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* BaldOfAwesome: Brunner and most of the Marines.
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''Damnation Crusade'' is a comic set in the ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' verse, jumping between the stories of three Black Templars - the young savage Raclaw, selected by the Black Templars to join their ranks; Brother Gerhart of the Sword Brethren (the Black Templars' First Company equivalent); and finally the dreadnought Tankred, who was born Raclaw and later took on the name Gerhart. They're the same warrior.
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It jumps between the stories of three Black Templars - the young savage Raclaw, selected by the Black Templars to join their ranks; Brother Gerhart of the Sword Brethren (the Black Templars' First Company equivalent); and finally the dreadnought Tankred, who was born Raclaw and later took on the name Gerhart. They're the same
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* BadassBeard: Gerhart and Brunner.
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** BadassMustache: Brunner.
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* SwordAndGun: Raklaw uses a bolt pistol and chainsword, playing up his savage origins by favoring the latter so the enemy forgets about the former. Similarly, Tankred, who uses both a massive fist and the [ArmCannon assault cannon]] can also qualify.
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* SwordAndGun: Raklaw uses a bolt pistol and chainsword, playing up his savage origins by favoring the latter so the enemy forgets about the former. Similarly, Tankred, who uses both a massive fist and the [ArmCannon [[ArmCannon assault cannon]] can also qualify.
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''Damnation Crusade'' is a comic set in the ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' verse, jumping between the stories of three Black Templars - the young savage Raclaw, selected by the Black Templars to join their ranks; Brother Gerhart of the Sword Brethren (the Black Templars' First Company equivalent); and finally the dreadnought Tankred[[spoiler:, Tankred, who was born Raclaw and later took on the name Gerhart. They're the same warrior.]]
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''Damnation Crusade'' is a comic set in the ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' verse, jumping between the stories of three Black Templars - the young savage Raclaw, selected by the Black Templars to join their ranks, ranks; Brother Gerhart of the Sword Brethren (the Black Templars' First Company equivalent), equivalent); and finally the dreadnought Tankred. [[spoiler:They're all Tankred[[spoiler:, who was born Raclaw and later took on the name Gerhart. They're the same warrior.]]
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* AnachronicOrder: The narration jumps between the three stories, with no dates given and no indication whether or not they are contemporary. [[spoiler: But only because of They are not - in fact, TheReveal that makes it clear they happen one after the three marines are the same warrior. Each of the individual stories is in chronological order.other.]]
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* InMediasRes: The comic begins with Gerhart delivering a FacingTheBulletsOneLiner, shortly before his story ends.
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* InMediasRes: The comic begins with Gerhart delivering a FacingTheBulletsOneLiner, shortly before his story ends. [[spoiler: Or, more accurately, Tankred's begins.]]
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* SwordAndGun: Raclaw uses a bolt pistol and chainsword, Tankred a dreadnought fist and assault cannon.
* WeCanRebuildHim: Gerhart is too greivously wounded to continue serving as a Sword Brethren, but will be transferred into a dreadnought.
* WeCanRebuildHim: Gerhart is too greivously wounded to continue serving as a Sword Brethren, but will be transferred into a dreadnought.
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* SwordAndGun: Raclaw Raklaw uses a bolt pistol and chainsword, Tankred playing up his savage origins by favoring the latter so the enemy forgets about the former. Similarly, Tankred, who uses both a dreadnought massive fist and the [ArmCannon assault cannon.
cannon]] can also qualify.
* WeCanRebuildHim:Gerhart is too greivously Tankred, like any dreadnought, was once a grievously wounded Black Templar. We eventually get to continue serving as a Sword Brethren, but will be transferred into a dreadnought.see some of the rituals surrounding his creation.
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* SkipTheAnesthetic: Inverted -- a tech-priest thinks repairs on Tankred will go better if he's ''not'' put under first.
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* SkipTheAnesthetic: Inverted -- Suggested by a tech-priest thinks repairs as that would make their work easier, and shut down by his superior, as their Dreadnought charge deserves them going the extra mile. Much later, insisted on by Tankred will go better if he's ''not'' put under first.himself, as he is no stranger to pain.
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* AnachronisticOrder: AnachronicOrder: [[spoiler: But only because of TheReveal that the three marines are the same warrior. Each of the individual stories is in chronological order.]]
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''Damnation Crusade'' is a comic set in the ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' verse, following jumping between the story stories of the young savage Raclaw, selected by the Black Templars to join their ranks, then Brother Gerhart of the Sword Brethren (the Black Templars' First Company equivalent), and finally the dreadnought Tankred. [[spoiler:They're all the same warrior.]]
* AnachronisticOrder: [[spoiler: But only because of TheReveal that the three marines are the same warrior. Each of the individual stories is in chronological order.]]
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* InMediasRes: The comic begins with Gerhart delivering a FacingTheBulletsOneLiner, and switches back and forth between his time as a Neophyte, Sword Brethren and Dreadnought. Even worse with Tankred, since he sleeps for ''centuries''.
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* InMediasRes: The comic begins with Gerhart delivering a FacingTheBulletsOneLiner, and switches back and forth between shortly before his time as a Neophyte, Sword Brethren and Dreadnought. Even worse with Tankred, since he sleeps for ''centuries''.story ends.
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* MeaningfulRename: Twice, first, from Raclaw to Gerhart, then to Tankred.
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* MeaningfulRename: Twice, first, from Raclaw [[spoiler:Raclaw to Gerhart, Gerhart]], then to Tankred.[[spoiler:Tankred]].
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* ArmCannon: One of Tankred's "arms" is replaced with [[GatlingGood a massive assault cannon]], and a storm bolter underneath his claw.
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* ArmCannon: One of Tankred's "arms" is replaced with [[GatlingGood a massive assault cannon]], and cannon]]. Hos other arm has a storm bolter underneath his claw.
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* InMediaRes: The comic begins with Gerhart delivering a FacingTheBulletsOneLiner, and switches back and forth between his time as a Neophyte, Sword Brethren and Dreadnought. Even worse with Tankred, since he sleeps for ''centuries''.
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* InMediaRes: InMediasRes: The comic begins with Gerhart delivering a FacingTheBulletsOneLiner, and switches back and forth between his time as a Neophyte, Sword Brethren and Dreadnought. Even worse with Tankred, since he sleeps for ''centuries''.
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''Damnation Crusade'' is a comic set in the ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' verse, following the story of the young savage Raclaw, selected by the Black Templars to join their ranks, then Brother Gerhart of the Sword Brethren, Brethren (the Black Templars' First Company equivalent), and finally the dreadnought Tankred. [[spoiler:They're all the same warrior.]]
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* MonochromeCasting: Averted: In one of the rare non-{{Salamanders}} 40K examples, one of the SpaceMarines is black.
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* AveMachina: The Adeptus Mechanicus conducting their rituals to wake Tankred.
* MachineWorship: The Adeptus Mechanicus conducting their rituals to wake Tankred.
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''Damnation Crusade'' is a comic set in the ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' verse, following the story of the young savage Raclaw, selected by the Black Templars to join their ranks, then Brother Gerhart of the Sword Brethren, and finally the dreadnought Tankred.
Tankred. [[spoiler:They're all the same warrior.]]
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* NonIndicativeName: Tankred is neither a tank nor red.red (though Dreadnoughts often have the InSeriesNickname of "walking tanks").
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* MightyGlacier: A dreadnought is ''not'' made for speed, but will soak up everything you throw at it, and return it with interest.
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* MightyGlacier: A dreadnought is ''not'' made for speed, but will soak up everything you throw at it, and return it with interest.wreck your world.
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''Damnation Crusade'' is a comic set in the ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' verse, following the story of the young savage Raclaw, selected by the Black Templars to join their ranks, then Brother Gerhart of the Sword Brethren, and finally the dreadnought Tankred.
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To die, knowing our tsk is done.
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To die, knowing our tsk task is done.
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Damnation Crusade is a comic set in the Warhammer40K verse, following the story of the young savage Raclaw, selected by the Black Templars to join their ranks, then Brother Gerhart of the Sword Brethren, and finally the dreadnought Tankred.
! Damnation Crusade contains the following tropes:
* ArmCannon: One of Tankred's "arms" is replaced with [[GatlingGood a massive assault cannon]], and a storm bolter underneath his claw.
* AveMachina: The Adeptus Mechanicus conducting their rituals to wake Tankred.
* BadassBeard: Gerhart and Brunner.
** BadassMustache: Brunner.
* BadassBoast: Plenty.
--> What is the terror of death?\\
That we die, our work incomplete.\\
What is the joy of life?\\
To die, knowing our tsk is done.
--> My sword shall not waver, nor my heart weaken. I shall drown the xeno in his own blood. I shall smite glorious ruin upon the heretic. This I swear!
--> My name is Gerhart! I am of the sword brethren of Mashall Korneliusz's fighting company. Now tell me- who wants to be the first?
* BaldOfAwesome: Brunner and most of the Marines.
* BodyHorror: One of the recruits failed the implantation process, turning into a mindless brute with hypertrophied muscles.
* CatchPhrase: TANKRED ENDURES.
* DeadpanSnarker: Marshall Korneliusz. "I was unaware ''you'' had won the battle alone?"
* {{Determinator}}: Tankred, like all Black Templars. It takes more than being shot repeatedly with railguns or being ripped apart by a Daemon Prince to stop him.
* InMediaRes: The comic begins with Gerhart delivering a FacingTheBulletsOneLiner, and switches back and forth between his time as a Neophyte, Sword Brethren and Dreadnought. Even worse with Tankred, since he sleeps for ''centuries''.
* FacialHorror: Chaplain Ecastus' face is hideously scarred.
* FoeTossingCharge: By a ''[[MightyGlacier dreadnought.]]''
* GladiatorGames: how the candidates for the Black Templars are chosen.
* GlowingEyesOfDoom: The Templars' helmets, when they wear them.
* GoodScarsEvilScars: One Templar's face has three massive scars the whole length of his face, another has a complicated network over his skull.
* HelmetsAreHardlyHeroic: Helmets are pretty much only worn so they can be dramatically removed.
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: One unlucky Templar ends up shanked with half a dozen spears and a chainsword.
* MeaningfulRename: Twice, first, from Raclaw to Gerhart, then to Tankred.
* MentorOccupationalHazard: Brunner.
* MightyGlacier: A dreadnought is ''not'' made for speed, but will soak up everything you throw at it, and return it with interest.
* MiniMecha: Tankred, of course.
* MonochromeCasting: Averted: In one of the rare non-{{Salamanders}} 40K examples, one of the SpaceMarines is black.
* NonIndicativeName: Tankred is neither a tank nor red.
* NotAMorningPerson: though if your life was reduced to sleeping for centuries, waking up to find everyone you knew was dead, and that it was time to fight again, you'd be grumpy too.
* NoSell:
-->We hear [[OurOrcsAreDifferent them]] first. Ten thousand edged weapons pounding a pulsing, primal beat. An ancient ritual designed to instill panic and fear in their foe.\\
It doesn't work.
* ObiWanMoment: Brunner, even as an Eldar walker is crushing him in its fist, yells at Raclaw to get back to fighting.
* {{Pride}}: As a young Templar, Gerhart had a tendency to take greater joy in his company's exploits than his brothers felt was proper. After he showed himself capable of restraint, the matter was dropped.
* SwordAndGun: Raclaw uses a bolt pistol and chainsword, Tankred a dreadnought fist and assault cannon.
* WeCanRebuildHim: Gerhart is too greivously wounded to continue serving as a Sword Brethren, but will be transferred into a dreadnought.
-->We will not abandon such paragons to succumb to the ravages of mortality. The way will be prepared for him.\\
He shall not be laid low but raised high and exalted. He will join the Emperor's immortal retinue and walk the road of ages.\\
He shall be taken from this place and the armor of his past purpose removed. He shall be healed, anointed with sacred oils, unguents, and balms.\\
The incantations of installation will be intoned and the litanies of preservation given voice.\\
The machine spirits will be summoned to invest the almighty hose with their motive aspect-\\
-And he will be dressed in furious glory, to war forevermore in the Emperor's name!
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* YourSizeMayVary: DependingOnTheArtist, the SpaceMarines are either [[http://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/File:DamnationCrusade.jpg twelve feet tall]] or human-sized with [[StoutStrength the proportions of]] [[OurDwarvesAreAllTheSame a standard dwarf.]]
** The eyes on the Marines' helmets vary from chapter to chapter, [[OffModel at one point looking like giant bugs.]]
! Damnation Crusade contains the following tropes:
* ArmCannon: One of Tankred's "arms" is replaced with [[GatlingGood a massive assault cannon]], and a storm bolter underneath his claw.
* AveMachina: The Adeptus Mechanicus conducting their rituals to wake Tankred.
* BadassBeard: Gerhart and Brunner.
** BadassMustache: Brunner.
* BadassBoast: Plenty.
--> What is the terror of death?\\
That we die, our work incomplete.\\
What is the joy of life?\\
To die, knowing our tsk is done.
--> My sword shall not waver, nor my heart weaken. I shall drown the xeno in his own blood. I shall smite glorious ruin upon the heretic. This I swear!
--> My name is Gerhart! I am of the sword brethren of Mashall Korneliusz's fighting company. Now tell me- who wants to be the first?
* BaldOfAwesome: Brunner and most of the Marines.
* BodyHorror: One of the recruits failed the implantation process, turning into a mindless brute with hypertrophied muscles.
* CatchPhrase: TANKRED ENDURES.
* DeadpanSnarker: Marshall Korneliusz. "I was unaware ''you'' had won the battle alone?"
* {{Determinator}}: Tankred, like all Black Templars. It takes more than being shot repeatedly with railguns or being ripped apart by a Daemon Prince to stop him.
* InMediaRes: The comic begins with Gerhart delivering a FacingTheBulletsOneLiner, and switches back and forth between his time as a Neophyte, Sword Brethren and Dreadnought. Even worse with Tankred, since he sleeps for ''centuries''.
* FacialHorror: Chaplain Ecastus' face is hideously scarred.
* FoeTossingCharge: By a ''[[MightyGlacier dreadnought.]]''
* GladiatorGames: how the candidates for the Black Templars are chosen.
* GlowingEyesOfDoom: The Templars' helmets, when they wear them.
* GoodScarsEvilScars: One Templar's face has three massive scars the whole length of his face, another has a complicated network over his skull.
* HelmetsAreHardlyHeroic: Helmets are pretty much only worn so they can be dramatically removed.
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: One unlucky Templar ends up shanked with half a dozen spears and a chainsword.
* MeaningfulRename: Twice, first, from Raclaw to Gerhart, then to Tankred.
* MentorOccupationalHazard: Brunner.
* MightyGlacier: A dreadnought is ''not'' made for speed, but will soak up everything you throw at it, and return it with interest.
* MiniMecha: Tankred, of course.
* MonochromeCasting: Averted: In one of the rare non-{{Salamanders}} 40K examples, one of the SpaceMarines is black.
* NonIndicativeName: Tankred is neither a tank nor red.
* NotAMorningPerson: though if your life was reduced to sleeping for centuries, waking up to find everyone you knew was dead, and that it was time to fight again, you'd be grumpy too.
* NoSell:
-->We hear [[OurOrcsAreDifferent them]] first. Ten thousand edged weapons pounding a pulsing, primal beat. An ancient ritual designed to instill panic and fear in their foe.\\
It doesn't work.
* ObiWanMoment: Brunner, even as an Eldar walker is crushing him in its fist, yells at Raclaw to get back to fighting.
* {{Pride}}: As a young Templar, Gerhart had a tendency to take greater joy in his company's exploits than his brothers felt was proper. After he showed himself capable of restraint, the matter was dropped.
* SwordAndGun: Raclaw uses a bolt pistol and chainsword, Tankred a dreadnought fist and assault cannon.
* WeCanRebuildHim: Gerhart is too greivously wounded to continue serving as a Sword Brethren, but will be transferred into a dreadnought.
-->We will not abandon such paragons to succumb to the ravages of mortality. The way will be prepared for him.\\
He shall not be laid low but raised high and exalted. He will join the Emperor's immortal retinue and walk the road of ages.\\
He shall be taken from this place and the armor of his past purpose removed. He shall be healed, anointed with sacred oils, unguents, and balms.\\
The incantations of installation will be intoned and the litanies of preservation given voice.\\
The machine spirits will be summoned to invest the almighty hose with their motive aspect-\\
-And he will be dressed in furious glory, to war forevermore in the Emperor's name!
* WrittenSoundEffect: DAKKADAKKADAKKA
* YourSizeMayVary: DependingOnTheArtist, the SpaceMarines are either [[http://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/File:DamnationCrusade.jpg twelve feet tall]] or human-sized with [[StoutStrength the proportions of]] [[OurDwarvesAreAllTheSame a standard dwarf.]]
** The eyes on the Marines' helmets vary from chapter to chapter, [[OffModel at one point looking like giant bugs.]]
