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* BigBadWannabe: For a HighSchool SliceOfLife story, these three would be the closest thing to a BigBad. [[spoiler: Except here, you have a hidden SerialKiller VillainProtagonist who's much more dangerous]].
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* RelationshipUpgrade: [[spoiler: Sometime in the gap between the first and second book, he and Evelyn have this]].
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* TookALevelInJerkass: In the sequel. It comes with her jealousy involving Matt and bitterness over the first book's events.
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* ReallyGetsAround: A non-sexual example. [[spoiler: She mentions dating boys in the past, which left her very bitter. It's cemented in the sequel when Mason shows up and is revealed to be one of her ex-boyfriends. She even specifically says that he's ''one of them'']].
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* ReallyGetsAround: A non-sexual example. [[spoiler: She mentions dating boys in the past, [[LookingForLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces which left her very bitter.bitter]]. It's cemented in the sequel when Mason shows up and is revealed to be one of her ex-boyfriends. She even specifically says that he's ''one of them'']].
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* OfficialCouple: [[spoiler: With Matthew, again]].
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* BigBrotherBully: Heavily downplayed. Mike is notably ruder to his brothers Austin and Zach, viewing them as AnnoyingYoungerSibling but it's a lot, lot better than anything Mara's older brother [[{{Jerkass}} Xavier]] might say or do.
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-->'''Matt to Mara:''' [[LampshadeHanging Only something serious would turn him into that]].
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* NotSoDifferentRemark: Her argument as to why bullies [[spoiler: do not deserve to die]].
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* ArentYouGoingToRavishMe: A PG version occurs in the sequel when [[CasanovaWannabe Mason hits on both Eliza and Mara]], and Evelyn, apparently feeling offended, asks why he's not hitting on her too. Mason shuts her down with YoureNotMyType.
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* SupremeChef: She's said to be this, according to her father. This is a quality she shares with her mother.
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* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: [[spoiler: He does this in the sequel to a dead Rose]].
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* DeadpanSnarker: Occasionally. His first interaction with Jordi is essentially SnarkToSnarkCombat. His snarky side tends to come to the surface when [[VitriolicBestBuds Matt]] is involved.
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* DiggingYourselfDeeper: When he called Matt a nerd in the sequel and Eliza told him not to because it's not nice.
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* HypocriteHasAPoint: She does this by combining her JerkassHasAPoint when [[spoiler: calling Jordan out for her actions, yet she was the first one who assured her that they forgave her]].
** It's also quite rich of her [[spoiler: to get [[GreenEyedMonster jealous]] of Eliza when she senses Matt's starting to like her and [[ShipperWithAnAgenda even indirectly tell the latter to consider getting closer to Asher]] after she professed how crucial it is to be able to [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy let go of someone who doesn't like you back]] in the first book to BOTH Asher and Jordan. Though in all fairness to her, she and Matt are an OfficialCouple now so she does have a point]].
** It's also quite rich of her [[spoiler: to get [[GreenEyedMonster jealous]] of Eliza when she senses Matt's starting to like her and [[ShipperWithAnAgenda even indirectly tell the latter to consider getting closer to Asher]] after she professed how crucial it is to be able to [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy let go of someone who doesn't like you back]] in the first book to BOTH Asher and Jordan. Though in all fairness to her, she and Matt are an OfficialCouple now so she does have a point]].
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* HypocriteHasAPoint: She does this by combining her JerkassHasAPoint when [[spoiler: calling Jordan out for her actions, yet she was the first one who assured her that they forgave her]].
**It's also quite rich of her [[spoiler: to get [[GreenEyedMonster jealous]] of Eliza when she senses Matt's starting to like her and [[ShipperWithAnAgenda even indirectly tell the latter to consider getting closer to Asher]] after she professed how crucial it is to be able to [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy let go of someone who doesn't like you back]] in the first book to BOTH Asher and Jordan. Though in all fairness to her, she and Matt are an OfficialCouple now so she does have a point]].
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* TookALevelInSmartass: [[NiceGirl She was originally the only one out of the six who never exhibited snarkiness]]. By the time she TookALevelInJerkass in the sequel, it became apparently that mean-spirited comments are one of her specialties now.
* EvilCounterpart: To Asher. She acts as a {{Foil}} and a MirrorCharacter to him simultaneously:
** They're both close friends of Evelyn's, both have a crush on her and both are jealous of Matt because Evelyn only likes him. However, there is one more reason Jordan has it out for him: [[spoiler: She has a general hatred of boys due to her former toxic relationships]].
** While both of them are rough-mannered but good deep down, Asher is actually more laidback than Jordan and starts warming up to Matt a lot sooner.
** Both of them are the powerhouse of the team and both got the chance to display it against Matt for hurting Evelyn. Asher got to deliver a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown that he regretted later, Jordan [[spoiler: planned to outright kill Matthew and didn't fully regret until her HeelFaceReturn in the sequel]].
** They're both close friends of Evelyn's, both have a crush on her and both are jealous of Matt because Evelyn only likes him. However, there is one more reason Jordan has it out for him: [[spoiler: She has a general hatred of boys due to her former toxic relationships]].
** While both of them are rough-mannered but good deep down, Asher is actually more laidback than Jordan and starts warming up to Matt a lot sooner.
** Both of them are the powerhouse of the team and both got the chance to display it against Matt for hurting Evelyn. Asher got to deliver a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown that he regretted later, Jordan [[spoiler: planned to outright kill Matthew and didn't fully regret until her HeelFaceReturn in the sequel]].
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* {{Foil}}: To Asher. While [[MirrorCharacter they do share a few things in common]], there's also some differences:
** While they both resent Matthew for being Evelyn's LoveInterest because they both have a crush on her, Asher lacks one additional thing: [[spoiler: Jordan's FreudianExcuse which is having had bad relationships with boys before]].
** While they're both a JerkWithAHeartOfGold, Asher is arguably friendlier since he started warming up to Matt sooner in a NotBad way. [[spoiler: It took Jordan being DrivenToSuicide, BarredFromTheAfterlife, having a FaceHeelReturn in the sequel before she TookALevelInKindness]].
** As mentioned in ShadowArchetype in Jordan's folder, the one thing Asher hadn't thought to do that Jordan did: [[spoiler: [[MurderTheHypotenuse kill Matthew]]]].
** While they both resent Matthew for being Evelyn's LoveInterest because they both have a crush on her, Asher lacks one additional thing: [[spoiler: Jordan's FreudianExcuse which is having had bad relationships with boys before]].
** While they're both a JerkWithAHeartOfGold, Asher is arguably friendlier since he started warming up to Matt sooner in a NotBad way. [[spoiler: It took Jordan being DrivenToSuicide, BarredFromTheAfterlife, having a FaceHeelReturn in the sequel before she TookALevelInKindness]].
** As mentioned in ShadowArchetype in Jordan's folder, the one thing Asher hadn't thought to do that Jordan did: [[spoiler: [[MurderTheHypotenuse kill Matthew]]]].
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* VillainHasAPoint: [[spoiler: The same one as Asher's JerkassHasAPoint above, she's not wrong that Matt broke Evelyn's heart [[CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot in a way that could've been avoided]]]].
avoided]]]]. Doubles as HypocriteHasAPoint [[spoiler: since a bigger tragedy could've been avoided if she herself handled rejection better]].
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* FirstKiss: With Mike.
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* GreenEyedMonster: She doesn't let it come out but she is this over Mike.
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* FirstKiss: [[spoiler: With Evelyn]].
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* NotSoAboveItAll: Serious and levelheaded as he is, he eventually mellows out as time goes on.
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* NotSoAboveItAll: Serious and levelheaded Matthew comes off as he is, he eventually mellows out as time goes on.
the OnlySaneMan most of the time, but he's still prone to acting silly or erratic like his friends.
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* FirstKiss: With Mara.
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* [[spoiler: SympatheticMurderer: Yes, Jordan killed three bullies who can be seen as [[AssholeVictim Asshole Victims]]. However, she was also ready to kill Matt, who has done nothing wrong to provoke her wrath other than inadvertently draw the romantic attention of Evelyn, Jordan's best friend whom she crushed on. Not to mention that one of the bullies went through CharacterDevelopment and became a better person. Jordan could still get sympathy from her DrivenToSuicide death scene, her regret and EvenEvilHasLovedOnes regarding Evelyn]].
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* [[spoiler: SympatheticMurderer: Yes, [[spoiler:Yes, Jordan killed three bullies who can be seen as [[AssholeVictim Asshole Victims]].{{Asshole Victim}}s]]. However, she was also ready to kill Matt, who has done nothing wrong to provoke her wrath other than inadvertently draw the romantic attention of Evelyn, Jordan's best friend whom she crushed on. Not to mention that one of the bullies went through CharacterDevelopment and became a better person. Jordan could still get sympathy from her DrivenToSuicide death scene, her regret and EvenEvilHasLovedOnes regarding Evelyn]].
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* OnlySaneByComparison: Of the girls. She hasn't been driven to do irrational things due to jealousy like Evelyn and Jordan, but she's still not free of issues. The actual OnlySaneWoman would be Eliza.
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* OnlySaneByComparison: Of the girls. She hasn't been driven to do irrational things due to jealousy like Evelyn and Jordan, but she's still not free of issues. The actual OnlySaneWoman would be Eliza.
become Eliza later.
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* AffectionateName: Jordi. Asher also referred to her as Jords once.
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* AffectionateName: AffectionateNickname: Jordi. Asher also referred to her as Jords once.