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* BadassMustache
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* DyingForSymbolism: As per WordOfGod, Simkin's death at the hands of an assassin wielding an Earth gun as Thimhallen is being conquered by Earth forces is very symbolic of technology killing magic.
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* ChaoticNeutral: Bordering on ChaoticStupid and of the most annoying variety. Doesn't help that he is very much a KarmaHoudini.
* ChronicBackstabbingDisorder: Mainly because he's incredibly bored and feels throwing an element of chaos will liven up the world.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Simkin's trickster nature finally does him in when he decides to impersonate Joram to use his connections for a free ride to Earth. Unfortunately for Simkin, Joram is actually on the outs with his Earth friends, who have sent an assassin to kill him.
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* TheMillstoneTheMillstone: Despite, or maybe because of, his immense power, Simkin never fails to make a situation more troublesome by his mere presence. Even when he is being helpful, his help is usually far more trouble than it's worth.
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WelcomeBackTraitor: Doesn't seem to matter what Simkin has done, Joram and friends never seem inclined to drive him away when he shows up again. Usually because he's necessary to get them out of whatever trouble he's put them into. Likely as not they couldn't drive him off if they tried and they know it.
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* HolierThanThou: His general attitude with regards to even other catalysts. His bio even states that he views his relationship with the Almin (the actual creator god of his relgion) as less Master and Servant and more two equal partners who share a common goal.
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* BadassGrandpa: He prefers to keep his reputation as a humble catalyst, but that doesn't stop him from taking down [[spoiler:Blachloch, ruining Vanya and Xavier's plans, and facing the Executioner.]]
* BadassGrandpa: He prefers to keep his reputation as a humble catalyst, but that doesn't stop him from taking down [[spoiler:Blachloch, ruining Vanya and Xavier's plans, and facing the Executioner.]]
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* BadassGrandpa: He prefers to keep his reputation as a humble catalyst, but that doesn't stop him from taking down [[spoiler:Blachloch, ruining Vanya and Xavier's plans, and facing the Executioner.]]
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* TreacherousAdvisor: Subverted. He's quite genuine in his offers to help and it takes no time for people to discover his mission from Vanya. This does't, however, keep it from being a point of contention between him and Joram throughout the first book.
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* TreacherousAdvisor: Subverted. He's quite genuine in his offers to help and it takes no time for people to discover his mission from Vanya. This does't, doesn't, however, keep it from being a point of contention between him and Joram throughout the first book.
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A talented magus with no apparent regard for social or ethnic customs, Simkin seems to fly by his own calender and motivations. A fickle fellow, his loyalties are questionable at best and he doesn't make friends easily with his loud and obnoxious personality.
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A talented magus with no apparent regard for social or ethnic customs, Simkin seems to fly by his own calender calendar and motivations. A fickle fellow, his loyalties are questionable at best and he doesn't make friends easily with his loud and obnoxious personality.
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The Prince of Sharakan, Merilon's rivaling kingdom. Garald is [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure reasonable and authoritative]], assisting the party in their travels when they meet him on their way to Merilon.
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The Prince of Sharakan, Merilon's rivaling rival kingdom. Garald is [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure reasonable and authoritative]], assisting the party in their travels when they meet him on their way to Merilon.
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* CombatPragmatist: Played with. He isn't one, but when he teaches Joram the basics of sword fighting he makes is clear he doesn't have time to teach him to win a fair fight. While never stated, it's implied that he believes all sword fighters start out this way.
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* CombatPragmatist: Played with. He isn't one, but when he teaches Joram the basics of sword fighting sword-fighting he makes is it clear he doesn't have time to teach him to win a fair fight. While never stated, it's implied that he believes all sword fighters start out this way.
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->''"Grant me life."''
A ''Duuk-tsarith'' among the Sorcerers in the Outland. Blachloch usurped control from the previous leader Andon several years before Joram and Saryon arrive and has been ruling the village with fear since.
A ''Duuk-tsarith'' among the Sorcerers in the Outland. Blachloch usurped control from the previous leader Andon several years before Joram and Saryon arrive and has been ruling the village with fear since.
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->''"Grant me life.Life."''
A ''Duuk-tsarith'' among the Sorcerers in the Outland. Blachloch usurped control from the previousleader Andon leader, Andon, several years before Joram and Saryon arrive arrived, and has been ruling the village with fear since.
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Comes over as a kind and fatherly man, but all of this is a ruse to manipulate people in doing what he wants. He especially likes to make people think they owe him something due to past sins.
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Comes over as a kind and fatherly man, but all of this is a ruse to manipulate people in into doing what he wants. He especially likes to make people think they owe him something due to past sins.
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* CombatPragmatist: Played with. He isn't one, but when he teaches Joram the basics of sword fighting he makes is clear he doesn't have time to teach him to win a fair fight.
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* CombatPragmatist: Played with. He isn't one, but when he teaches Joram the basics of sword fighting he makes is clear he doesn't have time to teach him to win a fair fight. While never stated, it's implied that he believes all sword fighters start out this way.
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* CombatPragmatist: Played with. He isn't one, but when he teaches Joram the basics of sword fighting he makes is clear he doesn't have time to teach him to win a fair fight.
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* [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice]]: HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:He takes the bullet meant for Joram and gets turned to stone. But not before ensuring Joram's means of escape.]]
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* [[spoiler:ISeeDeadPeople]]: [[spoiler:Following her chasing Joram into Beyond, she starts speaking with the dead and ignoring the living.]]
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* BlondGuysAreEvil: The only notable feature of his face that's brought up is his blond mustache, which he's quite fond of stroking.
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* MosesInTheBullrushes: Anja smuggled him out of Merilon to avoid the same fate as the other [[NiceJobBreakingItHerod Dead children]].
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!! Bishop Vanya
The corrupt leader of the church. He is one of the most politically powerful men in Thimhallan and goes to great lengths to secure that power.
* AdiposeRex: He is constantly referred to as obese, especially by Simkin. And while he is no royalty in name, he does hold the same degree of political power.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Comes over as a kind and fatherly man, but all of this is a ruse to manipulate people in doing what he wants. He especially likes to make people think they owe him something due to past sins.
* CorruptChurch: A personification of this trope.
* WouldHurtAChild: Due to the prophecy, he is scared to death of Joram, even when Joram was still an infant. While he might not be planning to kill him in fear of furthering the prophecy, it is implied that the alternative would not be nice either.
!! Xavier
Joram's uncle and the second in line to the throne. He would be the first in line if it weren't for the fact Joram is still alive. He is preying in said throne for a very long time.
* FauxAffablyEvil: Pretends to treat Joram with respect, while also rubbing in how he is going to screw him over to gain the throne.
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* BadassGrandpa: Prefers to keep his reputation as a humble catalyst. In the second book he manages to [[spoiler:save Joram and beat Bishop Vanya and Prince Xavier in one blow.]] And that's not mentioning his accomplishments in the first book.
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* BadassGrandpa: Prefers He prefers to keep his reputation as a humble catalyst. In the second book he manages to [[spoiler:save Joram and beat Bishop catalyst, but that doesn't stop him from taking down [[spoiler:Blachloch, ruining Vanya and Prince Xavier in one blow.]] And that's not mentioning his accomplishments in Xavier's plans, and facing the first book.Executioner.]]
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!!Mosiah
Joram's only childhood friend, Mosiah followed him into the Outlands shortly after Joram's own flight and joined the village of Sorcerer's out of concern more than anything else.
* FishOutOfWater: As a former Field Magus visiting the capitol, Merilon.
* RedOniBlueOni: As the Red to Joram's Blue, Mosiah is impulsive and friendly.
* StraightMan: As {{Foil}} to [[LargeHam Sim]][[TheDandy kin]].
!!Mosiah
Joram's only childhood friend, Mosiah followed him into the Outlands shortly after Joram's own flight and joined the village of Sorcerer's out of concern more than anything else.
* FishOutOfWater: As a former Field Magus visiting the capitol, Merilon.
* RedOniBlueOni: As the Red to Joram's Blue, Mosiah is impulsive and friendly.
* StraightMan: As {{Foil}} to [[LargeHam Sim]][[TheDandy kin]].
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Joram's only childhood friend, Mosiah followed him into the Outlands shortly after Joram's own flight and joined the village of Sorcerer's out of concern more than anything else.
* FishOutOfWater: As a former Field Magus visiting the capitol, Merilon.
* RedOniBlueOni: As the Red to Joram's Blue, Mosiah is impulsive and friendly.
* StraightMan: As {{Foil}} to [[LargeHam Sim]][[TheDandy kin]].
!Supporting Characters
!!Blachloch
->''"Grant me life."''
A ''Duuk-tsarith'' among the Sorcerers in the Outland, Blachloch usurped control from the previous leader Andon several years before Joram and Saryon arrive and has been ruling the village with fear since.
* BadassMustache
* BlackCloak
* BlondGuysAreEvil: The only notable feature of his face that's brought up is his blond mustache, which he's quite fond of stroking.
* [[spoiler:DiscOneFinalBoss]]
* [[spoiler:TheMole]]: [[spoiler:For Bishop Vanya.]]
Joram's only childhood friend, Mosiah followed him into the Outlands shortly after Joram's own flight and joined the village of Sorcerer's out of concern more than anything else.
* FishOutOfWater: As a former Field Magus visiting the capitol, Merilon.
* RedOniBlueOni: As the Red to Joram's Blue, Mosiah is impulsive and friendly.
* StraightMan: As {{Foil}} to [[LargeHam Sim]][[TheDandy kin]].
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!!Blachloch
->''"Grant me life."''
A ''Duuk-tsarith'' among the Sorcerers in the Outland, Blachloch usurped control from the previous leader Andon several years before Joram and Saryon arrive and has been ruling the village with fear since.
* BadassMustache
* BlackCloak
* BlondGuysAreEvil: The only notable feature of his face that's brought up is his blond mustache, which he's quite fond of stroking.
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* [[spoiler:TheMole]]: [[spoiler:For Bishop Vanya.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:Though she recovers, to a degree, after Joram frees the magic which was driving the dead and her crazy.]]
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!Villains
!!Blachloch
->''"Grant me life."''
A ''Duuk-tsarith'' among the Sorcerers in the Outland. Blachloch usurped control from the previous leader Andon several years before Joram and Saryon arrive and has been ruling the village with fear since.
* BadassMustache
* BlackCloak
* BlondGuysAreEvil: The only notable feature of his face that's brought up is his blond mustache, which he's quite fond of stroking.
* [[spoiler:DiscOneFinalBoss]]
* [[spoiler:TheMole]]: [[spoiler:For Bishop Vanya.]]
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* DefrostingIceQueen: He's often likened to a stone statue. It takes over a book and a half of combined help between [[ParentalSubstitute Father Saryon]], [[TheWisePrince Prince Garald]], and falling [[LoveAtFirstSight head-over-heels]] for the first time to finally see a chip in his frozen demeanor.
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* DefrostingIceQueen: [[DefrostingIceQueen Defrosting Ice King]]: He's often likened to a stone statue. It takes over a book and a half of combined help between [[ParentalSubstitute Father Saryon]], [[TheWisePrince Prince Garald]], and falling [[LoveAtFirstSight head-over-heels]] for the first time to finally see a chip in his frozen demeanor.
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* BadassGrandpa: Despite being a simple, humble catalyst, in the second book he manages to [[spoiler:save Joram with the Darksword and, by so doing, beat Bishop Vanya and Prince Xavier in one blow and further the prophecy they were trying to avoid fulfilling.]] And that's not mentioning his accomplishments in the first book.
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* BadassGrandpa: Despite being Prefers to keep his reputation as a simple, humble catalyst, in catalyst. In the second book he manages to [[spoiler:save Joram with the Darksword and, by so doing, and beat Bishop Vanya and Prince Xavier in one blow and further the prophecy they were trying to avoid fulfilling.blow.]] And that's not mentioning his accomplishments in the first book.
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* DefrostingIceQueen: He's often likened to a stone statue. It take over a book and a half of combined help between [[ParentalSubstitute Father Saryon]], [[TheWisePrince Prince Garald]], and falling [[LoveAtFirstSight head-over-heels]] for the first time to finally see a chip in his frozen demeanor.
* DontYouDarePityMe: A more subtle example than others. Rather than slap a hand away and yell in protest, he's more likely to ignore whomever tries to help.
* DontYouDarePityMe: A more subtle example than others. Rather than slap a hand away and yell in protest, he's more likely to ignore whomever tries to help.
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* DefrostingIceQueen: He's often likened to a stone statue. It take takes over a book and a half of combined help between [[ParentalSubstitute Father Saryon]], [[TheWisePrince Prince Garald]], and falling [[LoveAtFirstSight head-over-heels]] for the first time to finally see a chip in his frozen demeanor.
* DontYouDarePityMe:A more subtle example than others. Rather than slap a hand away and yell in protest, he's more He's likely to ignore whomever tries to help.
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* TreacherousAdvisor: Subverted. He's quite genuine in his offers to help and it takes no time for people to discover his mission from Vanya. This does't, however, keep it from being a point of contention between him and Joram.
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->''"My dear, I could stay at the homes of twenty Princes, just like that! To say nothing of the Dukes and Earls and Counts who have literally gone down on their knees to beg me to be their houseguest. The Earl of Essac was devastated when I said no. Threatened to off himself. But really, twenty Pekingese? They yap, you know, to say nothing of nipping at the ankles."''
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!!Gwendolyn
A young woman, raised in Merilon. She meets the heroes when they unsuccessfully try to enter the city.
* AllGirlsWantBadBoys: As her father muses, she has all the innocent young men of Merilon to choose from, and yet she falls for Joram, one whose intent is questionable at best.
* TheIngenue
* LoveAtFirstSight: She and Joram. Others recognize it as youthful infatuation.
* SpoiledSweet
A young woman, raised in Merilon. She meets the heroes when they unsuccessfully try to enter the city.
* AllGirlsWantBadBoys: As her father muses, she has all the innocent young men of Merilon to choose from, and yet she falls for Joram, one whose intent is questionable at best.
* TheIngenue
* LoveAtFirstSight: She and Joram. Others recognize it as youthful infatuation.
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!!Gwendolyn
A young woman, raised in Merilon. She meets the heroes when they unsuccessfully try to enter the city.
* AllGirlsWantBadBoys: As her father muses, she has all the innocent young men of Merilon to choose from, and yet she falls for Joram, one whose intent is questionable at best.
* TheIngenue
* LoveAtFirstSight: She and Joram. Others prefer to recognize it as youthful infatuation.
* SpoiledSweet