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!!Martin the Warrior
A young warrior mouse from the northlands, he wanders into Mossflower only to be imprisoned by Verdauga and his ancestral sword snapped by Tsarmina. Vowing vengeance upon the tyrannical Tsarmina, he becomes a trusted ally of Mossflower's residents.
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See his tropes [[Characters/RedwallMultiple here]].
!!Martin the Warrior
A young warrior mouse from the northlands, he wanders into Mossflower only to be imprisoned by Verdauga and his ancestral sword snapped by Tsarmina. Vowing vengeance upon the tyrannical Tsarmina, he becomes a trusted ally of Mossflower's residents.
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!!Chibb
A robin hired by the woodlanders to spy on Kotir.
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* BeneathNotice: You'd think a robin flitting in and out of Kotir on a regular basis in broad daylight would possibly catch the attention of someone there... but the only one that notices him is Cludd, [[CassandraTruth whose concerns are soundly ignored by Tsarmina.]] This proves to be a major part of Tsarmina's downfall, as Chibb's spying gives the woodlanders all the info they need to constantly be one step ahead.
* ChuckCunninghamSyndrome: Unlike most of the ''Mossflower'' cast, Chibb doesn't get so much as a mention in ''The Legend of Luke''.
* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Despite being technically on the woodlanders' side, the idea of getting Chibb's help is met with complaints all around. Even Columbine, who's the most diplomatic of the bunch when actually negotiating with him, muses behind his back that they wouldn't have to give him danger pay if he's mauled by Argulor.
* TheInformant: Basically his role to the woodlanders, with them buying information on Kotir off him.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Initially his relationship with the other woodlanders is one of mutual dislike, but he does show a more friendly side towards the imprisoned Gingivere, and when Ferdy and Coggs are captured, he drops everything to warn the others. Furthermore, he continues helping them after amassing more candied chestnuts than he can count, meaning he wouldn't have a need to work with them for a while but does anyway.
* OnlyInItForTheMoney: Or rather, he's only in it because they're giving him candied chestnuts. He mellows out later on, though.
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Candied chestnuts, the only payment he accepts for his services.
* VerbalTic: Often punctuates his sentences by clearing his throat.
A robin hired by the woodlanders to spy on Kotir.
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* BeneathNotice: You'd think a robin flitting in and out of Kotir on a regular basis in broad daylight would possibly catch the attention of someone there... but the only one that notices him is Cludd, [[CassandraTruth whose concerns are soundly ignored by Tsarmina.]] This proves to be a major part of Tsarmina's downfall, as Chibb's spying gives the woodlanders all the info they need to constantly be one step ahead.
* ChuckCunninghamSyndrome: Unlike most of the ''Mossflower'' cast, Chibb doesn't get so much as a mention in ''The Legend of Luke''.
* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Despite being technically on the woodlanders' side, the idea of getting Chibb's help is met with complaints all around. Even Columbine, who's the most diplomatic of the bunch when actually negotiating with him, muses behind his back that they wouldn't have to give him danger pay if he's mauled by Argulor.
* TheInformant: Basically his role to the woodlanders, with them buying information on Kotir off him.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Initially his relationship with the other woodlanders is one of mutual dislike, but he does show a more friendly side towards the imprisoned Gingivere, and when Ferdy and Coggs are captured, he drops everything to warn the others. Furthermore, he continues helping them after amassing more candied chestnuts than he can count, meaning he wouldn't have a need to work with them for a while but does anyway.
* OnlyInItForTheMoney: Or rather, he's only in it because they're giving him candied chestnuts. He mellows out later on, though.
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Candied chestnuts, the only payment he accepts for his services.
* VerbalTic: Often punctuates his sentences by clearing his throat.
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!!Skipper of Otters (Warthorn)
The leader of the otters at Camp Willow, and one of the leaders of the woodlander resistance.
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* TheBigGuy: For the woodlanders. He's one of the most eager for a straight fight, is described as being fairly brawny, and whenever things get dirty, his crew will be there in the thick of the action.
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: Only ever referred to by his title, as is the case for many Skippers in the series. Even his own brother, the Mask, never refers to him by name, and he isn't given one until ''The Legend of Luke''.
* RevengeBeforeReason: Twice in the story, his desire for revenge gets the better of him. The first time is when he takes on Cludd personally to [[spoiler:avenge the death of the Mask]] (and as Tsarmina points out later, her soldiers might have taken him out if it weren't for them being too busy observing MookChivalry), and the second time is him and Amber attacking Kotir in retaliation for Tsarmina and Bane ambushing the woodlanders (they get away with it, but Germaine chews them out for acting recklessly).
* ThoseTwoGuys: Spends a lot of time beside Lady Amber, due to their similar personalities and opinions.
* WarHawk: He and Lady Amber are the two woodlander leaders most willing to drive out Kotir's inhabitants by force, in stark contrast to Bella and Abbess Germaine.
!!Lady Amber
Queen of the squirrels in Mossflower, Lady Amber serves as one of the woodlanders' leaders in their resistance against Kotir.
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* EarAche: Loses an ear to one of Bane's mercenaries. Later, she waggles the severed stump at Germaine to pretend she can't hear the abbess lecturing her, [[ActuallyPrettyFunny which gets a laugh out of Germaine despite the situation.]]
* FriendlySniper: She's a skilled archer, and as long as you're not with Kotir, she's generally quite cordial.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Whenever a skirmish breaks out between the woodlanders and the Thousand Eyes Army, you can expect Lady Amber to be on the front lines alongside her archers.
* ThoseTwoGuys: Most of her time in the narrative is spent beside Skipper, due to them having similar roles in leading the woodlanders' main fighters.
The leader of the otters at Camp Willow, and one of the leaders of the woodlander resistance.
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* TheBigGuy: For the woodlanders. He's one of the most eager for a straight fight, is described as being fairly brawny, and whenever things get dirty, his crew will be there in the thick of the action.
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: Only ever referred to by his title, as is the case for many Skippers in the series. Even his own brother, the Mask, never refers to him by name, and he isn't given one until ''The Legend of Luke''.
* RevengeBeforeReason: Twice in the story, his desire for revenge gets the better of him. The first time is when he takes on Cludd personally to [[spoiler:avenge the death of the Mask]] (and as Tsarmina points out later, her soldiers might have taken him out if it weren't for them being too busy observing MookChivalry), and the second time is him and Amber attacking Kotir in retaliation for Tsarmina and Bane ambushing the woodlanders (they get away with it, but Germaine chews them out for acting recklessly).
* ThoseTwoGuys: Spends a lot of time beside Lady Amber, due to their similar personalities and opinions.
* WarHawk: He and Lady Amber are the two woodlander leaders most willing to drive out Kotir's inhabitants by force, in stark contrast to Bella and Abbess Germaine.
!!Lady Amber
Queen of the squirrels in Mossflower, Lady Amber serves as one of the woodlanders' leaders in their resistance against Kotir.
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* EarAche: Loses an ear to one of Bane's mercenaries. Later, she waggles the severed stump at Germaine to pretend she can't hear the abbess lecturing her, [[ActuallyPrettyFunny which gets a laugh out of Germaine despite the situation.]]
* FriendlySniper: She's a skilled archer, and as long as you're not with Kotir, she's generally quite cordial.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Whenever a skirmish breaks out between the woodlanders and the Thousand Eyes Army, you can expect Lady Amber to be on the front lines alongside her archers.
* ThoseTwoGuys: Most of her time in the narrative is spent beside Skipper, due to them having similar roles in leading the woodlanders' main fighters.
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: His main contribution to the actual story is killing [[spoiler:the Gloomer]]. Aside from that, he doesn't appear much, but his mere presence is a very strong deterrent that keeps Tsarmina's troops from crossing the River Moss or even setting foot in it.
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* PunchClockVillain: He never does anything overtly evil.
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* PunchClockVillain: He never does anything overtly evil.evil, and is presumably only serving Tsarmina because he's stuck with the position. Tellingly, as soon as Tsarmina starts losing her marbles, Ashleg recognizes that staying at Kotir would inevitably get him killed and immediately bails.
* DumbMuscle: Even Tsarmina acknowledges that he's not a smart creature, but he knows how to stay in her good books and is handy enough in a fight, so he sticks around as her last remaining captain.
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* YesMan: To Tsarmina, almost mindlessly going along with her schemes. That being said, he's not above lying to Tsarmina (taking advantage of her hydrophobia in the process) to weasel his way out of checking the cave beneath the cells.
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* HiredGunsHiredGuns: He's introduced as the leader of a band of mercenaries.
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* HandicappedBadass: The book notes he's almost blind.
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* HandicappedBadass: The book notes he's almost blind. Being an eagle, that alone is not enough to stop him from being a threat to Kotir and the woodlanders alike.
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* LargeAndInCharge
KarmaHoudini: Downplayed. On the one hand, he manages to slip away from Martin and company after being forced to guide them out of the swamp, despite having tried to feed them to Snakefish. On the other hand, Snakefish getting loose almost certainly decimated his tribe, meaning that he probably doesn't have much to return to.
* LargeAndInCharge: The biggest of his tribe, and their leader.
* LargeAndInCharge: The biggest of his tribe, and their leader.
* BadassGrandpa: Old enough by the events of the book that his daughter is fully grown, and his fur has gone silver. Being a formidable badger lord, he's still one of the fiercest warriors in the series.
* BloodKnight: He gets noticeably more jovial and excited at the prospect of battle. Indeed, while fighting Ripfang's horde, he seems to be having the time of his life.
* BloodKnight: He gets noticeably more jovial and excited at the prospect of battle. Indeed, while fighting Ripfang's horde, he seems to be having the time of his life.
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* MasterSwordsman: Mentors Martin in swordplay.
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* MasterSwordsman: Mentors Martin in swordplay. The book notes that Martin learned more in one day of training with Boar than he had in his whole life up to that point.
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* IncorruptiblePurePureness: He bears none of her father or sister's evil. And as pissed as he was in learning that Tsarmina tricked him into killing their father, he could not bring himself to make her pay.
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* IncorruptiblePurePureness: He bears none of her his father or sister's evil. And as pissed as he was in learning that Tsarmina tricked him into killing their father, he could not bring himself to make her pay.
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* BadassCape: It used to be Ashleg's. [[spoiler: This is what gets him killed.]]
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* BadassCape: It used to be Ashleg's. [[spoiler: This [[spoiler:This is what gets him killed.]]
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* MutualKill: [[spoiler: With Bane.]]
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* MutualKill: [[spoiler: With [[spoiler:With Bane.]]
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* ThreateningShark: Or, as a pike, the local equivalent.
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* RepetitiveName: Verdauga ALSO means "green eye." His name is Greeneye Greeneye.
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* RepetitiveName: Verdauga ALSO means "green eye." His name is Greeneye Greeneye.Greeneyes.
* BadassCape: Shown in a purple cape in most official artwork.
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* {{Natural Weapon}}: Unarmed and unarmoured when confronted by Martin, Tsarmina makes do with her claws and fangs, nearly killing him.
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* {{Natural Weapon}}: NaturalWeapon: Unarmed and unarmoured when confronted by Martin, Tsarmina makes do with her claws and fangs, nearly killing him.
* ThatManIsDead: Tsarmina declared this to her soldiers after pinning him for their father's murder, and forbade anyone from uttering his name in her presence.
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* ThatManIsDead: Tsarmina declared this to her soldiers after pinning him for their father's murder, and forbade anyone from uttering his name in her presence.
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* {{Alas Poor Villain}}: It's rather sad to see his loyalty to Tsarmina, who really doesn't deserve it, amount to nothing as she leaves him to die so she can escape.
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* {{Alas Poor Villain}}: AlasPoorVillain: It's rather sad to see his loyalty to Tsarmina, who really doesn't deserve it, amount to nothing as she leaves him to die so she can escape.
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* ObfuscatingInsanity: When Gingivere helps the Woodlanders by hiding Ferdy and Coggs inside his cell to trick the villains into thinking they'd already escaped, Tsarmina is the only one who thinks to question him (having [[ThatManIsDead forbidden her minions from acknowledging his existence]]), so Gingivere pretends to have lost his mind during his imprisonment to throw her off, ranting about her supposedly letting the young hedgehogs escape just so she could keep their bread and water for herself. The act is so convincing that Cludd finds it quite unnerving.
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Son of Old Lord Brocktree and father of Bella of Brockhall, Boar the Fighter is an ancient silver badger, who rules from Salamandastron. Martin hopes to recruit him into the fight against Tsarmina, only to discover that Boar is on the verge of a final clash with his own archnemesis, Ripfang the searat.
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Son of Old Lord Brocktree Brocktree, grandson of Lord Stonepaw and father of Bella of Brockhall, Boar the Fighter is an ancient silver badger, who rules from Salamandastron. Martin hopes to recruit him into the fight against Tsarmina, only to discover that Boar is on the verge of a final clash with his own archnemesis, Ripfang the searat.
*DisappearedDad: His father, Lord Brocktree left him to find his own way in life.
*RightfulKingReturns: His hinted backstory certainly gives off this vibe.
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* RedRightHand: A single long tooth that portrudes out of his mouth
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*TakingYouWithMe: On the receiving end of this trope
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* BeleagueredAssistant: He is Tsarmina's aide, and he is constantly abused by her. Eventually he has enough and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere sneaks out of the fortress]] when she starts going insane.
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* EvilCripple: Of the [[PunchClockVillain punch clock]] variety.
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* EvilCripple: Of He serves the [[PunchClockVillain punch clock]] variety.BigBad and has a wooden leg. However, he's not too evil, more of a PunchClockVillain.
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* SeldomSeenSpecies: One of only three pine martins seen across the series. It's a plot point too, since he's the one species around Argulor hasn't tasted before and is ever eager to catch.
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* SeldomSeenSpecies: One of only three pine martins martens seen across the series. It's a plot point too, since he's the one species around Argulor hasn't tasted before and is ever eager to catch.
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* CatsAreMean: Word of God says her name is a play on Tsar (as in Russian monarchs) and mean.
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* CatsAreMean: Word of God WordOfGod says her name is a play on Tsar (as in Russian monarchs) and mean.
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* MoreDeadlyThanTheMale: The only female villain Martian faces ...and the one that gives his the biggest fight of his life.
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* MoreDeadlyThanTheMale: The only female villain Martian faces ...faces... and the one that gives his him the biggest fight of his life.
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* PantheraAwesome: Out of all of ''Redwall''[='s=] villains, she puts up the best fight ''by far'' against the hero. It's largely because, as a European wildcat, she's many, many times Martin's size.
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* PantheraAwesome: Out of all of ''Redwall''[='s=] villains, she puts up the best fight ''by far'' against the hero. It's largely also justified because, as a European wildcat, she's many, many ''many'' times Martin's size.
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* NoNonsenseNemesis: Bane proves to be a GameChanger to the Kotir vs Woodlanders conflict because of his straightforward approach to war: don't bother with subterfuge, we have overwhelming forces, we can charge out there and just crush anyone who we see. It actually works the first time, inflicting serious demoralising losses on the woodlanders and forcing them to adapt.
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* TakeYouWithMe: Crushes Ripfang to death after dying himself.
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* TakeYouWithMe: TakingYouWithMe: Crushes Ripfang to death after dying himself.
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* Heroic RRoD / VillainousRRoD: Argulor is really more of a neutral figure than a hero ''or'' a villain, but his end comes when [[spoiler:at the end of his battle with Bane, already badly wounded by Bane's scimitar, he realises that [[AllForNothing his prey wasn't even the pine marten he'd been craving but just a fox]], and his heart gives out, causing him to plummet from the sky]].
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* Heroic RRoD HeroicRROD / VillainousRRoD: Argulor is really more of a neutral figure than a hero ''or'' a villain, but his end comes when [[spoiler:at the end of his battle with Bane, already badly wounded by Bane's scimitar, he realises that [[AllForNothing his prey wasn't even the pine marten he'd been craving but just a fox]], and his heart gives out, causing him to plummet from the sky]].
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Sort of, as he hasn't had it yet: Pine marten. That's what Ashleg up there is. [[spoiler:Ashleg skipping town proves to be his undoing.]]
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Sort of, as he hasn't had it yet: yet but is obsessed with trying it: Pine marten. That's what Ashleg up there is. [[spoiler:Ashleg skipping town proves to be his undoing.]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: Purposely falls to his death after learning that the victim he killed was not a pine marten.
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* LivingLegend: Unlike almost every other badger lord in the series, Boar is presented and spoken of as a monumentally powerful, mysterious and powerful entity, almost like a deity living up on Salamandastron; very little is revealed about her personality and history other than that he loves to fight and used to rule Mossflower. Even his father, Lord Brocktree, when presented his own book, was treated more as a character than the living legend status that Boar is treated with.
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* LivingLegend: Unlike almost every other badger lord in the series, Boar is presented and spoken of as a monumentally powerful, powerful and mysterious and powerful entity, almost like a deity living up on Salamandastron; very little is revealed about her his personality and history other than that he loves to fight and used to rule Mossflower. Even his father, Lord Brocktree, when presented his own book, was treated more as a character than the living legend status that Boar is treated with. Exemplified in the audio book where his voice actor speaks every line in a booming roar.
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* PurpleIsPowerful: Favours a purple cape.
* SanitySlippage: She slowly goes mad through a mix of power, frustration, and the constant sound of dripping water.
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* PurpleIsPowerful: Favours Favors a purple cape.
* SanitySlippage: She slowly goes mad through a mix of power, frustration, and the constant sound of dripping water. Having her brother and a couple of captives escape thanks to the Mask pushes things further for her.
* SanitySlippage: She slowly goes mad through a mix of power, frustration, and the constant sound of dripping water. Having her brother and a couple of captives escape thanks to the Mask pushes things further for her.
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* VillainHasAPoint: Tsarmina wants to execute Martin where he stood. Gingevere wants to simply exile him without further harm. Their father Verdauga leans to Gingevere and decides to exile the mouse after keeping him locked up. Martin outright admits that Tsarmina's choice was the better option because he promises to slay her.
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* VillainHasAPoint: Tsarmina wants to execute Martin where he stood. Gingevere wants to simply exile him without further harm. Their father Verdauga leans to Gingevere and decides to exile the mouse after keeping him locked up. up for a while. Martin outright admits declares that Tsarmina's choice was the better option because he promises to slay her.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: One of very, very few villains to actually succeed in this. However, he leaves his IconicOutfit behind, which Tsarmina exploits later.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Left Kotir and abandoned Tsarmina during her SanitySlippage. One of very, very few villains to actually succeed in this.this and live. However, he leaves his IconicOutfit behind, which Tsarmina exploits later.
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* CainAndAbel: Is very much the Cain to her good-hearted brother's Abel.
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* CainAndAbel: Is very much the Cain to her good-hearted brother's Abel. After tricking him into poisoning their father, she makes him TheScapegoat so she can rule alone.
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* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: ''Everyone'' - even her own army - wishes that her brother was the successor. They even prefer her father, who was a fairly vicious tyrant himself.
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* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: ''Everyone'' in Mossflower - even her own army - wishes that her brother was the successor. They even prefer her father, who was a fairly vicious tyrant himself.
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* SelfMadeOrphan: Poisons her father. He even suspects that she'll do it, but he's too old and decrepit to do much about it.
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* SelfMadeOrphan: Poisons Tricks her brother into poisoning their father. He even suspects that she'll do it, but he's too old and decrepit to do much about it.
* TemptingFate: Mocked Martin and destroyed his family sword. Martin warned her that he will come after her next time they meet, and she simply brushes it off. Near the end of the book, she is overwhelmed by the mouse and his reforged sword during the final battle. However, he doesn't finish her off as she fell to her doom in the water.
* VillainHasAPoint: Tsarmina wants to execute Martin where he stood. Gingevere wants to simply exile him without further harm. Their father Verdauga leans to Gingevere and decides to exile the mouse after keeping him locked up. Martin outright admits that Tsarmina's choice was the better option because he promises to slay her.
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* FamousAncestor: Of Squire Gingivere in the first book.
* IncorruptiblePurePureness: What makes his sister his opposite.
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* FamousAncestor: Of Squire Julian Gingivere in the first book.
* IncorruptiblePurePureness:What makes his sister his opposite.He bears none of her father or sister's evil. And as pissed as he was in learning that Tsarmina tricked him into killing their father, he could not bring himself to make her pay.
* IncorruptiblePurePureness:
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* ThatManIsDead: Tsarmina declared this to her soldiers after pinning him for their father's murder, and forbade anyone saying his name in her presence.
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* ThatManIsDead: Tsarmina declared this to her soldiers after pinning him for their father's murder, and forbade anyone saying from uttering his name in her presence.
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* TakeYouWithMe: Crushes Ripfang to death after dying himself.
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* HeterosexualLifePartners: Easily Martin's closest friend and ally.
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* OfficialCouple: With Columbine.
He hit it off with Loamhedge's Columbine. They then marry and have a son in "Legend of Luke".
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* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: Everyone - even her own army - wishes that her brother was the successor. They even prefer her father, who was a fairly vicious tyrant himself.
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* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: Everyone ''Everyone'' - even her own army - wishes that her brother was the successor. They even prefer her father, who was a fairly vicious tyrant himself.
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* TheMole: Tsarmina attempts to use her as such. However, the woodlanders were prepared for this with the Mask serving as a ReverseMole, and Fortunata ends up paying dearly for it.
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* TheMole: Tsarmina attempts to use her as such. However, the woodlanders were prepared for this with the Mask serving as a ReverseMole, TheMole, and Fortunata ends up paying dearly for it.
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* {{Alas Poor Villain}}: It's rather sad to see his loyalty to Tsarmina, who really doesn't deserve it, amount to nothing as she leaves him to dies so she can escape.
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* CainAndAbel: Is very much the Cain to her good-hearted brother's Abel.
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A badger. She opens her family home, Brockhall, to the woodlanders during Tsarmina's reign, and hopes that there is a way to bring her father, Boar the Fighter, home to Mossflower to lead the resistance against the wildcat.
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* TeamMom: She offers her home to the woodland creatures and has a sort of motherly role among them.
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* TeamMom: She offers her home to the woodland creatures and has a sort of motherly role among them. In later books she becomes Redwall's first badger mother.
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One of Tsarmina's advisors, Ashleg is a pine marten, and the OnlySaneMan in Kotir's increasingly dysfunctional command structure.
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* SeldomSeenSpecies: One of only three pine martins seen across the series. It's a plot point too, since he's the one species around Argulor hasn't tasted before and is ever eager to catch.
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* DefiantToTheEnd: [[spoiler:Even as Argulor drags him away, he doesn't stop ramming his scimitar into the eagle's body until he's dead, which allows him to get away with a MutualKill]].
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* DefiantToTheEnd: [[spoiler:Even as Argulor drags him away, he doesn't stop ramming his scimitar into the eagle's body until he's dead, which allows him to get away even with a MutualKill]].
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* TheStarscream: To Tsarmina
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Sort of, as he hasn't had it yet: Pine marten. That's what Ashleg up there is. [[spoiler:Ashleg skipping town proved to be his undoing.]]
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Sort of, as he hasn't had it yet: Pine marten. That's what Ashleg up there is. [[spoiler:Ashleg skipping town proved proves to be his undoing.]]
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* OldMaster: His advanced age hasn't dulled his skill as a fighter.
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* UltimateBlacksmith: This is the one that forged the [[CoolSword Sword of Martin.]]
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According to WordOfGod, this Ripfang is not the same Ripfang that appeared in ''Lord Brocktree'' - the similar names and matching backstories are "just a coincidence." However, the coincidence is so incredible that many fans assume Jacques was confused or forgetful and continue to consider the two Ripfangs the same character.
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According to WordOfGod, this Ripfang is not the same Ripfang that appeared in ''Lord Brocktree'' - the similar names and matching backstories are "just a coincidence." However, the coincidence is so incredible that many fans assume Jacques was confused or forgetful and continue to consider the two Ripfangs the same character.character, or at least ancestor and descendant.
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** To Badrang , who chronologically precedes her as Martin's worst enemy. Badrang's a jumped-up corsair who wants to be treated like an aristocrat, and whose fearsome reputation as a fighter is belied by his actual record in combat, while Tsarmina's a seemingly prissy princess who degenerates into a slavering berserker and gives Martin the fight of his life.
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** To Badrang , Badrang, who chronologically precedes her as Martin's worst enemy. Badrang's a jumped-up corsair who wants to be treated like an aristocrat, and whose fearsome reputation as a fighter is belied by his actual record in combat, while Tsarmina's a seemingly prissy princess who degenerates into a slavering berserker and gives Martin the fight of his life.
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* MoreDeadlyThanTheMale: The only female villain Martian faces...and the one that gives his the biggest fight of his life.
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* SanitySlippage: She slowly goes mad through a mix of power and the constant sound of dripping water.
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* CainAndAbel: Is very much the Cain to her good-hearted brother's brother.
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* BadassGrandpa: His fur is going silver, but that doesn't stop him from fighting pirates.
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The king of the searats at the time of ''Mossflower'', Ripfang has sunk or enslaved all of his rivals, leaving him in command of the largest armada of searats ever assembled. Unlike most of his contemporaries, he does not fear Salamandastron, and has a long-running enmity with Boar the Fighter. See the folder for ''Lord Brocktree'' for the rat who may be his younger self.
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The king of the searats at the time of ''Mossflower'', Ripfang has sunk or enslaved all of his rivals, leaving him in command of the largest armada of searats ever assembled. Unlike most of his contemporaries, he does not fear Salamandastron, and has a long-running enmity with Boar the Fighter. See
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* ShoutOut: His name and title are lifted directly from a poem from ''Literature/TheLordOftheRings'' (the scene from ''The Two Towers'' where Merry and Pippin first meet Treebeard). It's only one line, but it's sweet when you consider how many Tolkien influences seem to be in the books.
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* ShoutOut: His name and title are lifted directly from a poem from ''Literature/TheLordOftheRings'' ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings'' (the scene from ''The Two Towers'' where Merry and Pippin first meet Treebeard). It's only one line, but it's sweet when you consider how many Tolkien influences seem to be in the books.
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* ShoutOut: His name and title are lifted directly from a poem from [[TheLordoftheRings The Lord of the Rings]] (the scene from The Two Towers where Merry and Pippin first meet Treebeard). It's only one line, but it's sweet when you consider how many Tolkien influences seem to be in the books.
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* ShoutOut: His name and title are lifted directly from a poem from [[TheLordoftheRings The Lord of the Rings]] ''Literature/TheLordOftheRings'' (the scene from The ''The Two Towers Towers'' where Merry and Pippin first meet Treebeard). It's only one line, but it's sweet when you consider how many Tolkien influences seem to be in the books.