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* TheStoolPigeon: Eventually becomes the '''Innocent Ingrid''' variety of this after being coerced with her favorite food. After being told what her compatriots were up to at the time, she unhesitatingly denounces them to the Police and tells them what she knows.
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* {{Expy}}: Their personalities, the latter's choice of weaponry, the selected background music for their appearance post-breakout,[[note]]"Soul Clef XI"[[/note]] and the chapter title being an anagram all heavily suggest that they're ponified versions of [[WebAnimation/RedVsBlue Locus and Felix.]] The key difference between both groups is that there's no evidence to suggest that Gates has been manipulating Bastion. Confirmed by the author in the Chapter's Notes for "Sabotages Tin".

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* {{Expy}}: Their personalities, the latter's choice of weaponry, the selected background music for their appearance post-breakout,[[note]]"Soul Clef XI"[[/note]] and the chapter title being an anagram all heavily suggest that they're ponified versions of [[WebAnimation/RedVsBlue Locus and Felix.]] The key difference between both groups is that there's no evidence to suggest that Gates has been manipulating Bastion. Confirmed by the author in the Chapter's Notes for "Sabotages Tin". Gates at one point alludes to the two of them once having worked with someone named "Masonry", suggesting that an expy of Mason Wu exists somewhere too.
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* AchillesHeel: Leviathan can storm through most of what Equestria throws at her, even if what is thrown is flammable. However, as Salamandra demonstrates [[spoiler:and Illudere exploits]], she has no real answer for illusions.

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* AchillesHeel: Leviathan can storm through most of what Equestria throws at her, even if what is thrown is flammable. However, as Salamandra demonstrates [[spoiler:and Illudere exploits]], she has no real answer for illusions.illusions until the Lock-On hardware becomes accessible.



* CelibateHero: "Single and uninterested", in her words.

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* CelibateHero: "Single and uninterested", in her words. Her response to a letter sent from a secret admirer is to impale it with the Javelin.



* CharacterNarrator: The bulk of the story is told from her perspective, and she seems to be aware that someone in the future might be interested enough in her memories to see them for themselves.

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* CharacterNarrator: The bulk of the story is told from her perspective, and she perspective. She seems to be aware that someone in the future might be interested enough in her memories to see them for themselves.themselves, given that at times she addresses the reader directly.



* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: In keeping with the AnimalJingoism above, "Overused Specter-centric Pun" fully establishes her as being afraid of dogs.

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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: In keeping with the AnimalJingoism above, "Overused Specter-centric Pun" fully establishes her as being afraid of dogs. She later panics and tries unsuccessfully to flee from a dog that only wanted to enthusiastically make her acquaintance.
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** She appears at Median Park in order to paint a picture of a party, but is victimized by a sleep spell alongside everybody else.
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* BenevolentBoss: Doesn't throw a fit if their agents fail or otherwise don't meet their expectations, knowing that they're not the ones at fault. They focus their ire on Leviathan instead.

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* BenevolentBoss: Doesn't throw a fit if their agents fail or otherwise don't meet their expectations, knowing that they're not the ones at fault. They focus their ire on Leviathan instead. They also take note of how hard their magitechnicians are working and decide to give them two weeks vacation once the coup is complete.
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* TrappedInAnotherWorld: [[spoiler:Briefly ended up on Earth in 20XX, meeting Dr. Light and his creations. She was eventually returned home with help from them, plus another scientist and what's implied to be a slew of Robot Masters.]]

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* TrappedInAnotherWorld: [[spoiler:Briefly ended up on Earth in 20XX, meeting Dr. Light and his creations. She was eventually returned home with help from them, plus another scientist scientist, and what's implied to be a slew of Robot Masters.]]
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* AmplifierArtifact: Illudere's dragon scale armor is enchanted to provide a constant boost to her spellcasting, letting her put more energy into her illusions and effectively turning her into a walking nightmare.
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* HatesBeingTouched: Is initially repulsed by ponies' propensity for close contact, no thanks to Drama Heart's antics during their first encounter. She gradually starts growing out of this.

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* HatesBeingTouched: Is initially repulsed by ponies' propensity for close contact, no thanks to Drama Heart's antics during their first encounter. She gradually starts growing out of this.this, and the trait is fully gone after Illudere's defeat.
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* TheQuietOne: While Fiver can and will speak, it won't be with any sort of volume. Even when calling to somepony to wait up so she can catch up, her voice won't rise any higher than normal. She says she could talk normally if she wanted to, but views this quality as being normal for her.

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* TheQuietOne: While Fiver can and will speak, it won't be with any sort of volume. Even when calling to somepony to wait up so she can catch up, her voice won't rise any higher than normal. usual. She says she could talk normally if she wanted to, but views this quality as being ''being'' normal for her.
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* {{Beat}}: ''Always'' starts off her sentences with ellipses. According to her profile, she does this to make herself seem more emotionless than she really is. Her foregoing this is a sign that she's taking things seriously.

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* {{Beat}}: ''Always'' starts off her sentences with ellipses. According to her profile, she does this to make herself seem more emotionless than she really is. Even the statements in her journal are prefaced with them. Her foregoing this is a sign that she's taking things seriously.
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* ObliviouslyBeautiful: An eye-catching and beautiful young pony, but oblivious to most of the attention she gets.

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* ObliviouslyBeautiful: An eye-catching and beautiful young pony, but oblivious to most of the attention she gets. This is later suggested to be the result of self-esteem issues brought on by reading a storybook about the Pony of Shadows, with Ebony fearing the DarkIsEvil trope.



->''Hypothetical voice:'' The original iteration of [[WesternAnimation/Ben10 Ben Tennyson]]

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->''Hypothetical voice:'' The original iteration version of [[WesternAnimation/Ben10 Ben Tennyson]]
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* {{Workaholic}}: Ignition is in charge of a wide variety of duties related to both the Mocha Corporation and Cocoa's faction, as well as helping look after the Mocha twins. He never complains about his workload, and at one point somepony wonders how he manages to keep going. After his failure to capture Gray, [[spoiler:Quarter]] concludes that this trait is starting to work against him and decides to handle the scheming themselves.
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* YouHaveFailedMe: Very much ''defied.'' Quarter isn't quick to anger or violence if their agents and servants fail in their work, saying that such behavior would be counteractive to their goals. She does abandon the scientists on the Zoolinef project when it fails, but even then the worst that happened to them was their arrest and imprisonment.

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* YouHaveFailedMe: Very much ''defied.'' Quarter isn't quick to anger or violence if their agents and servants fail in their work, saying that such behavior would be counteractive to their goals. She does They do abandon the scientists on the Zoolinef project when it fails, but even then the worst that happened to them was their arrest and imprisonment.

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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Chocolate milk, with Quarter saying at one point that she'd hate to have a body that was lactose-intolerant.

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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Chocolate milk, with Quarter saying at one point that she'd they'd hate to have a body that was lactose-intolerant.


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* YouHaveFailedMe: Very much ''defied.'' Quarter isn't quick to anger or violence if their agents and servants fail in their work, saying that such behavior would be counteractive to their goals. She does abandon the scientists on the Zoolinef project when it fails, but even then the worst that happened to them was their arrest and imprisonment.
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Chocolate milk, with Quarter saying at one point that she'd hate to have a body that was lactose-intolerant.

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* HeelRealization: [[spoiler:Strongly implied. When Fiver demonstrates the likely reason why the authorities were on her case for stealing a refrigerator, Calico vanishes for the rest of the evening and is later heard that night weeping. She sends a reimbursement to the store owners shortly thereafter.]]



* LoveRedeems: [[spoiler:By returning Zig-Zag's excess love to him, he undergoes the same physical metamorphosis that the rest of his race would later experience.]]



* TrappedInAnotherWorld: [[spoiler:Is implied to have been to Earth at least long enough to have met the original Mega Man.]]

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* TrappedInAnotherWorld: [[spoiler:Is [[spoiler:Briefly ended up on Earth in 20XX, meeting Dr. Light and his creations. She was eventually returned home with help from them, plus another scientist and what's implied to have been to Earth at least long enough to have met the original Mega Man.be a slew of Robot Masters.]]
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* IControlMyMinionsThrough: Several different tactics. They will adapt their methods to fit any situation pertaining to their forces.
** '''Evil Versus Oblivion.''' Metallium was lured to Quarter's side in part because an alternative solution to Celestia's control of the sun--one that was better than the alleged possibility of the sun drifting out of control and roasting/freezing the entire world--was being touted.
** '''Loyalty.''' All of them are unquestioningly loyal to Quarter and follow their orders out of respect for them. Quarter being both AffablyEvil and a BenevolentBoss plays a large part in this.
** '''Material Benefits.''' Quarter makes sure that as long as everypony's under their roof, they have what they need. This includes such things as being able to feed Calico's bottomless pit of a stomach, and giving his changeling agent a better place to live than Chrysalis's hive.
** '''Power.''' Due both to long experience and the fighting style they created and perfected, Quarter is the strongest figure in their organization, bar none. When they briefly meet for the first time, Leviathan's systems classify them as Class-S in comparison to everypony else's Class-B.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Illudere adores Ralph the crab, getting angry when he's insulted and going so far as to have a terrarium and plenty of food ready for him at her designated safe house. Her attachment to him is strong enough that [[spoiler:he manifests within her self-inflicted dream world]].
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* IWasQuiteALooker: She and Celestia both remember her as quite stunning in her youth. Fast forward to the time when she's having trouble seeing and needs help getting around and requires her grandson to help her out, and she's not quite so stunning anymore.

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* IWasQuiteALooker: She and Celestia both remember her as quite stunning in her youth. Fast forward to the time when she's having trouble seeing and needs help getting around and requires her grandson to help her out, and she's not quite so stunning anymore.
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* BilingualBonus: The first few letters of her name, 'bos', come from ''bos taurus'', the Latin scientific name for domesticated cattle. This is an unintentional case, as the author admitted in response to a comment that he was not aware of it when he came up with it.
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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: [[spoiler:It's strongly implied that she gets her knowledge of S.M.I.L.E. attained from Trifecta erased after her capture.]]




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* WellIntentionedExtremist: The reason she gives for joining Cocoa Mocha and taking part in the attacks against the city is that wherever she went to perform, she'd see the rich living it up while the poor struggled to get by. From there, she concluded that Celestia wasn't doing enough to help ponies support themselves, and threw her support behind somepony she believed had what it took to do things right.
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* ShoutOut: Per the author's comments, her name is one of the lyrics from the Music/BeastieBoys' song "Intergalactic".

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* ShoutOut: Per the author's comments, her name is one of the lyrics from the Music/BeastieBoys' song "Intergalactic".
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* SugarAndIcePersonality: Between her stoicism and snark, the 'ice' side of her personality is what everyone else sees. The readers start to see the 'sugar' side when Gray begins crying in response to something she's reading, prompting Fiver to dry her mother's tears and ask if she's alright.
* TheQuietOne: While Fiver can and will speak, it won't be with any sort of volume. Even when calling to somepony to wait up so she can catch up, her voice won't rise any higher than normal.

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* SugarAndIcePersonality: Between her stoicism and snark, the 'ice' side of her personality is what everyone else sees. The readers start to see the 'sugar' side when Gray begins crying in response to something she's reading, prompting Fiver to dry her mother's tears and ask if she's alright.
alright. After being away from her family for several days, she says in response to some chaos her siblings cause that she "missed these clowns".
* TheQuietOne: While Fiver can and will speak, it won't be with any sort of volume. Even when calling to somepony to wait up so she can catch up, her voice won't rise any higher than normal. She says she could talk normally if she wanted to, but views this quality as being normal for her.

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[[folder:Project Ashes '''(WARNING: Contains unmarked spoilers!)''']]
!!Project Ashes
A baby filly created via science and magic by First Quarter and her team, kept alive in a hidden cylinder in Mocha Corp. HQ's sub-basement.

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[[folder:Project Ashes '''(WARNING: Contains unmarked spoilers!)''']]
!!Project Ashes
A baby filly created via science

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!!Startide
An elderly pony
and magic by First Quarter and her team, kept alive in a hidden cylinder in Mocha Corp. HQ's sub-basement.graduate from Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns.



* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Cozy Glow's origins in the source material were never fully explored, with an implication by ''MLP's'' staff that she was an orphan and nothing more. Here, she is deliberately created by First Quarter as the ''second'' iteration of one of her past bodies.
* GoneHorriblyWrong: Quarter's plan for Project Ashes was to half ensure her original Cutie Mark would never hound her again, and half to give Cozy Glow a second shot at a peaceful life. The disasters that are instigated in Seasons 8 and 9 of the source material show how well ''that'' turned out.
* WalkingSpoiler: The revelation of her identity as the filly later known in Seasons 8 and 9 of ''MLP'' as ''Cozy Glow'' makes her importance difficult to hide.

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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Cozy Glow's origins GrumpyOldMan: Constantly complains about her grandson not minding his own business or similar, though it's clear she still cares for him.
* IWasQuiteALooker: She and Celestia both remember her as quite stunning
in her youth. Fast forward to the source material were never fully explored, with an implication by ''MLP's'' staff that she was an orphan time when she's having trouble seeing and nothing more. Here, she is deliberately created by First Quarter as needs help getting around and requires her grandson to help her out, and she's not quite so stunning anymore.
* TrappedInAnotherWorld: [[spoiler:Is implied to have been to Earth at least long enough to have met
the ''second'' iteration of one of her past bodies.
* GoneHorriblyWrong: Quarter's plan for Project Ashes was to half ensure her
original Cutie Mark would never hound her again, and half to give Cozy Glow a second shot at a peaceful life. The disasters that are instigated in Seasons 8 and 9 of the source material show how well ''that'' turned out.
* WalkingSpoiler: The revelation of her identity as the filly later known in Seasons 8 and 9 of ''MLP'' as ''Cozy Glow'' makes her importance difficult to hide.
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A baby filly created via science and magic by First Quarter and her team, kept alive in a hidden cylinder in Mocha Corp. HQ's sub-basement.
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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Cozy Glow's origins in the source material were never fully explored, with an implication by ''MLP's'' staff that she was an orphan and nothing more. Here, she is deliberately created by First Quarter as the ''second'' iteration of one of her past bodies.
* GoneHorriblyWrong: Quarter's plan for Project Ashes was to half ensure her original Cutie Mark would never hound her again, and half to give Cozy Glow a second shot at a peaceful life. The disasters that are instigated in Seasons 8 and 9 of the source material show how well ''that'' turned out.
* WalkingSpoiler: The revelation of her identity as the filly later known in Seasons 8 and 9 of ''MLP'' as ''Cozy Glow'' makes her importance difficult to hide.
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* HeadPet: Or 'Hair Pet', as the case may be. The group's first face-to-face meeting with [[spoiler:First Quarter]] sees Illudere with a crab, of all things, hanging from her mane with its pincers. She does nothing to remove it, and treats any inquiries she makes as if they come from it. Its name is later revealed to be Ralph.

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* HeadPet: Or 'Hair Pet', as the case may be. The group's first face-to-face meeting with [[spoiler:First Quarter]] sees Illudere with a crab, of all things, hanging from her mane with its pincers. She does nothing to remove it, and treats any inquiries she makes as if they come from it. Its name is later revealed to be Ralph. The crab doesn't share Illudere's sentiments, being amiable in its own way towards those it interacts directly with.
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-->''Take the stage.''
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* LetsGetDangerous: Drama is a civilian entertainer with no inclination to fight and no real combat training. [[spoiler:When she finds Leviathan cornered by Illudere's masterwork, her anger at her friend being attacked overrides her fear of the latter's power. She disrupts Illudere's Sigma illusion, then holds the line with a prop knife until Shining Armor can finish the job.]]

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* EmotionlessGirl: Is basically Maud Pie Lite. When she's kidnapped, her behavior in this regard is able to unnerve the culprit. The expression seen in her artwork to the right is all but permanent.

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* DelicateAndSickly: While the illness is not mentioned outright, it is strongly implied that Fiver had either asthma or something very similar when she was a baby. The efforts of her parents and doctor helped make her situation better to the point that she's mostly healthy by the present day, though by her own admittance she still has the odd day where she has trouble breathing.
* EmotionlessGirl: Is basically Maud Pie Lite. When she's kidnapped, her behavior in this regard is able to unnerve the culprit. The expression seen in her artwork to the right is all but permanent. [[spoiler:This was done instinctively in response to the asthma she suffered as a toddler, halting any sort of reaction that would shorten her breath.]]
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* EnemyDetectingRadar: Leviathan's systems are able to clue her in on incoming threats, even if she to get a visual of them to confirm what they are.

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* EnemyDetectingRadar: Leviathan's systems are able to clue her in on incoming threats, even if she has to get a visual of them to confirm what they are.

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