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---> '''[=McGonagall=]''' Obviously I received it, or I would have asked you what you are doing in my classroom.
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---> '''[=McGonagall=]''' '''[=McGonagall=]:''' Obviously I received it, or I would have asked you what you are doing in my classroom.
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* Sirius Black:
** From ''[=OoTP=]'':
---> '''Sirius:''' What are you up to?
---> '''Kreacher:''' [[BlatantLies Kreacher is cleaning.]] Kreacher lives to serve the Noble House of Black-
---> '''Sirius:''' And it's getting blacker every day, it's filthy.
** When Harry asks if the Order members are telling the wizarding population that Voldemort's back:
---> '''Sirius:''' Well, as everyone thinks I'm a mad mass-murderer and the Ministry's put a ten thousand Galleon price on my head, I can hardly stroll up the street and start handing out leaflets, can I?
** From ''[=OoTP=]'':
---> '''Sirius:''' What are you up to?
---> '''Kreacher:''' [[BlatantLies Kreacher is cleaning.]] Kreacher lives to serve the Noble House of Black-
---> '''Sirius:''' And it's getting blacker every day, it's filthy.
** When Harry asks if the Order members are telling the wizarding population that Voldemort's back:
---> '''Sirius:''' Well, as everyone thinks I'm a mad mass-murderer and the Ministry's put a ten thousand Galleon price on my head, I can hardly stroll up the street and start handing out leaflets, can I?
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---> '''Umbridge:''' Yes, as gamekeeper fresh air must be so difficult to come by.
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---> '''Umbridge:''' Yes, as gamekeeper gatekeeper fresh air must be so difficult to come by.
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--->'''Dumbledore:''' Jokes? No, no, these are manners.
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--->'''Dumbledore:''' Jokes? No, no, these are manners. […] Is that you, Fenrir?
--->'''Fenrir Greyback:''' That's right. Pleased to see me, Dumbledore?
--->'''Dumbledore:''' No, I cannot say that I am.
--->'''Fenrir Greyback:''' That's right. Pleased to see me, Dumbledore?
--->'''Dumbledore:''' No, I cannot say that I am.
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* Albus Dumbledore:
** In ''the Half-Blood Prince'':
--->'''Vernon Dursley:''' I don't mean to be rude –
--->'''Dumbledore:''' – yet, sadly, accidental rudeness occurs alarmingly often. Best to say nothing at all, my dear man.
** Even when he's minutes away from dying:
--->'''Dumbledore:''' Good evening, Amycus. And you've brought Alecto too… [[SarcasmMode charming…]]
--->'''Alecto Carrow:''' Think your little jokes'll help you on your deathbed then?
--->'''Dumbledore:''' Jokes? No, no, these are manners.
** In ''the Half-Blood Prince'':
--->'''Vernon Dursley:''' I don't mean to be rude –
--->'''Dumbledore:''' – yet, sadly, accidental rudeness occurs alarmingly often. Best to say nothing at all, my dear man.
** Even when he's minutes away from dying:
--->'''Dumbledore:''' Good evening, Amycus. And you've brought Alecto too… [[SarcasmMode charming…]]
--->'''Alecto Carrow:''' Think your little jokes'll help you on your deathbed then?
--->'''Dumbledore:''' Jokes? No, no, these are manners.
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* Ron:Ron, probably as a byproduct from growing up with Fred and George:
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---> '''Harry:'''Not as stupid as you look, are you, Dud? But I s'pose, if you were, you wouldn’t be able to walk and talk at the same time.
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** In ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows Deathly Hallows]]'' [[spoiler: when Scrimgeour reads the trio the will of Albus Dumbledore]]. HilariousInHindsight because Scrimgeour and Harry ''both'' ended up being right.
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** In ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows Deathly Hallows]]'' [[spoiler: when Hallows]]'', [[spoiler:when Scrimgeour reads the trio the will of Albus Dumbledore]]. HilariousInHindsight because Scrimgeour and Harry ''both'' ended up being right.
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---> '''[=McGonagall=]:''' Well, thank you for that assessment, Mr. Weasley. Perhaps it would be more useful if I were to transfigure Mr Mr. Potter or yourself into a pocket watch. That way, one of you might be on time.
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** His response to [[spoiler: Dumbledore's order [[ItMakesSenseInContext to kill him]]]]:
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** His response to [[spoiler: Dumbledore's [[spoiler:Dumbledore's order [[ItMakesSenseInContext to kill him]]]]:
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'''Snape''': Speaking of dogs, did you know that Lucius Malfoy recognized you last time you risked a little jaunt outside? Clever idea, Black, getting yourself seen on a safe station platform . . . gave you a cast-iron excuse not to leave your hidey-hole in future, didn’t it?\\
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'''Snape''': Speaking of dogs, did you know that Lucius Malfoy recognized you last time you risked a little jaunt outside? Clever idea, Black, getting yourself seen on a safe station platform . . .platform... gave you a cast-iron excuse not to leave your hidey-hole in future, didn’t it?\\
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** Believe it or not, the Dursleys have their snark moments.
---> '''Dudley''': "I heard you last night. Talking in your sleep. ''Moaning''." [...] “ ‘Don’t [[spoiler:kill Cedric]]! Don’t [[spoiler:kill Cedric!]]’ Who’s Cedric — your boyfriend?”
** Believe it or not, the Dursleys have their snark moments.
---> '''Dudley''': "I heard you last night. Talking in your sleep. ''Moaning''." [...] “ ‘Don’t [[spoiler:kill Cedric]]! Don’t [[spoiler:kill Cedric!]]’ Who’s Cedric — your boyfriend?”
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---> '''Snape:''' Unless you wish to ''poison'' Potter... and I assure you I would be in the ''greatest'' sympathy with you if you did... I cannot help you.
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---> '''Snape:''' Unless you wish to ''poison'' Potter... and I assure you I would be in the ''greatest'' sympathy with you if you did... I cannot help you.
you. The only trouble is that most venoms act too fast to give the victim much time for truth-telling. . . .
**Yep, Snape is pretty good at doing this. Read this wonderful scene in Book 5:
---> '''Snape''': I was supposed to see you alone, Potter, but Black—\\
'''Sirius''': I'm his godfather.\\
'''Snape''': I am here on Dumbledore's orders — but by all means stay, Black. I know you like to feel... involved.\\
'''Sirius''': What's that supposed to mean?\\
'''Snape''': Merely that I am sure you must feel — ah — frustrated by the fact that you can do nothing ''useful'' for the Order.\\
[...]\\
'''Harry''': Who's going to be teaching me?\\
'''Snape''': ''(raises an eyebrow)'' I am.\\
'''Sirius''': Why can't Dumbledore teach Harry? Why you?\\
'''Snape''': I suppose because it is a headmaster’s privilege to delegate less enjoyable tasks.\\
[...]\\
'''Snape''': I will expect you at six o’clock on Monday evening, Potter. My office. If anybody asks, you are taking Remedial Potions. Nobody who has seen you in my classes could deny you need them.\\
[...]\\
'''Snape''': ''(attempts to leave)''\\
'''Sirius''': Wait a moment.\\
'''Snape''': I am in rather a hurry, Black . . . unlike you, I do not have unlimited leisure time. . . .\\
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'''Sirius''': I'll get to the point, then. If I hear you’re using these Occlumency lessons to give Harry a hard time, you’ll have me to answer to.\\
'''Snape''': How touching. But surely you have noticed that Potter is very like his father?\\
'''Sirius''': Yes, I have.\\
'''Snape''': Well then, you’ll know he’s so arrogant that criticism simply bounces off him.\\
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'''Sirius''': I've warned you, ''Snivellus'', I don’t care if Dumbledore thinks you’ve reformed, I know better —\\
'''Snape''': Oh, but why don’t you tell him so? Or are you afraid he might not take the advice of a man who has been hiding inside his mother’s house for six months very seriously?\\
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'''Sirius''': Tell me, how is Lucius Malfoy these days? I expect he’s delighted his lapdog’s working at Hogwarts, isn’t he?\\
'''Snape''': Speaking of dogs, did you know that Lucius Malfoy recognized you last time you risked a little jaunt outside? Clever idea, Black, getting yourself seen on a safe station platform . . . gave you a cast-iron excuse not to leave your hidey-hole in future, didn’t it?\\
'''Harry''': NO! Sirius, don’t —\\
'''Sirius''': Are you calling me a coward!?\\
'''Snape''': Why, yes, I suppose I am.\\
**Yep, Snape is pretty good at doing this. Read this wonderful scene in Book 5:
---> '''Snape''': I was supposed to see you alone, Potter, but Black—\\
'''Sirius''': I'm his godfather.\\
'''Snape''': I am here on Dumbledore's orders — but by all means stay, Black. I know you like to feel... involved.\\
'''Sirius''': What's that supposed to mean?\\
'''Snape''': Merely that I am sure you must feel — ah — frustrated by the fact that you can do nothing ''useful'' for the Order.\\
[...]\\
'''Harry''': Who's going to be teaching me?\\
'''Snape''': ''(raises an eyebrow)'' I am.\\
'''Sirius''': Why can't Dumbledore teach Harry? Why you?\\
'''Snape''': I suppose because it is a headmaster’s privilege to delegate less enjoyable tasks.\\
[...]\\
'''Snape''': I will expect you at six o’clock on Monday evening, Potter. My office. If anybody asks, you are taking Remedial Potions. Nobody who has seen you in my classes could deny you need them.\\
[...]\\
'''Snape''': ''(attempts to leave)''\\
'''Sirius''': Wait a moment.\\
'''Snape''': I am in rather a hurry, Black . . . unlike you, I do not have unlimited leisure time. . . .\\
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'''Sirius''': I'll get to the point, then. If I hear you’re using these Occlumency lessons to give Harry a hard time, you’ll have me to answer to.\\
'''Snape''': How touching. But surely you have noticed that Potter is very like his father?\\
'''Sirius''': Yes, I have.\\
'''Snape''': Well then, you’ll know he’s so arrogant that criticism simply bounces off him.\\
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'''Sirius''': I've warned you, ''Snivellus'', I don’t care if Dumbledore thinks you’ve reformed, I know better —\\
'''Snape''': Oh, but why don’t you tell him so? Or are you afraid he might not take the advice of a man who has been hiding inside his mother’s house for six months very seriously?\\
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'''Sirius''': Tell me, how is Lucius Malfoy these days? I expect he’s delighted his lapdog’s working at Hogwarts, isn’t he?\\
'''Snape''': Speaking of dogs, did you know that Lucius Malfoy recognized you last time you risked a little jaunt outside? Clever idea, Black, getting yourself seen on a safe station platform . . . gave you a cast-iron excuse not to leave your hidey-hole in future, didn’t it?\\
'''Harry''': NO! Sirius, don’t —\\
'''Sirius''': Are you calling me a coward!?\\
'''Snape''': Why, yes, I suppose I am.\\
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** And as a narrator, Rowling has her moments too:
---> "“Well, you see,” said Hermione [to Harry], with the patient air of one explaining that one plus one equals two to an overemotional toddler [...]
** And as a narrator, Rowling has her moments too:
---> "“Well, you see,” said Hermione [to Harry], with the patient air of one explaining that one plus one equals two to an overemotional toddler [...]
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'''Harry:''' We got lost.
'''[=McGonagall=]:''' Then perhaps a map?
'''[=McGonagall=]:''' Then perhaps a map?
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** After Harry and Ron are late to class:
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'''Harry:''' We got lost.
'''[=McGonagall=]:''' Then perhaps a map?
'''[=McGonagall=]:''' Then perhaps a map?
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---> '''Harry:''' Interesting theory. Has anyone ever tried sticking a sword in Voldemort? Maybe the Ministry should put some people onto that, instead of wasting their time stripping down Deluminators or covering up breakouts from Azkaban.
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---> '''Harry:''' Interesting theory. Has anyone ever tried [[MundaneSolution sticking a sword in Voldemort? Voldemort?]] Maybe the Ministry should put some people onto that, instead of wasting their time stripping down Deluminators or covering up breakouts from Azkaban.
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Almost all of the Characters in Harry Potter as well as the author are very snarky. A few specific examples:
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Almost all of the Characters characters in Harry Potter as ''Harry Potter''--as well as the author are author--are very snarky. A few specific examples:
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---> '''1st Weasley Twin:''' All summer -
---> '''1st Weasley Twin:''' Or twice -
---> '''2nd Weasley Twin:''' A minute -
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---> '''2nd Weasley Twin:''' Hang on, I think I remember him saying something about it. Once -
Once--
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---> '''1st Weasley Twin:''' Allsummer - summer--
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---> '''Moody:''' Arthur and Fred –
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---> '''Fred:''' I’m only yanking your wand, I’m Fred really –
---> '''Fred:''' I’m only yanking your wand, I’m Fred really –
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---> '''Moody''' Sorry, George –
George--
---> '''Fred:''' I’m only yanking your wand, I’m Fredreally – really--
---> '''Fred:''' I’m only yanking your wand, I’m Fred
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---> '''Harry:''' “And they’d love to have me,” said Harry sarcastically. “We’d be best pals if they didn’t keep trying to do me in.”
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---> '''Harry:''' “And And they’d love to have me,” said Harry sarcastically. “We’d me. We’d be best pals if they didn’t keep trying to do me in.”
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---> '''Harry:''' Dumbledore would have given me the sword? [[note]] of Gryffindor[[/note]] ...Maybe he thought it would look nice on my wall.
---> '''Scrimgeour:''' This is not a joke, Potter! ...Did he give you that sword, Potter, because he believed, as do many, [[TheChosenOne that you are the one destined to destroy He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named?]]
---> '''Harry:''' Dumbledore would have given me the sword? [[note]] of Gryffindor[[/note]] ...Maybe he thought it would look nice on my wall.
---> '''Scrimgeour:''' This is not a joke, Potter! ...Did he give you that sword, Potter, because he believed, as do many, [[TheChosenOne that you are the one destined to destroy He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named?]]
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---> '''Scrimgeour:''' Why do you think -
think--
---> '''Harry:''' Dumbledore would have given me the sword? [[note]] ofGryffindor[[/note]] ...Maybe Gryffindor[[/note]] …maybe he thought it would look nice on my wall.
---> '''Scrimgeour:''' This is not a joke, Potter! ...Did did he give you that sword, Potter, because he believed, as do many, [[TheChosenOne that you are the one destined to destroy He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named?]]
---> '''Harry:''' Dumbledore would have given me the sword? [[note]] of
---> '''Scrimgeour:''' This is not a joke, Potter! ...
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---> '''Umbridge:''' I was just wondering, Professor, whether you received my note telling you of the date and time of your inspec –?inspec--?
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---> '''[=McGonagall=]:''' Potter has achieved high marks in all his Defense Against the Dark Arts tests-
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---> '''[=McGonagall=]:''' Potter has achieved high marks in all his Defense Against the Dark Arts tests-tests--
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---> '''[=McGonagall=]:''' I should have made my meaning plainer. He has achieved high marks in all Defense Against the Dark Arts tests set by a competent teacher.[[note]]For an extra burn, 'competant teacher' "competent teacher" can pretty much only be in reference to [[OurWerewolvesAreDifferent Remus Lupin]], who Umbridge [[FantasticRacism particularly hates]].[[/note]]
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---> '''Hermione:''' I know what this is -- it's is--it's devil's snare!
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-->'''Uncle Vernon''': I am not aware that it is any of your business what goes on in my house—
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-->'''Uncle Vernon''': I am not aware that it is any of your business what goes on in my house—house--
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-->"[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheHalfBloodPrince Book Six]] is called ''The Toenail of Icklibõgg''—Well, if you believed the '[Pillar of] Storgé' one..."
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-->"[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheHalfBloodPrince Book Six]] is called ''The Toenail of Icklibõgg''—Well, Icklibõgg''--Well, if you believed the '[Pillar of] Storgé' one..."
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** In ''Sorcerer's/Philospher's Stone'':
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** In ''Sorcerer's/Philospher's ''Sorcerer's/Philosopher's Stone'':
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-->'''Harry:''' Hang on, there's an empty chair at the staff table. Where's Snape?\\
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** In the book version of ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheChamberOfSecrets Chamber of Secrets]]'', pulling off a classic RightBehindMe on Harry and Ron::
-->'''Harry:''' Hang on, there's an empty chair at the staff table. Where's Snape?\\
'''Ron:''' Maybe he's ill!\\
'''Harry:''' Maybe he ''left'', because he missed out on the Defence Against the Dark Arts job ''again''!\\
'''Ron:''' Or he might have been ''sacked''! I mean, everyone hates him--\\
'''Snape:''' ''(from behind them)'' Or ''maybe'' he's waiting to hear why you two didn't arrive on the school train.
-->'''Harry:''' Hang on, there's an empty chair at the staff table. Where's Snape?\\
'''Ron:''' Maybe he's ill!\\
'''Harry:''' Maybe he ''left'', because he missed out on the Defence Against the Dark Arts job ''again''!\\
'''Ron:''' Or he might have been ''sacked''! I mean, everyone hates him--\\
'''Snape:''' ''(from behind them)'' Or ''maybe'' he's waiting to hear why you two didn't arrive on the school train.
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** Later in the same conversation:
---> '''Harry:'''Not as stupid as you look, are you, Dud? But I s'pose, if you were, you wouldn’t be able to walk and talk at the same time.
** And:
---> '''Harry:''' Yeah? Did he say you look like a pig that’s been taught to walk on its hind legs? ‘Cause that’s not cheek, Dud, that’s true…
---> '''Harry:'''Not as stupid as you look, are you, Dud? But I s'pose, if you were, you wouldn’t be able to walk and talk at the same time.
** And:
---> '''Harry:''' Yeah? Did he say you look like a pig that’s been taught to walk on its hind legs? ‘Cause that’s not cheek, Dud, that’s true…
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** And later in that same conversation:
---> '''Draco:''' You think you’re such a big man, Potter. You wait. I’ll have you. You can’t land my father in prison.
---> '''Harry:''' I thought I just had.
---> '''Draco:''' You think you’re such a big man, Potter. You wait. I’ll have you. You can’t land my father in prison.
---> '''Harry:''' I thought I just had.
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** When Hermione suggests that while she herself is muggleborn and therefore disqualified from being a Death Eater, Ron and Harry are pureblood enough to qualify:
---> '''Harry:''' “And they’d love to have me,” said Harry sarcastically. “We’d be best pals if they didn’t keep trying to do me in.”
---> '''Harry:''' “And they’d love to have me,” said Harry sarcastically. “We’d be best pals if they didn’t keep trying to do me in.”
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*** Given it's fall in Scotland at that point, this is more than a bit of a sucker bet...
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* Mad Eye Moody
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* Mad Eye Mad-Eye Moody
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-->'''Mad Eye''': I expect what you're not aware of would fill several books, Dursley.
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---> '''Scrimgeour:''' ''[scratching his baldy shaven cheek and scrutinizing Harry]'' Why do you think -
---> '''Harry:''' ''[struggling to keep his temper]'' - Dumbledore would have given me the sword? [[note]] of Gryffindor[[/note]] ...Maybe he thought it would look nice on my wall.
---> '''Harry:''' ''[struggling to keep his temper]'' - Dumbledore would have given me the sword? [[note]] of Gryffindor[[/note]] ...Maybe he thought it would look nice on my wall.
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---> '''Scrimgeour:''' ''[scratching his baldy shaven cheek and scrutinizing Harry]'' Why do you think -
---> '''Harry:'''''[struggling to keep his temper]'' - Dumbledore would have given me the sword? [[note]] of Gryffindor[[/note]] ...Maybe he thought it would look nice on my wall.
---> '''Harry:'''
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---> '''Harry:''' There's no need to call me "sir," Professor.
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---> '''Harry:''' [[BrassBalls There's no need to call me "sir," Professor.]]
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** In ''Prisoner of Azkaban'':
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** In ''Prisoner of Azkaban'':''Sorcerer's/Philospher's Stone'':
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* Umbridge:
** Believe it or not, even Umbridge has her moments.
---> '''Hagrid:''' I — I’ve been away for me health.
---> '''Umbridge:''' For your health. I see.
---> '''Hagrid:''' Yeah, bit o’ — o’ fresh air, yeh know —
---> '''Umbridge:''' Yes, as gamekeeper fresh air must be so difficult to come by.
** Believe it or not, even Umbridge has her moments.
---> '''Hagrid:''' I — I’ve been away for me health.
---> '''Umbridge:''' For your health. I see.
---> '''Hagrid:''' Yeah, bit o’ — o’ fresh air, yeh know —
---> '''Umbridge:''' Yes, as gamekeeper fresh air must be so difficult to come by.
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** And ''again'':
---> '''Uncle Vernon:''' Watching the news? Again?
---> '''Harry:''' Well, it changes everyday, you see.
---> '''Uncle Vernon:''' Watching the news? Again?
---> '''Harry:''' Well, it changes everyday, you see.
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---> '''Harry:''' No thanks. The poor toilet's never had anything as horrible as your head in it; it might be sick.
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---> '''Harry:''' No thanks. The poor toilet's never had anything as horrible as your head in it; it might be sick. ''(runs for it before Dudley can figure out what he said)''
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---> Petunia: Don't be stupid, I'm dyeing some of Dudley's old things gray for you. It'll look just like everyone else's when I've finished.
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---> Harry (while '''Harry ''(while looking into the bowl): bowl)'':''' Oh, I didn't realize it had to be so wet.
--->Petunia: '''Petunia:''' Don't be stupid, I'm dyeing some of Dudley's old things gray for you. It'll look just like everyone else's when I've finished.
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--> '''Professor Trelawney:''' Would anyone like me to help interpret the shadowy realms within their orb?
--> '''Ron:''' ''[whispering to Harry]'' I don't need help. It's obvious what this means. There's going to be loads of fog tonight.
--> '''Harry:''' Death's got an Invisibility Cloak?
--> '''Ron:''' So he can sneak up on people. Sometimes he gets tired of running at them and shrieking.
--> '''Harry:''' If I dropped dead every time that old bat said I would, I'd be a medical miracle.
--> '''Ron:''' You'd actually be a kind of extra-concentrated ghost.
--> '''Hermione:''' Look, if I picked up a sword right now, Ron, and ran you through with it, I wouldn't damage your soul at all.
--> '''Ron:''' Which would be a real comfort to me, I'm sure.
--> '''Hermione:''' Everyone knows. Well, everyone who has read ''Hogwarts: A History.''
--> '''Ron:''' Just you, then.
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---> '''Professor Trelawney:''' Would anyone like me to help interpret the shadowy realms within their orb?
-->
** In ''Deathly Hallows'':
---> '''Harry:''' Death's got an Invisibility Cloak?
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* In ''Philosopher's Stone'', after the Trio lands in the first obstacle room:
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--->'''Harry:''' Don't call Hermione "simple!"\\
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--> '''Hermione:''' I know what this is -- it's devil's snare!
--> '''Ron:''' Great, we know what its name is. That's a huge help.
--> '''Ron:''' Great, we know what its name is. That's a huge help.
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---> "I've already answered this in [=FAQs=], but as this rumour is still cropping up in fan letters I thought I'd reiterate here that there will be NO chapter called 'Lupin's Papers' in [[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheHalfBloodPrince book six]], nor will there be chapters entitled [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal 'Pettigrew's Pamphlets', 'Sirius's Circulars']] or 'The Pocket Crosswords of Severus Snape'."
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** Can't forget the twins' CrowningMomentOfFunny when Mrs. Weasley freaks out about Ron being a prefect:
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** Can't forget the twins' CrowningMomentOfFunny when Mrs. Weasley freaks out about Ron being a prefect:prefect in ''Order of the Phoenix'':
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** While planning to move Harry from the Dursleys:
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** While planning to move Harry from the Dursleys:Dursleys in ''Deathly Hallows'':
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-->'''Draco:''' Honestly, if you were any slower, you'd be going backwards.
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--> '''1st Weasley Twin:''' Oh, are you a prefect, Percy? You should have said something, we had no idea.
--> '''2nd Weasley Twin:''' Hang on, I think I remember him saying something about it. Once -
--> '''1st Weasley Twin:''' Or twice -
--> '''2nd Weasley Twin:''' A minute -
--> '''1st Weasley Twin:''' All summer -
--> '''2nd Weasley Twin:''' Hang on, I think I remember him saying something about it. Once -
--> '''1st Weasley Twin:''' Or twice -
--> '''2nd Weasley Twin:''' A minute -
--> '''1st Weasley Twin:''' All summer -
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--> '''Mrs. Weasley:''' Oh, that's wonderful! That's everyone in the family!
--> '''George:''' What are Fred and I? Next door neighbors?
--> '''George:''' What are Fred and I? Next door neighbors?
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--> '''Moody:''' Arthur and Fred –
--> '''Twin:''' I’m George. Can’t you even tell us apart when we’re Harry?
--> '''Moody''' Sorry, George –
--> '''Fred:''' I’m only yanking your wand, I’m Fred really –
--> '''Moody:''' ''[Angrily]'' Enough messing around!
--> '''Twin:''' I’m George. Can’t you even tell us apart when we’re Harry?
--> '''Moody''' Sorry, George –
--> '''Fred:''' I’m only yanking your wand, I’m Fred really –
--> '''Moody:''' ''[Angrily]'' Enough messing around!
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--> '''Dudley:''' They flush people's heads down the toilet first day at Stonewall. Want to practice?
--> '''Harry:''' No thanks. The poor toilet's never had anything as horrible as your head in it; it might be sick.
--> '''Harry:''' No thanks. The poor toilet's never had anything as horrible as your head in it; it might be sick.
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--> Harry (while looking into the bowl): Oh, I didn't realize it had to be so wet.
--> Petunia: Don't be stupid, I'm dyeing some of Dudley's old things gray for you. It'll look just like everyone else's when I've finished.
--> Petunia: Don't be stupid, I'm dyeing some of Dudley's old things gray for you. It'll look just like everyone else's when I've finished.
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--> '''Dudley:''' I know what day it is.
--> '''Harry:''' Well done. You've finally learned the days of the week.
--> '''Harry:''' Well done. You've finally learned the days of the week.
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--> '''Dudley:''' Not this brave at night, are you?
--> '''Harry:''' This is night, Diddykins. That's what we call it when it goes all dark like this.
--> '''Harry:''' This is night, Diddykins. That's what we call it when it goes all dark like this.
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--> '''Draco:''' You're dead, Potter.
--> '''Harry:''' Funny, you'd think I'd have stopped walking around...
--> '''Harry:''' Funny, you'd think I'd have stopped walking around...
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--> '''Draco:''' You see, I, unlike you, have been made a prefect, which means that I, unlike you, have the power to hand out punishments.
--> '''Harry:''' Yeah, but you, unlike me, are a git.
--> '''Harry:''' Yeah, but you, unlike me, are a git.
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--> '''Harry:''' Yeah, Quirrell was a great teacher. There was just that minor drawback of him having Lord Voldemort sticking out of the back of his head!
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--> '''Harry:''' Yes.
--> '''Snape:''' Yes ''sir''.
--> '''Harry:''' There's no need to call me "sir," Professor.
--> '''Snape:''' Yes ''sir''.
--> '''Harry:''' There's no need to call me "sir," Professor.
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--> '''Scrimgeour:''' ''[scratching his baldy shaven cheek and scrutinizing Harry]'' Why do you think -
--> '''Harry:''' ''[struggling to keep his temper]'' - Dumbledore would have given me the sword? [[note]] of Gryffindor[[/note]] ...Maybe he thought it would look nice on my wall.
--> '''Scrimgeour:''' This is not a joke, Potter! ...Did he give you that sword, Potter, because he believed, as do many, [[TheChosenOne that you are the one destined to destroy He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named?]]
--> '''Harry:''' Interesting theory. Has anyone ever tried sticking a sword in Voldemort? Maybe the Ministry should put some people onto that, instead of wasting their time stripping down Deluminators or covering up breakouts from Azkaban.
--> '''Harry:''' ''[struggling to keep his temper]'' - Dumbledore would have given me the sword? [[note]] of Gryffindor[[/note]] ...Maybe he thought it would look nice on my wall.
--> '''Scrimgeour:''' This is not a joke, Potter! ...Did he give you that sword, Potter, because he believed, as do many, [[TheChosenOne that you are the one destined to destroy He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named?]]
--> '''Harry:''' Interesting theory. Has anyone ever tried sticking a sword in Voldemort? Maybe the Ministry should put some people onto that, instead of wasting their time stripping down Deluminators or covering up breakouts from Azkaban.
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--> '''[=McGonagall=]:''' I hardly think that matters, Sybil, unless there is a mad axeman waiting outside the hall to decapitate the first person to leave.
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--> '''[=McGonagall=]:''' You look perfectly healthy to me, Potter, so you'll forgive me if I don't let you off homework. I assure you that if you die, you need not hand it in.
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--> '''[=McGonagall=]:''' Well, I'm glad that you listen to Hermione Granger, at any rate.
--> '''[=McGonagall=]:''' Well, thank you for that assessment, Mr. Weasley. Perhaps it would be more useful if I were to transfigure Mr Potter or yourself into a pocket watch. That way, one of you might be on time.
--> '''[=McGonagall=]:''' Well, thank you for that assessment, Mr. Weasley. Perhaps it would be more useful if I were to transfigure Mr Potter or yourself into a pocket watch. That way, one of you might be on time.
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--> '''Umbridge:''' I was just wondering, Professor, whether you received my note telling you of the date and time of your inspec –?
--> '''[=McGonagall=]''' Obviously I received it, or I would have asked you what you are doing in my classroom.
--> '''[=McGonagall=]''' Obviously I received it, or I would have asked you what you are doing in my classroom.
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--> '''[=McGonagall=]:''' Potter has achieved high marks in all his Defense Against the Dark Arts tests-
--> '''Umbridge:''' I’m terribly sorry to have to contradict you, Minerva, but as you will see from my note, Harry has been achieving very poor results in his classes with me.
--> '''[=McGonagall=]:''' I should have made my meaning plainer. He has achieved high marks in all Defense Against the Dark Arts tests set by a competent teacher.[[note]]For an extra burn, 'competant teacher' can pretty much only be in reference to [[OurWerewolvesAreDifferent Remus Lupin]], who Umbridge [[FantasticRacism particularly hates]].[[/note]]
--> '''Umbridge:''' I’m terribly sorry to have to contradict you, Minerva, but as you will see from my note, Harry has been achieving very poor results in his classes with me.
--> '''[=McGonagall=]:''' I should have made my meaning plainer. He has achieved high marks in all Defense Against the Dark Arts tests set by a competent teacher.[[note]]For an extra burn, 'competant teacher' can pretty much only be in reference to [[OurWerewolvesAreDifferent Remus Lupin]], who Umbridge [[FantasticRacism particularly hates]].[[/note]]
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--> '''Hermione:''' Stop moving, both of you. This is devil's snare! You have to relax. If you don't, it'll only kill you faster!
--> '''Ron:''' "Kill us ''faster''?" Oh, ''now'' I can relax!
--> '''Ron:''' "Kill us ''faster''?" Oh, ''now'' I can relax!
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--> '''Snape:''' What would your head have been doing in Hogsmeade, Potter? Your head is not allowed in Hogsmeade. No part of your body has permission to be in Hogsmeade.
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--> '''Snape:''' Miss Granger has developed a taste for famous wizards which Potter alone cannot... satisfy.
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--> '''Snape:''' Oh, very good. Yes, it is easy to see that nearly six years of magical education have not been wasted on you, Potter. "Ghosts are transparent."
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--> '''Snape:''' Your evidence?
--> '''Harry:''' I just know.
--> '''Snape:''' You just... know. ''[long pause]'' Once again, you astonish me with your gifts, Potter, gifts mere mortals can only ''dream'' of possessing. How grand it must be... to be TheChosenOne.
--> '''Harry:''' I just know.
--> '''Snape:''' You just... know. ''[long pause]'' Once again, you astonish me with your gifts, Potter, gifts mere mortals can only ''dream'' of possessing. How grand it must be... to be TheChosenOne.
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--> '''Umbridge''': You applied first for the Defense Against the Dark Arts post, is that correct?
--> '''Snape''': Yes.
--> '''Umbridge''': But you were unsuccessful?
--> '''Snape''': Obviously.
--> '''Snape''': Yes.
--> '''Umbridge''': But you were unsuccessful?
--> '''Snape''': Obviously.
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--> '''Snape:''' Unless you wish to ''poison'' Potter... and I assure you I would be in the ''greatest'' sympathy with you if you did... I cannot help you.
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-->'''Harry''' I don't wan't to stay overnight. I wan't to find [=McLaggen=] and kill him!
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-->'''Harry''' I don't wan't want to stay overnight. I wan't want to find [=McLaggen=] and kill him!
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-->'''Uncle Vernon''': I am not aware that it is any of your business what goes on in my house-
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-->"The Pyramids of Furmat lie a few miles east of the famous Fortress of Shadows, not far from the magnificent Pillar of Storgé. Many tourists prefer to view these ancient monuments at night, when they are illuminated by the Green Flame Torch." (Those are all previously rumored titles.)
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--> "He had as much input into ''Harry Potter'' as I had in ''Literature/ATaleOfTwoCities''."
--> "I've already answered this in [=FAQs=], but as this rumour is still cropping up in fan letters I thought I'd reiterate here that there will be NO chapter called 'Lupin's Papers' in [[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheHalfBloodPrince book six]], nor will there be chapters entitled [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal 'Pettigrew's Pamphlets', 'Sirius's Circulars']] or 'The Pocket Crosswords of Severus Snape'."
--> "I've already answered this in [=FAQs=], but as this rumour is still cropping up in fan letters I thought I'd reiterate here that there will be NO chapter called 'Lupin's Papers' in [[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheHalfBloodPrince book six]], nor will there be chapters entitled [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal 'Pettigrew's Pamphlets', 'Sirius's Circulars']] or 'The Pocket Crosswords of Severus Snape'."
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--> "There is no character named 'Icicle' in Book Six. There is however, a Professor Bicycle."
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--> Harry (while looking into the bowl): Oh, I didn't realize it had to be so wet."
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** A few passages later on in the same book, Harry found what looked like rags floating in smelly gray water, in a bowl in the kitchen sink, when he went in for breakfast, and was told it was his school uniform for Stonewall High:
--> Harry (while looking into the bowl): Oh, I didn't realize it had to be so wet."
--> Petunia: Don't be stupid, I'm dyeing some of Dudley's old things gray for you. It'll look just like everyone else's when I've finished.
--> Harry (while looking into the bowl): Oh, I didn't realize it had to be so wet."
--> Petunia: Don't be stupid, I'm dyeing some of Dudley's old things gray for you. It'll look just like everyone else's when I've finished.