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* EmbodimentOfVice: Subverted. Unlike Jadis, Tianming is the embodiment of Sloth and doesn't have it as a domain.
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* EmbodimentOfVice: Subverted. Unlike Jadis, Tianming is isn't the embodiment of Sloth and doesn't have it as a domain.
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* EmbodimentOfVice: Subverted. Unlike Janis, Tianming is the embodiment of Sloth and doesn't have it as a domain.
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* EmbodimentOfVice: Subverted. Unlike Janis, Jadis, Tianming is the embodiment of Sloth and doesn't have it as a domain.
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* EmbodimentOfVice: Subverted. Unlike Janis, Tianming is the embodiment of Sloth and doesn't have it as a domain.
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* TheFatalist: She was initially this due to possessing perfect, omniscient knowledge -- things like actions and free will are nothing but illusions, and there is absolutely no point in doing anything of worth as they are fated to be. Even one's identity (including her own) is nothing compared to the shape of existence itself. She eventually drops her fatalistic outlook once Princes Varázsló and Cselszövő help her find value in the present beyond her prophetic visions.
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* TheFatalist: She was initially this due to possessing perfect, omniscient knowledge -- things like actions and free will are nothing but illusions, and there is absolutely no point in doing anything of worth as they are fated to be. Even one's identity (including her own) is nothing compared to the shape of existence itself. She eventually drops her fatalistic outlook once Princes Varázsló and Cselszövő help her find value in the present [[ScrewDestiny beyond her prophetic visions.visions]].
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* ASharedSuffering: What causes her to connect with Princes Varázsló and Cselszövő is the realization that they are also omniscient and have [[BlessedWithSuck suffered for it]], just like she has. Them learning to find ways to experience joy by empowering mortals to do things that are beyond even there ability to predict is what gets her out of her funk and find purpose in life again.
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* ASharedSuffering: What causes her to connect with Princes Varázsló and Cselszövő is the realization that they are also omniscient [[TheOmniscient omniscient]] and have [[BlessedWithSuck suffered for it]], just like she has. Them learning to find ways to experience joy by empowering mortals to do things that are beyond even there their ability to predict is what gets her out of her funk and find purpose in life again.
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* BenevolentMageRuler: After overcoming her trauma and Ascending to godhood as a goddess of Omniscience and ''Sorcery'', she would go on to establish her own empire where her subjects enjoy a comfortable standard of living and have the opportunity to test her intellectual/philosophical prowess (and be tested by her). Her subjects are in turn devoted to understanding the world around them as she did. However, given that she's now the adoptive daughter of Princes Varázsló and Cselszövő, she devotes her knowledge and talents to constructive/pragmatic evil even though she's regarded as a much better ruler compared to her birth family, who wasted their lives pursuing knowledge to unfettered extremes.
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* BenevolentMageRuler: After overcoming her trauma and Ascending to godhood as a goddess of Omniscience and ''Sorcery'', '''Sorcery''', she would go on to establish her own empire where her subjects enjoy a comfortable standard of living and have the opportunity to test her intellectual/philosophical prowess (and be tested by her). Her subjects are in turn devoted to understanding the world around them as she did. However, given that she's now the adoptive daughter of Princes Varázsló and Cselszövő, she devotes her knowledge and talents to constructive/pragmatic evil even though she's regarded as a much better ruler compared to her birth family, who wasted their lives pursuing knowledge to unfettered extremes.
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* PayEvilUntoEvil: Like most constructive evil deities, Tiānmìng punishes those who seek knowledge for evil and destructive reasons.
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* FaintinShock: He fainted in shock upon learning the one who rescued him and his twin brother from the 'Well of Eternity' was none other than [[TheArchmage Tuzu]], the leader of the [[TheOldGods Grand Primevals\\.
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* FaintinShock: FaintInShock: He fainted in shock upon learning the one who rescued him and his twin brother from the 'Well of Eternity' was none other than [[TheArchmage Tuzu]], the leader of the [[TheOldGods Grand Primevals\\.Primevals]].
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* TheChampion: A chosen champion of Princess Iron Crown.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Being granted perfect, omiscient knowledge of the universe sounds good on paper, but in trying to pursue it to fulfill her family's ambitions, she learned the hard way that holding such knolwedge isn't good ''in practice''. As a result of her omniscience, she became an extremely jaded and nihilistic snake who believed nothing really mattered and who she is as a person doesn't count because everything is fated to be. Being entombed in glass for many years while being treated as an endless source of prophecies by ambitious, unfettered rulers didn't help. It's not until she meets Prince Varázsló and Prince Cselszövő that she starts reconnecting with the present and actually uses her knowledge for constructive purposes, unlike her family.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Being granted perfect, omiscient omniscient knowledge of the universe sounds good on paper, but in trying to pursue it to fulfill her family's ambitions, she learned the hard way that holding such knolwedge knowledge isn't good ''in practice''. As a result of her omniscience, she became an extremely jaded and nihilistic snake who believed nothing really mattered and who she is as a person doesn't count because everything is fated to be. Being entombed in glass for many years while being treated as an endless source of prophecies by ambitious, unfettered rulers didn't help. It's not until she meets Prince Varázsló and Prince Cselszövő that she starts reconnecting with the present and actually uses her knowledge for constructive purposes, unlike her family.
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* GodOfEvil: As a Snake goddess, she represents the unfettered aspects of Omniscience, Philosophy, Science, and Sorcery, as well as Understanding (i.e. Understanding as in learning how to use the aforementioned concepts to further their own beliefs and aims. This stems from how her birth family did horrible things in the pursuit of knowledge instead of using their intelligence and skills to actually rule well.
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* GodOfEvil: As a Snake goddess, she represents the unfettered aspects of Omniscience, Philosophy, Science, and Sorcery, as well as Understanding (i.e. Understanding as in learning how to use the aforementioned concepts to further their own beliefs and aims.aims). This stems from how her birth family did horrible things in the pursuit of knowledge instead of using their intelligence and skills to actually rule well.
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* ForWantOfANail: InUniverse; many of his experiments involved researching alternate timelines/dimensions where he and his brother lived happier lives based on different choices taken, whether by them or others. Unfortunately, his obsession with future possibilities nearly led him down a dark path, and his concerned family was forced to call in Golden Scepter when he [[CurbStompBattle proved himself too damn powerful for them to stop]]. Golden Scepter subduing him and destroying his research [[VillainousBreakdown left him a broken wreck]], but also forced him to acknowledge that [[ScrewDestiny he can still take charge of his own life/future in spite of what happened to him]], especially after Golden Scepter introduced him to a fellow eldritch deity, Dr. Endless Dreams.
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Azab (her entry ([[https://www.deviantart.com/brutalityinc/art/Codex-Equestria-Deities-and-Divines-Part-64-897831515 here]]) is the uplifted Cobra goddess of Suffering, Torture, Pain, and Evil, and one of Phykti's more unusual children.
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Azab (her entry ([[https://www.[[https://www.deviantart.com/brutalityinc/art/Codex-Equestria-Deities-and-Divines-Part-64-897831515 here]]) is the uplifted Cobra goddess of Suffering, Torture, Pain, and Evil, and one of Phykti's more unusual children.
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* AlliterativeName: Her title is "the '''S'''erpent of '''S'''uffering".
* AnthropomorphicPersonification: She's a Cobra goddess who embodies Suffering, Torture, Pain, and Evil.
* BadPowersBadPeople: She's a cruel, sadistic Cobra goddess who embodies Suffering, Torture, Pain, and Evil, with many of her powers revolving around both inflicting and spreading suffering, pain, and evil. However, it's subverted as while she did start out as a living torture instrument for a vile Erobreseg Hydianite witch, she despised her mistress so much that she sided with Phykti, who taught her constructive Evil to better focus her sadistic tendencies.
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Despite originally being [[WickedWitch Bolesť]]'s familiar, she quickly sided with Phykti. This is due to Phykti being the first person to not only genuinely treat her nicely despite being a goddess of Cruelty, but also grant her sapience (and therefore free will and the ability to express her inner thoughts), whereas Bolesť constantly abused and used her as a weapon to torture victims with right after creating her.
* BlatantLies: She falsely assures the wicked soul of her former mistress, Bolesť, that she "won't be too rough" in regards to her punishment, before proceeding to do the exact opposite in retribution for how many times Bolesť used her to torture innocent people to death.
* BreakingTheCycleOfBadParenting: Despite being Bolesť's {{Familiar}}, she was also by all intents and purposes her daughter, as Bolesť created her by transferring a part of her own soul into her pet Cobra. Presently, she is a good mother to her own children, despite her nature as a goddess of Suffering, Torture, and Pain.
* TheDogBitesBack: After years of being abused and used as a torture device by Bolesť, she grew to resent her mistress, but could only threaten her due to lacking full sapience. Once Bolesť finally dies, she quickly sides with Phykti, who gives her sapience and adopts her as one of her daughters, and was put in charge of Bolesť's postmortem punishment afterward. Her following torments of Bolesť were so horrific that Phykti could only describe her as being a "natural".
--> '''Bolesť:''' N-Now, Azab, I created you!\\
'''Azab:''' Oh, mistress, I know. Don't worry, I won't be too rough... after all, you don't need to cause injury to cause more pain than you can imagine, but after how many times you've used me to inflict it on others, you already know that, don't you?
* {{Familiar}}: She was originally a Cobra familiar created by Bolesť, a Erobreseg Hydianite witch, created when Bolesť imparted a piece of her soul onto her. However, Bolesť not only used her to torment and kill innocent people, but also abused her. As a result, she started resenting Bolesť, even threatening her mistress whenever she was mistreated. Once Bolesť is killed, she was taken in by Phykti, who grants her full sapience by replacing the part of Bolesť's soul used to create her with a piece of her own divine essence. This transformed her into a Cobra demigoddess with Deer traits, though she would Ascend to true godhood later on.
* GroinAttack: Her siblings note she has a preference for these. She explains it's because it's such an easy way to cause people agonizing pain... and she finds their reactionsamusing.amusing.
* TheMagnificent: Known as "the Serpent of Suffering".
* MixAndMatchCritters: Following her uplifting by Phykti and her divine Ascension, she became a huge Cobra goddess with chimeric Deer traits like antlers and Deer-like fur, due to her adoptive mother being part-Deer.
* SnakesAreSinister: She is a cruel, sadistic Cobra goddess who loves inflicting torment and agony upon her victims, though this only applied to the unrepentantly wicked. To heroic and/or constructively evil figures, she is more AffablyEvil. She was originally the {{Familiar}} of a Erobreseg Hydianite witch, who used her as both a weapon and torture instrument, but her mistress was so abusive that she sided with Phykti upon being granted full sapience by the latter.
* SwallowedWhole: Being a Cobra snake, she primarily eats by swallowing her victims whole. She is confused as to why people find this disturbing, as it is completely natural for her kind. Her adoptive uncle, Bolezn, [[FreakyIsCool finds this cool]], however.
--> '''Azab:''' ...What? This is just how snakes eat. They were already dead.
* AnthropomorphicPersonification: She's a Cobra goddess who embodies Suffering, Torture, Pain, and Evil.
* BadPowersBadPeople: She's a cruel, sadistic Cobra goddess who embodies Suffering, Torture, Pain, and Evil, with many of her powers revolving around both inflicting and spreading suffering, pain, and evil. However, it's subverted as while she did start out as a living torture instrument for a vile Erobreseg Hydianite witch, she despised her mistress so much that she sided with Phykti, who taught her constructive Evil to better focus her sadistic tendencies.
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Despite originally being [[WickedWitch Bolesť]]'s familiar, she quickly sided with Phykti. This is due to Phykti being the first person to not only genuinely treat her nicely despite being a goddess of Cruelty, but also grant her sapience (and therefore free will and the ability to express her inner thoughts), whereas Bolesť constantly abused and used her as a weapon to torture victims with right after creating her.
* BlatantLies: She falsely assures the wicked soul of her former mistress, Bolesť, that she "won't be too rough" in regards to her punishment, before proceeding to do the exact opposite in retribution for how many times Bolesť used her to torture innocent people to death.
* BreakingTheCycleOfBadParenting: Despite being Bolesť's {{Familiar}}, she was also by all intents and purposes her daughter, as Bolesť created her by transferring a part of her own soul into her pet Cobra. Presently, she is a good mother to her own children, despite her nature as a goddess of Suffering, Torture, and Pain.
* TheDogBitesBack: After years of being abused and used as a torture device by Bolesť, she grew to resent her mistress, but could only threaten her due to lacking full sapience. Once Bolesť finally dies, she quickly sides with Phykti, who gives her sapience and adopts her as one of her daughters, and was put in charge of Bolesť's postmortem punishment afterward. Her following torments of Bolesť were so horrific that Phykti could only describe her as being a "natural".
--> '''Bolesť:''' N-Now, Azab, I created you!\\
'''Azab:''' Oh, mistress, I know. Don't worry, I won't be too rough... after all, you don't need to cause injury to cause more pain than you can imagine, but after how many times you've used me to inflict it on others, you already know that, don't you?
* {{Familiar}}: She was originally a Cobra familiar created by Bolesť, a Erobreseg Hydianite witch, created when Bolesť imparted a piece of her soul onto her. However, Bolesť not only used her to torment and kill innocent people, but also abused her. As a result, she started resenting Bolesť, even threatening her mistress whenever she was mistreated. Once Bolesť is killed, she was taken in by Phykti, who grants her full sapience by replacing the part of Bolesť's soul used to create her with a piece of her own divine essence. This transformed her into a Cobra demigoddess with Deer traits, though she would Ascend to true godhood later on.
* GroinAttack: Her siblings note she has a preference for these. She explains it's because it's such an easy way to cause people agonizing pain... and she finds their reactions
* TheMagnificent: Known as "the Serpent of Suffering".
* MixAndMatchCritters: Following her uplifting by Phykti and her divine Ascension, she became a huge Cobra goddess with chimeric Deer traits like antlers and Deer-like fur, due to her adoptive mother being part-Deer.
* SnakesAreSinister: She is a cruel, sadistic Cobra goddess who loves inflicting torment and agony upon her victims, though this only applied to the unrepentantly wicked. To heroic and/or constructively evil figures, she is more AffablyEvil. She was originally the {{Familiar}} of a Erobreseg Hydianite witch, who used her as both a weapon and torture instrument, but her mistress was so abusive that she sided with Phykti upon being granted full sapience by the latter.
* SwallowedWhole: Being a Cobra snake, she primarily eats by swallowing her victims whole. She is confused as to why people find this disturbing, as it is completely natural for her kind. Her adoptive uncle, Bolezn, [[FreakyIsCool finds this cool]], however.
--> '''Azab:''' ...What? This is just how snakes eat. They were already dead.
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* GrewBeyondTheirProgramming: He was 'born' an ordinary robotic vacuum cleaner that Dühroham built to make house-cleaning easier since his divine duties meant he won't always be around to do it. Somehow, he ended up becoming sapient with the mind of a young colt. Not wanting to task an innocent, childlike being with tormenting the wicked dead, Dühroham decided to adopt him as his son instead.
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* GrewBeyondTheirProgramming: He was 'born' an ordinary robotic vacuum cleaner that Dühroham built to make house-cleaning easier since his due to how busy he is as a divine duties meant he won't always be around to do it.punisher. Somehow, he ended up becoming sapient with the mind of a young colt. Not wanting to task an innocent, childlike being with tormenting the wicked dead, Dühroham decided to adopt him as his son instead.
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Prorochestvo is the ascendant Archdemon servant of Princes Varázsló and Cselszövő, first (first introduced in [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/898458204/4957022615 this drabble]].here]]) is the ascendant Archdemon servant of Princes and twin brothers Varázsló and Cselszövő.
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* ExtraEyes: Because he's part-Draconequus through Pokhot ([[HasTwoMommies and Phykti if true]]), he has the eight eyes of a spider. However, he [[EyeScream blinded himself in all eyes]] in a fit of madness when he wouldn't stop receiving psychic visions. This resulted in his eyes becoming holes that show the dark expanse of space when looked at, filling the looker(s) with an existential dread.
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* ExtraEyes: Because he's part-Draconequus through Pokhot ([[HasTwoMommies and (and Phykti if true]]), true), he has the eight eyes of a spider. However, he [[EyeScream blinded himself in all eyes]] in a fit of madness when he wouldn't stop receiving psychic visions. This resulted in his eyes becoming holes that show the dark expanse of space when looked at, filling the looker(s) with an existential dread.
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* HasTwoMommies: It's heavily speculated InUniverse that he and Cselszövő are twin sons of Pokhot and Phykti, who disguised herself as a Pony sorcerer named 'The Cruel Sorcerer'. Many clues point to this being the case, such as the Cruel Sorcerer's kindness to Pokhot during the latter's time as a SexSlave, being feared for his unabashed cruelty and sadism, and disappearing shortly before Phykti and the other Terrors showed up to carry out a 'Calling of the Terrors' sanction. Both Varázsló and his brother Cselszövő also work with Phykti in weaving deceptive prophecies and tormenting the damned shades in their hell-fiefs, as their domains can be used for cruelty. However, the fact that Varázsló and Cselszövő are Alicorn-Deer Draconequus hybrids muddles the theory a bit.
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* HasTwoMommies: Gender-inverted; Prince Varázsló and [[{{Twincest}} his older twin brother]], Prince Cselszövő, are her biological fathers. Not only that, magical HomosexualReproduction was involved, which isn't considered too surprising by the Erobreseg Deer Herds given how depraved Temnobog's family is.
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** The names of his weapons are also in Dutch - ''[[WhipItGood Wreedheid]]'' translates to "cruelty", ''[[AutomaticCrossbows Onontkoombaar]]'' translates to "inescapable", and ''[[InescapableNet Vanger]]'' translates to "catcher". Fittingly, all of these weapons were historically used in the slave trade.
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** The names of his weapons are also in Dutch - ''[[WhipItGood Wreedheid]]'' -- ''Wreedheid'' translates to "cruelty", ''[[AutomaticCrossbows Onontkoombaar]]'' translates to "inescapable", and ''[[InescapableNet Vanger]]'' translates to "catcher". Fittingly, all of these weapons were historically used in the slave trade.
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* WhipItGood: Has a whip made of both tarnished leather and serrated metal as one of his signature weapons, named '' Wreedheid'', which he could drip with poison, psychic energy and Hellfire to inflict pain and damage to his foes and damned shades. Even the smallest scratches could leave a target [[ManOnFire on fire]], paralyzed in utter agony or overwhelmed by illusions invoking their deepest emotional pain and shame.
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Prorochestvo is the ascendant Archdemon servant of Princes Varázsló Varázsló and Cselszövő, first introduced in [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/898458204/4957022615 this drabble]].
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* TheDividual: They are conjoined siblings who both serve Varázsló Varázsló and Cselszövő.
