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** Appears [[spoiler: to be emotionless, [[IncrediblyLamePun cold]] and has a connection to Reni, who is the BigBad]], but [[spoiler: loses these personality traits when his brainwashment wears over]]
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** Appears [[spoiler: to be emotionless, [[IncrediblyLamePun [[{{Pun}} cold]] and has a connection to Reni, who is the BigBad]], but [[spoiler: loses these personality traits when his brainwashment wears over]]
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Remove all supernatural weirdness and the gun violence from his backstory and you get an analogy for [[spoiler: an unassuming person being drugged and raped, and left behind after the drug wears off. Upon waking up they realize what they just experienced and vow never to love and have sex again]]. To enforce this, [[spoiler: his experience when he’s gunning down everyone around him is both described as an exciting high and a terrible feeling]].
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* SinisterScythe: His WeaponOfChoice.
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* SpellBook: His WeaponOfChoice.
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* EmotionSuppression: [[spoiler: UpToEleven. He outright wished for all his emotions to disappear. The result is that he only experiences the most basic version of any emotion]].
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* EmotionSuppression: [[spoiler: UpToEleven.{{Exaggerated|Trope}}. He outright wished for all his emotions to disappear. The result is that he only experiences the most basic version of any emotion]].
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* PronounTrouble: The author has noticible problems with how to address [[spoiler: Talulah and Reni. While Reni uses he/him, Talulah uses she/her. During the story, Talulah is a WalkingSpoiler so her existence is masked by Reni using he/him. Because in reality, Talulah is the one calling the shots and ''not Reni'', 'Reni' ''should'' be addressed be she/her...in short, the author has given up and uses they/them when referring to them both and will use their own respective pronouns when referring to them induvidually]].
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* PronounTrouble: The author has noticible noticeable problems with how to address [[spoiler: Talulah and Reni. While Reni uses he/him, Talulah uses she/her. During the story, Talulah is a WalkingSpoiler so her existence is masked by Reni using he/him. Because in reality, Talulah is the one calling the shots and ''not Reni'', 'Reni' ''should'' be addressed be she/her...in short, the author has given up and uses they/them when referring to them both and will use their own respective pronouns when referring to them induvidually]].
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* CapitalLettersAreMagic: Is always referred to by capitalized pronouns, ''[[UpToEleven even by the narration]]''.
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* CapitalLettersAreMagic: Is always referred to by capitalized pronouns, ''[[UpToEleven even ''even by the narration]]''.narration''.
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* KnifeNut: [[spoiler: In their smallest form, his weapons are knives the size of scalpels. He can turn them the size of a butcher's cleaver, but cannot summon more of them]].
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* KnifeNut: Uses twin daggers.
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* KnifeNut: DualWield: Uses twin daggers.
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* KnifeNut: Slightly different. He uses palette knives.
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* TarotMotifs: Not him, but his witch form Sylvia has [[https://dreamerwitches.tumblr.com/post/660058328674811904/you-probably-know-who-i-am-but-im-doing-this-on three swords stabbing her like in the tarot card]]. It is perhaps symbolic of [[spoiler: the aforementioned trauma he pushes away]].
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Three-fourth of his hair is dyed red.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Most of his hair is dyed a dark blue.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: His hair is purple.
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* FridgeLogic: He is the only character said to manage the Faction's budget. No other Faction is ever mentioned to have such a role...probably because they ''have'' no budget.
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* MySignificanceSenseIsTingling: As [[spoiler: Banri turns into a witch]], he is aware of it happening, comments on it and sheds a SingleTear. This can be retroactively [[JustifiedTrope justified]] as being RequiredSecondaryPowers of his RandomTeleportation.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: As this Misumi also mentions a brother, he probably has the same family as canon Misumi. His wish implies that, one way or the other, his family was breaking apart over him, though details are not given.
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Not him, but he [[spoiler: quickly figures out by Haruto's words that his brother used to be a pawn of Reni's, but was tossed aside after they did not need him anymore, leaving him to become the witch whose barrier they have been fighting Haruto in the entire time. This, coupled with the hopeless situation they're in, causes Misumi to turn into a witch despite not having been noted as straining his magic much. One can consider that, combined with his wish, he has no family left that truly cares about him and his FamilyOfChoice is dying along with him]].
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* FlowerMotifs: Chrysanthemum. After he contracted, he thought about its meaning much like Juza did.
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* FlowerMotifs: Chrysanthemum. After he contracted, he thought about its meaning much like Juza did. According to the image, it is a golden color, which can mean slighted love.
