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Nationality: [[IsraelisWithInfraredMissiles Israeli]]\\

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Nationality: [[IsraelisWithInfraredMissiles [[UsefulNotes/IsraelisWithInfraredMissiles Israeli]]\\
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Obviously a work in a sorry state of progress. Yes, I'm a fan of ''KenichiTheMightiestDisciple'', and ''Manga/RanmaOneHalf'' before it. You could tell?

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Obviously a work in a sorry state of progress. Yes, I'm a fan of ''KenichiTheMightiestDisciple'', ''Manga/KenichiTheMightiestDisciple'', and ''Manga/RanmaOneHalf'' before it. You could tell?
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* CuteClumsyGirl and {{Dojikko}}

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* CuteClumsyGirl and {{Dojikko}}CuteClumsyGirl
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Badass is an index, not a trope.


* BadAss: All members of the Combat Harem apply, but none as much as she, the most aggressive and {{antihero}}ic member.

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* Whoa, really? I didn't think anybody'd notice it.

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* Whoa, really? I didn't think anybody'd notice it.it.

''Speaking of [[http://tinyurl.com/joqd8qn deconstructing the harem genre...]]''
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Applicable tropes: ArrogantKungFuGuy, DarkAndTroubledPast, Dead [[spoiler:Girlfriend]], DeathSeeker, DontYouDarePityMe, RoaringRampageOfRevenge, SympathyForTheDevil, TroubledButCute (in many ways this guy was inspired by [[KenichiTheMightiestDisciple Tanimoto]])

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Applicable tropes: ArrogantKungFuGuy, DarkAndTroubledPast, Dead [[spoiler:Girlfriend]], DeathSeeker, DontYouDarePityMe, RoaringRampageOfRevenge, SympathyForTheDevil, TroubledButCute (in many ways this guy was inspired by [[KenichiTheMightiestDisciple [[Manga/KenichiTheMightiestDisciple Tanimoto]])
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* EyesAlwaysShut: Much like [[MahouSenseiNegima Nagase Kaede]], she will occasionally open one for emphasis. If they are both open, it is a sign of extreme [[OhCrap shock]], [[BerserkButton fury]], or [[RelationshipUpgrade affection]].

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* EyesAlwaysShut: Much like [[MahouSenseiNegima [[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima Nagase Kaede]], she will occasionally open one for emphasis. If they are both open, it is a sign of extreme [[OhCrap shock]], [[BerserkButton fury]], or [[RelationshipUpgrade affection]].
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Obviously a work in a sorry state of progress. Yes, I'm a fan of ''KenichiTheMightiestDisciple'', and ''[[RanmaOneHalf Ranma 1/2]]'' before it. You could tell?

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Obviously a work in a sorry state of progress. Yes, I'm a fan of ''KenichiTheMightiestDisciple'', and ''[[RanmaOneHalf Ranma 1/2]]'' ''Manga/RanmaOneHalf'' before it. You could tell?
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* ApologizesALot - he may appear as an Expy of [[LoveHina Keitarou Urashima]] at first. [[CharacterDevelopment Eventually gets over this]] he develops confidence and discipline.

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* ApologizesALot - he may appear as an Expy of [[LoveHina [[Manga/LoveHina Keitarou Urashima]] at first. [[CharacterDevelopment Eventually gets over this]] he develops confidence and discipline.
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* FragileSpeedster
* GenkiGirl

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* %%* FragileSpeedster
* %%* GenkiGirl
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'''The Karate Instructor'''\\
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'''The Aikido Instructor'''\\
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'''Goal:''' A humorous deconstruction of the UnwantedHarem and Martial Arts genres of manga. A [[AmazonBrigade combat harem with young ladies skilled in martial arts styles from all over the world]] is a given. The deconstructive element is that the harem has not one, but ''two'' male leads, who get roughly equal screen time and actually end up competing over the harem's attention. Each one is just enough of a GenreSavvy nerd to realize that they're in a harem story, and each one feels they are better suited to be the protagonist (one feels this way because he's an aggressive pervert, and the other feels this way because the alternative is leaving the women to an aggressive pervert).

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'''Goal:''' A humorous deconstruction of the UnwantedHarem HaremGenre and Martial Arts genres of in manga. A BattleHarem [[AmazonBrigade combat harem with young ladies skilled in martial arts styles from all over the world]] is a given. The deconstructive element is that the harem has not one, but ''two'' male leads, who get roughly equal screen time and actually end up competing over the harem's attention. Each one is just enough of a GenreSavvy nerd to realize that they're in a harem story, and each one feels they are better suited to be the protagonist (one feels this way because he's an aggressive pervert, and the other feels this way because the alternative is leaving the women to an aggressive pervert).
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Applicable tropes: ArrogantKungFuGuy, DarkAndTroubledPast, [[DeadLittleSister Dead]] [[spoiler:Girlfriend]], DeathSeeker, DontYouDarePityMe, RoaringRampageOfRevenge, SympathyForTheDevil, TroubledButCute (in many ways this guy was inspired by [[KenichiTheMightiestDisciple Tanimoto]])

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Applicable tropes: ArrogantKungFuGuy, DarkAndTroubledPast, [[DeadLittleSister Dead]] Dead [[spoiler:Girlfriend]], DeathSeeker, DontYouDarePityMe, RoaringRampageOfRevenge, SympathyForTheDevil, TroubledButCute (in many ways this guy was inspired by [[KenichiTheMightiestDisciple Tanimoto]])
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* ChineseGirl: And yes, we should see her in a qipao.

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* ChineseGirl: And yes, Yes, we should see her in a qipao.



* YamatoNadeshiko

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* YamatoNadeshiko
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Dandere is a fanspeak term, not a trope. So it shouldn\'t have have any wicks.


* {{Dandere}}, EmotionlessGirl: Most of the time, her expression is an attentive poker face. She occasionally smiles, she rarely frowns, and she never looks angry.

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* {{Dandere}}, EmotionlessGirl: Most of the time, her expression is an attentive poker face. She occasionally smiles, she rarely frowns, and she never looks angry.
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Pettanko is a fanspeak term and useful note - it shouldn\'t be used as a trope. A Cup Angst is the correct trope here.


* InnocentFanserviceGirl: In a manner that [[{{Pettanko}} often gets her mistaken for a boy.]]

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* InnocentFanserviceGirl: In a manner that [[{{Pettanko}} often gets her mistaken for a boy.]]



* {{Pettanko}}: Subverted. She's the flattest character in the harem, even more so than the TokenMiniMoe, who is five years younger than her. However, her lack of assets doesn't bother her at all.



* ACupAngst: The RunningGag is that her rants are often interrupted by the Quiet Classmate, who doesn't understand what all the fuss is about.



* {{Pettanko}}: The RunningGag is that her rants are often interrupted by the Quiet Classmate, who doesn't understand what all the fuss is about.
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* AccidentalPervert - the RunningGag is that he tries to police the Yang Protagonist's behaviour, attempting to stop him from peeking on the baths and whatnot. He's about as successful at this as [[TalesOfSymphonia Lloyd Irving]], to similar results.

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* AccidentalPervert - the RunningGag is that he tries to police the Yang Protagonist's behaviour, attempting to stop him from peeking on the baths and whatnot. He's about as successful at this as [[TalesOfSymphonia [[VideoGame/TalesOfSymphonia Lloyd Irving]], to similar results.
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* HollywoodPudgy: A lot of this is in her head; she has a bit of a weight complex. But complex aside, she is still the "healthiest" young lady in the cast. [[BabyGotBack This is not always]] [[HartmanHips viewed as a negative]].

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* HollywoodPudgy: A lot of this is in her head; she has a bit of a weight complex. But complex aside, she is still the "healthiest" young lady in the cast. [[BabyGotBack This is not always]] always [[HartmanHips viewed as a negative]].
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* IllGirl: She originally started training in Tai Chi to recover from a nasty lung infection back in her grade school years. This was a factor in her asocial personality; her friends moved on without her, and she didn't make new ones. (Think [[{{Clannad}} Nagisa]] at an earlier age, without angst.)

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* IllGirl: She originally started training in Tai Chi to recover from a nasty lung infection back in her grade school years. This was a factor in her asocial personality; her friends moved on without her, and she didn't make new ones. (Think [[{{Clannad}} [[VisualNovel/{{Clannad}} Nagisa]] at an earlier age, without angst.)
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buxom is better is not about a character just having large breasts. It\'s about a character being attractive to other characters because of her large breast or she has larger breasts than other female character in the work. If this is the case with this character, then please re-add this with the correct context.


* BuxomIsBetter: She is the oldest member of the cast. Somebody has to be number one.
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The [[HaremNanny Apartment Manager]]

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The [[HaremNanny '''The Apartment Manager]]Manager'''
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* CuteClumsyGirl/{{Dojikko}}

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* CuteClumsyGirl/{{Dojikko}}CuteClumsyGirl and {{Dojikko}}

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* EyesAlwaysShut: Much like [[MahouSenseiNegima Nagase Kaede]], she will occasionally open one for emphasis. If they are both open, it is a sign of extreme [[OhCrap shock]], [[BerserkButton fury]], or [[RelationshipTextUpgrade affection]].

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* EyesAlwaysShut: Much like [[MahouSenseiNegima Nagase Kaede]], she will occasionally open one for emphasis. If they are both open, it is a sign of extreme [[OhCrap shock]], [[BerserkButton fury]], or [[RelationshipTextUpgrade [[RelationshipUpgrade affection]].






* AdultsAreUseless: Averted. She's the harem's therapist, which is an important position given the various issues of the other main characters.
* BuxomIsBetter: She is the oldest member of the cast. Somebody has to be number one.
* ChristmasCake
* CuteClumsyGirl/{{Dojikko}}
* HaremNanny
* TheHeart
* {{Landlady}}
* {{Meganekko}}
* TeamMom
* ThroughHisStomach: Discussed but not specifically planned: she's a real good cook, and once the other harem members start considering the male protagonists as potential boyfriends, the Manager's head start in this area causes worry in her rivals.



''To whoever came up with this idea - love it! How's this for a title - '''Harem of the Flying Fists'''?''

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''To whoever came up with this idea - love it! How's this for a title - '''Harem of the Flying Fists'''?''Fists'''?''
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* TheComicallySerious: Her ward is TheHyena, which inevitably clashes with her stoic professionalism.



* TheUnfunny: Her ward is TheHyena, which inevitably clashes with her stoic professionalism.

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* TheUnfunny: Her ward is TheHyena, which inevitably clashes with her stoic professionalism.
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''To whoever came up with this idea - love it! How's this for a title - '''Harem of the Flying Fists'''?

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''To whoever came up with this idea - love it! How's this for a title - '''Harem of the Flying Fists'''?Fists'''?''
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Obviously a work in a sorry state of progress. Yes, I'm a fan of ''KenichiTheMightiestDisciple'', and ''[[RanmaOneHalf Ranma 1/2]]'' before it. You could tell?

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Obviously a work in a sorry state of progress. Yes, I'm a fan of ''KenichiTheMightiestDisciple'', and ''[[RanmaOneHalf Ranma 1/2]]'' before it. You could tell?tell?

''To whoever came up with this idea - love it! How's this for a title - '''Harem of the Flying Fists'''?

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* BadassInANiceSuit



* DressedToKill
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Charlie Dog is now But Not Too Foreign.


* CharlieDog and ButNotTooForeign: Completely averted. She's 100% African American.

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* CharlieDog and ButNotTooForeign: Completely averted. She's 100% African American.

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* MilitaryBrat



* SemperFi: Daddy's a Marine, and as a military brat she picked up a lot of the culture. This also explains why she can speak Japanese.

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* SemperFi: Daddy's a Marine, and as a military brat {{military brat}} she picked up a lot of the culture. This also explains Her father's posting on the Japanese bases intersected with her grade school years, which is why she can speak Japanese.
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Applicable tropes: ArrogantKungFuGuy, DarkAndTroubledPast, [[DeadLittleSister Dead]] [[spoiler:Girlfriend]], DeathSeeker, RoaringRampageOfRevenge, SympathyForTheDevil, TroubledButCute (in many ways this guy was inspired by [[KenichiTheMightiestDisciple Tanimoto]])

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Applicable tropes: ArrogantKungFuGuy, DarkAndTroubledPast, [[DeadLittleSister Dead]] [[spoiler:Girlfriend]], DeathSeeker, DontYouDarePityMe, RoaringRampageOfRevenge, SympathyForTheDevil, TroubledButCute (in many ways this guy was inspired by [[KenichiTheMightiestDisciple Tanimoto]])

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