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21st Apr '18 12:31:00 AM greatpikminfan
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Penny, Pamela, Momoko. There! After just keeping it at Eve, Ash, Mike, Rain, "strong possibly-horse themed one" (currently named Marie), Karla, and Lilith, I've finally came up with three new party members just from having a "test group" that you get at the first inn/"hotel."

Penny's name is a pun because you get her from paying her (although the currency in ''Omega'' is Tickets). Pamela challenges you to an easy fight. Momoko right now asks for just one copy of the basic healing item but that might change -- basically, they and Rain (Rain is recruited ''outside'' of the inn) are your "tutorial" for the jist of how recruiting party members would "mainly" work. There are several you just flat-out pay, there are some that you either have to fight or go fight something, and some will join you if you exchange items. ''Maybe'' the next two hotels should have one of each of those, just as "quick access to grab more people," but they get more complex. The Ticket-based one in Platform Mountain asks you for '''way''' more than just twenty, the fighter hits harder, etc.

I definitely want a multi-armed party member that, at a glance, could probably be confused for an adult [[VideoGame/YumeNikki Monoko]] minus the fucked up face and stomach-vortex, but I'm not sure if I want Momoko to be that or just a generic food lover.

Also I want a character that's like [[VideoGame/{{Bayonetta}} Enzo]] in that they're the comic relief and specifically mostly just appears for the very beginning and the very end. It's like "Okay, Eve has this one buddy before going on the mission, but then she's on her own... nah, she meets Ash and Mike shortly after and they're the real main group."



* {{Foil}}: To Unitia One.



[[folder:Fusions]]

Unitias are able to fuse, just like [[FanFic/RunGifocalypse their "prototypes."]]

[[/folder]]



* TheEeyore: While most of the Demons are EvilIsHammy incarnate, ''this guy'' can barely even be half-assed to lift a finger to fight. Being made of steam means that he can't really be hit with solid objects that good, yes (it's the main reason he was accepted to the 100), but it also means that he has trouble touching others. So he doesn't even bother.

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* TheEeyore: While most of the Demons are EvilIsHammy incarnate, ''this guy'' can barely even be half-assed to lift a finger to fight. Being made of steam means that he can't really be hit with solid objects that good, yes (it's the main reason he was accepted to the 100), but it also means that he has trouble touching others. So he doesn't even bother.
bother. He's an even bigger downer than ''Blazing Fast'', the ArcVillain of the previous arc.




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* LoneWolfBoss: She's one of the few villainous characters who has ''nothing'' to do with the Hundred Demons whatsoever (Gatherer wants to try to work with them to make her new world, and the few she allied with thinks that that's a ''better'' plan than going through the trouble of wiping out human life manually; Inventor killed a ''few'' of them, but that's mostly just to try to defend his public image; Lock-On )
* ScaryShinyGlasses: They normally look more like "hipster glasses," but they'll occasionally glare over when Yuullieke means business.
* SmallRoleBigImpact: Only really shows up in a grand total of one-third of the story's arcs, and in ''all'' of them she appears very rarely aside from the Ex-Ex-Ex Arc. Yet she pretty much made Carlson who he was emotionally, and gave him a good deal of the issues he had to overcome [[spoiler:even after her death]]. Definitely for the worse.



[[folder:Mayor Green]]

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[[folder:Mayor Green]]
[[folder:Canadian Mayors and the Prime Minister]]

!! Mayor Green



* ColorfulThemeNaming: Subverted as the Building the Knights arc goes on and reveals that Hill Town is really one in a set of seven when it comes to cities with coliseums that the Demons like hanging out around.



!! The Prime Minister





* [[Characters/OmegaWaifuBattleParty The Party (Spoilers for all recruitable members!)]][[note]]Eve, Ash, Mike, [[/note]]
* [[Characters/OmegaWaifuBattle ]]

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* [[Characters/OmegaWaifuBattleParty [[Characters/OmegaToonwifeBattleParty The Party (Spoilers for all recruitable members!)]][[note]]Eve, Ash, Mike, Rain, Penny, Pamela, Momoko, [[/note]]
* [[Characters/OmegaWaifuBattle ]]
[[Characters/OmegaToonwifeBattleOrder Order of the Plant]][[note]]Tutorial Wizard ("Dragon Guardian"), [=LegBoot OriginalPants=] ("Fire Guardian"), Rockshell ("Earth Guardian"), Corp. S. ("Water Guardian"), Logo the Clown ("Wind Guardian"), Matrarx ("Sword Guardian"/Head General)[[/note]]
* [[Characters/OmegaToonwifeTagalongs "Tagalongs;" not quite allies]][[note]][[/note]]
* [[Characters/OmegaToonwifeFriends Other friendly characters]][[note]][[/note]]

'''HARMER OF HINTS: TUTORIAL WIZARD'''

'''PLAGIARISTIC PYROMANIAC: LEGBOOT ORIGINALPANTS'''

'''GEOLOGIC '''

Yeah I like it when the boss of an area actively antagonizes the player character throughout, instead of only showing up at the very end. So, each of the Bufflaos throw puzzles and enemies and even direct assaults on Taro and the gang in ''i can't draw'' (with Blue and Purple double-teaming at Mount. Tan, as part of how it tricks the player in to thinking it's near the end of the game when there's still two more areas to go, that aren't mentioned nearly as much compared to the first four). And in ''Omega Toonwife'', each of the regions has its own "guardian" or whatever that shows up in the region, most of which keep blasting you with a given "element." In addition to them, Lilith will also show up a lot of her sword, and she does this more often the further you get. When she ''really'' starts attacking you at the Metal Factory, it's a sign that the last fight with her is about to happen.
19th Apr '18 12:35:10 AM greatpikminfan
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[[folder:Emilleabora Carlson]]

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[[folder:Emilleabora Carlson]]
[[folder:Sir Emilleabora Carlson (PHD), "The Astronaut Knight"]]



[[folder:Unitia Origin/Unitia One (and the species in general)]]

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[[folder:Unitia Origin/Unitia One One, "The Jade Flame"/"The First Sphere"/"Archangel Unine" (and the species in general)]]



* LetsGetDangerous: All Unitias love covering their crotches with a single finger, in a manner similar to the half-assed "because it's the law but here's a loophole" found in explicit material from Japan (which partly inspired it out-universe). This means that they fight using just one hand, and they are so ridiculously powerful that they can get away with it. If a Unitia ever ends up using ''two'' hands and she's not just having a play-fight with Carlson, not only does it mean that they're putting genuine effort in to it, but it's also one of the highest forms of respect they can give a person. Or it means the opposite: that they're '''really''' pissed off at who they're facing, drop the "teasing" act ''entirely,'' and utterly want their enemy dead, as seen with Pantalite, [[spoiler:the Inventor, and Wunhart]]. In the case of the latter two, it's just Unitia One. In the case of the former, ''[[NoKillLikeOverkill all of the present Unitias at the time]]'' team up and use both hands, just to '''ensure''' that Pantalite does not put a pair of panties on ''any'' Unitia.



** She ''wants'' to give herself an AnimalMotif, but can never settle on one. She considers ants, then cats, then
** In fact, Origin is surprisingly bad at making choices despite being an [[TheAce Ace]] everywhere else and generally having unlimited resources. It's stated that ''because'' she can normally make whatever she wants out of magic/nothing, she's not using to having to pick one thing ''or'' another.



* SpeedSex: Gender-inversion. They are ''normally'' able to ''pull this off'' on other people, as briefly seen with Unitia Origin and the soul beings she used to have unhealthy attachments to. However, sex turns out to be one of the things Carlson ''definitely'' is more talented in than any of the Unitias -- whenever he actually puts in effort, they barely last. This is also how he's able to satisfy them even when their numbers start touching the ''millions'' -- another reference to Soos in ''Journals''.



* UglyGuyHotWife: Downplayed inversion. Carlson has an average-to-attractive build, if being on the lanky side. He's also considered ''very'' attractive in-universe, and was apparently an unwanted ChickMagnet back in high school. While the Unitias are CuteMonsterGirl[=s=] and are certainly more humanoid-looking than a bulk of the other soul beings seen in the story, their design really has more "monster" than "cute." Also, they aren't husband and wife [[spoiler:until the end of ''Ordinarily'' and the events of ''Extraordinarily''.]]

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* UglyGuyHotWife: Downplayed inversion. Carlson has an average-to-attractive build, if being on the lanky side. He's also considered ''very'' attractive in-universe, and was apparently an unwanted ChickMagnet back in high school. While the Unitias are CuteMonsterGirl[=s=] and are certainly more humanoid-looking than a bulk of the other soul beings seen in the story, their design really has more "monster" than "cute." "cute," and they are inspired by "troubled spirit" monster women from ''horror'' media. Also, they aren't husband and wife [[spoiler:until the end of ''Ordinarily'' and the events of ''Extraordinarily''.]]



[[folder:Unitia Two]]

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[[folder:Unitia Two]]
Two, "The Galactic Trumpet"]]



* BerserkButton: In addition to the standard set of the Unitias (excluding some of Origin/One's points), Two has a few unique ones of her own:
** Calling Unitia One and her [[Literature/TheCatInTheHat "Thing One and Thing Two"]] does not roll well with her.
** She's the only Unitia, "Main Sixteen" or otherwise, who is explicitely seen not taking it too well to the fact that Carlson is supernatually good at lovemaking even compared to the Unitias.
** Do '''not''' treat the Unitias as one person, or forget the others when counting a whole group like the Knights/the harem. She's fine with someone specifically only counting Carlson and One if they're isolating them for whatever reason, but she does not take kindly to things like "the three of us" said by Stella. She gets [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness uncharacteristically grumpy]]



* {{Troll}}: She fucks with everyone. Including the other Unitias. And ''especially'' Origin/One. She does mean well, though, the biggest evidence being that she [[spoiler:is the only character that near-consistently calls Origin "Unitia One," figuring out Origin's whole deal with her past life being "dead." (See That Man is Dead, under One's folder.)]]

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* {{Troll}}: She fucks with everyone. Including the other Unitias. And ''especially'' Origin/One. She does mean well, though, the biggest evidence being that she [[spoiler:is the only character that near-consistently calls Origin "Unitia One," (well, along with... the ''other'' Unitias, but still, she is ''shown'' saying it way more often) figuring out Origin's whole deal with her past life being "dead." (See That Man is Dead, under One's folder.)]]
)]] The one exception to this is Carlson; she can never, ever say anything that bugs him. In fact, ''he'' usually ends up screwing with ''her.''



* WalkingSpoiler: Ladies and gentlemen, '''the''' reason as to why Carlson, the Eighth Circle, and possibly the Unitias are as over-the-top powerful as they are. Or, probably. It's what the BigBad things.

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* WalkingSpoiler: Ladies and gentlemen, '''the''' reason as to why Carlson, the Eighth Circle, and possibly the Unitias are as over-the-top powerful as they are. Or, probably. It's what the BigBad things.
thinks. An even bigger spoiler is that when Carlson, Eighth Circle, and Unitia One all contact one-another, they end up being teleported to a floating platform with the Less Ones all on it, and a bright light implied to be the Great One above.



* LastEpisodeNewCharacter: They do not appear proper until near the end of the penultimate chapter in the story, and only briefly. It is implied that a later storyline of ''Extraordinarily'' will focus on them, but it's been more of a MonsterOfTheWeek ecchi hybrid as of Chapter 10.



* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: And it sticks with the trope name. Her allies have

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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: And it sticks with the trope name. Her allies have
similarly have hair of various colors. Some of the later-introduced characters have more than one hair color, much like the Unitias. It's implied that Wavette's crew was later ''based'' on the Unitias.



** [[Characters/OrdinarilyUnitedKnights Secondary and Other Knights/"The Real Skies"]][[note]]Stella Eldbrash, Kameel Kick, Ruby, Leon, Hex, Transparaghost, Her Bone, Powerlesses[[/note]]

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** [[Characters/OrdinarilyUnitedKnights Secondary and Other Knights/"The Real Skies"]][[note]]Stella Eldbrash, Kameel Kick, Ruby, Leon, Hex, Transparaghost, Her Bone, Powerlesses[[/note]]Powerlesses/Other members[[/note]]



[[folder:Whenever I see a video on TBOI mods I think about this shitpost idea, that now has Omega Hank Hill to it what "THE LORDE" is to ''VideoGame/{{Terraria}}'' Calamity]]

'''Omega Hank Hill''' is a hidden "Superboss" in the ''Binding of Isaac: Elemental Somethings'' mod, one of two Superbosses and the hardest challenge in the game. He is intended to be purposefully overpowered; he is a joke boss making fun of fan games and mods that attempt to "escalate" the difficulty of the source game. Due to the game's progression system, he cannot be a "final boss" unless a teleport card is used to get out of the I AM ERROR room after the "final boss" in the proper floor is defeated.

* Base HP: 12,333
* Stage HP: 0
* Found in: I AM ERROR shopkeeper, with both Propane Tank Pieces, any floor
* Dropped Items: Omega Blast

!! Accessing

The boss must be fought with both Propane Tank Pieces in hand. When an Angel -- Uriel or Gabriel -- is killed, he will both drop a Key Piece as in the original ''Rebirth'' and a Propane Tank Piece. Only one of them can be grabbed (unless they are duplicated wiht Diplopia/Crooked Penny or grabbed with Moving Box), as the other will disappear.

Omega Hank Hill is not tied to any floor. Instead, he is encountered in I AM ERROR rooms or anywhere that originally had an ERROR room-shopkeeper. All ERROR Shopkeepers are replaced with highly shrunk and compressed images of Hank Hill smoking. Blowing this up will yield twice the normal payout shopkeepers normally give. When the Isaac gets close enough to a "Hank Smoking Image" with both propane pieces in hand, the doors (if through an I AM ERROR Super Secret Room or a rare closet) and trapdoors will all shut and the "Image" will react with the assembled Propane Tank, transforming in to Omega Hank Hill.

Assembling the two Propane Tank Pieces automatically drops a single Glitch Card, which allows instant access to the I AM ERROR room on any floor other than the Chest or the Dark Room.

!! Attacks

!!! First Phrase

Omega Hank Hill always starts the battle in a reference to one of the potential "final bosses" from ''Undertale''; while invincible, he will briefly spawn several Gaping Maws to force-pull Isaac near the bottom end of the scren, and shortly after despawning them, several rocks will appear near the bottom part. The boss then sends out a curving "wave" of rocks that quickly scroll across the screen, with a pocket of survival in the middle of the screen. Following that, several clouds of red mist will spawn, firing Brimstone beams that alternate between forming "boxes" around the edges of the map and "Xes" that cross through the middle, finishing with two large beams that go through the middle of the screen. Following this, he will flip in the air harmlessly before landing, becoming vulnerable.

Following this, Omega Hank Hill will randomly do the following:
* Attempt to jump on Isaac. Regardless of the floor, this will deal a full heart of damage if Isaac is not equipped with the Wafer.
* Spawn several vertical lines of fire with gaps in them that Isaac must manuver through.
* Drop "mines" that randomly fires one of the following:
** Krampus-styled cross-Brimstone beams. Like Krampus, the beams could be cardinal or diagonal, and could rotate clockwise or counterclockwise.
** Circular waves of "Continuum" bullets that
** A star-pattern of six Little Horn-styled "smoke balls" that home in on Isaac.
**
** Cage-styled rock waves that move randomly in four directions.
* Leap in the top-middle of the area, where his eyes will either flash cyan or orange randomly. He will then swipe a giant version of the Flaming Forest Sword across the screen in the same order that the eyes flashed. Cyan indicates that Isaac must stay still to avoid taking damage; orange indicates that he must be moving. This attack is copied from Asgore from ''Undertale''. Following this, he will turn his head up, "roar," and slam the sword on the ground,

!!! Second Phrase

After being brought down to 6,616 life points, Omega Hank Hill will turn invulnerable as his arms will "plop off" and be replaced with large, glowing, translucent yellow wings. He will then alternate between placing the "mines" from the first phrase much faster and two at a time, he may spawn other "lesser bosses" (the Bloat has a much higher chance of being spawned, due to his infamy in the fandom) as well as randomly copying some of the attacks from other final bosses in quick succession:

* Mom: He will go offscreen and his foot will try to stomp on Isaac five times in quick succession. This will end with five feet stomping at once; one homing in on Isaac's position, the other four appearing randomly.
* Mom's Heart/It Lives!: Automatically spawns two Eyes and fires ''two'' of the Heart's possible patterns simultaneously.
* Satan: Uses the hand-Brimstone attack almost immediately followed by firing Brimstone directly below. He will also fire another laser above, so standing behind him will not keep Isaac safe.
* The Lamb: Mimicks the Lamb's head-rushing attack, dashing over where Isaac is with fast speed. He will often follow this with another attack almost immediately.
* Isaac: Disappears, and several rays of light spawn from one corner of the screen to the other. These move far faster than the beams of light in the Isaac fight, and more akin to Delirium's version.
* ???:

!! Strategy

As Omega Hank Hill is meant to be a deliberately unbalanced and random "joke boss," there is no major strategy for fighting him.

[[/folder]]



** Out of the "tag-along not-really companion" characters that harmlessly bug Eve and company throughout their journey through the Order of the Plant's empire, Traesop (the sole "companion" in Bland Forest) is considered the most forgettable by a long shot. Which is an accomplishment, since he's the first. Compared to the quirky and genuinely nice Office Workers in the Platform Regions, the initial strawman-seeming Polygon Meme Band and Fighters of Sensitivity before you find that their respective leaders both have HiddenDepths at the Metal Industry, and Logo's GoodTwin Fu at Sky Studios, this guy's main gimmick is that he's a wannabe villain who critiques the "plot of the game" itself like

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** Out of the "tag-along not-really companion" characters that harmlessly bug Eve and company throughout their journey through the Order of the Plant's empire, Traesop (the sole "companion" in Bland Forest) is considered the most forgettable by a long shot. Which is an accomplishment, since he's the first. Compared to the quirky and genuinely nice Office Workers Workers/Anibuds in the Platform Regions, Mountain, the initial strawman-seeming Polygon Meme Band and Fighters of Sensitivity before you find that their respective leaders both have HiddenDepths at the Metal Industry, and Logo's GoodTwin Fu at Sky Studios, this guy's main gimmick is that he's a wannabe villain who critiques the "plot of the game" itself like
like it is a game, and he has a specific fixation on the "moral" it might be teaching others. It's a gimmick generally agreed to wear thin and he especially sticks out like a sore thumb compared to [=LegBoot OriginalPants=], who is generally considered the most humorous of the characters that is eventually fought as a boss due to how far his "easter eggs" (really more like in-universe ripoffs of various other indie games) get thrown OffTheRails every single time and his sudden, out of nowhere sexual advances on Eve.



** Despite being meant to feel like a Scrappy character and definitely being hated in-universe, she's still not cared about at all and [[CreatorsPest even Great Pikmin Fan isn't really that fond of her,]] ''greatly'' prefering Mable the Typomonster as the actual BigBad and EvilCounterpart to Mabel. To the point where Nzyvo initially had no real role in Chapter 7 and Fan would remark

* FauxSymbolism:
** WordOfGod is that the ''Eighth'' Circle technically assigning himself to a frozen ring, with the Pit being a frozen area "like" the Divine Comedy's description of the ''Ninth'' Circle of Hell, was unintentional. Fan also said he was unfamiliar with the Comedy at the time (and still is now) and simply thought calling the BigBad of a group of monsters that call themselves Demons "the Eighth Circle" just sounded cool, and was also in reference to his WhatCouldHaveBeen role as "HRT-8." Bear in mind this was before Fan hard-decided that the "HRT" designation should be used for [[spoiler:the Emazhes of ''Emazh In'']].
* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotPolitical:
** WordOfGod is that any possible allegory between the plan of the Hundred Demons and immigration (in regards to the United States or otherwise) is completely unintentional, and that "the Eighth Circle, Unitia One, and the other Hundred Demons are about as much of an immigration allegory as [[WesternAnimation/GravityFalls Bill Cipher and Weirdmageddon]] are," which is to say not much. They're simply literally eldritch forces that want to invade Earth, although Eighth Circle is considerably less evil and sadistic about it. Not even Eighthback's comments are meant to be a direct 1:1 message; the whole joke is that his "only one in one hundred are good" statistic regarding the Demons is ''literal,'' so Carlson finds it very hard to convince him that the Unitias are not like '''''literally''''' every other soul being that had successfully made it to Earth in the Tombs.
** The ImprobablyFemaleCast and the casual views on nudity are pure AuthorAppeal (Leon and Eldbrash only exist so that the Knights would not consist of ''only'' women; Fan says that fanservice involving men was to "make the story a tiny bit more even"), and neither is really some kind of commentary on gender roles or gender portrayal. The closest the story does to this is incredibly small, missable details that are not pointed out, like Unitia Origin being the one to propose to Carlson near the end of Chapter 1 instead of the other way around. The story's harsh criticism towards gropers and sexual harassers just stemmed out of Great Pikmin Fan ''really'' hating it when a character's "perverted antics" are glorified or treated as a loveable character trait for any reason. Like Brooke in ''Omega Toonwife Battle Simulator'', the whole Inventor arc was one big TakeThat at various uses of BlackComedyRape where the offender is in any way meant to be "likeable."

Nah. If it were "fanfiction quality" then Dipper would be portrayed as 100% in the right and "moving on from Wendy" by talking to the other girls. They would still conveniently meetup in Mystery Mountain but instead of being pissed off at him they would not like it for like five seconds but then come up with the "brilliant plan" to share him as a harem because every other boy on the planet is literally Gideon, and Dipper ''DESERVES'' a harem because Mabel made fun of him that one time and bad things happened to him and he has basic human decency. Also Candy joins in too because the crush thing still goes by and she thinks of him as super-amazing, and Dipper becomes the one who saves the gang from Darlene instead of Candy. Also, Pacifica is on the trip too because reasons and confesses her love for him that happened since she first saw him way back near the beginning. And then Wendy descends from the sky and says that as Dipper has ascended in being a cool guy she'll join the harem too. And what the hell, Bill somehow gains a physical form without the rift and confesses his love for Dipper, and Mabel reveals that she's actually an incestous creep that wants him too. Polygamy becomes legal because the POTUS is so moved by this beautiful moment and Dipper becomes the head of his own clan, where he hogs up lost technology for himself and anyone that wanders in -- even the lost or drunk -- is killed and no official leader bats an eye at that.

Then again I'm practically writing Soos/harem garbage so that right there is borderline hypcoracy.

"MISTER CARLTON [sic]! It is I, Swinging Blade! Consider our fight... BEGUN!"

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** Despite being meant to feel like a Scrappy character and definitely being hated in-universe, she's still not cared about at all and [[CreatorsPest even Great Pikmin Fan isn't really that fond of her,]] ''greatly'' prefering Mable the Typomonster as the actual BigBad and EvilCounterpart to Mabel. To the point where Nzyvo initially had no real role in Chapter 7 and Fan would remark

* FauxSymbolism:
** WordOfGod is
remark that the ''Eighth'' Circle technically assigning himself to a frozen ring, with the Pit being a frozen area "like" the Divine Comedy's description of the ''Ninth'' Circle of Hell, was unintentional. Fan also said he was unfamiliar with the Comedy at the time (and still is now) and simply thought calling the BigBad of a group of monsters that call themselves Demons "the Eighth Circle" just sounded cool, and was also in reference to his WhatCouldHaveBeen role as "HRT-8." Bear in mind this was before Fan hard-decided that the "HRT" designation should be used for [[spoiler:the Emazhes of ''Emazh In'']].
* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotPolitical:
** WordOfGod is that any possible allegory between the plan of the Hundred Demons and immigration (in regards to the United States or otherwise) is completely unintentional, and that "the Eighth Circle, Unitia One, and the other Hundred Demons are about as much of an immigration allegory as [[WesternAnimation/GravityFalls Bill Cipher and Weirdmageddon]] are," which is to say not much. They're simply literally eldritch forces that want to invade Earth, although Eighth Circle is considerably less evil and sadistic about it. Not even Eighthback's comments are meant to be a direct 1:1 message; the whole joke is that his "only one in one hundred are good" statistic regarding the Demons is ''literal,'' so Carlson finds it very hard to convince him that the Unitias are not like '''''literally''''' every other soul being that
had successfully made it to Earth in the Tombs.
** The ImprobablyFemaleCast and the casual views on nudity are pure AuthorAppeal (Leon and Eldbrash only exist so that the Knights would not consist of ''only'' women; Fan says that fanservice
trouble involving men was to "make her in the story a tiny bit when it became less "Light of Courage" and more even"), and neither is really some kind of commentary on gender roles or gender portrayal. The closest the story does to this is incredibly small, missable details that are not pointed out, like Unitia Origin being the one to propose to Carlson near the end of Chapter 1 instead of the other way around. The story's harsh criticism towards gropers and sexual harassers just stemmed out of Great Pikmin Fan ''really'' hating it when a character's "perverted antics" are glorified or treated as a loveable character trait for any reason. Like Brooke in ''Omega Toonwife Battle Simulator'', the whole Inventor arc was one big TakeThat at various uses of BlackComedyRape where the offender is in any way meant to be "likeable."Gurren Lagann meets Scott Pilgrim."

Nah. If it were "fanfiction quality" then Dipper would be portrayed as 100% * AwesomeMcCoolName: Rain ''Perthrocard.''

Just like Jeanne, you fight him four times, and
in the right and "moving on from Wendy" by talking final battle, you get a really fucking awesome remix of his battle theme with chanting.

* HRT-1: Swinging Blade
* HRT-2: Blazing Fast (who was actually going
to the other girls. They would still conveniently meetup in Mystery Mountain but instead of being pissed off at him they would not be more like it for a robot kinda shaped like five seconds but then come up the number "2" -- I didn't ''finalize'' anything with the "brilliant plan" to share him as a harem because every other boy on the planet is literally Gideon, and Dipper ''DESERVES'' a harem because Mabel made fun of him his old design, I just wanted it so that one time and bad things happened to him and he has basic human decency. Also Candy joins in too because the crush thing still goes by and she thinks of him as super-amazing, and Dipper becomes the one who saves the gang from Darlene instead of Candy. Also, Pacifica is on the trip too because reasons and confesses her love for him that happened since she first saw him way back near the beginning. And then Wendy descends if you looked at everybody from the sky and says right, they'd loosely be in the shape of their numbers in some way)
* HRT-3: Assily Blast (made while Inventor had a toilet humor phase)
* HRT-4: DEATH MECHA (was originally not going to talk like
that as Dipper has ascended in being a cool guy she'll join the harem too. And from ''The Room'')
* HRT-5: Scale Breath (originally "The Dragon")
* HRT-6: Girlaser
* HRT-7: Dudenergy
* HRT-8: Eighth Circle (originally "Big Suit" and did not look even remotely Satan-y)
* HRT-9: Unitia Origin (basically a ''completely'' different character from
what the hell, Bill somehow gains a physical form without the rift and confesses his love for Dipper, and Mabel reveals that she is now. If you think [=UO/U1=] is kind of an asshole, she's a saint compared to her prototype...)

HRT-8 because infinity sign, if you turn 8 sideways. HRT-9 because "breaking" the infinity sign. Unitia Origin was still Demon #9 in the final version for that reason. As I moved Big Suit/Eighth Circle to the Big Bad status I thought it would make more sense if he was Demon #1, so I planted him there, but he's still called the '''Eighth''' Circle to reference his original position as HRT-8. Yet ultimately, it still really works symbolism-wise.

The other Demons flat-out weren't going to be in at all. No, not even Ninjssassin, which seems odd. Fun fact, she was
actually an incestous creep that wants him too. Polygamy becomes legal one of the ''last'' designs I came up with -- I saved most of the Single Digits (except Tony, Res because I didn't want #2 to die early for... some reason and had the POTUS is so moved by this beautiful moment joke about the last guy being able to bring everyone back from the dead, and Dipper becomes Unitia Origin and Eighth Circle because where would I be without designing the main heroine and villain first?) for last, and just thought "fuck it, we've kinda got a Matthew, a Lucas, a Todd, and definitely have the twins in this, let's round out the Evil Exes with a Roxie" and I just ended up liking her so much that she became the "Vorkken"/"Jeanne"/"Mudvin"/"Lilith" of OU.

Yeah an Ordinarily Unitale might "work:"
-->'''Unitia One:''' Sorry about that. Cryipasto is not my younger brother -- he existed for a thousand years before my SOUL came in to existence -- but... let's face it, he might as well be. The guy is an ass. Anyway, I'm UNITIA ORIGIN. I watch over the RUINS, looking for any humans that fall down here.\\
'''Blazing Fast:''' Look, I'm supposed to be on the watch for humans, but... eh. I don't care. You guys are all clearly going to wipe the rest of us out anyway. So all I do is wait for that and smoke. Now, my... "buddy," Swinging Blade... he's a human-hunting fanatic. Trust me, it gets old.\\
'''Swinging Blade:''' HUMAN! It is I, the amazing SWINGING BLADE, who will obtain top position as
the head of his own clan, where he hogs up lost technology for himself and anyone all the Underground! Unlike that wanders stupid Unitia Origin, who was ''CLEARLY'' just kept alive out of nepetaism!\\
'''Ninjssassin:''' As long as you are IN MY SHADOW you cannot escape!\\
'''DEATH MECHA:''' Okay
in -- even ''The Room'' what's the lost or drunk -- name of the woman who is killed and no official leader bats an eye at that.

Then again I'm practically writing Soos/harem garbage so that right there is borderline hypcoracy.

"MISTER CARLTON [sic]!
tearing Johnny apart? A: Marka. B: Buddy. C: Lisa. D: Meg.
'''Scale Breath:''' ''(Making the letter "C" with his claws.)''\\
'''And the absolute most obvious one, Eighth Circle:''' Carlson.
It is I, Swinging Blade! Consider our fight... BEGUN!"
was nice to meet you. Goodbye. ''(Puts cape on, whips out pitchfork, destroys the MERCY button.)''


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No, I swear that's all a coincidence. They're actually inspired by [=.GIFfany=] and stuff, from ''Journals of Wisdom, Power, and Courage''. I wanted the first one to kind of not have the same pink color scheme, so I went with inverting the hair color -- dark jade green. Then figured, what the fuck, there's going to be billions and billions of them so pink will have to be used ''eventually,'' so I just made Unitia Two the pink-haired one to get it out of the way.
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** ''Finally'' and to a lesser extent as most of the others on the list, none of the Unitias are that fond of anything remotely tied to ToiletHumor. Well, ass jokes are fine, as long as it's in a sexual manner and not related to things coming ''out'' of the ass. Origin threatens to kill Swinging Blade in a more painful manner than her trademark finger-flick when he calls her fire conjuring "fire-farts" (it ''is'' revealed significantly later that the magic is at its most concentrated and easiest to use in any given person's rear, but Swinging Blade had no idea about that and the fire obviously first appears near a Unitia's hand, if not far away from her as they make it long-distance), Origin stops being "playful" with Cryipasto and gets pissed when she finds out about his "wish" that he makes the Unitias piss themselves in fright, and of course Assily Blast in general is a huge walking piss off-button for them. [[spoiler:The latter makes them especially angry since, while the former two are Butt Monkeys, Assily Blast is one of the very few of the Hundred Demons that can put up something resembling a decent fight with a Unitia.]]



* RedOniBlueOni: Since Carlson is almost always a general "blue" early on and Unitia Two is a general "red," Unitia One's place in relation to them is a bit... complicated. Going one at a time:
** She's usually the red to Carlson's blue, as she's far more outgoing, energetic, and "playful" than he is, while he's pretty laid-back and stoic. They switch when she's in a bad mood and/or he's in a hyped mood, but this usually never happens around the same time, unless the Eighth Circle is involved.
** She's almost always the blue to Unitia Two's red, which coincidentally is ''close'' to their thematic colors. Unitia Two is far more upbeat and teasing than One is,



* NotQuiteDead: She's faced in the first chapter. ''Much'' later, we find out that she survived the initial fight with Carlson... just for Carlson to take her out for good anyway.



* ButtMonkey: Not as much as Cryipasto or especially Swinging Blade, but he really does live up to his title "useless" and his one and only fighting sequence results in him falling flat on his ass.



* BaseballEpisode: Parodied in that he challenges the Knights to "a really long baseball match!" Carlson just bypasses this by slicing him in half with Grayscale. Stella's slightly disappointed, but Unitia Origin is relieved that she doesn't have to risk putting on a uniform (although she doubts Home-Run would actually do so).

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* BaseballEpisode: Parodied in that he challenges the Knights to "a really long baseball match!" Carlson just bypasses this by slicing him in half with Grayscale. Stella's slightly disappointed, disappointed when she finds out about this in the future, but Unitia Origin is was just relieved that she doesn't have to risk putting on a uniform (although she doubts Home-Run would actually do so).



* AlphaBitch: Her actual personality is closer to this, because Fan said he was sick of having the "cute-types" turn out to be "sadistic" (Icesky, Tanker, Lil Stalin) so he wanted one that was closer to being an asshole. She even comes with her own... ''unique'' annoying laugh, which even ''Stella'' can't defend as she thinks it's a pain in the ears.
* {{Foil}}: She's almost the opposite of the Unitias. While the Unitias are largely their own bosses, go around completely naked, are geniuses, take crap from nobody, and are intentionally meant to have a mildly "creepy" asthetic when taken out of context despite being friendly (for the most part, Origin/One can be a bit of an ass some times to people who don't fit her high standards), Server is a relatively "small" and submissive maid-type that usually wears more clothes than most of the other Demons (PETAL SQUAD FORCE being the biggest exception(s)), is an idiot, and is supposed to have a "cute" asthetic at first when taken out of context except she's a colossal BitchInSheepsClothing.



* NakedApron: Although it's noteworthy here in that she probably holds ''the'' record for the demon that wears the most amount of clothes, even just counting this and not her alternate form. Interestingly, the Knights have ''four'' people (one man, three women) with this "uniform," just that it cannot shift in to a maid outfit as well.

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* NakedApron: Although it's noteworthy here Her only attire in that she probably holds ''the'' record for the demon that wears the most amount one of clothes, even just counting this and not her alternate form. two "forms." Interestingly, the Knights have ''four'' people (one man, three women) with this "uniform," just that it cannot shift in to a maid outfit as well.
* VerbalTic: She likes punctuating things with a laugh that's written as "Ah. Ha ha fa fa na na ra ra ''MAHHHH!''" The Unitias being annoyed by it is a given, they have a low tollerance for bullcrap. With Carlson it's not that surprising either. But when ''Stella'' finds something annoying, that says a lot.



"Normal" fight with Ninjssassin: "Gray Clouds, Black Clouds"

Final fight with Ninjssassin: "Rain and Lightning."

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"Normal" fight !! If I had to guess:

* GPF's AuthorAvatar, mostly because the real Fan's uncertainty of how to write him (the character) results in him flip-flopping between being a {{jerkass}} to the other cast or being a bit obsessive
with Ninjssassin: "Gray Clouds, Black Clouds"

Final fight
his personal "meme/injoke characters," neither of which is considered that amusing. He ''is'' killed off in all of his appearances in what's supposed to be a TakeThatScrappy, but even that got old. It's generally thought that Professor Dove does a slightly better job at being the "jerkass nobody likes [[SelfDeprecation who also shares the opinions of the author, just grotesquely exaggerated]]," as well as her two successors Maria (who is based on Dove's initial characterization as an ominous and powerful threat) and Unitia Nine (who is based on her temporary {{Flanderization}} in ''Journals'' and ''Escape From Fanservice Island'' as a goof that tries too hard to come off as smart).
* ''Omega Toonwife Battle Simulator'':
** Most of the party members have lukewarm opinions at worst (and even they have minor, minor followings), but one character almost unanimously hated is Karla Tonn. Her gimmick is that there are no sidequests or payment or items needed to recruit her at all and that she's by far the strongest party member in the game, but she comes at the steep price in that recruiting her ''permanently'' makes the entire party "naked," in that they cannot wear any armor or even badges. While this is negligible if you've been chowing down on Defense Jellybeans (which are permanent stat-ups just like the Beans from most of the ''Mario and Luigi'' games), it still takes a lot of the game's depth out as straight-up items and party setup become the only customization options. While she can be ignored for the "White Key" and "Black Key" endings -- and she usually ''is'' -- she's required for the [[spoiler:Ultigarden]] as you need all party members to reach it, and while WordOfGod is that it's not meant to be a GoldenEnding or even a "TrueEnding," players consider it so since it is a BrutalBonusLevel. In other words, entirely thanks to this assbag, sacrificing a key game element and making it a more tedious, less customized "hit and get hit" system is part of the "extra content." None of this is even getting in to how much of a {{jerkass}} she is to Eve [[spoiler:and Lilith, if you head over to Karla after Lilith's Defeat Means Friendship just before the Sky Studios]]. Even her gimmick of being a powerful nudist is not that special, as there are several other "naked" party members even without Karla forcing the whole gang to strip (although ''most'' of them aren't technically human).
** Out of the "tag-along not-really companion" characters that harmlessly bug Eve and company throughout their journey through the Order of the Plant's empire, Traesop (the sole "companion" in Bland Forest) is considered the most forgettable by a long shot. Which is an accomplishment, since he's the first. Compared to the quirky and genuinely nice Office Workers in the Platform Regions, the initial strawman-seeming Polygon Meme Band and Fighters of Sensitivity before you find that their respective leaders both have HiddenDepths at the Metal Industry, and Logo's GoodTwin Fu at Sky Studios, this guy's main gimmick is that he's a wannabe villain who critiques the "plot of the game" itself like

!! In-universe:

* Nzyvo Northwest in ''Journals of Wisdom, Power, and Courage'' was intended to be a Parody-VillainSue and deliberately meant to be hated as a villain ''or'' a hero. In the former case, in that she's a spotlight hogging ReplacementScrappy for Bill Cipher (who was still ''in'' the story, just heavily demoted) as well as being a ludicrously overpowered "edgy recolor" of Mabel. In the latter case, it's as she's EasilyForgiven and generally was meant to feel more like an edgy plot device
with Ninjssassin: "Rain a shoehorned "tragic story." In both cases, she's meant to draw ire for being unreasonably cruel to Dipper (although this is part of ''SBIG''[='=]s love for tearing at "underdog"-esque characters that get strong attatchments from the fandom, in some cases even to the point of washing away their flaws)
** Despite being meant to feel like a Scrappy character
and Lightning."
definitely being hated in-universe, she's still not cared about at all and [[CreatorsPest even Great Pikmin Fan isn't really that fond of her,]] ''greatly'' prefering Mable the Typomonster as the actual BigBad and EvilCounterpart to Mabel. To the point where Nzyvo initially had no real role in Chapter 7 and Fan would remark

* FauxSymbolism:
** WordOfGod is that the ''Eighth'' Circle technically assigning himself to a frozen ring, with the Pit being a frozen area "like" the Divine Comedy's description of the ''Ninth'' Circle of Hell, was unintentional. Fan also said he was unfamiliar with the Comedy at the time (and still is now) and simply thought calling the BigBad of a group of monsters that call themselves Demons "the Eighth Circle" just sounded cool, and was also in reference to his WhatCouldHaveBeen role as "HRT-8." Bear in mind this was before Fan hard-decided that the "HRT" designation should be used for [[spoiler:the Emazhes of ''Emazh In'']].



** The ImprobablyFemaleCast and the casual views on nudity are pure AuthorAppeal (Leon and Eldbrash only exist so that the Knights would not consist of ''only'' women; Fan says that fanservice involving men was to "make the story a tiny bit more even"), and neither is really some kind of commentary on gender roles or gender portrayal. The closest the story does to this is incredibly small, missable details that are not pointed out, like Unitia Origin being the one to propose to Carlson near the end of Chapter 1 instead of the other way around. The story's harsh criticism towards gropers and sexual harassers just stemmed out of Great Pikmin Fan ''really'' hating it when a character's "perverted antics" are glorified or treated as a loveable character trait for any reason. Like Brooke in ''Omega Toonwife Battle Simulator'', the whole Inventor arc was one big TakeThat at various uses of BlackComedyRape where the offender is in any way meant to be "likeable."

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** The ImprobablyFemaleCast and the casual views on nudity are pure AuthorAppeal (Leon and Eldbrash only exist so that the Knights would not consist of ''only'' women; Fan says that fanservice involving men was to "make the story a tiny bit more even"), and neither is really some kind of commentary on gender roles or gender portrayal. The closest the story does to this is incredibly small, missable details that are not pointed out, like Unitia Origin being the one to propose to Carlson near the end of Chapter 1 instead of the other way around. The story's harsh criticism towards gropers and sexual harassers just stemmed out of Great Pikmin Fan ''really'' hating it when a character's "perverted antics" are glorified or treated as a loveable character trait for any reason. Like Brooke in ''Omega Toonwife Battle Simulator'', the whole Inventor arc was one big TakeThat at various uses of BlackComedyRape where the offender is in any way meant to be "likeable.""

Nah. If it were "fanfiction quality" then Dipper would be portrayed as 100% in the right and "moving on from Wendy" by talking to the other girls. They would still conveniently meetup in Mystery Mountain but instead of being pissed off at him they would not like it for like five seconds but then come up with the "brilliant plan" to share him as a harem because every other boy on the planet is literally Gideon, and Dipper ''DESERVES'' a harem because Mabel made fun of him that one time and bad things happened to him and he has basic human decency. Also Candy joins in too because the crush thing still goes by and she thinks of him as super-amazing, and Dipper becomes the one who saves the gang from Darlene instead of Candy. Also, Pacifica is on the trip too because reasons and confesses her love for him that happened since she first saw him way back near the beginning. And then Wendy descends from the sky and says that as Dipper has ascended in being a cool guy she'll join the harem too. And what the hell, Bill somehow gains a physical form without the rift and confesses his love for Dipper, and Mabel reveals that she's actually an incestous creep that wants him too. Polygamy becomes legal because the POTUS is so moved by this beautiful moment and Dipper becomes the head of his own clan, where he hogs up lost technology for himself and anyone that wanders in -- even the lost or drunk -- is killed and no official leader bats an eye at that.

Then again I'm practically writing Soos/harem garbage so that right there is borderline hypcoracy.

"MISTER CARLTON [sic]! It is I, Swinging Blade! Consider our fight... BEGUN!"

It's a trend of "mirror matches." Steve vs Mudvin. Carlson vs Ninjssassin. Eve vs Lilith.

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Brooke was never actually intended to be a recruitable party member. I mean, ever. It's not even a "scrapped idea," it was something that never once crossed my mind. Insa and Sam were both also just meant to be side-people that weren't recruitable.

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!! "Templates:" (As of now they're ''all'' supposed to be "quotes" from Stella. I think it would fit if Stella was the quoter for all of them, because that's kind of an OU-y thing. And it fits that Stella feels kind of like she's "shoved in." There's a number of reasons why I'm thinking of giving her the title of "The Anti-Vriska.")

Stub:
-->''"It's shorter than Kameel's skirt. And the only things that should be shorter than Kameel's skirt are other peoples' skirts."''\\
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The opposite of a stub:
-->''"Wow. This thing is so long that if you make it in to a book, you can probably use that book as a boat. Somehow. I'm not very good at improvising these things."''\\
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Disambiguation:
-->''"I'm sorry, I keep getting your names mixed up."''\\
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Spoiler:
-->''"Oh shit, did I give that away? Sorry, it's a force of habit. That I just keep talking."''\\
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Images:
-->''"I know, I know, cartoon scribbles of me aren't the best impression of you guys..."''\\
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Names:
-->''"Honestly, calling those shiny crystal things 'Shiny Rocks' sounds so lame. Can I rename them... 'Omega Power Crystals' or something like that?"''\\
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Bias:
-->''"Well, ''I'' like it."''\\
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Theory:
-->''"I know it's not very likely, but hey, that would be cool. Right? Wouldn't it be cool?"''\\
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Non-Canon:
-->''"No. Please no. One version of us is '''plenty''' for me to understand. We don't need a parallel universe with its own life, its own death, its own Carlson and I, its own Uniti- good lord. Could you even ''imagine'' an entire universe with even more Unitias?!"''\\
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-->''"Either show nipples or I'm going home."''\\
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!! Stellar Silver Knights, Main Human Duo

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!! Stellar Silver Knights, Main Human Duo
Carlson and his Unitia "Harem"



A group of heroes that ''officially'' became a band branded as the Stellar Silver Knights during the invasion of the 100 Demons.

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A group of heroes that ''officially'' became a band branded as the Stellar Silver Knights during the invasion of the 100 Hundred Demons.



* BerserkButton:
** He becomes a bit less stoic and more mad if your villainous plan involves interrupting him watching ''Wavette''. Mostly as it's one of the very few things he feels enjoyment of when he watches its new episodes, as most activities bore him due to how easy they are, while ''Wavette'' is so unpredictable and just all-around ''moronic'' (an in-universe SoBadItsGood work) that he actually gets some like out of seeing where it goes next.
** For similar reasons, he really hates being denied "an actual challenging fight." Swinging Blade falling on his own weapon and getting killed just made him stunned at the sheer anti-climactic-ness of it all, but the brief moment in Chapter 6 where he and Stella get stuck on his way to fight Blazing Fast is one of the very few times he's angry.



* MookHorrorShow: He might not look like it at first, but the guy can put on an eerie face himself despite not being a soul being.
* MusclesAreMeaningless: The guy normally looks very lanky (for humorous purposes, however, he'll sometimes appear very muscular; notably when he takes off a ''necklace'' and suddenly reveals much more muscle, where the text version says that the joke would be a lot funnier if it were visual).

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* MookHorrorShow: He might not look like it at first, but the guy can put on an eerie face himself despite not being a soul being.
being. This is first seen in Chapter 5 where he hunts down Cryipasto.
* MusclesAreMeaningless: The guy normally looks very lanky (for humorous purposes, however, he'll sometimes appear very muscular; notably when he takes off a ''necklace'' and suddenly reveals much more muscle, where the text version says that the joke would be a lot funnier if it were visual).visual), yet his strength is all-but explicitely called superhuman, and he can tank like nobody's business.



** Trying to put clothing on her is an extremely bad idea, to the point where even the Eighth Circle advizes the other 98 that she's ''especially'' happy to go around naked. Because unlike the other Demons/soul-beings, the Unitias are flat-out irritated by legitimate clothes. (They '''especially''' hate panties for whatever reason.) And they just love going around naked in general. She was fine with the press suddenly coming over to her Tomb over the year, but when the same person asks her to PleasePutSomeClothesOn twice, she yells at '''everybody''' (except Carlson) to GetOut.

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** Trying to put clothing on her (or ''any'' Unitia) is an extremely bad idea, to the point where even the Eighth Circle advizes the other 98 that she's ''especially'' happy to go around naked. Because unlike the other Demons/soul-beings, the Unitias are flat-out irritated by legitimate clothes. (They '''especially''' hate panties for whatever reason.reason; it comes as no surprise that the panty-obsessed Pantalite pisses them off just by hearing her name.) And they just love going around naked in general. She was fine with the press suddenly coming over to her Tomb over the year, but when the same person asks her to PleasePutSomeClothesOn twice, she yells at '''everybody''' (except Carlson) to GetOut.



** Interfering babies or children, ''especially'' if they're crying. Unitias One, Nine, Eleven, and Fourteen are ''not'' real child-people, in case their design being not suitable for minors (even if you have nudist opinions, they might also come off as "too scary" and their actions do have a layer of sexualization, so it's not just the nudity) was not a bit of a meta clue. The rest of the Unitias are ''relatively'' patient towards children but on a good day if a kid runs the risk of messing up a battle with a Unitia she'll just fast-open a portal and teleport them away. Wunhart is normally very adamant about pushing for everyone to try to be two-point-five kid, white picket fence nuclear families, but she knows that the Unitias' general dislike of even being around kids is not worth trying to talk her out of. Ironically, they tend to be pretty good therapists for crying ''adults.''



* RunningGag:
** Despite her intelligence, Origin (and seemingly ''only'' Origin) is bad at decision making. She claims that she has a "thing" where, once she picks something, she absolutely sticks with it and does not change her mind for any reason. Otherwise she'll spend even ''more'' time trying to chose. The beginning of Chapter 6 shows her at a store pondering what kind of sporting equipment to try out, and when she's "locked in" a choice Carlson brings up a third option and she goes back to sitting down looking back and forth at them.
** The favorite method of the Unitias in general but Origin/One specifically for killing enemies is to simply flick a finger at them, and either the finger itself or the shockwave from them makes them burst.



Antics involving Stella resulted in Carlson and the Unitias no longer being an independant anti-crime team that the mayor just showers with approval and love; they became an "official organization" overseen by the very prime minister of Canada himself.

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Antics involving Stella resulted in Carlson and the Unitias no longer being an independant anti-crime team that the mayor just showers with approval and love; they became an "official organization" overseen by the very prime minister Prime Minister of Canada himself.
himself. This all started with Stella, who is considered one of the "main characters" along with Carlson and Unitia One themselves. As for the rest of these Knights... not so much.

[[folder:"Side-Members" as a Whole]]

* ColorCodedCharacters: The "secondary eight" are each given distinct colors. When listing in the "Main Sixteen Unitias," there ''would'' be overlap, except these are two "different spectrums" according to WordOfGod. [[spoiler:Notice how these are the exact same colors as the Shiny Rocks, just in a different order. This is not a coincidence out-universe (it ''is'' one in-universe, though, which Stella lampshades); the story is leading up to them using the Rock of the respective color to gain/increase their powers and help fight the Eighth Circle.]]
** Stella: Black (she wears a bigger variety of colors than most other characters in this, but is usually seen with at least ''some'' black, or most often in just a black undershirt and nothing else. Her "default outfit" includes a gray shirt, which is significantly darker than Carlson's armor)
** Eldbrash: Blue
** Kameel: Purple
** Ruby: Red
** Leon: Yellow
** Hex: Green
** Transparaghost: Cyan
** Her Bone: Orange
* OvershadowedByAwesome: Sure, the "secondary eight" could make a pretty nice BadassCrew on their own... except that Carlson, as a parody of the trope, is leagues and bounds ahead of ''all'' of them. And then just ''one'' Unitia utterly outclasses them ''all.''

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[[folder:"Side-Members" as a Whole]]

* ColorCodedCharacters: The "main eight" are each given distinct colors. When listing in the "Main Sixteen Unitias," there ''would'' be overlap, except these are two "different spectrums" according to WordOfGod. [[spoiler:Notice how these are the exact same colors as the Shiny Rocks, just in a different order. This is not a coincidence out-universe (it ''is'' one in-universe, though, which Stella lampshades); the story is leading up to them using the Rock of the respective color to gain/increase their powers and help fight the Eighth Circle.]]
** Stella: Black (she wears a bigger variety of colors than most other characters in this, but is usually seen with at least ''some'' black, or most often in just a black undershirt and nothing else. Her "default outfit" includes a gray shirt, which is significantly darker than Carlson's armor)
** Eldbrash: Blue
** Kameel: Purple
** Ruby: Red
** Leon: Yellow
** Hex: Green
** Transparaghost: Cyan
** Her Bone: Orange
* OvershadowedByAwesome: Sure, the "main seven" (plus Stella, according to the official artwork) could make a pretty nice BadassCrew on their own... except that Carlson, as a parody of the trope, is leagues and bounds ahead of ''all'' of them. And then just ''one'' Unitia utterly outclasses them ''all.''

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A [[InsistentTerminology "chilled water"]] spirit first seen battling with Demon 11, Swinging Blade, after the latter infiltrates the area of the lake he's guarding.

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A [[InsistentTerminology "chilled water"]] spirit "Chilled Water"]] Guardian first seen battling with Demon 11, Swinging Blade, after the latter infiltrates the area of the lake he's guarding.
guarding to attack a random citizen.



* MakingASplash: He's a water spirit with water-based powers.
* {{Stripperiffic}}: His usual outfit consists of a bizarre complex of straps, but they just barely really cover him.

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* MakingASplash: He's a water spirit Chilled Water Guardian with water-based powers.
* RunningGag: In his introduction, every tiny thing Carlson and the Unitias do makes him feel like he owes his life to their combined group, which adds up to ''four'' "layers" of him owing the band. He will do four general requests provided by Carlson or the Unitias, and missions do not count. This annoys the hell out of most of the Unitias in general and Origin/One specifically, so she wants to blow them off on stupid things so that he won't feel in "debt" to her. In later chapters, she ends up making further actions that "adds" more "favors" back. [[spoiler:This comes to an end when Stella breaks off the Real Skies from the Stellar Silver Knights. Eldbrash tries to come up with a Loophole Abuse saying that he "owed" the ''Knights'', and that when Stella split she "took" the favors with her. Unitia One does not care at that point.]]
* {{Stripperiffic}}: His usual outfit consists of a bizarre complex of straps, straps made of ice [hang on I need to look back, maybe edit Chapter 3 if I forgot this when I wrote that], but they just barely really cover him.




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* KickChick: As it's in her "superheroine name."
* OvershadowedByAwesome: It's made more explicit with her than some of the others in how her skillset is close to being a ''direct,'' inferior version of the Unitias'.



* AwesomeButImpractical: Her Tele-Staff can break something even Carlson, a man with superhuman strength by default ''and'' a biological weakness to the soul beings, cannot. However, it takes three full days to charge. Unitia Two initially "shortens" it from 72 hours to 71, and later to a few seconds, but there's still a three-day wait between the first two times it's seen being used.




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* VerbalTic: She by far has the biggest stuttering problem out of anyone in the whole webnovel. But this fades considerably when she's being seductive.
* YouAreNumberSix: It's later revealed that she's part of a series, that are each named roughly after numeric prefixes. The fact that her name is also a play on "hex" like a spell ''and'' that she's the first and most important of that group seen is a coincidence in-universe.



* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Gets the distinction at first for being one of the few heroic/friendly characters that does ''not'' instantly hold Carlson as some sort of big hero, which he found a refreshing change of pace. Then Stella describes him by talking about how "atypical" he is compared to some other people. Stella describes him in a similar way a writer or reviewer would describe a character in a story.



[[folder:Tangersine [Might cut this character out completely, I can't think of anything to do with her becides mocking the "one member of the group is a kid" thing and Icesky and Tanker already do that in ''361 Striking Degrees'' and ''Steve Buhvillen's Intriguing Group'' respectively] ]]

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[[folder:Tangersine [Might cut this character out completely, I can't think of anything to do with her becides mocking the "one member of the group is a kid" thing and Icesky and Tanker already do that in ''361 Striking Degrees'' and ''Steve Buhvillen's Intriguing Group'' respectively] respectively, so it's just beating a dead horse. Fudge, Hex might even have her planned ability of shielding and stuff.] ]]



* AntiVillain: [[spoiler:Of the "Noble" type. In stark contrast to nearly all of the other Hundred Demons, he just sees the gang as casually displacing humanity to another part of the afterlife so that they can have an entire non-crowded planet to themselves. Even going by this logic, his actions are at absolute best a forceful eviction, but it's hard to deny that he genuinely cares about the wellbeing of the planet.]]



* BewareTheSillyOnes: [[spoiler:Oh holy ''fucking hell'', this guy when in his "human-size" and taken out of context does ''not'' seem even remotely threatening. He's polite (even to humans), goofy, says everything in a casual tone, and none of this is really an act. He's also extremely reluctant to harm the Unitias, as he dated Unitia One, she broke up with him over his want to wipe out humanity and take over the planet, yet his feelings for her get in the way of his combat. But there's a '''damn good reason''' why even the ''Unitias'' think he's nearly impossible to beat. He could wipe out entire planets with the blink of an eye if he wanted to (he does not destroy Earth because ''taking over the physical world itself'' is his goal, so that would ruin it), his default size is the size of Australia, and he has high regeneration on top of that.]]

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* BewareTheSillyOnes: [[spoiler:Oh holy ''fucking hell'', hell,'' this guy when in his "human-size" and taken out of context does ''not'' seem even remotely threatening. He's polite (even to humans), goofy, says everything in a casual tone, and none of this is really an act. He's also extremely reluctant to harm the Unitias, as he dated Unitia One, she broke up with him over his want to wipe out humanity and take over the planet, yet his feelings for her get in the way of his combat. But there's a '''damn good reason''' why even the ''Unitias'' think he's nearly impossible to beat. He could wipe out entire planets with the blink of an eye if he wanted to (he does not destroy Earth because ''taking over the physical world itself'' is his goal, so that would ruin it), his default size is the size of Australia, and he has high regeneration on top of that.]]



* BigRedDevil: His alternate appearance when he gets ''relatively'' serious.

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* BigRedDevil: His alternate appearance when default appearance. Out of the Hundred, he gets ''relatively'' serious.by ''far'' fits the closest description to a "Hollywood" portrayal of Satan, with the red skin, horns, tail, and even donning a pitchfork.



* ''i can't draw'': Has only eight party members, one of them is grabbed at the end of a long gauntlet intended to be faced lategame, and yet there is permadeath (in Hard Mode, at least) and even in Normal Mode there's a moment where you're given the choice to sacrifice either the "main" character or three helpful [=NPCs=].
* ''Omega'': Aims to have a stupididly high number of party members -- like, "60ish" total -- yet there is no permadeath. Party members are given to you left and right.

...Huh. It should be the other way around, where icd's party is permanent yet ''Omega'' goes full ''LISA'' and has "regular" enemies (well, more like minibosses and bosses) that can insta-kill the gang members.

.

Nah, because:
* It'll hit harder if there are fewer characters to begin with, and those are expendable.
* It's easier to code different conversations when you've only got a party of eight to worry about. I have a lot of conversations and try to give all possible-present members (excluding Margaret for the most part, as she's nearly silent, but even then she's the one character who absolutely can't be killed in Hard Mode) lines so that there's definitely more of a feeling when they die.
* icd is a "troll game" made to frustrate and shock, and not by difficulty (I generally want Normal Mode to not be challenging towards players unless they're taking a self-imposed challenge (like not using the specific types of "bombs" on the bosses, and Hanako ''explicitely'' tells you that Green Bufflao is weak to Burn Bombs, Yellow to Burr Bombs, and Red to Bzzt Bombs; you can find these for free in the respective area right before the boss if you're willing to fight the stronger enemies in each region) or doing ''really'' bad at the game; generally I don't want anybody who actually uses the "defense magic" equipment to even ''die'' until F.L.O.W.E.R. P.O.T., the ''fourth'' boss, and even that's just a slight step from "easy" to "medium"). ''Omega'' is just silliness, so killing off the party members won't really fit that. Remember that (as much as it doesn't feel like it) icd is the direct sequel to ''The Unviewable Panties of Ishiko-Chan'', where the entire US is taken over by an underground communist army and the president, who is basically Quimby from ''The Simpsons'', was dealing with viagra at the time. It's not meant to be something that even tries to be down-to-Earth and heartwarming. I wouldn't exactly call ''Omega Waifu Battle Simulator'' that either, but

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"Normal" fight with Ninjssassin: "Gray Clouds, Black Clouds"

Final fight with Ninjssassin: "Rain and Lightning."

* ''i can't draw'': Has WhatDoYouMeanItsNotPolitical:
** WordOfGod is that any possible allegory between the plan of the Hundred Demons and immigration (in regards to the United States or otherwise) is completely unintentional, and that "the Eighth Circle, Unitia One, and the other Hundred Demons are about as much of an immigration allegory as [[WesternAnimation/GravityFalls Bill Cipher and Weirdmageddon]] are," which is to say not much. They're simply literally eldritch forces that want to invade Earth, although Eighth Circle is considerably less evil and sadistic about it. Not even Eighthback's comments are meant to be a direct 1:1 message; the whole joke is that his "only one in one hundred are good" statistic regarding the Demons is ''literal,'' so Carlson finds it very hard to convince him that the Unitias are not like '''''literally''''' every other soul being that had successfully made it to Earth in the Tombs.
** The ImprobablyFemaleCast and the casual views on nudity are pure AuthorAppeal (Leon and Eldbrash
only eight party members, exist so that the Knights would not consist of ''only'' women; Fan says that fanservice involving men was to "make the story a tiny bit more even"), and neither is really some kind of commentary on gender roles or gender portrayal. The closest the story does to this is incredibly small, missable details that are not pointed out, like Unitia Origin being the one of them is grabbed at to propose to Carlson near the end of a long gauntlet intended to be faced lategame, and yet there is permadeath (in Hard Mode, at least) and even in Normal Mode there's a moment where you're given the choice to sacrifice either the "main" character or three helpful [=NPCs=].
* ''Omega'': Aims to have a stupididly high number
Chapter 1 instead of party members -- like, "60ish" total -- yet there is no permadeath. Party members are given to you left and right.

...Huh. It should be
the other way around, where icd's party is permanent yet ''Omega'' goes full ''LISA'' and has "regular" enemies (well, more like minibosses and bosses) that can insta-kill the gang members.

.

Nah, because:
* It'll hit harder if there are fewer characters to begin with, and those are expendable.
* It's easier to code different conversations when you've only got a party of eight to worry about. I have a lot of conversations and try to give all possible-present members (excluding Margaret for the most part, as she's nearly silent, but even then she's the one character who absolutely can't be killed in Hard Mode) lines so that there's definitely more of a feeling when they die.
* icd is a "troll game" made to frustrate and shock, and not by difficulty (I generally want Normal Mode to not be challenging
around. The story's harsh criticism towards players unless they're taking a self-imposed challenge (like not using the specific types of "bombs" on the bosses, gropers and Hanako ''explicitely'' tells you that Green Bufflao is weak to Burn Bombs, Yellow to Burr Bombs, and Red to Bzzt Bombs; you can find these for free in the respective area right before the boss if you're willing to fight the stronger enemies in each region) or doing sexual harassers just stemmed out of Great Pikmin Fan ''really'' bad at the game; generally I don't want anybody who actually uses the "defense magic" equipment to even ''die'' until F.L.O.W.E.R. P.O.T., the ''fourth'' boss, and even that's just hating it when a slight step from "easy" to "medium"). ''Omega'' is just silliness, so killing off the party members won't really fit that. Remember that (as much character's "perverted antics" are glorified or treated as it doesn't feel like it) icd is the direct sequel to ''The Unviewable Panties of Ishiko-Chan'', where the entire US is taken over by an underground communist army and the president, who is basically Quimby from ''The Simpsons'', was dealing with viagra at the time. It's not meant to be something that even tries to be down-to-Earth and heartwarming. I wouldn't exactly call a loveable character trait for any reason. Like Brooke in ''Omega Waifu Toonwife Battle Simulator'' that either, butSimulator'', the whole Inventor arc was one big TakeThat at various uses of BlackComedyRape where the offender is in any way meant to be "likeable."
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[[folder:Stella Fortyyismah]]

A woman working at Stelkazh, a Starbucks-like counterpart (only with ''considerably'' more features and bizarre rules), who ends up crossing paths with Carlson and Unitia Origin when a group of thugs serving the Gatherer attack her on a date. With her being impressed by the duo and, to a lesser extent, visa-versa, they somewhat team up and she volunteers to take down some of the Demons. After an attack by Tony the Bear while Carlson and the Unitias leave for a "possibly important, possibly nothing" mission, Stella gets the idea to make them an official group -- mainly after Mayor Green witnesses her battle with Tony the Bear and is impressed that other people do, in fact, stand a chance against the Demons. Of course, helping was that the gang also ended up partly "recruiting" the chilled water spirit Eldbrash.

* {{Acrofatic}}: She's a bit thicker than even her inspiration (possibly, it's hard to tell since ''Ordinarily United'' and ''Gravity Falls'' have drastically different art styles), but she's shown pulling off considerably more athletic feats. Her EstablishingCharacterMoment is her beating up three thugs in a fancy restaurant that's high above the city, and she's nearly thrown ''out'' of the tower-building but clings on and leaps back in.
* AesopAmnesia: Downplayed, as it's a deliberate plot element (that's mentioned a lot) that Stella forgets to ''make '''sure''''' that an enemy she attacks is dead. This happens three times before the third time is so consequential that she actually takes care to memorize it for future battles, making absolute certain that her target is dead. [[spoiler:Specifically, this happens to Tony the Bear after punting him across the street, [I need to think of another example], and Jiller just before the battle with the Gatherer.]]
* AmbiguouslyBrown: Like Carlson and her own inspiration, it's not exactly clear what race she is. Her last name is no help at all, as it's a completely made-up name that's just a play on "Fortissimo."
* AudienceSurrogate: According to Great Pikmin Fan, she's supposed to be the main way that exposition about the Unitias and even Carlson is given to the readers after the first chapter, as even Carlson -- the supposed "main lead" -- has a lot of elements shrouded in mystery. If Stella finds something out, the audience does too.
* BadassNormal: By far the most important (well, part of it was her being the first) of the Powerlesses that make up the Stellar Silver Knights. Her establishing character moment is her beating ''three'' thugs more-or-less by herself (Ritch was ''trying'' to help, but was very ineffectual) and only taking one punch in the battle.

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[[folder:Stella Fortyyismah]]

[[folder:The Grayscale Boomerang]]

Also called "Grayscale" for short.
A woman working at Stelkazh, a Starbucks-like counterpart (only with ''considerably'' more features mysterious object that Carlson ended up discovering halfway between his 14th and bizarre rules), who ends 15th birthdays (which is also around the time he started developing his ridiculous ''physical'' skills in addition to his ''mental'' skills). Specifically, it came from a glittering silver treasure chest that fell from the night sky. It can be controlled, but only by him, due to his "silver gene."

While not confirmed to be sapient, neither the story nor WordOfGod specifically rule out that it is. Whether or not the boomerang has a mind of its own is
up crossing paths with for the reader's interpretation.

[[/folder]]

[[folder:Unitia Origin/Unitia One (and the species in general)]]

The Unitias are a species of soul being that initially started out as just a "Generator" (a strange stone-like block item, although the material it is made out of is apparently not even ''close'' to stone) and Unitia Origin, one humanoid. After being given physical form, the Generator gained the ability to just create additional Unitias out of nothing. It does so at a slowly expanding exponential rate; every day, the number of Unitias double.

Unitia Origin (or "Unitia One," as most of the other Unitias call her and is technically her "more accurate name") was the first Demon Carlson tried to take down, and the only one he encountered while the rest of the Hundred were in their "Hibernation." However, he found that unlike the rumors of the other Demons in the future (most of which was information from Origin herself), the one he found felt no need to immediately attack him. After a bit of an average start and through knowing each-other from a lot of training,
Carlson and Unitia Origin when a group of thugs serving the Gatherer attack her on a date. With her being impressed by the duo and, to a lesser extent, visa-versa, they somewhat team up and she volunteers to take down some of the Demons. After an attack by Tony the Bear while Carlson and the Unitias leave for a "possibly important, possibly nothing" mission, Stella gets the idea to make them an official group -- mainly after Mayor Green witnesses her battle with Tony the Bear and is impressed that other people do, in fact, stand a chance against the Demons. Of course, helping was that the gang also ended up partly "recruiting" the chilled water spirit Eldbrash.

* {{Acrofatic}}: She's a bit thicker than even her inspiration (possibly, it's hard to tell since ''Ordinarily United''
falling in love and ''Gravity Falls'' have drastically different art styles), but entered a heavy relationship.

However, shortly after Hibernation's end, all was not as it seemed. Unitia Origin has a number of past demons haunting her

* TheAce: Where Carlson excells in more "mundane" skills,
she's shown pulling off considerably more athletic feats. Her EstablishingCharacterMoment is great even by the already high soul being standards. [...]It says a lot in that the threat of something bad happening to her beating up three thugs in a fancy restaurant is so low that WordOfGod outright confirmed early on that she will not die, although that's high above mostly because of his distaste towards killing off a love interest for the city, purpose of furthering the main characters' growth. And his unwillingness to kill off his AuthorAppeal characters in general.
* TheAtoner: [[spoiler:The whole reason why she even agreed to go on the mission to Earth was to try to make amends for her actions in the Parallel. She apologizes a lot, but Carlson -- the only human she confessed to -- doesn't see the big deal as long as she's honest about her new life on Earth.]] [EDIT: Nah. Also, shoot, I found the old name I placed for the Soul World! The Parallel! And... now I'm not sure which one I like better. Could both be used names, and the Parallel is the "official" name for the entire universe?] [EDIT AGAIN: Double nah? The first "nah" was that she didn't even do anything evil to get accepted under a lie or whatever, Eighth Circle just saw her name
and she's nearly thrown ''out'' of famous for being OP so he instantly hired her. But then I have the tower-building but clings on thought of her doing some mildly bad crap in the past...]
* AuthorAppeal: A lot of her design is this. Part of it also comes from gleefully inverting or twisting what's normally considered "hot," '''especially''' in the moe sense. Want a short, flat-chested schoolgirl who is helpless
and leaps back in.
* AesopAmnesia: Downplayed, as it's
in need of protection? ''Nah,'' have a deliberate plot element (that's mentioned a lot) tall, oversize-breasted, sharp-tooth warrior who is clearly beyond college and can not only protect herself (hell, at one point she gets "kidnapped" on purpose just to hack in to the demon's computer, she breaks out and proceeds to annoy him to much by eating his food and the like that Stella forgets to ''make '''sure''''' that an enemy she attacks is dead. This happens three times before the third time is so consequential that she he actually takes care tries to memorize it for future battles, making absolute certain kick her ''out''), but also has a design that her target is dead. [[spoiler:Specifically, this happens to Tony the Bear after punting him across the street, [I need to says "kidnapper" more than "kidnappie." Oh, you think of another example], she's naked because she was forced that way and Jiller just before the battle with main character's going to be nice and put clothes on her? '''Fuck no.''' She's naked because she ''likes'' being naked, wants to stay that way, and ''will'' stay that way for the Gatherer.''entire story.''
* BadassArmfold: The Unitias do one-armed variants, as their other arms are usually used to cover their crotches. [[spoiler:The "badass" is amplified when Unitia One has her "realization" and comes back to finish off Wunhart, and does the first-ever ''two-armed armfold'' by any Unitia.
]]
* AmbiguouslyBrown: Like Carlson BarbieDollAnatomy: The Unitias are nipple-less in the aplty-titled "Nippleless Version" (it and her own inspiration, it's not exactly clear what race she is. Her last name is no help at all, as it's a completely made-up name that's the uncensored version are both equally free -- the former just a play on "Fortissimo."
* AudienceSurrogate: According
exists if one wants to Great Pikmin Fan, she's supposed to be read it around "a relatively larger group of people") and in "general concept art" for certain websites. So are ''everyone'', including the main way that exposition about men, but the Unitias and even Carlson is given to stick out as they are constantly naked all the readers after the first chapter, as even Carlson -- the supposed "main lead" -- has a lot of elements shrouded in mystery. If Stella finds something out, the audience does too.
time.
* BadassNormal: By far BattleHarem: The Unitias are all completely nude women who are often screwing Carlson, ''and'' they are easily among the most important (well, part of it was her being the first) of the Powerlesses that make up the Stellar Silver Knights. Her establishing character moment is her beating ''three'' thugs more-or-less by herself (Ritch was ''trying'' to help, but was very ineffectual) and only taking one punch powerful characters in the battle.entire story.



** If you value your life, do ''not'' harm her PornStash. Seriously, it's something she values over her own house. Or car.
** She's also not very fond of lag. While most people don't like it, it's noteworthy for Stella because it's a way to make her outright fume. Which isn't common for her.
--->'''Stella:''' DAMMIT YOUTUBE, I CLICKED THREE TIMES AND YOU STILL WON'T PAUSE! DO YOU NOT KNOW WHAT THE FUCKING PAUSE BUTTON IS?!\\
'''Stella:''' N- NO! I DID ''NOT'' WANT TO GO FULL SCREEN, DAMMIT! I WANT YOU TO PAUSE! ''PAUSE!''\\
'''Stella:''' Argh, fuck, the video's over, and now it's about to auto-play something. I clicked to turn the damn auto-play off, but you have to fucking wait for that or else it will come back on. Come on, don't load, don't load-\\
'''Stella:''' Oh, and it's another shitty top ten video. Now I need to nuke my cookies or I'll have thousands of recommendations for top tens.\\
'''Stella:''' And ''now'' the goddamn thing pauses!
** She ''really'' doesn't like people who are smug about being vegan/vegetarian, partly because her parents were extremely nature-concious and tried raising her with a vegetable, grain, and on the rare occasion fruit-based diet. Once she moved out and had her first bite of pizza, she never looked back, and does ''not'' want people to try to convince her that switching back is "the right thing."
* BewareTheSillyOnes: When up with a six-foot-something literal knight in shining armor and an army of huge women that can make stuff out of nothing, Stella might ''seem'' downright pathetic compared to them. But she ''starts out'' as one of the biggest powerless badasses in the entire story and just grows from there, eventually managing to impress even [[TestosteronePoisoning the Prime Minister.]] She even lampshades this during her fight with Scale Breath, where she sees her reflection in one of the Demon's claws, and takes a moment to awe at how she was the exact same person that was "just" fighting three thugs at a fancy restaurant that was clear across the world (Stella, by the beginning, was also not much of a traveler).
* BigBeautifulWoman: Yeah, she's heavier than the norm. But the story treats her as roughly as fanservice-y as any of the other heroes (including the "more conventionally attractive" Her Bone and Transparaghost, the slim Ruby and Carlson, the buff Eldbrash and Kameel, the downright lanky Hex and Leon -- Leon himself was at one point either going to be muscular like Eldbrash ended up being or fat on the lines of Stella, and the blatantly exaggerated proportions of the Unitias). In fact, she's the number one source of chubby fanservice in ''Ordinarily'' and [[HotterAndSexier especially]] ''Extraordinarily United''.
* EmpoweredBadassNormal: [[spoiler:In the finale, she uses the Black Shiny Rock to power up, along with the other "Main Eight" non-Carlson/Unitia Knights using a respective Rock that corresponds to their color-coding to work.]]
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: She's on a date with this nervous-looking guy when three large, ''[[ChekhovsGunman seemingly]]'' random thugs approach them, grabbing her by the StandardFemaleGrabArea. Her date tries to fight them back, but can't even get them to move. Stella barely seems concerned, similar to how Carlson barely cares about the Demons he's fighting. Suddenly, Stella breaks from the hold, kicks all three of their asses one-on-three with her batons, and even tries to sneak in a movie reference -- the only time she gets hit is when she tries to be smart and insert a pop-culture joke mid-fight.
* FromNobodyToNightmare: By the beginning of the story, she's still a badass, yet she's ultimately "just" a coffee place worker that occasionally jogs, trains for combat, and can beat up a few thugs if things get heated. By the end, she's the leader of her own heroic organization, has a number of hard-hitting tools with her, and is the ''only'' completely powerless human being who has taken Carlson on in a fight ''and won.'' And keep in mind that even powerful monsters from the afterlife have lost to him.]] It reaches the point where Ninjssassin originally thinks that she's the joke of the team and the utmost weakest link; towards the Beam Duo Invasion arc, however, she starts treating Stella above the likes of even the Supers, and considers her a Carlson-level threat.
* LargeHam: The hammiest of the main trio/four. Compared to Carlson, that's an easy feat, but compared to Origin and Two, it isn't.
* OffscreenTeleportation: Subverted. She ''seems'' to do this, suddenly showing up from point A to point B, but in the [[RuleOfThree three]] times it's happened, she always has an explanation/established shortcut as to how she got there so fast.
* PlatonicLifePartners: With Carlson, although she does think he's attractive (but she likes the Unitias ''way'' more, which is implied by how much more often she gushes over them, and outright confirmed by WordOfGod). Him, not as much conciously. Subconciously, [[spoiler:he ends up having erotic dreams about her later on -- and he has erotic dreams about ''all'' of the other Knights.]]
* PunnyName: Her surname is a corruption of "Fortissimo," and WordOfGod is that the music term doesn't really mean anything other than to reference [[WesternAnimation/GravityFalls the character]] she was ''originally'' based on. And that she can be [[LargeHam pretty loud]] some times.
* ShamelessFanserviceGirl: She doesn't see anything wrong with walking around in thin, tight, nearly see-through (and she has some pairs that ''are'') yoga pants with no underwear. Or just hanging out naked if it's hot enough. She barely knows Carlson for a day yet goes around him completely nude. In her defense, she cites the Unitias walking around naked, Carlson ''also'' being naked at the time, and that they were planning on giving the house away to her anyway since her house was burned down by Swinging Blade.
* ShooOutTheClowns: Stella plays with this trope a lot.
** In Chapter 5, Stella and the other non-harem Knights are sent on a mission while Carlson and the Unitias sit back and try to watch a ''Wavette'' marathon. Cryipasto attempts to invoke this, by saying that the gang doesn't have "that funny lil' Stella" to help tone down the "horror," and thus his scares would hit Carlson and Origin even harder. This turns out to be bullshit, as Carlson isn't scared in the slightest. Hell, he's enraged that he missed his favorite show and will have to ArchiveBinge it thanks to its status as something gigantic.
** Near the end of the Fuck the Jungle Arc, Stella's still in the picture, but [[spoiler:she permanently leaves the group and takes out the comic relief-y other members of the Knights, who call themselves the Real Skies afterward. Carlson and the Unitias have to face characters like the Gatherer and Flower's Chest by themselves, not to mention the ongoing plot of him struggling to stay "supported" by the country when there are more heroes on the rise. Fan says that with there being less members of the Stellar Silver Knights proper, it's supposed to feel like the harem has less of a "security net." Stella accurately sums it up in her last words towards the team before she leaves and takes the bulk of the party with her:]]
--->'''Stella:''' [[spoiler:You're on your own.]]
* SirSwearsALot: She cusses more than any other major character in the story. And casually peppers some of her lines with swears, too.
* StartMyOwn: [[spoiler:Annoyed that Unitia Origin lashed out revealing that she never ''actually'' saw her as a friend or even liked her, she took the other Knights not involved with the harem and split off to form the Real Skies.]]
* TenMinuteRetirement: [[spoiler:Near the end of the time the team spent in Cooper Domain, she gets utterly fed up with Carlson and his "harem" after an increasingly heated argument with Unitia One. She technically quits and takes ''every'' non-Carlson and non-Unitia member with her; but it's really more like she kicks Carlson and the Unitias out. She just makes her own group under a new name because she thinks that Stellar Silver Knights fits ''them'' better than her. The trope is ultimately subverted after the Scale Breath fight. Even after she and Carlson "make up" from their fight, she still thinks that it's better for everyone if they stay as two seperate hero groups.]]
* TheThingThatWouldNotLeave: She slowly became this in Chapter 2 to Unitia Origin after "staying over" for several days in a row despite having her own perfectly good house that, if anything, is ''better'' than Carlson's house at the time (later in the story, Carlson practically gets his own castle, so that does not apply anymore). Although it ''was'' justified at first in that Swinging Blade burnt down her old house, within less than a day her insurance company managed to get her a new, even ''fancier'' house. Origin is the first to get fed up with her despite being the one who gave Stella her number and the way to get to the house in the first place. Carlson later minds her after she starts prodding at his and the Unitias' sex life and delving a bit too personally. Near the end of the chapter, especially after the events of Chapter 3 where the Unitias just flat-out make their own home that grows in to a colossal galaxy-city, they both lighten up towards her once she promises not to stay over excessively. Origin described Stella's problem as "being everywhere."
-->'''Unitia Origin:''' [This is probably not how the actual quote goes, unless I copy-pasted it without remembering.] I don't know how she does it exactly, but it feels like she's everywhere I look! Whatever room I enter or hallway I walk down... half the time, Stella's right there! Chewing something loudly, playing music loudly, playing video games loudly... I know we all do that, but this is ''our place''. Stella's the ''guest'',
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Pizza, and she loves lemonade. This is to highlight her borderline womanchild nature, and like her inspiration, she hates her adult responsibilities. She notably also hates coffee ''because'' it reminds her of her "boring" job.
* VaporWear: As with almost every other major heroic character, she rarely wears undergarments, and sometimes wears see-through clothes (albeit through being worn down, rather than an intentional design choice -- she just picks what's comfortable and hates shopping for new clothes) that make this painfully obvious.

[[/folder]]

[[folder:The Grayscale Boomerang]]

Also called "Grayscale" for short. A mysterious object that Carlson ended up discovering halfway between his 14th and 15th birthdays (which is also around the time he started developing his ridiculous ''physical'' skills in addition to his ''mental'' skills). Specifically, it came from a glittering silver treasure chest that fell from the night sky. It can be controlled, but only by him, due to his "silver gene."

While not confirmed to be sapient, neither the story nor WordOfGod specifically rule out that it is. Whether or not the boomerang has a mind of its own is up for the reader's interpretation.

[[/folder]]

!! Stellar Silver Knights, Unitias

A species of soul being that initially started out as just a "Generator" (a strange stone-like block item, although the material it is made out of is apparently not even ''close'' to stone) and Unitia Origin, one humanoid. After being given physical form, the Generator gained the ability to just create additional Unitias out of nothing. It does so at a slowly expanding exponential rate; every day, the number of Unitias double.

[[folder:Unitia Origin/Unitia One (and the species in general)]]

The first Demon Carlson tried to take down; while the 100 were in their "Hibernation." However, he found that unlike the rumors of the other Demons in the future (most of which was information from Origin herself), the one he found felt no need to immediately attack him. He was faced with Unitia Origin -- a being who can create other, similar humanoids as herself with a strange object that she calls the "Generator," as explained above. Carlson and Unitia Origin ended up falling in love after several days of her explaining the basics about the Hundred Demons to him

* TheAce: Where Carlson excells in more "mundane" skills, she's great even by the already high soul being standards. [...]It says a lot in that the threat of something bad happening to her is so low that WordOfGod outright confirmed early on that she will not die, although that's mostly because of his distaste towards killing off a love interest for the purpose of furthering the main characters' growth. And his unwillingness to kill off his AuthorAppeal characters in general.
* TheAtoner: [[spoiler:The whole reason why she even agreed to go on the mission to Earth was to try to make amends for her actions in the Parallel. She apologizes a lot, but Carlson -- the only human she confessed to -- doesn't see the big deal as long as she's honest about her new life on Earth.]] [EDIT: Nah. Also, shoot, I found the old name I placed for the Soul World! The Parallel! And... now I'm not sure which one I like better. Could both be used names, and the Parallel is the "official" name for the entire universe?] [EDIT AGAIN: Double nah? The first "nah" was that she didn't even do anything evil to get accepted under a lie or whatever, Eighth Circle just saw her name and she's famous for being OP so he instantly hired her. But then I have the thought of her doing some mildly bad crap in the past...]
* AuthorAppeal: A lot of her design is this. Part of it also comes from gleefully inverting or twisting what's normally considered "hot," '''especially''' in the moe sense. Want a short, flat-chested schoolgirl who is helpless and in need of protection? ''Nah,'' have a tall, oversize-breasted, sharp-tooth warrior who is clearly beyond college and can not only protect herself (hell, at one point she gets "kidnapped" on purpose just to hack in to the demon's computer, she breaks out and proceeds to annoy him to much by eating his food and the like that he actually tries to kick her ''out''), but also has a design that says "kidnapper" more than "kidnappie." Oh, you think she's naked because she was forced that way and the main character's going to be nice and put clothes on her? '''Fuck no.''' She's naked because she ''likes'' being naked, wants to stay that way, and ''will'' stay that way for the ''entire story.''
* BarbieDollAnatomy: The Unitias are nipple-less in the aplty-titled "Nippleless Version" (it and the uncensored version are both equally free -- the former just exists if one wants to read it around "a relatively larger group of people") and in "general concept art" for certain websites. So are ''everyone'', including the men, but the Unitias stick out as they are constantly naked all the time.
* BattleHarem: The Unitias are all completely nude women who are often screwing Carlson, ''and'' they are easily among the most powerful characters in the entire story.
* BerserkButton:



* CatchPhrase:
** She has a fondness for specifically introducing herself with "Oh, hi there!" as those were [=.GIFfany=]'s first on-screen words. [[spoiler:The Eighth Circle says this often too, and it's heavily implied and later confirmed that he got that from her. Along with a lot of other things.]]
** Variants of both "You'll get used to it" and "Those are ''terrible people,''" which border on ArcWords moreso starting around the third arc.



* FullFrontalAssault: Listed seperately from the other Demons/soul beings because she and the other Unitias are '''''ALWAYS''''' naked, apart from a brief flashback where Origin tried out clothes before finding out that she hated them. Several of the Demons have very non-humanoid bodies and some of them are blatant examples of NonhumansLackAttributes; the Unitias are exceptions to both. Even on top of ''that,'' they still technically "wear" a single finger (or sometimes two, or under stress/quick-reaction a whole hand) over their crotches when it's not just them and Carlson, so you know shit's about to get real when [[spoiler:one of them -- initially seen with Unitia One, fighting Wunhart -- instead ''crosses both arms and fully exposes her crotch,'' shit is about to get '''real.''']]



* HandOrObjectUnderwear: The closest thing she and the other Unitias have to an "outfit" is keeping a single finger right over their vulvas. In their male form, they have to cup most of a hand around their penises. This is how the comic version shows them regularly, as the comic does not (directly) depict genitals despite showing ''everything'' else. When they need both hands for something, SceneryCensor comes in to play.

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* HandOrObjectUnderwear: The closest thing she and the other Unitias have to an "outfit" is keeping a single finger right over their vulvas. In their male form, they have to cup most of a hand around their penises. This is how the comic version shows them regularly, as the comic does not (directly) depict genitals despite showing ''everything'' else. When they need both hands for something, SceneryCensor comes in to play. [[spoiler:Or, in the first case where Unitia One does a ''full'' Badass Armfold after declaring her past as "Unitia Origin" was dead, she gets a ''gigantic'' Lens-Flare Censor]].
* HesBack: [[spoiler:She goes through a one-and-three-fourths chapter long depression in the second half of the Fuck the Jungle Arc. She leaves Carlson because she feels that she just spent her recent life running away from her problems and took poor-to-no steps in actually improving herself, and does not want to leave a bad impersonation ]]



[[folder:Stella Fortyyismah]]

A woman working at Stelkazh, a Starbucks-like counterpart (only with ''considerably'' more features and bizarre rules), who ends up crossing paths with Carlson and Unitia Origin when a group of thugs serving the Gatherer attack her on a date. With her being impressed by the duo and, to a lesser extent, visa-versa, they somewhat team up and she volunteers to take down some of the Demons. After an attack by Tony the Bear while Carlson and the Unitias leave for a "possibly important, possibly nothing" mission, Stella gets the idea to make them an official group -- mainly after Mayor Green witnesses her battle with Tony the Bear and is impressed that other people do, in fact, stand a chance against the Demons. Of course, helping was that the gang also ended up partly "recruiting" the chilled water spirit Eldbrash.

* {{Acrofatic}}: She's a bit thicker than even her inspiration (possibly, it's hard to tell since ''Ordinarily United'' and ''Gravity Falls'' have drastically different art styles), but she's shown pulling off considerably more athletic feats. Her EstablishingCharacterMoment is her beating up three thugs in a fancy restaurant that's high above the city, and she's nearly thrown ''out'' of the tower-building but clings on and leaps back in.
* AesopAmnesia: Downplayed, as it's a deliberate plot element (that's mentioned a lot) that Stella forgets to ''make '''sure''''' that an enemy she attacks is dead. This happens three times before the third time is so consequential that she actually takes care to memorize it for future battles, making absolute certain that her target is dead. [[spoiler:Specifically, this happens to Tony the Bear after punting him across the street, [I need to think of another example], and Jiller just before the battle with the Gatherer.]]
* AmbiguouslyBrown: Like Carlson and her own inspiration, it's not exactly clear what race she is. Her last name is no help at all, as it's a completely made-up name that's just a play on "Fortissimo."
* AudienceSurrogate: According to Great Pikmin Fan, she's supposed to be the main way that exposition about the Unitias and even Carlson is given to the readers after the first chapter, as even Carlson -- the supposed "main lead" -- has a lot of elements shrouded in mystery. If Stella finds something out, the audience does too.
* BadassNormal: By far the most important (well, part of it was her being the first) of the Powerlesses that make up the Stellar Silver Knights. Her establishing character moment is her beating ''three'' thugs more-or-less by herself (Ritch was ''trying'' to help, but was very ineffectual) and only taking one punch in the battle.
* BerserkButton:
** If you value your life, do ''not'' harm her PornStash. Seriously, it's something she values over her own house. Or car.
** She's also not very fond of lag. While most people don't like it, it's noteworthy for Stella because it's a way to make her outright fume. Which isn't common for her.
--->'''Stella:''' DAMMIT YOUTUBE, I CLICKED THREE TIMES AND YOU STILL WON'T PAUSE! DO YOU NOT KNOW WHAT THE FUCKING PAUSE BUTTON IS?!\\
'''Stella:''' N- NO! I DID ''NOT'' WANT TO GO FULL SCREEN, DAMMIT! I WANT YOU TO PAUSE! ''PAUSE!''\\
'''Stella:''' Argh, fuck, the video's over, and now it's about to auto-play something. I clicked to turn the damn auto-play off, but you have to fucking wait for that or else it will come back on. Come on, don't load, don't load-\\
'''Stella:''' Oh, and it's another shitty top ten video. Now I need to nuke my cookies or I'll have thousands of recommendations for top tens.\\
'''Stella:''' And ''now'' the goddamn thing pauses!
** She ''really'' doesn't like people who are smug about being vegan/vegetarian, partly because her parents were extremely nature-concious and tried raising her with a vegetable, grain, and on the rare occasion fruit-based diet. Once she moved out and had her first bite of pizza, she never looked back, and does ''not'' want people to try to convince her that switching back is "the right thing."
* BewareTheSillyOnes: When up with a six-foot-something literal knight in shining armor and an army of huge women that can make stuff out of nothing, Stella might ''seem'' downright pathetic compared to them. But she ''starts out'' as one of the biggest powerless badasses in the entire story and just grows from there, eventually managing to impress even [[TestosteronePoisoning the Prime Minister.]] She even lampshades this during her fight with Scale Breath, where she sees her reflection in one of the Demon's claws, and takes a moment to awe at how she was the exact same person that was "just" fighting three thugs at a fancy restaurant that was clear across the world (Stella, by the beginning, was also not much of a traveler).
* BigBeautifulWoman: Yeah, she's heavier than the norm. But the story treats her as roughly as fanservice-y as any of the other heroes (including the "more conventionally attractive" Her Bone and Transparaghost, the slim Ruby and Carlson, the buff Eldbrash and Kameel, the downright lanky Hex and Leon -- Leon himself was at one point either going to be muscular like Eldbrash ended up being or fat on the lines of Stella, and the blatantly exaggerated proportions of the Unitias). In fact, she's the number one source of chubby fanservice in ''Ordinarily'' and [[HotterAndSexier especially]] ''Extraordinarily United''.
* EmpoweredBadassNormal: [[spoiler:In the finale, she uses the Black Shiny Rock to power up, along with the other "Main Eight" non-Carlson/Unitia Knights using a respective Rock that corresponds to their color-coding to work.]]
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: She's on a date with this nervous-looking guy when three large, ''[[ChekhovsGunman seemingly]]'' random thugs approach them, grabbing her by the StandardFemaleGrabArea. Her date tries to fight them back, but can't even get them to move. Stella barely seems concerned, similar to how Carlson barely cares about the Demons he's fighting. Suddenly, Stella breaks from the hold, kicks all three of their asses one-on-three with her batons, and even tries to sneak in a movie reference -- the only time she gets hit is when she tries to be smart and insert a pop-culture joke mid-fight.
* EvilCostumeSwitch: [[spoiler:Subverted. While she ''does'' swap to a more meanacing-looking costume when she and the other "Background Knights" become the Real Skies (complete with spikes), she's not evil or brainwashed. She does, however, take Carlson on in a fight to try to prove a point with Unitia One.]]
* FromNobodyToNightmare: By the beginning of the story, she's still a badass, yet she's ultimately "just" a coffee place worker that occasionally jogs, trains for combat, and can beat up a few thugs if things get heated. By the end, she's the leader of her own heroic organization, has a number of hard-hitting tools with her, and is the ''only'' completely powerless human being who has taken Carlson on in a fight ''and won.'' And keep in mind that even powerful monsters from the afterlife have lost to him.]] It reaches the point where Ninjssassin originally thinks that she's the joke of the team and the utmost weakest link; towards the Beam Duo Invasion arc, however, she starts treating Stella above the likes of even the Supers, and considers her a Carlson-level threat.
* LargeHam: The hammiest of the main trio/four. Compared to Carlson, that's an easy feat, but compared to Origin and Two, it isn't.
* OffscreenTeleportation: Subverted in Chapater 2. She ''seems'' to do this, suddenly showing up from point A to point B, but in the [[RuleOfThree three]] times it's happened, she always has an explanation/established shortcut as to how she got there so fast.
* PlatonicLifePartners: With Carlson, although she does think he's attractive (but she likes the Unitias ''way'' more, which is implied by how much more often she gushes over them, and outright confirmed by WordOfGod). Him, not as much conciously. Subconciously, [[spoiler:he ends up having erotic dreams about her later on -- and he has erotic dreams about ''all'' of the other Knights.]]
* PunnyName: Her surname is a corruption of "Fortissimo," and WordOfGod is that the music term doesn't really mean anything other than to reference [[WesternAnimation/GravityFalls the character]] she was ''originally'' based on. And that she can be [[LargeHam pretty loud]] some times.
* ShamelessFanserviceGirl: She doesn't see anything wrong with walking around in thin, tight, nearly see-through (and she has some pairs that ''are'') yoga pants with no underwear. Or just hanging out naked if it's hot enough. She barely knows Carlson for a day yet goes around him completely nude. In her defense, she cites the Unitias walking around naked, Carlson ''also'' being naked at the time, and that they were planning on giving the house away to her anyway since her house was burned down by Swinging Blade.
* ShooOutTheClowns: Stella plays with this trope a lot.
** In Chapter 5, Stella and the other non-harem Knights are sent on a mission while Carlson and the Unitias sit back and try to watch a ''Wavette'' marathon. Cryipasto attempts to invoke this, by saying that the gang doesn't have "that funny lil' Stella" to help tone down the "horror," and thus his scares would hit Carlson and Origin even harder. This turns out to be bullshit, as Carlson isn't scared in the slightest. Hell, he's enraged that he missed his favorite show and will have to ArchiveBinge it thanks to its status as something gigantic.
** Near the end of the Fuck the Jungle Arc, Stella's still in the picture, but [[spoiler:she permanently leaves the group and takes out the comic relief-y other members of the Knights, who call themselves the Real Skies afterward. Carlson and the Unitias have to face characters like the Gatherer and Flower's Chest by themselves, not to mention the ongoing plot of him struggling to stay "supported" by the country when there are more heroes on the rise. Fan says that with there being less members of the Stellar Silver Knights proper, it's supposed to feel like the harem has less of a "security net." Stella accurately sums it up in her last words towards the team before she leaves and takes the bulk of the party with her:]]
--->'''Stella:''' [[spoiler:You're on your own.]]
* SirSwearsALot: She cusses more than any other major character in the story. And casually peppers some of her lines with swears, too.
* StartMyOwn: [[spoiler:Annoyed that Unitia Origin lashed out revealing that she never ''actually'' saw her as a friend or even liked her, she took the other Knights not involved with the harem and split off to form the Real Skies.]]
* TenMinuteRetirement: [[spoiler:Near the end of the time the team spent in Cooper Domain, she gets utterly fed up with Carlson and his "harem" after an increasingly heated argument with Unitia One. She technically quits and takes ''every'' non-Carlson and non-Unitia member with her; but it's really more like she kicks Carlson and the Unitias out. She just makes her own group under a new name because she thinks that Stellar Silver Knights fits ''them'' better than her. The trope is ultimately subverted after the Scale Breath fight. Even after she and Carlson "make up" from their fight, she still thinks that it's better for everyone if they stay as two seperate hero groups.]]
* TheThingThatWouldNotLeave: She slowly became this in Chapter 2 to Unitia Origin after "staying over" for several days in a row despite having her own perfectly good house that, if anything, is ''better'' than Carlson's house at the time (later in the story, Carlson practically gets his own castle, so that does not apply anymore). Although it ''was'' justified at first in that Swinging Blade burnt down her old house, within less than a day her insurance company managed to get her a new, even ''fancier'' house. Origin is the first to get fed up with her despite being the one who gave Stella her number and the way to get to the house in the first place. Carlson later minds her after she starts prodding at his and the Unitias' sex life and delving a bit too personally. Near the end of the chapter, especially after the events of Chapter 3 where the Unitias just flat-out make their own home that grows in to a colossal galaxy-city, they both lighten up towards her once she promises not to stay over excessively. Origin described Stella's problem as "being everywhere."
-->'''Unitia Origin:''' [This is probably not how the actual quote goes, unless I copy-pasted it without remembering.] I don't know how she does it exactly, but it feels like she's everywhere I look! Whatever room I enter or hallway I walk down... half the time, Stella's right there! Chewing something loudly, playing music loudly, playing video games loudly... I know we all do that, but this is ''our place''. Stella's the ''guest'',
* TookALevelInBadass: She was already pretty tough considering that the first thing she's seen doing is winning in a battle against three thugs who turn out to be magic criminals, and considering what one of her ex-lovers was like, but she could still be overpowered by a motorcycle-soul being. Towards the end of the story, she [[spoiler:effortlessly takes down a ''dragon'' and manages to give ''Carlson'' a decent fight '''without''' a Shiny Rock. And then she whips out ''four'' of them on his ass.]]
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Pizza, and she loves lemonade. This is to highlight her borderline womanchild nature, and like her inspiration, she hates her adult responsibilities. She notably also hates coffee ''because'' it reminds her of her "boring" job.
* VaporWear: As with almost every other major heroic character, she rarely wears undergarments (most of the others have ''plainly visible'' undergarments, but she's one of the former), and sometimes wears see-through clothes (albeit through being worn down, rather than an intentional design choice -- she just picks what's comfortable and hates shopping for new clothes) that make this painfully obvious.

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* ColorCodedCharacters: Including Stella, they are each given distinct colors. When listing in the "Main Sixteen Unitias," there ''would'' be overlap, except these are two "different spectrums" according to WordOfGod. [[spoiler:Notice how these are the exact same colors as the Shiny Rocks, just in a different order. This is not a coincidence out-universe (it ''is'' one in-universe, though, which Stella lampshades); the story is leading up to them using the Rock of the respective color to gain/increase their powers and help fight the Eighth Circle.]]

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* ColorCodedCharacters: Including Stella, they The "main eight" are each given distinct colors. When listing in the "Main Sixteen Unitias," there ''would'' be overlap, except these are two "different spectrums" according to WordOfGod. [[spoiler:Notice how these are the exact same colors as the Shiny Rocks, just in a different order. This is not a coincidence out-universe (it ''is'' one in-universe, though, which Stella lampshades); the story is leading up to them using the Rock of the respective color to gain/increase their powers and help fight the Eighth Circle.]]



A "dimensional caster" that doesn't really have much an idea of ''what'' she's doing. She kind of wandered in to Carlson's place by accident.

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A "dimensional caster" former AI progran experiment that doesn't really have much an idea of ''what'' she's doing. She kind of wandered in to Carlson's place by accident.




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* {{Stripperiffic}}: The most she ever wears in the story is a pair of thin diamond-shaped pasties on her breasts and one over her crotch. And even then, she takes those off often.



* FullFrontalAssault: '''Inverted.''' The fact that he's one of the very few soul beings as a whole, let alone of the Hundred Demons specifically, that is willing to wear clothes "regularly" in the first place should feel jarring and alarming at first. Especially since it's not a "gag" outfit such as Res's wizard costume or PETAL SQUAD FORCE's over-the-top Super Sentai/Mario blends. Before his battle, he puts ''on'' a cloak that covers his entire body, and looks a hell of a lot more ominous than being a naked fat man.

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* FullFrontalAssault: '''Inverted.''' The fact that he's one of the very few soul beings as a whole, let alone of the Hundred Demons specifically, that is willing to wear clothes "regularly" in the first place should feel jarring and alarming at first. Especially since it's not a "gag" outfit such as Res's wizard costume or PETAL SQUAD FORCE's over-the-top Super Sentai/Mario Sentai/Hank Hill/Mario blends. Before his battle, he puts ''on'' a cloak that covers his entire body, and looks a hell of a lot more ominous than being a naked fat man.



* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: '''Demon #1: The Eighth Circle.''' Although his real name is Fred and both "Demon #1" and "The Eighth Circle" are titles he gave himself,

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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: '''Demon #1: The Eighth Circle.''' Although his real name is Fred and both "Demon #1" and "The Eighth Circle" are titles he gave himself, both are still really good indicators that he's not the sort of person one would want piss off. [[spoiler:Nevermind that it's difficult to piss him off in the first place.]]



* EldritchAbomination: Subverted. She certainly ''looks'' like your typical tentacle horror, but actually has no real advanced powers becides pretty good combat skills and is one of the tamest Demons ability-wise in the entire story.

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* EldritchAbomination: Subverted. She certainly ''looks'' like your typical tentacle horror, but actually has no real advanced powers becides pretty good combat skills and is one of the tamest Demons ability-wise in the entire story.
story. Especially noteworthy since she's built up since Chapter 3 as a colossal threat at first.



* {{Foreshadowing}}: He's the only single-digit numbered demon faced for the bulk of the story, yet he talks about being part of a highly elitist group called the "Single Digits," especially near the end of his fight. Turns out those guys are among the final villains faced before Eighth Circle himself.
* HypocriticalHumor: For a guy who insults Stella's weight, he answers to a chubby Demon specifically, and both of ''them'' answer to the Eighth Circle. In addition to that, his own body is too damn big (albeit through muscle mass) to even fit in doors, and his size-shifting causes a ton or problems with him either being too big ''or'' too small for a given task.

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: He's the only single-digit numbered demon faced for the bulk of the story, yet he talks about being part of a highly elitist group called the "Single Digits," especially near the end of his fight. Turns out those guys are among the final villains faced before Eighth Circle himself.
* HypocriticalHumor: For a guy who insults Stella's weight, he answers to a chubby Demon specifically, and both of ''them'' answer to the Eighth Circle.Circle, who also appears to be a bit heavy. In addition to that, his own body is too damn big (albeit through muscle mass) to even fit in doors, and his size-shifting causes a ton or problems with him either being too big ''or'' too small for a given task.



** Even more sensitive than that is [[spoiler:her hair color. It's acually gray, she just uses the Black Shiny Rock's power to "quick-dye" it. This can be seen whenever Carlson temporarily "defeats" her in battle.]]




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** She fulfills the "recurring rival fight" that was seen with Mudvin in OU's "sister story," and inspired by [[VideoGame/{{Bayontta}} Jeanne]] and [[VideoGame/TheWonderful101 Prince Vorkken.]]
* MirrorMatch: Out of all the Shiny Rock Holders, she's the closest to Carlson's equal. [[spoiler:She even has a dark counterpart to his "Shining Armor" form. In fact, Word of God was that the ''sole'' reason why he went with the idea of something like Shining Armor was just so that Ninjssassin could have her own version in their final battle to show that things got serious. Not bad for someone who wasn't even really thought up until after the first chapter was already published.]]



* TooSpicyForYogSothoth: Stella admits that if they ever crossed paths, his illusions teamed up with Eellooshinist probably could have genuinely scared her. Unfortunately, they try their combined "horror vision plan" on ''Carlson and the Unitias,'' whom are all far more fearless and powerful than Stella is. The result is that, no matter what disturbing stuff he makes his Wavette visions do, none of them are even phased. And ''then'' the trope comes in when the Unitias start trying to give him "suggestions," which majorly squick him out.

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* TooSpicyForYogSothoth: Stella admits that if they ever crossed paths, his illusions ideas teamed up with Eellooshinist Eellooshinist's illusion-powers probably could have genuinely scared her. Unfortunately, they try their combined "horror vision plan" on ''Carlson and the Unitias,'' whom are all far more fearless and powerful than Stella is. The result is that, no matter what disturbing stuff he makes his Wavette visions do, none of them are even phased. And ''then'' the trope comes in when the Unitias start trying to give him "suggestions," which majorly squick him out. He calls them "sickos" and is ''waiting'' for them to kill him.



* DistaffCounterpart: She's close to a female version of the Inventor (or another Yuullieke, but she has more in common with the Inventor than Yuullieke). Both are HateSink villains in a story that tries to otherwise invoke LaughablyEvil with even a main ''antagonist'' that's complex and rounded. Both




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* FauxAffablyEvil: She initially appears to be one of the nicer members of the Hundred Demons, even casually offering relationship advice to Carlson and Unitia Origin when they seem to be in a rough spot (specifically, [[spoiler:Unitia Origin had just called herself a "terrible person" and left Carlson/the other Unitias/''all'' of the Knights in the prior chapter]]). In reality, she's a manipulative asshole who just wanted Carlson for herself and spends her time trying to outright brainwash people in to being near-identical nuclear family types.
* ShipperOnDeck: Deconstructed. Her "preferred couples" really just lead to overly-controlling behavior, a number of (failed) attempts at brainwashing, and it's plainly obvious that the one thing she ''really'' cares about is just getting in to a relationship with Carlson.
* SmallRoleBigImpact: She's ultimately a single-chapter Demon that even relies on the abilities of another Demon (Eellooshinist), but her battle is what marks the completion of Unitia Origin's "I am/was a terrible person; 'Demon #9: Unitia Origin' is now dead, I'm Unitia One" character arc that spans for about the entire first third of the story, and acts as one of her biggest stepping stones in character development.
* TookALevelInKindness: She goes from one of the most dickish Demons to one of the nicest ones in ''Extraordinarily'', as her defeat helped "prove" to her that an "ideal relationship" is ultimately subjective, and she could live (er, post-live) on knowing that she's not obligated to fulfill the requirements she thought were the end-all determiners of love.



** [[Characters/OrdinarilyUnitedMain General and Main Human Duo]][[note]]Carlson and Stella[[/note]]
** [[Characters/OrdinarilyUnitedUnitias Unitias]][[note]]Unitias as a whole, Unitia Origin, Unitia Two, Unitias Three through Sixteen, others[[/note]]
** [[Characters/OrdinarilyUnitedKnights Other Knights]][[note]]Eldbrash, Kameel Kick, Ruby, Leon, Hex, Transparaghost, Her Bone, Powerlesses[[/note]]
* [[Characters/OrdinarilyUnitedSupers Other Supers Who Aren't Knights]][[note]]Tangersine, Eighthback, Hoodieath[[/note]]

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** [[Characters/OrdinarilyUnitedMain General tropes and the Main Human Duo]][[note]]Carlson and Stella[[/note]]
** [[Characters/OrdinarilyUnitedUnitias Unitias]][[note]]Unitias
"Harem"]][[note]]Carlson, Grayscale Boomerang, Unitias as a whole, whole and Unitia Origin, Origin/One, Unitia Two, Unitias Three through Sixteen, others[[/note]]
other Unitias, Generator[[/note]]
** [[Characters/OrdinarilyUnitedKnights Secondary and Other Knights]][[note]]Eldbrash, Knights/"The Real Skies"]][[note]]Stella Eldbrash, Kameel Kick, Ruby, Leon, Hex, Transparaghost, Her Bone, Powerlesses[[/note]]
* [[Characters/OrdinarilyUnitedSupers Other Supers Who Aren't Knights]][[note]]Tangersine, Knights/Skies]][[note]]Tangersine, Eighthback, Hoodieath[[/note]]Hoodieath, Eyebeam Man[[/note]]



** ''[[Characters/TheUnviewablePantiesOfIshikoChan The Unviewable Panties of Ishiko-Chan]]'' and its sequels[[note]]Taro, the Demon Underground (Tamiko, Moeko, Junko, Hanako, Ishiko, Yoko, Margaret, other demons), the Red Empire (Lil Stalin, Hammer and Sickle, Communa, the Red Gem, the Mask), the Flao race, King Flao's Army (King Flao, the Bufflaos, ), the various Enemy Encounters[[/note]]

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** ''[[Characters/TheUnviewablePantiesOfIshikoChan The Unviewable Panties of Ishiko-Chan]]'' and its sequels[[note]]Taro, the Demon Underground (Tamiko, Moeko, Junko, Hanako, Ishiko, Yoko, Margaret, other demons), the Red Empire (Lil Stalin, Hammer and Sickle, Communa, the Red Gem, the Mask), Mask, surviving forces from ''i can't draw''), the Flao race, King Flao's Army (King Flao, the Bufflaos, ), Flao soldiers), the various Enemy Encounters[[/note]]
Encounters, Slimes[[/note]]



# Hierophant: Hoodieath...? [Pair of panties, a slashed rectangle representing a broken censor bar, a hoodie, and a... "shockwave symbole" representing her main ability to "store hits"]

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# Hierophant: Hoodieath...? [Pair of panties, a slashed rectangle representing a broken censor bar, a hoodie, and a... "shockwave symbole" symbol" representing her main ability to "store hits"]



'''DIVINE BEAST VAH-...HOMERO?'''

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'''DIVINE BEAST VAH-...HOMERO?'''HOMERO?'''

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* ''i can't draw'': Has only eight party members, one of them is grabbed at the end of a long gauntlet intended to be faced lategame, and yet there is permadeath (in Hard Mode, at least) and even in Normal Mode there's a moment where you're given the choice to sacrifice either the "main" character or three helpful [=NPCs=].
* ''Omega'': Aims to have a stupididly high number of party members -- like, "60ish" total -- yet there is no permadeath. Party members are given to you left and right.

...Huh. It should be the other way around, where icd's party is permanent yet ''Omega'' goes full ''LISA'' and has "regular" enemies (well, more like minibosses and bosses) that can insta-kill the gang members.

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Nah, because:
* It'll hit harder if there are fewer characters to begin with, and those are expendable.
* It's easier to code different conversations when you've only got a party of eight to worry about. I have a lot of conversations and try to give all possible-present members (excluding Margaret for the most part, as she's nearly silent, but even then she's the one character who absolutely can't be killed in Hard Mode) lines so that there's definitely more of a feeling when they die.
* icd is a "troll game" made to frustrate and shock, and not by difficulty (I generally want Normal Mode to not be challenging towards players unless they're taking a self-imposed challenge (like not using the specific types of "bombs" on the bosses, and Hanako ''explicitely'' tells you that Green Bufflao is weak to Burn Bombs, Yellow to Burr Bombs, and Red to Bzzt Bombs; you can find these for free in the respective area right before the boss if you're willing to fight the stronger enemies in each region) or doing ''really'' bad at the game; generally I don't want anybody who actually uses the "defense magic" equipment to even ''die'' until F.L.O.W.E.R. P.O.T., the ''fourth'' boss, and even that's just a slight step from "easy" to "medium"). ''Omega'' is just silliness, so killing off the party members won't really fit that. Remember that (as much as it doesn't feel like it) icd is the direct sequel to ''The Unviewable Panties of Ishiko-Chan'', where the entire US is taken over by an underground communist army and the president, who is basically Quimby from ''The Simpsons'', was dealing with viagra at the time. It's not meant to be something that even tries to be down-to-Earth and heartwarming. I wouldn't exactly call ''Omega Waifu Battle Simulator'' that either, but
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* HasAType: He's in to women taller than him, which is a bit of a small pool given that he's already about six feet tall. Both Yuullieke and the "default form" of the Unitias are women taller than him. The confirmation happens early on the chapter that introduces Black Charm, who tries to seduce him and is a bit ''shorter'' than he is, which just goes to add on to how "unmatching" she is to his interests (in addition to Carlson ''not'' being the type of person who would be DistractedByTheSexy).



* NotDistractedByTheSexy: Roughly 99% of his allies don't wear very much. He doesn't care, he's used to it seeing as he spent a year with the butt-naked Unitia Origin. And even before that (he's also not distracted at all by the Unitias), he's lived around a lot of nudists. His EroticDream[=s=] that he has after working with them for a while suggests that he's "repressing" any attraction he has.

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* NotDistractedByTheSexy: Roughly 99% of his allies don't wear very much. He doesn't care, he's used to it seeing as he spent a year with the butt-naked Unitia Origin. Actually, he's not distracted by the Unitias -- his reply to seeing Origin sticking her ass out of the portal at first is to flatly ask if she's a "butt alien," he asks if she wants to get dressed and accepts her PrecisionFStrike answer. And even before that (he's also not distracted at all by the Unitias), that, he's lived around a lot of nudists. His EroticDream[=s=] that he has after working with them for a while suggests that he's "repressing" any attraction he has.



* TinyGuyHugeGirl: He has above-average height himself, but the Unitias are ''enormous'', standing at over eight feet tall. While each of them also weighs more than him, WordOfGod is that they would have weighed less if it were not for their enourmous breasts and butt cheeks.

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* TinyGuyHugeGirl: He has above-average height himself, but the Unitias are ''enormous'', standing at over eight feet tall. While each of them also weighs more than him, WordOfGod is that they would have weighed less if it were not for their enourmous breasts and butt cheeks. It's confirmed halfway through the story that he's a macrophile.



* WeirdnessMagnet: Becomes especially apparent when the second arc rolls by, and he suddenly ''just-so-happens'' to encounter a water-spirit person, a sky-spirit person, a ghost-like woman, someone who can use her teeth and bones as weapons, a partial digital ghost-ish figure, and a powerful psychic, among others. And unlike GPF's other works, this world seemed "normal" at first aside from Carlson's own overpowered skills and the Demons. He also briefly discussed mentioning people who have "mutated" or "evolved" differently, but those are background elements.

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* WeirdnessMagnet: Becomes especially apparent when the second arc rolls by, and he suddenly ''just-so-happens'' to encounter a water-spirit person, a sky-spirit person, a ghost-like woman, someone who can use her teeth and bones as weapons, a partial digital ghost-ish also-ghost-ish figure, and a powerful psychic, among others. And unlike GPF's other works, this world seemed "normal" at first aside from Carlson's own overpowered skills and the Demons. He also briefly discussed mentioning people who have "mutated" or "evolved" differently, but those are background elements.



* FalseFriend: Carlson is the only non-Unitia person she is '''''not''''' this to at some point or another.
** She snuck on the Hundred Demons with the extremely blatant intent on betraying them and stopping them from killing humanity. Despite Origin/One ''generally'' being pretty good at blending in to things socially and "disguising" herself, her reputation as a human life-defender and atoner for her past actions was so known that all of the other Demons saw right through it and nobody was shocked when she killed her first target (who she ''wanted'' to be Pantalite, but it ended up being FY) and, just prior, announced that she was hunting down the Demons. The Eighth Circle, on the other hand, fell right for it, and continued to keep up his denial until Carlson explicitely told him the truth in Chapter 6. It's intentionally left to interpretation as to how much of each trait, if it were any at all of them, that this denial was influenced by [[spoiler:Eighth Circle and Unitia One's past relationship thinking she was going to take him back, Eighth Circle being amazed at someone that powerful joining, or Eighth Circle genuinely being guillable/way too willing to trust people as friends.]]
** As revealed in the Fuck the Jungle Arc, [[spoiler:she quickly regretted hiring Stella as "potential backup," ''especially'' after the arc itself finally saw her getting a boost in self-confidence. She never really liked Stella, ]]



* ArcVillain: The Shiny Rock Holders.
** Swinging Blade is the only aversion, as the Trio Introduction Arc is more about introducing the "trio" of Carlson, Unitia One, and Stella than it is about fighting any one specific Demon group, and he's one of the few Holders that has nothing resembling a gang. Still, he's the first of the Rock Holders to be mentioned by-name, is talked about in both of the chapters before he's faced off against, has a large impact in destroying Stella's old house, and his "fight" with Carlson and the Unitias was a wake up call that finaly let Carlson realize, along with "sensing" the sheer power coming from the Eighth Circle for the first time, that ''real'' strong enemies were indeed out there.
** Blazing Fast is the main focus-Demon of the Building the Knights Arc, although he has little to do with the introduction of the side-Knight characters so much as he's tied to both Carlson and Unitia One's character growth. To a lesser extent, Stella's, as he's introduced around the time where it's ''really'' hammered in that while Carlson and the Unitias see almost all of the Hundred Demons as jokes, that does not mean Stella would have an easy time with them.
** Assily Blast is one of the major villains of the New Wave of Heroes Arc, although he shares this role with [[spoiler:the Inventor.]] [[spoiler:His CurbStompBattle with Carlson ''and'' Hoodieath saving his life from him]]
** Flower's Chest takes note for being one of the few Holders seen before her arc (along with Ninjssassin), is the leader of a powerful and relatively big Demon gang, [[spoiler:and turns out to ''not'' be the "real" arc villain as DEATH MECHA hijacks that role from her.]]
**



* BewareTheSillyOnes: Oh, you thought she was just a joke BigBadWannabe, since in her first appearance Unitia Two quickly hijacked her camera? That she's "just" some FatBastard who hates Tony the Bear's various comments? Especially since she sent ''[[ButtMonkey Tony the Bear]]'' as a "test" to fight Stella? Well, the end of Chapter 3 reveals that she's a Shiny Rock Holder, and it's implied that Shiny Rocks are guaranteed ways to power people (human or Demon) to Carlson or even ''Unitia''-tier strength. Enter Chapter 6, where she ''finally'' makes her debut to the Stellar Silver Knights (and thus becomes worthy of BossSubtitles -- the ''Boss Subtitles'' give an OhCrap reaction), where she sneaks up on super-instinct user ''Carlson'' by carving out a chunk of a mountain, and gives him a tough mirror-match while the chunk is falling down the cliffside.
-->'''DEMON #7: NINJSSASSIN'''\\
'''HOLY FUCKING SHIT'''



* CoDragons: Like Last, she's one of the final Demons fought in the entire story, and is one of the toughest of them all. Unlike Last, who was simply powerful on her own strength, Ninjssassin is a Shiny Rock Holder, appears multiple times through the story, is rogue as all hell, and is fought ''right'' before Eighth Circle himself, not counting one last "joke battle" with Res.



** Of [[ComicBook/ScottPilgrim Roxanne Richter.]] Both are ''technically'' "half-ninja" (look at her name)

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** Of [[ComicBook/ScottPilgrim Roxanne Richter.]] Both are ''technically'' "half-ninja" "half-ninjas" (look at her name) with short tempers that



* CoolHat: Has a really odd-looking, long hat that forms three trails that go down all over his body in an odd "pattern." The hat stays the same size when he grows.

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* CoolHat: Has a really odd-looking, long hat that forms three trails that go down all over his body in an odd "pattern." The hat stays the same size when he grows."




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* ShockAndAwe: Enters an "electro-form" when he's powered with electricity. In an ironic statement, he choses to have this done via bug-zapper.



* CurbStompBattle: Screws over Stella, Eldbrash, Kameel, Ruby, and Leon.




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* WakeUpCallBoss: To Stella's group in Chapter 5. While the Unitias are making a laughing stock out of Cryipasto, Stella, Eldbrash, Kameel, Ruby, and Leon all try to stop her small "band" and utterly fail to take ''her'' out (but they ''do'' take down the "Moth Duo"). She's notably the first, and one of the few, fights Stella's been on where she unambiguously loses and eventually has to get bailed out by the Unitias. Lampshaded when things seem increasingly dire and yet Stella ''insists'' that they don't have to call the Unitias.



* WakeUpCallBoss: To Stella's group in Chapter 5. While the Unitias are making a laughing stock out of Cryipasto, Stella, Eldbrash, Kameel, Ruby, and Leon all try to stop his small "band" and utterly fail. He's notably the first, and one of the few, fights Stella's been one where she unambiguously loses and eventually has to get bailed out by the Unitias. Lampshaded when things seem increasingly dire and yet Stella ''insists'' that they don't have to call the Unitias.

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* WakeUpCallBoss: To Stella's group in Chapter 5. While the Unitias are making a laughing stock out of Cryipasto, Stella, Eldbrash, Kameel, Ruby, and Leon all try to stop his small "band" and utterly fail. He's notably the first, and one of the few, fights Stella's been one where she unambiguously loses and eventually has to get bailed out by the Unitias. Lampshaded when things seem increasingly dire and yet Stella ''insists'' that they don't have to call the Unitias.



* TheDragon: To Eighth Circle. The story builds her as the final demon faced before the Single Digits (minus the defecting Unitia Origin and Tony, who was one of the first ones faced), which is before the grand showdown with the Eighth Circle, and she's the final demon that's completely loyal to the Eighth Circle. She's one of the most powerful. The 100th also being one of the last ones faced is not a coincidence: Eighth Circle mentioned looking '''very''' carefully for the last one of his group, so that he could "finish strongly."

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* TheDragon: To Eighth Circle. Circle, in terms of "rank" and serving. The story builds her as the final demon faced before the Single Digits (minus the defecting Unitia Origin and Tony, who was one of the first ones faced), which is before the grand showdown with the Eighth Circle, and she's the final demon Demon that's completely loyal to the Eighth Circle. As well as... well, one of the ''few'' Demons that's completely loyal to the Eighth Circle. She's one of the most powerful. The 100th also being one of the last ones faced is not a coincidence: Eighth Circle mentioned looking '''very''' carefully for the last one of his group, so that he could "finish strongly."
" When it comes to the story, she's CoDragons with Ninjssassin,
* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: She's the final Demon introduced and the final one to have her own BossSubtitles [[spoiler:if one counts Eighth Circle's Boss Subtitles as the ones in Chapter 3 when he first sees Carlson, and not the "Demon #1... ... ... Fred" right before the final showdown]]. She's also one of the few who definitely, unironically follows the Eighth Circle to the end, and agrees with all of his seemingly conflicting choices. She, too, has some denial over whether or not Unitia One was a traitor.



* GreaterScopeVillain: It's unclear where he stands morality-wise [[BlueAndOrangeMorality (if it's even comprehencible at all)]], but if the myths are true, he ''is'' the cause of the BigBad's powers. As well as most of the BigGood's. He probably leans closer to the "Big Neutral" if anything, if not for the implication that he gave a man the tools needed to be a powerful leader towards human extinction just to see what would happen. It's implied that he's a huge dick and none of the Less Ones even like him, so they're not around him.
* HumanoidAbomination: He somehow existed before time, space, forces, etc were even a thing. Those aspects -- and ''most'' things in OU's verse, according to the myths -- were actually ''created'' by the Less Ones. All the Great One really did was weird the Less Ones out and, out of boredom, "blessed" Carlson/the Unitias/Fred, and made the eight Shiny Rocks.



* TheOlderImmortal: The mythos say that while the six Less Ones are older than the universe itself ''and'' the "space" (as in, the currently-existing galaxies) of the Parallel, the Great One's "creation" marks the start of all existence.



* SelfDeprecation: Like Professor Dove, he's the closest thing the story has to a "direct" self-insert. And he's almost unversally considered to be an asshole. A favorite-playing asshole, referencing how much Fan worked on ''Ordinarily United'' at the expense of almost all of his other stories slowing in production a ''lot,'' if not going on hiatus completely.
* TopGod: Even if one does not count the soul beings as "gods," '''all''' depictions of him by soul being-kind show him with three smaller figures -- one red, one green, and one blue. Eighth Circle says that they are are "Less Ones" that are still extremely powerful and control aspects of reality itself, but they're small cookies compared to the Great One.

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* SelfDeprecation: Like Professor Dove, he's the closest thing the story has to a "direct" self-insert. And he's almost unversally considered to be an asshole. A favorite-playing asshole, referencing how much Fan worked on ''Ordinarily United'' at the expense of almost all of his other stories slowing in production a ''lot,'' if not going on hiatus completely.
completely. Also, his own "Less Ones" hate him, according to the myths said by Blazing Fast and further elaborated by the Eighth Circle; they refuse to serve him and prefer living existences on their own.
* TopGod: Even if one does not count the soul beings as "gods," '''all''' depictions of him by soul being-kind show him with three six smaller figures -- one green, one red, one green, blue, one yellow, one pink, and one blue.cyan. Eighth Circle says that they are are "Less Ones" that are still extremely powerful and control aspects of reality itself, but they're small cookies compared to the Great One. There are much more detailed, ''gigantic'' statues of these things in each of the Coliseums around the seven continents (the seventh, [[TheVeryDefinitelyFinalDungeon in Antartica close by the Pit,]] has an even ''bigger'' statue of Great One himself) that all show them as topless women who only wear skirts with nothing underneath.



* WalkingSpoiler: Ladies and gentlemen, '''the''' reason as to why Carlson, the Eighth Circle, and possibly the Unitias are as over-the-top powerful as they are.

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* WalkingSpoiler: Ladies and gentlemen, '''the''' reason as to why Carlson, the Eighth Circle, and possibly the Unitias are as over-the-top powerful as they are.
are. Or, probably. It's what the BigBad things.

!! Less Ones

Six powerful deities that represent "abstract aspects of stability:" existence/"dimension" (green), motion/"strength"/"time" (red), logic/"math" (blue), space (yellow), void (pink), and life (aqua).

* {{Expy}}: Keeping in line with the ''very'' vague ''Zelda''-esque lore, these people are the Golden Goddesses times two. Except that there's one "god" above them, and the six of them hate him.
* NoNameGiven: They don't
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* WeaksauceWeakness: Group 11 elements. Copper's good for a general scratch-maker, silver can work in emergencies, they're outright weak to gold, and roentgenium apparently works wonders against them... but good luck getting your hands on the latter element and putting to use given its unstable form. Carlson originally used gold against them, but switched to silver because gold was feeling too easy. As he encountered harder demons, he understood how bad of an idea that was. Also, with the exception of copper, these elements are rather stupididly rare at the time of the demon invasion (mostly as a certain mayor funded construction for a gigantic gold statue of himself that people find just seemingly will ''not'' melt), making it an inversion of KryptoniteIsEverywhere.

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* WeaksauceWeakness: Group 11 elements. Copper's good for a general scratch-maker, silver can work in emergencies, they're outright weak to gold, and roentgenium apparently works wonders against them... but good luck getting your hands on the latter element and putting to use given its unstable form. [I'm not sure how much of this I want to be in the final story... the stuff about Carlson using gold originally can probably be scrapped.] Carlson originally used gold against them, but switched to silver because gold was feeling too easy. As he encountered harder demons, he understood how bad of an idea that was. Also, with the exception of copper, these elements are rather stupididly rare at the time of the demon invasion (mostly as a certain mayor funded construction for a gigantic gold statue of himself that people find just seemingly will ''not'' melt), making it an inversion of KryptoniteIsEverywhere.



* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: He's the leader because he founded the whole project to bring soul beings with "permanent" bodies that, rather than deteriorating, are only destroyed through violence. He also happens to be the most powerful by a ''long shot,'' to the point where even the brainy and never-forgetting Unitia One struggles to think about who is the strongest ''after'' him and her when Blazing Fast asks.



* {{Expy}}: While six of the "major Demons" are inspired by the [[ComicBook/ScottPilgrim Seven Evil Exes]] as explained by WordOfGod, this guy might ''seem'' like he'd fit in where Gideon is. (Bonus points for being the only Demon who is an ''actual ex'' to the technicolor-haired heroine, although this is pointed out in Chapter 3 when Carlson asks if Unitia One's fixation on Swinging Blade at the time is because if they used to date) In reality, he's more like [[spoiler:Asgore Dreemurr]] from ''VideoGame/{{Undertale}}'': [[spoiler:both are invoked Devil figure-like characters who are built up ominously yet turn out to be much nicer than others in the story imply. Especially their exes. For that matter, the Unitias -- Origin/One especially -- share a '''bit''' with Toriel. Eighth Circle's battle is preceeded by eight containers holding the Shiny Rocks appearing through the ground, in the same manner as the soul containers from ''Undertale'' before the fight with Asgore, as a Shout-Out to further the nod.]]

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* {{Expy}}: {{Expy}}:
**
While six of the "major Demons" are inspired by the [[ComicBook/ScottPilgrim Seven Evil Exes]] as explained by WordOfGod, this guy might ''seem'' like he'd fit in where Gideon is. (Bonus points for being the only Demon who is an ''actual ex'' to the technicolor-haired heroine, although this is pointed out in Chapter 3 when Carlson asks if Unitia One's fixation on Swinging Blade at the time is because if they used to date) In reality, he's more like [[spoiler:Asgore Dreemurr]] from ''VideoGame/{{Undertale}}'': [[spoiler:both are invoked Devil figure-like characters who are built up ominously yet turn out to be much nicer than others in the story imply. Especially their exes. For that matter, the Unitias -- Origin/One especially -- share a '''bit''' with Toriel. Eighth Circle's battle is preceeded by eight containers holding the Shiny Rocks appearing through the ground, in the same manner as the soul containers from ''Undertale'' before the fight with Asgore, as a Shout-Out to further the nod.]]
** GPF also took a few cues from [[VideoGame/{{LISA}} Rando]] later on in the story. [[spoiler:They started off as
]]



* FullFrontalAssault: '''Inverted.''' The fact that he's one of the very few soul beings as a whole, let alone of the Hundred Demons specifically, that is willing to wear clothes "regularly" in the first place should feel jarring and alarming at first. Especially since it's nota "gag" outfit such as Res's wizard costume or PETAL SQUAD FORCE's over-the-top Super Sentai/Mario blends. Before his battle, he puts ''on'' a cloak that covers his entire body, and looks a hell of a lot more ominous than being a naked fat man.
* GoOutWithASmile: [[spoiler:]]

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* FullFrontalAssault: '''Inverted.''' The fact that he's one of the very few soul beings as a whole, let alone of the Hundred Demons specifically, that is willing to wear clothes "regularly" in the first place should feel jarring and alarming at first. Especially since it's nota not a "gag" outfit such as Res's wizard costume or PETAL SQUAD FORCE's over-the-top Super Sentai/Mario blends. Before his battle, he puts ''on'' a cloak that covers his entire body, and looks a hell of a lot more ominous than being a naked fat man.
* GoOutWithASmile: [[spoiler:]][[spoiler:He happily accepts his defeat and says that he feels relieved that "Yunney" found happiness with Carlson.]]



* NiceGuy: [[spoiler:He's probably one of the nicest characters in the entire story, just considering how he is around the other soul beings. To the point where, despite knowing full well that they want to kill him, he tries to chat up Carlson and Unitia One ]]

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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: '''Demon #1: The Eighth Circle.''' Although his real name is Fred and both "Demon #1" and "The Eighth Circle" are titles he gave himself,
* NiceGuy: [[spoiler:He's probably one of the nicest characters in the entire story, just considering how he is around the other soul beings. beings and leaving out the... human-extinction/genocide. To the point where, despite knowing full well that they want to kill him, he tries to chat up Carlson and Unitia One several times over the course. ]]



* SatanicArchetype: He's huge (even in his "human sized" form), red, has horns and a tail, is naked, and leads a group of beings from a section of the afterlife that call themselves the "Demons." He's the BigBad of them all and was intentionally designed to, out of the entire one hundred, ''by far'' look the most like a "typical" devil figure. [[spoiler:Which makes his genuinely nice personality come off as jarring.]]

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* SatanicArchetype: He's huge (even in his "human sized" form), red, has horns and a tail, is naked, and leads a group of beings from a section of the afterlife that call themselves the "Demons." His self-given title is inspired ''loosely'' by Dante's ''Inferno'', although Fan admits that any actual resemblance to the Nine Circles of Hell is a coincidence. He's the BigBad of them all and was intentionally designed to, out of the entire one hundred, ''by far'' look the most like a "typical" devil figure. [[spoiler:Which makes his genuinely nice personality come off as jarring.]]




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* WakeUpCallBoss: To Stella's group in Chapter 5. While the Unitias are making a laughing stock out of Cryipasto, Stella, Eldbrash, Kameel, Ruby, and Leon all try to stop his small "band" and utterly fail. He's notably the first, and one of the few, fights Stella's been one where she unambiguously loses and eventually has to get bailed out by the Unitias. Lampshaded when things seem increasingly dire and yet Stella ''insists'' that they don't have to call the Unitias.



* CatsAreMean: Well, ''lions'', but

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* CatsAreMean: Well, ''lions'', but he is feline-ish in nature and also a colossal asshole. Even by the Hundred Demon standards.
* ChekhovsGunman: He initially just seems like more fodder, especially since he's one of the few Demons introduced in the Fuck the Jungle Arc that's not part of the Jungle Gang and, in fact, not even encountered at Cooper Domain.



An illusionist (her name is a corruption of that word, in fact) that

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An illusionist (her name is a corruption of that word, in fact) that
that is part of the Jungle Gang and first seen trying to team up with Cryipasto to



* BitchInSheepsClothing: Yes, he's part of the Hundred Demons, which means that he's definitely trying to end human life. Yet he at least appears to be a very loyal member of the Jungle Gang. [[spoiler:In reality, that's a lie. He ends up betraying Flower's Chest just before she actually endangers Carlson's life, steals her Shiny Rock, and turns out to be the ''real'' Rock Holder antagonist for the arc. He's one of the few Demons that's an outright ''dick'' to his other co-Demons; Blazing Fast may not really care if the ones that are Too Dumb to Live throw themselves at the Unitias out of sheer ego, but he at least never flat-out insults them unless they're closed to getting killed out of cockyness. Hurting even more is that he initially seems like one of the few Affably Evil ones, almost as "nice" as the Eighth Circle himself.]]



* PunnyName: It's a play on "enormous." She's pretty large, even slighly bigger than Kilomega's giant form.

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* PunnyName: It's a play on "enormous." She's pretty large, even slighly bigger than Kilomega's giant form.
form. They get in to an argument over this, in addition to dragging Solid Death in.



* GoshDangItToHeck: In sharp contrast to most of the other characters in the story ''really'' laying on the F-bombs, Cryipasto keeps himself to saying things like "eff" in place of "fuck." The one exception to this was when the Unitias begin suggesting ideas to make his illusions creepier, where he replies "What the fuck is wrong with you?!"




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* TooSpicyForYogSothoth: Stella admits that if they ever crossed paths, his illusions teamed up with Eellooshinist probably could have genuinely scared her. Unfortunately, they try their combined "horror vision plan" on ''Carlson and the Unitias,'' whom are all far more fearless and powerful than Stella is. The result is that, no matter what disturbing stuff he makes his Wavette visions do, none of them are even phased. And ''then'' the trope comes in when the Unitias start trying to give him "suggestions," which majorly squick him out.
* YouTalkTooMuch: Unitia Two thinks of this of him. And this is when his "illusion plan" was thrown OffTheRails; he was going to have a ''long'' buildup to it, but Carlson and the Unitias figured out that something was wrong with the "episode of ''Wavette''" they were watching in an instant.



* SelfDeprecation: Like Professor Dove, he's the closest thing the story has to a "direct" self-insert. And he's almost unversally considered to be an asshole. A favorite-playing asshole, referencing how much Fan worked on ''Ordinarily United'' at the expense of almost all of his other stories slowing in production a ''lot,'' if not going on hiatus completely.



[[folder:Whenever I see a video on TBOI mods I think about this shitpost idea, that now has Omega Hank Hill to it what "THE LORDE" is to ''VideoGame/{{Terraria}}'' Calamity]]

'''Omega Hank Hill''' is a hidden "Superboss" in the ''Binding of Isaac: Elemental Somethings'' mod, one of two Superbosses and the hardest challenge in the game. He is intended to be purposefully overpowered; he is a joke boss making fun of fan games and mods that attempt to "escalate" the difficulty of the source game. Due to the game's progression system, he cannot be a "final boss" unless a teleport card is used to get out of the I AM ERROR room after the "final boss" in the proper floor is defeated.

* Base HP: 12,333
* Stage HP: 0
* Found in: I AM ERROR shopkeeper, with both Propane Tank Pieces, any floor
* Dropped Items: Omega Blast

!! Accessing

The boss must be fought with both Propane Tank Pieces in hand. When an Angel -- Uriel or Gabriel -- is killed, he will both drop a Key Piece as in the original ''Rebirth'' and a Propane Tank Piece. Only one of them can be grabbed (unless they are duplicated wiht Diplopia/Crooked Penny or grabbed with Moving Box), as the other will disappear.

Omega Hank Hill is not tied to any floor. Instead, he is encountered in I AM ERROR rooms or anywhere that originally had an ERROR room-shopkeeper. All ERROR Shopkeepers are replaced with highly shrunk and compressed images of Hank Hill smoking. Blowing this up will yield twice the normal payout shopkeepers normally give. When the Isaac gets close enough to a "Hank Smoking Image" with both propane pieces in hand, the doors (if through an I AM ERROR Super Secret Room or a rare closet) and trapdoors will all shut and the "Image" will react with the assembled Propane Tank, transforming in to Omega Hank Hill.

Assembling the two Propane Tank Pieces automatically drops a single Glitch Card, which allows instant access to the I AM ERROR room on any floor other than the Chest or the Dark Room.

!! Attacks

!!! First Phrase

Omega Hank Hill always starts the battle in a reference to one of the potential "final bosses" from ''Undertale''; while invincible, he will briefly spawn several Gaping Maws to force-pull Isaac near the bottom end of the scren, and shortly after despawning them, several rocks will appear near the bottom part. The boss then sends out a curving "wave" of rocks that quickly scroll across the screen, with a pocket of survival in the middle of the screen. Following that, several clouds of red mist will spawn, firing Brimstone beams that alternate between forming "boxes" around the edges of the map and "Xes" that cross through the middle, finishing with two large beams that go through the middle of the screen. Following this, he will flip in the air harmlessly before landing, becoming vulnerable.

Following this, Omega Hank Hill will randomly do the following:
* Attempt to jump on Isaac. Regardless of the floor, this will deal a full heart of damage if Isaac is not equipped with the Wafer.
* Spawn several vertical lines of fire with gaps in them that Isaac must manuver through.
* Drop "mines" that randomly fires one of the following:
** Krampus-styled cross-Brimstone beams. Like Krampus, the beams could be cardinal or diagonal, and could rotate clockwise or counterclockwise.
** Circular waves of "Continuum" bullets that
** A star-pattern of six Little Horn-styled "smoke balls" that home in on Isaac.
**
** Cage-styled rock waves that move randomly in four directions.
* Leap in the top-middle of the area, where his eyes will either flash cyan or orange randomly. He will then swipe a giant version of the Flaming Forest Sword across the screen in the same order that the eyes flashed. Cyan indicates that Isaac must stay still to avoid taking damage; orange indicates that he must be moving. This attack is copied from Asgore from ''Undertale''. Following this, he will turn his head up, "roar," and slam the sword on the ground,

!!! Second Phrase

After being brought down to 6,616 life points, Omega Hank Hill will turn invulnerable as his arms will "plop off" and be replaced with large, glowing, translucent yellow wings. He will then alternate between placing the "mines" from the first phrase much faster and two at a time, he may spawn other "lesser bosses" (the Bloat has a much higher chance of being spawned, due to his infamy in the fandom) as well as randomly copying some of the attacks from other final bosses in quick succession:

* Mom: He will go offscreen and his foot will try to stomp on Isaac five times in quick succession. This will end with five feet stomping at once; one homing in on Isaac's position, the other four appearing randomly.
* Mom's Heart/It Lives!: Automatically spawns two Eyes and fires ''two'' of the Heart's possible patterns simultaneously.
* Satan: Uses the hand-Brimstone attack almost immediately followed by firing Brimstone directly below. He will also fire another laser above, so standing behind him will not keep Isaac safe.
* The Lamb: Mimicks the Lamb's head-rushing attack, dashing over where Isaac is with fast speed. He will often follow this with another attack almost immediately.
* Isaac: Disappears, and several rays of light spawn from one corner of the screen to the other. These move far faster than the beams of light in the Isaac fight, and more akin to Delirium's version.
* ???:

!! Strategy

As Omega Hank Hill is meant to be a deliberately unbalanced and random "joke boss," there is no major strategy for fighting him.

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# World: Unitia World [Binary, Unitia-style portal, "brick" tower, high-tech building] OR Hill Town [Simplified building, tree, lake, ...road?]

to:

# World: Unitia World World/Unitia Land [Binary, Unitia-style portal, "brick" tower, high-tech building] OR Hill Town [Simplified building, tree, lake, ...road?]



[[folder:Ooh, Shiny]]

'''Shiny Rocks''' are key plot elements throughout several of GPF's original stories, particularly the video games. They are blatantly based on the Chaos Emeralds from the ''Sonic the Hedgehog'' franchise.

!! ''Ordinarily United''

-->''"Oh, I'm sorry, did I give that away too soon? I tend to do that a lot. Shoot!"''%%Note to self: This is Stella that's supposed to say this.
@@The following section contains '''massive spoilers''' for ''Ordinarily United''. Please skip this section or do not proceed if you have not finished reading that particular tale.@@

There are only eight known Shiny Rocks in ''Ordinarily United'', which are gifts from the Great One in addition to his Blessing/"Curse" towards Fred "the Eighth Circle", Emilleabora Carlson, and the Generator of the Unitias (which carried on to all Unitias proper). Unlike the Blessings, which are strictly "locked" in to that given person, the Shiny Rocks were intended to be more "people-free" powerups that anyone can use. From dialogue from the Eighth Circle, it's implied that the Great One created each subsequent one for when Fred "ascended" on his power level scale; the hypothetical ninth one does not exist, and will not exist unless he becomes the "Ninth Circle."

Violating Great Pikmin Fan's "group of twelve" rainbow theme, the Shiny Rocks of OU are instead based on the "traditional" rainbow of red, orange, yellow, green, cyan, blue, and purple, with an additional black one. These purposefully correspond to the Entain Group, as the latter was modeled off of prototypes the Gatherer made on the Shiny Rocks that Lock-On stole.

A single Shiny Rock is roughly enough to give "Carlson-tier power" to a human, and "Unitia-tier power" to a soul being. Early on, the Eighth Circle initially held all eight of them, but dropped them shortly after Hibernation, scattering them among the Earth. Each of them is picked up by one of the Hundred Demons; Carlson and the Unitias face them, by rock-color, in the same order as they face the Entains by color [Not sure about the Entains... they MIGHT be used in another story, though].

!!! History

The Shiny Rocks were mysterious objects that spawned on HJ-616 [Gotta remember, this should be the name of the '''planet''' that the Hundred Demons are from. From the Soul World/Parallel. Still not sure about the country]. According to the Eighth Circle, they each spawned when he "ascended another level," and he believes that they were made by the Great One as part of his "spitball stuff on both Earth and the Parallel and see how the game plays out" plan. The Eighth Circle decided to bring the Shiny Rocks on the mission to Earth, in case he liked the progress certain Demons were making, and would have given them to his top eight favorites to "help speed up the job." The Shiny Rocks have no known direct effect on the Eighth Circle himself or Unitia Origin, and as they later find out, Carlson either.

However, rather than "earning" the rights to use them, eight of the Demons steal them outright. The Eighth Circle is not too bothered by this, as to him it means that he does not have to go through the trouble of selecting top members and assigning them.

!!! The Purple Rock

[[caption-width-right:350:Swinging Blade glowing purple from the power of a Shiny Rock.]]

The Purple Shiny Rock was held by Swinging Blade, and was the first Shiny Rock seen in the story. After his battle with Eldbrash was interrupted by Carlson just as he turned the tide against the Chilled Water Guardian, Swinging Blade whipped out the Purple Rock as a "super last resort," not wanting to use it as it would mean that he would be relying less on the sword that he loves so much. Reluctantly, he uses it to transform in to a larger, purple-tinted, feral-looking version of himself, that conjures a glowing sword similar to the Grayscale Boomerang. Carlson is excited at this, believing that the weapon looking similar to his own is hinting that Swinging Blade might finally be an even ''antagonistic'' match that is not the mentally overwhelming Eighth Circle, but is disappointed when Swinging Blade trips and lands so that his own Shiny Rock sword impales him.

After Swinging Blade's body turns in to black magic-smoke and his soul returns to the Parallel, the purple Shiny Rock floats above the air for a moment before the Eighth Circle teleports it back to The Pit, for safekeeping. Unitia One manages to scan it before that happens, and gains the ability to pick up energy readings from all of the Shiny Rocks. This leads in to the Stellar Silver Knights shifting objectives from finding any Demons that happen to be out of their Tombs to hunting down the ones that are holding the Shiny Rocks.

!!! The Blue Rock

The Blue Shiny Rock was found by Blazing Fast, who used it briefly after his first attempt to fight Carlson failed even with his super speed.

!!! The Cyan Rock

The Cyan Shiny Rock was found by Assily Blast. Unlike Swinging Blade and Blazing Fast before him, Assily Blast was ''not'' using it when he did considerably more damage to Carlson and Unitia Origin than any Demon, with or without a Rock, prior. Rather, he only used it briefly while Hoodieath was attacking him.

!!! The Green Rock

The Green Shiny Rock was found early on after the Hibernation by DEATH MECHA.

!!! The Yellow Rock

The Yellow Shiny Rock was found by Scale Breath,

!!! The Orange and Red Rocks

Respectively, Girlaser and Dudenergy took the Orange and Red Shiny Rocks

!!! The Black Rock

The Black Shiny Rock is held by Ninjssassin during the Single Digits Arc. While she is the penultimate one out of the Single Digits to be faced (Res is killed after her), she is still considered the main Demon antagonist out of that arc.

!! ''Omega Waifu Battle Simulator''

The only "Shiny Rock" in ''Omega'' is the '''Scarlet Stone-Weapon'''. [Mostly outdated:] Wayne himself already initially held one on Trial Island, before it was stolen by the Starter Wizard. The other five are likewise held by the various bosses; after getting the first piece, Wayne sets out to the other five islands (Forest Island, Platform Island, Industrial Island, Movie Island, and Final Island/The Mainland) to gather the rest of them.

!! ''This Game Isn't Well-Written''

Shiny Rocks appear as the collectable Spin Man tries to get in his campaign, replacing the Wives for Darren. As with the Wives, there are exactly one thousand of them, although the campaign mainly focuses on him gathering twelve, and one of them is a special "leading" one (similar to the Master Emerald).

!!! Main Twelve

|| '''Color''' || '''Stage''' || '''Use''' ||
|| Red || City || Power Cargo Defense/Base 1's exterior cannons ||
|| Orange || Base 1 || Power Core Defense I ||
|| Yellow || Park || To drain the water to cool down Base 2 ||
|| Chartreuse || Base 2 || Power Core Defense II ||
|| Green || Mountain Climb || Gather snow to cool down Base 3 ||
|| Jade || Base 3 || Power Core Defense III ||
|| Cyan || Sky Suburbs || Kept as a "trophy" by Dude Supreme ||
|| Azure || Haunted House || Used by Ghost Man to open a portal to the spirit world ||
|| Blue || Desert Trail || Power source for the delivery train ||
|| Violet || Launch Fortress || To aid in launching the Pearl Comet ||
|| Magenta || Caves || Power the Penultimate Reactor\\
NOTE: This is the only main Shiny Rock found in the midpoint/miniboss of a level, rather than the end ||
|| Pink || Caves || Scientists experimenting on it; trap to summon Dark Spin Man\\
Also seen carried by Alpha throughout the game ||
|| "Prism"/Leading || Heck || Used by Alpha throughout the game\\
Summons portal to Heck in the first place ||

As with the Battery Prisons holding the Wives, these usually (the magenta one is the exception, appearing before the midboss) appear after defeating the main boss of each area. The Core must be destroyed to free the Shiny Rock. In the case of the orange, chartreuse, and jade Shiny Rocks, their Cores appear unguarded, yet when attacked they transform in to the Core Defense.

!!! Others

The remaining 987 are obtained through Special Stages, as with the remaining Wives for Darren. Entrances to them are found through "Panels," which teleport Spin Man in to an alternate dimension (unlike Darren, who is instead teleported to a base). Instead of an exploration-based area where Darren must find as many keys as possible within the time limit, and each key being used to save a Wife, Spin Man plays a falling block puzzle game that awards him with Shiny Rocks for clearing blocks.

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to:

[[folder:Ooh, Shiny]]

'''Shiny Rocks''' are key plot elements throughout several of GPF's original stories, particularly the video games. They are blatantly based on the Chaos Emeralds from the ''Sonic the Hedgehog'' franchise.

!! ''Ordinarily United''

-->''"Oh, I'm sorry, did I give that away too soon? I tend to do that a lot. Shoot!"''%%Note to self: This is Stella that's supposed to say this.
@@The following section contains '''massive spoilers''' for ''Ordinarily United''. Please skip this section or do not proceed if you have not finished reading that particular tale.@@

There are only eight known Shiny Rocks in ''Ordinarily United'', which are gifts from the Great One in addition to his Blessing/"Curse" towards Fred "the Eighth Circle", Emilleabora Carlson, and the Generator of the Unitias (which carried on to all Unitias proper). Unlike the Blessings, which are strictly "locked" in to that given person, the Shiny Rocks were intended to be more "people-free" powerups that anyone can use. From dialogue from the Eighth Circle, it's implied that the Great One created each subsequent one for when Fred "ascended" on his power level scale; the hypothetical ninth one does not exist, and will not exist unless he becomes the "Ninth Circle."

Violating Great Pikmin Fan's "group of twelve" rainbow theme, the Shiny Rocks of OU are instead based on the "traditional" rainbow of red, orange, yellow, green, cyan, blue, and purple, with an additional black one. These purposefully correspond to the Entain Group, as the latter was modeled off of prototypes the Gatherer made on the Shiny Rocks that Lock-On stole.

A single Shiny Rock is roughly enough to give "Carlson-tier power" to a human, and "Unitia-tier power" to a soul being. Early on, the Eighth Circle initially held all eight of them, but dropped them shortly after Hibernation, scattering them among the Earth. Each of them is picked up by one of the Hundred Demons; Carlson and the Unitias face them, by rock-color, in the same order as they face the Entains by color [Not sure about the Entains... they MIGHT be used in another story, though].

!!! History

The Shiny Rocks were mysterious objects that spawned on HJ-616 [Gotta remember, this should be the
''Omega'': Possible name of the '''planet''' that the Hundred Demons are from. From the Soul World/Parallel. Still not sure about the country]. According to the Eighth Circle, they each spawned when he "ascended another level," and he believes that they were made by the Great One as part of his "spitball stuff on both Earth and the Parallel and see how the game plays out" plan. The Eighth Circle decided to bring the Shiny Rocks on the mission to Earth, in case he liked the progress certain Demons were making, and would have given them to his top eight favorites to "help speed up the job." The Shiny Rocks have no known direct effect on the Eighth Circle himself or Unitia Origin, and as they later find out, Carlson either.

However, rather than "earning" the rights to use them, eight of the Demons steal them outright. The Eighth Circle is not too bothered by this, as to him it means that he does not have to go through the trouble of selecting top members and assigning them.

!!! The Purple Rock

[[caption-width-right:350:Swinging Blade glowing purple from the power of a Shiny Rock.]]

The Purple Shiny Rock was held by Swinging Blade, and was the first Shiny Rock seen in the story. After his battle with Eldbrash was interrupted by Carlson just as he turned the tide against the Chilled Water Guardian, Swinging Blade whipped out the Purple Rock as a "super last resort," not wanting to use it as it would mean that he would be relying less on the sword that he loves so much. Reluctantly, he uses it to transform in to a larger, purple-tinted, feral-looking version of himself, that conjures a glowing sword similar to the Grayscale Boomerang. Carlson is excited at this, believing that the weapon looking similar to his own is hinting that Swinging Blade might finally be an even ''antagonistic'' match that is not the mentally overwhelming Eighth Circle, but is disappointed when Swinging Blade trips and lands so that his own Shiny Rock sword impales him.

After Swinging Blade's body turns in to black magic-smoke and his soul returns to the Parallel, the purple Shiny Rock floats above the air for a moment before the Eighth Circle teleports it back to The Pit, for safekeeping. Unitia One manages to scan it before that happens, and gains the ability to pick up energy readings from all of the Shiny Rocks. This leads in to the Stellar Silver Knights shifting objectives from finding any Demons that happen to be out of their Tombs to hunting down the ones that are holding the Shiny Rocks.

!!! The Blue Rock

The Blue Shiny Rock was found by Blazing Fast, who used it briefly after his first attempt to fight Carlson failed even with his super speed.

!!! The Cyan Rock

The Cyan Shiny Rock was found by Assily Blast. Unlike Swinging Blade and Blazing Fast before him, Assily Blast was ''not'' using it when he did considerably more damage to Carlson and Unitia Origin than any Demon, with or without a Rock, prior. Rather, he only used it briefly while Hoodieath was attacking him.

!!! The Green Rock

The Green Shiny Rock was found early on after the Hibernation by DEATH MECHA.

!!! The Yellow Rock

The Yellow Shiny Rock was found by Scale Breath,

!!! The Orange and Red Rocks

Respectively, Girlaser and Dudenergy took the Orange and Red Shiny Rocks

!!! The Black Rock

The Black Shiny Rock is held by Ninjssassin during the Single Digits Arc. While she is the penultimate one out of the Single Digits to be faced (Res is killed after her), she is still considered the main Demon antagonist out of that arc.

!! ''Omega Waifu Battle Simulator''

The only "Shiny Rock" in ''Omega'' is the '''Scarlet Stone-Weapon'''. [Mostly outdated:] Wayne himself already initially held one on Trial Island, before it was stolen by the Starter Wizard. The other five are likewise held by the various bosses; after getting the first piece, Wayne sets out to the other five islands (Forest Island, Platform Island, Industrial Island, Movie Island, and Final Island/The Mainland) to gather the rest of them.

!! ''This Game Isn't Well-Written''

Shiny Rocks appear as the collectable Spin Man tries to get in his campaign, replacing the Wives for Darren. As with the Wives, there are exactly one thousand of them, although the campaign mainly focuses on him gathering twelve, and one of them is a special "leading" one (similar to the Master Emerald).

!!! Main Twelve

|| '''Color''' || '''Stage''' || '''Use''' ||
|| Red || City || Power Cargo Defense/Base 1's exterior cannons ||
|| Orange || Base 1 || Power Core Defense I ||
|| Yellow || Park || To drain the water to cool down Base 2 ||
|| Chartreuse || Base 2 || Power Core Defense II ||
|| Green || Mountain Climb || Gather snow to cool down Base 3 ||
|| Jade || Base 3 || Power Core Defense III ||
|| Cyan || Sky Suburbs || Kept as a "trophy" by Dude Supreme ||
|| Azure || Haunted House || Used by Ghost Man to open a portal to the spirit world ||
|| Blue || Desert Trail || Power source for the delivery train ||
|| Violet || Launch Fortress || To aid in launching the Pearl Comet ||
|| Magenta || Caves || Power the Penultimate Reactor\\
NOTE: This is the only main Shiny Rock found in the midpoint/miniboss of a level, rather than the end ||
|| Pink || Caves || Scientists experimenting on it; trap to summon Dark Spin Man\\
Also seen carried by Alpha throughout the game ||
|| "Prism"/Leading || Heck || Used by Alpha throughout the game\\
Summons portal to Heck in the first place ||

As with the Battery Prisons holding the Wives, these usually (the magenta one is the exception, appearing before the midboss) appear after defeating the main boss of each area. The Core must be destroyed to free the Shiny Rock. In the case of the orange, chartreuse, and jade Shiny Rocks, their Cores appear unguarded, yet when attacked they transform in to the Core Defense.

!!! Others

The remaining 987 are obtained through Special Stages, as with the remaining Wives for Darren. Entrances to them are found through "Panels," which teleport Spin Man in to an alternate dimension (unlike Darren, who is instead teleported to a base). Instead of an exploration-based area where Darren must find as many keys as possible within the time limit, and each key being used to save a Wife, Spin Man plays a falling block puzzle game that awards him with Shiny Rocks for clearing blocks.

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"Scarlet Stone-Weapon."



Also might be moved to Main/:
!! EarlyInstallmentWeirdness

* ''Ordinarily United'' -- the first arc practically feels like a completely different story compared to the rest of it. It's difficult to notice when going chapter-by-chapter as the change is very gradual (the story has a habit of one chapter "building in to" the next one, so to speak), but coming back to any of the first three chapters after reading one that's pretty far is almost ''jarring''.
** Unit Chatlogs were originally in every chapter barring the first. But Fan, while not outright dropping the concept, made them happen ''considerably'' less often and had the instances that ''did'' play out considerably shorter, to avoid feeling slow-paced with too much dialogue and so that he would not be accused of ripping off ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'' and/or ''WebOriginal/SeventeenThousandSevenHundredSeventySix''.
** Dagger is practically unlike any of the Demons faced after him. Despite being a WarmupBoss, he's treated ''relatively'' more seriously than the Demons faced in Chapters 2 up until [[spoiler:Assily Blast turns out to be an actual threat.]] His design is one of the least humanoid and most alien out of the Demons for a while; that was back when they were almost all planned to look more like monsters out of some kind of horror game specifically, and less like general goofy or bizarre creatures that don't really share any theme.
** Overlapping with general, planned out story progression, considering how much of the story involves contrasting [[PurposefullyOverpowered Carlson and the Unitias]] with the far-less flashy and talented other Knights, it's almost downright ''alien'' that the first couple of chapters do not have any of the "side-seven" supers, or the army of minor {{Stripperiffic}} heroes. The only one to appear in the first arc is Eldbrash, and even he only shows up at the tail end of the arc. Most of the focus is just on Carlson and Origin's relationship. While ''Ordinarily United'' is always a romantic comedy first and there are ''some'' signs of Carlson's thoughts on being too powerful, in the first arc more than any does being "OP" take a backseat to the relationship issues. Comparing its inspirations, it was far less "One-Punch Man" and far more "Scott Pilgrim" at the time.
** A number of Unitia Origin/One's comments and some statements from the author himself implied that not all of the Demons would be serving under the Eighth Circle and there may even be one extra traitor along with Unitia Origin. While several of them are directly ''loyal'' and have their own goofoff groups established (most notably the Single Digits, Jungle Gang, and Gatherer's "Elemental Quad"), pretty much all of them agree at the very least with Eighth Circle's plan to wipe out humanity. Some of them are suggested to be Starscreams but this is nowhere near as important to the plot as the "foreshadowing" early on suggested.

!! CharacterizationMarchesOn

* ''Ordinarily United'' remained fairly constant, and most "change" was through gradual and somewhere believable CharacterDevelopment rather than EarlyInstallmentWeirdness, but there are some exceptions:
** The major one can be seen in Chapter 3. Carlson has a Unit Chatlog with Unitia One/Origin where the pair finally discuss Carlson's discomfort with the idea of their relationship not being monogamous, let alone said additional lovers being part of an expontential growth curve and not just a ''few'' simple extra dates. The oddness comes when the other Unitias butt in on the conversation... to cheerfully joke about whether it will end in their first major fight, complete with Unitia Nine ''literally'' conjuring some popcorn over it ("waterproof popcorn," as they were all having a group shower at the moment) and the others getting seats in order to watch, like they see their fights as an interesting show. This is '''unfathomable''' later on when pretty much every single Unitia ends up treating their relationship with utmost seriousness, and dread the thought of Carlson breaking up with One (or any of them in general, but especially One), so they would never joke about it. Hell, it even reached the point where One flat-out told them that it wouldn't be the end of the world if Carlson broke up with the harem, and that he is allowed to consider other dates if their relationship does not work out without it being an indicator that something is very wrong. Granted, that conversation was a TakeThat at shippers who cannot accept their favorite pairing not ending up together, but still.
** For a while, Fan was not sure what personalities Unitias Two through Sixteen (AKA the "main gang" of Unitias, behind One) should even ''have'', just that they were loosely based on the LighterAndSofter appearances of the Professors. [[ThoseTwoGuys Three and Four]] were mainly characterized by their constant making out, [...Blah blah blah] This comes off as '''especially''' off seeing as the spinoff/sequel ''Extraordinarily United'' goes out of its way to give them, and to a lesser extent some other Unitias, much more DivergentCharacterEvolution, so seeing them as being so flat aside from Two and Nine -- and Two's own character being pretty different -- is very jarring.

And just to be clear, this too is part of the "might move to Main/." I need to make a ton of room for the character sheet above.
* {{Anvilicious}}: Each story can get pretty damn bad with this.
** ''361 Striking Degrees'' is far from subtle, which is all the more jarring as its "rejected pilot" didn't really have any of that. (Hell, WordOfGod is that Icesky would not have been introduced until Chapter ''5'', and was not planned to be the final BigBad for a good while in to the story's planning.) Don't fear progress and don't hate change. The story
** ''Steve Buhvillen's Intriguing Group'' is probably the most subtle of the stories that aren't jokes or one-offs, in the sense that it does not really have an overall message (Except ''maybe'' ThePowerOfFriendship. Specifically, this was written as a TakeThat at series where the main character is the only one who actually moves the plot forward while most of their friends just exist as "support" fodder who rarely, if ever, do anything of note). But there are some case-by-case basis:
*** Volume 2 takes this to parody levels. Skull Crater was converted to a blatant dystopia by the "Traditionalists," whose "traditions" are not so much "good old days" as they are borderline '''medieval''' (with present technology). Court cases against the government are blatantly rigged, with the King being both the judge ''and'' the plaintiff,
*** Poixer's B-plot in Volume 6 combines Fan's usual "don't hate change for the better just because, to you, it's something different" with "but at the same time, seriously, let's not force social media on people/some times technological upgrades can be for the worse rather than for the better." It features an operating system
** ''Ordinarily United'', in addition to its FantasticAesop of "being overpowered would suck:"
*** Sex and porn[[note]]GPF usually narrowed that down to erotic fiction like literature to avoid complications with actors/actresses[[/note]] are not some kind of inherant forces of raw evil that are "bringing you down from getting a 'real' relationship" (well, so long as you use moderation and judgement), yet at the same time there are some wonderful qualities in having an actual relationship and making friends with other people. By the end of the story, Carlson and Unitia One are shown as a happy [[spoiler:married]] couple that both enjoy X-rated works together. Apparently, the [[WhatCouldHaveBeen "scrapped first chapter draft"]] would have made this more obvious, back when Carlson/Stella was the focal pairing and the Unitias were side-tag alongs that would have been somewhat like personifications of porn (who were generally portrayed positively). Even WordOfGod is not sure if they're still supposed to be ''now'', although the fact that a huge number of Demons have blatantly exaggerated "sex-related" traits like emphasis on muscle, large breasts, etc leans that towards being so.
*** The penultimate chapter of the Cats and Dragons Arc '''really''' shits on the idea of {{Love Potion}}s. Hard. The
** On his fan fiction side of things, for whatever reason Fan seems to think that [[WesternAnimation/GravityFalls .GIFfany-related content]] would make the perfect platform for how DrugsAreBad. In ''run:gifocalypse'', Sandy utterly '''tanks''' in IQ from a philosophical genius to a ditz that fails to recognize Dipper, Mabel, Soos, and Wendy are her "targets" simply because Dipper was not wearing his hat at the time (as the hat was back at Gravity Falls, where the gang could not return to). Much later, there's [[spoiler:the Chartreuse Mirrors,]] which are portrayed as brain-rotting objects that have [[spoiler:reality-breaking]] withdrawl effects. In ''Escape From Fanservice Island'' ([[spoiler:which was a Stealth Parody of GPF's own writing and "sexy fic," but still]]), [=.GIFfany=] starts drinking because she feels bad about being EasilyForgiven, which is shown to make her even more miserable, screw up her thinking, and in Chapter 8 it nearly gets the whole group killed.

And hell, this too.
* ShipSinking: First and foremost, ''Ordinarily United'' makes it blatant that it is centered on Carlson and Unitia One's relationship. Within the span of the first chapter, they meet, and over the span of the Hibernation year, they grow as friends, fall in love, have ''plenty'' of sex, and get engaged. They're already all-but a sturdy couple, with the ''only'' flexibility being whether or not the other Unitias get to be in on it by the end. Despite that, there are specific points where the story kills the idea of Carlson and/or One ending up with other people even ''if'' they permanently break up, on top of said "if" being rather unlikely.
** Carlson, One, Stella, and Eldbrash are all expies of a "foursome" relationship from ''Journals of Wisdom, Power, and Courage''[[note]]Very long story made very short, Soos and Melody "double-date" [=.GIFfany=] and Rumble, and their four-way relationship is played almost completely straight. Eldbrash is just a straight-up expy of Rumble [=McSkirmish=]; Stella and One on the other hand are much closer to the eventual characters Fan gave Melody and [=.GIFfany=] respectively in ''Journals'' (the former being far more of a pervert and having an explicit need to "make a change in the entire world;" the latter being a constantly-multiplying, rather trippy overpowered matter-maker/borderline goddess); process of elimination places Carlson as Soos but they really have very, very little in common compared to the other three pairs[[/note]], which is why it feels rather jarring that Chapter 5 outright ''torpedoes'' Carlson/Stella, while making Stella/One (or any Unitia), Eldbrash/One, Carlson/Eldbrash, and to a lesser extent (in that it teases the possibility that it'll happen, especially considering their interactions in the previous chapter) Stella/Eldbrash less likely. The gist is that Stella and Carlson get stuck in a sewer, and Carlson is without Grayscale. He

After Green Bufflao taunts them, Ishiko says something along the lines of dying in a fire and getting blown up by bombs. The joke is that that ''would'' have been a "subtle" clue that Green's "weak to" (quotes because it's really a quick-cheesing method for those who don't want to take several attempts to beat Green Bufflao or decide for whatever reason to actively avoid fights and just wanna see the jokes/etc) the Flame Bombs, but then Hanako explicitely says that Ishiko's statement reminds her to tell the party to buy them at the shop that's in the previous screen.

* ''Somehow'' losing to the tutorial fight against the eight Dragons (their only attack deals one hit point of damage, it misses half the time, both Taro and Ishiko have 20 HP, and Dragons go down in one hit and have poor evade) in Flao Town nets you this:
-->'''A Dragon:''' Holy shit, did we actually ''win'' the fight?\\
'''Random Red Flao:''' Don't get cocky! I'm pretty sure they ''let'' you win! ...Just to see what would happen?
* One of the early tecniques the girls can learn is "Seduce." The description says that it's where the user uses subtlety and class that takes years' worth of training to charm the enemy. When the actual move is used, however, it just consists of the user either mooning or showing her tits.
** Some enemies can use Seduce too, except none of those users have breasts and few of them have butts. Instead, they "whisper something sexy" in the enemy's ear. Not only does it work, but the first enemy you're likely to see use this is the Mosqutie. A literal giant mosquito with big cartoony eyes. [[EvenTheGuysWantHim And it even works on Taro.]]
** The Bufflaos, [[TestosteronePoisoning of all people,]] are completely immune to Seduce. It's not even really ContractualBossImmunity since several other status ailments work on them just fine, and there's an in-story justification for it:
--->'''Green Bufflao:''' Ha! We are FLOWERS! Don't you know how we reproduce? Fat sacks of milk ain't gonna cut it!



'''DIVINE BEAST VAH-...HOMERO?'''

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That "Blood Wood Mountain" or whatever area from ''VideoGame/{{LISA}}'' gave me the idea to probably swap the colors associated with meat and paint on my "color wheel" thingy. I mean, violet kinda makes more sense as representing paint as a whole since it's generally associated with art-sy stuff, while rose-red is a pinkish/red that can be used as a general catch-all for anything related to skin and meat. The thing is, I'd have to go through a ''bit'' of the 361 again, and when it comes to ''run:gifocalypse'' I'd have to sacrifice that the current setup now is mostly a reference to the Sprixie Princesses, and

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'''DIVINE BEAST VAH-...HOMERO?'''

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That "Blood Wood Mountain" or whatever area from ''VideoGame/{{LISA}}'' gave me the idea to probably swap the colors associated with meat and paint on my "color wheel" thingy. I mean, violet kinda makes more sense as representing paint as a whole since it's generally associated with art-sy stuff, while rose-red is a pinkish/red that can be used as a general catch-all for anything related to skin and meat. The thing is, I'd have to go through a ''bit'' of the 361 again, and when it comes to ''run:gifocalypse'' I'd have to sacrifice that the current setup now is mostly a reference to the Sprixie Princesses, and
HOMERO?'''
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* FromNobodyToNightmare: By the beginning of the story, she's still a badass, yet she's ultimately "just" a coffee place worker that occasionally jogs, trains for combat, and can beat up a few thugs if things get heated. By the end, she's the leader of her own heroic organization, has a number of hard-hitting tools with her, and is the ''only'' completely powerless human being who has taken Carlson on in a fight ''and won.'' And keep in mind that even powerful monsters from the afterlife have lost to him.]] It reaches the point where Ninjssassin originally thinks that she's the joke of the team and the utmost weakest link; towards the Beam Duo Invasion arc, however, she starts treating Stella above the likes of even the Supers, and considers her a Carlson-level threat.



* ShooOutTheClowns: Stella plays with this trope a lot.
** In Chapter 5, Stella and the other non-harem Knights are sent on a mission while Carlson and the Unitias sit back and try to watch a ''Wavette'' marathon. Cryipasto attempts to invoke this, by saying that the gang doesn't have "that funny lil' Stella" to help tone down the "horror," and thus his scares would hit Carlson and Origin even harder. This turns out to be bullshit, as Carlson isn't scared in the slightest. Hell, he's enraged that he missed his favorite show and will have to ArchiveBinge it thanks to its status as something gigantic.
** Near the end of the Fuck the Jungle Arc, Stella's still in the picture, but [[spoiler:she permanently leaves the group and takes out the comic relief-y other members of the Knights, who call themselves the Real Skies afterward. Carlson and the Unitias have to face characters like the Gatherer and Flower's Chest by themselves, not to mention the ongoing plot of him struggling to stay "supported" by the country when there are more heroes on the rise. Fan says that with there being less members of the Stellar Silver Knights proper, it's supposed to feel like the harem has less of a "security net." Stella accurately sums it up in her last words towards the team before she leaves and takes the bulk of the party with her:]]
--->'''Stella:''' [[spoiler:You're on your own.]]



* StartMyOwn: [[spoiler:Annoyed that Unitia Origin lashed out revealing that she never ''actually'' saw her as a friend or even liked her, she took the other Knights not involved with the harem and split off to form the Real Skies.]]



* BackForTheDead: In-universe, the first few of the Demons taken out had just been "given life" for the first time in the sense that they have physical bodies. Yet Carlson/the Unitias/Stella took them down.



* WeHardlyKnewYe: Part of the story's ''Webcomic/OnePunchMan'' inspiration shows in that a number of the demons are killed off shortly after their introduction, especially when Carlson fights the weaker ones. WordOfGod is that he will reveal the ''numbers'', ''titles'', and ''appearances'' of them all, but that does not mean that there won't be some that fail to show off a decent fight before they're killed.

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* WeHardlyKnewYe: Part of the story's ''Webcomic/OnePunchMan'' inspiration shows in that a number of the demons are killed off shortly after their introduction, especially when Carlson fights the weaker ones. WordOfGod is that he will reveal the ''numbers'', ''titles'', and ''appearances'' of them all, but that does not mean that there won't be some that fail to show off a decent fight before they're killed. ''Extraordinarily'' subverts this by showing some more side-adventures with them.



* BigBad: He's the leader of the 100 Demon invasion project; the other 99 Demons are all his lackies [[TheStarscream (sort of)]]. He's the most powerful of them all, but he keeps himself locked in the ocean in a way that not even Carlson could ''easily'' get to, waiting to be faced at the very end of the story.

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* BigBad: He's the leader of the 100 Hundred Demon invasion project; the other 99 Demons are all his lackies [[TheStarscream (sort of)]].of)]], with the exception of 100% clear-cut traitor Unitia Origin/Unitia One. He's the most powerful of them all, but he keeps himself locked in the ocean in a way that not even Carlson could ''easily'' get to, waiting to be faced at the very end of the story. Although he ''does'' rarely leave the ocean, mostly just to sightsee a bit and plant flowers.



* BlueAndOrangeMorality: He justifies his end goal of human genocide by saying that DeathIsCheap; he managed to bring life to one hundred beings that technically did not have it in the first place, proving that death is hypothetically not permanent, and humans could possibly devise a similar method to the Tombs in their (unknown) sector of the afterlife, especially since the materials Tombs are made out of is apparently a constant across the soul world. The only gray area is that humans do ''not'' go to the exact same sector of the afterlife as soul beings, and their destination is a mystery, but [[spoiler:the ending implies that Unitia Two had finally ]]

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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: He justifies his end goal of human genocide by saying that DeathIsCheap; he managed to bring life to one hundred beings that technically did not have it in the first place, proving that death is hypothetically not permanent, and humans could possibly devise a similar method to the Tombs in their (unknown) sector of the afterlife, especially since the materials Tombs are made out of is apparently a constant across the soul world. The only gray area is that humans do ''not'' go to the exact same sector of the afterlife as soul beings, and their destination is a mystery, but [[spoiler:the ending implies that Unitia Two had finally figured out. Gatherer also mentioned in her last words that she somehow already knew about the afterlife Earthlings are sent to, but this was never elaborated upon during ''Ordinarily''.]]



* ColorCodedCharacters: Blood red, just like the Blood King -- the BigBad of GPF's "sister story" to this, ''Steve Buhvillen's Intriguing Group''. [[spoiler:It's all a red herring. He's not nearly as bloodthirsty or violent as the choice of color would imply.]]



* SizeShifting: It's her main ability.

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* SizeShifting: It's her main ability.
ability. She has a far greater control over it than Tony the Bear, who just has "Big Mode" and "Small Mode."



* PlayingWithFire: A variant in that he's hit hard with ElementalBaggage. He cannot generate fire on his own (unlike the Unitias, whose creations "default" to fire yet they can generate ''any form of matter and then some'' out of absolutely ''nothing''), but he ''can'' start fires from his sheer speed/friction.

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* OnlySaneMan: He's one of the few Demons who does not let ego (most of them) or denial (the Eighth Circle; there is a combination of ego and denial for a lot of them) get to his head. He ''knows'' that the Unitias are especially powerful, make nearly all the other Demons look like jokes, and could wipe out almost all of their competition on day 1 if not for how that would cause the Eighth Circle to awaken way ahead of their schedule. Great Pikmin Fan stated that he's a parody of "overpowered protagonist" shows where opponents ''always'' seem to think they can take the protagonist on, regardless of how many feats they've shown and even if the difference in power should be obvious if the enemy knows a lick of information about their target.
* PlayingWithFire: A The "Blazing" part of his name, and a variant in that he's hit hard with ElementalBaggage. He cannot generate fire on his own (unlike the Unitias, whose creations "default" to fire yet they can generate ''any form of matter and then some'' out of absolutely ''nothing''), but he ''can'' start fires from his sheer speed/friction.



* WalkingSpoiler: Mostly due to the fact that he's the first enemy that unambiguously kicks the shit out of Carlson. What, you thought this was going to be an OP hero romp/parody where absolutely nothing stands against him? This guy alone makes Assily Blast seem ''that'' much more ominous, as it suddenly becomes far less likely that Carlson and Origin would just curb-stomp him.

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* WalkingSpoiler: Mostly due to the fact that he's the first enemy that unambiguously kicks the shit out of Carlson. What, you thought this was going to be an OP hero romp/parody where absolutely nothing stands against him? This guy alone makes Assily Blast the Eighth Circle seem ''that'' much more ominous, as it suddenly becomes far less likely that Carlson and Origin would just curb-stomp him.



* NumberOfTheBeast: Referenced in him being #66. However, this is yet another RedHerring of how powerful he is; the guy is a wimp, especially considering that he came right on the heels of [[BewareTheSillyOnes Assily Blast.]]

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* NumberOfTheBeast: Referenced in him being Demon #66. However, this is yet another RedHerring of how powerful he is; the guy is a wimp, especially considering that he came right he's introduced shortly on the heels of [[BewareTheSillyOnes Assily Blast.]]
the Shiny Rock reveal, and one chapter after it's established that Blazing Fast isn't an idiot.



For my possible other RPG Maker thing, if I suddenly end up not-in-the-mood to play around with ''i can't draw'' and want to make a bigger game.

Once the edit page says that this, as a whole, is too long (I mean, there's over one hundred folders thanks to the Demons), I'll snip the ''Ordinaruly United'' stuff and instead devote a page to whatever the hell this is.

* [[Characters/OmegaWaifuBattleParty The Party (Spoilers for all recruitable members!)]][[note]]Eve, Ash, Mike, [[/note]]
* [[Characters/OmegaWaifuBattle ]]



!! The Wispverse (''Wayne the Wisp'' and ''Thirty Notebooks Over the Black Ocean'')

The only "Shiny Rock" in ''Wayne'' proper is the '''Scarlet Stone-Weapon''', which was split in to six pieces prior to the start of the game's events. Wayne himself already initially held one on Trial Island, before it was stolen by the Starter Wizard. The other five are likewise held by the various bosses; after getting the first piece, Wayne sets out to the other five islands (Forest Island, Platform Island, Industrial Island, Movie Island, and Final Island/The Mainland) to gather the rest of them.

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!! The Wispverse (''Wayne the Wisp'' and ''Thirty Notebooks Over the Black Ocean'')

''Omega Waifu Battle Simulator''

The only "Shiny Rock" in ''Wayne'' proper ''Omega'' is the '''Scarlet Stone-Weapon''', which was split in to six pieces prior to the start of the game's events. Stone-Weapon'''. [Mostly outdated:] Wayne himself already initially held one on Trial Island, before it was stolen by the Starter Wizard. The other five are likewise held by the various bosses; after getting the first piece, Wayne sets out to the other five islands (Forest Island, Platform Island, Industrial Island, Movie Island, and Final Island/The Mainland) to gather the rest of them.
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* DecoyProtagonist: As is Great Pikmin Fan's tradition, although he's a downplayed example compared to others like Jim Unfel or [...Hrm, I'll need more...]. While the beginning builds him up to be the main character and Unitia One as the mysterious love interest, if anything it's the other way around. The issues ''he'' has with the ''Unitias'' get resolved quickly and anti-climactically (such as his "I'm more monogamous than you want me to be;" it's hinted at in Chapter 1, revealed in Chapter 2, but then they talk it out over Chapters 3 and 4 and it's more-or-less settled), but ''Unitia One'' has to overcome far more of her own issues, and pretty soon we find out enough about her so that she feels like Stella-levels of AudienceSurrogate, while Carlson soon turns out to be an enigma on his own.

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* DecoyProtagonist: As is Great Pikmin Fan's tradition, although he's a downplayed example compared to others like Jim Unfel or [...Hrm, I'll need more...]. While the beginning builds him up to be the main character and Unitia One as the mysterious love interest, if anything it's the other way around. The issues ''he'' has with the ''Unitias'' get resolved quickly and anti-climactically (such as his "I'm more monogamous than you want me to be;" it's hinted at in Chapter 1, revealed in Chapter 2, but then they talk it out over Chapters Chapter 3 and 4 and after that it's more-or-less settled), but ''Unitia One'' has to overcome far more of her own issues, and pretty soon we find out enough about her so that she feels like Stella-levels of AudienceSurrogate, while Carlson soon turns out to be an enigma on his own.



** Believe it or not, of [[WesternAnimation/GravityFalls Soos,]] even though they have the opposite personalities. Specifically, in ''The Journals of Wisdom, Power, and Courage''. That fan fic's Soos is a blatant ParodySue in sharp contrast to Dipper. He ends up with a massive harem of superpowered beings, and finds out that he himself is "blessed" in at least one major way ([[spoiler:he's one-fourth love fairy]])
* HappilyMarried: [[spoiler:With Unitia One by the end, as they were not allowed to be "officially" recognized as married until all of the other ninety-nine Demons were taken care of. The final chapter consists of their "Grand Wedding." This continues in to ''Extraordinarily''.]]



** Relationship-wise, Carlson could make most HaremSeeker[=s=] uttery ''radiant emerald with jealousy.'' He has an ''actual'' harem -- not just a handful of women that are all crushing after him, but an infinitely-growing number of women that all agree to date and have sex with him together, there's no major {{yandere}}-related catch (they worst they ever do is get a little competetive over him when he announces that he'd rather be with Unitia One, but they're ultimately harmless), all of them are open about themselves, and they never even hit him (aside from the very rare, not-even-harmful, obviously friendly arm-bump; sparring matches they both initiate do not count). Yet he's far from a Harem Seeker. He sees his relationship with Unitia One as something genuine and monogamous, as One kept the Generator's replication a secret from him, intending to save the harem as a surprise present.

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** Relationship-wise, Carlson could make most HaremSeeker[=s=] uttery ''radiant emerald with jealousy.'' He has an ''actual'' harem -- not just a handful of women that are all crushing after him, but an infinitely-growing number of women that all agree to date and have sex with him together, there's no major {{yandere}}-related catch (they worst they ever do is get a little competetive ("territorial" is the word Great Pikmin Fan uses) over him when he announces that he'd rather be with Unitia One, but they're ultimately harmless), all of them are open about themselves, and they never even hit him (aside from the very rare, not-even-harmful, obviously friendly arm-bump; sparring matches they both initiate do not count). Yet he's far from a Harem Seeker. He sees his relationship with Unitia One as something genuine and monogamous, as One kept the Generator's replication a secret from him, intending to save the harem as a surprise present.



* WeirdnessMagnet: Becomes especially apparent when the second arc rolls by, and he suddenly ''just-so-happens'' to encounter a water-spirit person, a ghost-like woman, someone who can use her teeth and bones as weapons, a partial digital ghost-ish figure, and a powerful psychic, among others. And unlike GPF's other works, this world seemed "normal" at first aside from Carlson's own overpowered skills and the Demons.

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* WeirdnessMagnet: Becomes especially apparent when the second arc rolls by, and he suddenly ''just-so-happens'' to encounter a water-spirit person, a sky-spirit person, a ghost-like woman, someone who can use her teeth and bones as weapons, a partial digital ghost-ish figure, and a powerful psychic, among others. And unlike GPF's other works, this world seemed "normal" at first aside from Carlson's own overpowered skills and the Demons. He also briefly discussed mentioning people who have "mutated" or "evolved" differently, but those are background elements.



** If you value your life, do ''not'' harm her PornStash. Seriously, it

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** If you value your life, do ''not'' harm her PornStash. Seriously, it it's something she values over her own house. Or car.



* BewareTheSillyOnes: When up with a six-foot-something literal knight in shining armor and an army of huge women that can make stuff out of nothing, Stella might ''seem'' downright pathetic compared to them. But she ''starts out'' as one of the biggest powerless badasses in the entire story and just grows from there, eventually managing to impress even [[TestosteronePoisoning the Prime Minister.]] She even lampshades this during her fight with Scale Breath, where she sees her reflection in one of the Demon's claws, and takes a moment to awe at how she was the exact same person that was "just" fighting three thugs at a fancy restaurant that was clear across the world (Stella, by the beginning, was also not much of a traveler).
* BigBeautifulWoman: Yeah, she's heavier than the norm. But the story treats her as roughly as fanservice-y as any of the other heroes (including the "more conventionally attractive" Her Bone and Transparaghost, the slim Ruby and Carlson, the buff Eldbrash and Kameel, the downright lanky Hex and Leon -- Leon himself was at one point either going to be muscular like Eldbrash ended up being or fat on the lines of Stella, and the blatantly exaggerated proportions of the Unitias). In fact, she's the number one source of chubby fanservice in ''Ordinarily'' and [[HotterAndSexier especially]] ''Extraordinarily United''.



* PlatonicLifePartners: With Carlson, although she does think he's attractive (but she likes the Unitias ''way'' more, which is implied by how much more often she gushes over them, and outright confirmed by WordOfGod). Him, not as much conciously. Subconciously, [[spoiler:he ends up having erotic dreams about her later on -- and he has erotic dreams about ''all'' of the other Knights.]]



* ShamelessFanserviceGirl: She doesn't see anything wrong with walking around in thin, tight, nearly see-through (and she has some pairs that ''are'') yoga pants with no underwear. Or just hanging out naked if it's hot enough. She barely knows Carlson for a day yet goes around completely nude. In her defense, she cites the Unitias walking around naked, Carlson ''also'' being naked at the time, and that they were planning on giving the house away to her anyway since her house was burned down by Swinging Blade.

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* ShamelessFanserviceGirl: She doesn't see anything wrong with walking around in thin, tight, nearly see-through (and she has some pairs that ''are'') yoga pants with no underwear. Or just hanging out naked if it's hot enough. She barely knows Carlson for a day yet goes around him completely nude. In her defense, she cites the Unitias walking around naked, Carlson ''also'' being naked at the time, and that they were planning on giving the house away to her anyway since her house was burned down by Swinging Blade.



* TheThingThatWouldNotLeave: She slowly became this in Chapter 2 to Unitia Origin after "staying over" for several days in a row despite having her own perfectly good house that, if anything, is ''better'' than Carlson's house at the time (later in the story, Carlson practically gets his own castle, so that does not apply anymore). Although it ''was'' justified at first in that Swinging Blade burnt down her old house, within less than a day her insurance company managed to get her a new, even ''fancier'' house. Origin is the first to get fed up with her despite being the one who gave Stella her number and the way to get to the house in the first place. Carlson later minds her after she starts prodding at his and the Unitias' sex life and delving a bit too personally. Near the end of the chapter, especially after the events of Chapter 3, they both lighten up towards her once she promises not to stay over excessively. Origin described Stella's problem as "being everywhere."

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* TenMinuteRetirement: [[spoiler:Near the end of the time the team spent in Cooper Domain, she gets utterly fed up with Carlson and his "harem" after an increasingly heated argument with Unitia One. She technically quits and takes ''every'' non-Carlson and non-Unitia member with her; but it's really more like she kicks Carlson and the Unitias out. She just makes her own group under a new name because she thinks that Stellar Silver Knights fits ''them'' better than her. The trope is ultimately subverted after the Scale Breath fight. Even after she and Carlson "make up" from their fight, she still thinks that it's better for everyone if they stay as two seperate hero groups.]]
* TheThingThatWouldNotLeave: She slowly became this in Chapter 2 to Unitia Origin after "staying over" for several days in a row despite having her own perfectly good house that, if anything, is ''better'' than Carlson's house at the time (later in the story, Carlson practically gets his own castle, so that does not apply anymore). Although it ''was'' justified at first in that Swinging Blade burnt down her old house, within less than a day her insurance company managed to get her a new, even ''fancier'' house. Origin is the first to get fed up with her despite being the one who gave Stella her number and the way to get to the house in the first place. Carlson later minds her after she starts prodding at his and the Unitias' sex life and delving a bit too personally. Near the end of the chapter, especially after the events of Chapter 3, 3 where the Unitias just flat-out make their own home that grows in to a colossal galaxy-city, they both lighten up towards her once she promises not to stay over excessively. Origin described Stella's problem as "being everywhere."



* BigGood: Becomes the leader of the Stellar Silver Knights in Chapter 5, after Mayor Green gives up his brief title as "Executive Manager." She's also the assigned leader of the Unitias, and to an extent she even tells Carlson what to do. Even the Prime Minister does not really qualify, as he's busy with the less-magical side of things. [[spoiler:Notably, Unitia One spends the first four arcs seeing herself as the ''Greater Scope Villain'' and the ultimate root of Eighth Circle's evil if anything.]]



* BornAsAnAdult: This applies to all soul beings (who are first generated as souls out of seemingly nothing -- not even the top demon scientists can figure out where they came from), but it's especially noticeable with the Unitias as they are the only "just made" demons of note we actually see. Origin is the youngest out of the 100, and even she existed for a full 20 years.
* ConservationOfNinjutsu: Defied. If Carlson and Origin are getting their asses kicked in a two-on-one battle, calling other Unitias pretty much never puts them at a ''dis''advantage. They also take on Tony the Bear in a fight that is a complete curb-stomp. Being GPF's token faux-genre savvy character of this story, Tony is expecting the odds to be in his favor because he's fighting ''more'' Unitias at once. He can't even punch one of them before they beat him to a pulp.

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* BornAsAnAdult: This applies to all soul beings (who are first generated as souls out of seemingly nothing -- not even the top demon scientists can figure out where they came from), but it's especially noticeable with the Unitias as they are the only "just made" demons of note we actually see. Origin is the youngest second-youngest out of the 100, Hundred with Eighth Circle as the youngest, and even she they existed for a full 20 years.
20/19 years respectively.
* ConservationOfNinjutsu: Defied. If Carlson and Origin are getting their asses kicked in a two-on-one battle, calling other Unitias pretty much never puts them at a ''dis''advantage. They also take on Tony the Bear in a fight that is a complete curb-stomp. Being GPF's token faux-genre savvy character of this story, Tony is expecting the odds to be in his favor because he's fighting ''more'' Unitias at once. He can't even punch one of them before they beat him to a pulp.



* ScrewYourself: Subverted, since they're apparently not related, even though they are made with the same Generator of sorts. And they make out with one-another all the time.

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* ScrewYourself: Subverted, since they're apparently not related, even though they are made with the same Generator of sorts. And they make out with one-another all the time. One calls them "different computer programs coded by the same computer," with the Generator being the "computer."



[[folder:The Generator/The "True" Unitia Origin]]

A mysterious giant stone/metal-like glowing slab/"soul being" that created Unitia One back in the Parallel. After becoming physical in the Eighth Circle's experiment, it ended up doubling the number of Unitias every twenty-four hours. Much like the Grayscale Boomerang, it's not a definitely sapient being, but it ''might'' be. And that "might" is supported by some of the traits it shows over the story, giving it enough character on its own.

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After Green Bufflao taunts them, Ishiko says something along the lines of dying in a fire and getting blown up by bombs. The joke is that that ''would'' have been a "subtle" clue that Green's "weak to" (quotes because it's really a quick-cheesing method for those who don't want to take several attempts to beat Green Bufflao or decide for whatever reason to actively avoid fights and just wanna see the jokes/etc) the Flame Bombs, but then Hanako explicitely says that Ishiko's statement reminds her to tell the party to buy them at the shop that's in the previous screen.

* ''Somehow'' losing to the tutorial fight against the eight Dragons (their only attack deals one hit point of damage, it misses half the time, both Taro and Ishiko have 20 HP, and Dragons go down in one hit and have poor evade) in Flao Town nets you this:
-->'''A Dragon:''' Holy shit, did we actually ''win'' the fight?\\
'''Random Red Flao:''' Don't get cocky! I'm pretty sure they ''let'' you win! ...Just to see what would happen?
* One of the early tecniques the girls can learn is "Seduce." The description says that it's where the user uses subtlety and class that takes years' worth of training to charm the enemy. When the actual move is used, however, it just consists of the user either mooning or showing her tits.
** Some enemies can use Seduce too, except none of those users have breasts and few of them have butts. Instead, they "whisper something sexy" in the enemy's ear. Not only does it work, but the first enemy you're likely to see use this is the Mosqutie. A literal giant mosquito with big cartoony eyes. [[EvenTheGuysWantHim And it even works on Taro.]]
** The Bufflaos, [[TestosteronePoisoning of all people,]] are completely immune to Seduce. It's not even really ContractualBossImmunity since several other status ailments work on them just fine, and there's an in-story justification for it:
--->'''Green Bufflao:''' Ha! We are FLOWERS! Don't you know how we reproduce? Fat sacks of milk ain't gonna cut it!



'''DIVINE BEAST VAH-...HOMERO?'''

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'''DIVINE BEAST VAH-...HOMERO?'''HOMERO?'''

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That "Blood Wood Mountain" or whatever area from ''VideoGame/{{LISA}}'' gave me the idea to probably swap the colors associated with meat and paint on my "color wheel" thingy. I mean, violet kinda makes more sense as representing paint as a whole since it's generally associated with art-sy stuff, while rose-red is a pinkish/red that can be used as a general catch-all for anything related to skin and meat. The thing is, I'd have to go through a ''bit'' of the 361 again, and when it comes to ''run:gifocalypse'' I'd have to sacrifice that the current setup now is mostly a reference to the Sprixie Princesses, and
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The first Demon Carlson tried to take down; while the 100 were in their "Hibernation." However, he found that unlike the rumors of the other Demons in the future (most of which was information from Origin herself), the one he found felt no need to immediately attack him. He was faced with Unitia Origin -- a being who can create other, similar humanoids as herself with a strange object that she calls the "Generator," as explained above.

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The first Demon Carlson tried to take down; while the 100 were in their "Hibernation." However, he found that unlike the rumors of the other Demons in the future (most of which was information from Origin herself), the one he found felt no need to immediately attack him. He was faced with Unitia Origin -- a being who can create other, similar humanoids as herself with a strange object that she calls the "Generator," as explained above.
above. Carlson and Unitia Origin ended up falling in love after several days of her explaining the basics about the Hundred Demons to him



* BarbieDollAnatomy: The Unitias are nipple-less in the aplty-titled "Nippleless Version" (it and the uncensored version are both equally free -- the former just exists if one wants to read it around "a relatively larger group of people"). So is ''everyone'', including the men, but the Unitias stick out as they are constantly naked all the time.

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* BarbieDollAnatomy: The Unitias are nipple-less in the aplty-titled "Nippleless Version" (it and the uncensored version are both equally free -- the former just exists if one wants to read it around "a relatively larger group of people"). people") and in "general concept art" for certain websites. So is are ''everyone'', including the men, but the Unitias stick out as they are constantly naked all the time.



** She gets pretty corrective when someone compares her sex-shifting to involuntary genderbending comics/media etc, as she strongly believes in free will and isn't fond of seeing people get altered against their wishes, especially

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** She gets pretty corrective when someone compares her sex-shifting to involuntary genderbending comics/media etc, as she strongly believes in free will and isn't fond of seeing people get altered against their wishes, especially for fetish purposes. This only really comes up with Shasiffift.
** Getting in the way of any Unitia's time with Carlson or acting as a moment-killing "third wheel" is a good way to get your ass kicked by one.



** Great Pikmin Fan also realized that she is kind of a good counterpart to [[Literature/SteveBuhvillensIntriguingGroup Witchita.]]

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** Great Pikmin Fan also realized that she is kind of a good counterpart to [[Literature/SteveBuhvillensIntriguingGroup Witchita.]]]] ''Extremely'' powerful constantly-nude women with telekinesis and a fondness for color-coding. Both of them also have [[spoiler:exes that they are trying to kill; Steve for Witchita, and the Eighth Circle for the Unitias.]] There's also their "prototype" from the original ''Sweet Jade and Hella John'', the Curse Women, who sort of "split" to Witchita and the Unitias. The Curse Women even had the ability to replicate, and said replicas differed by color scheme.
** After playing ''VideoGame/{{Bayonetta}}'' a bit after starting the first couple of chapters, Fan threw in some retroactive references to the title character. Originally, the Unitias did not



* GagBoobs: The Unitias blur the line between this and BuxomIsBetter (Fan specifically said that he was aiming for "what's usually considered the perfect breast size... and then maybe just a ''few'' sizes larger just to be mean). On one hand,
* {{Gainaxing}}: The Unitias as a whole are mentioned doing this from time to time. Origin's introduction begins with this being the second thing she's ever seen doing. The first is her ass entering Earth's plain of existence from leaving her pocket dimension.



* MaleGaze: Outright parodied. The first we ever see of them is Origin's ass sticking out of a portal (to her pocket dimension), followed by her breasts. And we see her face ''last''. Then there's the fight with Dagger near the beginning, where both of them have the demon pinned down (Dagger is long, so Origin ended up on his face while Carlson ended up lower on his body). We see the scene from Carlson's POV, and he's looking right at her enormous ass. The "cover" for "Volume 2" shows a fully-body shot of Origin's male form from behind, and "Volume 3's" cover does the exact same thing with Origin's female form (with the biggest difference being that she's looking right instead of left).

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* MaleGaze: Outright parodied. parodied.
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The first we ever see of them is Origin's ass sticking out of a portal (to her pocket dimension), followed by her breasts. And we see her face ''last''. Then there's the fight with Dagger near the beginning, where both of them have the demon pinned down (Dagger is long, so Origin ended up on his face while Carlson ended up lower on his body). We see the scene from Carlson's POV, and he's looking right at her enormous ass. ass.
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The "cover" for "Volume 2" shows a fully-body shot of Origin's male form from behind, and "Volume 3's" cover does the exact same thing with Origin's female form (with the biggest difference being that she's looking right instead of left).left).
** Fan thought that, despite literally running around naked for the whole story, the Unitias weren't sexualized '''enough''' compared to other fanservice-parodies, so he went back to the [[EarlyInstallmentWeirdness early chapters]] and added even ''more'' emphasis on their naked bodies. And this does not have the excuse of being from Carlson's perspective, as while Carlson does think they are attractive and sleeps with them on a regular basis, he does not really spend that much time oggling them.



* MsFanservice: The story absolutely isn't lacking in fanservice involving both sexes, but Unitia Origin hands-down provides the most of both female and male fanservice by far, the latter through her sex-shifting. She ''permanently'' walks around naked, and being one of the main characters, she has more screentime. Combine the two and that means we see her naked body a ''lot'', with the only censorship being a tiny finger's worth over her crotch. While the entire story doesn't shy away from sex scenes (especially given that Stella is an EthicalSlut), Carlson has sex with the Unitias a ''lot'' (and with Origin once a day over the rest of the Tomb hibernation, a few days after they enter a relationship[[note]]He tried to hold back once and just spend a date eating while watching television, but the TV kept bombarding them with programs that talked about sex[[/note]]), and Fan does everything short of describing what's going on with the ''really'' intimate organs (and even then, we see the resulting ''fluids'' a lot).

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* MsFanservice: The story absolutely isn't lacking in fanservice involving both sexes, but Unitia Origin hands-down provides the most of both female and male fanservice by far, the latter through her sex-shifting. sex-shifting (which does not happen that often, but when it does, it ''does''). She ''permanently'' walks around naked, and being one of the main characters, she has more screentime.screentime with that nudity. Combine the two and that means we see her naked body a ''lot'', with the only censorship being a tiny finger's worth over her crotch. While the entire story doesn't shy away from sex scenes (especially given that Stella is an EthicalSlut), Carlson has sex with the Unitias a ''lot'' (and with Origin once a day over the rest of the Tomb hibernation, a few days after they enter a relationship[[note]]He tried to hold back once and just spend a date eating while watching television, but the TV kept bombarding them with programs that talked about sex[[/note]]), and Fan does everything short of describing what's going on with the ''really'' intimate organs (and even then, we see the resulting ''fluids'' a lot).



*** Of the Hundred Demons, she's the ''one'' that is a complete traitor in that she flat-out refuses to harm (innocent, she's absolutely ''fine'' battling Lock-On, Inventor, Gatherer, and Yuullieke, [[spoiler:and even ''kills'' Inventor]]) human life, leaving her with ninety-nine actual targets to take down.



** A Unitia covering her crotch is regular game. A Unitia covering her '''breasts too?''' Run. Run far away, or the things she'll pull off will traumatize you for years. Unless you've groped or peeped on someone, in which case, ''you're'' the reason ''why'' she's doing that. And in that case, the only thing you can do to spare yourself from her physical and psychological torture is [[DrivenToSuicide killing yourself.]]




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* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: You would '''think''' that just one unnaturally tall, permanently nude woman who is of a demon-ish species from the afterlife just casually walking around would cause more commotion. There are ''some'' people that tell her to put on clothes, but not as many as you'd think. It helps that public nudity is legal in OU's future world and the population had the whole Hibernation year to get used to the Unitias beforehand -- not to mention that Carlson was the one giving information about the Unitias, and he's highly respected. Also, the people who are prejudiced against them are ''surprisingly'' low.




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* {{Expy}}: The joke about her trying to be a sensual MsFanservice while failing to realize that there are ''far more''' sexualized characters than her at being stunned about it when she finds out was lifted directly from Revealica from ''Steve Buhvillen's Intriguing Group''. Except that Revealica is a bloodthirsty wolf-monster giant that loves crushing things and is a brutal, borderline {{Bishoujo}} sadist. Black Charm is far more AffiblyEvil, looks more conventionally attractive,
* {{Irony}}: Despite her claims of "charming people" and being a "sexually active enemy," she's one of the few soul beings that wears clothes, and one of the fewer of the Hundred Demons in terms of statistics (as a larger number of soul beings not allied with the Demons ''do'' wear clothing; almost a fourth. While only a tenth of the ones that make up the Demons specifically wear clothes.) "Cleveage and shorts" might appeal to some people that are turned off by the direct-ness of the Unitias, yet you would ''not'' have anyone saying "that costume is so revealing!" when right up against people not wearing anything at all.
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