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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: [[spoiler:On the anti-MSY magical girls who shot down the airplane that she and her lover Akari were on, and for indirectly causing her to discover about the witching, which made Akari's death worse, thus making the revenge even worse for the anti-MSY girls.]]
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* ItGetsEasier: As a result of centuries of leading MSY, including its black ops. [[spoiler:When she finds out the truth about witches, Homura remarks how she handled it better with decades unders her belt. And centuries laters when she re-discovers the truth by regaining sealed memories, she finds it unsettling that that it got even more easier.]]
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* GoneHorriblyRight: [[spoiler:Grigori [=DeWitt=] wanted to create magical girls via mass cloning, Sacnite was the only success. Whose wish was that someone would stop the whole cloning project and save them. Cue the SOS signal and Governance intervention.]]
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* FakeMemories: [[spoiler:All the memories of her childhood are actually from the original Sacnite and implanted in her while she was growing in a tank.]]
* FakeMemories: [[spoiler:All the memories of her childhood are actually from the original Sacnite and implanted in her while she was growing in a tank.]]
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* ExplosiveLeash: Has suicide implants implanted in her brain to force her to serve [[spoiler:the Ordo Magii Illustrata. [[spoiler:Her Her magic would had automatically protected her from the effects of the implant, implant's effects, but she didn't know that.]]
* FakeMemories: [[spoiler:Allthe memories of her childhood memories are actually from the original Sacnite and implanted in her while she was growing in a tank.]]
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* FountainOfYouth: After X-25, [[spoiler:the MHD made her take on an eight‐and‐a‐half eight-and-a&-half years old body, closer to her actual mental age, until she can get new life experiences to replace her losing false memories that made most of her "childhood".]]
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* ExplosiveLeash: Has suicide implants implanted in her brain to force her to serve the [[spoiler:the Ordo Magii Illustrata. [[spoiler:Her magic would had automatically protected her from the effects of the implant, but she didn't know that.]]
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!'''Other Characters'''
[[folder:Ryouko's family]]
!!'''Nakase Kuroi'''
->''"It's a life of misery, Ryouko."''
Ryouko's mother. She wants her daughter to stay out of trouble, namely by keeping her from becoming a Magical Girl [[spoiler:by any means necessary, including sabotaging the family's funds until Ryouko was past contracting age to lower the chance. She's also a '''true''' former Magical Girl, in that she has absolutely no powers anymore. Her experiences as a Magical Girl lead her to start a project that ultimately resulted in clones of each girl being created in case one loses her body but still has an intact soul gem.]]
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* CloningBlues: [[spoiler:She's the clone of an actual Sacnite Tafani. Both the original and her parents completely ignores about this Sacnite's existence.]]
* ExplosiveLeash: Has suicide implants implanted in her brain to force her to serve the Ordo Magii Illustrata. [[spoiler:Her magic would had automatically protected her from the effects of the implant, but she didn't know that.]]
* FakeMemories: [[spoiler:All the memories of her childhood are actually from the original Sacnite and implanted in her while she was growing in a tank.]]
* ForcedIntoEvil: She's forced to work for [=DeWitt=]'s cult against her will via threat of death by suicide implants.
* FountainOfYouth: After X-25, [[spoiler:the MHD made her take on an eight‐and‐a‐half years old body, closer to her actual mental age, until she can get new life experiences to replace her losing false memories that made most of her "childhood".]]
* GoneHorriblyRight: [[spoiler:Grigori [=DeWitt=] wanted to create magical girls via mass cloning, Sacnite was the only success. Whose wish was that someone would stop the whole cloning project and save them.]]
* HappilyAdopted: [[spoiler:After X-25, Nakase Shizuki adopted Sacnite, making her Ryouko's de facto little sister.]]
* IdentityAmnesia: [[spoiler:Her fake memories of her childhood starts disappearing with time passing, as her soul reject those memories that it didn't lived.]]
* MeaningfulRename: The MHD is still pondering if she should get one [[spoiler:to help her mentally differentiate herself from her original. While her first name seems to have stuck, it's possible that her last name changed with her adoption by Nakase.]]
* PowerNullifier: Her main power is the ability to jam telepathy and clairvoyance in a wide radius around her. It makes infiltrating teams of magical girls extremely difficult, as clairvoyants can't scout what's ahead, telepaths can't communicate beyond a few meters (and she can tracks attempts at long-range telepathy back at their source) and teleporters are strongly limited (as they use an instinctive limited form of clairvoyance to avoid teleporting into a wall)
* Telepathy: Her secondary power.
* YoungerThanTheyLook: [[spoiler:She looks like being 14, like a typical magical girl, but she's actually *four years old*.]]
* WalkingSpoiler: It's almost impossible to talk about her without revealing [[spoiler:the mass cloning project going on at X-25.]]
[[/folder]]
!'''Other Characters'''
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!!'''Nakase Kuroi'''
->''"It's a life of misery, Ryouko."''
Ryouko's mother. She wants her daughter to stay out of trouble, namely by keeping her from becoming a Magical Girl [[spoiler:by any means necessary, including sabotaging the family's funds until Ryouko was past contracting age to lower the chance. She's also a '''true''' former Magical Girl, in that she has absolutely no powers anymore. Her experiences as a Magical Girl lead her to start a project that ultimately resulted in clones of each girl being created in case one loses her body but still has an intact soul gem.]]
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* ExplosiveLeash: Has suicide implants implanted in her brain to force her to serve the Ordo Magii Illustrata. [[spoiler:Her magic would had automatically protected her from the effects of the implant, but she didn't know that.]]
* FakeMemories: [[spoiler:All the memories of her childhood are actually from the original Sacnite and implanted in her while she was growing in a tank.]]
* ForcedIntoEvil: She's forced to work for [=DeWitt=]'s cult against her will via threat of death by suicide implants.
* FountainOfYouth: After X-25, [[spoiler:the MHD made her take on an eight‐and‐a‐half years old body, closer to her actual mental age, until she can get new life experiences to replace her losing false memories that made most of her "childhood".]]
* GoneHorriblyRight: [[spoiler:Grigori [=DeWitt=] wanted to create magical girls via mass cloning, Sacnite was the only success. Whose wish was that someone would stop the whole cloning project and save them.]]
* HappilyAdopted: [[spoiler:After X-25, Nakase Shizuki adopted Sacnite, making her Ryouko's de facto little sister.]]
* IdentityAmnesia: [[spoiler:Her fake memories of her childhood starts disappearing with time passing, as her soul reject those memories that it didn't lived.]]
* MeaningfulRename: The MHD is still pondering if she should get one [[spoiler:to help her mentally differentiate herself from her original. While her first name seems to have stuck, it's possible that her last name changed with her adoption by Nakase.]]
* PowerNullifier: Her main power is the ability to jam telepathy and clairvoyance in a wide radius around her. It makes infiltrating teams of magical girls extremely difficult, as clairvoyants can't scout what's ahead, telepaths can't communicate beyond a few meters (and she can tracks attempts at long-range telepathy back at their source) and teleporters are strongly limited (as they use an instinctive limited form of clairvoyance to avoid teleporting into a wall)
* Telepathy: Her secondary power.
* YoungerThanTheyLook: [[spoiler:She looks like being 14, like a typical magical girl, but she's actually *four years old*.]]
* WalkingSpoiler: It's almost impossible to talk about her without revealing [[spoiler:the mass cloning project going on at X-25.]]
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!'''Other Characters'''
[[folder:Ryouko's family]]
!!'''Nakase Kuroi'''
->''"It's a life of misery, Ryouko."''
Ryouko's mother. She wants her daughter to stay out of trouble, namely by keeping her from becoming a Magical Girl [[spoiler:by any means necessary, including sabotaging the family's funds until Ryouko was past contracting age to lower the chance. She's also a '''true''' former Magical Girl, in that she has absolutely no powers anymore. Her experiences as a Magical Girl lead her to start a project that ultimately resulted in clones of each girl being created in case one loses her body but still has an intact soul gem.]]
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* TheseAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: [[spoiler:In her research to substitute magic with technology, she created an isolation device in which grief cubes revert to their original pre-Madoka forms, bringing along the thankfully contained witch corruption, and she has only has the vaguest of ideas for why it happens.]]
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* TheseAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: [[spoiler:In her research to substitute magic with technology, she created an isolation device in which grief cubes revert to their original pre-Madoka forms, bringing along the thankfully contained witch corruption, and she has only has the vaguest of ideas for why it happens.]]
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* [[spoiler:DarkAndTroubledPast: Was not ready for the responsibility of being a Magical Girl and fighting Demons at ''all''. She ends up getting her body destroyed when her sister gets involved on a hunt. Said past is part of what drives her motives to keep Ryouko from becoming one.]]
* [[spoiler:ChunkySalsaRule[=/=]LudicrousGibs: The end result of her last fight against Demons, leading to both her sister's wish and the clone project.]]
* [[spoiler:DarkAndTroubledPast: Was not ready for the responsibility of being a Magical Girl and fighting Demons at ''all''. She ends up getting her body destroyed when her sister gets involved on a hunt. Said past is part of what drives her motives to keep Ryouko from becoming one.]]
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*[[spoiler:DarkAndTroubledPast: Was DarkAndTroubledPast: [[spoiler:Was not ready for the responsibility of being a Magical Girl and fighting Demons at ''all''.''at all''. She ends up getting her body destroyed when her sister gets involved on a hunt. Said past is part of what drives her motives to keep Ryouko from becoming one.]]
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* [[spoiler:LaserGuidedAmnesia: When LaserGuidedAmnesia: [[spoiler:When Yuma interrogates her about the circumstances of Ryouko's birth, Nakase suddenly feels unwell and Yuma's hidden Black Heart Telepath advises to cease the interrogation since she detected traces of memory manipulation, and signs of possible self-destruct traps.]]
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* CloudCuckooLander: Her regular ramblings and mumblings to herself about a Goddess and a "previous Universe" make her pass as subtly insane by the people around her, [[BunnyEarsLawyer but that didn't interfere in her skills as the MSY's First Executive or her battle prowess]]. [[spoiler: At least until the battle of New Athens, where her surviving her soul gem fading to black made people start to believe what she said about the Goddess, and even spawned an official Cult! Unfortunately, Homura herself didn't take the "miracle" [[DespairEventHorizon nearly]] [[SanitySlippage as well]]...]]
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* CloudCuckooLander: {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Her regular ramblings and mumblings to herself about a Goddess and a "previous Universe" make her pass as subtly insane by the people around her, [[BunnyEarsLawyer but that didn't interfere in her skills as the MSY's First Executive or her battle prowess]]. [[spoiler: At least until the battle of New Athens, where her surviving her soul gem fading to black made people start to believe what she said about the Goddess, and even spawned an official Cult! Unfortunately, Homura herself didn't take the "miracle" [[DespairEventHorizon nearly]] [[SanitySlippage as well]]...]]
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* [[spoiler:OneWingedAngel]]: [[spoiler:After her soul gem fades to black.]]
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* [[spoiler: SanitySlippage]]: SanitySlippage: [[spoiler: The revelation that she can't die after the battle of New Athens left her considerably unhinged. Mami even comments that the events destroyed something within her. It doesn't help that it's explicitly stated that an high soul gem corruption directly affects the sanity of the Magical Girl...]]
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* [[spoiler:MissionFromGod]]: [[spoiler:Madoka gave her one of these through a vision, pulling her out of her despair by giving her something to live for.]]
* [[spoiler:NeverGotToSayGoodbye]]: Salt in the wound.
* [[spoiler:PrayerIsALastResort]]
* [[spoiler:RealityWarper]]: [[spoiler:How her power really works: she has near total control over everything inside her barrier, herself included, letting her use a virtually limitless range of powers, [[MasterOfNone albeit not with the same level of mastery than a specialized Magical Girl]], making her a more limited version than the usual trope.]]
* [[spoiler:MissionFromGod]]: [[spoiler:Madoka gave her one of these through a vision, pulling her out of her despair by giving her something to live for.]]
* [[spoiler:NeverGotToSayGoodbye]]: Salt in the wound.
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* [[spoiler:RealityWarper]]: [[spoiler:How her power really works: she has near total control over everything inside her barrier, herself included, letting her use a virtually limitless range of powers, [[MasterOfNone albeit not with the same level of mastery than a specialized Magical Girl]], making her a more limited version than the usual trope.]]
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* [[spoiler:MedalOfDishonor]]: MedalOfDishonor: [[spoiler:Congratulations for killing your friend! Er, I mean, saving the colony!]]
*[[spoiler:MissionFromGod]]: MissionFromGod: [[spoiler:Madoka gave her one of these through a vision, pulling her out of her despair by giving her something to live for.]]
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* [[spoiler:SurvivorGuilt]]: SurvivorGuilt: Asaka didn't return under the best of circumstances. [[spoiler:After the entire chain of command above her was killed in an alien attack, she [[YouAreInCommandNow was left in charge]] of the remaining human forces. She saved the colony by [[TheChainsOfCommanding sending]] her best friend Alice on a SuicideMission. To make matters worse, it was a [[NeverGotToSayGoodbye a mental command]]. The credit for the victory goes to her, and with it a promotion to Brigadier General and a shiny new medal. Alice, on the other hand, is written off the report. You can't really blame her for being a bit messed up after all that.]]
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* UnwittingPawn: According to [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/to-the-stars-puella-magi-madoka-magica.3927/page-41#post-762195 Word of God]], she was this to [[spoiler:the Goddess in the century and so before Homura arrived in the new universe, acting as her "hitman" and tasked via visions to kill key people to influence events so history will roughly be the same as the old universe(since some of history's key events where caused by Clarisse's witch, Walpurgisnacht, which never existed in the new universe) so the Goddess's friends will be born and live their early lives the same way and Homura won't be too disoriented by the new universe]]. This made her having a much less idealized view of the Goddess than most other members of the Cult of Hope.
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* UnwittingPawn: According to [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/to-the-stars-puella-magi-madoka-magica.3927/page-41#post-762195 Word of God]], she was this to [[spoiler:the Goddess in the century and so before Homura arrived in the new universe, acting as her "hitman" and tasked via visions to kill key people to influence events so history will roughly be the same as the old universe(since universe (since some of history's key events where caused by Clarisse's witch, Walpurgisnacht, which never existed in the new universe) so the Goddess's friends will be born and live their early lives the same way and Homura won't be too disoriented by the new universe]]. This made her having a much less idealized view of the Goddess than most other members of the Cult of Hope.
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* [[spoiler:BusCrash]]: [[spoiler:She was last seen handing her soul gem to Clarisse van Rossum before launching a suicide attack against the last Wormhole Generator core so her soul could be attached to a back-up cloned body, so it was expected to see her come back later in the story. Then it's revealed in a later chapter that her soul gem suffered terminal collapse and disappeared two weeks after the mission. It's strongly suspected that it was an assassination. Then there are hints that her Soul Gem was replaced...]]
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* [[spoiler:BusCrash]]: BusCrash: [[spoiler:She was last seen handing her soul gem to Clarisse van Rossum before launching a suicide attack against the last Wormhole Generator core so her soul could be attached to a back-up cloned body, so it was expected to see her come back later in the story. Then it's revealed in a later chapter that her soul gem suffered terminal collapse and disappeared two weeks after the mission. It's strongly suspected that it was an assassination. Then there are hints that her Soul Gem was replaced...]]
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* [[spoiler:BioAugmentation]]: BioAugmentation: [[spoiler:Like all the members of her colony, she was genetically enhanced before birth to have a body that could fly more easily.]]
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* SexGodess: SexGoddess: She even wrote a book of tips!
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* [[spoiler:CloningBlues: See above.]]
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* [[spoiler:CloningBlues: See CloningBlues: [[spoiler:See above.]]
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* [[spoiler:BioAugmentation: Turns BioAugmentation: [[spoiler:Turns out that she is an heavily altered chimera (in scientific terms) with entire gene-networks of deviations located in her brain that's tasked to do... [[NothingIsScarier something]]. Not even Yuma, the defacto "Big Sister" of all things concerning MSY, has any idea what to make of it.]]
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* [[spoiler:SecretLegacy]]: SecretLegacy: Two of them, in fact. [[spoiler:With a [[UpToEleven third one]] making her a great-great-grandniece of Madoka.]]
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* [[spoiler:LaserGuidedAmnesia]]: [[spoiler:It's heavily implied that she underwent a Reformat somewhere in the past, which made her forget certain events of her past, notably her training to develop mind-reading powers. She still have [[FlashbackNightmare recurrent dreams]] of these events.]]
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* [[spoiler:LaserGuidedAmnesia]]: LaserGuidedAmnesia: [[spoiler:It's heavily implied that she underwent a Reformat somewhere in the past, which made her forget certain events of her past, notably her training to develop mind-reading powers. She still have [[FlashbackNightmare recurrent dreams]] of these events.]]
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* [[spoiler:MomentOfWeakness: Following MomentOfWeakness: [[spoiler:Following the stressful events of X-25 colony that pushed way too many of her buttons, she got heavily introspective of her life and decided to go into deep prayer to calm down, in only recently captured enemy territory, which nearly got her assassinated if not for Ryouko.]]
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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Over 400, but she looks [[LegalJailbait 14]].14.
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* RankUp: [[spoiler:Gets promoted to First Lieutenant after leading the counter-attack against the alien fighters that raided her training cohort's transport ship, and a second time to Captain after her actions in the wormhole mission during the battle of Orpheus.]]
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* RankUp: [[spoiler:Gets promoted to First Lieutenant after leading the counter-attack defense against the alien fighters that raided was raiding her training cohort's transport ship, and a second time to Captain after her actions in the wormhole mission during the battle of Orpheus.]]
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* RankUp: [[spoiler:Gets promoted to First Lieutenant after leading the counter-attack against the alien fighters that raided her training cohort's transport ship, and a second time to Captain after her actions in the wormhole mission during the battle of Orpheus.]]
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* BigBrother: Yuma has a frightening level of control over the government's surveillance systems, having installed [[OverrideCommand backdoors]] into all of them.
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* BigBrother: BigBrotherIsWatching: Yuma has a frightening level of control over the government's surveillance systems, having installed [[OverrideCommand backdoors]] into all of them.
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* FreakyIsCool: She finds [[spoiler:Azazel's body modifications and bio-mechanical wings]] very cool, she's the only one to have that reaction, much to Ryouko and [[spoiler:Azrael herself]]'s surprise. Ryouko muses that it's part of why she wanted to be a xenobiologist.
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* FreakyIsCool: She finds [[spoiler:Azazel's [[spoiler:Azrael's body modifications and bio-mechanical wings]] very cool, she's the only one to have that reaction, much to Ryouko and [[spoiler:Azrael herself]]'s surprise. Ryouko muses that it's part of why she wanted to be a xenobiologist.
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* TookALevelInBadass: After her relationship upgrade with [[spoiler:Ryouko]], she becomes much more outwardly and assertive, and saves Ryouko [[spoiler:and the people in the gravitonic laboratory when the gravity chamber was sabotaged to assassinate Ryouko by negating its gravity with her own powers, ''while being impaled by a support beam'']], and later convinced Ryouko to take Asami in her upcoming mission so they can watch each other's backs.
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* TookALevelInBadass: After her relationship upgrade with [[spoiler:Ryouko]], she becomes much more outwardly and assertive, and saves Ryouko [[spoiler:and the people in the gravitonic laboratory when the gravity chamber was sabotaged to assassinate Ryouko by negating its gravity with her own powers, ''while being impaled by a support beam'']], and later convinced Ryouko to take Asami in her in Ryouko's upcoming mission so they can watch each other's backs.
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* RedBaron: "The Hero of Orpheus", gained [[spoiler:after she banished the cloaked alien fleet back through the wormhole at the battle of Orpheus, saving the human fleet and probably all of mankind.]]
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* [[spoiler:SecretLegacy]]: [[UpToEleven Two of them]], in fact. [[spoiler:With a [[UpToEleven third one]] making her a great-great-grandniece of Madoka.]]
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* [[spoiler:SecretLegacy]]: [[UpToEleven Two of them]], them, in fact. [[spoiler:With a [[UpToEleven third one]] making her a great-great-grandniece of Madoka.]]
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* CessationOfExistence: [[spoiler:May have happened in chapter 41, as whether or not the [=TacComp=] had a soul was left unanswered and no known backups exist]]
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* CessationOfExistence: [[spoiler:May [[spoiler:Appeared this may have happened been the case in chapter 41, as whether or not the [=TacComp=] had a soul was left unanswered and no known backups exist]]exist. Chapter 45 reveals that Clarisse ''does'' have a soul, and Ryouko's soul gem saved Clarisse's body, meaning that when Ryouko is revived, Clarisse is too.]]
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* DoAndroidsDream: [[spoiler:Wonders if she have a soul, and even asks it to the Goddess, so far she didn't revealed the answer she got.]]
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* DoAndroidsDream: [[spoiler:Wonders if she have a soul, and even asks it to the Goddess, so far she didn't revealed and eventually reveals the answer she got.answer: yes.]]
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** [[spoiler: [[SubvertedTrope subverted]] when Kyouko and her team liberated X-25, where Kyubey revealed that the Incubators knew all along of the rogue colony's existence and the horrible experiments conducted there on mass producing magical girls by cloning and indoctrination, but didn't warned Governance because they wanted to see the results, [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness until it was clear that it would lead nowhere]]. Yep, still the same old rat bastards.]]
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** [[spoiler: [[SubvertedTrope subverted]] when Kyouko and her team liberated X-25, where Kyubey revealed that the Incubators knew all along of the rogue colony's existence and the horrible experiments conducted there on mass producing magical girls by cloning and indoctrination, but didn't warned warn Governance because they wanted to see the results, [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness until it was clear that it would lead nowhere]]. Yep, still the same old rat bastards.]]
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* BizarreAlienBiology: They are like octopuses that would had evolved to live on land, with four semi-rigid tentacle-arms (with little tentacles protruding from the end serving as hands), two legs that looks like rigidified tentacles, an head that is basically Cthulhu's (tentacles ringing their mouth included) with octopus eyes and rubbery skin. And that's just the outside, the inside of their body is even ''weirder'', with their blood being [[AlienBlood bright green]], lungs of a similar design to birds, a [[TheVoiceless complete absence of any organ or system to emit sounds]] and a decentralized nervous system (again, similar to octopuses) which makes their body continue resisting even after the head is severed or blown-off!
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* BizarreAlienBiology: They are like octopuses that would had evolved to live on land, with four semi-rigid tentacle-arms (with little tentacles protruding from the end serving as hands), two legs that looks like rigidified tentacles, an head that is basically Cthulhu's (tentacles ringing their mouth included) with octopus eyes and rubbery skin. And that's just the outside, the inside of their body is even ''weirder'', with their blood being [[AlienBlood bright green]], lungs of a similar design to birds, a [[TheVoiceless complete absence of any organ or system to emit sounds]] and a decentralized nervous system (again, similar to octopuses) which makes their body continue resisting even after the head is severed or blown-off!
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* HollywoodTactics: Sometimes they'll send substantial forces to capture a minor strategic position while ignoring major ones, while other times they'll drop all subtlety and obliterate an enemy base from orbit; sometimes launching great assaults on a system that barely lacks the punch to succeeds even thought they had reinforcements nearby that they could had called to complete their forces [[spoiler:and other times they'll pull up brilliant strategies, such as the wormhole stabilizer trap, that would had wiped out a huge part of mankind's space fleet and even all but secured their victory in the war if not for the Goddess's intervention.]]
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* HollywoodTactics: Sometimes they'll send substantial forces to capture a minor strategic position while ignoring major ones, while other times they'll drop all subtlety and obliterate an enemy base from orbit; sometimes launching great assaults on a system that barely lacks the punch to succeeds even thought they had reinforcements nearby that they could had called to complete their forces [[spoiler:and other times they'll pull up brilliant strategies, such as the wormhole stabilizer trap, that would had have wiped out a huge part of mankind's space fleet and even all but secured their victory in the war if not for the Goddess's intervention.]]
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: Before she made her wish, both her parents were heavy drinkers that constantly got into arguments and compensated their inability to resort to violence ([[RestrainingBolt because of the anti-violence implants on everyone]]) by adopting very quirky educational behaviors: Asami's mother telling ''extremely'' detailed advice on sexual matters and her father regularly taking her with him on benders through bars in the city, and all of this was ''before she even reached 14 years old!''
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Because of [[spoiler:her body modifications]] as well as her job as an infiltrator, she doesn't have any friends. All the people that know are either freaked out [[spoiler:and disgusted by her modifications]] or are simply co-workers, with the exception of Homura [[spoiler:until she disappeared]]. Asami (and to a lesser extend Ryouko) are the firsts and only people since a long time willing to become friends with her.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Because of [[spoiler:her body modifications]] as well as her job as an infiltrator, she doesn't have any friends. All the people that know are either freaked out [[spoiler:and disgusted by her modifications]] or are simply co-workers, with the exception of Homura [[spoiler:until she disappeared]]. Asami (and to a lesser extend Ryouko) are the firsts first and only people since in a long time who are willing to become friends with her.
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* BodyHorror: PlayedWith, while [[spoiler:the prehensile spine-like protrusions on her back]] are very squicky and freaks everyone, for her it's perfectly normal, since [[spoiler:she and all of her people were born with them, and found them cool since it let her attach wings to fly]]. Asami even agrees with her later, after getting over the initial shock.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Born in a rogue colony which almost completely self-destructed itself by a civil war during which she lost her parents and almost all the people she knew. Then when Governance finally arrived after receiving a distress call, [[spoiler:they forced the few survivors to undergo surgery and gene-fixing to become baseline humans (which is alien to them since they were born with their body modifications)]], Azrael is the only one spared that fate thanks to her wish.
* [[MrExposition Ms Exposition]]:Serves to introduce Ryouko and Asami to rogue colonies (first of all the fact they aren't an urban legend) and body modifications some of them makes to their citizen [[spoiler:by showing them her nictating membranes (transparent secondary eyelids) and external spinals protrusions to connect her bio-organic wings)]]. Lampshaded by herself that she's often asked to introduce rookies to the matters of rogue colonies [[spoiler:because of the shock value.]]
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Born in a rogue colony which almost completely self-destructed itself by a civil war during which she lost her parents and almost all the people she knew. Then when Governance finally arrived after receiving a distress call, [[spoiler:they forced the few survivors to undergo surgery and gene-fixing to become baseline humans (which is alien to them since they were born with their body modifications)]], Azrael is the only one spared that fate thanks to her wish.
* [[MrExposition Ms Exposition]]:Serves to introduce Ryouko and Asami to rogue colonies (first of all the fact they aren't an urban legend) and body modifications some of them makes to their citizen [[spoiler:by showing them her nictating membranes (transparent secondary eyelids) and external spinals protrusions to connect her bio-organic wings)]]. Lampshaded by herself that she's often asked to introduce rookies to the matters of rogue colonies [[spoiler:because of the shock value.]]
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* BodyHorror: PlayedWith, while [[spoiler:the prehensile spine-like protrusions on her back]] are very squicky and freaks freak out almost everyone, for her it's perfectly normal, since [[spoiler:she and all of her people were born with them, and found them cool since it let her attach wings to fly]]. Asami even agrees with her later, after getting over the initial shock.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Born in a rogue colony which almost completely self-destructeditself by a civil war during which she lost her parents and almost all the people she knew. Then when Governance finally arrived after receiving a distress call, [[spoiler:they forced the few survivors to undergo surgery and gene-fixing to become baseline humans (which is alien to them since they were born with their body modifications)]], Azrael is the only one spared that fate thanks to her wish.
* [[MrExposition Ms Exposition]]:Serves to introduce Ryouko and Asami to rogue colonies (first of all the fact they aren't an urban legend) and the body modifications someof them makes colonies make to their citizen [[spoiler:by showing them her nictating membranes (transparent secondary eyelids) and external spinals protrusions to connect her bio-organic wings)]]. Lampshaded by herself that she's often asked to introduce rookies to the matters of rogue colonies [[spoiler:because of the shock value.]]
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Born in a rogue colony which almost completely self-destructed
* [[MrExposition Ms Exposition]]:Serves to introduce Ryouko and Asami to rogue colonies (first of all the fact they aren't an urban legend) and the body modifications some
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* ShrinkingViolet: She's a very shy girl, which is at odds with her job as an undercover spy. [[spoiler:This is because of most people stance about body modifications.]]
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* ShrinkingViolet: She's a very shy girl, which is at odds with her job as an undercover spy. [[spoiler:This is because of most people people's stance about body modifications.]]
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* BlessedWithSuck: Looking at what she does and what happens to herself in the future is more or less guaranteed to backfire on her, and so is forced to plan ahead with that in mind, [[spoiler:which eventually leads to her (admittingly, potentially planned) downfall.]]
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* BlessedWithSuck: Looking at what she does and what happens to herself in the future is more or less guaranteed to backfire on her, and so is forced to plan ahead with that in mind, [[spoiler:which eventually leads to her (admittingly, (admittedly, potentially planned) downfall.]]
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* CombatClairvoyance: Due to above BlessedWithSuck flaw, the immediate future is the only time she can freely see herself when using her powers, which really helps during combat.
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* CombatClairvoyance: Due to the above BlessedWithSuck flaw, the immediate future is the only time she can freely see herself when using her powers, which really helps during combat.
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* EvilCounterpart: To Homura, [[Main/EncyclopediaExposita in-universe documents]] even pegs her as the "James Moriarty to match Akemi Homura's Sherlock Holmes".
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* EvilCounterpart: To Homura, [[Main/EncyclopediaExposita in-universe documents]] even pegs peg her as the "James Moriarty to match Akemi Homura's Sherlock Holmes".
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* TheseAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: [[spoiler:In her research to substitute magic with technology, she created an isolation device in which grief cubes revert to their original pre-Madoka forms, bringing along the thankfully contained witch corruption, and she has only has a vaguest of ideas for why it happens.]]
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* TheseAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: [[spoiler:In her research to substitute magic with technology, she created an isolation device in which grief cubes revert to their original pre-Madoka forms, bringing along the thankfully contained witch corruption, and she has only has a the vaguest of ideas for why it happens.]]
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* MinorMajorCharacter: [[spoiler:Sayaka]]. She barely gets mentioned in history and the VeryLooselyBasedOnATrueStory movie retelling about the Mitakihara's magical girls' story, her existence is almost unknown, and her portrayal is somewhat lacking for someone who is one of the main character of [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica mother series]], [[spoiler: even though she was acknowledged as one of the original Mitakihara Four, the (officially documented) main reason of Homura's sudden personality change and her famous obsession of her Goddess, and (Mitakihara Four restricted information) [[LovingAShadow Kyouko's heartbroken]] [[SexForSolace rebound sexes]]]]. Justified because she doesn't survive long enough for her name to be famous.
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* MinorMajorCharacter: [[spoiler:Sayaka]]. She barely gets mentioned in history and the VeryLooselyBasedOnATrueStory movie retelling about the Mitakihara's magical girls' story, her existence is almost unknown, and her portrayal is somewhat lacking for someone who is one of the main character of the [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica mother series]], [[spoiler: even though she was acknowledged as one of the original Mitakihara Four, the (officially documented) main reason of Homura's sudden personality change and her famous obsession of her Goddess, and (Mitakihara Four restricted information) [[LovingAShadow Kyouko's heartbroken]] [[SexForSolace rebound sexes]]]]. Justified because she doesn't survive long enough for her name to be famous.
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Ryouko's mother. She wants her daughter to stay out of trouble, namely by keeping her from becoming a Magical Girl [[spoiler:by any means necessary, including sabotaging the family's funds until Ryouko was past contracting age to lower the chance. She's also a '''true''' former Magical Girl, in that she has absolutely no powers anymore. Her experiences as a Magical Girl lead her to start a project the ultimately resulted in clones of each girl being created in case one loses her body but her soul gem is ok.]]
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Ryouko's mother. She wants her daughter to stay out of trouble, namely by keeping her from becoming a Magical Girl [[spoiler:by any means necessary, including sabotaging the family's funds until Ryouko was past contracting age to lower the chance. She's also a '''true''' former Magical Girl, in that she has absolutely no powers anymore. Her experiences as a Magical Girl lead her to start a project the that ultimately resulted in clones of each girl being created in case one loses her body but her still has an intact soul gem is ok.gem.]]
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* GoodParents: He may be a bit awkward even at the best of times, but he cares for Ryouko deeply. [[spoiler:Even hooking her up with a high-level military prototype implant.]]
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* GoodParents: He may be a bit awkward even at the best of times, but he cares for Ryouko deeply. [[spoiler:Even hooking [[spoiler:He even hooks her up with a high-level military prototype implant.]]
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* [[spoiler:LaserGuidedAmnesia]]: [[spoiler:It's heavily implied that she undergone a Reformat somewhere in the past, which made her forget certain events of her past, notably her training to develop mind-reading powers. She still have [[FlashbackNightmare recurrent dreams]] of these events.]]
* LastNameBasis: As in the original series, she continue to call everyone by their last name, even those that she know for centuries! It's a sign of the emotional wall she still puts between herself and other people. The only person she calls by her first name is Oriko, showing all the hate and contempt she feels for her even centuries after her death. [[spoiler:She started to try to correct that habit after accidentally picking from Marianne's mind that she find it really hurtful.]]
* MaryTzu: Mami [[InvokedTrope notices]] that her tactical deployments on New Athens were falsely portrayed flawless in ''Akemi'', despite her lack of prior military training or experience.
* LastNameBasis: As in the original series, she continue to call everyone by their last name, even those that she know for centuries! It's a sign of the emotional wall she still puts between herself and other people. The only person she calls by her first name is Oriko, showing all the hate and contempt she feels for her even centuries after her death. [[spoiler:She started to try to correct that habit after accidentally picking from Marianne's mind that she find it really hurtful.]]
* MaryTzu: Mami [[InvokedTrope notices]] that her tactical deployments on New Athens were falsely portrayed flawless in ''Akemi'', despite her lack of prior military training or experience.
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* [[spoiler:LaserGuidedAmnesia]]: [[spoiler:It's heavily implied that she undergone underwent a Reformat somewhere in the past, which made her forget certain events of her past, notably her training to develop mind-reading powers. She still have [[FlashbackNightmare recurrent dreams]] of these events.]]
* LastNameBasis: As in the original series, shecontinue continues to call everyone by their last name, even those that she know has known for centuries! It's a sign of the emotional wall she still puts between herself and other people. The only person she calls by her first name is Oriko, showing all the hate and contempt she feels for her even centuries after her death. [[spoiler:She started to try to correct that habit after accidentally picking from Marianne's mind that she find finds it really hurtful.]]
* MaryTzu: Mami [[InvokedTrope notices]] that her tactical deployments on New Athens were falsely portrayed as flawless in ''Akemi'', despite her lack of prior military training or experience.
* LastNameBasis: As in the original series, she
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* ReallyGetsAround: Kyouko, in her 'hedonist' period and still has some of its trace even after all these years. It's said to be a 'species-wide joke'. It's mostly because of heartbroken over Sayaka's death, and [[spoiler:[[LovingAShadow even her current lover is]] [[ReplacementGoldfish physically similar with Sayaka.]]]]
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* ReallyGetsAround: Kyouko, in her 'hedonist' period and still has some of its trace even after all these years. It's said to be a 'species-wide joke'. It's mostly because of heartbroken heartbreak over Sayaka's death, and [[spoiler:[[LovingAShadow even her current lover is]] [[ReplacementGoldfish physically similar with Sayaka.]]]]
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* CloudCuckooLander: Her regular ramblings and mumblings to herself about a Goddess and a "previous Universe" make her pass as subtly insane by the people around her, [[BunnyEarsLawyer but that didn't interfered in her skills as the MSY's First Executive or her battle prowess]]. [[spoiler: At least until the battle of New Athens, where her surviving her soul gem fading to black made people start to believe what she said about the Goddess, and even spawned an official Cult! Unfortunately, Homura herself didn't took the "miracle" [[DespairEventHorizon nearly]] [[SanitySlippage as well]]...]]
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* CloudCuckooLander: Her regular ramblings and mumblings to herself about a Goddess and a "previous Universe" make her pass as subtly insane by the people around her, [[BunnyEarsLawyer but that didn't interfered interfere in her skills as the MSY's First Executive or her battle prowess]]. [[spoiler: At least until the battle of New Athens, where her surviving her soul gem fading to black made people start to believe what she said about the Goddess, and even spawned an official Cult! Unfortunately, Homura herself didn't took take the "miracle" [[DespairEventHorizon nearly]] [[SanitySlippage as well]]...]]
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* LongRangeFighter: Type II. She's an archer and a flyer, but by no means does that make her deficient in close combat.
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* LongRangeFighter: Type II. She's an archer and a flyer, flier, but by no means does that make her deficient in close combat.
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* {{Asexuality}}: Kyouko claims she's asexual and part of the reason why she uses a nine years old body, Yuma playfully denies it but without giving any proof, leaving a doubt on her claim. [[spoiler:MG later pretty much confirms that Kyouko was right when she explains that Yuma thinks of the idea of people having romantic relationships as disgusting.]]
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* {{Asexuality}}: Kyouko claims she's asexual and part of the reason why she uses a nine years old body, Yuma playfully denies it but without giving any proof, leaving a casting doubt on her claim. [[spoiler:MG later pretty much confirms that Kyouko was right when she explains that Yuma thinks of the idea of people having romantic relationships as disgusting.]]
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* ControlFreak: Has elements of this due to her experiences with Oriko and the Souther Group. [[spoiler:In her argument with Kyouko in chapter 45, the latter acuses her of this]]
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* ControlFreak: Has elements of this due to her experiences with Oriko and the Souther Group. [[spoiler:In her argument with Kyouko in chapter 45, the latter acuses accuses her of this]]
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* HeelRealization: She always aware from almost the very start of her stint with the Southern Group that they were not a very nice band of girls, but it was her witnessing [[spoiler:them torturing another magical girl to push her to plan their downfall.]]
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* HeelRealization: She always aware from almost the very start of her stint with the Southern Group that they were not a very nice band of girls, but it was her witnessing [[spoiler:them torturing another magical girl to push that pushed her to plan their downfall.]]
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* TheSleepless: She figured how to not to sleep, by not sleeping and then healing the damage from oversleeping.
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* TheSleepless: She figured how to not to sleep, by not sleeping and then healing the damage from oversleeping.damage.
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* StepfordSmiler: It's often noted by the other Mitakihara Four that her mirthful and childish demeanor is a veneer hiding her broken and ruthless personality born from her time in the Southern Group, although she still have a conscience preventing her to get too ruthless.
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* StepfordSmiler: It's often noted by the other Mitakihara Four that her mirthful and childish demeanor is a veneer hiding her broken and ruthless personality born from her time in the Southern Group, although she still have has a conscience preventing her to get from getting too ruthless.
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* {{Workaholic}}: Yuma is very absorbed with her job, to the point where most of her consciousness is actively participating in government meetings at any given time.
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* {{Workaholic}}: Yuma is very absorbed with her job, to the point where that most of her consciousness is actively participating in government meetings at any given time.
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* InstantExpert: Patricia stands out even in a setting where this is more or less commonplace, in that it was her wish made her a super-genius, rather than the more usual technological means.
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* InstantExpert: Patricia stands out even in a setting where this is more or less commonplace, in that it was her wish that made her a super-genius, rather than the more usual technological means.
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* CrisisOfFaith: Grew disillusioned with Christianity, which from her point of view mostly consisted of isolationist conservatives, including her parents, with the only exception of the excommunicated priest who encouraged her to paint, until he was killed by the demons. Overlaps with in-universe ArtistDisillusionment with her painting talents being constricted by stagnant church doctrine. When the Incubator came knocking, her wish was to find something to believe in again, which what got her into Church of Hope.
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* CrisisOfFaith: Grew disillusioned with Christianity, which from her point of view mostly consisted of isolationist conservatives, including her parents, with the only exception of the excommunicated priest who encouraged her to paint, until he was killed by the demons. Overlaps with in-universe ArtistDisillusionment with her painting talents being constricted by stagnant church doctrine. When the Incubator came knocking, her wish was to find something to believe in again, which what got her into the Church of Hope.
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* TookALevelInBadass: After her relationship upgrade with [[spoiler:Ryouko]], she becomes much more outwardly and assertive, and saves Ryouko [[spoiler:and the people in the gravitonic laboratory when the gravity chamber was sabotaged to assassinate Ryouko by negating its gravity with her own powers, ''while being impaled by a support beam'']], and later convinced her to take her in her upcoming mission so they can watch over each other's back.
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* TookALevelInBadass: After her relationship upgrade with [[spoiler:Ryouko]], she becomes much more outwardly and assertive, and saves Ryouko [[spoiler:and the people in the gravitonic laboratory when the gravity chamber was sabotaged to assassinate Ryouko by negating its gravity with her own powers, ''while being impaled by a support beam'']], and later convinced her Ryouko to take her Asami in her upcoming mission so they can watch over each other's back.
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* AlwaysOnDuty: Out of necessity; her position as the Field Marshal in charge of an entire sector means that she rarely gets time to herself.[[spoiler: And now that she has been elected Chief of the General Staff, putting her in charge of ''all of mankind military'', she'll probably have even less spare time.]]
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* AlwaysOnDuty: Out of necessity; her position as the Field Marshal in charge of an entire sector means that she rarely gets time to herself.[[spoiler: And now that she has been elected Chief of the General Staff, putting her in charge of ''all of mankind mankind's military'', she'll probably have even less spare time.]]
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* ControlFreak: Has elements of this due to her experiences with Oriko and the Souther Group. [[spoiler:In her argument with Kyouko in chapter 45, the latter acuses her of this]]
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** [[spoiler: subverted when Kyouko and her team liberated X-25, where Kyubey revealed that the Incubators knew all along of the rogue colony's existence and the horrible experiments conducted there on mass producing magical girls by cloning and indoctrination, but didn't warned Governance because they wanted to see the results, [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness until it was clear that it would lead nowhere]]. Yep, still the same old rat bastards.]]
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** [[spoiler: subverted [[SubvertedTrope subverted]] when Kyouko and her team liberated X-25, where Kyubey revealed that the Incubators knew all along of the rogue colony's existence and the horrible experiments conducted there on mass producing magical girls by cloning and indoctrination, but didn't warned Governance because they wanted to see the results, [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness until it was clear that it would lead nowhere]]. Yep, still the same old rat bastards.]]
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* TheMenInBlack: Before the [[BrokenMasquerade MSY went public]], one of their job was to keep the existence of the magical girl system from being discovered by the public. There are rumors they were behind the mysterious [[KilledToUpholdTheMasquerade disappearance without a trace]] of any girl that intentionally tried to make public the existence of the magical world.
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* TheMenInBlack: Before the [[BrokenMasquerade MSY went public]], one of their job jobs was to keep the existence of the magical girl system from being discovered by the public. There are rumors they were behind the mysterious [[KilledToUpholdTheMasquerade disappearance without a trace]] of any girl that intentionally tried to make public the existence of the magical world.