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* MouthCam: Literally in this case. Exposure uses the camera to project the secrets of anyone, like [[spoiler:Emily]], to share their shameful experiences and mocks them.
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* TheBully: Violence is literally this. A symbol of physical abuse that is inflicted on bullied kids.
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* BystanderSyndrome: All Observers have this. They don't hurt Sally yet they don't help either.
* FacelessEye: Observers are creatures with only eyeballs instead of faces that look at you all the time.
* FireballEyeballs: Many Observers are on fire and need to be put out by the fire extinguisher.
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* InvincibleBoogeymen: It's worth noting that Helplessness can't be destroyed in any way. However, despite [[spoiler:destroying her flashlight and fire extinguisher, Sally manages to overcome the monster and save Emily.]]
* TheKindnapper: Near the end of the game, Helplessness kidnaps Emily and takes her deeper into the mines.
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* ManOnFire: Literally in this case.
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* WhatTheHellHero: After [[spoiler:Emily was taken by HELPLESSNESS]], Charon calls out Sally, blaming her not acting to save her cousin, causing Sally to break down into tears. Though he calms down and says that there's still a way to save Emily.
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* QuietCryForHelp: Near the end of the game [[spoiler:, right game, [[spoiler:right before Helplessness attacks,]] Emily says this to Sally, who had caught up with her [[spoiler:after Helplessness took Emily into the mines.]], and after all she was told, Sally doesn't hesitate.
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Sally's only crime was being oblivious about the bullying (that Emily didn't even tell her about) and acting like a jerk to Emily one (1) time in the backstory. During the game she repeatedly risked her own life and saved Emily from monsters twice. She has earned that forgiveness ten times over
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* JerkassRealisation: During the rescue of her cousin, Sally think back to a few moments back in [[spoiler:the real Bethelwood]] where she was always picked on, the real reason she disappeared and ended up in the [[spoiler:dark version of Bethelwood]] and [[spoiler:all the times she didn't do anything to help Emily]], all making her realise that Emily was actually right about her, in fact so much that she decided to make things right and apologise for everything.
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* EasilyForgiven: At the very end of the game, [[spoiler:during The Good Ending, Sallyapologises apologizes to Emily for not being there for her and of course, Emily does forgive her, for finding and saving her.]]
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-->'''Sally:''' That's not true...
-->'''Emily:''' You're worse than them! You made me think we were friends!
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