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* PrincessClassic
* LongHairIsFeminine
* LongHairIsFeminine
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*
* CelebCrush: Is crushing on Sigfried.
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* AnnoyingSidekick: She's pretty annoying.
* TrueCompanion: Stands up for Rachel when she is being harassed by bullies.
* TrueCompanion: Stands up for Rachel when she is being harassed by bullies.
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*
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* CelebCrush: Is crushing on Sigfried.
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* [[spoiler: MultiversalConqueror: his past self ruled 65 worlds.]]
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* [[spoiler: MultiversalConqueror: his [[spoiler:his past self ruled 65 worlds.]]
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%% * RetiredMonster: [[spoiler: Reformed monster? Her previous incaration was a lamia.]]
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%% * RetiredMonster: [[spoiler: Reformed monster? Her previous incaration incarnation was a lamia.]]
* CarryABigStick: Wields a greenstone Maori war club in battle.
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* DropTheHammer: Wields a greenstone Maori war club in battle.
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* DeadpanSnarker
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* [[spoiler: BackFromTheDead: Or rather, the Raven reworked history so he didn't die at all, but was hidden for fear he had been the target]]
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* [[spoiler: BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Or rather, the Raven reworked history so he didn't die at all, but was hidden for fear he had been the target]]
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The gym teacher.
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The gym teacher.teacher, he has SuperSpeed.
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* SuperSpeed
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%% * [[spoiler: CelestialParagonsAndArchangels: Protects the world from utter destruction.]]
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%% * [[spoiler: CelestialParagonsAndArchangels: [[spoiler: Protects the world from utter destruction.]]
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%% * [[spoiler:LaserGuidedAmnesia: turns out to be a major power and protection for the world.]]
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%% * [[spoiler:LaserGuidedAmnesia: LaserGuidedAmnesia: [[spoiler: turns out to be a major power and protection for the world.]]
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* [[spoiler:WingedHumanoid]]
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* BuxomIsBetter: Is ''very'' well developed for a fourteen year old, and goes to great lengths to show off.
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* BuxomIsBetter: BigBreastPride: Is ''very'' well developed for a fourteen year old, fourteen-year-old, and goes to great lengths to show off.
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* AdultFear: in book 4, Rachel realizes that, while she is friendly with [[spoiler: Jariel]], the relationship looks entirely different to someone who only knows him as [[spoiler: the memory-wiping Guardian of the world.]]
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* DaddysGirl: Grandfather's girl.
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* PrecociousCrush: on Vladimir, who is over twenty.
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* ShorterMeansSmarter
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%% * [[spoiler: RetiredMonster: [[spoiler: Reformed monster? Her previous incaration was a lamia.]]
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* DeadpanSnarker
* DreamWalker: has magical sandals that allow her to walk into dreamlan.
** Which are [[spoiler: confiscated]] in book 4.
* DreamWalker: has magical sandals that allow her to walk into dreamlan.
** Which are [[spoiler: confiscated]] in book 4.
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* DreamWalker: has magical sandals that allow her to walk into
**
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* OddFriendship: With Joy.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Can change her hair color at will.
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* TheCassandra: Naturally.
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* KingArthur: While a commoner, he can trace his descent to Sir Bors, one of Arthur's knights.
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%% * TagalongKid: insists on being included in the PowerTrio.
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%% * TagalongKid: insists on being included in the PowerTrio.team.
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%% * InstantAwesomeJustAddDragons
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* EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses: She's the princess of Magical Australia.
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* AttentionWhore: Enjoys being a celebrity--naturally enough, after his upbringing.
* AmazonChaser
* AmazonChaser
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%% * AttentionWhore: Enjoys being a celebrity--naturally enough, after his upbringing.
%% * AmazonChaser
%% * AmazonChaser
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* BookDumb
* BoisterousBruiser
* BoisterousBruiser
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%% * BookDumb
%% * BoisterousBruiser
%% * BoisterousBruiser
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* FearlessFool
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%% * FearlessFool
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* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: Is also blond.
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%% * HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: Is also blond.
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* HotBlooded
* InnocentInaccurate: ....let's just say he ''probably'' isn't an actual robot.
* KidSamurai: Aspires to be one.
** He also believes that King Arthur is going to return, and wants to be one of the Knights of the Round Table.
* InnocentInaccurate: ....let's just say he ''probably'' isn't an actual robot.
* KidSamurai: Aspires to be one.
** He also believes that King Arthur is going to return, and wants to be one of the Knights of the Round Table.
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%% * HotBlooded
%% *InnocentInaccurate: ....let's just say he ''probably'' isn't an actual robot.
InnocentInaccurate
%% * KidSamurai: Aspires to be one.
%% ** He also believes that King Arthur is going to return, and wants to be one of the Knights of the Round Table.
%% *
%% * KidSamurai: Aspires to be one.
%% ** He also believes that King Arthur is going to return, and wants to be one of the Knights of the Round Table.
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* NaiveNewcomer: New to all this magic stuff. A fact exploited to let Rachel info-dump.
* OrphanageOfFear: was raised in one.
* RandomlyGifted: He was not born to a magical family.
* WalkingTheEarth: Rachel notes his "wanderlust."
* OrphanageOfFear: was raised in one.
* RandomlyGifted: He was not born to a magical family.
* WalkingTheEarth: Rachel notes his "wanderlust."
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%% * NaiveNewcomer: New to all this magic stuff. A fact exploited to let Rachel info-dump.
%% * OrphanageOfFear: was raised in one.
%% * RandomlyGifted: He was not born to a magical family.
%% * WalkingTheEarth: Rachel notes his "wanderlust."
%% * OrphanageOfFear: was raised in one.
%% * RandomlyGifted: He was not born to a magical family.
%% * WalkingTheEarth: Rachel notes his "wanderlust."
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* AntiMagic: Can unmake enchantments with his fire.
* BigEater
* CherryBlossoms: A vision about [[spoiler:his origins]] connected him to Japan. This was one of the indicators.
* BigEater
* CherryBlossoms: A vision about [[spoiler:his origins]] connected him to Japan. This was one of the indicators.
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%% * AntiMagic: Can unmake enchantments with his fire.
%% * BigEater
%% * CherryBlossoms: A vision about [[spoiler:his origins]] connected him to Japan. This was one of the indicators.
%% * BigEater
%% * CherryBlossoms: A vision about [[spoiler:his origins]] connected him to Japan. This was one of the indicators.
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* InstantAwesomeJustAddDragons
* ShoulderSizedDragon
* ShoulderSizedDragon
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%% * InstantAwesomeJustAddDragons
%% * ShoulderSizedDragon
%% * ShoulderSizedDragon
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* TagalongKid: insists on being included in the PowerTrio.
* {{Fangirl}}: To Nastasia.
* {{Fangirl}}: To Nastasia.
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%% * TagalongKid: insists on being included in the PowerTrio.
%% * {{Fangirl}}: To Nastasia.
%% * {{Fangirl}}: To Nastasia.
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** Giving credence to this is the fact that [[spoiler: her magic is able to hurt Azrael]].
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%% ** Giving credence to this is the fact that [[spoiler: her magic is able to hurt Azrael]].
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* TheHeart: Seems to be taking this role.
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%% * TheHeart: Seems to be taking this role.
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* IntrepidReporter
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%% * IntrepidReporter
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* TeamMom: is developing towards this.
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%% * TeamMom: is developing towards this.
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* AmazonChaser
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%% * AmazonChaser
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* {{Expy}}: from the princess's visions, he came from a StarWars universe. [[spoiler:Between his coming from a farm and thinking he might be responsible for an artificial moon blowing up, Luke Skywalker seems likely.]]
** [[spoiler: Another possibility is that, given that he also is firmly convinced that his past self was not a good person, he was actually Anakin, rather than Luke.]]
** [[spoiler: Another possibility is that, given that he also is firmly convinced that his past self was not a good person, he was actually Anakin, rather than Luke.]]
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* BackToBackBadasses: With von Dread in book 1.
* PointyEars
* NothingUpMySleeve: Carries his dueling wand in a spring-loaded wrist sheath.
* PointyEars
* NothingUpMySleeve: Carries his dueling wand in a spring-loaded wrist sheath.
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%% * BackToBackBadasses: With von Dread in book 1.
%% * PointyEars
%% * NothingUpMySleeve: Carries his dueling wand in a spring-loaded wrist sheath.
%% * PointyEars
%% * NothingUpMySleeve: Carries his dueling wand in a spring-loaded wrist sheath.
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* AbusiveParents
* LonelyDollGirl
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%% * AbusiveParents
%% * LonelyDollGirl
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* [[spoiler: RetiredMonster: Reformed monster? Her previous incaration was a lamia.]]
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%% * [[spoiler: RetiredMonster: Reformed monster? Her previous incaration was a lamia.]]
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* {{Expy}}: Has shades of Harry Potter...crossed with Draco Malfoy.
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* RichBitch / SpoiledSweet: Has shades of both, as she is heir to the Fiction500 Ouroboros Industries, but lacks the ''noblesse oblige'' that Rachel and Nastasia were obliged to learn. On the other hand, she's Valerie's best friend and has no problems with Rachel.
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* RichBitch / SpoiledSweet: Has shades of both, as she RichBitch: Downplayed. She is heir to the Fiction500 Ouroboros Industries, but lacks the ''noblesse oblige'' that Rachel and Nastasia were obliged to learn. On the other hand, she's Valerie's best friend and has no problems with Rachel.
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* CoolOldLady
* SternTeacher
* SternTeacher
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%% * CoolOldLady
%% * SternTeacher
%% * SternTeacher
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* {{Expy}}: of Harry Potter's Hermione: extremely smart, bushy-haired, the heroine of her own set of adventures while at school...
* HeroicRedhead
* HeroicRedhead
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* {{Expy}}: of Harry Potter's Hermione: extremely smart, bushy-haired, the heroine of her own set of adventures while at school...
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%% * HeroicRedhead
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* [[spoiler: CelestialParagonsAndArchangels: Protects the world from utter destruction.]]
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%% * [[spoiler: CelestialParagonsAndArchangels: Protects the world from utter destruction.]]
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* GoodIsNotNice
* [[spoiler:LaserGuidedAmnesia: turns out to be a major power and protection for the world.]]
* [[spoiler:LaserGuidedAmnesia: turns out to be a major power and protection for the world.]]
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%% * GoodIsNotNice
%% * [[spoiler:LaserGuidedAmnesia: turns out to be a major power and protection for the world.]]
%% * [[spoiler:LaserGuidedAmnesia: turns out to be a major power and protection for the world.]]
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* [[spoiler: OurAngelsAreDifferent]]
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* {{Expy}}: [[spoiler: Is pretty clearly [[Literature/TheChroniclesOfNarnia Aslan]] in disguise.]]
** Made entirely explicit in book 4.
** Made entirely explicit in book 4.
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* {{Expy}}: [[spoiler: Is pretty clearly [[Literature/TheChroniclesOfNarnia Aslan]] in disguise.]]
**disguise. Made entirely explicit in book 4.
**
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!!! Serena O'Malley
* [[spoiler:SuperpoweredEvilSide]]
* TheDragon: to [[spoiler: Mortimer Egg]] and later to [[spoiler: Morax.]]
* EvilIsPetty
* NightmareFuel: She attempts [[spoiler: to sacrifice her own son]].
!!! [[spoiler: Mortimer Egg]]
!!! [[spoiler: Morax]]
* [[spoiler:SuperpoweredEvilSide]]
* TheDragon: to [[spoiler: Mortimer Egg]] and later to [[spoiler: Morax.]]
* EvilIsPetty
* NightmareFuel: She attempts [[spoiler: to sacrifice her own son]].
!!! [[spoiler: Mortimer Egg]]
!!! [[spoiler: Morax]]
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%% !!! Serena O'Malley
%% * [[spoiler:SuperpoweredEvilSide]]
%% * TheDragon: to [[spoiler: Mortimer Egg]] and later to [[spoiler: Morax.]]
%% * EvilIsPetty
* NightmareFuel: She attempts [[spoiler: to sacrifice her own son]].
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%% !!! [[spoiler: MortimerEgg]]
Egg]]
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%% !!! [[spoiler:Morax]]Morax]]
%%
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%% * [[spoiler:SuperpoweredEvilSide]]
%% * TheDragon: to [[spoiler: Mortimer Egg]] and later to [[spoiler: Morax.]]
%% * EvilIsPetty
%% !!! [[spoiler: Mortimer
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%% !!! [[spoiler:
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* GoodColorsEvilColors: Nastasia's vision [[spoiler: shows him wearing armor and a surcoat of red and blue.]]
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* MageBornOfMuggles: He was not born to a magical family.
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* TalkingAnimals
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* TalkingAnimals
TalkingAnimal
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* MageBornOfMuggles: He was not born to a magical family.
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* InnocentInaccurate: ....let's just say he ''probably'' isn't an actual robot.
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* FarmBoy: Tells Rachel his family has a farm.
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* FarmBoy: Tells Rachel his His family has runs a commercial chicken farm.
* PointyEars
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* {{Pride}}: Arrogant and imperious
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* {{Pride}}: Arrogant and imperiousimperious.
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* DreamWalker
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* DreamWalkerDreamWalker: has magical sandals that allow her to walk into dreamlan.
** Which are [[spoiler: confiscated]] in book 4.
** Which are [[spoiler: confiscated]] in book 4.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: is a pretty nice person to Rachel and others; but shows unabashed, utter glee when asked to annoy/taunt/infuriate others.
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* GoodOldFisticuffs: teaches Sigfried.
* MagicMusic: Plays bass guitar.
* GoodOldFisticuffs: teaches Sigfried.
* MagicMusic: Plays bass guitar.
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!!! Dean Moth
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!!! Dean Jacinta Moth
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: promises to not let Rachel be withdrawn from school unnecessarily.
!!! Scarlett [[=MacDannan=]]
* TheAce: is the only person in history to have recieved ''seven'' rings of mastery, one for each branch of the Art.
* {{Expy}}: of Harry Potter's Hermione: extremely smart, bushy-haired, the heroine of her own set of adventures while at school...
* HeroicRedhead
* SternTeacher: takes over as the Roanoke math teacher after the previous one turned into a dragon and exploded.
* AbsentMindedProfessor: tends to forget where she has put items.
* TheAce: is the only person in history to have recieved ''seven'' rings of mastery, one for each branch of the Art.
* {{Expy}}: of Harry Potter's Hermione: extremely smart, bushy-haired, the heroine of her own set of adventures while at school...
* HeroicRedhead
* SternTeacher: takes over as the Roanoke math teacher after the previous one turned into a dragon and exploded.
* AbsentMindedProfessor: tends to forget where she has put items.
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* GoodWingsEvilWingsGoodWingsEvilWings: black, feathered wings put him right on the line.
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!!! The Lion
A miniaturized lion, the familiar of one of Rachel's classmates.
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!!! Leander The Lion
A miniaturized lion,the familiar of one of Rachel's classmates.Kitten Fabian's familiar.
A miniaturized lion,
** Made entirely explicit in book 4.
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!!! Ambrose Griffin
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!!! Ambrose Griffin
Griffin, duke of Devon
* AdultFear: in book 4, Rachel realizes that, while she is friendly with [[spoiler: Jariel]], the relationship looks entirely different to someone who only knows him as [[spoiler: the memory-wiping Guardian of the world.]]
* AdultFear: in book 4, Rachel realizes that, while she is friendly with [[spoiler: Jariel]], the relationship looks entirely different to someone who only knows him as [[spoiler: the memory-wiping Guardian of the world.]]
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* NightmareFuel: She attempts [[spoiler: to sacrifice her own son]].
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* NightmareFuel: She attempts [[spoiler: to sacrifice her own son]].son]].
!!! [[spoiler: Mortimer Egg]]
!!! [[spoiler: Morax]]
!!! [[spoiler: Mortimer Egg]]
!!! [[spoiler: Morax]]
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* PrecociousCrush
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* PrecociousCrushPrecociousCrush: on Vladimir, who is over twenty.
* StupidSexyFriend: to Sigfried, whom she is very fond of and regards as a brother (and taken.) Even so, Rachel has to admit that he's very good-looking.
* UnreliableNarrator: Her worldview is limited by the fact that she is a thirteen year old girl.
* UnreliableNarrator: Her worldview is limited by the fact that she is a thirteen year old girl.
** In book 4, Nastasia actively refuses to be friendly with Wulfgang Starkadder (who is crushing on her), because she is afraid of making any mistake that could leak information and harm their group or their cause.
* {{Determinator}}: Shows signs of becoming one, for the sake of protecting her friends.
* {{Determinator}}: Shows signs of becoming one, for the sake of protecting her friends.
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* GoodNameForARockBand: Announces he is going to name his rock band, "Dragonsmiths."
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* TheFettered: Book 4 reveals that he thinks this is an ideal condition for a knight.
* GoodNameForARockBand: Announces he is going to name his rock band, "Dragonsmiths."" Or possibly, Punk Alchemists. It varies from day to day.
* GoodOldFisticuffs: Takes boxing lessons from hockey-player roommate Seth Peregrine.
* GoodNameForARockBand: Announces he is going to name his rock band, "Dragonsmiths.
* GoodOldFisticuffs: Takes boxing lessons from hockey-player roommate Seth Peregrine.
* AntiMagic: Can unmake enchantments with his fire.
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* TrueCompanion: Stands up for Rachel when she is being harassed by bullies.
* TheHeart: Seems to be taking this role.
* CelebCrush: Is crushing on Sigfried.
* TheHeart: Seems to be taking this role.
* CelebCrush: Is crushing on Sigfried.
* NerdsAreSexy: part of his attraction to Rachel is her intelligence...as shown when he arranges for her to have physics and advanced mathematics lessons.
* BruiserWithASoftCenter: After hugging Rachel, he asks her not to reveal to anyone else that he does, as then he'll be required to give them out more often.
* IWillProtectYou: Part of the reason Rachel likes being around him is that he makes her feel safe.
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** [[spoiler: As did his past incarnation, a brutal tyrant who allowed no one to oppress the downtrodden.]]
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** [[spoiler: As did his past incarnation, a brutal tyrant who allowed no one to oppress the downtrodden. Except himself, apparently.]]
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* HotDad: Zoe flat-out says he's hot when she sees Rachel's memory of him.
* NotNowKiddo
* ParentsAsPeople
* NotNowKiddo
* ParentsAsPeople
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%% * ParentsAsPeople
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* {{Expy}}: [[spoiler: Is pretty clearly [[ChroniclesOfNarnia Aslan]] in disguise.]]
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* {{Expy}}: [[spoiler: Is pretty clearly [[ChroniclesOfNarnia [[Literature/TheChroniclesOfNarnia Aslan]] in disguise.]]
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* {{Expy}}: in-universe, the ''James Darling: Agent'' comic books are this of him. He's basically Batman in them.
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