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* DisabledLoveInterest: In on both ends of this trope, as she falls for [[spoiler:Dosu]].
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* HeroesWantRedheads: [[spoiler:He was in a relationship with Mei prior to the war, and resumes it afterwards.]]
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A Kiri Medic-nin and a member of Haku's team, [[spoiler:who the latter has a crush on.]]
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A Kiri Medic-nin and a member of Haku's team, [[spoiler:who [[spoiler:on whom the latter has a crush on.]]
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The "Demon of the hidden Mist", wielder of the Kubikiribōchō and one of the two Swordsmen loyal to Mei. [[spoiler:After the war, he becomes captain of the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist, and thus Anko‘s superior.]]
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The "Demon of the hidden Mist", wielder of the Kubikiribōchō and one of the two three Swordsmen loyal to Mei. [[spoiler:After the war, he becomes captain of the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist, and thus Anko‘s superior.]]
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* HundredPercentAdorationRating: The rebels basically worship the ground she walks on.
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* UniversallyBelovedLeader: The rebels basically worship the ground she walks on.
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* BubblegloopSwamp: The "Swamp of the Underworld", the location around the Nidaime Mizukage's former manor, where Kiri holds it's Chunin-exams (similarly to Konoha's "Forest of Death".)
* CivilWar: It starts the story going through one, between the "Blood Mist" under the Yondaime Mizukage, Yagura Karatachi and the Rebels lead by Mei Terumi.
* CivilWar: It starts the story going through one, between the "Blood Mist" under the Yondaime Mizukage, Yagura Karatachi and the Rebels lead by Mei Terumi.
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* BubblegloopSwamp: The "Swamp of the Underworld", the location around the Nidaime Mizukage's former manor, where Kiri holds it's Chunin-exams its Chunin Exams (similarly to Konoha's "Forest of Death".)
* CivilWar: It starts the story going through one, between the "Blood Mist" under the Yondaime Mizukage, YaguraKaratachi Karatachi, and the Rebels lead by Mei Terumi.
* CivilWar: It starts the story going through one, between the "Blood Mist" under the Yondaime Mizukage, Yagura
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** While their canon relationship is unkown, in this fic she used to be teammates with [[spoiler:Yagura and Kisame]], even having been romatically involved with the former.
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** While their canon relationship is unkown, unknown, in this fic she used to be teammates with [[spoiler:Yagura and Kisame]], even having been romatically romantically involved with the former.
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* AscendedExtra: Gets mutch more focus than in canon.
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* AscendedExtra: Gets mutch much more focus than in canon.
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* BroodingBoyGentleGirl: [[spoiler:One of the many facettes of her relationship with Yagura after he is freed from Tobi's mind control.]]
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* BroodingBoyGentleGirl: [[spoiler:One of the many facettes facetts of her relationship with Yagura after he is freed from Tobi's mind control.]]
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** He fights alongside Anko during the invasion, and [[DidTheyOrDidntThey possilbly sleeps with her]] after the victory clebrations. [[spoiler:He also becomes her captain due to her reciveing the Shibuki.]]
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** He fights alongside Anko during the invasion, and [[DidTheyOrDidntThey possilbly possibly sleeps with her]] after the victory clebrations. celebrations. [[spoiler:He also becomes her captain due to her reciveing receveing the Shibuki.]]
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A survior of the Yuki-Clan, which is famed for its [[AnIcePerson ice release]]. He first shows up undercover as part of the merchant-caravan escorted by Team 3. He later leads the disasterous mission to save caputured bloodline-users from execution, before fighting in the invasion.
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A survior of the Yuki-Clan, which is famed for its [[AnIcePerson ice release]]. He first shows up undercover as part of the merchant-caravan escorted by Team 3. He later leads the disasterous desasterous mission to save caputured captured bloodline-users from execution, before fighting in the invasion.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: While never specified in canon, Haku is gay in this fic, leading to some {{Gayngst}} over his crush on "Kiri-kun" and it possilbe falling to him to contiune his bloodline.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: While never specified in canon, Haku is gay in this fic, leading to some {{Gayngst}} over his crush on "Kiri-kun" and it possilbe possible falling to him to contiune continue his bloodline.
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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: With Hinata, although they gain a begruding respect for another during the War.
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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: With Hinata, although they gain a begruding begrudging respect for another during the War.
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* AdaptationalNameChange: She isn't an Uzumaki in canon.[[note]]Albeit she is heavily implied to have been a descendant of them.[[/note]]
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* AdaptationalNameChange: She isn't an Uzumaki in canon.[[note]]Albeit [[note]]Although she is heavily implied to have been a descendant of them.[[/note]]
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* OminousFog: Her clan invented the ''Hidden Mist Jutsu'', and she can even use is offensivly, such as to restrain her enemies.
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* OminousFog: Her clan invented the ''Hidden Mist Jutsu'', and she can even use is offensivly, offensively, such as to restrain her enemies.
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* StrawVulcan: She is a firm believer in logic, stating that it should gouvern all Shinobi. Only after [[spoiler:Dosu]] points out to her that by only following logic, she would never have become a kunoichi, she starts to reconsider.
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* StrawVulcan: She is a firm believer in logic, stating that it should gouvern govern all Shinobi. Only after [[spoiler:Dosu]] points out to her that by only following logic, she would never have become a kunoichi, she starts to reconsider.
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* LoveInterest: Possilby to [[spoiler:Haku]].
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* LoveInterest: Possilby Possibly to [[spoiler:Haku]].
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** While their canon relationship is unkown, in this fic he used to be teammates with [[spoiler:Mei and Kisame]], even having been romatically involved with the former prior to the war, [[spoiler:wich they resume afterwards.]]
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** While their canon relationship is unkown, unknown, in this fic he used to be teammates with [[spoiler:Mei and Kisame]], even having been romatically romantically involved with the former prior to the war, [[spoiler:wich they resume afterwards.]]
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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler:After beeing freed from Tobi's genjutsu, he serves his village as an anonymous Anbu under the name "Kamui".]]
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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler:After beeing being freed from Tobi's genjutsu, he serves his village as an anonymous Anbu under the name "Kamui".]]
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* DeathFakedForYou: [[spoiler:After his defeat and liberation from Tobi's control, he still is pronunced dead in order to not distabilize Mei's reign as Mizukage. He instead assumes the alias of "Kamui", an Anbu who was TheMole for the resistance.]]
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* DeathFakedForYou: [[spoiler:After his defeat and liberation from Tobi's control, he still is pronunced dead in order to not distabilize destabilize Mei's reign as Mizukage. He instead assumes the alias of "Kamui", an Anbu who was TheMole for the resistance.]]
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* OlderThanHeLooks: He is actually a bit bothered by his boyish looks, [[spoiler:which is why he chooses a more mature appereance for his "Kamui"-Persona.]]
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* OlderThanHeLooks: He is actually a bit bothered by his boyish looks, [[spoiler:which is why he chooses a more mature appereance appearance for his "Kamui"-Persona.]]
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* TyrantTakesTheHelm: After he suceeded the Sandaime Mizukage, many people had hopes that he would change Kiri's violent ways. He didn't. [[spoiler:[[BrainwashedAndCrazy Albeit not by his volition]].]]
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* TyrantTakesTheHelm: After he suceeded succeeded the Sandaime Mizukage, many people had hopes that he would change Kiri's violent ways. He didn't. [[spoiler:[[BrainwashedAndCrazy Albeit not by his volition]].]]
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* RedOniBlueOni: Jinpachi is more agressive and hot-headed than the more methodical and collected Kushimaru.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Jinpachi is more agressive aggressive and hot-headed than the more methodical and collected Kushimaru.
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: He lost his village to an attack of the Kemuri Clan, who had a bloodline-limit that allowed them to control various [[SuperSmoke smokes and gases]]. Still the fic protrais him as not even a little bit justified.
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: He lost his village to an attack of the Kemuri Clan, who had a bloodline-limit that allowed them to control various [[SuperSmoke smokes and gases]]. Still the fic protrais portrays him as not even a little bit justified.
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A survior of the Yuki-clan, who Naruto bumps into in Nami no Kuni. She leaves for Kiri alogside her brother and son after hearing about Haku. After the timeskip, [[spoiler:she has become a jonin of Kiri, and eventually becomes a member of the Seven Swordsmen, wielding the Kiba-swords.]]
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A survior of the Yuki-clan, who Naruto bumps into in Nami no Kuni. She leaves for Kiri alogside alongside her brother and son after hearing about Haku. After the timeskip, [[spoiler:she has become a jonin of Kiri, and eventually becomes a member of the Seven Swordsmen, wielding the Kiba-swords.]]
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! The Kiri-Rebles
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* SparedByAdaptation: Her canon couterpart is a CuteGhostGirl by the time we meet her. Here, she is alive and doing well.
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* SparedByAdaptation: Her canon couterpart counterpart is a CuteGhostGirl by the time we meet her. Here, she is alive and doing well.
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->'''Naruto:''' [[spoiler:I mean, aren't you a 'perfect jinchūriki' already?]]
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'''Yagura:''' [[spoiler:"Yagura" was. "Kamui" isn't.]]
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