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** Succubi and Incubi are "cousins" to cupids who's job is to cultivate {{Lust}} in humans, using it to cultivate Eternal Ambrosia to prolong their immortality.
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** Succubi and Incubi are "cousins" to cupids who's job is to cultivate collect {{Lust}} in humans, using it to cultivate Eternal Ambrosia to prolong their immortality.
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* FantasticRacism: Natural-born cubi don't seem to have much respect for cupids who become cubi by choice.
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* FantasticRacism: Natural-born cubi don't seem to have much respect for [[FallenCupid cupids who become cubi by choice.choice]].
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''Fine Print'' is an [[PornWithPlot Erotic]]-UrbanFantasy comic series by Creator/StjepanSejic (''Webcomic/{{Sunstone}}'', ''ComicBook/DeathVigil'', ''ComicBook/{{Harleen}}'') and published by Creator/ImageComics and ''Creator/TopCowProductions''.
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''Fine Print'' is an [[PornWithPlot Erotic]]-UrbanFantasy comic series by Creator/StjepanSejic (''Webcomic/{{Sunstone}}'', ''ComicBook/DeathVigil'', ''ComicBook/{{Harleen}}'') and published by Creator/ImageComics and ''Creator/TopCowProductions''.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: In her backstory Lauren broke away from her high school love Matthew for a successful modeling career, noting amongst the other reasons the ambition that awoke within her after being known as just the plain or outright ugly girl in her youth. By the time the story starts Lauren is now deeply unhappy with her life and her success, with her failed attempt to apologize and reconnect with Matthew (though it's clear later that he isn't entirely over her either) providing the heartbreak that helps push her down the path into the world of Cubi.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: In her backstory Lauren broke away from her high school love Matthew for a successful modeling career, noting amongst the other reasons the ambition that awoke within her after being known as just the plain or outright ugly girl in her youth. By the time the story starts Lauren is now deeply unhappy with her life and her success, with her failed attempt to apologize and reconnect with Matthew (though it's clear later that he isn't entirely over her either) providing the heartbreak that helps push her down the path into the world of Cubi.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: In her backstory Lauren broke away from her high school love Matthew for a successful modeling career, noting amongst the other reasons the ambition that awoke within her after being known as just the plain or outright ugly girl in her youth. By the time the story starts Lauren is now deeply unhappy with her life and career, with her failed attempt to apologize and reconnect with Matthew (though it's clear later that he isn't entirely over her either) providing the heartbreak that helps push her down the path into the world of Cubi.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: In her backstory Lauren broke away from her high school love Matthew for a successful modeling career, noting amongst the other reasons the ambition that awoke within her after being known as just the plain or outright ugly girl in her youth. By the time the story starts Lauren is now deeply unhappy with her life and career, her success, with her failed attempt to apologize and reconnect with Matthew (though it's clear later that he isn't entirely over her either) providing the heartbreak that helps push her down the path into the world of Cubi.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Having impulsively breached her modeling contract to go back to the U.S and reconnect with Matthew, then spending the three months after depressed in a hotel room, Lauren lampshades that she blew through a lot of her savings and had ruined her reputation in the professional modeling world. Fortunately, Sam introduces her to the world of online modeling and cosplay as well as letting Lauren move in with her for a time.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: In her backstory Lauren broke away from her high school love Matthew for a successful modeling career, noting amongst the other reasons the ambition that awoke within her after being known as just the plain or outright ugly girl in her youth. By the time the story starts Lauren is deeply unhappy with her life and career, with her failed attempt to apologize and reconnect with Matthew providing the deep heartbreak that helps push her down the path into the world of Cubi.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: In her backstory Lauren broke away from her high school love Matthew for a successful modeling career, noting amongst the other reasons the ambition that awoke within her after being known as just the plain or outright ugly girl in her youth. By the time the story starts Lauren is now deeply unhappy with her life and career, with her failed attempt to apologize and reconnect with Matthew (though it's clear later that he isn't entirely over her either) providing the deep heartbreak that helps push her down the path into the world of Cubi.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: In her backstory Lauren broke away from her high school love Matthew for a successful modeling career, noting amongst the other reasons the ambition that awoke within her after being known as just the plain or outright ugly girl in her youth. By the time the story starts Lauren is deeply unhappy with her life and career, with her failed attempt to apologize and reconnect with Matthew providing the deep heartbreak that helps push her down the path into the world of Cubi.
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* SuccubiAndIncubi: Cubi are not demons (in fact they consider it offensive), but instead as a race of lesser gods descended from Eros, their purpose to cultivate {{Lust}} in humans and use it to prolong their lives.
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* SuccubiAndIncubi: Cubi are not demons (in fact they consider it offensive), but instead as a race of lesser gods descended from Eros, their purpose to cultivate {{Lust}} in humans and use it to prolong their lives.
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* CrossoverCosmology: While the story takes place in a world once ruled by the gods of Myth/ClassicalMythology, nowadays what remains of TheOldGods have been forced to adapt, most of them being the very angelic Cupids and demon-like Succubi and Incubi. One of the Cubi families are the Morningstars, Lucifer being its patriarch.
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* CrossoverCosmology: While the story takes place in a world once ruled by the gods of Myth/ClassicalMythology, nowadays what remains of TheOldGods have been forced to adapt, most of them being the very angelic Cupids and demon-like Succubi and Incubi. One of the Cubi families are the Morningstars, Lucifer being its patriarch.patriarch, and Bauphette Alaris, one of the higher-ranking Arcubi and mother to Merryl, turns out to have once been none other than Alecto, one of the three Furies.
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* FantasticSlur: Being called demons (even though they're divided into incubi or succubi) is hugely offensive to Cubi, who consider this a major insult.
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* FantasticSlur: Being called demons (even though they're divided into incubi or succubi) is hugely offensive to Cubi, who consider this a major insult.Cubi.
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* {{Cthulhumanoid}}: While a cubi's default form is the classic HotAsHell look, their true forms are a not so pedestrian, adding scales and various other tails that look like tentacles at first glance. They usually hide this form from humans because the human mind was not equipped to handle gazing upon it, resulting in things from bleeding from their eyes to spontaneous combustion.
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* {{Cthulhumanoid}}: While a cubi's default form is the classic HotAsHell look, their true forms are a not so pedestrian, adding scales and various other tails that look like tentacles at first glance. They usually hide this form from humans because the human mind was not equipped to handle gazing upon it, resulting in things from bleeding from their eyes to spontaneous combustion.
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* {{Cthulhumanoid}}: While a cubi's default form is the classic {{Horny Devil|s}} look, their true forms are a not so pedestrian, adding scales and various other tails that look like tentacles at first glance. They usually hide this form from humans because the human mind was not equipped to handle gazing upon it, resulting in things from bleeding from their eyes to spontaneous combustion.
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* {{Cthulhumanoid}}: While a cubi's default form is the classic {{Horny Devil|s}} HotAsHell look, their true forms are a not so pedestrian, adding scales and various other tails that look like tentacles at first glance. They usually hide this form from humans because the human mind was not equipped to handle gazing upon it, resulting in things from bleeding from their eyes to spontaneous combustion.
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Horny Devils was renamed to Succubi And Incubi, and Hot As Hell was retooled into being about attractive and seductive demons
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* HornyDevils: Cubi are not demons (in fact they consider it offensive), but instead as a race of lesser gods descended from Eros, their purpose to cultivate {{Lust}} in humans and use it to prolong their lives.
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* SexGod: What the Cubi are really, as a species (they hate being called [[HornyDevils demons]]). They offer humans the best sex in their life for around a year (the golden contract) to gain sexual energy the Cubi need for creating their food in return. [[TheImmodestOrgasm Lauren's reaction to having sex with Merryl]] as a test to prove it's true indicates they can definitely deliver. Given they're minor literal gods it's explicitly a supernatural gift they have.
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* SexGod: What the Cubi are really, as a species (they hate being called [[HornyDevils [[HotAsHell demons]]). They offer humans the best sex in their life for around a year (the golden contract) to gain sexual energy the Cubi need for creating their food in return. [[TheImmodestOrgasm Lauren's reaction to having sex with Merryl]] as a test to prove it's true indicates they can definitely deliver. Given they're minor literal gods it's explicitly a supernatural gift they have.
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* SuccubiAndIncubi: Cubi are not demons (in fact they consider it offensive), but instead as a race of lesser gods descended from Eros, their purpose to cultivate {{Lust}} in humans and use it to prolong their lives.
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* BalefulPolymorph: When cubi feel genuine love, their horns become gold-tipped similar to a cupid's halo. Since love is taboo to cubi, this can make things very difficult for them. When a cupid feels {{Lust}} (or at least desire injected from a cubi's tale), they spontaneously grow horns similar to a cubi's halo. Bauphette calls it the "Crown of Eros", and she does ''not'' like it when it happens.
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* FriendsWithBenefits: Lauren's best friend and LivingEmotionalCrutch Samantha Sawyer is also her on-again, off-again lover. Having had sex multiple times throughout the years (both drunk and sober), their relationship doesn't go any deeper than that.
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* ForcedTransformation: When cubi feel genuine love, their horns become gold-tipped similar to a cupid's halo. Since love is taboo to cubi, this can make things very difficult for them. When a cupid feels {{Lust}} (or at least desire injected from a cubi's tale), they spontaneously grow horns similar to a cubi's halo. Bauphette calls it the "Crown of Eros", and she does ''not'' like it when it happens.
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* FriendsWithBenefits: Lauren's best friend and LivingEmotionalCrutch Samantha Sawyer is also her on-again, off-again lover. Having had sex multiple times throughout the years (both drunk and sober), their relationship doesn't go any deeper than that.
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* SexGod: What the Cubi are really, as a species (they hate being called [[HornyDevils demons]]). They offer humans the best sex in their life for around a year (the golden contract) to gain sexual energy the Cubi need for creating their food in return. [[TheImmodestOrgasm Lauren's reaction to having sex with Merryl]] as a test to prove it's true indicates they can definitely deliver. Given they're minor literal gods it's explicitly a supernatural gift they have.
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* SexGod: What the Cubi are really, as a species (they hate being called [[HornyDevils demons]]). They offer humans the best sex in their life for around a year (the golden contract) to gain sexual energy the Cubi need for creating their food in return. [[TheImmodestOrgasm Lauren's reaction to having sex with Merryl]] as a test to prove it's true indicates they can definitely deliver. Given they're minor literal gods it's explicitly a supernatural gift they have.
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* AllMythsAreTrue: While the story takes place in a world once ruled by the gods of Myth/ClassicalMythology, nowadays what remains of TheOldGods have been forced to adapt, most of them being the very angelic Cupids and demon-like Succubi and Incubi. One of the Cubi families are the Morningstars, Lucifer being its patriarch.
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* {{Stripperific}}: All of the Cubi outfits (fittingly as they're basically the {{lust}} spirits) show almost everything, with {{absolute cleavage}} a common feature. One's goes even further, with nipple clamps and her breasts otherwise shown naked.
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* {{Stripperific}}: All of the Cubi outfits (fittingly as they're basically the {{lust}} spirits) show almost everything, with {{absolute cleavage}} NavelDeepNeckline being a common feature. One's goes even further, with nipple clamps and her breasts otherwise shown naked.
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* BargainWithHeaven: Since cubi are a type of god and not a demon, a human's compact with them is closer to this. exchanging great sex in return for having their energy fed on to make the cubi's food.
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* BargainWithHeaven: Since cubi are a type of god and not a demon, a human's compact with them is closer to this. this, exchanging great sex in return for having their energy fed on to make the cubi's food.
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Lauren Thomas believed she had everything, only to find her life fall into a downward spiral, having ditched the one guy that could make her happy. After a failed attempt to win him back, Lauren happens upon a woman
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Lauren Thomas believed she had everything, only to find her life fall into a downward spiral, having ditched the one guy that could make her happy. After a failed attempt to win him back, Lauren happens upon a woman
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* LipstickLesbian: The bi/pansexual and lesbian woman (or [[NonhumanNonbinary female]]-[[SexShifter presenting]] Cubi as well) favor long hair while often wearing blouses, skirts, dresses or [[{{Stripperific}} almost nothing]]. Samantha (Sam) is a partial exception, her TomboyishName with BoyishShortHair being slightly more butch, but she otherwise usually wears feminine clothing too and isn't masculine otherwise.
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* LipstickLesbian: The bi/pansexual and lesbian woman (or [[NonhumanNonbinary female]]-[[SexShifter presenting]] Cubi as well) favor long hair while often wearing blouses, skirts, dresses or [[{{Stripperific}} almost nothing]]. Samantha (Sam) is a partial exception, her TomboyishName with BoyishShortHair being slightly more butch, but she otherwise usually wears feminine clothing too and isn't masculine otherwise.masculine.