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The mood is mostly comic, but it has moments of tension, suspense and drama. It has won the award to the best manga of spanish author twice. It began in 9/24/2008 and is still ongoing.
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The mood is mostly comic, but it has moments of tension, suspense and drama. It has won the award to the best manga of spanish Spanish author twice. It began in 9/24/2008 and is still ongoing.
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--> '''Zap''': Matarratas is a bird! A bird! [...] He wasn't a person! He was a mouse in disguise!! He tried to kill his best friend with his eye!![[hottip:*:Reference to the author's previous manga Raruto. ItMakesSenseInContext.]] [...] [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext My glass... is a clown! I wanna have a navel!]]
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--> '''Zap''': Matarratas is a bird! A bird! [...] He wasn't a person! He was a mouse in disguise!! He tried to kill his best friend with his eye!![[hottip:*:Reference eye!![[note]]Reference to the author's previous manga Raruto. ItMakesSenseInContext.]] [[/note]] [...] [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext My glass... is a clown! I wanna have a navel!]]
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It\'s not a side effect: according to Bombastus, the whole point of Kokoro was to leave Kaji out of fire in order to wake Alanka.
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** That weird technique [[spoiler: Adler used on Kaji]] has this as a side-effect.
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** That weird technique [[spoiler: Adler used on Kaji]] has this as a side-effect.is also this.
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** Chapter 9 (released in May 2009) has a soldier barging into Colonel Cerilla's office, saying that Captain Briz ordered him to tell Cerilla that Ember's son (Kaji) is taking part in the League's exhibitions. Fast forward to chapter 51 (June 2013), where not only Briz shows up and recognizes Kaji, but it's very likely that [[spoiler: he's the colonel in charge of the SS.]]
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** Pi is a water elemental. [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial Shut up]].
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** Pi is certainly a water elemental. [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial Shut up]].Not a pee one at all.]]
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** And later from some [[ItMakesSenseInContext drug like bubblegum]]. "Zap... Buddy... Burn this town"
* InverseLawOfComplexityToPower: Elementals of "pure" elements can control both its element and any element descended from it - so a copper elemental can only control copper, while a metal elemental can control every metal, including copper. An elemental that could control the theorical fundamental element Alcahest would be able to control all substances in nature.
** Though the fact that they can control more elements doesn't necessarily give them an advantage.
* InverseLawOfComplexityToPower: Elementals of "pure" elements can control both its element and any element descended from it - so a copper elemental can only control copper, while a metal elemental can control every metal, including copper. An elemental that could control the theorical fundamental element Alcahest would be able to control all substances in nature.
** Though the fact that they can control more elements doesn't necessarily give them an advantage.
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** And later then again, from some [[ItMakesSenseInContext drug like bubblegum]]. really sugar-heavy bubblegum]]: "Zap... Buddy... Burn this town"
* InverseLawOfComplexityToPower: Elementals of "pure" elements can control both its element and any element descended from it - so a copper elemental can only control copper, while a metal elemental can control every metal, including copper. An elemental that could control the theorical fundamental element Alcahest would be able to control all substances innature.
**nature. Though the fact that they can control more elements doesn't necessarily give them an advantage.advantage, it all depends on hard work and training.
* InverseLawOfComplexityToPower: Elementals of "pure" elements can control both its element and any element descended from it - so a copper elemental can only control copper, while a metal elemental can control every metal, including copper. An elemental that could control the theorical fundamental element Alcahest would be able to control all substances in
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Okay, you may say \"dominar\" in Spanish, but in English it\'s \"master\". Learn your false friends.
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** It's also said that all of the Five Elements dominated the five levels of combat before turning 18.
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** It's also said that all of the Five Elements dominated mastered the five levels of combat before turning 18.
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Fixing Benjamin\'s name (it doesn\'t have an accent!) and a couple other spelling/grammar fails I\'ve noticed.
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* AllAccordingToPlan: [[spoiler: Benjamín´s]] plan seemed to be turning out pretty smoothly... Until chapter 46 that is.
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* AllAccordingToPlan: [[spoiler: Benjamín´s]] Benjamin´s]] plan seemed to be turning out pretty smoothly... Until chapter 46 that is.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: "What do you want, Benjamín?". "Peace". "And what do you do to achieve that peace you crave so much?".
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: "What do you want, Benjamín?".Benjamin?". "Peace". "And what do you do to achieve that peace you crave so much?".
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* BatmanGambit: This is probably what [[spoiler: Benjamín ]] is trying to accomplish.
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* BatmanGambit: This is probably what [[spoiler: Benjamín Benjamin ]] is trying to accomplish.
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* BerserkButton: Stating that Kaji and his father are similar. Beating Lluvia in a fight. Defying Matarratas´ intelligence, saying anything offensive towards his dead relatives, specially his grandfather Sebastian. Talking abour "legends" during Leo´s class. Talking casually about Benjamín in front of Ember.
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* BerserkButton: Stating that Kaji and his father are similar. Beating Lluvia in a fight. Defying Matarratas´ intelligence, saying anything offensive towards his dead relatives, specially his grandfather Sebastian. Talking abour "legends" during Leo´s class. Talking casually about Benjamín Benjamin in front of Ember.
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* BoldExplorer: Kru, Benjamín and Kaji, in their dangerous seek of truth.
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* BoldExplorer: Kru, Benjamín Benjamin and Kaji, in their dangerous seek of search for truth.
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* ForScience: Bombastus´ main drive fr everything, from [[spoiler: helping Benjamín with his plan]] to [[spoiler: kidnap Lluvia]].
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* ForScience: Bombastus´ main drive fr for everything, from [[spoiler: helping Benjamín Benjamin with his plan]] to [[spoiler: kidnap Lluvia]].
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* GuileHero: Captain Kru tried to talk Benjamín into becoming this to achieve the peace he wished for. [[spoiler: Now, we can´t be sure if he really meant it...]]
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* GuileHero: Captain Kru tried to talk Benjamín Benjamin into becoming this to achieve the peace he wished for. [[spoiler: Now, we can´t be sure if he really meant it...]]
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** Igna, when she found out [[spoiler: Benjamín was under arrest]].
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** Igna, when she found out [[spoiler: Benjamín Benjamin was under arrest]].
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* HotBlooded: Igna, Benjamín´s wife, couldn´t be anything else than a fire elemental.
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* HotBlooded: Igna, Benjamín´s Benjamin´s wife, couldn´t be anything else than a fire elemental.
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* TheIdealist: Captain Kru saw young Benjamín as this, and it amused him a lot, even if he said he was jealous of his possitive thoughts.
* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Kru believes Benjamín to be this, and Benjamín in turn believes Kaji to be this.
* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Kru believes Benjamín to be this, and Benjamín in turn believes Kaji to be this.
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* TheIdealist: Captain Kru saw young Benjamín Benjamin as this, and it amused him a lot, even if he said he was jealous of his possitive thoughts.
* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Kru believesBenjamín Benjamin to be this, and Benjamín Benjamin in turn believes Kaji to be this.
* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Kru believes
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* MentorOccupationalHazard: Kru, Benjamín...
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* MentorOccupationalHazard: Kru, Benjamín...Benjamin...
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* PassingTheTorch: In Benjamín´s own words: [[spoiler: "I thought everything would turn allright... I failed, Kaji, i messed everything up. I made grave mistakes... I can´t keep this up... You are the only one i can entrust this to..."]]
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* PassingTheTorch: In Benjamín´s Benjamin´s own words: [[spoiler: "I thought everything would turn allright... alright... I failed, Kaji, i I messed everything up. I made grave mistakes... I can´t keep this up... You are the only one i I can entrust this to..."]]
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** [[spoiler: Benjamín takes the gold in this.]]
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** [[spoiler: Benjamín Benjamin takes the gold in this.]]
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* {{Muggles}}: Unlike most works with this kind of setting, averted. Everybody has elemental powers.
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** Alanka can´t remember anything before waking up on comic. He just remembers he was "Be"´s friend, but caný even remember who that person is.
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** Alanka can´t remember anything before waking up on comic. He just remembers he was "Be"´s friend, but caný can´t even remember who that person is.
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* BatmanGambit: This is propably what [[spoiler: Benjamín and Bombastus]] are trying to accomplish.
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* BatmanGambit: This is propably probably what [[spoiler: Benjamín and Bombastus]] are ]] is trying to accomplish.
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* BerserkButton: Stating that Kaji and his father are similar. Beating Lluvia in a fight. Defying Matarratas´ intelligence, defending the Five Elements in front of him and saying anything remotely offensive towards his dead relatives, specially his grandfather Sebastian. Talking abour "legends" during Leo´s class. Talking casually about Benjamín in front of Ember.
** Also, Zap may act like a moron most of the time, but harm Ouroboros and he'll unleash a thunderstorm in your face.
** Also, Zap may act like a moron most of the time, but harm Ouroboros and he'll unleash a thunderstorm in your face.
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* BerserkButton: Stating that Kaji and his father are similar. Beating Lluvia in a fight. Defying Matarratas´ intelligence, defending the Five Elements in front of him and saying anything remotely offensive towards his dead relatives, specially his grandfather Sebastian. Talking abour "legends" during Leo´s class. Talking casually about Benjamín in front of Ember.
** Also, Zap may act like a moron most of the time, but harmOuroboros [[spoiler: Ouroboros]] and he'll unleash a thunderstorm in your face.
** Also, Zap may act like a moron most of the time, but harm
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* BlindSeer: The Was family of shadow elementals are always blindfolded. They see with their soul.
* BloodKnight: Lluvia is happy at the perspective of going through the League again because she will be able to kick asses.
* BloodKnight: Lluvia is happy at the perspective of going through the League again because she will be able to kick asses.
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* BlindSeer: The Was family of members, shadow elementals elementals, are always blindfolded. They see feel the world with their soul.
soul, but they can´t read or see images.
* BloodKnight: Lluvia is happy at the perspective of [[spoiler: going through the Leagueagain again]] because she will be able to kick asses.
* BloodKnight: Lluvia is happy at the perspective of [[spoiler: going through the League
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** Some people believe that the king´s policy of forgetting abaout the past, even science and history, is for the better.
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** Some people believe that the king´s policy of forgetting abaout about the past, even science and history, is for the better.
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** Zap asks Sôkar how to say "five" in Ancient, just to replicate a Spanish joke with that number. But Sôkar only knows the Ancient numbers up to four. Turns out the Ancient numbering system is in base 5, meaning there are only single-digit numbers up to four, and that's a plot point later on.
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** Zap asks Sôkar how to say "five" in Ancient, just to replicate a Spanish joke with that number. But Sôkar only knows the Ancient numbers up to four. Turns out the Ancient numbering system is in base 5, meaning there are only single-digit numbers up to four, and that's a plot point later on.four.
** Also Sauce: "I can´t go to jail! [[GranolaGirl They eat meat, and don´t recycle!]]"
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** Also Sauce: "I can´t go to jail! [[GranolaGirl They eat meat, and don´t recycle!]]"
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*** Not only that, your speech will also be unintelligible to non-lizard speakers.
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*** Not only that, your speech will also be unintelligible to non-lizard speakers. Jaro Hallormour was said to be "the greatest lkizard master in history", implying there is more to it than may seem now.
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* CrazyPrepared: Bamboo elemental and SS soldier, lieutenant Bumba uses creativity to counter his enemies powers, and overcome the CripplingOverspecialization many elementals suffer.
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* CrazyPrepared: Bamboo elemental and SS soldier, lieutenant Bumba Bumba, uses creativity to counter his enemies powers, and overcome the CripplingOverspecialization many elementals suffer.
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* DamageSpongeBoss: Both Finalmigo and the yótum, even if both of them are later [[OneHitKill destroyed in one hit]]
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* DamageSpongeBoss: Both Finalmigo and the yótum, [[spoiler: even if both of them are later [[OneHitKill destroyed in one hit]]hit]]]]
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* DisappointedInYou: Dino to the main cast, after the Heliopolis adventure. It hits Lluvia pretty hard.
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* DisappointedInYou: Cgapter 37. Wow.
** Dino to the main cast, after the Heliopolis adventure. It hits Lluvia pretty hard.
** Dino to the main cast, after the Heliopolis adventure. It hits Lluvia pretty hard.
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* DrillSergeantNasty: Lluvia instantly becomes this after Matarratas asks her to train him in order to be a better fighter. Sokatr found it quite amusing.
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* DrillSergeantNasty: Lluvia instantly becomes this after Matarratas asks her to train him in order to be a better fighter. Sokatr Sokar found it quite amusing.
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* FiveManBand: The Five Elements. Also the protagonists might be this, even if two of them hate Kaji with passion, and the roles can't be clearly defined.
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* FiveManBand: The Five Elements. Also the protagonists might be this, even if two of them hate Lluvia hates Kaji with passion, and the roles can't be clearly defined.
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* GirlWithPsychoWeapon: Lluvia can control her razor-sharp umbrella with her powers (it has water inside). It´s also a [[SwordCane Sword Cane.]]
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* GirlWithPsychoWeapon: Lluvia can control her razor-sharp umbrella with her powers (it has water inside). [[spoiler: It´s also a [[SwordCane Sword Cane.]]]]]]
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* GoLookAtTheDistraction: Part of Mr. Aquarrica´s plan, he needed the teachers out of town, so his assistant told them the yotum was in the mountains.
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* GoLookAtTheDistraction: [[spoiler: Part of Mr. Aquarrica´s plan, he needed the teachers out of town, so his assistant told them the yotum was in the mountains.]]
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* GreatOffscreenWar: The Zero Day can be considered this. We got some images on the Ember Chronicles, but not much was revealed.
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* GreatOffscreenWar: The Zero Day can be considered this. We got some images on the Ember Chronicles, but not much was revealed.
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* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Kru believes Benjamín to be this, and Benjamín in turn believes kaji to be this.
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* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Kru believes Benjamín to be this, and Benjamín in turn believes kaji Kaji to be this.
** And later from some [[ItMakesSenseInContext drug like bubblegum]]. "Zap... Buddy... Burn this town"
** Alanka can´t remember anything before waking up on comic. He just remembers he was "Be"´s friend, but caný even remember who that person is.
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* ParentalSubstitute: Rubeola is this to Matarratas. Also Desangrador, until recent chapters.
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* ParentalSubstitute: Rubeola is this to Matarratas. Also Desangrador, until recent chapters.the second arc.
** Remember that "animal" in this work refers to any elemental being different from the "human" elementals. [[spoiler: For example, Alanka, a fire demon, is Kaji´s, and maybe Benjamin´s, level A.]]
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** That weird technique Adler used with Kaji has this as a side-effect.
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** That weird technique [[spoiler: Adler used with Kaji on Kaji]] has this as a side-effect.
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* PsychoSerum: The Dusk Virus is something like this. It corrupts you little by little, consumming you and making you go mad.
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* PsychoSerum: The Dusk Virus is something like this. It corrupts you little by little, little while eating your energy away, consumming you and making you go mad.
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* RemovedFromThePicture: [[Válbrandur is missing his head on his Heliopolis´ Portrait depiction. It has been burned or teared off, and the mark connects with H. Arian´s left eye]]
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* RemovedFromThePicture: [[Válbrandur [[spoiler: Válbrandur is missing his head on his Heliopolis´ Portrait depiction. It has been burned or teared off, and the mark connects with H. Arian´s left eye]]
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* {{Revenge}}: Lluvia was actually scared that the reborn Uroboros would attack her after what happened in the temple. [[spoiler: Of course, being an Alcahest elemental, she has nothing to be afraid of.]]
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* {{Revenge}}: Lluvia was actually scared that the reborn [[spoiler: Reborn!]] Uroboros would attack her after what happened in the temple. [[spoiler: Of course, being an Alcahest elemental, she has nothing to be afraid of.]]
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** The cast found aout that Benjamin is [[spoiler: in prison]] way after the readers.
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** The cast found aout out that Benjamin is [[spoiler: in prison]] way after the readers.
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* VillainousBreakDown: Mr. Aquarrica brings an ice giant to crush some of the town so Ember, the town guardian, will get fired. Too bad Ember is out of town.
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* VillainousBreakDown: Mr. Aquarrica brings an ice giant to crush some of the town so Ember, the town guardian, will get fired. [[spoiler: Too bad Ember is out of town.]]
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It looked like an asspull at the time. It fits fine now
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* {{Asspull}}: Lluvia and Sôkar by chance happen to know the Ancient Language in which the book is written.
** Might not be such an asspull, all things considered: Sôkar's grandfather might have been researching on the Ancients because he knew there was an Ancient temple in Beluga Town. A temple whose energy Sebastián Rattengift used for his experiments, which then brought Ember (and so the book) to that town. That still leaves Ken Válbrandur out of the equation, but it's not so blatant.
** Might not be such an asspull, all things considered: Sôkar's grandfather might have been researching on the Ancients because he knew there was an Ancient temple in Beluga Town. A temple whose energy Sebastián Rattengift used for his experiments, which then brought Ember (and so the book) to that town. That still leaves Ken Válbrandur out of the equation, but it's not so blatant.
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* AllYourPowersCombined: Matarratas explains that an Alcahest elemental, Lluvia, for example, could manipulate all the elements.
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* AllYourPowersCombined: Matarratas explains that an Alcahest elemental, Lluvia, for example, elemental could manipulate all the elements.
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* AllAccordingToPlan: [[spoiler: Ben and Bombastus´s]] plan seemed to be turning out pretty smoothly... Until chapter 4- that is.
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* AllAccordingToPlan: [[spoiler: Ben and Bombastus´s]] Benjamín´s]] plan seemed to be turning out pretty smoothly... Until chapter 4- 46 that is.
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* AllAccordingToPlan: [[spoiler: Ben and Bombastus´s]] plan seemed to be turning out pretty smoothly... Until chapter 4- that is.
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: "What do you want, Benjamín?". "Peace". "And what do you do to achieve that peace you crave so much?".
** Obviously, the phrase reappears in the Benjamin´s Chronicles.
* BatmanGambit: This is propably what [[spoiler: Benjamín and Bombastus]] are trying to accomplish.
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* BerserkButton: Stating that Kaji and his father are similar. Beating Lluvia in a fight. Defying Matarratas´ intelligence, defending the Five Elements in front of him and saying anything remotely offensive towards his dead relatives, specially his grandfather Sebastian. Talking abour "legends" during Leo´s class.
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* BerserkButton: Stating that Kaji and his father are similar. Beating Lluvia in a fight. Defying Matarratas´ intelligence, defending the Five Elements in front of him and saying anything remotely offensive towards his dead relatives, specially his grandfather Sebastian. Talking abour "legends" during Leo´s class. Talking casually about Benjamín in front of Ember.
* BlackMagic: "Dark elemental arts".
* BoldExplorer: Kru, Benjamín and Kaji, in their dangerous seek of truth.
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** Arc 2: [[spoiler: Anpepón, the Mentalist Solider]]
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** Arc 2: [[spoiler: Anpepón, the Mentalist Solider]]Soldier]]
** Some people believe that the king´s policy of forgetting abaout the past, even science and history, is for the better.
* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Zap. All the time.
* TheComicallySerious: Pi, a piss elemental and Dino´s friend.
** Also Sauce: "I can´t go to jail! [[GranolaGirl They eat meat, and don´t recycle!]]"
* TheComicallySerious: Pi, a piss elemental and Dino´s friend.
** Also Sauce: "I can´t go to jail! [[GranolaGirl They eat meat, and don´t recycle!]]"
* CrazyPrepared: Bamboo elemental and SS soldier, lieutenant Bumba uses creativity to counter his enemies powers, and overcome the CripplingOverspecialization many elementals suffer.
** Crisol might look stupid to many at first. But the guy is a SS top cientist. And he knows how to do his job.
* CrypticConversation: Bombastus´ is quite fond of this, mostly by muttering to himself or speaking like everyone else knows what he knows. Lluvia reacts accordingly.
* DisappointedInYou: Dino to the main cast, after the Heliopolis adventure. It hits Lluvia pretty hard.
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* DoomMagnet: Lluvia accuses Kaji of being this.
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* DoomMagnet: Lluvia accuses Kaji of being this. She could be right, but she isn´t exactly a pacific little girl...
* [[ElaborateUndergroundBase Elaborated Huge Room Inside a Mountain]]: Dino, Leo and Lambda have a comfortable base inside a mountain, with a huge sofa, a fridge, and, obviously, alcohol. Leo´s lab is here, so he can work on his inventions without the police trying to arrest him.
* ForScience: Bombastus´ main drive fr everything, from [[spoiler: helping Benjamín with his plan]] to [[spoiler: kidnap Lluvia]].
* GuileHero: Captain Kru tried to talk Benjamín into becoming this to achieve the peace he wished for. [[spoiler: Now, we can´t be sure if he really meant it...]]
** Captain Cherry is a bubblegum elemental, and she is extremely efficient.
* HeroicBSOD: Often comes with certain [[WhamLine Wham Lines]].
** Igna, when she found out [[spoiler: Benjamín was under arrest]].
** Igna, when she found out [[spoiler: Benjamín was under arrest]].
* HiddenDepths: Dino and Leo. [[spoiler: It seems to involve Leo´s/Dino´s father, who apparently left everyone behind chasing "legends". That´s why Leo hates legends and myths]].
* HotBlooded: Igna, Benjamín´s wife, couldn´t be anything else than a fire elemental.
** Barley, beer elemental and great friend of Dino. [[spoiler: Also a member of his team when he won the League.]]
** Barley, beer elemental and great friend of Dino. [[spoiler: Also a member of his team when he won the League.]]
* TheIdealist: Captain Kru saw young Benjamín as this, and it amused him a lot, even if he said he was jealous of his possitive thoughts.
* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Kru believes Benjamín to be this, and Benjamín in turn believes kaji to be this.
* TheInfiltration: the (8 person) team tried to infiltrate Coral Town so they could reach Angelo´s museum to find out more about him, [[spoiler: probably being the man who made the Five Elements portrait of Heliopolis and all that]].
** [[spoiler: Mierdófilus is leading a huge group to do exactly the same (minus the museum part) after escaping the elemental mafia.]]
* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Kru believes Benjamín to be this, and Benjamín in turn believes kaji to be this.
* TheInfiltration: the (8 person) team tried to infiltrate Coral Town so they could reach Angelo´s museum to find out more about him, [[spoiler: probably being the man who made the Five Elements portrait of Heliopolis and all that]].
** [[spoiler: Mierdófilus is leading a huge group to do exactly the same (minus the museum part) after escaping the elemental mafia.]]
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** "I´m [[spoiler: Dr. Bombastus´]] daghter, you tard"
* InsaneTrollLogic: "I'm the architect because I'm a lightning elemental".
* InsaneTrollLogic: "I'm the architect because I'm a lightning elemental".
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** "I´m [[spoiler: Dr. Bombastus´]] daghter, daughter, you tard"
* InsaneTrollLogic: Zap could have this as his element: "I'm the architect because I'm a lightning elemental".
* InsaneTrollLogic: Zap could have this as his element: "I'm the architect because I'm a lightning elemental".
** Pi is a water elemental. [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial Shut up]].
** So, [[spoiler: Dino]] is in charge of the research now...
** The government has ordered a massive blood exam on the whole country. Every person must assist, and there are soldiers in every frontier to prevent prople from skipping it. Something big is going on.
*** Sota theorizes it´s due to Lluvia. It happened after Bombastus found out about her, [[spoiler: and he was killed along Hidrargirio by a mysterious person]].
*** Sota theorizes it´s due to Lluvia. It happened after Bombastus found out about her, [[spoiler: and he was killed along Hidrargirio by a mysterious person]].
* MentorOccupationalHazard: Kru, Benjamín...
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* MysteriousInformant: It wasn´t Benjamin... [[spoiler: It´s Adler.]]
* TheMole: [[spoiler: Kru]] was said to be this by the Elemental Sages, helping them against the "sect" that researched about the Five Elements.
* MysteriousInformant: It wasn´t Benjamin... [[spoiler: It´s Adler.]]
* OnlySaneMan: Pi, the sanest guy known among Dino´s friend, [[spoiler: and the only serious member of his League team.]] He has become even more serious since his marriage.
** To be fair, Sota can be quite reasonable when she wants to, just like Dino.
** To be fair, Sota can be quite reasonable when she wants to, just like Dino.
* PassingTheTorch: In Benjamín´s own words: [[spoiler: "I thought everything would turn allright... I failed, Kaji, i messed everything up. I made grave mistakes... I can´t keep this up... You are the only one i can entrust this to..."]]
** "Such a pathetic result... I expected more of myself"
* ThePlan: More than one seem to be in action right now...
** "Such a pathetic result... I expected more of myself"
* ThePlan: More than one seem to be in action right now...
* [[ReviveKillsZombie Vaccine Kills Virus Elemental]]: Matarratas had to infect himself with new viruses after Hiedra shot him with a [[MagicAntidote powerful vaccine]].
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* SecretKeeper: Zap keeps silence about Kaji´s book. Eventually, Lluvia, Matarratas and Sokar become this as well. [[spoiler: And then, Dino and Rubeola, as well as possibly Leo and Lambda, join the bunch.]]
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* SecretKeeper: Zap keeps silence about Kaji´s book. Eventually, Lluvia, Matarratas and Sokar become this as well. [[spoiler: And then, Dino and his former League Team, Rubeola, as well as possibly Leo and Lambda, join the bunch.]]
* SoulPoweredEngine: Bombastus gives the main cast a lightning energy receptor connected to his vital energy, so the main cast would be able to trak him and they would come to trust him.
** [[spoiler: Benjamín takes the gold in this.]]
* TotallyRadical: Crisol tends to do this to relax the work atmosphere. Ember is annoyed by it. A lot.
* TheTrickster: Sota, Dino´s sister and [[spoiler: member of his team when he won the league]] is presented as this. She even uses cards as her weapon of choice.
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** Bombastus: "I don´t know any [[spoiler: Adler]]
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** Bombastus: "I don´t know any [[spoiler: Adler]]Bombastus, to Kaji: "You are Ember´s son, right?... Be careful. [[ObfuscatingStupidity That man is dangerous]]".
** [[SoulPoweredEngine "It broke".]]
** [[SoulPoweredEngine "It broke".]]
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* RemovedFromThePicture: [[Válbrandur is missing his head on his Heliopolis´ Portrait depiction. It has been burned or teared off, and the mark connects with H. Arian´s left eye]]
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* ScrewDestiny: Benjamin and Bombastus prefer making destiny with numbers and posibilities.
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* SecretSocietyGroupPicture: Heliopolis´ Portrait. [[spoiler: It depicts the Five Elements without their masks, but Ken Válbrandur´s face is burned. Of course.]]
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** The cast found aout that Benjamin is [[spoiler: in prison]] way after the readers.
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** Bombastus: "I don´t know any [[spoiler: Adler]]
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* GreatBigLibraryOfEverything: Leona City´s is actually just a big library, but due to the general lack of books in the whole country, specially about history, it´s treated like this.
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* TheLibraryOfBabel: Leona City´s is actually just a big library, but due to the general lack of books in the whole country, specially about history, it´s treated like this.
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* RidiculouslyCuteCritter: reborn Uroboros. The fact that is quite affective doesn´t help.
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* RidiculouslyCuteCritter: reborn Uroboros. [[http://i.imgur.com/SRYya0q.jpg Reborn Uroboros.]] The fact that is he's quite affective doesn´t help.
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* TheUnReveal: A minor one in chapter four, that [[Foreshadowing turns into a big one in hindsight]]: As Kaji's narration says "I guess all of us have secrets, that sooner or later will come out to light", Dino is about to use Leo's power analyzer to snoop on Kaji's blood, but the machine breaks right at that moment. It's only after you know about [[spoiler: the Dusk virus]] that that moment becomes significant.
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* TheUnReveal: TheUnreveal: A minor one in chapter four, that [[Foreshadowing [[{{Foreshadowing}} turns into a big one in hindsight]]: As Kaji's narration says "I guess all of us have secrets, that secrets. Secrets that, sooner or later later, will come out to light", Dino is about to use Leo's power analyzer to snoop on Kaji's blood, but the machine breaks right at that moment. It's only after you know about [[spoiler: the Dusk virus]] that that moment becomes significant.
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* TheUnReveal: A minor one in chapter four, that [[Foreshadowing turns into a big one in hindsight]]: As Kaji's narration says "I guess all of us have secrets, that sooner or later will come out to light", Dino is about to use Leo's power analyzer to snoop on Kaji's blood, but the machine breaks right at that moment. It's only after you know about [[spoiler: the Dusk virus]] that that moment becomes significant.
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But it seems an italian team is translating it to Italian: [[http://5elementos.forumfree.it/?f=6292431]]
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But it seems an italian Italian team is translating it to Italian: [[http://5elementos.forumfree.it/?f=6292431]]
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* ArtificialHuman: Hiedra´s team, created by Dr. Bombastus. Special mencion to Kei[[spoiler: ,who was made with the power of controlling both fire and shadow]].
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* ArtificialHuman: Hiedra´s team, created by Dr. Bombastus. Special mencion mention to Kei[[spoiler: ,who was made with the power of controlling both fire and shadow]].
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Fixing some spelling, grammar and other stuff. And changed Breaking The Fourth Wall to Medium Awareness.
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* AllThereInTheManual: A lot of information is found only in the book format, including backstory of the elemental world, or the element of certain characters.
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* AllThereInTheManual: A lot of information is found only in the book format, including backstory of the elemental world, or the element elements of certain characters.
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* ApologeticAttacker: Sokar.
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* ApologeticAttacker: Sokar.Sôkar.
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* {{Asspull}}: Lluvia and Sokar by chance happen to know the Ancient Language in which the book is written.
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* {{Asspull}}: Lluvia and Sokar Sôkar by chance happen to know the Ancient Language in which the book is written.
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** Except when Karol told Kaji that maybe he was going to see Benjamin if he stayed in Leona City and tried hard to win the League.
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** Except Also used for drama when Karol told Kaji that maybe he was going to see Benjamin if he stayed in Leona City and tried hard to win the League.
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** Arc 2: [[spoiler: Anpepon, the Mentalist Solider]]
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** Arc 2: [[spoiler: Anpepon, Anpepón, the Mentalist Solider]]
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* BossVulnerability: Matarratas thinks Finalmigo is a type two: "Surely he attacks, then gets vulnerable [[GenreSavvy and we hit him]] [[RuleOfThree three times"]].
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* BossVulnerability: Matarratas thinks Finalmigo is a type two: "Surely he attacks, he'll attack, then gets get vulnerable [[GenreSavvy and we hit him]] [[RuleOfThree three times"]].
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* BrainwashingForTheGreaterGood: Desangrador said he was going to do this to Anpepón after he attacked the main cast. [[spoiler: It´s actually a case of [[CantKillYouStillNeedYou Can´t Kill You Still Need You]]. He also ends up killing Anpepón.]]
* BreakingTheFourthWall: From time to time.
** Only in the first arc and maybe the start of the second. It gets slightly more serious after that.
* BreakingTheFourthWall: From time to time.
** Only in the first arc and maybe the start of the second. It gets slightly more serious after that.
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* BrainwashingForTheGreaterGood: Desangrador said he was going to do this to Anpepón after he attacked the main cast. [[spoiler: It´s actually a case of [[CantKillYouStillNeedYou Can´t Kill You Still Need You]]. CantKillYouStillNeedYou. He also ends up killing Anpepón.]]
* BreakingTheFourthWall: From time to time.
** Only in the first arc and maybe the start of the second. It gets slightly more serious after that.him.]]
* BreakingTheFourthWall: From time to time.
** Only in the first arc and maybe the start of the second. It gets slightly more serious after that.
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* ByTheEyesOfTheBlind: The Kimikoho is a special vision that allows virus elementals to see all the elements that compose nature and every being or thing, thus making them able to manipulate them with ease. [[spoiler: Matarratas inherited it from his grandfather, Sebastián Flu Rattengift.]]
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* ByTheEyesOfTheBlind: The Kimikoho is a special vision eye technique that allows virus elementals to see all the elements that compose nature and every being or thing, thus making them able to manipulate them with ease. [[spoiler: Matarratas inherited it from his grandfather, Sebastián Flu Rattengift.]]
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* ChekhovsSkill: When Kaji had a heart attack, Matarratas taught Zap how to reanimate somebody by using electric shocks. Later, that ability comes in handy when he has to revive [[spoiler: Sokar]]
* ChildProdigy: Kaji's father, Ember, is this with his elemental powers. His brother, Benjamin, is an intelectual genius.
* ChildProdigy: Kaji's father, Ember, is this with his elemental powers. His brother, Benjamin, is an intelectual genius.
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* ChekhovsSkill: When Kaji had a heart attack, Matarratas taught Zap how to reanimate somebody by using electric shocks. Later, that ability comes in handy when he has to revive [[spoiler: Sokar]]
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* ChildProdigy: Kaji's father, Ember, is this with his elemental powers. His brother, Benjamin, is anintelectual intellectual genius.
* ChildProdigy: Kaji's father, Ember, is this with his elemental powers. His brother, Benjamin, is an
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** Matarratas can create and modify very complex chemical mixes, even those made by an expert proffessional. [[InTheBlood He inheritted it from his grandfather.]]
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** Matarratas can create and modify very complex chemical mixes, even those made by an expert proffessional. professional. [[InTheBlood He inheritted inherited it from his grandfather.]]
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* ContractualBossImmunity: Finalmigo is invulnerable to Matarratas´ [[TouchOfDeath virical attacks]], as well as the other Labyrinth enemies.
* CompletelyMissingThePoint: Kaji: "I'd rather choke on my own vomit!!" Karol: "You know i don´t like you to drink with haste".
* CompletelyMissingThePoint: Kaji: "I'd rather choke on my own vomit!!" Karol: "You know i don´t like you to drink with haste".
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* ContractualBossImmunity: Finalmigo is and the rest of foes in the Labyrinth are invulnerable to Matarratas´ [[TouchOfDeath virical attacks]], as well as the other Labyrinth enemies.
viral attacks]].
* CompletelyMissingThePoint: Kaji: "I'd rather choke on my own vomit!!" Karol: "You knowi I don´t like you to drink with haste".
* CompletelyMissingThePoint: Kaji: "I'd rather choke on my own vomit!!" Karol: "You know
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* ConLang: The Ancient Language. Ken Válbrandur´s book is written completely like this. [[NewPowersAsThePlotDemands Lluvia and Sokar also happen to know some of it, because Sokar´s anthropologist grandfather did teach them a bit.]] So does Benjamin. And Adler.
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* ConLang: The Ancient Language. Ken Válbrandur´s book is written completely like this. [[NewPowersAsThePlotDemands Lluvia and Sokar Sôkar also happen to know some of it, because Sokar´s Sôkar´s anthropologist grandfather did teach them a bit.]] So does Benjamin. And Adler.
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* CrushKillDestroy: The robot teacher Lapicero (mechanical pen) becomes this when his software fails, or when he wants to scare someone. He is normally very nice to children.
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* CrushKillDestroy: The robot teacher Lapicero (mechanical pen) becomes this when his software fails, or when he wants to scare someone. He is normally very nice to children. Then again, his software has a tendency to fail...
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* CurtainsMatchTheWindow: Water elementals have blue, plant elementals have green, fire elementals (mostly) have red, virus elementals seem to be violet and so on...
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* CurtainsMatchTheWindow: Water elementals have blue, blue hair, plant elementals have green, fire elementals (mostly) have red, virus elementals seem to be violet and so on...
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* CuteBruiser: [[BitchInSheepsClothing Or at least, as much cute you can think Lluvia is...]]
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* CuteBruiser: [[BitchInSheepsClothing Or at least, as much cute as you can think Lluvia is...]]
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* DarkestHour: The end of chapter 37. Let's see: [[spoiler: Lluvia and Matarratas had been captured by Bombastus' "children", Sokar is on the verge of death since his shadow bond with Lluvia has been cut, Zap is all alone against a foe much more powerful than him, and Kaji has lost his fire powers and is also close to death]].
* DarkIsNotEvil: Matarratas may be quite jerkish, but he isn´t evil. And Sokar is probably the nicest guy around.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Matarratas may be quite jerkish, but he isn´t evil. And Sokar is probably the nicest guy around.
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* DarkestHour: The end of chapter 37. Let's see: [[spoiler: Lluvia and Matarratas had been captured by Bombastus' "children", Sokar Sôkar is on the verge of death since his shadow bond with Lluvia has been cut, Zap is all alone against a foe much more powerful than him, and Kaji has lost his fire powers and is also close to death]].
* DarkIsNotEvil: Matarratas may be quite jerkish, but he isn´t evil. AndSokar Sôkar is probably the nicest guy around.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Matarratas may be quite jerkish, but he isn´t evil. And
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** Kaji´s team for the League is called "Fire13". Guess wich elemental branch all the members belong to.
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** Kaji´s team for the League is called "Fire13". Guess wich which elemental branch all the members belong to.
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** The uncrossable Ocean. Also the Labirynth´s mental world, arguably.
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** The uncrossable Ocean. Also the Labirynth´s Labyrinth´s mental world, arguably.
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* [[EmergencyTransformation Emergency Body Change]]: While fighting Karbo, Zap finally revives [[LivingShadow Sokar]], [[spoiler: who binds with him so they can face Karbo]].
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* [[EmergencyTransformation Emergency Body Change]]: While fighting Karbo, Karbô, Zap finally revives [[LivingShadow Sokar]], Sôkar]], [[spoiler: who binds with him so they can face Karbo]].Karbô]].
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* {{Familiar}}: Hugin and Munin, the Was family giant, dark, [[SesquipedalianLocuaciousness adequately verbose]], shadow elemental crows. They were not aware of Sokar´s dirty business, but they decide not to tell Sokar´s parents.
* FantasticRacism: Ember is this in spades, and it causes people to think Kaji is one as well. It´s also very common between fire and water elementals. Also people in general against virus elementals, since they harm or downright kill anything they touch. Also, psychic elementals are feared and despised due to their ability toi read minds.
** This led to the anihilation of air and earth elementals, all of them killed during the chaos of the Zero Day.
* FantasticRacism: Ember is this in spades, and it causes people to think Kaji is one as well. It´s also very common between fire and water elementals. Also people in general against virus elementals, since they harm or downright kill anything they touch. Also, psychic elementals are feared and despised due to their ability toi read minds.
** This led to the anihilation of air and earth elementals, all of them killed during the chaos of the Zero Day.
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* {{Familiar}}: Hugin and Munin, the Was family giant, dark, [[SesquipedalianLocuaciousness adequately verbose]], shadow elemental crows. They were not aware of Sokar´s dirty business, but they decide not to tell Sokar´s Sôkar´s parents.
* FantasticRacism: Ember is this in spades, and it causes people to think Kaji is one as well. It´s also very common between fire and water elementals. Also people in general against virus elementals, since they harm or downright kill anything they touch. Also, psychic elementals are feared and despised due to their abilitytoi to read minds.
** This led to theanihilation annihilation of air and earth elementals, all of them killed during the chaos of the Zero Day.
* FantasticRacism: Ember is this in spades, and it causes people to think Kaji is one as well. It´s also very common between fire and water elementals. Also people in general against virus elementals, since they harm or downright kill anything they touch. Also, psychic elementals are feared and despised due to their ability
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* HotDad: Some.
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* HotDad: Some. Special mention to Kaji's dad, who according to timelines worked out by the fans, is no less than 50 years old.
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* HotShounenMom: Karol, Kaji´s mother, and Rosita, Amor´s mother. Also unnamed Sokar´s mom. Kaji´s grandmother Sirona didn´t look bad either.
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* HotShounenMom: Karol, Kaji´s mother, and Rosita, Amor´s mother. Also unnamed Sokar´s mom. Kaji´s grandmother Sirona didn´t look bad either.either when Kaji's dad was a teenager.
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* InfinityPlusOneElement: Alcahest is theorized to be this. It´s existance is mostly hypotetycal tough, and it´s existence has not been officially recognized. At least if you don´t count the ruins under Mount Pito. [[spoiler: And Lluvia.]]
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* InfinityPlusOneElement: Alcahest is theorized to be this. It´s existance is mostly hypotetycal tough, and it´s a variant of this, see InverseLawOfComplexityToPower below. Though its existence has not been officially recognized. At least if you don´t count the ruins under Mount Pito. is hypothetical [[spoiler: And Lluvia.at first, and even when it's now clear that Lluvia is an alcahest elemental, she can't use those powers yet.]]
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Literal example: Hugin and Munin appear briefly in chapter 33, before their debut five chapters later.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Literal example: The birds Hugin and Munin appear briefly have two: they have a small scene added to chapter 8 in the printed volume, and a one-panel-wonder cameo in chapter 33, before their debut five chapters later.in chapter 38.
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My bad, I misread.
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* ChromeChampion: Karbô has a skin made of [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Graphene graphene]] (atom-width graphite), two thousand times stronger than steel.
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* ChromeChampion: Karbô has a skin made of [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Graphene graphene]] (atom-width graphite), two thousand hundred times stronger than steel.
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I went with Repair Not Respond, but IMO this trope would only fit if graphene is shiny (which I couldn\'t find in Wikipedia or Google). In the comic, the B/W pages don\'t show shinyness, but the shading in the color cover for chapter 38 suggests otherwise.
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* ChromeChampion: Karbô has a metallic skin.
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* ChromeChampion: Karbô has a metallic skin.skin made of [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Graphene graphene]] (atom-width graphite), two thousand times stronger than steel.
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* AndCallHimGeorge: The Plantigordis ("Fattyplants") are this trope embodied: they're plant-creatures that turn animal energy into vegetal energy... by extracting '''your''' energy while they love you.
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** A closer study of the Ancient language shows that it's little more than Catalan (a language spoken in part of Spain) spelled backwards and with vowels thrown in randomly, in what appears to be a parody of "katakanization". When it's not, it's just [[CypherLanguage Spanish spelled in the Ancient alphabet]].
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** [[DontExplainTheJoke A closer study study]] of the Ancient language shows that it's little more than Catalan (a language spoken in part of Spain) spelled backwards and with vowels thrown in randomly, in what appears to be a parody of "katakanization". When it's not, it's just [[CypherLanguage Spanish spelled in the Ancient alphabet]].
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* {{Metaphorgotten}}: Colonel Cerilla, a [[LargeAndInCharge burger lover]], can't help this at times:
-->'''Colonel Cerilla:''' An army is like... a burger. It has bread, lettuce and a delicious sauce all over it. You can have it served with...
-->'''Ember:''' My colonel?
-->'''Colonel Cerilla:''' An army is like... a burger. It has bread, lettuce and a delicious sauce all over it. You can have it served with...
-->'''Ember:''' My colonel?
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This fits better actually.
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* AnachronicOrder: The two flashback chapters of Benjamin's chronicles have this, partly to reflect Benjamin's (present-day) mental state, partly to put the climax of the chapters in place, and partly [[TrollingCreator to leave readers in the dark]] about some things that happen in between.
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* AnachronicOrder: The two flashback chapters of Benjamin's chronicles have this, partly to reflect Benjamin's (present-day) mental state, partly to put the climax of the chapters in place, and partly [[TrollingCreator [[TeasingCreator to leave readers in the dark]] about some things that happen in between.
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