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* {{Deconstruction}}: The later stories in the franchise establish Hazel as one to the NobodyGetsLeftBehind protagonists that tend to be the focus of other ''Prehistoric Park'' fanfictions. While this trait is admirable, Hazel arguably takes it too far by trying to rescue creatures from blatantly dangerous situations that she doesn't have a way of escaping from.
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* {{Deconstruction}}: The later stories in the franchise establish Hazel as one to the NobodyGetsLeftBehind NoOneGetsLeftBehind protagonists that tend to be the focus of other ''Prehistoric Park'' fanfictions. While this trait is admirable, Hazel arguably takes it too far by trying to rescue creatures from blatantly dangerous situations that she doesn't have a way of escaping from.
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* NotGoodWithRejection: Attacks [[spoiler:Big Al]] because Alyssa likes [[spoiler:Al]] more than him and says as much. {{Downplayed}}, though: he only really becomes antagonistic toward [[spoiler:Al]] after the latter starts mocking him.
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* NotGoodWithPeople: a type 2 preferring a strict zoo keeper approach. He is also a little hard to work with as he is cocky, pessimistic, and a little prideful. He looks down on Hazel due to her age. He is good at his job though.
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* {{Expy}}: Of [[WebAnimation/RedVsBlue Sarge]]: both have similar personalities and [[NamesTheSame the same name]].
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* {{Expy}}: Of [[WebAnimation/RedVsBlue Sarge]]: both have similar personalities and [[NamesTheSame the same name]].name.
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* StockDinosaurs: A ''Triceratops''.
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* StockDinosaurs: A ''Parasaurolopus''.
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* StockDinosaurs: Is an ''Allosaurus fragilis''. A case of ScienceMarchesOn, as in 2019 Big Al was reclassified as being a member of a new species called ''Allosaurus lucasi''.
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* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: He's an Expy of [[Machinima/RedVsBlue Caboose]]. It comes with the territory.
* Expy: Of [[Machinima/RedVsBlue Caboose]]. However, he also shares some traits with [[Creator/RoosterTeeth Joel Heymen]], Caboose's voice actor.
* Expy: Of [[Machinima/RedVsBlue Caboose]]. However, he also shares some traits with [[Creator/RoosterTeeth Joel Heymen]], Caboose's voice actor.
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* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: He's an Expy of [[Machinima/RedVsBlue [[WebAnimation/RedVsBlue Caboose]]. It comes with the territory.
* Expy: Of[[Machinima/RedVsBlue [[WebAnimation/RedVsBlue Caboose]]. However, he also shares some traits with [[Creator/RoosterTeeth Joel Heymen]], Caboose's voice actor.
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* {{Foil}}: To Sarge: She's refined, acts with an air of class to her actions, and, in general, behaves in an aristocratic manner, while Sarge tends to act in a more childish/stereotypically masculine manner. [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} Considering who they]] [[Machinima/RedVsBlue are based on]], [[{{Expy}} this makes sense]].
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* {{Foil}}: To Sarge: She's refined, acts with an air of class to her actions, and, in general, behaves in an aristocratic manner, while Sarge tends to act in a more childish/stereotypically masculine manner. [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} Considering who they]] [[Machinima/RedVsBlue [[WebAnimation/RedVsBlue are based on]], [[{{Expy}} this makes sense]].
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* {{Expy}}: Of [[Machinima/RedVsBlue Sarge]]: both have similar personalities and [[NamesTheSame the same name]].
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* {{Expy}}: Of [[Machinima/RedVsBlue [[WebAnimation/RedVsBlue Sarge]]: both have similar personalities and [[NamesTheSame the same name]].
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* KnifeNut: Her weapon of choice is a dagger.
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* SeldomSeenSpecies: He's a ''Pachyrhinosaurus''.
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* SeldomSeenSpecies: He's a ''Pachyrhinosaurus''.
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* SeldomSeenSpecies: ''Elasmotherium'' is usually ignored in favor of the more famous wooly rhino, ''Coelodonta''.
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* SeldomSeenSpecies: ''Therizinosaurs'' aren't very common in popular fiction.
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* SeldomSeenSpecies: DoubleSubverted: Unlike in the original, he's an American ''Allosaurus''. However, he's the much less well known ''Allosaurus lucasi'', instead of the more popular ''A. fragilis''.
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* SeldomSeenSpecies: Is a ''Supersaurus''.
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* SeldomSeenSpecies: ''Supersaurus''
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* WhiteSheep: UpToEleven: he's the only member of his ''entire species'' that isn't portrayed in a selfish or morally ambiguous manner.
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* WhiteSheep: UpToEleven: he's He's the only member of his ''entire species'' that isn't portrayed in a selfish or morally ambiguous manner.
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* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: [[spoiler:Is brutally run through the dried of remains of an ''Alcovasaurus'', grievously wounding her. Despite this, she tries to attack Hazel and Flia even after taking such a severe wound, only to be knocked backwards by Al, resulting in Red Sand being impaled ''[[UpToEleven AGAIN]]'', this time at least once through the neck, which finally kills her]].
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* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: [[spoiler:Is brutally run through the dried of remains of an ''Alcovasaurus'', grievously wounding her. Despite this, she tries to attack Hazel and Flia even after taking such a severe wound, only to be knocked backwards by Al, resulting in Red Sand being impaled ''[[UpToEleven AGAIN]]'', ''AGAIN'', this time at least once through the neck, which finally kills her]].
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* BigBad: Is shaping up to be this. [[spoiler: He has found out about the Park and is rallying the flesh-eaters to feast!]].
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* BigBad: Is shaping up to be this. [[spoiler: He has He's the main antagonist of ''The Long Night of Winter'', as he found out about the location of the Temporary Park and is rallying wants to use the flesh-eaters inhabitants to feast!]].feed his pack.
* BigBadEnsemble: While he's the overall BigBad of the story, Gorgon shares the role of main antagonist with ''Hazel'', ironically enough, because her own issues finally reach their boiling point in this story, causing her to clash with msot of her teammates.
* TheDon: He is compared to this in the story. Not only does he command a fierce pack, but has an alliance with all the other predators which he can call on. It's stated he lends predators land to live on in exchange for their services.
* TheDreaded: Despite being smaller than a t.rex they fear him due to his influence and ruthless nature.
* TheDyingWalk: [[spoiler:He's last seen wandering off after taking an absolutely brutal beating by the protagonists. WordOfGod confirmed he succumbed to his wounds off screen]].
* BigBadEnsemble: While he's the overall BigBad of the story, Gorgon shares the role of main antagonist with ''Hazel'', ironically enough, because her own issues finally reach their boiling point in this story, causing her to clash with msot of her teammates.
* TheDon: He is compared to this in the story. Not only does he command a fierce pack, but has an alliance with all the other predators which he can call on. It's stated he lends predators land to live on in exchange for their services.
* TheDreaded: Despite being smaller than a t.rex they fear him due to his influence and ruthless nature.
* TheDyingWalk: [[spoiler:He's last seen wandering off after taking an absolutely brutal beating by the protagonists. WordOfGod confirmed he succumbed to his wounds off screen]].
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* TheDreaded: Despite HandicappedBadass: His malformed arm doesn't stop him from being smaller than a t.rex they fear him due to vicious fighter, in part because his influence and ruthless nature.
* TheDon: He is comparedarms weren't particularly useful to this in the story. Not only does he command a fierce pack, but has an alliance with all the other predators which he can call on. It's stated he lends predators land to live on in exchange for their services.begin with.
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* AffablyEvil: Okay evil is taking it too far, but he is still spying on the park for his superiors and shows little concern over the consequences. Oh, and he is a genuinely nice guy.
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* AffablyEvil: Okay evil is taking it too far, but he is still spying on the park for his superiors and shows little concern over the consequences. Oh, and he is a genuinely nice guy. [[spoiler:Gradually moves past this in ''Two Worlds, One Family'', though a full HeelFaceTurn has yet to occur]].
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* WomanScorned: RareMaleExample -- [[spoiler:he ends up telling S.A.G.E. the truth about the park after seeing Hazel get overly comfortable with Chris. To his credit, he realizes in the next chapter how petty he was being and manages to convince them he made it up due to confusion]].
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A family of Sabertooth cats. However [[TastesLikeDiabetes Tai and Sable]] are unaware that Sabrina and César are their parents.
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A family of Sabertooth cats. However [[TastesLikeDiabetes However, Tai and Sable]] Sable are unaware that Sabrina and César are their parents.
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* IHaveNoSon: {{Downplayed}}: she disinherited Broken Jaw (or did the dinosaurian equivalent, at least) after he was crippled by Woodstock. She still considers him her son, however. [[YouAreNotMyFather He most definitely reciprocates the feeling, but goes much farther than she does.]]
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* IHaveNoSon: {{Downplayed}}: she disinherited Broken Jaw (or did the dinosaurian equivalent, at least) after he was crippled by Woodstock. She still considers him her son, however. [[YouAreNotMyFather [[YoureNotMyMother He most definitely reciprocates the feeling, but goes much farther than she does.]]does]].
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* AdultFear: None of their eggs from their last clutch hatched. For dinosaurs, this would be equivalent to having a stillborn child.
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* TragicStillbirth: None of their eggs from their last clutch hatched. For dinosaurs, this would be equivalent to having a stillborn child.
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* {{Deconstruction}}: The later stories in the franchise establish Hazel as one to the NobodyGetsLeftBehind protagonists that tend to be the focus of other ''Prehistoric Park'' fanfictions. While this trait is admirable, Hazel arguably takes it too far by trying to rescue creatures from blatantly dangerous situations that she doesn't have a way of escaping from.
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* BigBad: The villain that fills this role the most in ''Prehistoric Revolution'', as she provides the most opposition to Flia and Hazel.
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* BigBad: The villain that fills this role Close enough to one, at any rate -- she's the most in only consistently antagonistic predator through ''Prehistoric Revolution'', as but normally avoids outright antagonizing the rest of the cast. She only truly takes this roll during her final appearance, where she provides the most opposition goes out of her way to antagonize Al, Hazel, and Flia and Hazel.after all three offend her.
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* EnemyEatsYourLunch: [[spoiler:Kills and eats a ''Drinker'' '''just before Al catches it''']].
* {{Expy}}: Of [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} Raven Branwen.]]
* {{Expy}}: Of [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} Raven Branwen.]]
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* EnemyEatsYourLunch: [[spoiler:Kills and eats a ''Drinker'' '''just ''Drinker just before Al catches it''']].
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* {{Expy}}:Of She's an AbusiveParent who's got a red color scheme and has a [[TheSocialDarwinist Darwinist]] mindset. [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} Raven Branwen.]]Branwen says hi]].
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* UndignifiedDeath: [[spoler:Impales herself against a dead ''Alcovasaurus'' and spends her last minutes chocking on her own blood]].
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* LastOfHerKind: She's the last ''Brachiosaurus'' by the time of ''A Prehistoric Park Adventure'', and while she doesn't let it get to her that much, it's clear she's very lonely because of this.[[spoiler: This makes her meeting with Yin that much more heartwarming]].
** Also, depending on what Hazel rescues in ''Prehistoric Revolution'', this may not be the case for much longer.
* ThrowTheDogABone: [[spoiler:She's ''extremely'' happy to find out she isn't the only sauropod in the park, even if she is the last ''Brachiosaurus'']].
** Also, depending on what Hazel rescues in ''Prehistoric Revolution'', this may not be the case for much longer.
* ThrowTheDogABone: [[spoiler:She's ''extremely'' happy to find out she isn't the only sauropod in the park, even if she is the last ''Brachiosaurus'']].
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* LastOfHerKind: She's the last ''Brachiosaurus'' by the time of ''A Prehistoric Park Adventure'', and while she doesn't let it get to her that much, it's clear she's very lonely because of this.[[spoiler: This makes her meeting with Yin that much more heartwarming]].
** Also, depending on what Hazel rescues in ''Prehistoric Revolution'', this may not beheartwarming. No longer the case for much longer.
in ''Two Worlds, One Family'', as a herd of five ''Brachiosaurus'' are rescued from a Jurassic forest fire]].
* ThrowTheDogABone: [[spoiler:She's ''extremely'' happy to find out she isn't the only sauropod in the park, even if she is the last''Brachiosaurus'']].''Brachiosaurus''. Then ''Two Worlds, One Family'' adds an entire herd of ''Brachiosaurus'' to the park]].
** Also, depending on what Hazel rescues in ''Prehistoric Revolution'', this may not be
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* StockDinosaurs: Is an ''Allosaurus fragilis''.
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* StockDinosaurs: Is an ''Allosaurus fragilis''. A case of ScienceMarchesOn, as in 2019 Big Al was reclassified as being a member of a new species called ''Allosaurus lucasi''.
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* {{Expy}}: Of [[Franchise/{{Borderlands}} Handsome Jack]], being a power hungry boss with a daughter he loves but also mistreats intentionally and unintentionally. He even has tow subordinates named Wilhelm and Nisha.
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* TheJuggernaught/MadeOfIron: [[spoiler:It takes being attacked by Marth, Irwin, Aladar, Flia, Terence AND Matilda to finally beat him in ''Extinction Lasts Forever'']].
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* TheJuggernaught/MadeOfIron: TheJuggernaught[=/=]MadeOfIron: [[spoiler:It takes being attacked by Marth, Irwin, Aladar, Flia, Terence AND Matilda to finally beat him in ''Extinction Lasts Forever'']].Forever''.]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: Finally undergoes this at the end of ''Extinction Lasts Forever'', and, by the time ''The Long Night of WInter'' rolls around, [[spoiler:he's willing to fight side by side with Aladar]].
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* HeelFaceTurn: Finally undergoes this at the end of ''Extinction Lasts Forever'', and, by the time ''The Long Night of WInter'' Winter'' rolls around, [[spoiler:he's willing to fight side by side with Aladar]].
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* HariTriggerTemper: Do not taunt him, it will end poorly.
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* AdaptationalPersonalityChange: In ''Documentary/DinosaurRevolution'', Caius was constantly trying to eat Flit, but here, they are best friends. Addtionally, both are friends with Broken Jaw, when in the show, he tried to eat Caius whenever the latter annoyed him.
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* AdaptationalPersonalityChange: In ''Documentary/DinosaurRevolution'', ''Series/DinosaurRevolution'', Caius was constantly trying to eat Flit, but here, they are best friends. Addtionally, both are friends with Broken Jaw, when in the show, he tried to eat Caius whenever the latter annoyed him.
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* {{Expy}}: Of [[Machinima/RedVsBlue Sarge]]: both have similar personalities and [[NamesTheSame the same name].
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* RealityEnsues: [[spoiler:When their exhibit catches on fire due to Diablo's stampede (ItMakesSenseInContext), Ben has to carry Scorpio to Suzanne, as Scorpio has already passed out from lack of oxygen]].
** [[spoiler:During this time, Twitch goes to seek Hazel for help. He passes out the minute he finishes giving an explanation of what happened]].
** [[spoiler:Additionally, Ben has almost passed out due to asphyxiation by the time he finds Suzanne. Being a giant arthropod is NOT POSSIBLE on Earth with the modern atmosphere]].
** [[spoiler:During this time, Twitch goes to seek Hazel for help. He passes out the minute he finishes giving an explanation of what happened]].
** [[spoiler:Additionally, Ben has almost passed out due to asphyxiation by the time he finds Suzanne. Being a giant arthropod is NOT POSSIBLE on Earth with the modern atmosphere]].
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: [[spoiler:When their exhibit catches on fire due to Diablo's stampede (ItMakesSenseInContext), Ben has to carry Scorpio to Suzanne, as Scorpio has already passed out from lack of oxygen]].
** [[spoiler:During this time, Twitch goes to seek Hazel for help. He passes out the minute he finishes giving an explanation of what happened]].
** [[spoiler:Additionally, Ben has almost passed out due to asphyxiation by the time he finds Suzanne. Being a giant arthropod is NOT POSSIBLE on Earth with the modern atmosphere]].
** [[spoiler:During this time, Twitch goes to seek Hazel for help. He passes out the minute he finishes giving an explanation of what happened]].
** [[spoiler:Additionally, Ben has almost passed out due to asphyxiation by the time he finds Suzanne. Being a giant arthropod is NOT POSSIBLE on Earth with the modern atmosphere]].