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* MeaningfulName: The name "Todd" originates from the is a name of Middle English word for origin that means "fox."
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[[folder:Todd Hayseed]]
The sheriff of Troughwater, who's very much a work in progress.
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*TheAllegedExpert: Todd got the job as Troughwater's sheriff because he said on his resume he helped guard the Whatchamacallum fortune, which Joy took as a sign he was competent. It turns out that Whatchamacallum is a knick-knack store in his hometown, and he was a cashier there. His experience in guarding a fortune was helping his boss hide his fortune from the IRS.
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[[folder:Shawn Burrowitz]]
Todd's best friend and the deputy of Troughwater.
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*CharacterisationMarchesOn: In the "Strategically Stupid" pilot, Shawn was constantly deadpan and was too busy dealing with Todd's overconfidence and incompetence to really be fazed by criminals. As of "Boomerang in a Gun Fight", he's shown to be more devoted to his job as deputy, but still maintains his snarkiness.
*DeadpanSnarker: In SPADES.
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[[folder:Mayor Joy]]
The mayor of Troughwater, who doesn't tolerate inefficiency or insubordinate work.
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*HairTriggerTemper: While she's usually polite and understanding, when she gets mad, she gets ''MAD''.
*JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Mayor Joy isn't the nicest mayor but she does praise the guys when they're able to [[spoiler: successfully subdue her when she's dressed as a criminal]].
*RetiredBadass: She fought in a past war, and came out with a prosthetic leg as a result.
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[[folder:Lloyd Herwick]]
Mayor Joy's assistant.
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*DrillSergeantNasty: Gets downright SERIOUS when he trains Shawn and Todd. According to Lloyd, his training came from when Mayor Joy taught him everything she knew, implying she did the same to him.
*StealthPun: Is a sheep, and him being scared crying by the crime in Troughwater means he's quite sheepish.
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[[folder: Huck Hickman]]
A resident of Troughwater.
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*ButtMonkey: Everytime he's on-screen, he WILL be subjected to an injury.
**IronButtMonkey: That being said, he takes it all in stride and just gets right back up.
*ThePollyanna: Quite an upbeat fellow, even admist the injuries and robberies.
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[[folder:Ol' Boomstick]]
One of the MANY criminals and bandits of Troughwater.
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*KarmaHoudini: Successfully robs the bank and escapes, despite Shawn and Todd's best efforts. [[JustifiedTrope Justified in that this is what sets up Mayor Joy deciding to give the boys training in order to become more efficient at their jobs.]]
*SmallRoleBigImpact: His successful robbery of the town bank kickstarts the main plot of Todd and Shawn being put through training to become more efficient at their jobs.
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[[folder:The Scarecrow (SPOILERS!)]]
A crow-themed bandit who's never been to Troughwater but means BUSINESS. [[spoiler: Is actually Mayor Joy in disguise.]]
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*SamusIsAGirl: [[spoiler:Is referred to with male pronouns but is revealed to be Mayor Joy once she's unmasked.]]
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[[folder:Todd Hayseed]]
The sheriff of Troughwater, who's very much a work in progress.
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*TheAllegedExpert: Todd got the job as Troughwater's sheriff because he said on his resume he helped guard the Whatchamacallum fortune, which Joy took as a sign he was competent. It turns out that Whatchamacallum is a knick-knack store in his hometown, and he was a cashier there. His experience in guarding a fortune was helping his boss hide his fortune from the IRS.
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[[folder:Shawn Burrowitz]]
Todd's best friend and the deputy of Troughwater.
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*CharacterisationMarchesOn: In the "Strategically Stupid" pilot, Shawn was constantly deadpan and was too busy dealing with Todd's overconfidence and incompetence to really be fazed by criminals. As of "Boomerang in a Gun Fight", he's shown to be more devoted to his job as deputy, but still maintains his snarkiness.
*DeadpanSnarker: In SPADES.
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[[folder:Mayor Joy]]
The mayor of Troughwater, who doesn't tolerate inefficiency or insubordinate work.
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*HairTriggerTemper: While she's usually polite and understanding, when she gets mad, she gets ''MAD''.
*JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Mayor Joy isn't the nicest mayor but she does praise the guys when they're able to [[spoiler: successfully subdue her when she's dressed as a criminal]].
*RetiredBadass: She fought in a past war, and came out with a prosthetic leg as a result.
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[[folder:Lloyd Herwick]]
Mayor Joy's assistant.
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*DrillSergeantNasty: Gets downright SERIOUS when he trains Shawn and Todd. According to Lloyd, his training came from when Mayor Joy taught him everything she knew, implying she did the same to him.
*StealthPun: Is a sheep, and him being scared crying by the crime in Troughwater means he's quite sheepish.
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[[folder: Huck Hickman]]
A resident of Troughwater.
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*ButtMonkey: Everytime he's on-screen, he WILL be subjected to an injury.
**IronButtMonkey: That being said, he takes it all in stride and just gets right back up.
*ThePollyanna: Quite an upbeat fellow, even admist the injuries and robberies.
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[[folder:Ol' Boomstick]]
One of the MANY criminals and bandits of Troughwater.
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*KarmaHoudini: Successfully robs the bank and escapes, despite Shawn and Todd's best efforts. [[JustifiedTrope Justified in that this is what sets up Mayor Joy deciding to give the boys training in order to become more efficient at their jobs.]]
*SmallRoleBigImpact: His successful robbery of the town bank kickstarts the main plot of Todd and Shawn being put through training to become more efficient at their jobs.
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[[folder:The Scarecrow (SPOILERS!)]]
A crow-themed bandit who's never been to Troughwater but means BUSINESS. [[spoiler: Is actually Mayor Joy in disguise.]]
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*SamusIsAGirl: [[spoiler:Is referred to with male pronouns but is revealed to be Mayor Joy once she's unmasked.]]
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