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* DynamicCharacter: Murana starts off pretty one-note and seems to have a lot of conflicting character traits, however things get more layered and complex as the story progress and her backstory is revealed.
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* AuthorAvatar: A interesting case where the author's own Zoosona is the primary protagonist of the entire story. However, the narrative avoids the pitfalls of making such a character a MarySue by being three-dimensional with her flaws, faults and plenty of negative character attributes to offset her positive ones. It also seems like she fails a lot more than she succeeds.
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* AuthorAvatar: A interesting case where the author's own Zoosona is the primary protagonist of the entire story. However, the narrative avoids the pitfalls of making such a character a MarySue by being makes her three-dimensional with her flaws, faults faults, and plenty of negative character attributes to offset her positive ones. It also seems like she fails a lot more than she succeeds.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Max with his autism and his no-nonsense way of communicating with people have actually made him a reader favorite.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Steven is this with his innocence with females despite being quite the chick magnet and a MommasBoy.
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* [[VigilanteMan Vigilante Woman]]: Having been wronged by sadistic cultists and those who had no scruples of harming a child when she was but a cub and having seen them get away with it, Murana finds the current law establishment inadequate and seeks to burn alive any who would harm innocents like herself and others. She finds herself at odds with the law when seeking out her own justice murdering criminals for their crimes.
