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* {{Determinator}}: possibly her most impressive trait. She's a good leader, a capable fighter, and an excellent tactician, but wouldn't have become any of those things if not for her stubbornness. And then there's the whole "surviving being thrown off a cliff" thing.
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* {{Determinator}}: possibly her Probablyher most impressive trait. She's a good leader, a capable fighter, and an excellent tactician, but wouldn't have become any of those things if not for her stubbornness. And then there's the whole "surviving being thrown off a cliff" thing.
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* HandicappedBadass: Her past injuries have left her with chronic pains and limited use of her right hand. She's still an excellent fighter, just not as good a one as she used to be.
* IWasQuiteALooker: After her... ordeal, Monza believes she looks like a walking corpse.
* IWasQuiteALooker: After her... ordeal, Monza believes she looks like a walking corpse.
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* HandicappedBadass: Her past injuries have left her with chronic pains and limited use of her right hand. She's still an excellent fighter, just not as good a one as she used to be.
* IWasQuiteALooker: After her... ordeal, Monza believes she looks like a walking corpse. Most other people she meets [[UnreliableNarrator disagree]].
* IWasQuiteALooker: After her... ordeal, Monza believes she looks like a walking corpse. Most other people she meets [[UnreliableNarrator disagree]].
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* RagsToRiches: [[spoiler: The story of her life.]]
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* RagsToRiches: [[spoiler: The story of her life.]]life, going from an orphaned farmer from the sticks of Talins to the trusted General of Grand Duke Orso.
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* IdiotSavant: He clearly has mental issues, but he's also a skilled fighter and a great accountant.
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* IdiotSavant: He Given his awkwardness, general indifference to what happens around him, and obsession with numbers, Friendly clearly has an undisclosed mental issues, disorder, but he's also a skilled fighter and a great accountant.
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* TheSociopath: Implied.Implied given he barely seems capable of conceiving that any lives matters besides his own (and Day's to a much lesser extent).
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* LetsGetDangerous: Normally provides the ComicRelief, but don't let that fool you. He can be a surprisingly capable fighter when he has to, especially when the odds are against him.
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* LetsGetDangerous: Normally provides the ComicRelief, a level of comic relief, but don't let that fool you. He can be a surprisingly capable fighter when he has to, especially when the odds are against him.
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* BadassCreed: "We do not kneel."
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* BadassCreed: "We "We/I do not kneel."
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* CharacterTics: He frequently hums in an unnervingly tuneless manner. Amusingly, this isn't because of any psychological issue- he's just tonedeaf.
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* CharacterTics: He frequently hums in an unnervingly tuneless manner. Amusingly, this isn't because of any psychological issue- issue -- he's just tonedeaf.
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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: He's a notorious rapist, and would have violated Monza if Orso had not intervened. He even asks if he can rape Monza during her attempted assassination only for Orso to rebuke him, [[EvenEvilHasStandards saying they're not animals.]]
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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: He's a notorious rapist, and would have violated Monza if Orso had not intervened. He even asks if he can rape Monza during her attempted assassination only for Orso to rebuke him, [[EvenEvilHasStandards saying they're not animals.]]
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: A highly skilled commander and world-class swordsman. He essentially spends his fight with Monza toying with her, and [[spoiler:seemingly kills Cosca by running him through]].
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* RankScalesWithAsskicking: A highly skilled commander and world-class swordsman. He essentially spends his fight with Monza toying with her, and [[spoiler:seemingly kills Cosca by running him through]].
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Orso's younger son.
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Grand Duke Orso's younger son.son.
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A former Practical gone freelance. Introduced in ''Literature/TheFirstLaw''.
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A former Practical [[SecretPolice Practical]] of the Union gone freelance. Introduced in ''Literature/TheFirstLaw''.''Literature/TheFirstLaw''.
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* HeroesWantRedheads: And so do villains: Both her husband and Morveer find her red hair a very attractive feature.
* RedheadsAreRavishing: Both her husband and Morveer find her red hair a very attractive feature.
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* GladToBeAliveSex: [[spoiler: implied to be what drove him and Monza together. Who made the first move is unknown.]]
* HateSink: the more of his character is shown, the easier it is to conclude that Ganmark did the world a favor by killing him.
* HateSink: the more of his character is shown, the easier it is to conclude that Ganmark did the world a favor by killing him.
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* GladToBeAliveSex: [[spoiler: implied Implied to be what drove him and Monza together. Who made the first move is unknown.]]
* HateSink:the The more of his character is shown, the easier it is to conclude that Ganmark did the world a favor by killing him.
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** On Caprile - it's not even that. There was no benefit to what happened. When Monza returned, she found Benna shitfaced from husk- in his absence the Baolish troops, less civilized than most, started the sack and the mercenaries gladly joined in. They later spun the story of it being on purpose because being a ruthless commander was better for Monza's reputation than admitting to an error/lack of control of her troops.
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** On Caprile - [[spoiler:When it comes to his responsibility for the Sack of Caprile, [[SubvertedTrope it's not even that. There even]] that, as there was no benefit to what happened. When Monza returned, returned from speaking with Orso, she found Benna shitfaced from husk- husk -- in his absence the Baolish troops, less civilized than most, started the sack and the mercenaries gladly joined in. They later spun the story of it being on purpose because being a ruthless commander was better for Monza's reputation than admitting to an error/lack of control of her troops.
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* TheHero: Depending on whose side you're on, she's this or is the BigBad.
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* {{Bishonen}}: He's consistently described as being stunningly gorgeous or handsome. Even his enemies and rivals think of him in flattering terms, where looks are concerned.
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* PrettyBoy: He's consistently described as being stunningly gorgeous or handsome. Even his enemies and rivals think of him in flattering terms, where looks are concerned.
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* DarkChick: In Monza's group.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: Displays both obsessive-compulsive and autistic traits.
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* DesiresPrisonLife: In ''Literature/BestServedCold'', the [[AmbiguousDisorder counting-obsessed]] convict Friendly spent most of his life in a prison called Safety (because it protects society from its inhabitants), and misses the order and security of that existence, and at the end of the novel, considers checking himself back in. In a later book in the series, ''Literature/RedCountry'', Friendly is elated when he is arrested along with the other villains of the novel.
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* DesiresPrisonLife: In ''Literature/BestServedCold'', the [[AmbiguousDisorder counting-obsessed]] counting-obsessed convict Friendly spent most of his life in a prison called Safety (because it protects society from its inhabitants), and misses the order and security of that existence, and at the end of the novel, considers checking himself back in. In a later book in the series, ''Literature/RedCountry'', Friendly is elated when he is arrested along with the other villains of the novel.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: Different from Friendly, but he seems to combine narcissism, poor social skills, and lack of empathy. Worth noting, despite ''acting'' like a sociopath, in his own point of view segments he genuinely attempts to patch untrusting relationships and make friends with others - and then blames them when his creepy behavior (such as joking about poisoning them) puts them off more.
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'''The Union'''\\
[[Characters/TheFirstLawUnionRoyaltyAndGovernment The Royal Family & Closed Council]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawUnionMilitary Union Military]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawUnionInquisition His Majesty's Inquisition]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawUnionCitizens Nobility & Citizenry of the Union]]\\
'''The North'''\\
[[Characters/TheFirstLawNorthRoyaltyAndRule Northern Royalty]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawNorthLogensBand Logen's Band]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawNorthernProtectorate Northern Protectorate]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawNorth The North]]\\
'''Other Characters'''\\
[[Characters/TheFirstLawMagi The Magi]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawGurkishEmpire Gurkish Empire]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawStyria Styria]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawNearAndFarCountries Near & Far Countries]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawAdua Adua]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawTheFirstLaw The First Law trilogy]] | ''Best Served Cold'' | ''Characters/TheHeroes'' | ''Characters/RedCountry''-]]]]]
'''The Union'''\\
[[Characters/TheFirstLawUnionRoyaltyAndGovernment The Royal Family & Closed Council]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawUnionMilitary Union Military]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawUnionInquisition His Majesty's Inquisition]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawUnionCitizens Nobility & Citizenry of the Union]]\\
'''The North'''\\
[[Characters/TheFirstLawNorthRoyaltyAndRule Northern Royalty]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawNorthLogensBand Logen's Band]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawNorthernProtectorate Northern Protectorate]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawNorth The North]]\\
'''Other Characters'''\\
[[Characters/TheFirstLawMagi The Magi]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawGurkishEmpire Gurkish Empire]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawStyria Styria]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawNearAndFarCountries Near & Far Countries]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawAdua Adua]] | [[Characters/TheFirstLawTheFirstLaw The First Law trilogy]] | ''Best Served Cold'' | ''Characters/TheHeroes'' | ''Characters/RedCountry''-]]]]]
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* GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex: Appears this way at first, but... [[spoiler: Benna is ''not'' a good person, but he and Monza had an apparently incredibly passionate sex life.]]
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* BelligerentSexualTension: [[spoiler: With his sister Monza.]]
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*TheStarscream: [[spoiler: He was secretly plotting to overthrow Orso and take over Talins, even Monza didn't know.]]
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* KnifeNut: He uses knives. When he briefly uses another weapon, he finds that he doesn't like it.