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* ADayInTheLimelight: She is arguably the main-charakter of the Iwa-arc.
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The Yonbi's jinchūriki, a jonin of Iwa and a critically acclaimed, but not sucessful author. [[spoiler:He arrives in Konoha before the final Chunin-exam-fights to train Kurotsuchi with Lava-release, and then gets caught up in the Sand/Sound-Invasion, like the other Iwa-Nin.]] After the time-skip, [[spoiler:he fights alongside Onoki in his
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The Yonbi's jinchūriki, a jonin of Iwa and a critically acclaimed, but not sucessful author. [[spoiler:He arrives in Konoha before the final Chunin-exam-fights to train Kurotsuchi with Lava-release, and then gets caught up in the Sand/Sound-Invasion, like the other Iwa-Nin.]] After the time-skip, [[spoiler:he fights alongside Onoki in his 'Yama no Osu', where he is knocked out.]]
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* {{Jerkass}}: He takes Risho's pirde and stand-offishness to a hole new level.
* ShadowArchetype: He is inspired by overly-negative depictions of Hiashi Hyuga.
* ShadowArchetype: He is inspired by overly-negative depictions of Hiashi Hyuga.
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* {{Jerkass}}: He takes Risho's pirde and stand-offishness to a hole whole new level.
* ShadowArchetype: He is inspired by overly-negative depictions of HiashiHyuga.
Hyuga as classisit and an extreme case of HonorBeforeReason.
* ShadowArchetype: He is inspired by overly-negative depictions of Hiashi
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A scion of the Kamizuru-clan and granddaughter of the Shodai Tsuchikage, she returns to Iwa shortly after the timeskip, starting to rile up the population against Onoki's alliance with Konoha.
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A scion of the Kamizuru-clan and granddaughter of the Shodai Tsuchikage, she returns to Iwa shortly after the timeskip, starting to rile up the population against Onoki's alliance with Konoha. [[spoiler:After ROOT agents kill her brothers, she challenges Onoki to a 'Yama no Osu', a [[ChallengingTheChief duel for the position of Tsuchikage]]. Thanks to Kabuto resurrecting the Nidaime Tsuchikage as her partner, she defeats him and Roshi, killing Onoki afterwards. Kurotsuchi promptly challenges her back, defeating her.]]
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* AdaptationalBadass: Due to her managing to regain her clan's lost techniques, she is considearbly stronger than in canon, albeit [[spoiler:still not string enough to defeat Onoki on her own.]]
* AdaptationalLateAppearance: Instead of being a filler-viallain in part I, she instead shows up during Part II.
* BigBad: Of the Iwa-arc in part II.
* FantasticRacism: Against Konoha.
* Hypocrite: As pointed out by Kurotsuchi [[spoiler:during their 'Yama no Osu': She calls her out for hiding underground while hiding inside her beehive, she calls Mu and Onoki "weak" despite having to use the former to defeat the latter, she
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* AdaptationalBadass: Due to her managing to regain her clan's lost techniques, she is considearbly stronger than in canon, albeit [[spoiler:still not string enough to defeat Onoki on her own.]]
* AdaptationalLateAppearance: Instead of being a filler-viallain in part I, she instead shows up during Part II.
* BigBad: Of the Iwa-arc in part II.
* FantasticRacism: Against Konoha.
* Hypocrite: As pointed out by Kurotsuchi [[spoiler:during their 'Yama no Osu': She calls her out for hiding underground while hiding inside her beehive, she calls Mu and Onoki "weak" despite having to use the former to defeat the latter, she
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* HiddenDepths: He enjoyes drawing an dis actually very good at it.
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* HiddenDepths: He enjoyes drawing an dis and is actually very good at it.it, even illustrating Roshi's books.
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* SupremeChef: He often seems to cook for his Team, and even [[spoiler:Tayuya]] praising his skills.
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The Sandaime Tsuchikage's granddaughter and a jonin of Han. She meets Team 3 during their first C-Rank mission, striking up somewhat of a friendship with them. She later participates in the Chunin-exams, [[spoiler:where she is beaten by Naruto]].
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The Sandaime Tsuchikage's granddaughter and a jonin of Han. She meets Team 3 during their first C-Rank mission, striking up somewhat of a friendship with them. She later participates in the Chunin-exams, [[spoiler:where she is beaten by Naruto]]. After the timeskip [[spoiler:she opposes the Kamizuru-clan's chauvinistic rethoric. After Suzumebachi defeats and then kills Onoki, she promptly challenges her for the tilte of Tsuchikage, becoming Gondaime Tsuchikage after her victoriy.]]
* ChallengingTheChief: Upon [[spoiler: Suzumebachi becoming Tsuchikage and killing Onoki, she immdiatley challenges her for the position]]
-> [[spoiler:"You'll. Do. NOTHING. You aren't Tsuchikage!" Kurotsuchi hissed as she pointed at the Kamizuru and began to shout loudly for the whole arena to here. "KAMIZURU SUZUMEBACHI, I AM KUROTSUCHI, AND I CHALLENGE YOU TO 'YAMA NO OSU' FOR THE TITLE OF TSUCHIKAGE! RIGHT HERE! RIGHT NOW!"]]
-> [[spoiler:"You'll. Do. NOTHING. You aren't Tsuchikage!" Kurotsuchi hissed as she pointed at the Kamizuru and began to shout loudly for the whole arena to here. "KAMIZURU SUZUMEBACHI, I AM KUROTSUCHI, AND I CHALLENGE YOU TO 'YAMA NO OSU' FOR THE TITLE OF TSUCHIKAGE! RIGHT HERE! RIGHT NOW!"]]
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A scion of the prestigious, but decimated Kurogane-Clan, Risho's defining trait in his first appearances is his [[FantasticRacism buring hatred of Konoha]]. During the Chunin exams, [[spoiler:he fights and defeats Kiba, but loses to Naruto, kicking of his CharacterDevelopment]]
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A scion of the prestigious, but decimated Kurogane-Clan, Risho's defining trait in his first appearances is his [[FantasticRacism buring hatred of Konoha]]. During the Chunin exams, [[spoiler:he fights and defeats Kiba, but loses to Naruto, kicking of his CharacterDevelopment]]CharacterDevelopment]].
* FlippingTheBird: His reaction whenever somebody brings up his CharacterDevelopment.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: He is very good friends with Roshi, that latter calling him even his "first friend."
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:He is killed by Suzumebachi after losing his position in a duel.]]
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:He is killed by Suzumebachi after losing his [[ChallengingTheChief position in a duel.duel]].]]
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The Yonbi's jinchūriki, a jonin of Iwa and a critically acclaimed, but not sucessful author. [[spoiler:He arrives in Konoha before the final Chunin-exam-fights to train Kurotsuchi with Lava-release, and then gets caught up in the Sand/Sound-Invasion, like the other Iwa-Nin.]]
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The Yonbi's jinchūriki, a jonin of Iwa and a critically acclaimed, but not sucessful author. [[spoiler:He arrives in Konoha before the final Chunin-exam-fights to train Kurotsuchi with Lava-release, and then gets caught up in the Sand/Sound-Invasion, like the other Iwa-Nin.]] After the time-skip, [[spoiler:he fights alongside Onoki in his
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Instead of WalkingTheEarth like in canon, he stays in Iwa and becomes Han's best friends.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Instead of WalkingTheEarth like in canon, he stays in Iwa and becomes Han's closest friend, with himself being also best friends.friends with Onoki, calling the latter his "first friend."
* TheAce: He is statet to be Iwa's best swordsman and have full control over his clans bloodline-release.
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!! Suzumebachi Kamizuru
A scion of the Kamizuru-clan and granddaughter of the Shodai Tsuchikage, she returns to Iwa shortly after the timeskip, starting to rile up the population against Onoki's alliance with Konoha.
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A scionof the prestigious but decimated Kurogane-Clan, Risho's defining trait in his first appearances is his [[FantasticRacism buring hatred of Konoha]]. During the Chunin exams, [[spoiler:he fights and defeats Kiba, but loses to Naruto, kicking of his CharacterDevelopment]]
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A scionof scion of the prestigious prestigious, but decimated Kurogane-Clan, Risho's defining trait in his first appearances is his [[FantasticRacism buring hatred of Konoha]]. During the Chunin exams, [[spoiler:he fights and defeats Kiba, but loses to Naruto, kicking of his CharacterDevelopment]]
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* BlackSheep: He droppes his clan's elitist ways during the timeskip, leading Suzumebachi to outright clll him this.
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* BlackSheep: He droppes drops his clan's elitist ways during the timeskip, leading Suzumebachi to outright clll call him this.
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* DefrostingIceKing: Kurotsuchi later mentions that he mellowed out after being kicked out by his {{Jerkass}}-family.
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* DefrostingIceKing: Kurotsuchi later mentions that he mellowed out after being kicked out by his {{Jerkass}}-family. His appearance during Part-II proves this.
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* CoolShades: He is always wearing a pair of sunglasses.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: He and Hiruzen hit it off surprisingly good, as two old warriors who cautiously try to pursue peace.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: He and Hiruzen hit it off surprisingly good, as two [[OldSoldier old warriors warriors]] who cautiously try to pursue peace.peace between their villages.
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* DeathByAdaptaion: [[spoiler:He is killed by Suzumebachi after losing his position in a duel.]]
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[[Characters/TruePotentialKonohagakure Konohagakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialIwagakure Iwagakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialKirigakure Kirigakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialSunagakure Sunagakure]] -]]]]]
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A civilian-born genin from Iwagakure and Kurotsuchi's and Risho's teammate. He takes part in the Chunin exams [[spoiler:where he is beaten by Kiba]]. He also develops a crush on [[spoiler.Hinata]].
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A civilian-born genin from Iwagakure and Kurotsuchi's and Risho's teammate. He takes part in the Chunin exams [[spoiler:where he is beaten by Kiba]]. He also develops a crush on [[spoiler.Hinata]].[[spoiler:Hinata]].
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* ShadowArchetype: He is inspired by overly-negative depictions of Hiashi Hyuga.
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[[Characters/TruePotentialKonohagakure Konohagakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialIwagakure Iwagakure]]-]]]]]
Iwagakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialKirigakure Kirigakure]] -]]]]]
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* AscendedExtra: Like his fellow jinchūriki, he is featured much more prominently.
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* FallenPrincess: {{Genderflipped}}. [[spoiler:While losing to Naruto doesn't get him disinherited, he is still forced to move out of his clan's compound, taking up residence with Roto and his family.]]
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* ExtraOreDinary: His clan's bloodline-release involes the manipulation of metal.
* FallenPrincess: {{Genderflipped}}. [[spoiler:While losing to Naruto doesn't get himdisinherited, disinherited outright, he is still forced to move out of his clan's compound, taking up residence with Roto and his family.]]]]
* FreudianExcuse: His Clan suffered tremendous losses during the Thrid Shinobi War, resulting in a lot of pressure being put on the youngest generation, resulting in his stand-offish behavior.
* FallenPrincess: {{Genderflipped}}. [[spoiler:While losing to Naruto doesn't get him
* FreudianExcuse: His Clan suffered tremendous losses during the Thrid Shinobi War, resulting in a lot of pressure being put on the youngest generation, resulting in his stand-offish behavior.
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!! Roshi
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* AscendedExtra: Like his fellow Iwa-jinchūriki, Han.
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[[folder: Kusari Kurogane]]
!! Kusari Kurogane
Another scion of Clan Kurogane and Risho's older cousin. He gets brought in by Han to train Risho after [[spoiler:him passing the preliminaries. After Risho loses to Naruto, he tries to have him disinherited.]]
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* BigBrotherBully: He is very clearly abusive towards Risho.
* {{Jerkass}}: He takes Risho's pirde and stand-offishness to a hole new level.
[[folder: Kusari Kurogane]]
!! Kusari Kurogane
Another scion of Clan Kurogane and Risho's older cousin. He gets brought in by Han to train Risho after [[spoiler:him passing the preliminaries. After Risho loses to Naruto, he tries to have him disinherited.]]
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* BigBrotherBully: He is very clearly abusive towards Risho.
* {{Jerkass}}: He takes Risho's pirde and stand-offishness to a hole new level.
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* FallenPrincess: {{Genderflipped}}. [[spoiler:While losing to Naruto doesn't get him disinherited, he is still forced to move owt of his clan's compound, taking up residence with Roto and his family.]]
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* FallenPrincess: {{Genderflipped}}. [[spoiler:While losing to Naruto doesn't get him disinherited, he is still forced to move owt out of his clan's compound, taking up residence with Roto and his family.]]
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* [[spoiler:DeathByAdaptaion: He DeathByAdaptaion: [[spoiler:He is killed by Suzumebachi after losing his position in a duel.]]
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* GenreSavy: She is among the first to notice Narutos resemblance to the Yondaime Hokage.
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* GenreSavy: GenreSavvy: She is among the first to notice Narutos resemblance to the Yondaime Hokage.
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* BadassInDistress: After taking over as the escort for a merchant traveling to Tsuchi no Kuni from Team 3, he propmply [[spoiler:gets ambushed by Akatsuki, leading to Team 3 pulling a BigDamnHeroes to save him and his team.
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* BadassInDistress: After taking over as the escort for a merchant traveling to Tsuchi no Kuni from Team 3, he propmply [[spoiler:gets ambushed by Akatsuki, leading to Team 3 pulling a BigDamnHeroes to save him and his team.]]
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* SitcomArchnemisis: Towards Jiraiya: While they actually fought eatch other during the Third Shinobi War, their rivalry is about their literary work. Jiraiya mocks Roshi for his low sales figures, whereas Roshi accueses Jiraiya's work of [[SexSells only selling because it's smut]].
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* SitcomArchnemisis: SitcomArchnemesis: Towards Jiraiya: While they actually fought eatch other in a NoodleIncident during the Third Shinobi War, their rivalry is about their literary work. Jiraiya mocks Roshi for his low sales figures, whereas Roshi accueses Jiraiya's work of [[SexSells only selling because it's smut]].
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* BirdsOfAFeather: He and Hiruzen hit it off surprisingly good, as two old warriors who cautiosly try to pursue peace.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: He and Hiruzen hit it off surprisingly good, as two old warriors who cautiosly cautiously try to pursue peace.
* [[spoiler:DeathByAdaptaion: He is killed by Suzumebachi after losing his position in a duel.]]
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Hailing from the prestigious but decimated Kurogane-Clan, Risho's defining trait in his first appearances is his [[FantasticRacism buring hatred of Konoha]]. During the Chunin exams [[spoiler:He fights and defeats Kiba, but loses to Naruto, kicking of his CharacterDevelopment]]
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* PennyAmogDiamonds: He is a civilian-born siniobi on a team with the Tsuchikage's granddaughter and a scion of one of Iwa's most prestigious clans.
* PoisonousPerson: He utilziesn differen kinds of piosons in his fighting style.
* PoisonousPerson: He utilziesn differen kinds of piosons in his fighting style.
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* NiceMeanAndInBetween: In contrast to the cordial Kurotsuchi and the {{Jerkass}} Risho, he starts out as hostile towards Team 3, but quickly mellows out as he teaches Naruto how to fish.
* PennyAmongDiamonds: He is a civilian-born siniobi on a team with the Tsuchikage's granddaughter and a scion of one of Iwa's most prestigious clans.
* PoisonousPerson: He utilziesn differen kinds of piosons in his fighting style.
* PennyAmongDiamonds: He is a civilian-born siniobi on a team with the Tsuchikage's granddaughter and a scion of one of Iwa's most prestigious clans.
* PoisonousPerson: He utilziesn differen kinds of piosons in his fighting style.
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The Sandaime Tsuchikage and Korutsuchi's grandfather. [[spoiler:Following Han's report of their C-Rank mission, he cautiosly tries to open relations with Konoha, even having Iwa-Genin participate in the Chunin-exams.]]
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[[folder: Roshi]]
The Yonbi's jinchūriki, a jonin of Iwa and a critically acclaimed, but not sucessful author. [[spoiler:He arrives in Konoha before the final Chunin-exam-fights to train Kurotsuchi with Lava-release, and then gets caught up in the Sand/Sound-Invasion, like the other Iwa-Nin.]]
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[[folder: Roshi]]
The Yonbi's jinchūriki, a jonin of Iwa and a critically acclaimed, but not sucessful author. [[spoiler:He arrives in Konoha before the final Chunin-exam-fights to train Kurotsuchi with Lava-release, and then gets caught up in the Sand/Sound-Invasion, like the other Iwa-Nin.]]
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The Sandaime Tsuchikage and Korutsuchi's grandfather. [[spoiler:Following Han's report of their C-Rank mission, he cautiosly tries to open relations with Konoha, even having Iwa-Genin participate in the Chunin-exams.]]
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[[folder: Roshi]]
The Yonbi's jinchūriki, a jonin of Iwa and a critically acclaimed, but not sucessful author. [[spoiler:He arrives in Konoha before the final Chunin-exam-fights to train Kurotsuchi with Lava-release, and then gets After getting caught up in the Sand/Sound-Invasion, like Sound/Sand invation, he and the other Iwa-Nin.]] Iwa-nin side with Konoha.]]
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[[folder: Roshi]]
The Yonbi's jinchūriki, a jonin of Iwa and a critically acclaimed, but not sucessful author. [[spoiler:He arrives in Konoha before the final Chunin-exam-fights to train Kurotsuchi with Lava-release, and then gets
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* BirdsOfAFeather: He and Hiruzen hit it off surprisingly good, as two old warriors who cautiosly try to pursue peace.
* CoolOldGuy: Still on top of his game.
* CrackOhMyBack: Has this happen to him quite frequently.
* DirtyOldMan: He is surprisingly crass.
->'''Onoki:''' The exam this year was also convenient for me personally as well. Kurotsuchi had been begging to become chūnin recently, so I finally decided to end her bitching and just send her team to the exams.
* [[spoiler:DeathByAdaptaion: He is killed by Suzumebachi after losing his position in a duel.]]
* UnrelatedInTheAdaptation: He is not the Shodai Tsuchikage's grandson, as in canon, in order to aviod a relation to the Kamizuru-siblings.
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[[folder: Roshi]]
The Yonbi's jinchūriki, a jonin of Iwa and a critically acclaimed, but not sucessful author. [[spoiler:He arrives in Konoha before the final Chunin-exam-fights to train Kurotsuchi with Lava-release, and then gets caught up in the Sand/Sound-Invasion, like the other Iwa-Nin.]]
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: He makes his first appearance during the Chunin-Exams.
* BirdsOfAFeather: He and Hiruzen hit it off surprisingly good, as two old warriors who cautiosly try to pursue peace.
* CoolOldGuy: Still on top of his game.
* CrackOhMyBack: Has this happen to him quite frequently.
* DirtyOldMan: He is surprisingly crass.
->'''Onoki:''' The exam this year was also convenient for me personally as well. Kurotsuchi had been begging to become chūnin recently, so I finally decided to end her bitching and just send her team to the exams.
* [[spoiler:DeathByAdaptaion: He is killed by Suzumebachi after losing his position in a duel.]]
* UnrelatedInTheAdaptation: He is not the Shodai Tsuchikage's grandson, as in canon, in order to aviod a relation to the Kamizuru-siblings.
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[[folder: Roshi]]
The Yonbi's jinchūriki, a jonin of Iwa and a critically acclaimed, but not sucessful author. [[spoiler:He arrives in Konoha before the final Chunin-exam-fights to train Kurotsuchi with Lava-release, and then gets caught up in the Sand/Sound-Invasion, like the other Iwa-Nin.]]
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: He makes his first appearance during the Chunin-Exams.
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* StraightManAndWiseGuy: He is the still somewhat reserved and dour StraightMan towards Roshi's WiseGuy.
Wise Guy.
* GenreSavy: She is among the first to notice Narutos resemblance to the Yondaime Hokage.
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! Onoki
The Sandaime Tsuchikage and Korutsuchi's grandfather. [[spoiler:Following Han's report of their C-Rank mission, he cautiosly tries to open relations with Konoha, even having Iwa-Genin participate in the Chunin-exams.]]
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[[folder: Onoki]]
! Onoki
The Sandaime Tsuchikage and Korutsuchi's grandfather. [[spoiler:Following Han's report of their C-Rank mission, he cautiosly tries to open relations with Konoha, even having Iwa-Genin participate in the Chunin-exams.]]
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* StraightManAndWiseGuy: He is the more affable and relaxed WiseGuy towards Han's StraightMan.
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* SitcomArchnemisis: Towards Jiraiya: While they actually fought eatch other during the Third Shinobi War, their rivalry is about their literary work. Jiraiya mocks Roshi for his low sales figures, whereas Roshi accueses Jiraiya's work of [[SexSells only selling because it's smut]].
* StraightManAndWiseGuy: He is the more affable and relaxedWiseGuy Wise Guy towards Han's StraightMan.
* StraightManAndWiseGuy: He is the more affable and relaxed
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[[folder: Roshi]]
The Yonbi's jinchūriki, a jonin of Iwa and a critically acclaimed, but not sucessful author. [[spoiler:He arrives in Konoha before the final Chunin-exam-fights to train Kurotsuchi with Lava-release, and then gets caught up in the Sand/Sound-Invasion, like the other Iwa-Nin.]]
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Instead of WalkingTheEarth like in canon, he stays in Iwa and becomes Han's best friends.
* CoolOldGuy: He is "only" in his mid-fifties, which is still rather old for an active shinobi.
* StraightManAndWiseGuy: He is the more affable and relaxed WiseGuy towards Han's StraightMan.
Other Iwa-Nin
[[folder: Roshi]]
The Yonbi's jinchūriki, a jonin of Iwa and a critically acclaimed, but not sucessful author. [[spoiler:He arrives in Konoha before the final Chunin-exam-fights to train Kurotsuchi with Lava-release, and then gets caught up in the Sand/Sound-Invasion, like the other Iwa-Nin.]]
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Instead of WalkingTheEarth like in canon, he stays in Iwa and becomes Han's best friends.
* CoolOldGuy: He is "only" in his mid-fifties, which is still rather old for an active shinobi.
* StraightManAndWiseGuy: He is the more affable and relaxed WiseGuy towards Han's StraightMan.
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The jinchūriki of the Gobi, a jonin from Iwagakure and Jonin-Sensei of Kurotsuchi, Risho and Roto. Team 3 meets his Team during their first C-Rank mission [[spoiler:after wich he is promply attacked by Akatsuki]]. His team later participates in the Chunin Exams held in Konoha.
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The jinchūriki of the Gobi, a jonin from Iwagakure and Jonin-Sensei of Kurotsuchi, Risho and Roto. Team 3 meets his Team during their first C-Rank mission [[spoiler:after wich which he is promply attacked by Akatsuki]]. His team later participates in the Chunin Exams held in Konoha.
* FriendsTurnedRomanticRivals: {{Downplayed}} with [[spoiler:Naruto]]. Both of them warm up to each other, before Roto starts chrushing on [[spoiler:Hinata]]. [[spoiler:Naruto's envy over this actually helps him realise his feelings for Hinata.]]
* PennyAmogDiamonds: He is a civilian-born siniobi on a team with the Tsuchikage's granddaughter and a scion of one of Iwa's most prestigious clans.
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* FallenPrincess: {{Genderflipped.}} [[spoiler:While losing to Naruto doesn't get him disinherited, he is still forced to move owt of his clan's compound, taking up residence with Roto and his family.]]
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* FallenPrincess: {{Genderflipped.}} {{Genderflipped}}. [[spoiler:While losing to Naruto doesn't get him disinherited, he is still forced to move owt of his clan's compound, taking up residence with Roto and his family.]]
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* PiosonousPerson: He utilziesn differen kinds of piosons in his fighting style.
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* PiosonousPerson: PoisonousPerson: He utilziesn differen kinds of piosons in his fighting style.
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Hailing from the prestigious but decimated Kurogane-Clan, Risho's defining trait in his first appearances is his [[FantasticRacism buring hatred of Konoha]].
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Hailing from the prestigious but decimated Kurogane-Clan, Risho's defining trait in his first appearances is his [[FantasticRacism buring hatred of Konoha]]. During the Chunin exams [[spoiler:He fights and defeats Kiba, but loses to Naruto, kicking of his CharacterDevelopment]]
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* FallenPrincess: Genderflipped.
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* DefrostingIceKing: Kurotsuchi later mentions that he mellowed out after being kicked out by his {{Jerkass}}-family.
* FallenPrincess:Genderflipped.{{Genderflipped.}} [[spoiler:While losing to Naruto doesn't get him disinherited, he is still forced to move owt of his clan's compound, taking up residence with Roto and his family.]]
* {{Jerkass}}: His defiuning trait in his first appearences: He not only displays FantasticRacism towards Konoha, but also looks down on his teammate Roto because he's not from a Shinobi-family.
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* {{Jerkass}}: His defiuning trait in his first appearences: He not only displays FantasticRacism towards Konoha, but also looks down on his teammate Roto because he's not from a Shinobi-family.
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* OriginalCharacter: An original creation, like the entire Kurogane-clan and his teammate Roto.
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[[folder: Roto Yowamusi]]
!! Roto
A civilian-born genin from Iwagakure and Kurotsuchi's and Risho's teammate. He takes part in the Chunin exams [[spoiler:where he is beaten by Kiba]]. He also develops a crush on [[spoiler.Hinata]].
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*PiosonousPerson: He utilziesn differen kinds of piosons in his fighting style.
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The jinchūriki of the Gobi, a jonin from Iwagakure and Jonin-Sensei of Kurotsuchi, Rishio and Roto. Team 3 meets his Team during their first C-Rank mission [[spoiler:after wich he is promply attacked by Akatsuki]]. His team later participates in the Chunin Exams held in Konoha.
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The jinchūriki of the Gobi, a jonin from Iwagakure and Jonin-Sensei of Kurotsuchi, Rishio Risho and Roto. Team 3 meets his Team during their first C-Rank mission [[spoiler:after wich he is promply attacked by Akatsuki]]. His team later participates in the Chunin Exams held in Konoha.
* AdaptationalBadass: She is shown to use the [[spoiler:Dust Release]] after the timeskip.
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* MirrorCharakter: She takes in parts of Gaara as a Shinobi from a foreign village befriended by Naruto. She also has familial ties to the current Kage and wishes to herself become Kage of her village. The latter is also somes mirrored by Naruto himself.
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* MirrorCharakter: MirrorCharacter: She takes in after parts of Gaara as a Shinobi from a foreign village befriended by Naruto. She also has familial ties to the current Kage and wishes to herself become Kage of her village. The latter is also somes mirrored by Naruto himself.
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* NiceMeanAndInBetween: Among her teammates, the {{Jerkass}} Risho and the slowly [[DefrostingIceKing defrosting]] Roto, she is the quickest to accept the Konoha_nin during their fisrt time together.
* RelationshipUpgrade: She enters a LongDistanceRelationship with [[spoiler:Shikamaru]] during Naruto's birthday party.
* ShipTease: With [[spoiler:Shikamaru]]. She even visits him and his partens for a dressed-up dinner.
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[[folder: Risho Kurogane]]
!!Risho Kurogane
Hailing from the prestigious but decimated Kurogane-Clan, Risho's defining trait in his first appearances is his [[FantasticRacism buring hatred of Konoha]].
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* ArrogantKungFuGuy: He is very confident in his skills, which only is only somewhat justified.
* FallenPrincess: Genderflipped.
* MirrorCharacter: To Kiba, who has also lost a lot of Clan-members during the Thrid Shinobi War, and hates Iwa because of it. He also is one to Neji and Sasuke, with the Kurogane-Clan being inspired by overly-evil portrails of the Uchia or Hyuga-Clan.
* NiceMeanAndInBetween: Among her teammates, the {{Jerkass}} Risho and the slowly [[DefrostingIceKing defrosting]] Roto, she is the quickest to accept the Konoha_nin during their fisrt time together.
* RelationshipUpgrade: She enters a LongDistanceRelationship with [[spoiler:Shikamaru]] during Naruto's birthday party.
* ShipTease: With [[spoiler:Shikamaru]]. She even visits him and his partens for a dressed-up dinner.
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[[folder: Risho Kurogane]]
!!Risho Kurogane
Hailing from the prestigious but decimated Kurogane-Clan, Risho's defining trait in his first appearances is his [[FantasticRacism buring hatred of Konoha]].
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* ArrogantKungFuGuy: He is very confident in his skills, which only is only somewhat justified.
* FallenPrincess: Genderflipped.
* MirrorCharacter: To Kiba, who has also lost a lot of Clan-members during the Thrid Shinobi War, and hates Iwa because of it. He also is one to Neji and Sasuke, with the Kurogane-Clan being inspired by overly-evil portrails of the Uchia or Hyuga-Clan.
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The jinchūriki of the Gobi, a jonin from Iwagakure and Jonin-Sensei of Kurotsuchi, Rishio and Roto. Team 3 meets his Team during their first C-Rank mission [[spoiler:after wich he is promply attaced by Akatsuki]]. His team later participates in the Chunin Exams held in Konoha.
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The jinchūriki of the Gobi, a jonin from Iwagakure and Jonin-Sensei of Kurotsuchi, Rishio and Roto. Team 3 meets his Team during their first C-Rank mission [[spoiler:after wich he is promply attaced attacked by Akatsuki]]. His team later participates in the Chunin Exams held in Konoha.
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[[folder: Kurotsuchi]]
!Kurotsuchi
The Sandaime Tsuchikage's granddaughter and a jonin of Han. She meets Team 3 during their first C-Rank mission, striking up somewhat of a friendship with them. She later participates in the Chunin-exams, [[spoiler:where she is beaten by Naruto]].
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: She shows up numerous times during part one, where in canon she appears first during the Five-Kage-Summit.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul:
** She is Han's student in this fic, whereas their canon relastionship remains unkown.
** She replaces [[spoiler:Temari]] as [[spoiler:Shikamaru's]] LoveInterest.
* GreyAndGreyMorality: Her calling the Yondaime Hokage (who ''did'' kill ''a thousand'' Iwa-Nin during a single battle in Third Shinobi War) a mass-murderer is the first thing that gets Naruto to consider other Villages' perspectives.
* MirrorCharakter: She takes in parts of Gaara as a Shinobi from a foreign village befriended by Naruto. She also has familial ties to the current Kage and wishes to herself become Kage of her village. The latter is also somes mirrored by Naruto himself.
[[folder: Kurotsuchi]]
!Kurotsuchi
The Sandaime Tsuchikage's granddaughter and a jonin of Han. She meets Team 3 during their first C-Rank mission, striking up somewhat of a friendship with them. She later participates in the Chunin-exams, [[spoiler:where she is beaten by Naruto]].
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: She shows up numerous times during part one, where in canon she appears first during the Five-Kage-Summit.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul:
** She is Han's student in this fic, whereas their canon relastionship remains unkown.
** She replaces [[spoiler:Temari]] as [[spoiler:Shikamaru's]] LoveInterest.
* GreyAndGreyMorality: Her calling the Yondaime Hokage (who ''did'' kill ''a thousand'' Iwa-Nin during a single battle in Third Shinobi War) a mass-murderer is the first thing that gets Naruto to consider other Villages' perspectives.
* MirrorCharakter: She takes in parts of Gaara as a Shinobi from a foreign village befriended by Naruto. She also has familial ties to the current Kage and wishes to herself become Kage of her village. The latter is also somes mirrored by Naruto himself.
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[[folder: Han]]
!!Han
The jinchūriki of the Gobi, a jonin from Iwagakure and Jonin-Sensei of Kurotsuchi, Rishio and Roto. Team 3 meets his Team during their first C-Rank mission [[spoiler:after wich he is promply attaced by Akatsuki]]. His team later participates in the Chunin Exams held in Konoha.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Team 3 meets his team during their first C-Rank Mission.
* AdaptationExpansion: He tells Naruto a story of how [[spoiler:he lost control of the gobi while defending a fort during the Thrid Shinobi War, killing every single person within it.]]
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul:
** He is the Jonin-Sensei of Kurotsuchi, while their canon relationship is unkown.
** He becomes something of a big-brother like figure to Naruto, leading the latter to call him "Han-nii".
* BadassInDistress: After taking over as the escort for a merchant traveling to Tsuchi no Kuni from Team 3, he propmply [[spoiler:gets ambushed by Akatsuki, leading to Team 3 pulling a BigDamnHeroes to save him and his team.
* DefrostingIceKing: He starts off cold and aloof towards everone but Roshi, but after seeing the acceptance of Naruto's friends and his own Genin's loyalty to him, he starts to gradually warm up.
* HiddenDepths: He enjoyes drawing an dis actually very good at it.
* HumansAreTheRealMonsters: Han's initial stance, seeing himself as a jinchūriki and not a human. He gets better...
* MirrorCharacter: He replaces Gaara as the first other jinchūriki Naruto meets. Due to him having some control over his Bjuu, he actually teaches Naruto a little bit on how to control the Kyubi's chakra.
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[[folder: Han]]
!!Han
The jinchūriki of the Gobi, a jonin from Iwagakure and Jonin-Sensei of Kurotsuchi, Rishio and Roto. Team 3 meets his Team during their first C-Rank mission [[spoiler:after wich he is promply attaced by Akatsuki]]. His team later participates in the Chunin Exams held in Konoha.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Team 3 meets his team during their first C-Rank Mission.
* AdaptationExpansion: He tells Naruto a story of how [[spoiler:he lost control of the gobi while defending a fort during the Thrid Shinobi War, killing every single person within it.]]
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul:
** He is the Jonin-Sensei of Kurotsuchi, while their canon relationship is unkown.
** He becomes something of a big-brother like figure to Naruto, leading the latter to call him "Han-nii".
* BadassInDistress: After taking over as the escort for a merchant traveling to Tsuchi no Kuni from Team 3, he propmply [[spoiler:gets ambushed by Akatsuki, leading to Team 3 pulling a BigDamnHeroes to save him and his team.
* DefrostingIceKing: He starts off cold and aloof towards everone but Roshi, but after seeing the acceptance of Naruto's friends and his own Genin's loyalty to him, he starts to gradually warm up.
* HiddenDepths: He enjoyes drawing an dis actually very good at it.
* HumansAreTheRealMonsters: Han's initial stance, seeing himself as a jinchūriki and not a human. He gets better...
* MirrorCharacter: He replaces Gaara as the first other jinchūriki Naruto meets. Due to him having some control over his Bjuu, he actually teaches Naruto a little bit on how to control the Kyubi's chakra.
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