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The guy in question is a prince from an AlternateDimension whose most unusual trait is the fact that [[WingedHumanoid he has large, glossy black wings on his back, like a raven]]. Ayaka is baffled by this visitor, but is even more baffled by his friends, [[TheSmartGuy Nero]] [[DarkAndTroubledPast Keel]], [[TheBigGuy Lady]] [[BigSisterInstinct Octavia]], and [[TheChick Max]] [[AmbiguousGender The Jester]] showing up looking for him. And then there's [[TheBigBad Empress]] [[GoodWingsEvilWings Talon]], leader of [[AncientConspiracy The Nightbirds]], [[TheDragon The]] [[IneffectualSympatheticVillain Gull]], [[TheEvilGenius Professor]] [[ImmortalityImmorality Owl-Eye]], [[TheBrute Commander]] [[EvilOldFolks Falconclaw]] and [[TheDarkChick The Witch]], who all want to recruit Raven among their ranks.

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The guy in question is a prince from an AlternateDimension whose most unusual trait is the fact that [[WingedHumanoid he has large, glossy black wings on his back, like a raven]]. Ayaka is baffled by this visitor, but is even more baffled by his friends, [[TheSmartGuy Nero]] [[DarkAndTroubledPast Keel]], [[TheBigGuy Lady]] [[BigSisterInstinct Octavia]], and [[TheChick Max]] [[AmbiguousGender The Jester]] showing up looking for him. And then there's ~~[[TheBigBad~~ [[BigBad Empress]] [[GoodWingsEvilWings Talon]], leader of [[AncientConspiracy The Nightbirds]], [[TheDragon The]] [[IneffectualSympatheticVillain Gull]], [[TheEvilGenius Professor]] [[ImmortalityImmorality Owl-Eye]], [[TheBrute Commander]] [[EvilOldFolks Falconclaw]] and [[TheDarkChick The Witch]], who all want to recruit Raven among their ranks.

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** ~~TheBigBad:~~ The BigBad: Empress Talon

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* AlternateSelf: [[DarthWiki/AlisterInWonderland Of Alister Lewis]].

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* AlternateSelf: ~~[[DarthWiki/AlisterInWonderland~~ Of Alister ~~Lewis]].~~Lewis, from ''Alister in Wonderland''.

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!!Character Tropes:
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[[folder: The Main Cast]]

!!The Main Cast as a whole
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* FiveManBand
** TheHero: Raven
** TheLancer: Ayaka
** TheSmartGuy: Nero
** TheBigGuy: Octavia
** TheChick: Max
* ThemeNaming: Besides Raven and Ayaka, we have a Roman theme going on; Nero, Octavia, Max as in "Maxentius", and Max's sister Augusta.

!!Prince Raven

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* {{Adorkable}}
* {{Bishounen}}
* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: He's shown to be a bit eccentric, despite his calm personality.
* DarkMessiah: What the Nightbirds think he is.
* EmotionlessBoy
* TheHero
* [[MagicalGirl Magical Boy]]
* [[MagicalGirlfriend Magical Boyfriend]]
* MasterSwordsman: He must've learned it from his sister.
* MrFanservice
* NotGoodWithPeople
* RealMenWearPink: He gains a fascination with an old MagicalGirl show.
* [[ShamelessFanserviceGirl Shameless Fanservice Boy]]
* TheStoic
* TroubledButCute
* WeaksauceWeakness: To make him light enough to fly, his bones are light and hollow. This makes them a bit more brittle than other humans.
* WingedHumanoid: No points guessing what kind of wings he has.
* TheWisePrince

!!Ayaka Togehana

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* {{Tsundere}}: Type A.
* NotGoodWithPeople
* [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair You Gotta Have Purple Hair]]
* MeaningfulName: Her last name, "Togehana", means "[[{{Tsundere}} thorn flower]]".
* TheLancer
* TheMedic
* SailorFuku
* RapunzelHair
* BigEater: A bit of a quirk of hers.
* TeamMom
* ShipTease: With Raven.
* BelligerentSexualTension: With Raven.
* DeadpanSnarker
* OnlySaneMan

!!Nero Keel

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* InsufferableGenius
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold
* BadassBookworm
* TheSmartGuy
* {{Bishounen}}
* {{Megane}}
* HeterosexualLifePartners / PlatonicLifePartners: With Raven and Max. PlatonicLifePartners is listed because [[AmbiguousGender no one can be sure if Max is a boy or a girl]].
* DudeLooksLikeALady
* DoggedNiceGuy: To Octavia.
* DeadpanSnarker
* {{UST}}: With Octavia.
* BishieSparkle: A few times.
* {{Adorkable}}
* NonActionGuy

!!Lady Octavia

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* LadyOfWar
* TheBigGuy
* CoolBigSis: To Raven.
* BigSisterInstinct: She's extremely protective of her brother.
* BerserkButton: You '''''WILL NOT''''' hurt her brother in front of her.
* BloodKnight
* MsFanservice: Good looks must run in the family.
* {{UST}}: With Nero.
* MasterSwordsman
* ActionGirl
* {{Determinator}} / PluckyGirl
* TheStoic
** StoicWoobie

!!Max

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* AmbiguousGender: No one knows for sure, and s/he isn't telling.
* TheChick: The jury is out on whether or not s/he is a girl, though.
* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}
* GenkiGirl or [[{{Keet}} Guy]]
* StepfordSmiler
* [[BigBrotherInstinct Big Sibling Instinct]]: His/Her motivation is to save his/her little sister, Augusta, from the Nightbirds.
* CourtMage
* BiTheWay: S/he is bisexual. This does NOT help the gender issue at all.
* RealityWarper
* MentorShip: With Apollo.
* [[MagicalGirl Magical Person]]
* FunPersonified
* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: "I WILL TEAR THIS FORTRESS TO ITS FOUNDATIONS UNTIL IT COUGHS UP MY SISTER!!!!"
* [[TeacherStudentRomance Hot for Teacher]]
* TricksterArchetype
* NightmareFetishist
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[[folder: The Nightbirds]]

!!The Nightbirds as a whole
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* AncientConspiracy: They're responsible for the worst things that happen in Raven's world.
* FiveBadBand:
** TheBigBad: Empress Talon
** TheDragon: The Gull
** TheEvilGenius: Professor Owl Eye
** TheBrute: Commander Falconclaw
** TheDarkChick: The Witch
** TokenGoodTeammate: [[spoiler: Augusta]]
* WingedHumanoid: All of them except the Witch and [[spoiler: Augusta]]

!!Emperess Talon
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* BigBad
* SplitPersonality: Developed one in prison; the main one is stoic and cunning, the other will fly into a blind rage at the drop of a hat.
* FauxAffablyEvil
* HairTriggerTemper: Her other personality.
* TheStoic: Her main personality.
* GoodWingsEvilWings: She has vulture wings.
* LackOfEmpathy[=/=]TheSociopath: Her main personality.
* ParentalSubstitute: A really bad one to The Gull.
* AbusiveParents: To The Gull.

!! The Gull
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* TheDragon
* IneffectualSympatheticVillain: It's hard not to feel sorry for the dude.
* BlondeGuysAreEvil
* PeekABangs
* {{Keet}}
* GoodWingsEvilWings: Sea gull wings.
* SpellMyNameWithAThe
* FantasticRacism: He's looked down upon because he has sea gull wings.
* WellDoneSonGuy: To Empress Talon.

!!Professor Owl Eye
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* BornAgainImmortality / HealingFactor: He can regenerate his body if he's injured and when he reaches old age he simply reverts to the age of a child and starts his lifespan over again. He claims that he gained immortality by researching [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Turritopsis_nutricula a certain species of jellyfish]].
* TheEvilGenius
* GoodWingsEvilWings: Owl wings.
* EnfanteTerrible: His child form. He's as psychotic when he's twelve as he is when he's twenty.
* SmugSnake
* BadassLabcoat
* AffablyEvil
* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: He claims that he's existed for over ''3,000 years''.
* ImmortalityImmorality: While they failed, his earlier attempts to become immortal involved things like sapping other peoples' life-forces, killing/torturing other people, and taking people's souls.
* TheStoic
* HealingFactor
* ShoutOut:
-->'''Empress Talon''': They're persistent little brats aren't they?
-->'''Prof. Owl-Eye''': Persistent yes. [[WesternAnimation/TeenTitans But not immortal]].
* MadScientist
* ShortHairWithTail
* LackOfEmpathy
* TallDarkAndSnarky
* StoicSpectacles

!!Commander Falconclaw
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* TheBrute
* BloodKnight
* WorthyOpponent: To Octavia.
* SociopathicSoldier
* LightningBruiser: Don't let his advanced age fool you, he's not only ''insanely'' fast, he's also incredibly ''brutal'' in battle.
* PuttingOnTheReich
* CoolOldGuy
* GoodWingsEvilWings: Falcon wings.
* HairTriggerTemper
* FauxAffablyEvil
* EvilOldFolks

!!The Witch
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* TheDarkChick
* PsychopathicManchild
* SpellMyNameWithAThe
* HumanoidAbomination
* YourWorstNightmare
* TheSpeechless: She only laughs...
* GigglingVillain
** HellIsThatNoise
* WolverineClaws
* BasedOnADream: The author based her off of a clawed, wraith-like creature that appeared in a very disturbing nightmare he had.
* FingerLickinEvil
* IAmAHumanitarian
* BloodKnight
* RealityWarper

!! Augusta
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* UnwittingPawn
* FlowerMotif / InnocentFlowerGirl
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: She doesn't remember anything about herself. The Nightbirds told her that they would help her remember so long as she served them.
* TokenGoodTeammate
* TykeBomb
* FriendToPsychos
* ShipTease: She has a crush on The Gull and judging from how he reacts when she bandages his arm, he may reciprocate those feelings.
* TheIngenue
* LongLostRelative: Max's kidnapped sister.
* ProperLady
* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: A really creepy example. She doesn't even ''flinch'' when Falconclaw backhands Owl-eye's head off and then calmly goes to clean up the blood when he regenerates. Apparently, she's been with the Nightbirds so long that she genuinely believes that this stuff is normal.
* DetachedSleeves
* NiceGirl
* LockedOutOfTheLoop
* MysticalWhiteHair
* MysteriousWaif
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[[folder: Other characters]]

!!Ayaka's Parents

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* GoodParents
* AdultsAreUseless
* OpenMindedParent: They have no objections to a bunch of weird people living in their house.
* SatelliteCharacter: To Ayaka and Mori until later...
* MamaBear[=/=]PapaWolf

!!Mori Togehana

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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: To Ayaka.
* BrattyHalfPint
* DeadpanSnarker

!!King Julius

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* PosthumousCharacter
* DisappearedDad: Killed by Empress Talon.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething

!!Queen Pompeia

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* HerHeartWillGoOn
* LadyOfWar
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething

!!Apollo

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* {{Bishonen}}
** SexyMentor
* SternTeacher: To Max. He tried not to let his feelings for the androgynous little weirdo get the better of him though.
* CutenessProximity: Max often managed to manipulate him with this.
* {{Adorkable}}: Whenever he got flustered at Max flirting with him.
* CynicalMentor
* GenreSavvy
* StarCrossedLovers: With Max. It's apparently strictly forbidden for sorcery teachers and their students to have relationships.
* HotForStudent
* MentorShip: No points guessing who with.

!The Royal Council of Avitopia

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* AlternateSelf: Of the protagonists of [[Tropers/CJCroen1393 CJ Croen1393's]] [[TheVerse other works]].

!!Tobias Middnight
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* TheLancer: To the King and Queen.
* {{Megane}}
* AlternateSelf: [[DarthWiki/{{Crushed}} Of Toby Hutchinson]].
* StraightGay
* {{Bishonen}}
* TheStoic: Unlike [[AlternateSelf Toby]].
* HighPriest

!!Patricia
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* PluckyGirl
* AlternateSelf: [[DarthWiki/TheCryptids Of Patty Fu Tage]].
* HeroicAlbino
* TheLadette
* LittleBitBeastly

!!Corithus
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* TagalongKid: He's not an actual member of the council, but he follows Patricia everywhere.
* {{Keet}}
* AlternateSelf: [[DarthWiki/TheCryptids Of Cory]].

!!Humilitas
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* DudeLooksLikeALady
* RememberWhenYouBlewUpASun: Everyone keeps reminding him of the time he led [[SevenHeavenlyVirtues a team of six virtuous maidens]] to slay [[SevenDeadlySins seven evil dragons summoned by Empress Talon]] and won (this is what got him a position in the council to begin with). [[HumbleHero He hates hearing about it, though]].
* ShrinkingViolet
* AlternateSelf: [[DarthWiki/SinsVsVirtues Of Humility/Tory Hummel]]. His name's actually the Latin term for Humility!
* HumbleHero

!!Allistrius
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* AlternateSelf: [[DarthWiki/AlisterInWonderland Of Alister Lewis]].
* {{Bishonen}}
* GuardianOfTheMultiverse

!!Nattias
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* TheBeastmaster
* AlternateSelf: [[DarthWiki/MonstersOfMagiHill Of Nate Thomas]].

!!Shannita
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* AlternateSelf: [[DarthWiki/MyKnightInShiningArmorWearsASkirt Of Shannon Fields]].
* CuteWitch
* NiceHat

!!Jackson Middnight
Note: Not a member of the Council
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* BlackKnight
* DarkIsNotEvil
* BiTheWay: He's actually ''married'' to Tobias.
* AlternateSelf: [[DarthWiki/{{Crushed}} Of Jack Cunningham]].

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* BloodKnight: The Gull, Octavia, The Witch, and [[spoiler: Max]].

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* BloodKnight: The Gull, ~~Octavia,~~ Octavia and The ~~Witch, and [[spoiler: Max]].~~Witch.

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* DarkAndTroubledPast: [[spoiler: The Nightbirds are essentially responsible for ruining everyone's lives. They killed Raven and Octavia's father and Nero's ''entire family'', and kidnapped Max's sister. This resulted in Raven becoming an IneffectualLoner, Octavia becoming over protective of him, Max going insane, and Nero becoming a bit of a [[JerkassWoobie jerk]]]].

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* DarkAndTroubledPast: [[spoiler: The Nightbirds are essentially responsible for ruining everyone's lives. They killed Raven and Octavia's father and Nero's ''entire family'', and kidnapped Max's sister. This resulted in Raven becoming an IneffectualLoner, Octavia becoming over protective of him, Max ~~going insane,~~ hiding behind a [[StepfordSmiler smile]], and Nero becoming a bit of a [[JerkassWoobie jerk]]]].

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** CerebusRetcon: Max is a CloudCuckooLander because s/he is insane.

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* CompleteMonster: Empress Talon and The Witch.
** All of the Nightbirds, save [[LaughablyEvil The Gull]]. They're responsible for [[spoiler: killing all of Nero's family, killing Raven and Octavia's father, kidnapping Max's sister and ultimately sending Raven to our world]].

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* NightmareFuel: The Witch. Dear God '''''THE WITCH'''''!

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* MagnificentBitch: Empress Talon.
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* ParanoiaFuel: The Witch can show up ''anywhere'', but her favorite place is [[YourWorstNightmare in your dreams]].

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* CloudCuckooLander: Max, and Raven to some extent.

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* TheWoobie: Most of the cast.

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* AngstWhatAngst: Played straight with Nero, subverted with Max.

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* CynicismCatalyst: [[spoiler: Actually "Kidnapped Little Sister", Max's motive]].

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* CynicismCatalyst: [[spoiler: ~~Actually "Kidnapped Little Sister", Max's motive]].~~The death of Raven and Octavia's father, as well as Nero's entire family being wiped out caused the former two to become cynics and the latter to become very cold]].

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* CynicismCatalyst: [[spoiler: Actually "Kidnapped Little Sister", Max's motive]].

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* DeadLittleSister: [[spoiler: Actually "Kidnapped Little Sister", Max's motive]].

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The guy in question is a prince from an AlternateDimension whose most unusual trait is the fact that [[WingedHumanoid he has large, glossy black wings on his back, like a raven]]. Ayaka is baffled by this visitor, but is even more baffled by his friends, [[TheSmartGuy Nero]] [[DarkAndTroubledPast Keel]], [[TheBigGuy Lady]] [[BigSisterInstinct Octavia]], and [[TheChick Max]] [[AmbiguousGender The Jester]] showing up looking for him. And then there's [[TheBigBad Empress]] [[GoodWingsEvilWings Talon]], leader of [[AncientConspiracy The Nightbirds]], [[TheDragon The]] [[IneffectualSympatheticVillain Gull]], [[TheEvilGenius Professor]] [[ImmortalityImmorality Owl-Eye]], [[TheBrute Commander]] [[EvilOldFolks Falconclaw]] and [[TheDarkChick The]] [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel Witch]], who all want to recruit Raven among their ranks.

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The guy in question is a prince from an AlternateDimension whose most unusual trait is the fact that [[WingedHumanoid he has large, glossy black wings on his back, like a raven]]. Ayaka is baffled by this visitor, but is even more baffled by his friends, [[TheSmartGuy Nero]] [[DarkAndTroubledPast Keel]], [[TheBigGuy Lady]] [[BigSisterInstinct Octavia]], and [[TheChick Max]] [[AmbiguousGender The Jester]] showing up looking for him. And then there's [[TheBigBad Empress]] [[GoodWingsEvilWings Talon]], leader of [[AncientConspiracy The Nightbirds]], [[TheDragon The]] [[IneffectualSympatheticVillain Gull]], [[TheEvilGenius Professor]] [[ImmortalityImmorality Owl-Eye]], [[TheBrute Commander]] [[EvilOldFolks Falconclaw]] and [[TheDarkChick ~~The]] [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel~~ The Witch]], who all want to recruit Raven among their ranks.

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* ~~HighOctaneNightmareFuel:~~ NightmareFuel: The Witch. Dear God '''''THE WITCH'''''!

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* SteamPunk: The AlternateDimension.

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* TheWhitePrince: Raven.

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''The Raven Prince'' is an unpublished TroperWork by Tropers/CjCroen1393.

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The guy in question is a prince from an AlternateDimension whose most unusual trait is the fact that [[WingedHumanoid he has large, glossy black wings on his back, like a raven]]. Ayaka is baffled by this visitor, but is even more baffled by his friends, [[TheSmartGuy Nero]] [[DarkAndTroubledPast Keel]], [[TheBigGuy Lady]] [[BigSisterInstinct Octavia]], and [[TheChick Max]] [[AmbiguousGender The Jester]] showing up looking for him. And then there's [[TheBigBad Empress]] [[GoodWingsEvilWings Talon]], leader of [[AncientConspiracy The Nightbirds]], [[TheDragon The]] [[IneffectualSympatheticVillain Gull]], [[TheEvilGenius Professor]] [[ImmortalityImmorality Owl-Eye]], [[TheBrute General]] [[EvilOldFolks Falconclaw]] and [[TheDarkChick The]] [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel Witch]], who all want to recruit Raven among their ranks.

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The guy in question is a prince from an AlternateDimension whose most unusual trait is the fact that [[WingedHumanoid he has large, glossy black wings on his back, like a raven]]. Ayaka is baffled by this visitor, but is even more baffled by his friends, [[TheSmartGuy Nero]] [[DarkAndTroubledPast Keel]], [[TheBigGuy Lady]] [[BigSisterInstinct Octavia]], and [[TheChick Max]] [[AmbiguousGender The Jester]] showing up looking for him. And then there's [[TheBigBad Empress]] [[GoodWingsEvilWings Talon]], leader of [[AncientConspiracy The Nightbirds]], [[TheDragon The]] [[IneffectualSympatheticVillain Gull]], [[TheEvilGenius Professor]] [[ImmortalityImmorality Owl-Eye]], [[TheBrute ~~General]]~~ Commander]] [[EvilOldFolks Falconclaw]] and [[TheDarkChick The]] [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel Witch]], who all want to recruit Raven among their ranks.

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* MasculineGirlAndFeminineBoy: Octavia and Nero.

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* ~~MasculineGirlAndFeminineBoy:~~ MasculineGirlFeminineBoy: Octavia and Nero.

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The guy in question is a prince from an AlternateDimension whose most unusual trait is the fact that [[WingedHumanoid he has large, glossy black wings on his back, like a raven]]. Ayaka is baffled by this visitor, but is even more baffled by his friends, [[TheSmartGuy Nero]] [[DarkAndTroubledPast Keel]], [[TheBigGuy Lady]] [[BigSisterInstinct Octavia]], and [[TheChick Max]] [[AmbiguousGender The Jester]] showing up looking for him. And then there's [[TheBigBad Empress]] [[GoodWingsEvilWings Talon]], leader of [[AncientConspiracy The Nightbirds]], [[TheDragon The]] [[IneffectualSympatheticVillain Gull]] and [[TheEvilGenius The]] [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel Witch]], who all want to recruit Raven among their ranks.

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The guy in question is a prince from an AlternateDimension whose most unusual trait is the fact that [[WingedHumanoid he has large, glossy black wings on his back, like a raven]]. Ayaka is baffled by this visitor, but is even more baffled by his friends, [[TheSmartGuy Nero]] [[DarkAndTroubledPast Keel]], [[TheBigGuy Lady]] [[BigSisterInstinct Octavia]], and [[TheChick Max]] [[AmbiguousGender The Jester]] showing up looking for him. And then there's [[TheBigBad Empress]] [[GoodWingsEvilWings Talon]], leader of [[AncientConspiracy The Nightbirds]], [[TheDragon The]] [[IneffectualSympatheticVillain ~~Gull]] and~~ Gull]], [[TheEvilGenius Professor]] [[ImmortalityImmorality Owl-Eye]], [[TheBrute General]] [[EvilOldFolks Falconclaw]] and [[TheDarkChick The]] [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel Witch]], who all want to recruit Raven among their ranks.

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* DeadLittleSister: [[spoiler: Actually "Kidnapped Little Sister, Max's motive]].

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* DeadLittleSister: [[spoiler: Actually "Kidnapped Little ~~Sister,~~ Sister", Max's motive]].

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* ArcSymbol: The imagery of birds that appear throughout the story.

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** CerebusRetcon: Max is a CloudCuckooLander because s/he is insane.

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* SteamPunk: The AlternateDimention.

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* {{Megane}}: Nero.
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* DoggedNiceGuy: Nero to Octavia.

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* DoggedNiceGuy: Nero to ~~Octavia.~~Octavia.
* MagnificentBitch: Empress Talon.
* JerkWoobie: Nero.
** The Gull, too.
* MeaningfulName: Togehana means "[[{{Tsundere}} thorn flower]]".
* NotGoodWithPeople: Both Ayaka and Raven.
* GigglingVillain: The Witch.
* TheStoic: Raven.
* ParanoiaFuel: The Witch can show up ''anywhere'', but her favorite place is [[YourWorstNightmare in your dreams]].
* WolverineClaws: The Witch.
* CloudCuckooLander: Max, and Raven to some extent.
* FauxAffablyEvil: Empress Talon.
* [[GenkiGirl Genki Girl or Guy]]: Max. [[AmbiguousGender We're not sure which though]].
* ActionGirl: Octavia and Ayaka.
* MasterSwordsman: Octavia.
* [[CuteWitch Cute Witch or Wizard]]: Max.
* DeadpanSnarker: Ayaka and Nero.
* OnlySaneMan: Ayaka.
* InsufferableGenius: Nero.
* TheWoobie: Most of the cast.
* CoolBigSis: Octavia.
* BridalCarry: Humorously gender flipped; [[ActionGirl Octavia]] carries [[NonActionGuy Nero]] like this at one point.
* NonActionGuy: Nero.
* AngstWhatAngst: Played straight with Nero, subverted with Max.
* StepfordSmiler: Max.
* BiTheWay: Max is bisexual. Needless to say, this ''doesn't'' help the gender thing.
* OpenMindedParent: Ayaka's parents don't object at all to a winged prince, a swordswoman, a scholar, and a mentally unstable magician living in their house.
* SplitPersonality: Empress Talon.
* SteamPunk: The AlternateDimention.

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''The Raven Prince'' is an unpublished TroperWork by [[Tropers/CjCroen1393]].

Ayaka Togehana is an OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent with a relatively normal life, but is NotGoodWithPeople. She has a good family life, with GoodParents, an AnnoyingYoungerSibling, a best friend, and all in all a perfectly boring life. [[IJustWannaBeNormal Just the way she wants it]].

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''The Raven Prince'' is an unpublished TroperWork by ~~[[Tropers/CjCroen1393]].~~

Tropers/CjCroen1393.

Ayaka Togehana is an OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent with a relatively normal life, but is NotGoodWithPeople. She has a good family life, with GoodParents, an AnnoyingYoungerSibling, a best friend, and all in all a perfectly boring life. ~~[[IJustWannaBeNormal~~ [[IJustWantToBeNormal Just the way she wants it]].

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