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* IronicName: Between his black hair and penchant for black clothes, it is kind of strange that his name means "white".
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* FaceHeelTurn: Subverted. While he leaves the police to join the Black Tigers, he is also instrumental in convincing the gang to go legit.
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* RebelPrince: Downplayed. Sion did run away from his responsibilities and privileges, but he hasn't cut ties with his family entirely, and while his family obviously don't ''approve'' of him working as a common mercenary, they do display some pride when he starts making headlines.
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* WhiteHairedPrettyBoy: Subverted. Leton has long, beautiful white hear and very beautiful facial features, but he is constantly hunched over and his motions have a fluidity that lends them a creepy, inhuman quality.
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* CombatMedic: She's primarily a healer, attacks are weak but quite accurate and [[ManaDrain drain Vigor]] from their targets, and both of her class promotionsbut refuses to just stick to the sidelines and play support (and joins the company for this exact reason). Her basic attacks are weak but quite accurate and [[ManaDrain drain Vigor from their targets]], and both of her class promotions provide additional options for disabling and inhibiting enemies.
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* CombatMedic: She's primarily a healer, attacks are weak but quite accurate and [[ManaDrain drain Vigor]] from their targets, and both of her class promotionsbut refuses to just stick to the sidelines and play support (and joins the company for this exact reason). Her basic attacks are weak but quite accurate and [[ManaDrain drain Vigor from their targets]], and both of her class promotions provide additional options for disabling and inhibiting enemies.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Has dark hair, normally wears all black, and can wield a variety of intimidating swords, but he's a [[SociallyAwkwardHero socially-awkward]] NiceGuy and supporter of justice through-and-through. This gets [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] early on, when Irene instantly pegs him as a criminal during their first meeting.
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* BadassBystander: His first meeting with Albus is helping the latter fight off a Spoonist attack [[LostFoodGrievance because it interrupted his dinner]]. Albus recognizes his potential and hires him as an apprentice Troubleshooter, a role he quickly takes to.
* BigEater: His recruitment cutscene has him packing away an entire*stack* ''stack'' of bowls of food.food. He even has a hidden Synergy talent that increases his RelationshipValues with other characters when he eats meals with them.
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* GlassCannon: Sion's attacks put out a lot of damage and he's one of the go-to characters for taking out groups of opponents at once, but his defenses and mobility are mediocre at best, and many of his abilities require him to get dangerously close to the enemy. His Battle Mage class promotion transitions him into more of a JackOfAllStats, while his Black Mage promotion keeps the [[SquishyWizard squishiness]] in favor of emphasizing his nuking potential even more.
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* SquishyWizard: Anne sports powerful healing and buffing abilities that let her effectively run support for the entire team, but her HP and defense growths are far and away the worst of the playable cast.
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* SkunkStripe: Has a prominent white streak in her otherwise red hair.
* DiseaseBleach: Heixing's hair is primarily white with a black stripe. Flashbacks show that it used to be primarily black, with the change occurring while being tortured in the Fortress of Suffering.
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* SkunkStripe: Inverted, Heixing's hair is white with a black stripe.
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* TheLeader: He's the main protagonist and focal character of the story, as well as boss of his own Troubleshooter Company
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* FieryRedhead: Both figuratively (she's got quite the temper) and [[ElementalHairColors figuratively]] (thanks to her fire magic).
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An associate of the Bloodwalker family, also known as the Crimson Crow.
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* TheCutie: Anne is an absolute sweetheart, whom everyone likes, including wild Timas and [[spoiler:Luna]]. Everyone adores and looks after Anne.
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* FieryRedhead: Inverted. Anne's hair is auburn, in contrast to Irene's bright red, but where Irene is a brash, impulsive powerhouse, Irene is a timid, kind-hearted healer.
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* FieryRedhead: Inverted. Anne's hair is auburn, in contrast to Irene's bright red, but where Irene is a brash, impulsive powerhouse, Irene Anne is a timid, kind-hearted healer.
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* CombatStilettos: Never wears shoes with anything less than a three-inch heel. She gets called on it.
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* FieryRedhead: Inverted. Anne's hair is auburn, in contrast to Irene's bright red, but where Irene is a brash, impulsive powerhouse, Irene is a timid, kind-hearted healer.
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Anne has trouble coming to terms with that she is significantly younger than the rest of the team, and that her abilities are less combat-oriented. Both the rest of the team and civilians she meets reassure her that her healing skills have saved the day countless times, but sadly, it doesn't seem to stick.
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Anne has trouble coming to terms with that she is significantly younger than the rest of the team, and that her abilities are less combat-oriented. Both the rest of the team and civilians she meets reassure her that her healing skills have saved the day countless times, but sadly, it doesn't seem to stick.
* SkunkStripe: Inverted, Heixing's hair is white with a black stripe.
* DumbBlonde: Subverted. Ray loves to act cheerful and ditzy, but is [[HadToBeSharp a survivor of the mean streets of Alley]], a skilled artist and a surprisingly capable organizer and strategist.
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* WhoWearsShortShorts: Ray wears short shorts! She complements them with [[ProperTightsWithASkirt black, paint-spattered tights, though.]]
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* StockingFiller: Wears them as part of her standard outfit, no doubt to fit in with her "aristocratic sexpot" aesthetic.
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* BrokenPedestal: Albus was really excited to do his apprenticeship with a huge troubleshooting company, and spent lots of time putting together his presentation and outfit. He got immediately sent home and told to change into something less restrictive. He then started out working, but was shunted off into doing paperwork, and began to routinely show up late and slack off... only to find that no-one actually cared. Needless to say, he had reasons to go into business for himself.
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* FieryRedhead: Both figuratively (she's got quite the temper) and [[ElementalHairColors figuratively]] (thanks to her fire magic).
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* IneffectualLoner: Early on, she repeatedly rejects Albus and Sion's offers to join their company and become an official Troubleshooter, feeling it'll get in the way of her crimefighting efforts. She ends up being too late to contribute meaningfully to several fights with the Spoonists as a result, at one point indirectly leading to the death of several Valhalla police officers. She ultimately realizes she's been going about it wrong and joins Albus' company.
* KickChick: While Irene will use her arms to block incoming attacks, the vast majority of her martial arts moves are kick-based.
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* IronicName: Bianca is the "Black Witch", but both her names mean "white".
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* ProperTightsWithASkirt: In accordance with her PerkyGoth-aesthetic, she wears a short, pleated black skirt with opaque black tights under.
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* CuteGirlWithPsychoWeapon: A pink-haired GothicLolita who wields a massive chainsaw.
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* CowboyCop: Is a bit too fond of running off-the-books ops for his superiors' comfort. Granted, they are also often the targets of said ops...
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* DeathbringerTheAdorable: Sion Bloodwalker is a great villain name, only amplified by the fact that he has [[PsychoElectro lightning powers]]... but Sion is a goofy, perpetually smiling BigEater with a tendency towards fanboyism.
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* DeathbringerTheAdorable: Sion Bloodwalker is a great villain name, only amplified by the fact that he has [[PsychoElectro lightning powers]]... but Sion is a goofy, perpetually smiling BigEater smiling, [[BigEater dumpling-loving]] {{Keet}} with a tendency towards fanboyism.
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Sion isn't a picky eater, but given a choice, it's always going to be dumplings.
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* LongLostRelative: Is actually Albus' uncle. He adresses Albus' mother's gravestone as "sister-in-law".
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* UncannyFamilyResemblance: Has the exact same black hair and bright green eyes as his nephew.
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* DeathbringerTheAdorable: Sion Bloodwalker is a great villain name, only amplified by the fact that he has [[PsychoElectro lightning powers]]... but Sion is a goofy, perpetually smiling BigEater with a tendency towards fanboyism.
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* AncestralWeapon: She inherited her Sniper Rifle from her grandfather.
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* ImprobableWeaponUser: She throws exploding spray paint cans at enemies.
