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* LastNameBasis: Everyone calls her Cho, her last name. [[spoiler: Her first name is Helen.]]
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* ArtEvolution: [[spoiler Once she becomes fully Sapient she's drawn like the rest of the cast. Her face actually moves.]]
* BecomeARealBoy: [[spoiler: After her reconfiguration. This was her creators goal with her in the first place, the idea being as she interacted with people she would have enough data to truely be sapient.]]
* OffWithHisHead: Done in a non-canon art piece. Ben and her wrapped her own head in a Christmas present as a prank on Steffi.
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** [[spoiler: Loses this when she becomes fully sapient after her reconfiguration. Most likely because she properly understand emotions and has a subconscious.]]
** [[spoiler: Loses this when she becomes fully sapient after her reconfiguration. Most likely because she properly understand emotions and has a subconscious.]]
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** [[spoiler: He even admits to 42 that he knows she's not really sapient. That AIs are mostly If-Then and intructions. But he doesn't care. Because he doesn't think it's right to just throw something away that was interacted with a bunch, especially as she was his only companion during the entire war. And ARIS is the only thing he really has in the world.]]
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* HeadphonesEqualIsolation: Inverted. Her gift of headphones to Benzene for his birthday [[spoiler: wound up helping save her life from Gear as Benzene did a last second save. Also the constant stream of noise coming from them reminds her that she's alive after her NearDeathExperience]]
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* HateSink: From being an unrepentant mole, to her ChronicBackstabbingDisorder, to her exploitation of her cousin's kleptomania, there is nothing redeemable about her.
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* HateSink: From being an unrepentant mole, to her ChronicBackstabbingDisorder, to her exploitation of her cousin's kleptomania, to her motives, there is nothing redeemable about her.
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* HateSink: From being an unrepentant mole, to her ChronicBackstabbingDisorder, to her exploitation of her cousin's kleptomania, there is nothing redeemable about her.
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* SecurityBlanket: Her headphones. She hasn't taken them off since losing her leg, because the sound of her music was proof that she hadn't died yet.
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* SecurityBlanket: Her headphones. She hasn't taken them off since losing her leg, because the sound of her music was proof that she hadn't died yet. She goes nearly catatonic after she gets temporary hearing loss from an explosion during her fight with Gear.
* StepfordSmiler: To a degree. There are moments, particularly after an explosion courtesy of Gear gives her temporary hearing loss and when she [[spoiler:reveals to Benzene that her mother hired a hitman to kill her father]], where her flighty, cheerful demeanor drops, revealing a girl with a lot more baggage under the surface.
* StepfordSmiler: To a degree. There are moments, particularly after an explosion courtesy of Gear gives her temporary hearing loss and when she [[spoiler:reveals to Benzene that her mother hired a hitman to kill her father]], where her flighty, cheerful demeanor drops, revealing a girl with a lot more baggage under the surface.
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* BadassGrandpa: Proves to be extremely hard to kill during Track 17.
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* CoolOldGuy: Proves to be extremely hard to kill during Track 17.
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* TheMole: First for Alter, but she had no loyalty to it either.
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* TheMole: First for Alter, but she had has no loyalty to it either.
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* SurroundedByIdiots: When finally cornered by the heroes, she complains that there isn't a single competent person in all of Alter. Steffi promptly quips that that includes her.
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: When Cebus is defeated, Down suggests over the building's PA system that everyone grab their stuff and run like hell.
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* AlliterativeNameAlliterativeName: '''F'''rancis '''F'''reeman.
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* UndyingLoyalty: To Tigris. [[spoiler:When he learns that some sort of mutiny is happening within Alter, he immediately sides with Tigris with no further context given to him.]]
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* CombatPragmatist: Programmed to be nonviolent, she uses holograms and mind games to survive in a fight, as seen when she went up against [[spoiler: her "sister", 39.]]
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* CombatPragmatist: Programmed to be nonviolent, she uses holograms and mind games to survive in a fight, as seen when she went goes up against [[spoiler: her "sister", 39.]]
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Late in Track 25, the heroes manage to undo Barkley's hacking and get her back on their side.]]
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* MadeOfIron: Bullets don't scratch her and she was even able to tank one of [[TheBigGuy Tarus']] punches.
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* MadeOfIron: Bullets don't scratch her and she was is even able to tank one of [[TheBigGuy Tarus']] [[TheBrute Taurus']] punches.
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* DelayedReaction: After [[spoiler:getting impaled in the arm by 42's EMP katana]].
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* DelayedReaction: After [[spoiler:getting impaled in the arm by 42's an EMP katana]].
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* SecurityBlanket: Her headphones. She hasn't taken them off since losing her leg, because the sound of her music was proof that she hadn't died yet.
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* DelayedReaction: After [[spoiler:getting impaled in the arm by 42's EMP katana]].
-->'''Page 600:''' Wha\\
'''Page 601:''' '''NGGGYAAAAAAARGH!'''
-->'''Page 600:''' Wha\\
'''Page 601:''' '''NGGGYAAAAAAARGH!'''
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* AnArmAndALeg[=/=]ArtificialLimbs: Has a prosthetic leg due to an injury she suffered in early childhood [[spoiler:jumping in front of a bullet aimed at her dad.]]
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* AnArmAndALeg[=/=]ArtificialLimbs: AnArmAndALeg: She lost her left leg [[spoiler:protecting her father from an assassin]].
* ArtificialLimbs: Has a prosthetic leg due to an injury she suffered in early childhood [[spoiler:jumping in front of a bullet aimed at her dad.]]
* ArtificialLimbs: Has a prosthetic leg due to an injury she suffered in early childhood [[spoiler:jumping in front of a bullet aimed at her dad.]]
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* IdiotHero: A downplayed example in that she's not ''stupid''... just reckless, emotionally immature, headstrong, and [[DidNotThinkThisThrough prone to acting before she really thinks about what she's doing]].
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* IdiotHero: A downplayed example in that she's not ''stupid''... just reckless, emotionally immature, headstrong, and [[DidNotThinkThisThrough [[DidntThinkThisThrough prone to acting before she really thinks about what she's doing]].
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* SuperHeroSuperHero: She dresses up in a kiwi costume and fights crime in her HumongousMecha.
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Steffi's {{childhood friend|s}} and unofficial sidekick. A pretty serious boy and fan of all things military. Pretty skilled at taekwondo and good with computers. He is pretty regularly exasperated by Steffi's actions and seems to have taken it upon himself to keep her out of trouble. [[spoiler:Up to actually joining her as the costumed superhero, Donner, in Track 16.]]
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Steffi's {{childhood friend|s}} and unofficial sidekick. A pretty serious boy and fan of all things military. Pretty skilled at taekwondo and good with computers. He is pretty regularly exasperated by Steffi's actions and seems to have taken it upon himself to keep her out of trouble. [[spoiler:Up to actually joining her as the costumed superhero, Donner, in Track 16.]]
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Steffi's {{childhood friend|s}} and unofficial sidekick. A pretty serious boy and fan of all things military. Pretty skilled at taekwondo and good with computers. He is pretty regularly exasperated by Steffi's actions and seems to have taken it upon himself to keep her out oftrouble. [[spoiler:Up to actually joining her as the costumed superhero, Donner, in Track 16.]]
!!!Tropestrouble.
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* MissionControl: He takes this role for Steffi for the first few Tracks, but later moves takes to the field himself.
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* MissionControl: He takes this role for Steffi for the first few Tracks, but later moves takes to the field himself.
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A policeman in the NYPD, the son of the current Police Chief. Out of all the police shown he is the only one who seems to really want to stand up to the various supercriminals running around causing trouble, and he [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure is always quick to point out that while Steffi is a vigilante, it's the people she's]] ''[[ReasonableAuthorityFigure fighting against]]'' [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure who are the real villains.]] [[TheCommissionerGordon Serves as Steffi's one and only ally in the police.]] [[spoiler:He loses his arm in a fight with Gear, and has it replaced with a bionic prosthetic [[SwissArmyWeapon bristling with weaponry.]]]]
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A policeman in the NYPD, the son of the current Police Chief. Out of all the police shown he is the only one who seems to really want to stand up to the various supercriminals running around causing trouble, and he [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure is always quick to point out that while Steffi is a vigilante, it's the people she's]] ''[[ReasonableAuthorityFigure fighting against]]'' [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure who are the real villains.]] [[TheCommissionerGordon Serves as Steffi's one and only ally in the police.]] [[spoiler:He loses his arm in a fight with Gear, and has it replaced with a bionic prosthetic [[SwissArmyWeapon bristling with weaponry.]]]]
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* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler:After losing his arm in a fight with Gear, he has it replaced with a bionic prosthetic [[SwissArmyWeapon bristling with weaponry.]]]]
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[[folder:The Raccoon/[[spoiler:Chandra Makisig]]]]Raccoon]]
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* TheReveal: The Raccoon's true identity is [[spoiler:a young girl named Chandra Makisig who turns out to be being groomed and enabled by her older cousin Cebus]].
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* HeIsNotMyBoyfriend: When [[spoiler:Blitz]] asks if Taurus is her boyfriend, she immediately gets extremely flustered, denies it, and then changes the subject.
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* IllGirl: Well, Ill Boy. [[spoiler:According to Tigris, he had a genetic disorder that would have killed him before he reached 30 years old... until Hircus saved him.]]
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* IllGirl: Well, Ill Boy. IllBoy: [[spoiler:According to Tigris, he had a genetic disorder that would have killed him before he reached 30 years old... until Hircus saved him.]]
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* CodeNames: Complains Alter's code names are no fun because they're all so glaringly obvious. What's the point of having a code name anyone can guess just by looking at you?
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* AmbiguousGender: Cebus refers to them with the pronoun "they".
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Only appeared on [[http://www.kiwiblitz.com/comic/page-552 page 552]] and [[http://www.kiwiblitz.com/comic/page-553 553]].
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Another gynoid. Makes her first appearance on [[http://www.kiwiblitz.com/comic/page-222 page 222]].
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* BuriedAlive: Her fate at the hands of 42 after herfirst appearance on [[http://www.kiwiblitz.com/comic/page-222 page 222]].
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* YouAreNumberSixYouAreNumberSix: Like 42, she simply has the number 35 for a name.
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* TheMole: For Alter.
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* TheMole: For Alter.First for Alter, but she had no loyalty to it either.
* OnlyInItForTheMoney: Unlike other Alter members, all she wants is to make money from Hircus and Down's genetic engineering research.
* OnlyInItForTheMoney: Unlike other Alter members, all she wants is to make money from Hircus and Down's genetic engineering research.
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Corrected Lupus's entry to use they/them pronouns — see page 587.
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A short gray wolf boy with a good nose for tracking.
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* EvilIsPetty: Asks if he can have Canis' codename after Canis gets captured.
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* EvilIsPetty: Asks if he they can have Canis' codename after Canis gets captured.
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* DeadpanSnarkerDeadpanSnarker: Deals with Steffi's antics through endless sarcasm.
-->'''Steffi:''' It'll be awesome! I'd be just like ComicBook/IronMan!\\
'''Ben:''' Sure, if Iron Man is both stupid and dead.
-->'''Steffi:''' It'll be awesome! I'd be just like ComicBook/IronMan!\\
'''Ben:''' Sure, if Iron Man is both stupid and dead.
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A policeman in the NYPD, the son of the current Police Chief. Out of all the police shown he is the only one who seems to really want to stand up to the various supercriminals running around causing trouble, and he [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure is always quick to point out that while Steffi is a vigilante, it's the people she's ''fighting against'' who are the real villains.]] [[TheCommissionerGordon Serves as Steffi's one and only ally in the police.]] [[spoiler:He loses his arm in a fight with Gear, and has it replaced with a bionic prosthetic [[SwissArmyWeapon bristling with weaponry.]]]]
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A policeman in the NYPD, the son of the current Police Chief. Out of all the police shown he is the only one who seems to really want to stand up to the various supercriminals running around causing trouble, and he [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure is always quick to point out that while Steffi is a vigilante, it's the people she's ''fighting against'' she's]] ''[[ReasonableAuthorityFigure fighting against]]'' [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure who are the real villains.]] [[TheCommissionerGordon Serves as Steffi's one and only ally in the police.]] [[spoiler:He loses his arm in a fight with Gear, and has it replaced with a bionic prosthetic [[SwissArmyWeapon bristling with weaponry.]]]]
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* LoveObstructingParents: Averted. He approves of Reed and Jones' relationship. [[spoiler:After the latter's defection, however, it's highly doubtful this will continue.]]
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A spunky young recruit. Becomes Reed's girlfriend. [[spoiler:In reality, she is an Alter mole codenamed Cebus.]]
A spunky young recruit. Becomes Reed's girlfriend. [[spoiler:In reality, she is an Alter mole codenamed Cebus.]]
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* BioAugmentation: She looks normal. [[spoiler: She's not.]]
* [[spoiler:BitchInSheepsClothing: She's either a psychopath, a sociopath, or a solipsist; possibly all three. She's definitely adept at manipulating others.]]
* [[spoiler:ChronicBackstabbingDisorder: Backstabs the police for Alter, then backstabs Alter boss Hircus so she can take over herself, and may have backstabbed her cousin Chandra by outing her to the police to exploit her resulting vulnerability.]]
* CoolBigSis: Cool older cousin to Chandra. [[spoiler:Subverted in that she's actually grooming and manipulating Chandra, AKA "Raccoon", for her own ends.]]
* [[spoiler:DirtyCop]]
* [[spoiler:EvenEvilHasStandards: She's a total piece of shit, but [[http://www.kiwiblitz.com/comic/page-533 even she wouldn't]] force Heinrich to watch her kill Steffi.]]
* [[spoiler:EvilAllAlong]]
* FairCop: [[spoiler:Not.]]
* GenkiGirl: [[spoiler:Also not.]]
* [[spoiler:ItsAllAboutMe: One of her associates even says as much, noting that she's only on the side of herself.]]
* [[spoiler:KlingonPromotion: Allows Hircus to be arrested so she can take over Alter.]]
* [[spoiler:BitchInSheepsClothing: She's either a psychopath, a sociopath, or a solipsist; possibly all three. She's definitely adept at manipulating others.]]
* [[spoiler:ChronicBackstabbingDisorder: Backstabs the police for Alter, then backstabs Alter boss Hircus so she can take over herself, and may have backstabbed her cousin Chandra by outing her to the police to exploit her resulting vulnerability.]]
* CoolBigSis: Cool older cousin to Chandra. [[spoiler:Subverted in that she's actually grooming and manipulating Chandra, AKA "Raccoon", for her own ends.]]
* [[spoiler:DirtyCop]]
* [[spoiler:EvenEvilHasStandards: She's a total piece of shit, but [[http://www.kiwiblitz.com/comic/page-533 even she wouldn't]] force Heinrich to watch her kill Steffi.]]
* [[spoiler:EvilAllAlong]]
* FairCop: [[spoiler:Not.]]
* GenkiGirl: [[spoiler:Also not.]]
* [[spoiler:ItsAllAboutMe: One of her associates even says as much, noting that she's only on the side of herself.]]
* [[spoiler:KlingonPromotion: Allows Hircus to be arrested so she can take over Alter.]]
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* [[spoiler:BitchInSheepsClothing: She's either a psychopath, a sociopath, or a solipsist; possibly all three. She's definitely adept at manipulating others.]]
* [[spoiler:ChronicBackstabbingDisorder: Backstabs the police for Alter, then backstabs Alter boss Hircus so she can take over herself, and may have backstabbed her cousin Chandra by outing her to the police to exploit her resulting vulnerability.]]
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* [[spoiler:EvilAllAlong]]
* FairCop: [[spoiler:Not.]]
* GenkiGirl:
* [[spoiler:ItsAllAboutMe: One of her associates even says as much, noting that she's only on the side of herself.]]
* [[spoiler:KlingonPromotion: Allows Hircus to be arrested so she can take over Alter.]]
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* MeaningfulName: [[spoiler: "Cebus" is a genus of monkey.]]
* [[spoiler:TheMole: For Alter.]]
* [[spoiler:TheStarscream: She betrays her boss in order to take power for herself.]]
* [[spoiler:SuperSoldier: Although she has not been modified to look like an animal, she has still had some genetic modification and can keep up in a fight with Reed despite his prosthetic enhancements.]]
* [[spoiler:UnfriendlyFire: After deposing Hircus she tries to murder Tigris, who is the one Alter member strong enough and loyal enough to pose a real threat.]]
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* [[spoiler:WasItAllALie: Reed gives this line to her after her betrayal. She responds that she actually did think he was kind of cute.]]
* MeaningfulName: [[spoiler: "Cebus" is a genus of monkey.]]
* [[spoiler:TheMole: For Alter.]]
* [[spoiler:TheStarscream: She betrays her boss in order to take power for herself.]]
* [[spoiler:SuperSoldier: Although she has not been modified to look like an animal, she has still had some genetic modification and can keep up in a fight with Reed despite his prosthetic enhancements.]]
* [[spoiler:UnfriendlyFire: After deposing Hircus she tries to murder Tigris, who is the one Alter member strong enough and loyal enough to pose a real threat.]]
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A costumed thief who steals on the behalf of a mysterious organization. Definitely a criminal, but seems to be a decent kid for the most part. After Steffi's Kiwibot was captured by the police, she blackmailed The the Raccoon into helping her steal it back.
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* EtTuBrute: Doesn't take it well when [[spoiler:she is duped into thinking Steffi sold her out]].
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* BioAugmentation: She looks normal. She's not.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: She's either a psychopath, a sociopath, or a solipsist; possibly all three. She's definitely adept at manipulating others.
* ChronicBackstabbingDisorder: Backstabs the police for Alter, then backstabs Alter boss Hircus so she can take over herself, and may have backstabbed her cousin Chandra by outing her to the police to exploit her resulting vulnerability.
* DirtyCop: Turns out to be feeding information to Alter from the inside.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: She's a total piece of shit, but [[http://www.kiwiblitz.com/comic/page-533 even she wouldn't]] force Heinrich to watch her kill Steffi.
* EvilAllAlong: She's introduced as a heroic MauveShirt, only to turn out to be a mole for a criminal association.
* ItsAllAboutMe: Down even says as much, noting that she's only on the side of herself.
* {{Jerkass}}
-->'''Cast page:''' Kind of a huge asshole, honestly.\\
'''Blitz:''' What is your '''problem! Is it just-- your mission-- to be the world's biggest asshole!?'''
* KlingonPromotion: Allows Hircus to be arrested so she can take over Alter.
* LoveInterestTraitor: She's set up as Reed's love interest, only to knife him in the back.
* MeaningfulName: "Cebus" is a genus of monkey.
* TheMole: For Alter.
* TheStarscream: She betrays her boss in order to take power for herself.
* SuperSoldier: Although she has not been modified to look like an animal, she has still had some genetic modification and can keep up in a fight with Reed despite his prosthetic enhancements.
* UnfriendlyFire: After deposing Hircus she tries to murder Tigris, who is the one Alter member strong enough and loyal enough to pose a real threat.
* WalkingSpoiler: You can't discuss any of her actions post-Track 17 without revealing that she's TheMole.
* WasItAllALie: Reed gives this line to her after her betrayal. She responds that she actually did think he was kind of cute.
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[[folder:Tigris]]
A cranky and short-tempered tiger girl who dresses and acts like an anime character. Has an intense-to-the-point-of-deadly rivalry with Cebus and really, really dislikes Steffi.
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* BioAugmentation: She looks normal. She's not.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: She's either a psychopath, a sociopath, or a solipsist; possibly all three. She's definitely adept at manipulating others.
* ChronicBackstabbingDisorder: Backstabs the police for Alter, then backstabs Alter boss Hircus so she can take over herself, and may have backstabbed her cousin Chandra by outing her to the police to exploit her resulting vulnerability.
* DirtyCop: Turns out to be feeding information to Alter from the inside.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: She's a total piece of shit, but [[http://www.kiwiblitz.com/comic/page-533 even she wouldn't]] force Heinrich to watch her kill Steffi.
* EvilAllAlong: She's introduced as a heroic MauveShirt, only to turn out to be a mole for a criminal association.
* ItsAllAboutMe: Down even says as much, noting that she's only on the side of herself.
* {{Jerkass}}
-->'''Cast page:''' Kind of a huge asshole, honestly.\\
'''Blitz:''' What is your '''problem! Is it just-- your mission-- to be the world's biggest asshole!?'''
* KlingonPromotion: Allows Hircus to be arrested so she can take over Alter.
* LoveInterestTraitor: She's set up as Reed's love interest, only to knife him in the back.
* MeaningfulName: "Cebus" is a genus of monkey.
* TheMole: For Alter.
* TheStarscream: She betrays her boss in order to take power for herself.
* SuperSoldier: Although she has not been modified to look like an animal, she has still had some genetic modification and can keep up in a fight with Reed despite his prosthetic enhancements.
* UnfriendlyFire: After deposing Hircus she tries to murder Tigris, who is the one Alter member strong enough and loyal enough to pose a real threat.
* WalkingSpoiler: You can't discuss any of her actions post-Track 17 without revealing that she's TheMole.
* WasItAllALie: Reed gives this line to her after her betrayal. She responds that she actually did think he was kind of cute.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Tigris]]
A cranky and short-tempered tiger girl who dresses and acts like an anime character. Has an intense-to-the-point-of-deadly rivalry with Cebus and really, really dislikes Steffi.
!!!Tropes
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* MistakenForGay: And not amused by it.When Steffi asks Ben if he ''likes'' her, he admits he thought she was gay. Steffi is ''not pleased.'' Ben's line was [[OrwellianRetcon later edited]] to say he thought she "[wasn't] really into guys".
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* NeverBeHurtAgain: [[http://www.kiwiblitz.com/comic/page-442 Page 442.]]
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Refuses to use the grappling hook on Steffi because it could kill her.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Refuses to use the grappling hook on Steffi [[spoiler:in their first fight]] because it could kill her. her. [[spoiler:Even during their rematch when she believes Steffi sold her out to the police, she just uses her grappling hook to keep Steffi away from Cebus, and is shocked when Steffi fails to dodge one of her punches.]]
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* StickyFingers: "Now, before anyone asks: Yes, [TR] has Kleptomania. No, it does not compel [TR] to dress up as a Raccoon and steal things for mysterious third parties." - '''Mary''' (Author), [[http://www.kiwiblitz.com/index.php?id=153 here]] (spoilers on page).
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* StickyFingers: "Now, before anyone asks: Yes, [TR] has Kleptomania. No, it does not compel [TR] to dress up as a Raccoon and steal things for mysterious third parties." - '''Mary''' (Author), [[http://www.kiwiblitz.com/index.php?id=153 com/comic/track-07bite here]] (spoilers on page).
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* AntiClimaxBoss: Jokingly discussed in the in-universe cast page. "He got arrested shortly after appearing, and thus loses points for being a really shitty Boss Battle."
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Another EvilutionaryBiologist behind Alter's BioAugmentation program. Does not appear to share Dr. Hardane's altruism.
Another EvilutionaryBiologist behind Alter's BioAugmentation program. Does not appear to share Dr. Hardane's altruism.
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Another EvilutionaryBiologist behind Alter's BioAugmentation program. Does not appear to share Dr. Hardane's altruism.
Only appeared on [[http://www.kiwiblitz.com/comic/page-552 page 552]] and [[http://www.kiwiblitz.com/comic/page-553 553]].
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* BioAugmentation: Warns [[spoiler: Reed and Heinrich]] not to assume she's baseline just because she's not fuzzy.
* EveryManHasHisPrice: Defied. "This group has its weirdos, but everyone has their reasons for being here... reasons that go beyond pure money."
* PlayingWithSyringes: Hints that she's not above experimenting on unwilling subjects.
* TheUnfettered: Has a problem with pesky laws that limit genetic research on humans for much less noble reasons than Hircus.
* EveryManHasHisPrice: Defied. "This group has its weirdos, but everyone has their reasons for being here... reasons that go beyond pure money."
* PlayingWithSyringes: Hints that she's not above experimenting on unwilling subjects.
* TheUnfettered: Has a problem with pesky laws that limit genetic research on humans for much less noble reasons than Hircus.
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* BioAugmentation: Warns [[spoiler: Reed NoNameGiven: She's only named in the commentary, and Heinrich]] not to assume she's baseline just because she's not fuzzy.
* EveryManHasHisPrice: Defied. "This group has its weirdos, but everyone has their reasons for being here... reasonsthat go beyond pure money."
* PlayingWithSyringes: Hints that she's not above experimenting on unwilling subjects.
* TheUnfettered: Has a problem with pesky laws that limit genetic research on humans for much less noble reasons than Hircus.her nickname is "Sylvi".
* EveryManHasHisPrice: Defied. "This group has its weirdos, but everyone has their reasons for being here... reasons
* PlayingWithSyringes: Hints that she's not above experimenting on unwilling subjects.
* TheUnfettered: Has a problem with pesky laws that limit genetic research on humans for much less noble reasons than Hircus.
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Another gynoid. Makes her first appearance on [[http://www.kiwiblitz.com/comic/page-222 page 222]].
Another gynoid. Makes her first appearance on [[http://www.kiwiblitz.com/comic/page-222 page 222]].
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* CainAndAbel: The Cain to 42's Abel, who she tries to kill.
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* CainAndAbel: The Cain BioAugmentation: Warns [[spoiler:Reed and Heinrich]] not to 42's Abel, who she tries to kill.assume she's baseline just because she's not fuzzy.
* EveryManHasHisPrice: Defied. "This group has its weirdos, but everyone has their reasons for being here... reasons that go beyond pure money."
* PlayingWithSyringes: Hints that she's not above experimenting on unwilling subjects.
* TheUnfettered: Has a problem with pesky laws that limit genetic research on humans for much less noble reasons than Hircus.
* EveryManHasHisPrice: Defied. "This group has its weirdos, but everyone has their reasons for being here... reasons that go beyond pure money."
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Another gynoid. Makes her first appearance on [[http://www.kiwiblitz.com/comic/page-222 page 222]].
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* CainAndAbel: The Cain to 42's Abel, who she tries to kill.
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