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** Partner Kai mantions that Minori is this to her... i don't believe her.
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* FasterThanLightTravel - The Gargantas. Ironically, I actually called these things like this before I watched Bleach
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Disambiguated...and this needs some cleanup
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* AnythingThatMoves - Oooooh Lumina. She gets her way with SEVERAL Characters from the cast, including some of the VILLAINS. Her first victim becomes Yuu, although she gets interrupted before she can actually start the act. The second would be Yamiko, although in this case Yamiko was the one who started. Afterwards she has her way with Arthur, Hiita and Aira one after another after they get drunk on a party and it's hinted that she had her way with hundreds of other things, including an ice block...wait an iceblock cannot move...help.
* ExtremeOmnisexual - Lumina gets her way with several characters from the cast, including some of the villains. Her first victim becomes Yuu, although she gets interrupted before she can actually start the act. The second would be Yamiko, although in this case Yamiko was the one who started. Afterwards she has her way with Arthur, Hiita and Aira one after another after they get drunk on a party and it's hinted that she had her way with hundreds of other things, including an ice block.
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* GayOption - And HOW. Pretty much every character has some sort of Homosexual Pairing, with the most obvious being Aisa/Yuu and Yamiko/Lumina. God this two pairings actually have sex in different Parts in the Story!
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* GayOption - And HOW. Pretty much every character has some sort of Homosexual Pairing, with the most obvious being Aisa/Yuu and Yamiko/Lumina. God this two pairings actually have sex in different Parts in the Story!
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Five Man Band is undergoing a wick-cleaning project, so zero-context examples, roles with little to no context, and examples featuring groups of more than five, will be deleted.
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* FiveManBand - There are several but the following are the most obvious.
** TheLeader: Minori/ Yuu/ Aira
** TheLancer: Yuuji/ Taki Takagiri/ Arthur
** TheChick: Aaron/ Kaname Sakuragi/ Lumina
** TheBigGuy: Kazu/ Masaki/ Hiita
** TheSmartGuy: Yuki/ Kentaro/ Aisa
** TheSixthRanger: Shuchi/ Yamiko/ Nazo
** TheLeader: Minori/ Yuu/ Aira
** TheLancer: Yuuji/ Taki Takagiri/ Arthur
** TheChick: Aaron/ Kaname Sakuragi/ Lumina
** TheBigGuy: Kazu/ Masaki/ Hiita
** TheSmartGuy: Yuki/ Kentaro/ Aisa
** TheSixthRanger: Shuchi/ Yamiko/ Nazo
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cut trope
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* FiveBadBand:
** BigBad: Nazo
** TheDragon: Kamen
** TheBrute: Kishin
** TheDarkChick: Kiara
** TheEvilGenius: Akeiro
** BigBad: Nazo
** TheDragon: Kamen
** TheBrute: Kishin
** TheDarkChick: Kiara
** TheEvilGenius: Akeiro
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* WakeupCallBoss - Rainga is this. He isn't actually THAT strong but he is exceptionally powerful after he obtains 4 of the 6 local [[ArtifactOfDoom ArtifactsOfDoom]] until someone FINALLY manages to take of one and he loses his immortality.
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* WakeupCallBoss - Rainga is this. He isn't actually THAT strong but he is exceptionally powerful after he obtains 4 of the 6 local [[ArtifactOfDoom ArtifactsOfDoom]] until someone FINALLY manages to take of one and he loses his immortality.
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Take any entries to the thread.
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* CompleteMonster - Ootani. Let's recap: He wants to kill Yamiko as an infant because she is only half-demon, he curses Karasu with a parasitic curse, he nearly kills [[spoiler: Yamikos father Toushirou, now Kamen,]] by thrwoing him into the Dark Realm and tries to kill his OWN SONS so he can regain his power. And if that is not enough, think about the thing that Karasu was his BEST FRIEND when that happened.
** Actually Dharac qualifies as well. He is one of only 3 Darkness Users in the story. Considering that he is [[spoiler: Shuchi from another Timeline, this IS a HUGE shock]]
** Actually Dharac qualifies as well. He is one of only 3 Darkness Users in the story. Considering that he is [[spoiler: Shuchi from another Timeline, this IS a HUGE shock]]
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** TheBigBad: Nazo
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** TheBigBad: BigBad: Nazo
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** TheHero: Minori/ Yuu/ Aira
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** TheHero: TheLeader: Minori/ Yuu/ Aira
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incorrect usage. Bt Ii is not about \'insanely strong\'
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* BeyondtheImpossible - Karasu is INSANELY powerful when she first appears and easily beats the crap out of Rainga, a Demon who defeated 4 of the 6 DEMON LORDS (althoug he needed the power of the seals of Zamsara). This power gets cranked UptoEleven when she enters her Contra Transformation, where her very existence actually starts to disassemble the atoms of the very earth she levitates on. And it should be noted that she was EVEN MORE powerful before Ootani cursed her.
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* BreakingTheFourthWall - This story subverts, averts, inverts and plays this straight while dancing with the poor thing. One of the most hilarous gives us this gem.
->Yamiko: ''"Darkara, this is my 'totally unimportant whore of a cousin' Lumina. Lumina, this is my 'notmuchmoreimportant idiot student' Darkara"''
->Lumina: ''"Totally...unimportant..."''
->Darkara: ''"Notmuch...more....important..."''
->Both (pointing on eachother): ''"I'm still far more important than her!!"''
->Yamiko: ''"Darkara, this is my 'totally unimportant whore of a cousin' Lumina. Lumina, this is my 'notmuchmoreimportant idiot student' Darkara"''
->Lumina: ''"Totally...unimportant..."''
->Darkara: ''"Notmuch...more....important..."''
->Both (pointing on eachother): ''"I'm still far more important than her!!"''
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* IncrediblyLamePun - Too many to count
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girls with guns is a genre not a character type
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* GirlsWithGuns - Yamiko, 'nuff said.
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* GunKata - Yamiko uses this after her transformation into a full fledged Vasato Lordi, with one Gun being made of energy and the other one being a present from Karasu.
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* GunKata - Yamiko uses this after her transformation into a full fledged Vasato Lordi, with one Gun being made of energy and the other one being a a
present fromKarasu.Karasu.
* TheGunslinger - Yamiko, 'nuff said.
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* TheGunslinger - Yamiko, 'nuff said.
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* AnythingThatMoves - Oooooh Lumina. She gets her way with SEVERAL Characters from the cast, including some of the VILLAINS. Her first victim becomes Yuu, although she gets interrupted before she can actually start the act. The second would be Yamiko, although in this case Yamiko was the one who started. Afterwards she has her way with Arthur, Hiita and Aira one after another after they get drunk on a party and it's hinted that she had her way with hundreds of other things, including an ice block...wait an iceblock cannot move...help.
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* FiveBadBand:
** TheBigBad: Nazo
** TheDragon: Kamen
** TheBrute: Kishin
** TheDarkChick: Kiara
** TheEvilGenius: Akeiro
** TheBigBad: Nazo
** TheDragon: Kamen
** TheBrute: Kishin
** TheDarkChick: Kiara
** TheEvilGenius: Akeiro
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* FiveManBand - There are several but the following are the most obvious.
** TheHero: Minori/ Yuu/ Aira
** TheLancer: Yuuji/ Taki Takagiri/ Arthur
** TheChick: Aaron/ Kaname Sakuragi/ Lumina
** TheBigGuy: Kazu/ Masaki/ Hiita
** TheSmartGuy: Yuki/ Kentaro/ Aisa
** TheSixthRanger: Shuchi/ Yamiko/ Nazo
** TheHero: Minori/ Yuu/ Aira
** TheLancer: Yuuji/ Taki Takagiri/ Arthur
** TheChick: Aaron/ Kaname Sakuragi/ Lumina
** TheBigGuy: Kazu/ Masaki/ Hiita
** TheSmartGuy: Yuki/ Kentaro/ Aisa
** TheSixthRanger: Shuchi/ Yamiko/ Nazo
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* GirlsWithGuns - Yamiko, 'nuff said.
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* GunKata - Yamiko uses this after her transformation into a full fledged Vasato Lordi, with one Gun being made of energy and the other one being a present from Karasu.
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** Actually Dharac qualifies as well. He is one of only 3 Darkness Users in the story. Considering that he is [[spoiler: Shuchi from another Timeline, this IS a HUGE shock]]
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* LightIsNotGood - Most Light Demons are [[Jerkass Jerkasses]]
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* LightIsNotGood - Most Light Demons are [[Jerkass Jerkasses]]jerks. Minori and his servants are actually exceptions. Played streight by both Ootani and Rainga
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* TragicMonster - Yamiko turns into this after she crosses the DespairEventHorizon. She loses control of the demons she absorbed in her lifetime as well as her control over her ancestors opwers, which turn er into something which even NAZO calls a monster. Actually he says that "if he would worship the devil, he would have to worship her".
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* TragicMonster - Yamiko turns into this after she crosses the DespairEventHorizon. She loses control of the demons she absorbed in her lifetime as well as her control over her ancestors opwers, powers, which turn er into something which even NAZO calls a monster. Actually he says that "if he would worship the devil, he would have to worship her".
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* BeyondtheImpossible - Karasu is INSANELY powerful when she first appears and easily beats the crap out of Rainga, a Demon who defeated 4 of the 6 DEMON LORDS (althoug he needed the power of the seals of Zamsara). This power gets cranked UptoEleven when she enters her Contra Transformation, where her very existence actually starts to disassemble the atoms of the very earth she levitates on. And it should be noted that she was EVEN MORE powerful before Ootani cursed her.
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* FasterThanLightTravel - The Gargantas. Ironically, I actually called these things like this before I watched Bleach
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* LightIsNotGood - Most Light Demons are [[Jerkass Jerkasses]]