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* BadassLabcoat
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* SheFu: Nic jumps around like he's freakin' Tarzan.
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* ButtMonkey: Nic likes picking on him. But Nick [[TheGadfly picks on everybody.]]
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* ButtMonkey: Nic likes picking on him. But Nick Nic [[TheGadfly picks on everybody.]]
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* TheSmartGuy: On medical and scientific things.
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* TheHeart: People tend to play nice around her.
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Short and deadly, Doug is a 21-year-old Twilight from the Paul Klee guild.
* BadassAdorable: He looks like a kid and [[DangerouslyGenreSavvy can even play the part well.]]
* BloodKnight: Takes the job of killing Monroe mostly for the chance to fight him and any powerful Twilights he might have on hand.
* CuteBruiser
* DreadlockRasta: He has locks and he's trying to sort of break away from the guild. Also takes the job of killing Monroe even though no Twilight is supposed to do that.
* EvilSoundsDeep, VocalDissonance: The only sign of his actual age.
* InTheHood
* KnifeNut
**KukrisAreKool
* LightningBruiser
* TheNapoleon
* OlderThanHeLooks: Looks 12; he's not.
* BadassAdorable: He looks like a kid and [[DangerouslyGenreSavvy can even play the part well.]]
* BloodKnight: Takes the job of killing Monroe mostly for the chance to fight him and any powerful Twilights he might have on hand.
* CuteBruiser
* DreadlockRasta: He has locks and he's trying to sort of break away from the guild. Also takes the job of killing Monroe even though no Twilight is supposed to do that.
* EvilSoundsDeep, VocalDissonance: The only sign of his actual age.
* InTheHood
* KnifeNut
**KukrisAreKool
* LightningBruiser
* TheNapoleon
* OlderThanHeLooks: Looks 12; he's not.
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* TheGadfly: Nicolas is a [[ItAmusedMe big fat]] {{Troll}}.
** ItAmusedMe
** ItAmusedMe
* SupremeChef: A good cook.
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* TeamDad: Seems to have been Worick and Nicolas' father figure growing up. He's even seen patching Nic up once.once.
!! Cody Balfour
A 26-year-old police officer. Protege of Chad.
* ButtMonkey: Nic likes picking on him. But Nick [[TheGadfly picks on everybody.]]
* NaiveNewcomer
!! Dr. Theo
A 31-year-old doctor who works in a nearby clinic.
* BadassLabcoat
* BerserkButton: Don't hurt Nina or his clinic.
* DeadpanSnarker
* {{Fingore}}: We can only guess why two of his fingers are missing.
* TheMedic
** DeadlyDoctor: He's got syringes filled with... something and he's not afraid to use them on people.
* StoicSpectacles
!! Nina
The 12-year-old apprentice of Theo. Very fond of Nicolas.
* TheHeart
* TheMedic: A very competent nurse.
* MoralityPet: To Nicolas and Theo.
* TokenMiniMoe
* WiseBeyondTheirYears
!! Doug
!! Cody Balfour
A 26-year-old police officer. Protege of Chad.
* ButtMonkey: Nic likes picking on him. But Nick [[TheGadfly picks on everybody.]]
* NaiveNewcomer
!! Dr. Theo
A 31-year-old doctor who works in a nearby clinic.
* BadassLabcoat
* BerserkButton: Don't hurt Nina or his clinic.
* DeadpanSnarker
* {{Fingore}}: We can only guess why two of his fingers are missing.
* TheMedic
** DeadlyDoctor: He's got syringes filled with... something and he's not afraid to use them on people.
* StoicSpectacles
!! Nina
The 12-year-old apprentice of Theo. Very fond of Nicolas.
* TheHeart
* TheMedic: A very competent nurse.
* MoralityPet: To Nicolas and Theo.
* TokenMiniMoe
* WiseBeyondTheirYears
!! Doug
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* TroubledButCute: Not as obviously as Nic, though.
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* AbusiveParents: Worick's dad did NOT do well in Parenting 101.
* SatisfiedStreetRat: All things equal, seems to be pretty happy with his life as a gigolo.
*AbusiveParents: His father being ''just'' abusive probably would have been a step up, actually.
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*CuteMute: Nicolas is downright adorable as a kid.
* HarmfulToMinors: His [[AdultFear entire childhood.]]
*HeartwarmingOrphan: To Wallace, despite Wallace also being a kid.
*HeartwarmingOrphan: To Wallace, despite Wallace also being a kid.
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* [[spoiler:LamarckWasRight: Many Twilights these days are only Twilights because their parents were soldiers who used Celebre during the Unification Wars several years ago. Besides making them impressively strong, it causes severe physical and mental defects and lowered life expectancy. Nic is implied to be such a Twilight.]]
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* [[spoiler:LamarckWasRight: LamarckWasRight: Many Twilights these days are only Twilights because their parents were soldiers who used Celebre during the Unification Wars several years ago. Besides making them impressively strong, it causes severe physical and mental defects and lowered life expectancy. Nic is implied to be such a Twilight.]]
*NeverLearnedToRead: Until he met Wallace as a kid.
*[[spoiler:SonOfAWhore: Which [[MoralEventHorizon his father killed]] and stole him from. Him and Wallace bond over this, so to speak.]]
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*TykeBomb: His commanding officer [[KickTheDog outright]] calls him this.
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* [[spoiler:DoNotCallMePaul: His real name is Wallace.]]
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* [[spoiler:TheUnfavorite: Back home.]]
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* CharacterizationMarchesOn: Nicolas actually [[ThouShaltNotKillMuggles beheads someone]] in the first chapter.
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* SmarterThanYouLook: And it's not just the PhotographicMemory at work either.
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* [[spoiler:PsychoSerum: Barry used to give her TB meds to make her dependent and obedient to him. On the other downside, it gives her horrible nightmares and hallucinations.]]
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!! Chad Adkins
A 56-year-old police officer. A long time associate of Benriya.
* CoolOldGuy: Though he's only 20 years older than Worick and Nicolas so he gets mad when they call him "Gramps" instead of "Old Man."
* DirtyCop: Sometimes, in his dealings. Benriya aren't the worst folks in the city but they have murdered people.
**NobleBigotWithABadge: He's closer to this though.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold
* SmokingIsCool
* TeamDad: Seems to have been Worick and Nicolas' father figure growing up. He's even seen patching Nic up once.
!! Chad Adkins
A 56-year-old police officer. A long time associate of Benriya.
* CoolOldGuy: Though he's only 20 years older than Worick and Nicolas so he gets mad when they call him "Gramps" instead of "Old Man."
* DirtyCop: Sometimes, in his dealings. Benriya aren't the worst folks in the city but they have murdered people.
**NobleBigotWithABadge: He's closer to this though.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold
* SmokingIsCool
* TeamDad: Seems to have been Worick and Nicolas' father figure growing up. He's even seen patching Nic up once.
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* KidWithTheLeash: To Nic. Lampshaded in the story itself when [[spoiler:he has to physically restrain Nic from continuing to attack Doug and Ginger]].
* FeelNoPain: Occasionally overdoses on his Celebre meds to give himself an edge in combat.
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* TheNapoleon[=/=]PintsizedPowerhouse: He's not exceptionally short (around 5'6" tall) but every man around him acts like he is and he doesn't like women taller than he is either.
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* ThouShaltNotKillMuggles: He personally doesn't have a problem with killing people but as a Twilight, he's not allowed to.
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* TheTeamNormal: Compared to the [[FallenPrincess other]] [[AxCrazy two]] anyway.
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One half of Benriya, 35-year-old Worick is the more personable and communicative partner. He presents himself as fairly happy-go-lucky, but can be serious when a job is on the line. Worick works as both a freelance gangster and gigolo in order to pay the rent. In chapter seven it is revealed that he has exceptional recall abilities
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One half of Benriya, 35-year-old Worick is the more personable and communicative partner. He presents himself as fairly happy-go-lucky, but can be serious when a job is on the line. Worick works as both a freelance gangster and gigolo in order to pay the rent. In chapter seven it is revealed that he has exceptional recall abilities.
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* LethalChef: Do NOT let Nicolas in your kitchen.
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A 24-year-old prostitute who is assisted by Worick and Nicolas during one of their jobs. Although ordered to eliminate her, Benriya decides instead to claim her as "loot" - effectively saving her life. With nowhere else to go, Alex begins working as Benriya's secretary. She is currently learning sign language so that she can better communicate with Nicolas.Nicolas.
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One half of Benriya, 35-year-old Worick is the more personable and communicative partner. He presents himself as fairly happy-go-lucky, but can be serious when a job is on the line. Worick works as both a freelance gangster and gigolo in order to pay the rent. In chapter seven it is revealed that he has exceptional recall abilities.
!!Nicolas Brown (ニコラス・ブラウン)
One half of Benriya, 34-year-old Nicolas is highly skilled with a sword, imposing and somewhat aloof. He is also deaf and communicates primarily through sign language, though he can speak in a limited capacity. Along with Worick, he works as a gangster-for-hire. Nick is a "tagged" (in reference to his dog tags), making him both feared and reviled on the streets.
!! Alex Benedetto (アレックス・ベネデット)
A 24-year-old prostitute who is assisted by Worick and Nicolas during one of their jobs. Although ordered to eliminate her, Benriya decides instead to claim her as "loot" - effectively saving her life. With nowhere else to go, Alex begins working as Benriya's secretary. She is currently learning sign language so that she can better communicate with Nicolas.
