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* {{Expy}}: Of the Muslim ''Allah''.
* GodIsImpotent: Rashtul was one of the first titans to fall in the prehistoric WarInHeaven, but unlike most other victims of that conflict, he didn't die permanently, nor did he turn into a demon. However, he was put to a supernatural sleep that lasted for the next 10ish ages, and only recently awoke, still depowered, mostly forgotten and without followers. Unlike the other gods, there is preciously little he can do, though - he can't ordain priests, he can't send miracles, and he also doesn't have divine artifacts for his followers. The only thing he could do was sending his own champion to the mortals once (3000 years ago), but other than that, all he can offer (...so far) is faith and inspiration.
* GodsNeedPrayerBadly: While the importance of mortal worship is never exactly specified, it is implied that having lots of followers facilitates returning to the "inner circle of heaven" during the next age, so to speak. For Rashtul, who is completely bereft of what constitues a deity, this is one hell of an incentive.
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* AllMuslimsAreArab: ZigzaggedTrope. While his human followers who worship him as an {{Expy}} of Allah are clearly modeled after the bedouin Arabs, his other believers who worship his more archaic and more polytheism-compatible version range from barbarians to trolls.
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* MagnificientBastard: Hasrabal as a character is ''really'' old - one of the oldest antagonists of the setting, dating back to one of the first modules from 1984. However, unlike all other major villains, he never got his comeuppance, but instead (and despite his setback) managed to actually grow in power (both as a wizard as well as a ruler) over the decades. That he isn't that vile and more a power-hungry egomaniac than a full blown kitten-eating villain probably helps.
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* MagnificientBastard: MagnificentBastard: Hasrabal as a character is ''really'' old - one of the oldest antagonists of the setting, dating back to one of the first modules from 1984. However, unlike all other major villains, he never got his comeuppance, but instead (and despite his setback) managed to actually grow in power (both as a wizard as well as a ruler) over the decades. That he isn't that vile and more a power-hungry egomaniac than a full blown kitten-eating villain probably helps.
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* CreatorsPet: Probably the most egregious example in the entire setting (see {{GMPC}} below). Not the only one, though (Ulrich Kiesow had several of them, and other editors had their own), but arguably the most controversial.
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* CreatorsPet: Probably the most egregious example in the entire setting (see {{GMPC}} below). Not the only one, though (Ulrich Kiesow had several of them, and other editors had their own), but arguably the most controversial.controversial - and also one where some of the other authors by their own admission shared the sentiment of the players.
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* ArchetypalCharacter: He's a rather old character from a time when the setting wasn't fleshed out yet and borrowed a lot from myths and fairy tales; and as such he's modeled after the archetype of the malevolent ruling sorcerer from ArabianNights.
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* MagnificientBastard: Hasrabal as a character is ''really'' old - one of the oldest antagonists of the setting, dating back to one of the first modules from 1984. However, unlike all other major villains, he never got his comeuppance, but instead (and despite his setback) managed to actually grow in power (both as a wizard as well as a ruler) over the decades. That he isn't that vile and more a power-hungry egomaniac than a full blown kitten-eating villain probably helps.
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* HeelFaceTurn: There is an obscure prophecy that foretells he will repent at the end of time and stand with the other gods in the final battle against the demons of the netherhells.
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* FallenAngel: [[spoiler: Blakharaz, as revealed in ''Die Welt der Schwertmeister'' (and foreshadowed for long) is the corruptted by Netherhells half of Arka'zin. He was created when Arka'zin descended to the Netherhells when fighting the Nameless God and his demons, but realizing he was corrupted, he plit corrupted part of himself, before he fully became a demon.]]
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* FallenAngel: [[spoiler: Blakharaz, as revealed in ''Die Welt der Schwertmeister'' (and foreshadowed for long) is the corruptted by Netherhells half of Arka'zin. Arkan'Zin. He was created when Arka'zin Arkan'Zin descended to the Netherhells when fighting the Nameless God and his demons, but realizing he was corrupted, he plit cast-of the corrupted part of himself, before he fully became a demon.]]
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* DecompositeCharacter: [[spoiler:An in-universe example. Originally being the Goddess of life Tsatuaria, after Levthan's rape she separated herself into the cheerful, innocent Tsa and the grumpy, vengeful Satuaria.
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* DecompositeCharacter: [[spoiler:An in-universe example. Originally being the Goddess of life Tsatuaria, after Levthan's rape she separated herself into the cheerful, innocent Tsa and the grumpy, vengeful Satuaria.]]
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* DecompositeCharacter: [[spoiler:An in-universe example. Originally being the Goddess of life Tsatuaria, after Levthan's rape she separated herself into the cheerful, innocent Tsa and the grumpy, vengeful Satuaria.
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* DecompositeCharacter: [[spoiler:An in-universe example. Originally being the Goddess of life Tsatuaria, after Levthan's rape she separated herself into the cheerful, innocent Tsa and the grumpy, vengeful Satuaria.]]
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* EvilVsEvil: As seen above, he is the enemy of, and hates the Nameless God. [[spoiler: As described under ''FallenAngel'', he has very personal reasons for that.]]
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* FallenAngel: [[spoiler: Blakharaz, as revealed in ''Die Welt der Schwertmeister'' (and foreshadowed for long) is the corruptted by Netherhells half of Arka'zin. He was created when Arka'zin descended to the Netherhells when fighting the Nameless God and his demons, but realizing he was corrupted, he plit corrupted part of himself, before he fully became a demon.]]
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* SplitPersonality: While he has been a minor deity for most of the setting's existence, the Historica Aventurica turned him into the chief deity of knowledge who got sundered into two separate Deities after the Demons invaded reality -- a good (Hesinde) and an evil (Amazeran) one. The good half remained in Alveran, while the evil one descended into demonhood pretty quickly.
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* SplitPersonality: While he has been a minor deity for most of the setting's existence, the ''Historica Aventurica'' turned him into the chief deity of knowledge who got sundered into two separate Deities after the Demons invaded reality -- a good (Hesinde) and an evil (Amazeran) one. The good half remained in Alveran, while the evil one descended into demonhood pretty quickly.
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* FallenAngel: According to scrapes of lore found around the world, she fell while trying to take away Agrimoths dominion over the element of water. She did succeed somewhat...
** With the Historica Aventurica, this has been set straight: Charypta has been the Goddess of the Ocean and its creatures consecutively until the Ninth Age (i.e. for most of the time), which makes her the only Deity to persistantly enjoy a tenure in Alveran. At the height of her power during the Ninth Age (the age of the maritime races), however, she overextended herself, which made the other gods rally against her, driving her into the Netherhells. This also explains why plenty of maritime creatures and scaled or maritime humanoids still have an unhealthy bond with her.
** With the Historica Aventurica, this has been set straight: Charypta has been the Goddess of the Ocean and its creatures consecutively until the Ninth Age (i.e. for most of the time), which makes her the only Deity to persistantly enjoy a tenure in Alveran. At the height of her power during the Ninth Age (the age of the maritime races), however, she overextended herself, which made the other gods rally against her, driving her into the Netherhells. This also explains why plenty of maritime creatures and scaled or maritime humanoids still have an unhealthy bond with her.
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** With the Historica Aventurica, this hassomewhat. The ''Historica Aventurica'' establishes her as having been set straight: Charypta has been Charypta, the Goddess of the Ocean and its creatures consecutively creatures, until the Ninth Age (i.e. for most of the time), which makes her the only Deity to persistantly persistently enjoy a tenure in Alveran. At the height of her power during the Ninth Age (the age of the maritime races), however, she overextended herself, which made the other gods rally against her, driving her into the Netherhells. This also explains why plenty of maritime creatures and scaled or maritime humanoids still have an unhealthy bond with her.
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The first name is the name in Zhayad, the mages secret language which is said to be the language of demons, the second name is in Zelemia, an early human language.
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* LightIsGood: Is the god of sun and light, as well as justice, and he's viewed as a very benevolent deity by most (except the Thorwalians, who explicitly singled him out as the "Canterans Tyrant God", the Canterans being the Imperial Gyldenlanders from Cantera who drove away the Thorwalians' ancestors 1700 years ago).
** Though his priesthood is far less popular, given their arrogance and their penchant for luxury.
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* LightIsGood: Is He's the god of sun and light, as well as justice, and he's viewed as a very benevolent deity by most (except the Thorwalians, who explicitly singled him out as the "Canterans Tyrant God", the Canterans being the Imperial Gyldenlanders from Cantera who drove away the Thorwalians' ancestors 1700 years ago).
** Though hisago). His priesthood is far less popular, however, given their arrogance and their penchant for luxury.
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* {{Expy}}: Of the Greek goddess Athena, as some depictions bear a striking resemblance and Rondra's status as goddess of war and tactics is akin to Athena's portfolio.
** [[CompositeCharacter Also has traits of]] the [[Myth/NorseMythology Norse goddess Freyja]], although the ones more connected to war, and one of the two patrons of the slain(along with Odin), rather than sorcery and love. She also has a lion as her symbol, like Freyja, who was connected to cats. Another similarity with figures from Norse mythology, are the {{Valkyries}}, with whom Freyja is also sometimes connected with. And as the child of the TopGod, who is more popular than him, and deity of thunderstorms, Rondra also resembles a [[GenderFlip female Thor]].
** [[CompositeCharacter Also has traits of]] the [[Myth/NorseMythology Norse goddess Freyja]], although the ones more connected to war, and one of the two patrons of the slain(along with Odin), rather than sorcery and love. She also has a lion as her symbol, like Freyja, who was connected to cats. Another similarity with figures from Norse mythology, are the {{Valkyries}}, with whom Freyja is also sometimes connected with. And as the child of the TopGod, who is more popular than him, and deity of thunderstorms, Rondra also resembles a [[GenderFlip female Thor]].
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**portfolio. [[CompositeCharacter Also She also has traits of]] the [[Myth/NorseMythology Norse goddess Freyja]], although the ones more connected to war, and one of the two patrons of the slain(along with Odin), rather than sorcery and love. She also has a lion as her symbol, like Freyja, who was connected to cats. Another similarity with figures from Norse mythology, mythology are the {{Valkyries}}, with whom Freyja is also sometimes connected with. And as As the child of the TopGod, who is more popular than him, and deity of thunderstorms, Rondra also resembles a [[GenderFlip female Thor]].
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* {{Expy}}: Of the Greek god [[Myth/ClassicalMythology Poseidon]], right down to the [[WeaponOfChoice trident]] that most of his priests use.
** Efferd's connection to storms, as well as the fact he's one of the [[OurGiantsAreBigger Giants]]/[[OurTitansAreDifferent Titans]], who joined the Twelve Gods, likens him to [[Myth/NorseMythology Aegir]].
** Efferd's connection to storms, as well as the fact he's one of the [[OurGiantsAreBigger Giants]]/[[OurTitansAreDifferent Titans]], who joined the Twelve Gods, likens him to [[Myth/NorseMythology Aegir]].
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* {{Expy}}: Of the Greek god [[Myth/ClassicalMythology Poseidon]], right down to the [[WeaponOfChoice trident]] that most of his priests use.
**use. Efferd's connection to storms, as well as the fact he's one of the [[OurGiantsAreBigger Giants]]/[[OurTitansAreDifferent Titans]], who joined the Twelve Gods, likens him to [[Myth/NorseMythology Aegir]].
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* SplitPersonality: While he has been a minor deity for most of the setting's existence, the Historica Aventurica turned him into the chief deity of knowledge who got sundered into two separate Deities after the Demons invaded reality - a good (Hesinde) and an evil (Amazeran) one. The good half remained in Alveran, while the evil one descended into demonhood pretty quickly.
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* SplitPersonality: While he has been a minor deity for most of the setting's existence, the Historica Aventurica turned him into the chief deity of knowledge who got sundered into two separate Deities after the Demons invaded reality - -- a good (Hesinde) and an evil (Amazeran) one. The good half remained in Alveran, while the evil one descended into demonhood pretty quickly.
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The Orc god of strength and dominance. His Animal is the Bull. His "priests" are the chieftains of the orc tribes. He does not grant them any powers [[spoiler:Though this is rather because he can't, not because he doesn't want to - his believers lack the inordination liturgy which enables them to ordain willing individuals into the ranks of his priesthood. Currently, his [[TheChosenOne Chosen One]] is looking for it.
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The Orc god of strength and dominance. His Animal is the Bull. His "priests" are the chieftains of the orc tribes. He does not grant them any powers [[spoiler:Though this is rather because he can't, not because he doesn't want to - -- his believers lack the inordination liturgy which enables them to ordain willing individuals into the ranks of his priesthood. Currently, his [[TheChosenOne Chosen One]] is looking for it.
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* RaceLift: Originally, Saldor was a human - or rather: his race was never specified, which was basically the same as outright stating he's human considering the fact that mages are human by default. Was later retconned into being a dwarf.
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* BiTheWay: "Amazonian Love" is the in-universe term for lesbianism, and though they are expected to occasionally lie with a worthy male (in order to get pregnant), many if not most tend to prefer female company.
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* LordOfTheOcean: As god of the sea and storms.
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* {{Expy}}: Of [[TabletopGame/{{Warhammer}} Sl]][[TabletopGame/{{Warhammer40000}} aa]][[Characters/WarhammerChaosGodsAndDaemons ne]][[Warhammer40000ChaosGods sh]], although as opposed to Slaanesh, Belkelel doesn't have a particulary strong connection to elves.
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* {{Expy}}: Of [[TabletopGame/{{Warhammer}} Sl]][[TabletopGame/{{Warhammer40000}} aa]][[Characters/WarhammerChaosGodsAndDaemons ne]][[Warhammer40000ChaosGods ne]][[Characters/Warhammer40000ChaosGods sh]], although as opposed to Slaanesh, Belkelel doesn't have a particulary strong connection to elves.
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* CreatorsPet: Probably the most egregious example in the entire setting (see {{GMPC}} below). Not the only one, though (Ulrich Kiesow had several of them, and other editors had their own), but arguably the most controversial.
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* {{GMPC}}: Averted. While rumored of having been this to Ulrich Kiesow, the game's creator, turns out she was merely his favorite NPC among those he created; i.e. more a MarySue than this.
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* Expy: Pretty much a nicer version of [[Characters/WarhammerChaosGodsAndDaemons Khorne]]
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** [[spoiler: With the Historica Aventurica, this has been set straight: Charypta has been the Goddess of the Ocean and its creatures consecutively until the Ninth Age (i.e. for most of the time), which makes her the only Deity to persistantly enjoy a tenure in Alveran. At the height of her power during the Ninth Age (the age of the maritime races), however, she overextended herself, which made the other gods rally against her, driving her into the Netherhells. This also explains why plenty of maritime creatures and scaled or maritime humanoids still have an unhealthy bond with her.]]
** [[spoiler: With the Historica Aventurica, this has been set straight: Charypta has been the Goddess of the Ocean and its creatures consecutively until the Ninth Age (i.e. for most of the time), which makes her the only Deity to persistantly enjoy a tenure in Alveran. At the height of her power during the Ninth Age (the age of the maritime races), however, she overextended herself, which made the other gods rally against her, driving her into the Netherhells. This also explains why plenty of maritime creatures and scaled or maritime humanoids still have an unhealthy bond with her.]]
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* [[spoiler:KilledOffForReal: finally brought down by the heroes of the Year of Fire campaign.]]
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* [[spoiler:KilledOffForReal: KilledOffForReal: finally brought down by the heroes of the Year of Fire campaign.]]
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* [[spoiler:KilledOffForReal: well as much as one can kill off a nigh invulnerable being, his soul rests in a jewel among the dwarves but his body has been destroyed.]]
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* [[spoiler:KilledOffForReal: well as much as one can kill off a nigh invulnerable being, his SealedEvilInAcan: His soul now rests in a jewel among the dwarves dwarves, but his body has been destroyed.]]
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* [[spoiler:TheAgeless: As long as his picture exists, he will not age.]]
* [[spoiler:{{Expy}}: His origin story is taken straight from Literature/ThePictureOfDorianGray he did have to pay a high price for his immortality physically until he managed to force others to pay the price.]]
* [[spoiler:SoulJar: His picture, in a way. It does not prevent him from being hurt, it only prevents him from aging.]]
* [[spoiler:{{Expy}}: His origin story is taken straight from Literature/ThePictureOfDorianGray he did have to pay a high price for his immortality physically until he managed to force others to pay the price.]]
* [[spoiler:SoulJar: His picture, in a way. It does not prevent him from being hurt, it only prevents him from aging.]]
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* [[spoiler:TheAgeless: TheAgeless: As long as his picture exists, he will not age.]]
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*[[spoiler:{{Expy}}: {{Expy}}: His origin story is taken straight from Literature/ThePictureOfDorianGray he did have to pay a high price for his immortality physically until he managed to force others to pay the price.]]
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* [[spoiler:ProperlyParanoid: Since a powerful lizard beast, that is one of Borbarads inheritors, has been creating chimeras on Maraskan, his paranoia about reptile conspiracies aren't that far fetched. Too bad that he seems to believe that they are behind 'everything'.]]
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* [[spoiler:ProperlyParanoid: ProperlyParanoid: Since a powerful lizard beast, that is one of Borbarads inheritors, has been creating chimeras on Maraskan, his paranoia about reptile conspiracies aren't that far fetched. Too bad that he seems to believe that they are behind 'everything'.]]
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All of the main twelve gods have an EvilCounterPart demon lord. They are listed in the order in which their months appear throughout the year, the year stars in the [[AlternativeCalendar middle of summer]] by the way.
They are said to reside in Alveran an {{Expy}} of mount Olympus.
They are said to reside in Alveran an {{Expy}} of mount Olympus.
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All of the main twelve gods have an EvilCounterPart EvilCounterpart demon lord. They are listed in the order in which their months appear throughout the year, the year stars which starts in the [[AlternativeCalendar middle of summer]] by the way.
summer]].
They are said to reside inAlveran Alveran, an {{Expy}} of mount Mount Olympus.
They are said to reside in
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* MarySue: One of many examples in the setting, arguably one of the worst if not the worst, and certainly the best-known. Rumored of having been the {{GMPC}} of the game's creator, but turns out it was "only" his favorite (and ridiculously overpowered) NPC among those he has come up with.
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* MarySue: One of many examples in the setting, arguably one of the worst if not the worst, and certainly the best-known. Rumored {{GMPC}}: Averted. While rumored of having been the {{GMPC}} of this to the game's creator, but turns out it she was "only" merely his favorite (and ridiculously overpowered) NPC among those he has come up with.created; i.e. more a MarySue than this.
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* MarySue: One of many examples in the setting, arguably one of the worst if not the worst, and certainly the best-known. Rumored of having been the {{GMPC}} of the game's creator, but turns out it was "only" his favorite (and ridiculously overpowered) NPC among those he has come up with.