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* AmbiguousSituation: When reminiscing about his [[spoiler:attempted suicide, he remembers hearing a voice urging him to end his own life.]] While Yu didn't think much of it at the time, he wonders in hindsight whether that had been his Shadow or something else entirely.
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* {{Foil}}: To his guardian, Sae. [[spoiler: Both of them suffered a single great catastrophic event that essentially reset their lives, and were pulled back from the brink by their little sister. Both of them see the other as an adoptive family member and will fight for what they believe is right. The difference is that Sae works within the system, and has no qualms about abusing it for her own gain when it suits her, whereas Yu fights against the system from the outside, and has rules in place to keep him and his friends from going too far.]]
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* DespairEventHorizon: Her father's death was this for her. She almost walked out and let the world do whatever it wanted to her, until Makoto's earnest plea to not leave her too brought her back.
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* {{Foil}}: To her ward. [[spoiler: Both of them suffered a single great catastrophic event that essentially reset their lives, and were pulled back from the brink by their little sister. Both of them see the other as an adoptive family member and will fight for what they believe is right. The difference is that Sae works within the system, and has no qualms about abusing it for her own gain when it suits her, whereas Yu fights against the system from the outside, and has rules in place to keep him and his friends from going too far.]]
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*MyGreatestFailure: [[spoiler: When confiding with Yu, she reveals that she had the chance to warn her dad about the incoming attack, but didn't do it out of spite and a naive belief that he would win. As such, she considers his death to be this.]]
*ParentalSubstitute: Yu accepts her as one at the end of the Homecoming Trilogy.
*ParentalSubstitute: Yu accepts her as one at the end of the Homecoming Trilogy.
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** Chapter 114 shows that she has become this for Minato, essentially being the person in the world the otherwise blunt and cold young man will go out of his way to watch him words around.
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** Chapter 114 shows that she has become this for Minato, essentially being the one person in the world the otherwise blunt and cold young man will go out of his way to watch him words around.
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** Chapter 114 shows that she has become this for Minato, essentially being that person in the world the otherwise blunt and cold young man with go out of his way to watch him words around.
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** She's the most precious thing in the world as far as Yu is concerned, to the point that Dojima was able convince him to not commit suicide by making him realize just how traumatizing it would be for her.
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** She's the most precious thing in the world as far as Yu is concerned, to the point that Dojima was able convince him to not commit suicide by making him realize just how traumatizing it would be for her.
** Chapter 114 shows that she has become this for Minato, essentially being that person in the world the otherwise blunt and cold young man with go out of his way to watch him words around.
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* SpiritedCompetitor: She gets really into volleyball, especially when up against a WorthyOpponent. Her match with Yu becomes so intense that she winds up accidentally breaking his nose. This comes up later in chapter 83, when she almost completely drains both her's and her boyfriend's wallets because she refused to accept defeat at a carnival game.
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* SpiritedCompetitor: She gets really into volleyball, especially when up against a WorthyOpponent. Her match with Yu becomes so intense that she winds up accidentally breaking his nose. This comes up later in chapter 83, when she almost completely drains both her's her and her boyfriend's wallets because she refused to accept defeat at a carnival game.
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** Kobayakawa and Kamoshida are both sports coaches that use their power to sexually harass female students and abuse the male ones and are responsible for driving Shiho to suicide. Both see themselves as the absolute rulers of the school (A dictator and a king, respectively). And both have a personal history with the first member to join the Wild Card. However, where Kamoshida was driven by lust, Kobayakawa was driven by fear for his own well-being (having covered up this story's Kamoshida's misdeeds). And where Kamoshida could all but flaunt his misdeeds, Kobayakwa had to keep them hidden.
** Mitsuyo and Madarame are both parasites that live off of, and ruin the lives of, other people. Both of them have a familial relationship with the member that joins, and said member joins by entering the Metaverse by accident after messing with the real world to remove an obstacle in the Palace. But where it's debatable if Madarame ever cared for Yusuke, it's clear that Mitsuyo doesn't give a single shit about Hifumi beyond how she can use her daughter.
** Kaneshiro and Iwai are both feared criminals that have no qualms blackmailing the member that joins in their respective arcs, and said member is required in order to get the infiltration going, and both are driven by pure avarice. However, Iwai is a genuine threat both in the real world and in the Metaverse, on top of already having a history with other characters. Meanwhile Kaneshiro was only connected to Makoto, and didn't seem to have any real world combat skill.
** Kobayakawa and Kamoshida are both sports coaches that use their power to sexually harass female students and abuse the male ones and are responsible for driving Shiho to suicide. Both see themselves as the absolute rulers of the school (A dictator and a king, respectively). And both have a personal history with the first member to join the Wild Card. However, where Kamoshida was driven by lust, Kobayakawa was driven by fear for his own well-being (having covered up this story's Kamoshida's misdeeds). And where Kamoshida could all but flaunt his misdeeds, Kobayakwa had to keep them hidden.
** Mitsuyo and Madarame are both parasites that live off of, and ruin the lives of, other people. Both of them have a familial relationship with the member that joins, and said member joins by entering the Metaverse by accident after messing with the real world to remove an obstacle in the Palace. But where it's debatable if Madarame ever cared for Yusuke, it's clear that Mitsuyo doesn't give a single shit about Hifumi beyond how she can use her daughter.
** Kaneshiro and Iwai are both feared criminals that have no qualms blackmailing the member that joins in their respective arcs, and said member is required in order to get the infiltration going, and both are driven by pure avarice. However, Iwai is a genuine threat both in the real world and in the Metaverse, on top of already having a history with other characters. Meanwhile Kaneshiro was only connected to Makoto, and didn't seem to have any real world combat skill.
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* EvilUncle: He technically this for Ryuji, as he and Ryuji's father were BloodBrothers back in the the day.
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* EvilUncle: He technically this for Ryuji, as he and Ryuji's father were BloodBrothers [[SwornBrothers blood brothers]] back in the the day.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: All the Palce Rulers who've appeared thus far are much more vile than their canon equivalents.
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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Him forcing himself on Shiho puts her on the track to join the Phantom Team and to give them the resolve to steal his heart. He also raped Eiko and [[spoiler: Wabaka]] prior to the events of the story.
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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Him forcing himself on Shiho puts her on the track to join the Phantom Team and to give them the resolve to steal his heart. He also raped Eiko and [[spoiler: Wabaka]] Wakaba]] prior to the events of the story.
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* BringIt: When Iwai gets his calling card, his reaction to list all the people that have failed to take him down before, and dare the Phantom Team to be the one that does the deed.
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* BringIt: When Iwai gets his calling card, his reaction is to list all the people that have failed to take him down before, and dare the Phantom Team to be the one that does the deed.
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* BerserkButton: Any kind of sexual harassment, regardless of genders of both the victim and the perpetrator, will push this for her.
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* BladeOnAStick: Izanagi wields a Naginata, as per usual.
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* FashionModel: As in canon.
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* WhyWontYouDie?: Iwai is "livid" after seeing that the Phantom Team survived his attempt to self-destruct the Palace.
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* WhyWontYouDie?: Iwai is "livid" ''livid'' after seeing that the Phantom Team survived his attempt to self-destruct the Palace.
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* AllWomenArePrudes: A variation. When the Phantom Team starts discussing some lewd topics, Hifumi is quick to try and stop them. When she's unsuccessful, she leaves the group chat.
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* AllWomenArePrudes: A variation. When the Phantom Team starts discussing Every time something even remotely lewd or inappropriate comes up, she always expresses some lewd topics, Hifumi is quick to try and stop them. When she's unsuccessful, she leaves the group chat.form of disgust.
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-->'''Iwai''': Are you fucking shitting me?! You ass clowns are still alive?!
-->'''Iwai''': Are you fucking shitting me?! You ass clowns are still alive?!
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* LikesOlderMen: According to her younger sister in chapter 50.
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* LastNameBasis: Not her specifically, but Sae addresses almost everyone exclusively by their last name.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Her Phan-site user name is Lovers 06.
* SatelliteCharacter: She doesn't have much going on in the early chapters beyond being Shiho's best friend. This gets {{Subverted|Trope}} after Yu forms a Confidant with her.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Her Phan-site user name is Lovers 06.
* SatelliteCharacter: She doesn't have much going on in the early chapters beyond being Shiho's best friend. This gets {{Subverted|Trope}} after Yu forms a Confidant with her.
* FashionModel: As in canon.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Her Phan-site user name is Lovers 06.
* SatelliteCharacter: She doesn't have much going on in the early chapters beyond being Shiho's best friend. This gets {{Subverted|Trope}} after Yu forms a Confidant with her.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Her Phan-site user name is Lovers 06.
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* ReducedToDust: Igor ''[[DisproportionateRetribution disintegrates]]'' them as punishment for breaking the rules of the Velvet Room by using their guest (Yu) to help win competition they were having with their sister Elizabeth. They get better though, with them pointing out Igor will only permanently kill them if they do something like completely betray him.
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* ReducedToDust: Igor ''[[DisproportionateRetribution disintegrates]]'' them as punishment for breaking the rules of the Velvet Room by using their guest (Yu) to help win a competition they were having with their sister Elizabeth. They get better though, with them pointing out Igor will only permanently kill them if they do something like completely betray him.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Is he fat? Yes. Is he a sleazeball? Yes. But neither of those facts stop him from killing three armed goons in chapter 88, nor does it stop him from dealing a blow to the mob while undercover all by himself. Compare the original Kaneshiro, who never showed any sort of direct combat skills.
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* AdaptationalBadass: While her canon counterpart has no known combat abilities to speak of, this version of Sae is the top martial arts instructor in the SIU, and is strong enough to hospitalize grown men.
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* AdaptationalBadass: While her canon counterpart has no known combat abilities counterpart's kickboxing was relegated to speak of, InformedAbility, this version of Sae is the top martial arts instructor in the SIU, and is strong enough to hospitalize grown men.
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* ARealManIsAKiller: [[spoiler:{{Zigzagged|Trope}}. During one of her meetings with Izanagi, the [[MetaphoricallyTrue "leader"]] of the Phantom Team, she goes into great detail about three separate instances where she remorselessly killed men in self-defense. However, when Yu confronts Akechi about this, he says that all of these incidents severely shook her and that she was likely just embellishing the narrative for intimidation's sake. Yu, however, isn't totally convinced and speculates that Akechi himself might be sugarcoating things avoid casting doubt on their alliances with her.]]
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* ARealManIsAKiller: [[spoiler:{{Zigzagged|Trope}}. During one of her meetings with Izanagi, the [[MetaphoricallyTrue "leader"]] of the Phantom Team, she goes into great detail about three separate instances where she remorselessly killed men in self-defense. However, when Yu confronts Akechi about this, he says that all of these incidents severely shook her and that she was likely just embellishing the narrative for intimidation's sake. Yu, however, isn't totally convinced and speculates that Akechi himself might be sugarcoating things avoid casting doubt on their alliances with her.]]
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Zigzagged. When she first meets Yu, she imposes very strict limitations on what he can do in his free time. Eventually, she starts to lift these restrictions, and becomes a much more accommodating guardian. Comparatively, in the SIU, she's one of the top dogs on the food chain, and uses her authority to strike fear in the hearts of rookies, as well as use it to beat up whoever she wants without fear of consequences.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Zigzagged. When she first meets Yu, she imposes very strict limitations on what he can do in his free time. Eventually, she starts to lift these restrictions, and becomes a much more accommodating guardian. Comparatively, in the SIU, she's one of the top dogs on the food chain, and uses her authority to strike fear in the hearts of rookies, as well as use it to beat up whoever she wants without fear of consequences.
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Head of the Togo News Network and Hifumi's mother. She built her media empire on the back of exposing scandals, but isn't above using them as leverage on people. Her Palace is designed as a feudal Japanese fortress with her as the Shogun. Her treasure is her wedding ring, which takes the shape of a stage maskmask.
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* MadeOfIron: In the boss fight with Iwai's Shadow, Yu gets rammed by a machete to the chest. His reaction is to get pissed and knock Iwai back.
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* MadeOfIron: In the boss fight with Iwai's Shadow, Yu gets rammed in the chest by a machete to the chest.machete. His reaction is to get pissed and knock Iwai back.
