats/ sleeps on the floor just like an animal, and only refers to Him as "Master". Yeah...but it gets worse. Later on Him forces Bubbles to get in the tub for a bath with him, and she of course hesitates. This pisses off Him, who forces Bubbles to give him a hand job as a punishment. Bubbles is of course upset but Him angrily insists that he is not asking her to give him her virginity, so she should essentially shut up and do what he says. Uh- okay, if you force someone to give you sexual pleasure against their will, [[PunctuatedForEmphasis that. Is. Rape.]] Intercourse or not. Wanna see it get worse? Later we get the same situation with the bath again, but Bubbles goes through with it out of fear. Him insists on washing her and violating her personal space until she's (justifiably) certain this will lead to rape. Him once again insists he will not rape her. RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil, after all. [[SarcasmMode But--it's a-okay if he simply manhandles her a little for kicks as long as it's not the direct act of sex.]] Oh, and it doesn't end there. [[StockholmSyndrome Later Bubbles has started to fall for Him,]] and her time is almost up and she can go back home in a few days. Now, does Him reveal that the whole "Take Me Instead and use me like a Pet" is a big supernatural contract that was out of Him's control to change the rules of, and they both had to get through it on those terms whether either of them agreed to them or not? Nope. Him reveals that this was all just a clever little scheme he put together to trick innocent little Bubbles into falling for/ trusting him. So is Bubbles pissed out of her mind since all the humiliation and molestation she went through was just a trick and proceeds to kick his demonic ass? Oh no, she's just a little insulted. Look, Bubbles might be the most kindhearted and understanding of the Girls, but she is certainly is not this kind of a pushover! I won't use up the rest of this page typing out the ending or the stuff that comes after this. The thing that gets me is that these plot elements make the moral come off as: "If someone forces you to be a glorified SexSlave that = True Love!!" and "Rape is only if someone forces intercourse on you, not any other type of touching or sexual contact against your will." The fic is supposed to be darkly romantic, but this comes across as deeply disturbing.disturbing. * NisjayCakecup: Well, Fanfic/MyLittleUnicorn wasn't particularly good to begin with, being rife with snark bait, but there is one example that's the zenith of Mykan's cruelty towards [[DesignatedMonkey Cadence]] in [[http://dakari-king-mykan.deviantart.com/art/Episode-17-Desperate-Efforts-570157772 Season 5 Chapter 17]]. To make the long story short, Cadence winds up having a miscarriage. To make things worse, his [[DearNegativeReader author's notes]] even said so before the chapter begins, just to rub the salt in the wounds on Cadence's fans. And none of [[DesignatedHero Starfleet]] even tries to help prevent such.
8th Nov '15 3:16:38 PM N8han11
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I realised how stupid Dethroning Moments are in general...
* N8han11: While FanFic/PrisonIslandBreak is one of my favourite FanFics out there, there is one moment I don't enjoy. Over the course of the story, [[VideoGame/SonicAdventure2 Shadow]] has been shown to be a very messed up homophobe, and person in general. So what does he do in season 2? Make out with Sonic in the bathrooms of course, going completely against the character he had at that point. All the chapter did was show that the author gave in to the Sonadow shippers, and it dragged down the story.
9th Oct '15 5:08:46 PM Tuckerscreator
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* Calamity2007: I used to love Fanfic/DiamondInTheRough but episode 13 has a moment which made me put the whole series in question. It is the scene near the end of the fight between the Diamondback Beasts and Flandre, where they decide to "Screw Spell Card Rules" and paralyze her. Now the problem I have is that this seems to ignore Flandre's [[PersonOfMassDestruction natural ability to destroy anything at will]], which is why she is always fought with Spell Card Rules, to suppress this ability. It just seemed that Spaztique conveniently forgot that she could do that just for a WhamEpisode. This becomes especially annoying when you see the previous episode where Tenshi [[TakeThatAudience takes on a not so subtle rant]] about misinterpreting the characters, like Yuuka being a sadist or Tenshi being masochist. Then come the next episode and it seemed that Spaztique [[{{Hypocrite}} ignores]] Flandre's canon power for the sake of drama. The next episode attempts to HandWave this by Flandre believing in HonorBeforeReason but that still is a fan-created personality trait, and thus can be taken as a misinterpretation, just to excuse this scene and center the blame on Brolli.
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* Calamity2007: I used to love Fanfic/DiamondInTheRough WebAnimation/DiamondInTheRoughTouhou but episode 13 has a moment which made me put the whole series in question. It is the scene near the end of the fight between the Diamondback Beasts and Flandre, where they decide to "Screw Spell Card Rules" and paralyze her. Now the problem I have is that this seems to ignore Flandre's [[PersonOfMassDestruction natural ability to destroy anything at will]], which is why she is always fought with Spell Card Rules, to suppress this ability. It just seemed that Spaztique conveniently forgot that she could do that just for a WhamEpisode. This becomes especially annoying when you see the previous episode where Tenshi [[TakeThatAudience takes on a not so subtle rant]] about misinterpreting the characters, like Yuuka being a sadist or Tenshi being masochist. Then come the next episode and it seemed that Spaztique [[{{Hypocrite}} ignores]] Flandre's canon power for the sake of drama. The next episode attempts to HandWave this by Flandre believing in HonorBeforeReason but that still is a fan-created personality trait, and thus can be taken as a misinterpretation, just to excuse this scene and center the blame on Brolli.
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* Calamity2007: Don't get me wrong, I love Fanfic/DiamondInTheRough but episode 13 has a moment which bugs me. It is the scene near the end of the fight between the Diamondback Beasts and Flandre, where they decide to "Screw Spell Card Rules" and paralyze her. Now the problem I have is that this seems to ignore Flandre's [[PersonOfMassDestruction natural ability to destroy anything at will]], which is why she is always fought with Spell Card Rules, to suppress this ability. It just seemed that Spaztique conveniently forgot that she could do that just for a WhamEpisode. This becomes especially annoying when you see the previous episode where Tenshi [[TakeThatAudience takes on a not so subtle rant]] about misinterpreting the characters, like Yuuka being a sadist or Tenshi being masochist. Then come the next episode and it seemed that Spaztique [[{{Hypocrite}} ignores]] Flandre's canon power for the sake of drama. The next episode attempts to HandWave this by Flandre believing in HonorBeforeReason but that still is a fan-created personality trait, and thus can be taken as a misinterpretation, just to excuse this scene and center the blame on Brolli.
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* Calamity2007: Don't get me wrong, I used to love Fanfic/DiamondInTheRough but episode 13 has a moment which bugs me.made me put the whole series in question. It is the scene near the end of the fight between the Diamondback Beasts and Flandre, where they decide to "Screw Spell Card Rules" and paralyze her. Now the problem I have is that this seems to ignore Flandre's [[PersonOfMassDestruction natural ability to destroy anything at will]], which is why she is always fought with Spell Card Rules, to suppress this ability. It just seemed that Spaztique conveniently forgot that she could do that just for a WhamEpisode. This becomes especially annoying when you see the previous episode where Tenshi [[TakeThatAudience takes on a not so subtle rant]] about misinterpreting the characters, like Yuuka being a sadist or Tenshi being masochist. Then come the next episode and it seemed that Spaztique [[{{Hypocrite}} ignores]] Flandre's canon power for the sake of drama. The next episode attempts to HandWave this by Flandre believing in HonorBeforeReason but that still is a fan-created personality trait, and thus can be taken as a misinterpretation, just to excuse this scene and center the blame on Brolli.
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