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* AnythingThatMoves: At one point he innocently (for him, anyway) asks Kaito and Leon if they're into any of the girls present, then proceeds to list off ''every single girl'' one-by-one for his own answer. When Leon points out that that doesn't really narrow it down much, Teruteru replies that he hasn't even gotten started on the ''boys'' yet before Kaede mercifully cuts him off. He then proceeds to flirt with both Leon and Kaede simultaneously, earning sharp rebukes from both of them.
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* TellMeHowYouFight: Following their sparring session together, Sakura gains a measure of Peko's personality and determines that she is a warrior who knows exactly how deadly her skills can make her and reigns herself in.
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* TellMeHowYouFight: Following their sparring session together, Sakura gains a measure of Peko's personality and determines that she is a warrior who knows exactly how deadly her skills can make her what she's capable of and accordingly [[WillfullyWeak reigns herself in.in]].
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* TellMeHowYouFight: Following their sparring session together, Sakura gains a measure of Peko's personality and determines that she is a warrior who knows exactly how easily she could kill and how to reign herself in.
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* TellMeHowYouFight: Following their sparring session together, Sakura gains a measure of Peko's personality and determines that she is a warrior who knows exactly how easily she could kill deadly her skills can make her and how to reign reigns herself in.
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* WorthyOpponent: Treats Sakura as one, and the sentiment is reciprocated.
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* WorthyOpponent: Considers Peko as one, and the feeling is mutual.
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: [[spoiler:In-universe, Kaede laments this after her death, since between the swordswoman's withdrawn nature, Kaede's own suspicions of her and her simply choosing to focus on developing her friendships with others first, she and Peko had never really gotten to know each other and wishes she'd at least tried harder.]]
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: [[spoiler:In-universe, Kaede laments this after her death, since between the swordswoman's withdrawn nature, Kaede's own suspicions of her and her simply choosing to focus on developing her other friendships with others first, she and Peko had never really gotten to know each other and she belatedly wishes she'd at least tried harder.]]
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* DefrostingIceQueen: Though Peko remains aloof and cautious throughout the story, learning from Chiaki that Fuyuhiko very likely survived their original killing game relieves her of much of the somberness and guilt she carried into this one, and she gradually begins to open up and form relationships with others through her interactions with Sakura and (to a lesser extent) Kaito. [[spoiler:Sadly, she never gets the chance to fully thaw out before she is killed.]]
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* DefrostingIceQueen: Though Peko remains aloof and cautious throughout the story, learning from Chiaki that Fuyuhiko very likely survived their original killing game relieves her of much of the somberness and guilt that she carried into this one, and she gradually begins to open up and form relationships with others through her interactions with Sakura and (to a lesser extent) Kaito. [[spoiler:Sadly, she never gets the chance to fully thaw out before she is killed.]]
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* WoodenKatanasAreEvenBetter: As Sakura observes, her preferred weapon is a bamboo katana that, while unable to wound as easily as a metal blade, is far from harmless in Peko's hands due to her mastery of {{Pressure Point}}s.
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* WoodenKatanasAreEvenBetter: As Sakura observes, her preferred weapon is a bamboo katana sword that, while unable to wound as easily as a metal blade, is far from harmless in Peko's hands due to her mastery of {{Pressure Point}}s.
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* DefrostingIceQueen: Though Peko remains aloof and cautious throughout the story, learning from Chiaki that her charge Fuyuhiko survived past her execution and very likely made it off Jabberwock altogether relieves her of much of the somberness and guilt she went into the game with, and she gradually begins to open up and form relationships with others through her interactions with Sakura and (to a lesser extent) Kaito. [[spoiler:Sadly, she never gets the chance to fully thaw out before she is killed.]]
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* DefrostingIceQueen: Though Peko remains aloof and cautious throughout the story, learning from Chiaki that her charge Fuyuhiko survived past her execution and very likely made it off Jabberwock altogether survived their original killing game relieves her of much of the somberness and guilt she went carried into the game with, this one, and she gradually begins to open up and form relationships with others through her interactions with Sakura and (to a lesser extent) Kaito. [[spoiler:Sadly, she never gets the chance to fully thaw out before she is killed.]]
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* DefrostingIceQueen: Though Peko remains aloof and cautious throughout the story, learning from Chiaki that her charge Fuyuhiko survived past her execution and very likely made it off Jabberwock altogether relieves her of much of the somberness and guilt she went into the game with, and she gradually begins to open up and form relationships with others through her interactions with Sakura and (to a lesser extent) Kaito. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, she never gets the chance to fully thaw out before she is killed.]]
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* DefrostingIceQueen: Though Peko remains aloof and cautious throughout the story, learning from Chiaki that her charge Fuyuhiko survived past her execution and very likely made it off Jabberwock altogether relieves her of much of the somberness and guilt she went into the game with, and she gradually begins to open up and form relationships with others through her interactions with Sakura and (to a lesser extent) Kaito. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, [[spoiler:Sadly, she never gets the chance to fully thaw out before she is killed.]]
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* ReplacementGoldfish: Kaito seems to see her as one for Maki, owing to their similar [[WaifFu builds]], [[TheStoic attitudes]], [[ConsummateProfessionals demeanors]] and occupations. [[spoiler:Sadly, it doesn't last.]]
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* ReplacementGoldfish: SuspiciouslySimilarSubstitute: Kaito seems to see treat her as one for Maki, owing to Maki (despite still carrying a torch for the latter), on account their similar [[WaifFu builds]], [[TheStoic attitudes]], [[ConsummateProfessionals demeanors]] [[ConsummateProfessional demeanors]], [[WaifFu builds]] and occupations. [[spoiler:Sadly, it doesn't last.]]occupations.
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: [[spoiler:In-universe, Kaede laments this, since between the swordswoman's stoicism and Kaede focusing on developing her friendships with others first, she and Peko had never really gotten to know each other before her death.]]
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: [[spoiler:In-universe, Kaede laments this, this after her death, since between the swordswoman's stoicism withdrawn nature, Kaede's own suspicions of her and Kaede focusing her simply choosing to focus on developing her friendships with others first, she and Peko had never really gotten to know each other before her death.and wishes she'd at least tried harder.]]
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Quickly forms a tentative friendship with Sakura, as the two are both brooding, emotionally-reserved warriors who are easily the most skilled fighters in the group. This friendship grows into a bond of mutual respect and understanding after their first serious sparring match together.
* DefrostingIceQueen: Though Peko remains aloof and cautious throughout the story, learning from Chiaki that her charge Fuyuhiko survived past her execution and very likely made it off Jabberwock altogether relieves her of much of the somberness and guilt she went into the game with, and she gradually begins to open up and form relationships with others through her interactions with Sakura and (to a lesser extent) Kaito. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, she never gets the chance to fully thaw out before she is killed.]]
* DefrostingIceQueen: Though Peko remains aloof and cautious throughout the story, learning from Chiaki that her charge Fuyuhiko survived past her execution and very likely made it off Jabberwock altogether relieves her of much of the somberness and guilt she went into the game with, and she gradually begins to open up and form relationships with others through her interactions with Sakura and (to a lesser extent) Kaito. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, she never gets the chance to fully thaw out before she is killed.]]
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* ReplacementGoldfish: Kaito seems to see her as one for Maki, owing to their similar [[WaifFu builds]], [[TheStoic attitudes]], [[ConsummateProfessionals demeanors]] and occupations. [[spoiler:Sadly, it doesn't last.]]
* TellMeHowYouFight: Following their sparring session together, Sakura gains a measure of Peko's personality and determines that she is a warrior who knows exactly how easily she could kill and how to reign herself in.
-->'''Sakura:''' As we sparred, I noticed something in how you carry yourself in a fight. Your sword is bamboo, but that only means that it cannot stab or slash, not that it is harmless, especially when used on the weakest areas of the body. I could tell you were identifying pressure points every time you prepared an attack… yet, you never followed through on it. You could easily have struck at them and delivered a debilitating -or, perhaps even lethal- blow. Each time, you chose not to and struck somewhere else knowing it would be a less effective attack. In other words, you’re holding back because you know the damage you could do otherwise. Despite that knowledge giving you countless methods to commit a murder, you intentionally stay your hand. Though I never doubted your words, that alone assures me you have no intention of harming anyone aboard so long as you have a choice.
* WeHardlyKnewYe: [[spoiler:In-universe, Kaede laments this, since between the swordswoman's stoicism and Kaede focusing on developing her friendships with others first, she and Peko had never really gotten to know each other before her death.]]
* WoodenKatanasAreEvenBetter: As Sakura observes, her preferred weapon is a bamboo katana that, while unable to wound as easily as a metal blade, is far from harmless in Peko's hands due to her mastery of {{Pressure Point}}s.
* TellMeHowYouFight: Following their sparring session together, Sakura gains a measure of Peko's personality and determines that she is a warrior who knows exactly how easily she could kill and how to reign herself in.
-->'''Sakura:''' As we sparred, I noticed something in how you carry yourself in a fight. Your sword is bamboo, but that only means that it cannot stab or slash, not that it is harmless, especially when used on the weakest areas of the body. I could tell you were identifying pressure points every time you prepared an attack… yet, you never followed through on it. You could easily have struck at them and delivered a debilitating -or, perhaps even lethal- blow. Each time, you chose not to and struck somewhere else knowing it would be a less effective attack. In other words, you’re holding back because you know the damage you could do otherwise. Despite that knowledge giving you countless methods to commit a murder, you intentionally stay your hand. Though I never doubted your words, that alone assures me you have no intention of harming anyone aboard so long as you have a choice.
* WeHardlyKnewYe: [[spoiler:In-universe, Kaede laments this, since between the swordswoman's stoicism and Kaede focusing on developing her friendships with others first, she and Peko had never really gotten to know each other before her death.]]
* WoodenKatanasAreEvenBetter: As Sakura observes, her preferred weapon is a bamboo katana that, while unable to wound as easily as a metal blade, is far from harmless in Peko's hands due to her mastery of {{Pressure Point}}s.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Quickly forms a tentative friendship with Peko, as the two are both brooding, emotionally-reserved warriors who are easily the most skilled fighters in the group. This friendship grows into a bond of mutual respect and understanding after their first serious sparring match together.
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* TellMeHowYouFight: Following their sparring session together, Peko determines from how she carries herself that Sakura is exactly the brave, honorable warrior she presents herself as.
-->'''Peko:''' When you fight, there’s nothing dishonest in your movements. Though you’re difficult to read, there’s a reliability in your style; your strikes are consistently honorable even when a more underhanded maneuver would have been more tactically sound. Your preference for offense shows a great bit of courage as well. Not many people would be willing to risk blocking a strike from my sword when dodging is an option, let alone attempt to disarm me in the process. No coward would do such things. Though I was uncertain of you before, after seeing that, I am convinced.
-->'''Peko:''' When you fight, there’s nothing dishonest in your movements. Though you’re difficult to read, there’s a reliability in your style; your strikes are consistently honorable even when a more underhanded maneuver would have been more tactically sound. Your preference for offense shows a great bit of courage as well. Not many people would be willing to risk blocking a strike from my sword when dodging is an option, let alone attempt to disarm me in the process. No coward would do such things. Though I was uncertain of you before, after seeing that, I am convinced.
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* InSeriesNickname: Due to Kiyo's insistent impartiality, Gundham refers to him simply as 'the Observer'.
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* InSeriesNickname: Gundham refers to him as 'Beast-Speaker'.
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* InSeriesNickname: Gundham refers to him as 'Beast-Speaker'.'Beast-Speaker' and 'God's Colossus'[[labelnote:*]]Gundham's nickname for him from ''Ultimate Talent Development Plan''[[/labelnote]].
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Fic's back in action, so some update on Peko's cause of death
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A no-nonsense young woman devoted to her duties and all they entailed, until the bitter end. And then she finds herself on the ''Despair of the Seas'', cast adrift without her {{Protectorate}}, surrounded by her fellow Blackened and informed that a whole new game is beginning. So now what? [[spoiler: Is the victim of Chapter 2.]]
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A no-nonsense young woman devoted to her duties and all they entailed, until the bitter end. And then she finds herself on the ''Despair of the Seas'', cast adrift without her {{Protectorate}}, surrounded by her fellow Blackened and informed that a whole new game is beginning. So now what? [[spoiler: Is [[spoiler:Is the victim of Chapter 2.2, crushed to death by a heavy iron cage.]]
