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* OlderThanTheyLook: Masumi looks as someone in his sixty or seventy despite actually in his forties. Justified due to Miharu sucking his vitality from time to time for about five years.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Masumi looks as like someone in his sixty or seventy despite actually actually
being in his forties. Justified due to Miharu sucking his vitality from time to time for about five years.
being in his forties. Justified due to Miharu sucking his vitality from time to time for about five years.
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* MeaningfulName: His name comes from 守り人 (''moribito''), a protector or guardian.
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* MeaningfulName: His name comes from 守り人 (''moribito''), a protector or guardian.guardian[[note]]as in ''Literature/MoribitoGuardianOfTheSpirit''[[/note]].
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* MeaningfulName: His name comes from 守る人 (''mamoru hito''), a person who protects/guards.
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* MeaningfulName: His name comes from 守る人 (''mamoru hito''), 守り人 (''moribito''), a person who protects/guards.protector or guardian.
