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! Team Han
[[folder: Han]]
!!Han
The jinchūriki of the Gobi, a jonin from Iwagakure and Jonin-Sensei of Kurotsuchi, Risho and Roto. Team 3 meets his Team during their first C-Rank mission [[spoiler:after which he is promply attacked by Akatsuki]]. His team later participates in the Chunin Exams held in Konoha.
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!!Han
! Onoki
The
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: He makes his first apperance during the Chunin-Exams, observing his Granddauthger's fights.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: He is very good friends with Roshi, that latter calling him even his "first friend."
* BirdsOfAFeather: He and Hiruzen hit it off surprisingly good, as two [[OldSoldier old warriors]] who cautiously try to pursue peace between their villages.
* CoolOldGuy: Still on top of his game.
* CrackOhMyBack: Has this happen to him quite frequently.
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:He is killed by Suzumebachi after losing his [[ChallengingTheChief position in a duel]].]]
* PeoplePuppets: [[spoiler:He is turned into one by Sasori after his death.]]
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: While his exact relation towards Kitsuchi is [[AmbiguouslyRelated never elaborated on]] in canon, here they are father and son.
* ScrewPolitenessImASenior: He is surprisingly crass.
->'''Onoki:''' The exam this year was also convenient for me personally as well. Kurotsuchi had been begging to become chūnin recently, so I finally decided to end her bitching and just send her team to the exams.
* SurpassedTheTeacher: [[spoiler:{{Subverted}}. While he manages to destroy Mū's body, the latter's HealingFactor renders this progress null and void, leading to him eventually defeating Onoki.]]
* UnrelatedInTheAdaptation: He is not the Shodai Tsuchikage's grandson, as in canon, in order to avoid a relation to the Kamizuru-siblings.
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! Team Han
[[folder: Han]]
!!Han
The jinchūriki of the Gobi, a jonin from Iwagakure and Jonin-Sensei of Kurotsuchi, Risho and Roto. Team 3 meets his Team during their first C-Rank mission [[spoiler:after which he is promply attacked by Akatsuki]]. His team later participates in the Chunin Exams held in Konoha.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: He is very good friends with Roshi, that latter calling him even his "first friend."
* BirdsOfAFeather: He and Hiruzen hit it off surprisingly good, as two [[OldSoldier old warriors]] who cautiously try to pursue peace between their villages.
* CoolOldGuy: Still on top of his game.
* CrackOhMyBack: Has this happen to him quite frequently.
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:He is killed by Suzumebachi after losing his [[ChallengingTheChief position in a duel]].]]
* PeoplePuppets: [[spoiler:He is turned into one by Sasori after his death.]]
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: While his exact relation towards Kitsuchi is [[AmbiguouslyRelated never elaborated on]] in canon, here they are father and son.
* ScrewPolitenessImASenior: He is surprisingly crass.
->'''Onoki:''' The exam this year was also convenient for me personally as well. Kurotsuchi had been begging to become chūnin recently, so I finally decided to end her bitching and just send her team to the exams.
* SurpassedTheTeacher: [[spoiler:{{Subverted}}. While he manages to destroy Mū's body, the latter's HealingFactor renders this progress null and void, leading to him eventually defeating Onoki.]]
* UnrelatedInTheAdaptation: He is not the Shodai Tsuchikage's grandson, as in canon, in order to avoid a relation to the Kamizuru-siblings.
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! Team Han
[[folder: Han]]
!!Han
The jinchūriki of the Gobi, a jonin from Iwagakure and Jonin-Sensei of Kurotsuchi, Risho and Roto. Team 3 meets his Team during their first C-Rank mission [[spoiler:after which he is promply attacked by Akatsuki]]. His team later participates in the Chunin Exams held in Konoha.
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! Onoki
The Sandaime Tsuchikage and Korutsuchi's grandfather. [[spoiler:Following Han's report of their C-Rank mission, he cautiosly tries to open relations with Konoha, even having Iwa-Genin participate in the Chunin-exams. After getting caught up in the Sound/Sand invation, he and the Iwa-nin side with Konoha.]] After the time-skip [[spoiler:the returned Kamizuru-clan leads a growing opposition against his alliance with Konoha, leading to Suzumebachi callending him to a "Yama no Osu", a [[ChallengingTheChief duel for the position of Tsuchikage]]. He is defeated by a ressurected Mū and [[KilledOffForReal killed]] by him on Suzumebachi orders.]]
! Onoki
The Sandaime Tsuchikage and Korutsuchi's grandfather. [[spoiler:Following Han's report of their C-Rank mission, he cautiosly tries to open relations with Konoha, even having Iwa-Genin participate in the Chunin-exams. After getting caught up in the Sound/Sand invation, he and the Iwa-nin side with Konoha.]] After the time-skip [[spoiler:the returned Kamizuru-clan leads a growing opposition against his alliance with Konoha, leading to Suzumebachi callending him to a "Yama no Osu", a [[ChallengingTheChief duel for the position of Tsuchikage]]. He is defeated by a ressurected Mū and [[KilledOffForReal killed]] by him on Suzumebachi orders.]]
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: He makes his first apperance during the Chunin-Exams, observing his Granddauthger's fights.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: He is very good friends with Roshi, that latter calling him even his "first friend."
* BirdsOfAFeather: He and Hiruzen hit it off surprisingly good, as two [[OldSoldier old warriors]] who cautiously try to pursue peace between their villages.
* CoolOldGuy: Still on top of his game.
* CrackOhMyBack: Has this happen to him quite frequently.
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:He is killed by Suzumebachi after losing his [[ChallengingTheChief position in a duel]].]]
* PeoplePuppets: [[spoiler:He is turned into one by Sasori after his death.]]
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: While his exact relation towards Kitsuchi is [[AmbiguouslyRelated never elaborated on]] in canon, here they are father and son.
* ScrewPolitenessImASenior: He is surprisingly crass.
->'''Onoki:''' The exam this year was also convenient for me personally as well. Kurotsuchi had been begging to become chūnin recently, so I finally decided to end her bitching and just send her team to the exams.
* SurpassedTheTeacher: [[spoiler:{{Subverted}}. While he manages to destroy Mū's body, the latter's HealingFactor renders this progress null and void, leading to him eventually defeating Onoki.]]
* UnrelatedInTheAdaptation: He is not the Shodai Tsuchikage's grandson, as in canon, in order to avoid a relation to the Kamizuru-siblings.
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!! Roshi
The Yonbi's jinchūriki, a jonin of Iwa and a critically acclaimed, but not sucessful author. [[spoiler:He arrives in Konoha before the final Chunin-exam-fights to train Kurotsuchi with Lava-release, and then gets caught up in the Sand/Sound-Invasion, like the other Iwa-Nin.]] After the time-skip, [[spoiler:he fights alongside Onoki in his "Yama no Osu", where he is knocked out.]]
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: He is very good friends with Roshi, that latter calling him even his "first friend."
* BirdsOfAFeather: He and Hiruzen hit it off surprisingly good, as two [[OldSoldier old warriors]] who cautiously try to pursue peace between their villages.
* CoolOldGuy: Still on top of his game.
* CrackOhMyBack: Has this happen to him quite frequently.
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:He is killed by Suzumebachi after losing his [[ChallengingTheChief position in a duel]].]]
* PeoplePuppets: [[spoiler:He is turned into one by Sasori after his death.]]
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: While his exact relation towards Kitsuchi is [[AmbiguouslyRelated never elaborated on]] in canon, here they are father and son.
* ScrewPolitenessImASenior: He is surprisingly crass.
->'''Onoki:''' The exam this year was also convenient for me personally as well. Kurotsuchi had been begging to become chūnin recently, so I finally decided to end her bitching and just send her team to the exams.
* SurpassedTheTeacher: [[spoiler:{{Subverted}}. While he manages to destroy Mū's body, the latter's HealingFactor renders this progress null and void, leading to him eventually defeating Onoki.]]
* UnrelatedInTheAdaptation: He is not the Shodai Tsuchikage's grandson, as in canon, in order to avoid a relation to the Kamizuru-siblings.
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[[folder: Roshi]]
!! Roshi
The Yonbi's jinchūriki, a jonin of Iwa and a critically acclaimed, but not sucessful author. [[spoiler:He arrives in Konoha before the final Chunin-exam-fights to train Kurotsuchi with Lava-release, and then gets caught up in the Sand/Sound-Invasion, like the other Iwa-Nin.]] After the time-skip, [[spoiler:he fights alongside Onoki in his "Yama no Osu", where he is knocked out.]]
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: PlayedForLaughs in an OMAKE. [[spoiler:After becoming Tsuchikage, she tries to combat the wide-spread of Lava-Release users in other nations by forbiddng bearers of the bloodline to pursue relationships with foreigners. The Kiryu-Clan's head in quick to point out that this ban would include her ''own'' relationship with Shikamaru.]]
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: PlayedForLaughs in an OMAKE. [[spoiler:After becoming Tsuchikage, she tries to combat the wide-spread of Lava-Release users in other nations by forbiddng bearers of the bloodline to pursue relationships with foreigners. The Kiryu-Clan's head in quick to point out that this ban would include her ''own'' relationship with Shikamaru.Shikamaru, causing her to quickly drop the idea.]]
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* UnrelatedInTheAdaptation: He is not the Shodai Tsuchikage's grandson, as in canon, in order to aviod avoid a relation to the Kamizuru-siblings.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: He trains with [[spoiler:Shikamaru giving him the IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer-talk and questions his intentions and loyalties, but comes to respect him. He even teaches him ''Earth Style: Moblie Core.'']]
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: He trains with [[spoiler:Shikamaru [[spoiler:Shikamaru, giving him the IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer-talk and questions his intentions and loyalties, but comes to respect him. He even teaches him ''Earth Style: Moblie Core.'']]
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A civilian-born genin from Iwagakure and Kurotsuchi's and Risho's teammate. He takes part in the Chunin exams [[spoiler:where he is beaten by Kiba]]. He also develops a crush on [[spoiler:Hinata]].
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A civilian-born genin from Iwagakure and Kurotsuchi's and Risho's teammate. He takes part in the Chunin exams [[spoiler:where he is beaten by Kiba]]. He Hinata]], whom he also develops a crush on [[spoiler:Hinata]].on.
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* BodyguardingABadass: He is part of [[spoiler:Kurotsuchi's]] entourage during the Kumo-arc.
* CoolShades: Heis always wearing wears a pair of sunglasses.
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* PeoplePuppets: [[spoiler:He is turned into one by Sasori after his death.]]
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: While his exact relation towards Kitsuchi is [[AmbiguouslyRelated never elaborated on]] in canon, here they are father and son.
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: While his exact relation towards Kitsuchi is [[AmbiguouslyRelated never elaborated on]] in canon, here they are father and son.
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* PeoplePuppets: [[spoiler:Kabuto also hands his corpse to Sasori, alongside his father.]]
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* VerbalTic: As seen in her quotes above, she speaks. In. One. Word. Sentences. When. Agitated.
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* BattleCouple: With [[spoiler:Shikamaru during her 'Yama no Osu'.]]
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* BattleCouple: With [[spoiler:Shikamaru during her 'Yama no Osu'.Osu' and later the Kumo-Invasion.]]
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* BirdsOfAFeather: As a fellow painter, he hits it off so well with Susmu that [[spoiler:Tayuya]] briefly considers setting them up in one of the [[TheMatchmaker matchmaker]]-omakes of the Iwa-Arc.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: As a fellow painter, he hits it off so well with Susmu that [[spoiler:Tayuya]] briefly considers setting them up in one of the [[TheMatchmaker matchmaker]]-omakes of the Iwa-Arc.Iwa-Arc, although they both have an IncompatibleOrientation.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: As a fellow painter, he hits it off so well with Susmu that [[spoiler:Tayuya]] briefly considers setting them up in one of the [[TheMatchmaker matchmaker]]-omakes of the Iwa-Arc.
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* {{Tsundere}}: His standart reaction towards people bring op thet [[spoiler:mellowed out]] is him FlippingTheBird.
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* {{Tsundere}}: His standart reaction towards people bring op thet up that [[spoiler:mellowed out]] is him FlippingTheBird.
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* MirrorCharacter: She takes after parts of Gaara as a Shinobi from a foreign village befriended by Naruto. She also has familial ties to the current Kage and wishes to herself become Kage of her village. The latter is also somes mirrored by Naruto himself.
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* MirrorCharacter: She takes after parts of Gaara as a Shinobi from a foreign village befriended by Naruto. She also has familial ties to the current Kage and wishes to herself become Kage of her village. The latter is also somes mirrored by mirrors Naruto himself.
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* SimpleStaff: [[spoiler:He gains one as part of his [[spoiler:[[SuperMode chakra-cloak]].]]
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* SimpleStaff: [[spoiler:He gains one as part of his [[spoiler:[[SuperMode [[SuperMode chakra-cloak]].]]
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* BlackSheep: He is actually part of Iwa's prestigious Kiryu Clan, but [[spoiler:was disaowed by it after becoming Son Guku's jinchūriki.]]
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* FatalFlaw: {{Pride}}, which seems to run in his family. [[spoiler:He never bothered to befriend or even talk to the Yonbi due to his transformation into a jinchūriki having ruined his life. He rectifies this during the Shimagame-Arc.]]
* SimpleStaff: [[spoiler:He gains one as part of his [[spoiler:[[SuperMode chakra-cloak]].]]
* SimpleStaff: [[spoiler:He gains one as part of his [[spoiler:[[SuperMode chakra-cloak]].]]
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* SupremeChef: He often seems to cook for his Team, and even [[spoiler:Tayuya]] praising his skills.
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* SupremeChef: He often seems to cook for his Team, and even [[spoiler:Tayuya]] ends up praising his skills.
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* {{Steampunk}}: [[spoiler:His[[SuperMode chakra-cloak]] has gears and steam as it's main design-element, giving him this aesthetic.]]
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* {{Steampunk}}: [[spoiler:His[[SuperMode [[spoiler:His [[SuperMode chakra-cloak]] has gears and steam as it's main design-element, giving him this aesthetic.]]
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* AdaptationExpansion: He tells Naruto a story of how [[spoiler:he lost control of the gobi while defending a fort during the Thrid Shinobi War, killing every single person within it.]]
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* AdaptationExpansion: He tells Naruto a story of how [[spoiler:he lost control of the gobi while defending a fort during the Thrid Shinobi War, killing every single person within it. This became known as the "Tsuchi no Yama" incident and was one of the reasons for Iwa's evntual surrender.]]
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* PoisonousPerson: He utilziesn differen kinds of piosons in his fighting style.
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* PoisonousPerson: He utilziesn uses differen kinds of piosons poisons in his fighting style.
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* RunningGag: Him making scorching hot tea. While his close friends get accostumed to it over time, [[spoiler:Yugito is the first one to complement him on his tea.]]
* ShipTease: With [[spoiler: Yugito during the Shimagame-Arc.]]
* ShipTease: With [[spoiler: Yugito during the Shimagame-Arc.]]
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* MirrorCharacter: He replaces Gaara as the first other jinchūriki Naruto meets. Due to him having some control over his Bjuu, he actually teaches Naruto a little bit on how to control the Kyubi's chakra.
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* MirrorCharacter: He replaces Gaara as the first other jinchūriki Naruto meets. Due to him having some control over his Bjuu, he actually teaches Naruto a little bit on how to control the Kyubi's chakra. chakra, mirroring Killer Bee.
* RedLightDistrict: He actually lives in Iwa's, due to having diffilctuies finding good apartments as a jinchūriki.
* RedLightDistrict: He actually lives in Iwa's, due to having diffilctuies finding good apartments as a jinchūriki.
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[[Characters/TruePotentialKonohagakure Konohagakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialIwagakure Iwagakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialKirigakure Kirigakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialSunagakure Sunagakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialKumogakure Kumogakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialOtherNinjaVillages Other Ninja Villages]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialAkatsuki Akatsuki]] -]]]]]
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[[Characters/TruePotentialKonohagakure Konohagakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialIwagakure Iwagakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialKirigakure Kirigakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialSunagakure Sunagakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialOtherNinjaVillages Other Ninja Villages]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialAkatsuki Akatsuki]] -]]]]]
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* DefeatMeansFriendship: When he [[spoiler:meets Naruto during the Kumo-Arc, he immidiatley treats him like an old friend.]]
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** To Kurotsuchi. She is also the granddaughter of a previous Tsuchikage, but leaves her village shortly after the Third Shinobi War, instead of Kurotsuchi, who works hard for her village, breaking new records for completed missions. When Suzumebachi returns, she only stirs up political trouble, and while outwardly being a staunch traditionalist [[spoiler:[[{{Hypocrite}}she breaks tradition]] when she kills Onoki]], whereas Kurotsuchi is more weary of blindly following traditions, [[spoiler:but still chooses to spare her, even if it is a form CruelMercy.]]
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** To Kurotsuchi. She is also the granddaughter of a previous Tsuchikage, but leaves her village shortly after the Third Shinobi War, instead of Kurotsuchi, who works hard for her village, breaking new records for completed missions. When Suzumebachi returns, she only stirs up political trouble, and while outwardly being a staunch traditionalist traditionalist, [[spoiler:[[{{Hypocrite}}she breaks ends up breaking tradition]] when she kills Onoki]], whereas Kurotsuchi is more weary of blindly following traditions, [[spoiler:but still chooses to spare her, even if it is a form CruelMercy.]]
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** To Kurotsuchi. She is also the granddaughter of a previous Tsuchikage, but leaves her village shortly after the Third Shinobi War, instead of Kurotsuchi, who works hard for her village, breaking new records for completed missions. When Suzumebachi returns, she only stirs up political trouble, and while outwardly being a staunch traditionalist [[spoiler:[[{{Hypocrite}}breaking tradition]] when she kills Onoki]], whereas Kurotsuchi is more weary of blindly following traditions, [[spoiler:but still chooses to spare her, even if it is a form CruelMercy.]]
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** To Kurotsuchi. She is also the granddaughter of a previous Tsuchikage, but leaves her village shortly after the Third Shinobi War, instead of Kurotsuchi, who works hard for her village, breaking new records for completed missions. When Suzumebachi returns, she only stirs up political trouble, and while outwardly being a staunch traditionalist [[spoiler:[[{{Hypocrite}}breaking [[spoiler:[[{{Hypocrite}}she breaks tradition]] when she kills Onoki]], whereas Kurotsuchi is more weary of blindly following traditions, [[spoiler:but still chooses to spare her, even if it is a form CruelMercy.]]
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* ArcVillain: Of the Iwa-arc in part II.
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* BigBad: Of the Iwa-arc in part II.
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* AscendedExtra: She goes from a FillerVillian to a full-blown ArcVillain.
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* AscendedExtra: She goes from a FillerVillian FillerVillain to a full-blown ArcVillain.
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* FishOutOfTemporalWater: [[spoiler:He is unbale to recognise the changed times he finds himself in, berating Onoki for his alliance with Iwa.]]
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* FishOutOfTemporalWater: [[spoiler:He is unbale to recognise the changed times he finds himself in, berating Onoki for his alliance with Iwa.joining Konoha's alliance.]]
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* FishOutOfTemporealWater: [[spoiler:He is unbale to recognise the changed times he finds himself in, berating Onoki for his alliance with Iwa.]]
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* FishOutOfTemporealWater: FishOutOfTemporalWater: [[spoiler:He is unbale to recognise the changed times he finds himself in, berating Onoki for his alliance with Iwa.]]
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The Nidaime Tsuchikage, also knwon as the "Non-Person". He trained Onoki and taught his the Dust Release, before perishing during a fight with the Nidaime Mizukage. [[spoiler:He is later ressurected by Kabuto via the ''Edo Tensei'' to support Suzumebachi during her "Yama no Osu", defeating and killing Onoki on her orders. He latter fights against Kurotsuchi, Han and Shikamaru in the second "Yama no Osu", where Kurotsuchi's determination allows him to move on.]]
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The Nidaime Tsuchikage, also knwon as the "Non-Person". He trained Onoki and taught his the Dust Release, before perishing during a fight with the Nidaime Mizukage. [[spoiler:He is later ressurected by Kabuto via the ''Edo Tensei'' to support Suzumebachi during her "Yama no Osu", defeating and killing Onoki on her orders. He latter then fights against Kurotsuchi, Han and Shikamaru in the second "Yama no Osu", where Kurotsuchi's determination allows him to move on.]]
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* FishOutOfTemporealWater: [[spoiler:He is unbale to recognise the changed times he finds himself in, berating Onoki for his alliance with Iwa.]]