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--> '''Ysmé:''' Oh, I'm not telling you to be eager. I'm telling you [[DramaticGunCock to ''do'' it.]]
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--> '''Ysmé:''' Oh, I'm not telling you to be eager. I'm telling you [[DramaticGunCock to ''do'' do it.]]
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* WasItAllALie: Defied. Loïc declares outright that he believes [[spoiler: Ysmé's DecoyBackstory has more truth embedded in it than she's willing to admit.]]
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* WasItAllALie: Defied. At the end of the prologue, Loïc declares outright that he believes [[spoiler: Ysmé's DecoyBackstory has more truth embedded in it than she's willing to admit.]]
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--> '''Ysmé:''' Oh, I'm not telling you to be eager. I'm telling you [[DramaticGunCock to *do* it.]]
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--> '''Ysmé:''' Oh, I'm not telling you to be eager. I'm telling you [[DramaticGunCock to *do* ''do'' it.]]
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-->'''Loïc:''' ''[reminiscing]'' Even then, [Alma] was just as much of a grouch--and just as caring beneath it all.
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--> '''Loïc:''' Ah... Alma's old customer service voice. It's been a while since I've heard that.
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* TheGadfly: Professional-level heckler.
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* TheGadfly: Professional-level heckler. For example, when Loïc mentions that Alma has children and a grandson, Ysmé teasingly asks if any of them are his.
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* OnlyOneName: Unlike other characters, no surname is listed for her on the cast page. [[invoked]]WordOfGod has [[https://pallisia.tumblr.com/post/720601168120889344/do-loic-and-ysme-have-last-names stated]] that she does not have one.
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!!Commander Theodore Langlais
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'''Ysmé:''' God, no. He'd cream himself if he heard you say that.\\
'''Loïc:''' Good to know.
'''Loïc:''' Good to know.
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'''Ysmé:''' God, ''God'', no. He'd cream himself if he heard you say that.\\
'''Loïc:'''Good Helpful to know.
'''Loïc:'''
!!Lelia "Lia" Ard
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* DirtyCop: Unprofessional and deeply unpleasant, he ends a harried interrogation of Loïc by [[spoiler: faking him out with Ysmé's pistol cocked at his face... [[KickTheDog only to laugh at him for flinching]], not even a day after he was shot with it.]]
* MilesGloriosus: Projects a bold, leonine image right up until the point where he realizes his life is actually on the line.
* MilesGloriosus: Projects a bold, leonine image right up until the point where he realizes his life is actually on the line.
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--> '''Loïc:''' A real VIP, I take it?
--> '''Ysmé:''' God, no. He'd cream himself if he heard you say that.
--> '''Loïc:''' Good to know.
* DirtyCop: Unprofessional and deeply unpleasant, he ends a harried interrogation of Loïc by [[spoiler: faking him out with Ysmé's pistol cocked at his face... [[KickTheDog only to laugh at him for flinching]], not even a day after he was shot with it.]]
* MilesGloriosus: Projects a bold, leonine image right up until the point where he realizes his life is actually on the line.
--> '''Ysmé:''' God, no. He'd cream himself if he heard you say that.
--> '''Loïc:''' Good to know.
* DirtyCop: Unprofessional and deeply unpleasant, he ends a harried interrogation of Loïc by [[spoiler: faking him out with Ysmé's pistol cocked at his face... [[KickTheDog only to laugh at him for flinching]], not even a day after he was shot with it.]]
* MilesGloriosus: Projects a bold, leonine image right up until the point where he realizes his life is actually on the line.
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'''Ysmé:''' God, no. He'd cream himself if he heard you say
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'''Loïc:''' Good to
* DirtyCop: Unprofessional and deeply unpleasant, he ends a harried interrogation of Loïc by [[spoiler: faking him out with Ysmé's pistol cocked at his face... [[KickTheDog only to laugh at him for flinching]], not even a day after he was shot with it.]]
* MilesGloriosus: Projects a bold, leonine image right up until the point where he realizes his life is actually on the line.
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!!Ysmé
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!!Alma Briolde
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A mysterious woman who has left the Mosaic in search of the promise of a better world. Posing initially as a terminally ill maiden on a pilgrimage to the Hollow Temple, she turns out to be a shady, foul-mouthed trickster on a hunt to steal the Sovereignty- the rumored power to claim godhood for oneself. Not long after, she turns out to be frighteningly determined to take what she wants, regardless of who else is caught in the crossfire. Despite making no attempt to defend her own course of action outside of pure self-interest, there seems to be something very genuine at her core.
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A mysterious woman who has left the Mosaic in search of the promise of a better world. Posing initially as a terminally ill maiden on a pilgrimage to the Hollow Temple, she turns out to be a shady, foul-mouthed trickster on a hunt to steal the Sovereignty- Sovereignty -- the rumored power to claim godhood for oneself. Not long after, she turns out to be frighteningly determined to take what she wants, regardless of who else is caught in the crossfire. Despite making no attempt to defend her own course of action outside of pure self-interest, there seems to be something very genuine at her core.
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* LittlestCancerPatient: Suffering from a poorly-understood illness that has left her in a coma with increasingly slim hope of any recovery.
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* LittlestCancerPatient: Suffering A sweet kid suffering from a poorly-understood illness that has left her in a coma on her deathbed with increasingly slim hope of any recovery.recovery. Subverted, somewhat-- sketches on GG's tumblr account reveal that Lia reached [[TroubledTeen teenhood]] before falling ill, and her relationship with her father had become notably rockier during that time.
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* ActionGirl: Turns out to be perfectly physically capable and [[MagicalClown extremely magically capable]], when push comes to shove.
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* ItsAllAboutMe: Claims openly to be unmotivated by anything but her own personal benefit. She emotes disinterest in most lines of thought that don't somehow pertain to her current situation.
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** At the end of the prelude, several CGs display what she really looks like under her {{Glamour}}. [[DownplayedTrope She's still drop-dead gorgeous]], but it reveals a few facial and body details that she'd been obscuring during her time with Loïc, along with the [[NotQuiteBackToNormal glowing scar]] inflicted by the Voice of the Sovereignty. Most notably, it's set up just before the jarring reveal that the awakened figure in TheStinger looks exactly like she does without her illusions on.
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** At the end of the prelude, several CGs panels display what she really looks like under her {{Glamour}}. [[DownplayedTrope She's still drop-dead gorgeous]], but it reveals a few facial and body details that she'd been obscuring during her time with Loïc, along with the [[NotQuiteBackToNormal glowing scar]] inflicted by the Voice of the Sovereignty. Most notably, it's set up just before the jarring reveal that the awakened figure in TheStinger looks exactly like she does without her illusions on.
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* DeityOfHumanOrigin: Possession of the Sovereignty grants her divinity and transforms her into a PhysicalGod capable of razing an armed police airship with a single thought.
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* GodsNeedPrayerBadly: After her initial taste of godhood wears off, she's left with this as her new reality: [[ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve she must draw power from her believers,]] of which she currently only has the one.
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* GodsNeedPrayerBadly: After her initial taste of godhood wears off, she's left with this as her new reality: [[ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve she must draw power from her believers,]] believers]], of which she currently only has the one.
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* MagicalClown: An expert with [[PowerOfCreation artisanry]] who sports a prominent clown motif, once she starts letting her true colors show. Overlaps with a distinct StageMagician presentation on her part.
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* NotQuiteBackToNormal: After being [[DePower stripped of her title]] by the Voice of the Sovereignty, Ysmé ends the prelude with a [[PowerGlows branching, glowing scar]] over her heart where she had been stabbed. The voice explains that her {{Immortality}} stays in effect as long as [[SoulJar Loïc is alive]], she can begin reclaiming power by [[GodsNeedPrayerBadly amassing followers]], and Loïc is still [[{{Geas}} hers to do as she pleases with]].
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* ShapeshifterDefaultForm: Upon revealing that her association with Loïc up until now was a [[MacGuffinDeliveryService ploy to get him to uncover the Sovereignty using flower magic]], she uses magic to change into her preferred business ensemble: a golden leotard with flowing sleeves, a bejeweled tiara, and a face painted with clownish makeup.
** At the end of the prelude, several CGs display what she really looks like under her {{Glamour}}. [[DownplayedTrope She's still drop-dead gorgeous]], but it reveals a few facial and body details that she'd been obscuring during her time with Loïc, along with the [[NotQuiteBackToNormal glowing scar]] inflicted by the Voice of the Sovereignty. Most notably, it's set up just before the jarring reveal that the awakened figure in TheStinger looks exactly like she does without her illusions on.
** At the end of the prelude, several CGs display what she really looks like under her {{Glamour}}. [[DownplayedTrope She's still drop-dead gorgeous]], but it reveals a few facial and body details that she'd been obscuring during her time with Loïc, along with the [[NotQuiteBackToNormal glowing scar]] inflicted by the Voice of the Sovereignty. Most notably, it's set up just before the jarring reveal that the awakened figure in TheStinger looks exactly like she does without her illusions on.
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* IcyBlueEyes: The only main character sporting this eye color, contrasting Loïc's brown. What start as InnocentBlueEyes turn into smug, smoldering glances as soon as she decides to stop playing dumb.
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* YouIdiot: Chides Loïc for his continued trust in her, even after she betrayed it to serve her own desires.
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* YouIdiot: YouFool: Chides Loïc for his continued trust in her, even after she betrayed it to serve her own desires.
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Sacrifices his own freedom and independence for Ysmé's sake, even with the knowledge that his gift to her might well be misused for her own selfish gains.]]
* OlderThanTheyLook: Old enough to have raised a teenaged daughter, Loïc makes occasional comments that would place him around or approaching middle age. His [[PrettyBoy soft, androgynous looks]] paired with only some subtle graying hair and eye lines imply he's [[SilverFox aging with quite a bit of grace]].
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* WasItAllALie: Defied. Loïc declares outright that he believes [[spoiler: Ysmé's DecoyBackstory has more truth embedded in it than she's willing to admit.]]
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: [[spoiler: His choices are what enable Ysmé to claim the Sovereignty, threatening to bring about the apocalypse to the Mosaic once and for all.]]
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: [[spoiler: His choices are what enable Ysmé to claim the Sovereignty, threatening to bring about the apocalypse to the Mosaic once and for all.]]
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* YouIdiot: Chides Loïc for his continued trust in her, even after she betrayed it to serve her own desires.
--> '''Loïc:''' I don't believe [[DecoyBackstory everything you told me on the way to the temple]] was a lie. About the person you wanted to save with the Sovereignty, I mean -- even if it was [[ItsAllAboutMe yourself]].
--> '''Ysmé:''' Then you're [[HorribleJudgeOfCharacter an idiot.]]
--> '''Loïc:''' [[ItsWhatIDo That's something I can live with.]]
--> '''Loïc:''' I don't believe [[DecoyBackstory everything you told me on the way to the temple]] was a lie. About the person you wanted to save with the Sovereignty, I mean -- even if it was [[ItsAllAboutMe yourself]].
--> '''Ysmé:''' Then you're [[HorribleJudgeOfCharacter an idiot.]]
--> '''Loïc:''' [[ItsWhatIDo That's something I can live with.]]
